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Oh geez! I really need to bookmark these fics! i've missed so much!

Awesome work as usual Akira! I think it's brilliant that you had one of the Loonatics start off as a "villain"!

YAY Axe/Lexi moments!

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Oh geez! I really need to bookmark these fics! i've missed so much!

Awesome work as usual Akira! I think it's brilliant that you had one of the Loonatics start off as a "villain"!

YAY Axe/Lexi moments!


Well, Lexi wasn't a villain as such. She just got scared of recieving powers she never had before. And the combination of bullying didn't help either. So she just took all her frustrations out on other people. Fortunately, Ace and the others managed to calm her down and got her to come to her senses.

Next chapter I hope will be up very soon cos my mom said that I have to practice my guitar for my guitar lesson today. :Sigh:



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Chapter 17

The Tasmanian devil stood noblely, holding the metal bar over his head. He then threw the bar behind him so he wouldn't hit anyone in front of him, although it did damage a set of empty seats behind him. But he didn't seem to care about that. He was then surrounded by different anthros in different coloured uniforms.

"Are you okay?" the devil asked them.

"We're fine thanks to you." Lexi smiled.

"You must be our next partner!" Rev gushed out as the Tasmanian devil stared in confusion.

"What!?" A voice bellowed from no where. "I thought I got rid of you, you Twisted beast!"

Everyone turned around to see a man in a black business suit, standing in one of the emergency exit doors.

"So you're the one who made the roof collapse!" Ace shouted as the man gave an evil laugh.

"The one and only!" the man praised himself. "Anthros are nothing but pests! They don't deserve to live amongst a civilised, human society! I only took the dumb animal in so I could prove that anthros are nothing but freaks and monsters on two legs that should belong in a zoo!"

The Tasmanian devil shuddered and then collapsed onto his knees. But the man just grinned.

"Don't listen to him!" Lexi consoled the devil. "He's trying to put you down!"

"Poor deluded fool." the man shook his head. "It's obvious that the animal can't even fend for himself anymore against mere words to reflect reality."

"Well reflect this!" Ace shouted as the red laser blasted from his eyes.

The man somosaulted from the door and in front of the ring on his feet. The laser then hit the exit door from where the man stood.

"You forget." the man spoke. "I am the manager of a selection of wrestlers, which means I'm bound to be a professional at taking you down."

Duck then appeared out of no where on top of his shoulders and covered the man's eyes with his hands.

"Ha! Didn't see that didn't you?" Duck smirked.

But the man grabbed Duck's arm and threw him into one of the corner posts of the wrestling ring.

"If it's man to man combat you want, I'm game." Ace frowned as he charged at the manager and tried to knock him over with a roundhouse kick. The manager deflected it as he tried to lay punch on the rabbit.

Slam still shook on the spot as he reflected upon what was said about him. The man's words kept echoing in his head as Lexi tried to snap him out of his trance. He then looked at the two fighting each other. Slam clenched his fists as he stood up.

"Stop it." he murmured.

The manager heard this and smirked as he and Ace locked hands trying to push each other over.

""What did you just say?" he growled.

"Stop fighting now." Slam said louder.

The man then pushed Ace over and held him in a head lock.

"Well were you trained to fight as well? You're being very hypocritical about this." 

Slam raised his arm as the ground started to rumble.

"STOP IT RIGHT NOW!!!" he screamed.

Suddenly, a small breeze was felt and then it turned into a huge gust, forming itself into a tornado. Pieces of the rubble started to swirl around the room. By now, the gust was so powerful that no one apart from Slam could stay on their feet. Rev, Lexi, Ace and the manager swirled around the room at a rapid speed. Duck managed to wake up from unconciousness, but then he had to immediately hold onto the corner post he rested against. He saw the others flying around the room with any lack of control. Duck pulled his arm out with his hand open.

"Everyone! Grab my hand!" he shouted as Lexi grabbed Duck's hand first. The Ace and the man and Rev grabbed onto the other side of the post later on.

"We have to stop him from tearin' the place apart!" Ace bellowed through the gust. "He'll destroy it otherwise!"

"But how do we do that!?" Lexi shouted. 

"We have to tell him to stop!" the man bellowed. "Slam! Stop this now!"

"I can't!" he screamed as hot tears ran down his face.

