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Beast

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My first Fanfic
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Prologue: 

“This child seems to have more potential than I expected. Send our best Guardian to protect him until the time is ripe.”

 

However, a wormhole materialized and released army of villains, corrupted officials and underworld minions. They wrecked havoc in Paradisia and chaos was all around. Soldiers and commanders assembled for the first wave of attack. Despite many attacks, more army just kept appearing from the wormhole.

 

“This child is who they want, send him through Dr. Liana new transport system!”

 

“But sir, the transporter is still under test!”

 

“We will have to take our chances then.”

 

The child was given a pendant and was teleported away…
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I know it may not be interesting but I spent lots of time thinking if I should post this...



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Black Hole Survivor

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Hmm, it sounds like you have a rather ambitious plot idea here Techy, but you don't seem comfortable with your words and sentences. Perhaps it might be better for you to do a more simple story to start with, one that you feel comfortable writing. And more descriptions of characters and events here and there would help your story come across better.

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I agree with Crossfire. KISS. Keep It Simple Stupid (no offence). The more practice you get, the more experience you get.

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Beast

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OkOk... It IS my FIRST fanfic, but if you say so then...

*Transform to WereCoyote*

Lonewolf: There he goes again.

*crashes all stuff that gets in my way*

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NEWS @ CURRENT

A monster is tearing through town at present as what to believe that he had his story rejected and is destroying all bookstores. Stay tuned for more updates.

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Few days later...

Techy: Did I destroyed my tenth laptop again?!
Lonewolf: Duh!
Techy: God! I really have to get a vaccination for my disease.
Lonewolf: But I wouldn't be able to watch more good show!
Techy: I'll Give You SHOW!!! *Uses vapouriser*

To be continued...(NOT!!!!) HAHAX!!!!

Techy has officially gone crazy.

Lesson learnt: NEVER EVER LET TECHY POST FANFIC.


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My First Idol...

My second Idol...


http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r175/in-flux/what.gif

http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r175/in-flux/gasp.gif

Mortals... Divine Gods... Cold Hell... Warm Heaven...
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