The beginning is rushed but still. It's an add on story. I'll continue it.

Kari's eyes danced as she pushed her self up and rubbed her head. She looked at the city scape surroundings with tall futuristic looking skyscrapers holding up the sky. She staggered to her feet as she brushed the dirt off her navy blue sleeveless waist coat with her white short sleeved shirt underneath and her green and teal tartan skirt. She looked around in more confusion than the first time she looked around.

"Okay. Wasn't I meant to be at home?" Kari worried as she started to explore the strange city.

All of the sudden, a purple laser zoomed past her. Kari spun around to find a figure with silver hair wearing futuristic, purple robe riding on a silver disc. She immediately turned and ran like she had never run in her P.E. lessons before. She breathed heavilly in panic as the villain was catching her up. The great chase continued until she ran around a corner of an alleyway, hoping she had lost the villain. She decided to climb up a rusty ladder to a roof of a block of flats. She climbed onto the roof and tried to catch her breath. She looked up but then saw the most peculiar thing she had ever seen. A shining golden star floated in front of her and gave a blinding flash that made Kari use her arms to sheild herself from the blinding light. The light then got dimmer until an amulet was revealed. Kari watched it intently as it floated into her hands. Kari blinked in confusion about what was going on. Everything seemed rushed and confusing to her. But a bellowing voice then snapped her out of her confused trance.

"Finally. I found what I was looking for. Give it to me now!"

Kari turned around to find the man in the purple robes. He pointed his hands in front of him and a purple laser struck Kari, causing her to wobble backwards of the edge of the building. She started to scream as she started to fall into the air.

"Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhh!!! I'm falling! Somebody help me please!"
 

-- Edited by kari bunny at 20:27, 2007-03-18

I thought it was yours or someone elses turn cos I had my go. But if you insist.
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"Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!! I'm falling! Somebody help me please!"

She closed her eyes tightly, not wanting to to see the impact she'll make with the ground. She then suddenly felt as though she was being carried by someone. She opened her eyes and looked up. She looked upon a face of a yellow rabbit in black uniform. He then looked down on her as she stared into his sapphire blue eyes.

"Are you okay?" the rabbit asked.

Kari couldn't say anything. She just blinked at her saviour. She turned her head to look down and mid that her hero was carrying her in mid-air.

"Oh my gosh! We're flying!" she gasped.

"Yeah. I couldn't just leave ya to fall now couldn't I?" the rabbit smirked.

The rabbit then looked at the amulet that Kari was holding in her hand. He gave a frown and looked at her.

"Eh, is that broache a gift or somethin'?"

"I don't know. It just flashed in from of me and floated into my hands." Kari replied.

Suddenly, a purple laser zoomed past the two as both turned their heads to see the man in the purple robe flying after them.

"Give me the amulet!" he growled.

"Okay." the rabbit replied. "But you're gonna hafta catch us first!"

The rabbit accelerated his speed still managing to hold Kari tight as the great chase endured.

Is this a RP or a fanfiction? 'cause it seems like a RP to me. If it's okay, I'll move this to the RP board.

And...well...it's add-on, so...yeah.

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More purple lasers shot past the rabbit as he cut through the air, followed by the man in the purple robes.

"I want that amulet!" he shouted, continuing to shoot his lasers. One sliced through the right-side wing of the rabbit's jetpack.

"Crud! Going down!" the rabbit said, quickly manuevering his way down, ducking into an alleyway.

The man in the purple robes (I find that fun to type) stopped in his attack, scanning the skies and the ground for Kari and the rabbit.

"Curses! I've lost them!" He frowned. "Very well...I suppose I'll retrieve it later." He flew off without another word.

Meanwhile...

"Well...that was anticlimatic," the rabbit said, helping Kari out of their spot behind a dumpster.

"Anti-climatic!? Anti-climatic!?" Kari snapped. "I almost fell to my death until you rescued me! Then we were chased by a crazy guy who wants this amulet while flying in the air and you say that's anti-climatic!?"

The rabbit paused to think quickly.

"When you put it like that... yeah."

Kari clenched her fists but then loosened them and took a deep breath.

"Thank you very much for saving my life. Now if you excuse me, I've gotta get back home."

She turned and walked away from the rabbit. The rabbit just gave a curious glance and zoomed off into the air with his jet pack.

Kari continued walking, trying to find a way out of her surreal situation. Thoughts just kept rushing through her head. Who was that man who chased after her? Who was the rabbit guy who saved her? And what was that amulet? 

Suddenly, she collapsed onto the ground. Images started to play in her mind of the man in purple robes. Only this time, six mechanical arms were holding six half human, half animal creatures as they struggled to escape from the claws. She saw the rabbit guy who saved her from the evil man.

"Ace!"

The girl gasped for air as she woke up from her trance. Droplets of sweat trickled down her face as she stood herself up from her spot. What was that? What's going on? Who was that rabbit guy? Was it the name that was recalled in her head? Ace? And who were the others?

Kari then looked up to find people running, screaming, stopping to explain to her why they were running away. Kari turned around and looked up. Her eyes widened as she saw the man in purple robes with mechanical arms, destroying the buildings he passed.

more add ons please

kari_bunny: Please don't post so much, edit your posts if you need to! 8D I'm also attempting to write that fanfic I'd said I'd write for you.