"Wait!" Ace spoke up. "What if Rev tries and use his speed to slow the storm down!? If he can get down to the ground, and run the oppisite direction, then he should be able to slow the gust down!"

"It's worth a try!" the man said.

Rev wasted no time to pull himself down to the ground. Once his feet touched the ground, he immediately started sprinting the oppisite direction. The others watched his run around the room. They noticed the gust was dying down. The gust turned into a breeze as the Tasmanian devil stood in the centre shaking. He then lowered his arm and opened his eyes and looked around the area of which the gust took place. The manager then approached Slam in a terrible manner.

"Do you realise what you just did!?" he screamed as Slam cowered. "You almost killed me!"

"Hey!" Ace snapped. "That's no way to treat anyone! Just because he's not a human, doesn't mean that you can take advantage of him and bully him!"

"You're just being a bully!" Lexi added.

The man growled but then he felt a pair of metal cuffs behind his back. He looked behind him find Rev giving him a cheeky wink.

"And not only that," Ace continued. "You are under arrest for attempted murder and arson."

After the police took the manager away, Slam stared down at his hands as the super heroes approached him.

"You okay Slam?" Lexi asked.

The Tasmanian devil looked at her and then stared back down at his hands again.

"What did I do?" he murmured. "I didn't have powers before."

"Well, we're not sure ourselves. All we know is that we have to find our partners who have similar powers to us." Ace explained.
 
"You're just one of them." Rev grinned.

"Me?" Slam pointed to himself in confusion.

"You can join us if you want." Lexi said. "We could do with someone who can lift hundreds of times their weigh."

Slam glanced at the ruins of the super dome. And then he looked back at the others.

"Wrestling season probably won't be on for a while. Okay."

Slam brung his arm out to shake hands with Ace. But Duck shoved himself in front of the rabbit.

"I'll shake his hand if you don't mind." Duck said as Slam squeezed his hand.

Duck screeched as he quickly pulled his hand away from the devils hand. He looked at his throbbing hand and tried to take the pain away by waving it about.

"Did I mention I get a tight grip when it comes to hand shaking?" Slam giggled.

"No. You forgot to warn me." Duck mumbled in a grumpy tone as the others laughed at his throbbing hand.

END OF CHAPTER 17.

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Yay!!! 5 down, 1 to go!!!biggrinbiggrin

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Slam has a crushing hand shake! I always thought he had a gentle touch with friends.

Nasty anthro-prejudiced wrestling manager man!

Yay! Can't wait for Tech's entrance!

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Well guys, the wait is over! Chapter 18 is finally unveiled!

Chapter 18

Slam pulled the purple and black gloves up, smiling to himself.

"Wow Slam! You look amazing!" Rev admired from the sofa in front of the television.

Ace gazed out of the window into the city landscape full of towering skyscrapers.

"Yeah. But we still need to find our last partner." Ace informed the others.

Duck looked around the room with a half eaten sandwich in his hand.

"Speaking of finding our partners, where's Lexi?" Duck wondered as he took another bite out of the sandwich.

As if on cue, Lexi urgently ran into the room, holding a small hologram pad displaying a hologram.

"Guys! I think I may have a clue to finding our final partner!" she exclaimed.

The others immediately sprung to their feet.

"What's that then?" Ace enquired.

Lexi showed the hologram, saying about a science event.

"This science event starts today. And there are gonna be all sorts of inventions and scientific discoveries that scientists are gonna be talking about." She explained. 

Duck gave a frown.

"So how does the international geek convention help find our partner?"

Lexi pointed to a column on the hologram.

"These are the names of scientists who are gonna be taking part. Especially this guy."

She pointed to a name on the list as the others drew closer to read the name.

"Tech .E. Coyote?" Ace said in a puzzled tone.

"He's doing his science presentation on the meteor that crashed here eight weeks ago. That could mean he could be our last partner." Lexi continued.

"How did you find out all this?" Ace asked.

Lexi gave a little blush.

"Lets just say when I put the pieces together, I remembered the time when I skipped school."

"You skipped school?" Rev repeated.

"The point is that this could be an oppitunity we can't miss." Ace declared. "We'll tell Zadavia about this and then we'll get on with what we're gonna do."
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The echos of people talking filled the air. And scientists in white lab coats, rushing frantically around the hall, carrying things needed for their presentations. Ace lead the gang around the busy atmosphere, searching for the name that Lexi found.

