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Okay, here's a fan-fic and the title says it all. I was just wondering what happened after the meteor came down. This number 60: Heroes, on my 100 themed challenge.

Chapter 1

A woman collapsed onto her hands and knees, gasping deeply for air. Her golden hair hung down her cheeks as she tried to regain strength.

"I did it." the woman exhaled as she staggered to stand herself up. She limped towards a green globe flosting above a generator. An image of Earth was projected by the globe.

"Still, at least the inhabitants are safe and the planet is intacted." she sighed for relief.

She pressed another button, revealing buildings that have been destroyed. Her eyes widened in fear.

"Oh brother... what have you done?"
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Three sets of ambulance trucks zoomed across the road at high speed. In one of the ambulance trucks, two anthro rabbits, one a grey and white male, and a cream and peach female, lay unconscious with breathing masks on them, while they were being revived by two paramedics.

"How are they doing?" one paramedic barked.

"Stabilised." the other one replied.

Suddenly, the ambulance truck skidded across a corner of the road, throwing the paramedics across the space inside.

All three ambulance trucks finally arrived at the hospital. The doors flung open as each six beds with four people holding onto each one, pushed the unconscious casualties down the hall. After all the beds were in the hospital, two doctors marched behind them.

"So they were all unconscious by the time they arrived at each scene?" the doctor with a brown moustache with rounded square glasses hanging off his nose.

"Yes. All of them were unconscious at the time the meteor struck." the younger doctor replied.

"Yes." the doctor nodded. "But what I find strange is that meteor came from out of no-where from space. And it's size should have destroyed this planet."

"But it didn't." the other doctor finished.

The older doctor nodded again. "Precisely."

"Doctor! The male rabbit is starting to regain conciousness!"

The older doctor ran towards the bed where the nurse called from and looked down upon the casualty's face. The rabbits eyes were only half open but it was enough for the doctors to realise that he was going to be okay. The rabbit's mouth opened slightly.

"Kiai..."

His eyes began to close slowly.

"Just hang in there! Don't go yet!" the doctor called as the beds approached the emergency room. All the beds charged in there. As soon as the last bed entered the room, the emergency sign blinked to light itself up. And the younger doctor was left, breathing deeply as he tried to imagine what procedures were taking place in the room that the doors that he was staring at were hiding.

END OF CHAPTER 1.

-- Edited by Akira_Cat at 09:26, 2007-03-21

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This sounds like a good origin story. So all the Loonatics go into hospital first? I look forward to reading more!

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You stole my fiction idea! X3

This is good so far!!! Can't wait to read more about their introductions with one-another!!!

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XtreamCrazy wrote:

You stole my fiction idea! X3

This is good so far!!! Can't wait to read more about their introductions with one-another!!!


Sorry Xtream! I guess great minds do think a like. Heh heh... heh? Oh okay, I'll finish my draft for the next chapter.



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Great minds are awesome!!! X3

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Chapter 2

After the meteor struck, 6 people ended up in a coma.
It wasn't until six weeks later that they finally woke up and
they had to stay in hospital for a further 2 weeks,
before they were able to continue with their daily routines.
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A buzzer rang as a grey and white male anthro rabbit opened the door. He peered around the door to see a young woman about 19 years old with red short hair, wearing a purple short, sleeved shirt and green trousers. He immediately recognised the girl.

"Oh. Hello Taya." he sighed as the girl entered the apartment.

"Ace! Are you okay? Are you still not feeling well? Everybody at the film studio are so worried about you." she said in a concerned tone.

The rabbit opened the fridge and took a milk carton out of it.

"Angry too I bet." he murmured.

"What do you mean by that?" Taya had a puzzled look on her face.

"You know." Ace said after taking a few gulps of milk from the carton. "Even after I woke up, I had to stay in the hospital to recover."

"No, they're not angry. Nobody's angry with you." the girl reassured him. "They're just wondering when you might come back. There are parts of the film that need a stunt guy like you to do stunts in. Otherwise the film won't get done."

"Well... I don't think I'll be able to come back again." Ace stared into space.

Taya's face rose from her normal facial expression.

"What!? You're quitting!? Why!? Why can't you come back!? Do you need a little more time to recover?"

"No." he replied. "It's just... can you keep a secret?"

Taya nodded her head.

"Lately, I've been hearing a voice in my head. "Power sleeps within you" it says. It keeps ringing in my head and it doesn't stop."

"Do you know what it means?" Taya wondered.

Ace shook his head.

"Nope. Not a clue. I'm just afraid that I'll make the director angry because I wasn't paying attention to anything he or other people were saying to me."

"I'm sure they wouldn't. They'll probably understand." Tay replied back.

"Well, until then, I'm just gonna stay here. You better get going. The director will probably wonder where you are."

"Okay." Taya nodded as she walked towards the door. "But Ace. If you want to talk, just call me okay?"

Ace just nodded as he turned away from her. As the door clicked shut, Ace let out a deep sigh as he started to make his way to the appartment roof.
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A grey haired boy cycled on his bike as fast as he could until he made a sharp stop on the middle of the bridge. He spotted a young, female, cream and peach rabbit anthro in a purple and green cheer leading outfit sitting by the river.

"Lexi!" the boy called as he waved his arm in the air. The girl rabbit looked at his direction and gave a relieved smile at him.

A few minutes later, the two were together at the river. The boy skipped a stone across the bank of the river as Lexi gave a small applause.

"So why aren't you coming to school anymore? Is it because you're still feeling under the weather?" the boy asked.

Lexi shook her head.

"No. Just skipping school."

"Come on." the boy encouraged.

They were now walking down the pavement on the street.

"Come on Lexi. You have to come back to school. I know there have been rumours but-"

"Rumours?" Lexi interupted.

The boy put his hand behind his head as he pushed the bike along.

"Well, you know students. They want to know why someone didn't turn up and then make up stories if they can't find the reason. But everyone has been really worried about you."

"So what's going on now then?" Lexi asked.

"Well, not a lot actually. Apart from the fact that the new cheerleading team has been announced. I think you might be one of them. I know you've been doing gymnastics ever since you were a kid. I just think it's a shame you might not continue with something you're so good at and that you like doing."

Lexi stopped walking and looked down on the ground. Then she looked up to the boy.

"Tomorrow, I'm... going back to school."

Lexi comtinued walking as the boy's face lifted.

"That's great! I got your bag with the work that will need doing, your cheer leading pom-poms, baton and, say aren't you cold? You really should wrap yourself up when you're near the river."

"It's that voice." Lexi answered.

"Voice?" he looked in confusion.

"When I go near the river, I don't have to listen to that voice."

The boy looked puzzled as they continue to walk down the pavement on the busy street.

END OF CHAPTER 2.


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They're hearing voices! Aaaghhhh! I hope they don't wind up in mental hospitals talking to psychiatrists! Nice to see the bunnies had 'some' concerned pals back before the meteor fell!

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Eeeeeeeeeeeek! *gets excited*

Where's Tech? Where's Tech? Where's Tech? Where's Tech? Where's Tech? Where's Tech?

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I love it so far! It makes my soul smile!!! *waits for more*

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Chapter 3

Note: For the purpose and benifit of this fan fic, I will make Slam speak english so you guys can understand him.
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"Power sleeps within you.
Within you.
Within you."
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"So Rai, you think he might get us into the World Knock out championships? I've been begging him to let me." asked a girl with two, brown pig-tails on her hair, wearing a red, sleeveless jacket with red hot pants to match with her red leg warmers and trainers.

"Hmm... he might do this time Shell. We have been competing hard lately." replied the man carrying a yellow tank top over his bare shoulders wearing sandy brown combat trousers.

Suddenly, they stopped and stared inside a fitness gym, where a brown, muscular tasmanian devil was moving his arms in and out of one of the weight machines. The two walked in to see him.

"Slam?" Shell said in suprise. "What are you doing working over time?"  

"Doing what I usually do, working out." the tasmanian devil answered.

"What's with you though? You never stay behind to do anymore than what the manager tells you to." Rai folded his arms while frowning in suspicion.