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...it bounced off an invisible shield.

"Hold up there, Doc Ock!" An anthropomorphic duck skidded in front of Kari. His head feathers were slightly ruffled, as if he had run his fingers through them too much.

"You dare stand in my way?" the man hissed, waving his mechanical limbs threateningly.

"Now, we can't have you shooting innocent little girls, now can we?" Kari spun around to see another duck, but a female this time. She was leaning casually against the side of a building, tossing a pair of dice in the air and catching them. A lock of silver hair covered her left eye, though the rest of her hair was black. "Give up! You'll never get the amulet..."

ok here all write some more....

kari stared at here savers,the girl duck walked up to here and smiled

well take care of this kid said the girl duck and she walked to the male duck

kari saw that the puple villan guy was behind her and grabed her by the skruff of her jacket

GIVE ME THE AMULAT he roared

kari was neaves as heak and she was so scared then someone kicked the villan ....

Whee! 8D

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The egg hit the villian's face directly, turning into...

"...orange juice?" said the man confusedly, wiping juice off his face.

"Whoops." The duck chuckled nervously, before tossing another egg, this time made of tar. The villian yelled and swung on of his mechanical arms around, trying to catch the duck.

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(idiot post alert)

some one please continue it

to continue.....

(kari was in her school unifore again)

the light faded and kari colapsed to the ground unconses

please someone write the next chappy

Ack...so...many...posts...

Try and not post so much, please, Kari? I'm trying to write as fast as I can, but I still owe so much fanfictions...and I'm already skiving off sleepy-time to write this. XD

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The man's eyes widened as the ray hit him straight in the chest. He collasped just as Kari did, his mechanical arms dropping the six heroes to the ground.

"Ow." The Tasmanian devil rubbed his head as he got up.

"You can say that again, Slam," said the coyote, picking himself up as well.

"Ow."

"I don't think he meant that literally," said a blonde female rabbit with a pink-and-black jumpsuit.

or someone

continu please

um oddity someone

to continu..

ace:hey were did that kid go

tech:don't no

menwile..

kari: what do you want

male duck :carrier we beg your foegivwness

kari:wha

famale duck:please forgive us

kari:WOULD SOMEONE TELL ME WHATS GOING ON HERE WHATS A CARRIER AND WHAT DOES it
have to do with me

The two blinked in confusion. "You don't know?"

"No, I do know, I just want a recap - OF COURSE I DON'T KNOW!" Kari yelled.

"All right, all right!" The male duck put up his hands defensively. "Look, you're the new carrier of the Anglican powers...they're light-based powers, and they usually come in some form of amulet. It's really rare when it comes to Earth, and it usually bonds with a baby, or a newcomer."

"Like you," continued the female duck. "And of course, there's gotta be people that try and steal it...like Edward."

"Who's Edward?" Kari asked, now curious.

"He's the dude who was chasing after you," said the male duck. "He's one of the Orginization that's looking for your amulet."

"But now that it's chosen you as its carrier, taking it out of you'll be hard to do," said the female duck wryly.

please continu oddity but make it a bit longer please

please someone continu

1. Stop posting so much...I don't know if this accounts for spam, but if it does, I might be forced to suspend you or something.

2. I'm writing, I'm writing!

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"Our brother," said the male duck, glaring at the other.

"I deny any relation to you," said the female duck haughtily.

"Who's Danger Duck?" Kari asked.

"Define 'others'," said Myra dryly.

"Others - subjects that are not in the immiediet ((ACK BAD SPELLING)) area," recited Tom.

"Shut up."

next chapter please...

Am I allowed to post chapters? Because it seems like you only mention Akira and oddity.
Oh well.

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"Oh, them?" Myra asked. "Those WERE the Loonatics."
"Them?!?" Kari almost laughed. "Animals? I thoguht they'd be, like, people or something."
"No, they're the Loonatics," Tom said. "What made you think that they're people?"
"I don't know," Kari shrugged."Just an asumption."
"Assumptions can be dangerous," Myra said suddenly with a tinge of anger in her voice.
"Hey, chill," Tom tried to calm his sister. He turned to address Kari. "The guy rabbit was Ace, the girl was Lexi, the coyote was Tech, the big guy was Slam, and the bird was Rev."
"And we told you about Duck," Myra added.
"So what are the Loonatics going to be able to do to help us?" Kari asked.
"First of all, we can find out more about the Anglican powers. Tech or Rev can then track Edward and help keep you safe."
"What about my home?" Kari asked. "I'm supposed to get back to my home soon. People will be wondering where I am."
Myra and Tom looked at each other with worried looks. "Well," Myra started, "we don't actually know how to...."
Suddenly, an arm wrapped itself around Myra's mouth. She struggled, but was soon knocked out. Tom was lifted by another arm and carried away. Kari screamed, only tobe silenced by an arm. Her head was covered with a bag as she screamed for help one last time.....

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DUN DUN DUUUUUN!!!!!
Sorry if I wasn't allowed to write. If I wasn't allowed, you can disregard this.