"Okay. Lets split up." Ace said as he turned to Lexi. "Lexi, you and Rev go that way. Duck and Slam, follow me. Should we see him, we say through our communicators. Got it?"

Everyone nodded their heads as they split into their groups.

Lexi and Rev meandered through the crowds, as peoples voices buzzed in the air.

"So where do you think he'd be?" Rev asked, looking around incase he saw him.

Lexi looked around until a clear, familiar voice filled her ears. She listened to the dialogue for a few more seconds before she turned to Rev.

"He's this way!" She said as she pushed through the crowd.

Rev tried catching up to her.

"Wait!" he cried. "How are you sure that's him!?"

"I just know that's him! I'm sure of it!" Lexi said as she pushed through a few more crowds of people before she pushed out of the last crowd before laying her eyes on a brown coyote in a white lab coat, declaring information about his theories on the meteor crash.

"That's him!" Lexi panted as they both stared at the coyote along with a fascinated crowd.

"Over the course of time until now, I have been conducting research on the cosmic event that has happened eight weeks ago." he announced. "The day that everything changed forever. The day the meteor fell down on earth!"

Lexi lifted her wrist up to her mouth.

"Ace. We found him."

She slowly dropped her arm as she listened in awe to the presentation that the coyote was giving.

"Now we all know that the size and the speed of the meteor that came down upon earth should have destroyed this planet and wiped out our existance. But it didn't. This is because- ..."

The coyote dropped his arms and stared up at the ceiling. People gave puzzled looks on their faces and looked at each other in confusion. Suddenly, screams came from the other side of the room stampeded closer to the side of the room that Lexi and Rev stood at. The panicking people rushed through Lexi and Rev as they ran the opposite direction. They pushed through the crowds until they reached a giant robot, rampaging around the room, destroying the other inventions in it's path. There they saw that Ace, Duck and Slam are already attending to try and settle the robot down. Lexi and Rev immediately rushed in to try and help the others stop the robot's destruction. The robot threw it's mechanical arm upon them but everyone managed to dodge it.

Ace tried to use his laser vision as Lexi tried her brain blast. The robot didn't seem to be affected and knocked the two rabbits off their feet.

Rev tried to distract the robot but the robot saw this and smacked Rev across the room, making him hit the wall hard as he groaned at the pain on the ground.

The robot then threw it's arm down upon Rev. Rev couldn't use his speed to dodge the blow in time. All he could do is sheild himself with his arms and hope that a miracle would save him. The arm came closer and closer. Rev squeezed his eyes tight. The others screamed Rev's name in unison.

Rev then heard a humming sound. He opened his eyes to find the robot's arm frozen still, and a coyote figure standing in front of the road runner. Rev stared in awe as the coyote's hand glowed green to suspend the mechanical hand in mid range.

"Tech?" Rev spoke in suprise.

END OF CHAPTER 18.

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So Rev and Tech already knew each other? Lot's of people have theories about that (I don't have a theory. I just think it would be cool if it happened
YAY!!! New chapter! I love how this is going!

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Tech arrives! Yey! Where are all these giant worms, crooks and robots coming from? There's a threat to subdue with every new team member the Loonatics find! Cool entrances tho'!

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"Tech?" Rev spoke in suprise as the coyote turned his head to him.

"You gotta get out of here! This robot is malfunctioning!" he growled as he tried holding back the robots arm with the mysterious force he was using.

"But-"

"Just go! I can't hold him much longer!" the coyote repeated.

His arm flinched. Rev nodded his head as he got up and ran away before Tech could drop his arm and dodge the robot's blow. Tech gave a yelp in pain as the claw on the robot sliced his skin, causing a cut that ran down the top part of his right arm. He grabbed it as the blood trickled down his arm. Ace turned to see the coyote in pain.

"Tech! Get out of here! You'll get yourself killed!" Ace shouted as he ran up to him.