"Well... this may sound stupid to you guys, but... I've been hearing this voice from some where. Telling me that, "Power sleeps within me"." Slam explained.

"So? That doesn't explain why you're working over time." Rai said.

"Well... I don't know why, but it gives me encouragement to win matches instead of rigging the matches as I normally have done. So until I know what sort of power this 'voice' means, I'm going to do some intense working out." Slam continued pulling the weight.

"So you're not coming to the pizza place with us then?" Shell asked.

Slam shook his head.

"I can't. The voice is making me want to know what it means by 'power'. I'll catch up with you guys sometime."

Shell and Rai stared at each other and then gave a glance back at Slam.

"Whatever you say Slam." Rai waved his hand as they both started to walk out of the gym. "We'll save you a couple of slices. See ya."

Once Shell and Rai disappeared around the corner, Slam stopped pulling the weight and gave an odourless stare onto the ground.
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Two men in white lab coats walked down the street past the tall skyscrapers and busy traffic.

"I can't believe it." One japanese guy with black short hair wearing glasses proclaimed. "Tech gets fired and then he end ups in a coma for 6 weeks. He must have been depressed to find out he got kicked out of the institute. He set his sights on getting a degree there."

"Well if he hadn't have put that self detruct button on the machine to get extra credit, he could have stayed on. Besides, the doctors apparently say that he had a severe memory loss so I doubt he'll remember what the principal said to him." said a guy with light brown, spikey hair.

They soon reached a house in a housing estate as the brown spikey haired guy pressed the door bell. They patiently waited for a reply.

"Well we should at least go easy on him Jack." the japanese guy said.

"Well, Tech's been known to take bad news well, so don't worry too much Hitoshi. We'll break it gently." Jack reassured him.

The door didn't open.

"It looks like he isn't home. Lets go back." Hitoshi turned to walk back when Jack pushed the door open.

"Door's open. We're going in." Jack said as he stepped into the house.

"Wait!" Hitoshi ran after him. "I think this is an invasion of privacy! We should get out of here!"

Jack turned a corner to find a brown coyote in a white lab coat, typing away into a big computer. Both watched as the computer buzzed a short sound. The coyote shook his head.

"Nothing."

He turned around and jumped at the sight of the two men staring at him.

"Hitoshi. Jack. What are you doing here? How did you get in?" The coyote asked as he composed himself.

"Well the door was open so we let ourselves in." Jack replied.

"So what are doing then Tech? What's all this?" Hitoshi asked as he began reading some of the papers from a tabble.

"Don't touch those!" Tech swiped the papers from Hitoshi and placed them back onto the table where they were before. "They're just research. That's all."

"Research about what?" Jack's face turned puzzled.

"Well apparently, I was in a coma for 6 weeks after a meteor came down from outer space." Tech explained. "I was actually fascinated by this, so I started doing some research on it."

"But scientists are already investigating what happened." Hitoshi interupted.

"But they didn't end up in a coma didn't they?" Tech answered back.

He picked up a pile of papers and looked at them.

"According to my research, the size of the meteor could have destroyed the whole planet at the rate of speed it was going. But it didn't."

"You found out why?" Jack asked.

"Not yet. But if I could get at least one piece of that meteor to do tests on, then I could get a lot of answers from it." Tech continued.

"Tech. Why are you doing this when the other scientists can do it for you?" Jack frowned.

"Because... this voice tells me I have to. I can't imagine myself doing anything else apart from doing research. Finding out what caused others like me to go into a comatised state. And why it had that affect." Tech replied.

"Well, good luck with your research then." Jack began to exit the house. "I'm sure you'll find something out that no-one else would. You always do. Come on Hitoshi. Lets go."

Hitoshi gave a sorryful glance at Tech before he chased after Jack outside. Tech pressed his hands on the keyboard and stared at his hands.

"What is this voice trying to tell me? What is it that I don't know?"

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They're all hearing the voice! Doesn't this worry the people around them? Is it Zadavia's voice talking to them all i wonder? And i can imagine Tech would indeed want to find out more about the meteor. I'm curious why you wanted to include all these other people alongside the Loonatics though. Are they all going to have some significance later in the story somehow?

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I think these extra ppl are just there to help set the story out. ^_^

Tech was very gorgeous in this... of course he would be researching about the meteorite... It's something Tech would want to do. n__n *hugs Tech*

Tech: *rolls eyes* Get off of me.

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Tech's always 'very gorgeous' in everything he does! He! He!

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Chapter 4

A blue road-runner with purple feathers for hair and a tail, lied asleep on his bed with a pair of headphones on the sides of his head. He laid still as his scatter-brained and preoccupied thoughts were drowned out by the techno beats pumping in his mind. Suddenly he heard a voice scream in his head which he prefered not to play back as it was part of his daily routine.
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"Rev! Rev! Get here now!"

The road-runner in a light blue, stream-lined costume rushed in at the command and saluted to a man in a paper hat and a white apron.

"Yes Cookie? Is there a delivery you want me to take care of?" he said enthusiastically.

"You have to deliver this to Mr Salmons at this address in five minutes. Got that, or I'll dock ya wages again!" the man barked as he passed the piece of paper and a sandwich bag.

"Don't worry sir! You can count on me!" the road runner optimistically said as he rushed outside.

Rev knelt down and strapped on a pair of rollerskates with small jet engines on each skate.

"Come on Rocket Skates! Don't fail me now!" he exclaimed as the skates started up and in a blink of an eye, the road-runner skated across the road as fast as he could. He laughed in excitement at the thrill of the speed as he ducked and swerved to avoid any accidents.

He finally spotted the building with an impatient man waiting outside. This was the final sprint. Rev gathered all the energy he could to skate as fast as he can before he could make a stop. As he approached the building, he skidded his skates to a halt to give the man the sandwich bag that he had been expecting.

"Here you go!" the road-runner gushed. "One sandwich from Cookie's sandwich business! That will be-"

"No way!" the man interupted. "You are one minute late. So the lunch is technically free. Better luck next time road-runner."

He turned and walked away from a distraught Rev.

"Please!" he begged. "I need a wage to help with my family's lifestyle! Please!"

He turned around and slumped onto his knees. He gave a deep sigh until he looked up to see a giant meteor flying into the sea.

"A meteor?" Rev thought in confusion.

Suddenly, a cloud of radiation came rushing towards the bird. Rev gasped as he stood frozen. The cloud of radiation zoomed past him.
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"Power sleeps within you.
Within you.
Within you."

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Rev threw himself forward as he gave a small shout of shock. Drops of sweat trickled down his face as he gasped for air. He then realised moments later that no music was coming from his headphones. He pulled them off and looked down still gasping for air.

"Meep meep. Meep meep."

The phone was ringing. Rev sprinted to the direction of the sound until he grabbed the phone off the handle and put it to his ear.

"Hello? Runner residence. Rev speaking?" he said politely. Then he gave a sigh. "Oh hi Dad".

"Hi son." his dad started off. "Are you feeling okay? I heard from your mother that you were in an accident with the meteor a few weeks ago. I was just checking if you were alright."

"I'm fine Dad." Rev replied.

"Good. Is your mother home then?"

Rev looked around but concluded that he was home alone.

"No not yet." he answered back.

"Oh." his dad said. "Well if you don't mind, could you tell her I'll be back from work later. I'm just going into a conference in half an hour and it might take ages so I might not be back until later on in the evening. I'm sorry I won't be able to come earlier but you see..."

As he continued speaking, Rev looked at the tap in the kitchen. He watched a small drop of water hanging on the end. It finally fell not only making the drip sound, but also a voice saying the words from the dream he had. Rev started to regain the emotion he had from when he froze on the spot as the radiation zoomed past him that fateful day. Fear. His eyes widened as he held the phone close to his head.

"Rev? Hello? Are you okay? Rev?"
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"Duck? Duck? Senior Duck!"

"Aahh!"

Splosh!

A black mallard fell into a swimming pool. He rose to the surface and coughed before he swam to the ledge. He reached his arm out so a brown mouse anthro in a lifeguard uniform pull him up onto the swimming pool pavement. The duck then grabbed a floating net from the pool as he got himself up.