But he stopped immediately when he saw a green glow around the coyote's cut. The cut then started to disappear into his arm and before Ace knew it, it had completely healed up as though he wasn't injured in the first place. Tech looked at his right arm in amazement and then looked up to the robot. Tech raised his arms and concentrated really hard as his hands glowed green. The robot then started to flinch and gave spasms all over it's body before collapsing into a pile of broken metal. Everyone gazed in amazement. Tech's jaw dropped. Suddenly Rev ran up to him and wrapped his arms around his body.

"We did it!" he cried as the rest of the group gathered around the coyote.

"You were amazing!" Slam smiled.

"Yeah! We finally found our last partner!" Rev gushed. "Now we can combine our powers to save the city and the world! And we'll be a terrific team and-"

Tech pushed Rev away from and stepped back.

"Look. I really appreciate the fact that I helped you stop the robot from destroying this place." The coyote spoke. "But the thing is, I'm not joining anything."

The group's smiles dropped into an expression of shock.

"Why not!?" Lexi enquired. "You have powers just like us! Surely you have to agree!"

"Well I prefer to work alone." Tech answered back as he started to walk away.

Rev then grabbed the coyote's right arm and pulled it back a little bit.

"Please Tech! You saved my life! I want to repay my debt to you! Please!" Rev cried.

Tech fiercely pulled his arm out of Rev's grasp.

"Just leave me alone!" he barked and he walked out of the room, leaving the roadrunner to fall down onto his knees, with his head hung low and tears trickling down the sides of his beak.

"Why?" he cried. "Why won't he join us?"

Ace put his hand on Rev's shoulder and gave a stare of empathy at him.
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It had been a day since they met Tech and a neutral atmosphere was filled in the room. The only thing that could be heard was the conversation on the television being watched by the odourless expressions of Duck and Slam sitting on the sofa. Ace had just come out from the training room as he rubbed a blue towel all over his sweaty neck. He looked up to see Lexi staring out of the window as though she was in a trance. He approached her as she turned her head to see him.

"You okay?" Ace asked.

Lexi nodded her head.

"I can't believe it." she started. "He seemed so serious. And that seriousness has hurt Rev pretty bad."

Ace was about to open his mouth when they both turned to the sound of the door closing and Rev appearing with a big red bag in his hand. The two rabbits approached him with worried expressions on their faces.

"Rev? Why aren't you in your uniform?" Ace asked.

"And what's in the bag?" Lexi said. "Shouldn't you be doing your one 'o' clock run in the city? You always do that around this time."

"Yeah." Rev sighed heavily. "I'm gonna stay round my parents for a while."

"What!?" Duck ran to the roadrunner as Slam was catching up with him. "You mean you're quitting the team!?"

"You can't do that!" Slam added.

"Is it about Tech not joining the team?" Ace interrogated.

Rev hesitated and then opened his mouth.

"Look. I don't want you guys to be let down because of the way I'm feeling. I don't want to see you guys sad. I just wanna get away for a while. That's all. I'll see you later then." Rev pressed the button and the elevator opened as he stepped in.

"But Rev!" Lexi whined.

But the elevator doors closed and started to go down. Dumbfounded faces sread across the HQ in an unsettling atmosphere.

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The four heroes entered the meeting room with gloom on their faces as they slowly took their seats. Zadavia stared at them.

"Are you alright? And where's Rev? Is he feeling alright?" she asked.

The others looked at each other with worried faces and then Ace finally opened his mouth.

"Um... Rev decided to take a break for a little while." Ace murmured.

"And the last partner? How is the search going?" Zadavia asked again.

"We found them," Lexi answered. "But they didn't join us."

"And that's what's caused Rev's departure?" Zadavia finished the sentence.

Everyone looked down onto the table sadly. Zadavia gave the same expression as the rest of the heroes.

"I understand if the last partner doesn't accept their fate at first. But sooner or later, they will have no choice but to accept their destiny." the woman spoke.

They all nodded. The woman began to speak again.

"And another thing, I would like it if Ace stayed here for a moment. Can the rest of you step out of the room for a moment please?" Zadavia asked.

"What? Why does he get to stay with you?" Duck complained. "Surely it's part of our business too."

"Even if you have to work together in missions, this is a private matter Duck." Zadavia said.

"Duck. Lets go." Lexi tugged Duck's arm as he gave a groan and marched out of the door grumbling under his breath.

The door closed as Ace faced the hologram.

"So what is it that you wanted to talk to me about?" Ace asked.