"Gee! I wish you didn't so that Speed! I could have drowned!" the mallard shouted.

"Well I wouldn't have done if you didn't keep day dreaming and staring into the water." the mouse said sarcastically. "Anyway, have you lost something in there or what?"

Duck put his chin over his hands holding the standing net.

"I don't know. Everytime I look into the water, I seem to dift off into another dimension."

"Well, I suggest you try and at least pretend you're doing your job or you'll get done by Dan." Speed frowned.

"Yeah. But no matter how hard I try, I just seem to stop and my mind goes blank." Duck said as he tried fishing out the rubbish with the net.

"Yeah." Speed exhaled. "Well I'm going to go and teach some kids on mow to swim. I'll see ya around."

"See ya." Duck mumbled as Speed walked off to the other pool full of excited kids.

Duck swirled the net around in the water until he stopped and pulled the net out of the water and leaned on it. He stared odourlessly down into the water as though he was under a trance.

"What is that voice saying? What is it trying to tell me?"

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A Speedy descendent! Wheee! This voice they're all hearing seems quite persistent!

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Ace sat cross legged on the floor on the middle of the appartment roof with his eyes closed. His shadow was cast from the rising orange sun. The only thing he could hear were the birds calling and his deep breaths. Drifting his thoughts from a dream into reality and the other way around, he began to remember a pain that he knew was only in a dream but that he wished it was anyway.
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"Ow!"

The grey and white rabbit was thrown onto the ground by a giant blue robot.

"And cut!" the director announced as all the cast gave their applause.

But the rabbit had only enough strength to pick himself up to sit up. He couldn't control the dizziness that spun around his head. He then caught something flying across the blue sky from the corner of his eye. At first he thought it was part of his imagination from the dizziness. Suddenly, an earthquake was felt. The ground started rumbling from underneath everyone. Then in the distance, a glowing cloud came stampeding towards the cast. Everyone started to run, leaving the rabbit behind. The cloud came closer as the rabbit held his hand up in hopes of protection. But the cloud struck the rabbit, pushing him across the ground.
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Ace's eyes flew wide open and gasped for air. He took slower breaths as he started to get up. He turned towards where the sun was rising. He gazed at the horizon as he calmed down.

"What happened?" was the question in his mind as the orange sun continued to rise.
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Lexi stood in front of the classroom door, over hearing the merged conversations that pass through the walls. She took a deep breath as she pushed the door open. Everyone turned around and immediately fell silent, as they stared at the rabbit approaching her desk. Whispers filled the air until a girl with a black bob for hair in the same purple and green cheerleading uniform walked up to Lexi's desk.

"Lexi! Are you okay!? I heard you've been through hell!" the girl said in suprise.

"I'm okay Miki." Lexi casually said as she got a book out from her bag.

"Well everyone has been so worried about you! I can't believe you went into that coma!" Miki said again.

"Well, I just want to carry on where I left off from. Before any of the meteor business happened." Lexi murmured.

"Well you're awfully calm about this." Miki put her hand on the desk. "Casey was even saying that it was strange that one of the students in this school could have fallen to such a terrible disaster."

Lexi shot up from her desk and looked down.

"Oh I'm sorry." Miki apologised. "Did I say something to upset you?"

"No." the rabbit girl replied. "I'm going to the girls room."

Minutes later, Lexi stood in front of the mirror. The relief she felt getting out of the room full of people staring at her as though she was some animal in a zoo provoked a quiet sigh as she stared at her reflection. She then picked her bag up and left the the bathroom.

The streets of Acmetropolis buzzed with people chatting and vehicles roaming the roads, as Lexi walked across the bridge that over looked the river that she usually stood by. She didn't find it alarming that she was skipping school. Her thoughts kept repeating the voice that rang in her head, and the reactions from the past and present when other people found her finally awake from the coma. Suddenly she felt a bump against another person. Both bounced back onto the floor as a suitcase opened itself unleashing papers that flew in the wind. She stared at a man in a mackintosh and a hat oppisite her trying to pick up the papers.

"Oh! I'm so sorry!" Lexi apologised as she knelt down to help clear the papers with him. "Please! Let me help you!"

"No, it's okay. I can pick these up myself thank you." The man responded.

"No! I insist!" As Lexi picked some papers up, she looked at the content on it. A newspaper cutting about a meteor crashing into Acmetropolis. She stared at it quizzically.

"So are you one of the scientists investigating about the meteor crashing on here?" she asked the man.

He lifted his head up just to get eye contact. Lexi then saw his brown furry face being covered by the shadow coming from his hat.

"I guess you could say that." he answered.

He gathered the rest of the papers as Lexi gave the other pieces of paper to him.

"So, what's going on then?" Lexi enquired.

"Well... this is just some of the research I've been doing since it happened." the coyote turned to her. "Say... have you been experiencing anything strange, any change that you can't explain on you?"

Lexi's thoughts froze. The voice repeating the same sentence over and over again. Is that considered strange to her? Lexi faced the coyote again and gulped.

"No."

The coyote nodded his head.

"I see." he muttered. "But you know, the size of the meteor and the speed it was going at should have destroyed the earth. We wouldn't have survived the impact. The world would have been broken into smaller pieces. But it didn't."

Lexi started to take deep and heavy breaths. She felt claustrophobic all of a sudden even though she was in the outdoors. The coyote continued.

"The only damage it did however, was cause minor damage to some buildings, and cause six people to fall into a coma for six weeks. Only six people."

Lexi froze on the spot as the coyote gave a glance to say he knows Lexi was one of them. She then spun around quickly, only to the stopped by the coyote grabbing her arm.

"Tell me what happened! What did you see before you fell unconcious!?" the coyote demanded.

"I don't know! I can't remember! I don't know!" Lexi cried.

She felt her arm feel loosened as the coyote was about to take his leave. He then turned around to face the scared rabbit.

"If I were you, I suggest you get back to school. The others will probly wonder where you went off to." He then started walking away from her into the crowd.

But still, Lexi froze on the spot, in fear that what the stranger had told her. She knew it was true. She had just met another person who was in her condition eight weeks ago. He knew that she knew. And so did she.

END OF CHAPTER 5.

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Very cool chapter! I like how Lexi and Tech meet. Tech is already on the case and knows something strange has happened to them all! Tho', how did Tech know about Lexi skipping school? He's been spying on her! Gasp! He! He! But that's okay i guess, Tech needs to be the all-knowing one! Now if only Lexi can overcome her fears and help him find some much needed answers!

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Black Oracle wrote:
Tho', how did Tech know about Lexi skipping school? He's been spying on her! Gasp!
If you remember, I wrote this:

"Whispers filled the air until a girl with a black bob for hair in the same purple and green cheerleading uniform walked up to Lexi's desk."

evileye And how do you think Lexi got that cheerleading uniform? It's just elementry my dear Black Oracle.

Now aside from that, time for chapter 6!
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"Okay Rev. You can come out now." the Doctor Mackenzey announced as Rev pulled the green curtain across the entrance of where he took most of his clothes off.

He stepped out in a plain white T-shirt with khaki trousers and stood beside the bed where he was checked over.

"Well I'm pleased to say that you look healthy so there's nothing wrong with you." the doctor smiled.

Rev nodded his head slightly. The doctor gave a puzzled look at the roadrunner.

"Are you alright? I thought you'd be happy to find that you're well. Is something the matter?"

"Doctor." Rev started. "I want to ask you a question."

"Yes?" Mackenzey intentively switched on waiting for the question.

"Do you think that the meteor crash was the cause for me to go into the coma?"

The doctor picked up a black pen from the table and subconciously started tapping it on the table.

"Well, I can't say for certain Rev. What happened that day was an anomally to the city's daily routine. No-one is certain where the meteor came from, why and how it landed on Earth and how this cloud of radiation was released."

He tapped the pen on the table. Rev's eyes suddenly opened wide in panic, taking in short breaths of air. Each tap on the table kept the roadrunner at this panicky state as the doctor continued to lecture him of of the happening of the meteor.
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"Hey! Fat Man! Ha ha ha!"