"I think it's time you recieved something of great importance." Zadavia said as a long, brown box appeared on the table before Ace's eyes. "Inside this box, is a weapon that has been passed down from generations of great warriors."

Ace slowly lifted the lid and stared down at a sword with a red handle. He took hold of the red handle and pulled the sword from the box. As he rested the blade on his unoccupied hand, the silver blade gleamed as the sun ray hit it. He stared at it in amazement.

"You want me to have this?" Ace murmured.

"What you hold in your hand, is the Guardian Strike Sword." Zadavia explained. "That sword used to belong to the greatest warrior in all of the universe. It holds powers that you cannot imagine."

Ace looked down at the sword and then looked at the woman.

"What sort of things can this sword do?" Ace asked again.

"I think it would be best if you find out it's powers yourself. But they will appear within time." she said. "Should that sword end up in the wrong hands and it will cause great destruction. So beware of it's capabilities. Because Ace, one day, you will lead your friends into a battle of good and evil. And you must be ready to accept your fate."

Ace stared down at the sword again in a trance. He then looked up at her again.

"I think I know what I must do." he smiled. " Thanks Zadavia."

He tied the string that was hanging from the sword onto his belt and walked out of the room to see his conrades waiting for him on the other side of the door.

"So, what did she say to you?" Duck said impatiently.

Ace looked up to his friends and gave a smile.

"I think it's time we pay our friend a visit." he announced.

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Rev looked up at the ceiling while he lied on his bed in his bedroom. His blank face covered the expression of sadness. It covered his shock of the coyote's harsh words, playing in his head over and over again.

"I'm not joining anything."

"I prefer to work alone."

"Leave me alone!"

The roadrunner continued to stare at the ceiling until he heard the door bell ring. He jumped from his bed and ran to the front door. He opened the door to reveal two rabbits, a duck and a Tasmania devil giving him some cheesy smiles.

"Hey Rev." Ace greeted Rev. "Are you okay?" 

Rev's eyes were wide open.

"Yeah. But what are you doing here?"

"We were just wondering whether you needed cheering up." Lexi smiled.

"Thanks guys. But I just wanna be by myself for a bit." Rev smiled weakly.

"What!?" Duck snapped. "We made the effort to come here to cheer you up and you're saying that you want to be alone for a bit? You're just being ungrateful!"

Slam looked around and spotted a red button on the wall of the house.

"Oooh. What does this button do?"
 
"No!" Rev cried. "Don't push that button!"

But Slam pressed the button and the water sprinkler splashed the water all over everyone including Rev. Everyone tried to sheild themsleves from the water with their arms. But they were already soaked to the skin with the water form the sprinkler. Rev panickly tried to turn the tap off as the water continued to soak everyone.
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"We're really sorry Rev." Lexi apologised as she stepped into the room, buttoning up a light pink nighting gown.

"We didn't intend to stay this long." Ace added as he pulled down a dark green T-shirt.

"That's okay." Rev reassured them. "My parents have gone away on a weekend trip and won't be back until Monday. And my little brother has gone round a friend's house so they won't be back for ages. So you can borrow their clothes until your uniform gets dry."

"Well, at least the clothes fit fine." Duck tried pulling down a yellow T-shirt.

"We'll just wait until the uniform dries and then we'll go." Ace said.

"No. Please stay." Rev begged. "I don't wanna be by myself all weekend."

Ace looked at a pillow on Rev's bed and then he gave a devilish grin.

"Oh Duck." Ace sang.

Duck turned his head around. Suddenly a pillow smacked on his face. Duck pulled the pillow from his face and frowned.

"What did you do that for you idiot!? I'll show you how to play hard." Duck roared as he threw the pillow at Ace.

Ace ducked as the pillow hit Lexi.

"Right! You want to start something? I'm game!" she barked as she threw a pillow which hit Duck again.

Rev then zipped out of the room and then sprinted back into the room with more pillows in his arms.

"Pillow fight!!!" he screamed as he threw the pillows at the rest of the gang who were on the bed.

Pillows started to fly across the room in all different directions. Laughter and giggles filled the air as each person hit anyone they can with pillows of all different colours and sizes. Suddenly, white fluffy feathers burst out from some of the pillows, as they floated all around the room. Eventually, the feathers covered the room like snow in a winter wonderland, as Ace, Lexi and Rev panted hard.