"Why don't you go back to your cage you fat pig!"

"Oh don't worry about him. He may have muscles but his intelligence is way below zero."

"Look! You are trained to fight! At no circumstance should you think about anything! Got it?"
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The a cloud of steam sprouted from a cubicle in the shower room as the water rained upon Slam. He rubbed his hands on top of his head as the water ran down from his face and down his body where the mixture of sweat and water ran down through the plug hole. Slam rubbed his face and then the sides of his head until he turned the shower off.

He pulled the curtain back as he tied a towel around his waist as he rubbed his body with another towel. The tasmanian devil pulled up a black pair of trousers. Then he pulled a white tank top to cover his torso. He then spun around on the spot to look behind his back.

"Hello? Did somebody call me?" Slam called as he looked around the changing rooms.

No-one appeared to be there. But Slam continued to search the area.

"Okay, you can drop the sniper act! I know you're there!" Slam demanded as he continued to search.

"Power sleeps within you."

Slam immediately sprinted around the corner and out of the changing rooms and down the corridor and approached the gym. He dug his heels into the ground and ran into the gym.

"What?" he thought as he saw no-one. No-one was in the gym. Slam stood there bewildered as he stared into the empty room, constontly remembering the voice that rang in his head.
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"Wh-who are you? What are you trying to tell me? Please tell me!"

"Power sleeps within you."
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"Duck! Senior Duck! Wake up! Duck!"

Duck threw himself up from the floor as he choked and spurted out some water. He gasped for air as Speed patted his wet back.

"Are you okay Duck!?" Speed asked desperately. "It looks like you hit your head really hard on something."

Duck turned his head and stared into the water in a trance like state.

"Duck!" Speed snapped as Duck turned to him.

"There was a lady in the water!" Duck burst out.

Speed just gave him a blank stare. "What?"

"There was a woman in the water!" Duck repeated again. "She looked as though she was drowning! I was going to get you, but I slipped on the side and knocked my head and I fell in and she talked to me!"

"Duck. There's no woman in the pool." the mouse pointed.

Duck turned his head to the water. He only saw his reflection on top of the water. Then he turned back to Speed.

"But, but... there was a woman in the water! I saw her!" Duck stuttered.

"Look. You hit your head too hard on the side. Maybe you were just dreaming. I'll go and get you some bandages for your head." Speed said as he went to get the first aid kit.

"But-" Duck stopped himself, knowing that Speed wouldn't believe him.

He turned back to the water as quick flash of an image of a woman in purple clothes with golden flowing hair standing there with her eyes closed. He continued to stare at the rippling water with the reflection of the glowing moon waving in the water.

"Who were you? What were you trying to say to me?" Duck whispered under his breath.

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It's BTB Slam! LOL! If i was a Slammer, i'd be sighing dreamily at the thought of Slam in the shower! He! He! He! And the mystery of the voice continues to plague us! When will the Loonatics find its source?

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I love making you guys wonder. Now onto chapter 7!

Chapter 7

The sun shone high in the blue sky upon the harbour as people were scattering around frantically.

"Come on! I need to be able to say "Lights, Camera, Action! I don't see any action going on!" the director bellowed through his megaphone.

Taya meanwhile was sorting the costumes out ready for the next scene. She pulled each costume slowly across the rack until she heard a familiar voice.

"Eehh. What's up Tay?"

Taya turned around as her eyes widened with joy.

"Ace! You're back!" she exclaimed in excitement as she gave Ace a brief hug. "We could chat all day, but right now, you're needed on set!"

Ace gave a smile.

"Don't worry. I told the director that I'm here so-" Ace stopped when the director beckoned him to come. "Gotta run. I have to help finish the movie."

He ran up to the director as the man wrapped his arm around Ace's shoulder.

"Now. Just do it from how we left off. Okay?"

Ace nodded as he got himself into position. As he did this, he felt a sharp pain on his face. He droped his head as he pressed his palms to his face. Taya noticed this as she approached him.

"Ace. Are you okay? You need a lie down?" she asked in a worried tone.

"It's fine." he groaned as he fell to his knees and gave a grunt of pain.

"Ace!" Taya cried as she waved her arms to get attention. "Mr Kawaski! We can't shoot yet! Ace isn't feeling well!"

"Don't be ridiculous!" he bellowed as he approached Ace. "He's a stunt man! He'll-"

"No! Stay away from me!" Ace shouted, still pressing his palms to his face.

"Don't be stupid stunt rabbit! Surely a migraine wouldn't stop you from doing your stuff on set!" the director frowned as he was about to grab Ace's shoulder.

"No! Get away! I can't hold it much longer! Run!" Ace tried holding his scream back as smoke started to appear from Ace's hands.

"Ace! Ace! What's wrong!? Ace!" Taya cried as she tried to hold him.

Ace let out a piercing scream as he threw his arms out to unleash a red laser blasting from his eyes. Everyone else screamed as they ran away from him. The laser continued to strike anything that Ace faced his eyes with. Taya picked herself up from the floor and tried approaching Ace while dodging the laser.

"Ace! Stop!" she screamed.

As if on cue, the laser disappeared as Ace collapsed onto the floor. He gave some deep gasps for air as he faced his friend, standing there, scared. Ace stared at her fearful state before he jumped up from his spot and ran from her.
"Ace! Wait! Come back!" Taya cried.

But Ace didn't stop to listen to her cries. Fear was running through his head as he ran to an alleyway. He stopped to catch his breath as he leant against a wall. He then raised his arms in front of his face and stared down at his burnt palms.

"What the hell is going on!?" Ace stuttered.

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"What the hell is going on?" Ace stuttered as he stared at his burnt palms. "I've never been able to do that before. How did I-"

He heard crash from the dustbins. He spun around quickly and jumped to his karate stance. He then loosened his body to find a duck anthro sitting in a garbage can. He pushed himself from the can as he brushed the dirt off himself from his clothes.

"Okay... wasn't I meant to be at the swimming pool? I know I said "I wish I was somewhere else right now, but this is just ridiculous!" the duck grumbled as he faced the rabbit anthro staring at him in a strange way.

"What!?" the duck snapped making Ace jump. "Just because you see a guy pop up from no-where, doesn't mean you can stare!"

"But... you weren't here a minute ago." Ace stuttered in utter confusion.

"Of course I wasn't here!" the duck continued. "I was just getting a boxing off Mr "Ooh, I'm so good just because I sit around and do nothing until someone's drowning" and then the next thing I know, I'm swimming in garbage!"

He then caught his eye on Ace's burnt palms.

"Were you barbequing your hands just by some chance?" he asked.

Ace was about to speak when they heard a ringing from a phone box in the street. Both looked at the phone booth.

"You think it could be for us?" Ace whispered.

"Why don't we find out then? We can't just let it ring." Duck frowned as both of the guys approached the phone booth.

The ringing got more louder as they got closer to it. When they were there, Ace took the phone handle and put it to his ear.

"Hello?" he asked intentively.

"Have you been told that power sleeps within you? Should you have, then come to the tower with a glowing green globe at the top. I will be waiting."

The tone started to echo as Ace put the phone handle back onto the hook.

"Well. Who was it?" the duck demanded as he folded his arms.

"They didn't say." Ace started, "But they did say that we should go to the tower with a glowing green globe on top of it."

"What!? That makes no sense!" the duck threw his arms up in the air.

"Have you heard some say "Power sleeps within you" to you?" Ace asked.

"What sort of question's that!?"

Ace could see that he was starting to get agitated about the situation. He started to walk away from his the duck.

"Wait!" he ran up to the rabbit. "Where are you going!?"

Ace then stopped and turned to the duck.

"Have you experienced anything weird? Things that you were never able to do that you could do now? Like in the alley? I don't know anyone who could just appear from out of no-where."

The duck looked down onto the ground.

"Well... that I was never able to do before. Where are we going anyway?"

The rabbit raised his arm.

"There."

Ace pointed to the tallest tower with the green glowing globe that was described by the voice on the phone.

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Ace and Duck walked on the pavement looking around for the tower.

"I don't believe this!" Duck snapped. "We're told to look for a tower with a glowing green globe on top of it, and it isn't there! I'm not even sure if it does exist! Do you see a tower with green globe!? I don't see a tower with a green globe! We can't seem to find a stupid tower with the stupid glowing green globe!"

"Ahem." Ace cleared his throat as he pointed at the tower that they were looking for. The tower with a glowing green globe floating in the air.

"Oh. That stupid tower with the glowing green globe." Duck calmed down as they approached the door.

Ace tapped on the doors to see if anyone would answer. The doors didn't open.

"So we've been called here and no-one answers. They just lock us out." Duck turned back and started to walk away. "I'll see ya later then. I'm off."

"Wait." Ace interupted. "No-one would just call us here just to lock us out. There must be a way in."

"Oh, so you're hoping a trap door would open below us so we'd fall into a black abyss?" Duck snorted sarcastically.

"Not quite what I had in mind Duck." Ace frowned.

"What!?" the duck jumped. "You mean we're gonna break in!? We'll get arrested if we do that! It's called trespassing! There's kind of a law against it!"

"Well if we're not gonna be let in, then we'll just have to let ourselves in." Ace said as he started focussing on the door.

"Uh, what are you doing? Are you okay?" Duck asked.

"Why... won't it work this time?" Ace growled.

Suddenly, a red laser beam shot form Ace's eyes as the door melted. Duck's eyes widened.

"Shall we?" Ace smiled as he entered the tower.

"Wait! Don't leave me!" Duck called as he ran after him.

The melted entrance was replaced by another strong looking door behind them both. The next second they were surrounded by about 20 mechanical robots carrying laser guns. Duck and Ace jumped to their fighting stances.

"By the way," Duck frowned at Ace. "Your idea of breaking in stinks!"

A robot then fired a laser that almost hit them. But fortunately, they both dodged it, Duck disappeared for a second and landed in a different place. He then panicked and chucked a random orb which hit one of the robots accurately. The robot fell down to the ground.

"Wow." Duck said in amazement. "That what comes of being a professional- ACK!"

He was knocked down by another robot. Ace demonstrated a variety of karate moves which destroyed a multiple amount of robots. They battle continued on until Ace gave the last robot a round house kick, shattering the whole mechical body into nuts and bolts. Both of the anthros stood in the middle of the room panting.

"You know? I could have had him, if I wasn't so tired." Duck panted.

"Sure Duck. Sure you could have." Ace gasped.

Another door opened in front of them. They didn't pause for a rest any longer as they both ran through the door. They stopped in a mysterious looking room where a pillar stood in the middle of a table with two chairs around it. The pillar then started to glow a purple colour as a holographic figure of a woman stood in the pillar. She gazed upon the two startled figures staring back at her. Duck gave a gasp of suprise.

"You..." he whispered.

"You know her?" Ace asked.

"She was the lady in the water I tried to save." Duck explained.

"Greetings." The woman finally spoke. "You may sit down."

The two anthros slowly sat down on the two chairs provided. They still kept focused on her staring down at them.

"My name is Zadavia." The woman started off. "I have been watching you for a long time. I have noticed that you have been experiencing strange things lately. Powers that you have never gained before until now."

"Wait. You're the one who called us here didn't you?" Ace interupted.

"That is correct. I called you here because you have gained powers that you never had before." Zadavia paused before she spoke again. "Do you remember a meteor falling before you fell into a coma for six weeks?"

"Yeah." Duck replied. "I asked for someone to put me out of my misery. And they send a huge rock hurtling towards me! I mean, some people are so literal!"

The woman began to explain. "The reason why you fell into the coma was because that if your powers developed while you were awake, it would be a painful process. You see, your whole DNA structure has changed because of the radiation that came out from the meteor. So, the only way that you could develop your powers as painlessly as possible, was if you fell into a deep sleep long enough for it to develop and grow properly."

"What!? You knew this!? And you were never gonna tell us as soon as we woke up!?" Duck exclaimed.

"If I told you immediately then it would overwhelm you." Zadavia answered.

"So, me and Ace went into the coma for six weeks because we had powers to develop?" Duck recaped.

"Hang on!" Ace spoke up. "There were four others that were in the state as us! They may have developed some powers too! Is this true Zadavia?"

"Yes." she nodded. "Eight weeks ago, six people fell into the coma because they were affected by the meteor's radiation. You are just two of the six."

"There are others?" Duck blinked.

"This is why I need you to find them quick. They may already have discovered their powers and they may not use it for the right reasons. You must convince them to help you protect this city using their powers." Zadavia said.

"What!? We have to go hunt for other people who might be using their powers to break into banks!?" Duck buried his face in his hands.

"So where do we start?" Ace asked enthusiastically.

"First, you must get changed into your uniforms." Zadavia suggested.

"We get our own uniform!?" Duck popped up from his burying hands. "I'll do it!"

Duck ran into another room as Zadavia shook her head in worry.

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"So where are we going first then?" Duck asked as he walked alongside Ace on the pavement.

"According to Zadavia, the location to finding our first partner is around here somewhere." Ace said as he stared down at his wrist looking at a hologram map.

"Gee. Somewhere around here. That's a good start. If only we knew where they are exactly." The duck snorted sarcastically. Then he looked down on his wrist at the watch on his wrist.

"And where is my lunch? I only ordered it five minutes ago, and they're late!" he moaned again. "I'll be seriously keeping my change when he gets here!"

As if on cue, a blue blur smacked into Duck, knocking him onto the ground. Duck looked up to see a blue roadrunner in a light blue streamlined uniform holding a sandwich bag.

"Here ya go! One Ceaser sized baguette with the salad and mayonaise included! That will be 20 quarsarliums please!" The roadrunner gushed enthusiastically.

"Sorry!" Duck snatched the bag off the roadrunner. "Your policy says that if the order isn't delivered in five minutes, we get to have the order for free! And you were clearly one minute late!"

"Please!" The roadrunner begged as tears ran down his feathery cheeks. "I need some form of pay! If I don't get any income, I won't be able to support my family, and then we'll be poor, and then we'll have to leave our house and-"

"Here ya go then." Ace said as he genorously placed two quasarlium notes in the roadrunner's hand. "You look as though you've been working non-stop. You deserve at least this for delivering the order."

The roadrunner stared at the money as though he has never seen it before.

"Th- thank you..." he stuttered. "Thank you so much!"

"What!?" Duck exclaimed.

"I won't forget your kindness! I'll find a way to repay you! I promise you! Thank you! Thank you!" the roadrunner said in excitement as he sprinted in the oppisite direction, leaving Duck and Ace with blank stares in their faces.

Then Duck turned and frowned at Ace.

"What did you do that for!?" he snapped. "You didn't have to reward him for being so late!"

"Hey! You got your lunch, didn't you?" Ace frowned back at him. "Now lets go."

Ace started to walk as Duck grumbled under his breath as he bit into his sandwich.

Two hours went by and the two anthros eventually sat on a park bench in the park.

"Nothing!" Duck threw his arms up into the air. "We looked for hours and we haven't found our partner yet! This is probably some wild goose chase we've been sent on!"

"Zadavia wouldn't have sent us out here for no reason now would she?" Ace sighed as he leant back on the bench.

"Get out of here! Something's here!" a random cry called out.

Ace and Duck sat up to find the roadrunner running around the park, warning people to get out of the park.

"That's the crazy roadrunner who delivered my lunch late!" Duck pointed at him. "He's lost it this time!"

"We better calm him down before the police gets involved." Ace said as they ran towards the roadrunner.

The bird turned to see the the rabbit and duck running towards him.

"Get back!" he cried. "Something dangerous is gonna come from that spot from the ground in five seconds!"

"Look pal!" Duck shouted. "You've crossed the line this-"

The ground started to rumble. The ground underneath Duck started to rip from under his feet. A head then shot up from the ground, pushing Duck up into the air. Duck screamed as he was thrown high into the air. The people in the park started to run out of the park, while Ace and the roadrunner stared at a giant blue, transparent worm poking from the ground. Ace turned to the roadrunner.