"That was fun!" Lexi giggled.

"My arms are so sore. I can't hit anything anymore. How are Duck and Slam?" Ace gasped.

"They're so worn out, they've gone to sleep." Lexi smiled again.

Rev turned to the two rabbits.

"My mom is gonna kill me when she finds that some of her pillows are ruined!" Rev gasped.

"Oh. Well Ithought we over did it a little bit." Ace giggled as Lexi and him burst out laughing.

"You come here and break the sprinkler and ruined some of my mom's pillows. So I just wanna ask you this:" Rev looked sternly but then smiled. "Why did you really come here?"

"Because we wanted to see you smile again Rev. Slam and Duck did too." Ace smiled back.

"When you were sad, we were so worried about you. I would have never been able to imagine you so sad unless we actually see you that way. And that makes us sad too." Lexi added.

Rev gave a deep sigh and turned his head back at the two rabbits.

"I'm sorry I made you guys worry." Rev apologised.

"There's no need to apologise Rev." Ace said. "Everyone goes through that stage now and again."

"No." Rev disagreed. " I wanna make it up to you. I'll make you some hot chocolate with the cream and marshmallows on top. My treat. Won't be a mo!"

Rev walked out of the room, leaving the two rabbits to smile cheerfully.

"You know, it's good to see him happy again." Ace said. "I like it when he's this way. It sort of puts me at ease."

Lexi giggled.

"Yeah. When you're having fun with other people, the problems just like the feathers, just float away."

"Yeah." Ace yawned. "I'm feeling tired. I'm gonna get some sleep. Night Lexi."

"Night Ace." She whispered after Ace closed his eyes.

She gazed down on Ace and gave a smile. Suddenly, her ears pricked up as she looked out of the window.

"Something's out there." Lexi thought as she borrowed a pink dressing gown from the bed.
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Lexi wandered outside in the night, looking around.

"I have a very bad feeling about this." Lexi whispered.

Behind her, the bushes rustled. Before she could spin around, a pair of arms grabbed her from within the bush. They wrapped arroun Lexi's waist. Lexi screamed as the figure stepped in closer to her body.

"My my, what a pretty girl I see." the figure spoke as Lexi struggled to escape from their grasp.

"Let go of me!" she spoke through her gritted teeth.

"Hmm... maybe you could come in some form of use." the figure said again.

Suddenly, an orb smacked into their face. A yellow and white substance ran down the villain's face. They looked up to find Ace, Duck, Slam and Rev standing before him.

"Let our friend go!" Rev shouted.

"You think words are going to make abide by the laws of animals? Pathetic." the figure gave an evil grin.

"You better let her go before I make you let her free." Ace growled as he whipped out the Guardian Strike Sword.

The villain dropped Lexi to the ground.

"So you have the sword now? Shame it couldn't be in more capable hands." the villain sneered. "Looks like I'll have to deal with each of you, one by one. Starting off with your coyote friend, Tech."

"No!" Rev cried.

But before he could run after them, the figure droped a smoke bomb, causing black smoke to rise. The anthros choked on the smoke before Slam used his tornado powers to clear the air up. By the time everyone stopped choking,  the villain was no where to be seen.

"He's gone." Duck frowned.

Ace picked Lexi up.

"Are you okay?" he asked.

"I'm fine." Lexi replied.

"We have to find the villain fast." Ace proclaimed.

"What about Tech?" Rev cried in worry. "He going to be in real danger. We have to find him before that guy does."

"It's okay Rev. We'll find our friend." Ace comforted him.

"Or should we say, our partner." Lexi smiled.

END OF CHAPTER 21. OOOOH!!! I'M SO EXCITED AND I'M THE AUTHOR OF THIS STORY! FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS IN CHAPTER 22!

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Oooo, who is this mysterious man? What does he want?! Why did Tech not want to join the Loonatics' initially?

Poor Rev. He seemed really depressed. Did Tech have that big an effect on him?

Enjoyable reading! Keep it up Akira!