"How did you know what was going to happen, uuhh..." Ace asked as he tried to guess the roadrunner's name.

"It's Rev." he replied. "I don't know. I just felt something telling me in my mind that this was gonna happen and I just couldn't help but warn people about it before it was too late."

"We'll deal with introductions later." Ace said. "Right now, Duck needs us to unearth this worm!"

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Oooo, their first big battle! Ace and the birds against giant blue worm monster! Can't wait to see how Lexi and Tech get involved! Exciting stuff Akira!

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Oracle! You forgot about Slam!!!! How can you forget the big guy that easily!?!?!

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Yikes! You're right ruth! I forgot Slam! I'm so ashamed of myself now! *Slaps self.*

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evileye Shame on you Black Oracle! How can you forget about Slam!

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Such is the price characters pay when they speak in incomprehensible tongues. Poor Slam! This is what happens to characters that are backgrounded alot, i forget them. I know, i'm a terrible LU fan for forgetting about Slam! Please forgive me Slam! *Slam rolls eyes.*

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Patting Slam on the head and hugging him.

Aaaw!!! How can they forget about you Slam? Poor Slamy!
 
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Ace leapt into the air as he shot out a laser beam from his eyes. The monster looked up and whacked Ace against a tree, giving him a groan in pain on his stomach.

Duck managed to manouver himself in the air as he started to fall back down. He prepared two, glowing, orange orbs in each hand and threw them both at the worm. The worm quickly turned around and hit both orbs back towards Duck. Before he could move, the orbs splated on him as he fell onto a sand box.

Both of the heroes managed to recover and tried attacking once again at the worm without any success. Rev however just stood in fear as he watched the other two struggling to destroy the monster.

"What am I going to do!?" the roadrunner whimpered. "I can't just dive in there! I don't have anything that can help them apart from the fact I can predict where things are."

Rev looked up to see the monster's tail towering over him as it was about to hit him. He screamed as he stared to run. But then suddenly everything was a blur around him as his legs took him across the park at incredible speed. Rev couldn't believe this as he was getting used to running at the speed of light. He then dug his heels into the ground and stopped himself. He looked at Ace and Duck, almost ready to collapse.

"We need a distraction!" Ace speke through his gritted teeth. "It's the only way we can get a good shot to get rid of this worm!"

Rev then gave a determined frown, as he sprinted towards the monster.

"Hey! Down here! Bet you can't catch me!" he called as the monster looked down to see the roadrunner standing boldly.

The worm then tried to hit Rev with it's tail but Rev ran out of it's way before it hit the ground.

"Ha ha! Missed me!" Rev mocked as the worm tried to take another blow at him.

Missed. Ace and Duck saw this as an oppitunity to strike the weak spot as they both fired their orbs and lasers. The monster screamed at the affects until it exploded. Water splashed all over the park, soaking our heroes.

"Argh! I'm all wet now!" Duck moaned as he threw his arms several time to throw the water off.

Ace however ignored the ducks rants as he approached the panting roadrunner. He put his hand on the bird's shoulder as the bird turned to look at the rabbit.

"Nice job Rev." Ace complimented. "You helped save Acmetropolis. And with your own powers as a matter of fact."

"Powers?" Rev's eyes widened. " Someone kept telling me I have some form of power but I didn't know what they meant until the worm came along and I never knew I was so fast without the jet blades and-"

"If you want, you can join us." Ace smiled. "We're looking for our partners who were in the same predicament eight weeks ago."

"Eight weeks ago?" Rev said in confusion. "You mean... you were in that coma when the meteor hit too?"

"Me too." Duck interupted. "I guess I should have given you some pay. Huh."

Ace smirked at him and then turned to Rev.

"So, do you wanna know what's been going on with ya?" he asked.

Rev hesitated to answer. But eventually gave a smile.

"I'll join!" he said enthusiastically as he swung his hand to shake Ace's hand.

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Nice Rev induction! I have to say Rev was pretty cool! But who sent that big worm monster i wonder?

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Wait a minute!

Worm monster....didn't Teen Titans also had an episode about three worm monsters attacking?

No offence, it just came into my mind suddenly and I had to type it out.

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Ace payed the money to a check-out girl at the supermarket till and started to carry the contents of the brown paper bag. He still couldn't get over the fact that he had developed over these past few days. He started hearing mysterious voices, then discovers he has powers along with finding someone else in the same predicament, they find the person who has been calling them all this time and they found someone else like them during their very first battle. Anyone who took part in these sort of events would find it over-whelming, including Ace.

His thoughts were paused when he bumped into someone else. The groceries fel out of the bag by the impact. And down onto the floor, he saw a cream and peach female rabbit in a green and purple cheerleading uniform sat onto the floor.

"I'm sorry! I didn't look where I was going." Ace apologised as he started to pick up the food up from the ground.

"No! I'm the one who should be sorry! Here, let me help you." the girl rabbit said as she picked up an apple.

They both picked up the groceries until every last one was off the ground and in the bag Ace held. They both gazed at each other until they were interrupted by a voice.

"Well well well. Lexi found herself a new boyfriend."

They both turned around to see three girls in the same uniform as the girl rabbit. The rabbit girl gave a worried look at them as the girl with short, light, blonde, spiky hair approached her.

"Well aren't we skipping school today? What's the matter Lexi? Still feeling to ill to go to school?" she sneered as the other two girls giggled behind her.

"But we can obviously see she isn't ill now." sneered the other with red, plated hair.

"So why aren't you coming back Lexi?" said the last girl with long, black hair.

"Now don't be shy in front of your boyfriend Lexi. It's rude not to introduce your new friends to us now isn't it?" the blonde haired girl said as she raised an arm against the girl rabbit.

She flinched when Ace grabbed the attacking arm.

"I think you should leave her alone. Bullies are never acceptable in anyone's eyes ya know. And I'm not her boyfriend." he said as the girl pulled her arm out of his grasp.

"Hmph! We're just going anyway." she huffed as she turned around to leave.

The other girls followed behind her.

"We'll see you back at school tomorrow. It's not like you're going to turn up again though." the girl with red hair waved.
 
"Oh and it was nice to meet your boyfriend Lexi. Someone as cute as him shouldn't be hanging around someone like you." she said sneered as they disappeared around the corner.

Ace frowned at the corner they turned and then turned back to the relieved girl rabbit.

"Are you okay?" he finally asked.

"I'm fine." she answered in a monotone voice as she walked away from him the oppisite direction the bullies went.

Ace just stared in sympathy as the rabbit disappeared into the crowd of people.
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"Oh oh oh! Almost had him there!" Rev tapped on the game controller in excitement, steering it in different directions like a car while Duck just watched him from behind the sofa.

"That's the problem with you kids. You've got too much energy." Duck rolled his eyes as they both heard the hissing of the doors opening. Ace stepped in the HQ with disappointment written on his face. The two birds stared at the rabbit.

"Are you okay Ace?" Duck asked.

Ace turned his head towards Duck and then let out a deep sigh.

"Yeah I guess." he replied.

Suddenly, a hologram of the woman appeared in the meeting room. All the guys rushed inside as they sat down on the chairs with an extra one where Rev sat.

"What's up Zadavia? Any trouble brewin'?" Ace enquired.

"There have been several reports of a ghost at the gymnasium of Acmefield High School." Zadavia reported. "And the headmaster wants you to go and investigate this matter."

"G-ghost!?" Duck shrieked.

"Zadavia out." she said as she disappeared.

"Hmm... a ghost huh?" Ace pinched his chin with his finger and thumb.

"She said a g-g-... ghost?" Duck stuttered.

"Yeah." Rev piped up. "You're not scared of ghosts are you?"

"N-no!" Duck snapped. "I am not scared of ghosts if you do so ask! How can I be a hero if I'm scared of a silly old ghost?!"

"Then that's settled then." Ace declared. "We'll got on a ghost hunt tonight."

"Tonight!?" Duck shrieked again.

"Aw I think it will be fun hunting for a ghost. Although, I've never seen a ghost myself, or anyone else for that matter. But that doesn't mean ghosts are not real." Rev gushed out in excitement.

"That's the spirit Rev!" Ace smirked at Duck. 

Duck immediately realised about Ace's bad pun.

"Yeah. Lets go then." Duck said with less enthusiasm than the others.

END OF CHAPTER 12. AND ONE OF DUCK'S MADE UP DEEP DARK SECRET IS EXPOSED! IT MIGHT BE ONE BUT WE'LL NEVER KNOW.

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A ghost? This should be interesting! How will the Ace, Duck and Rev hit something intangible? And poor Lexi! How i do detest sneering girls!

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Really good so far Akira_Cat!biggrin
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Chapter 13

Everything was surrounded by the blackness of the night as the full moon shone high in the sky. Ace and Rev approached the school with Duck trembling from behind.
 
"You know, maybe we should do this tomorrow, when there's more daylight." Duck mumbled.

"Well unfortunately, ghosts are known for coming out at night. And we can't turn back now cos we only just begun looking for the ghost. So we can't." Rev gushed out.

Duck fidgeted with his fingers even more nervous than before he got the reply. Ace rolled his eyes at his comrade's behaviour.

"Ace. Can we go home now?" Duck stuttered.

Suddenly, there was a bumping sound as Duck jumped in fright.

"What was that!?" he squeaked as Ace turned around to look at the window.

"Oh my! I see a shadow in there!" Ace pretended to sound suprised.

"AAAAAAAAAAHHHHH!!!" Duck began squeal.

"And I hear a strange noise." Ace acted again.

"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!" Duck put his fingers to his mouth as Ace put his face only 2 centimeteres from the duck's bill.

"Boo."

Duck let out a scream, loud enough to be heard from anywhere in the neighbourhood. Then he heard some giggling from behind him. He spun around to find Ace and Rev giggling.

"You scared me on purpose!" Duck pointed an accusing finger at Ace.

"Well I guess it was just the wind." Ace smiled. "Sorry."

"Right that's it! I'm going home! You guys can continue without me!" Duck declared as he stared to march off. He then suddenly tripped and fell onto the ground. Ace and Rev ran to him.

"Duck! What do you think you're playing at!?" Ace frowned as Duck rubbed his head.

"I don't know." He replied. "I just tripped over something."

The bump then gave a moan.

"I think you tripped over a person!" Rev concluded. Ace gave a gasp.

"Hey! She was the one who was picking on Lexi earlier!"

"Are you okay?" Rev asked in concern.

The girl with golden spiky hair moaned again.

"That girl... Lexi..."

Rev gently put her down onto the grass.

"Lets go! Lexi is in danger!" Ace commanded.

After they managed to unlock the school doors, the guys carefully crept around the dark, empty corridors.

"Gee... it seems such a long time since I left school." Duck whispered.

Suddenly, Rev's head lifted up.

"I've got a lock on the ghost! It's this way!" he announced as the rest of the guys ran after him.

They turned on various corners, past various classrooms until Rev pushed a pair of big doors that led them inside the gym. The gym was empty. No-one appeared to be in there. All the guys footsteps echoed as the walked across the wooden floor.

"We lost them." Rev said as his voice bounced of the walls creating the same echo.

"Okay. The ghost isn't here. Lets go!" Duck sqealed as turned around to walk towards the exit.

"You really are scared of ghosts are you?" Ace said as Duck stopped and turned around.

"I am not scared of ghosts!" he shouted. "I just don't like the fact that-"

Before he could finish his explanation, a red ball smacked him in the face, knocking him to the floor unconcious.

"Duck!" Rev and Ace cried in unision as they saw a dark figure holding a red ball in their hand. They stood next to a basket full of red balls.

"It's the ghost!" Rev proclaimed.

The figure threw a ball towards him. Rev managed to dodge the ball. And the next. They also threw the balls towards Ace but he managed to dodge them too.

"I think this ghost wants to play dodgeball with us!" Ace said as he jumped over another fast ball.

The last dodge ball was thrown as the guys tried to get their breath back.

"Bad luck! You run out of balls! You can't get us now!" Rev shouted at the figure.

"Oh I don't think so." the shadow murmured as a pink light appeared above their head.

Before Rev could move, a pink laser shot out of the glow and pushed him against the wall. Rev screamed as he banged his body against the wall. Hegroaned as he landed on the ground.

"Rev!" Ace cried as he turned towards the figure who stepped out of the shadows.

"And now, it's your turn!" the figure said.

Ace gasped.

"Lexi!?"

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OMG LEXI'S EVIL!!!!!!!!!
What will happen now......?
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Chapter 14

"Lexi!?" Ace gasped in shock. "But why!?"

A pink light glowed on top of Lexi's ears and a laser blasted across. Ace dived out of the laser's way and instead, the laser blew a hole in the wall. Ace stood in his karate stance as he faced Lexi.

"Next time, I won't miss!" she growled.

"Well this has gone on far enough Lexi! Stop it now!" Ace shouted.

He was about to take a step forward to run when he stopped. His eyes focused on a tear from Lexi's eyes, rolling down her cheek. Ace stood in a normal stance.

"You're... you're afraid aren't you?" he toned the vloume of his voice down. "You're just freaked out and confused and you don't know what to do with yourself. That's why you're doing this!"

"Shut up!" the girl rabbit snapped as her eyes welled up with tears.

"No! I won't shut up! Inside, you're a really nice person! You were completely the oppisite to the way you're behaving now!"

"I have had it!!!" Lexi screamed as the glow on top of her ears glowed really bright. There was a sonic wave that knocked Ace down to the ground, taking a bit of energy out of him.

Lexi then approached Ace, as she stood over him with hot tears running down her cheeks.

"I only wanted to be liked by people, people to appreciate me for who I am." she mumbled. "But then strange things started happening to me after the meteor crashed. Now I'll never have any friends!!!"

Then she broke into tears as she fell down to her knees.

"I'll never have any friends..."

She then felt Ace putting his arms around her. She burried her face into Ace's hug and quietly cried as Rev slowly got up.

"It's okay Lexi." the roadrunner spoke. "You were just confused and overwhelmed about the fact you recieved your powers."

"Yeah." Ace agreed. "When I first discovered my powers, I was scared that I might hurt someone with them because I felt that they were so dangerous. But... now that I have found others like me, I feel almost safe."

"And the other girl outside, she's okay. And we're not that badly injured." Rev piped up. "And most people would assume that the ghost did this and not you."

"It's going to be okay." Ace reassured.

"No!"

The owner of the defiant outburst was an angry Duck, with a badly bruised head.

"Even if she was scared, we can't let her off that easy! She did attack some people and that's not acceptable!"

"So you're saying she should be punished?" Ace argued.

"Well she did do a lot of damage here, and we can't just let her off lightly! And as I stand, her punishment should be-"

"To work with us as a superhero." Ace finished.

"What?" Lexi said in confusion.

"Yeah! She should work with us! After all, she is one of our partners, right?" Rev exclaimed.

"But, I don't know how to be a superhero!" Lexi whined.

"Well, with your athletic ability and your brain blasting powers, you'll be a great superhero." Ace said. "Well? Do you?"

Lexi froze on the spot for a while. She then gave a brave frown and nodded.

"Yes. I do want to help you. I'll join and help you guys as an apology for my destructive behaviour." she said in determination.

"What!?" Duck shrieked. "She's working with us!? She should at least do some community service! Or at least fix up the hole she blew in the wall!"

But everyone else ignored Duck's ravings as they walked across the gym to exit through the hole that Lexi created so they could find the girl that was found at the front of the school, to make sure that she was alright.

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Whoah! That was so unlike Lexi! Good thing Ace managed to calm her down, he was very understanding!

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ya (giggles happily)ace/lexi moment in chapter 14

keep writing

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WooHoo! Ace/Lexi moments!
Awsome job so far! cant wait for the next chapter!

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Sorry it took such a long time guys. So much was going on. Plus a nervous breakdown didn't help either. But here it is! Chapter 15!

Chapter 15

Lexi looked down the sides of her arms as she tried out the new pink and black uniform she was wearing.

"You look abosolutely brilliant in that Lexi!" Rev commented as he clasped his hands together. "Pink really does suit you!"

Lexi turned to face Rev.

"You really think so?"

"Yeah." Duck nodded. "But not as good as me in this uniform. Orange so brings out the colour in my eyes."

Ace entered the room as Rev waved his arm in the red and black uniform that he was wearing.

"Hey Ace! Don't you think Lexi looks pretty in pink?"

Ace stared at the girl rabbit in her pink and black uniform.

"You look... lovely Lexi." Ace smiled.

Lexi blushed before the hologram of Zadavia appeared once more. She looked down upon Lexi.

"I see you've tried out your uniform?"

Lexi turned to face the boss lady.

"Yeah. It fits all right. And I like the colours."

"Indeed." Zadavia agreed. "But the real reason I came here is because I have something that can lead us to your next partner."

The rest of the gang focused on the hologram.

"Do you know where they are?" Ace enquired.

"You see that envelope on the table?" Zadavia pointed.

Rev immediately grabbed the envelope and carried it back his comrades. Duck snatched the brown envelope off the roadrunner's hands as he tore the top bit open. He delved his hand in side and pulled out four small pieces of paper out.

"Oh my gosh!" he squealed in excitement. "Tickets to go see the World Wrestling Championships!"

"Yes." Zadavia nodded. "Those tickets will get you the front seats of the wrestling ring that the competition will be taking place."

"And that must be where our next partner will be? Right?" Rev chirped cheerfully.

"Correct." the woman nodded. "The championships start tonight. I hope your mission will be successful. Zadavia out."

Her hologram disappeared while Duck still glared with his eyes wide open at the tickets he held in his hands, as his jaw dropped. Rev waved his hand over Duck's eyes.

"I don't think Duck's all there." Rev said.

Ace put his hand on Duck's shoulder.

"I think you can stop dribbling on the tickets now Duck. Duck!"

Duck shook his head as he ran into his bedroom. The others peered around the door. They suddenly backed off when a bunch of clothes flew out of the room. A yellow T-shirt smacked into Lexi's face as she pulled it off and threw it onto the floor.

"Duck. What are you doing?" Lexi frowned.

Duck popped his head from the door with a pair of blue shorts over half of his head. 

"Well we gotta get in there without people noticing who we are now can we." Duck explained. "Besides, we want to look good on the night now don't we?"

Lexi sighed as she pulled the shorts off Duck's head.

"What you guys need is a fashion expert." Lexi suggested. "And I think I can come up with disguises that are convincing yet fashionable."

They guys looked at each other as Lexi had a twinkle in her eye.
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Slam wrapped his hand with the white tape around his hands in the changing room. He looked up as a man in a black business suit entered the changing room with a sneering look on his face.

"So, you think you can win this championship tasmanian devil?" the man muttered above Slam. "It's not too late to pull out now."

Slam looked up to the man.

"I'm going to find out what's going on with me. I'm not gonna let anyone or anything get in the way of what I want to know. I'm not gonna back out now."

The man tipped his hat off to Slam.

"As you wish... Twisted Spinner." The man sneered as he turned and walked away, leaving Slam to look down at his palms of his hands.

He then clenched his hands into fists and looked up to the ceiling.

"I will find out what this 'power' is all about. I will win this championship and show everyone what power sleeps within me." he proclaimed.

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'Atta boy Slam! Such determination to win! I hope Lexi doesn't make Ace and the others wear anything embarrassing! He! He! He!

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Chapter 16

Crowds screamed in the stadium as bright lights danced all over the dome. Ace, Lexi, Duck and Rev sat on the front row seats behind the ring.

"This is so exciting!" Rev exclaimed in excitement. "I can't believe Zadavia managed to get us tickets to one of the most biggest events in the whole world! Who would have thought that we'd actually be here!"

"Yeah, yeah." Duck waved his hand at Rev to shut him up. "Don't get too excited."

"Ladies and gentlemen!" the commentator announced.

Duck jumped and shook his hands in rapid speed.

"OH MY GOSH! IT'S STARTING! IT'S STARTING!" He squealed as Ace clamped his beaked shut.

"This is the World Wrestling Championship, where we see wrestlers from everywhere and anywhere in the world compete for the biggest prize in wrestling history. The WWC Belt!" the commentator introduced as the crowd cheered. Duck cheered the louder than anyone else as the others covered their ears.

"For starters, we have the first match of the night! In the blue corner, is a wrestler all the way from the desert of Arizona, weighing at 190lbs, The Crushing Crusher!"

A muscular man in brown, lycra costume with a black belt gave threatening gestures to the audience that made them cheer. Duck again waved his arms in a frenzy, cheering loudly, as his friends sat there in embarrassment. The wrestler entered the ring, continuing with his gestures.

"And in the red corner, is a beast from the jungles of Tasmania, weighing in at 250lbs, The Twisted Spinner!"

The crowd cheered as a Tasmanian devil in yellow lycra costume with a red belt with a red bandana, walked proudly into the ring. Both wrestlers approached the referee as he explained the rules to them.

"Wow." Lexi raised her eyebrows. "I never knew anthros were allowed in competitions like this."

"I guess some are more appreciated than others." Duck gave a huff in jealousy. Ace frowned at him and then turned back to focus on the ring.

He watched the Tasmanian devil limber up. But from the distance he could see that there was a face where the wrestler felt he shouldn't be here. Ace felt some sympathy for him as the bell rang.

The wrestlers charged at each other and grappled with each other. The Crusher took hold of the Spinner's waist and lifted him in the air and dropped him to the ground. People winced at the sight as they heard a thud on the ground.

"Ooh! And that was the Flapjack toss!" the commentator shouted.

The Tasmanian devil slowly got to his knees as his opponent ran towards him. The Spinner locked his legs into the other's legs as the Crusher fell flat on his face. Everyone cheered as the devil turned the body over and held his opponent in a painful position as the referee started counting.

"One!"

Lexi turned to Ace in fright.

"Ace! I think I heard the roof crumbling!"

"What!? I can't hear you!" Ace tried shouting through out the noise.

"Two!"

"Ace! Look!" she pointed to the roof as they saw bits crumble from the top of the dome.

Ace gave a gasp as he told the two birds to get everyone out of there.

A chip from the roof fell on top of the Tasmanian devil's head. He looked up to see where it came from. He gasped as he saw a giant piece of scaffolding which was about to slip out of it's place on the roof. He let go of his opponent's body and shouted for them to get out of the ring. 

"And what's the Twisted Spinner doing!? He seems to be trying to get them out of the ring! And-"

"Everyone! Get out!" Ace shouted through the microphone. "The roof is about to collapse!"

The roof started fall. Everyone screamed. They ran out of the exits. Ace and the others stood there as the roof was about to hit them. They suddenly felt being pushed by the Twisted Spinner out of the ring. The roof landed on top of the wrestler. Ace looked up and gave a frightened look on his face.

"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!"

He ran to the pile and started to dig him out.

"Guys! Help me dig him out!" Ace called.

The others didn't hesitate as they immediately started digging. Their hands frantically pulled each piece of the roof of little by little.

"It's hopeless!" Duck shouted.

"We have to keep trying!" Rev said as he pulled the metal off the pile in the speed as he ran.

The rumble then shook as they backed off from the pile. The biggest piece of scaffolding lifted up. The others gasped as their jaws dropped to see that the Tasmanian devil, who was stuck under the rubble, lifting the biggest piece of the scaffolding from the roof, above his head.

"Either he's really strong or..." Duck murmured.

"Or we have found another partner." Ace finished the sentence.

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Raaaaggghhh! And so is born another Loonatic! Go Slam!

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Yes!!! One more to go!!!!!!!!

Hmmm...I wonder how they will find Tech...

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Ya!!!!! Go Slam!!!!!!! Wait... how in the world are the going to convince Tech let alone find him? Gah..... cruel mysteries how you torture us! hehehe!biggrin

Nice work so far Akira Cat!biggrin

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