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*ahem*
AAAAUUUGH!!!!(random outburst)
I *heart* this story. w00t.gif
I'm having a feeling that my 2 fav Loonatics had more in their relationship than just knowing each other. Unles..
*snaps fingers* I've got it!!! Tech isn't joining 'cause he doesn't want to be with Rev 'cause he's a roadrunner!!!
I got it wrong, didn't I?
This is so annoying. I signed up for this thing in school where I can't talk all day. *is sad* Anyhoos, loving this!!! Can't wait for Chapter 22!

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Well you don't have to wait any more! Chapter 22!

Chapter 22

The five heroes ran down the street looking around the buildings. They followed Lexi as she alternatively kept looking down on a small piece of card and rose her head up to look around the street.

"You sure the address is right on the card?" Ace panted.

"Positive! Tech gave me this when I was skipping school!" she huffed as they continued running.

They finally stopped at a bungalow where they ran up the garden path and then banged on the front door.

"Tech! You gotta get out of here now!" Ace bellowed. "There's someone who's gonna try and get ya! This is no hoax! This is real!"

No reply came from the door.

"He's not in!" Lexi puffed.

"Where would a geek like him go at a time like this?" Duck frowned.

Rev looked around in hopes of seeing the coyote. As if on cue, he heard screaming in his head. He immediately jumped and gave a little shriek that his team mates heard.

"What? Are you okay Rev?" Slam asked.

"I think I know where Tech could be!" Rev gushed out. "I just heard a scream all the way from the other side of the street and I'm sure it was his scream!"

"I didn't hear anything." Duck opposed.

"Neither did I." Ace shook his head.

Slam just shrugged his shoulders.

"You know where he is?" Lexi said.

"Yeah! The other side of the street! Follow me!" Rev gushed as he started running at his sonic speed away from his friends.

Then he zipped back at the fact that his friends wasn't as fast as he was.

"Oops. Sorry." Rev rubbed the back of his head. "Got carried away there."

The others rolled their eyes as they started to run to the other side of the street.
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At the other side of the street, a young, black and cream rabbit in black uniform wearing a black leather jacket kicked a coyote in the face, making him spin in the air and land hard on the floor. The rabbit approached the coyote and grabbed the ears so he could look eye to eye at him.

"And that my friend is how we feel when you coyotes go after us." the rabbit sneered as the coyote groaned. He then slammed the coyote's face on the ground as he started to walk away.

He then saw five figures in black and different coloured uniforms run towards him.

"So we meet again. I didn't get to introduce myself earlier. I am Jack Lapin." the evil rabbit grinned. "Now that I took one of your partners down, I'll take all of you down!"

He lifted his arm up and the ground rumbled. The heroes looked down onto the ground.

"It's gonna come from below us!" Rev shouted. "Split up!"

A blue transparent worm shot from the ground but the others managed to dodge it on time. Lexi rolled on the ground and looked back at the worm. She got up and used her brain blast from her ears as the laser hit the worm. The creature gave an almighty screech as Ace and Duck hit it with their powers while Slam tried using his tornado powers on it. Rev decided to target Jack. He started to run at a high speed. Before Jack could move, Rev head butted him in the stomach and made him fly in the air. The rabbit landed on his feet and glared at the roadrunner.

"You're gonna regret doing that to me you stupid bird!" Jack growled through his teeth.

A blue aura wrapped around the dark rabbit's hand. He was about to strike when a green glowing pipe hit his paw. The blue glow disappeared from Jack's paw as he turned to see where the pipe came from. He stared at Tech who was standing there with his hands glowing green.

"Hey! I thought you were after me!" he called.

The rabbit roared as he threw both arms in the air. The monster towered over the others who were fighting it. Ace stood there until he noticed his sword glowing white. He whipped the sword out as it glowed brighter.

"What's going on?" he thought.

Lexi looked down on her hands. They were glowing pink. Duck looked at his orange glowing hands. Rev's red, Slam's purple and Tech looked down on his green glowing hands. Ace felt this buzz of energy around him and entering the sword.
 
"Our powers seem to be resonating, and coming into this me and this sword! And words are coming into my head." he gasped. 

He then pointed the sword at the worm monster as Jack's jaw dropped.

"No!" he cried.

"GUARDIAN STRIKE SWORD SPECTRUM!" Ace called out as a rainbow coloured laser shot from the sword.

The worm screeched loud as the laser hit it. The worm glowed white until it exploded. Puddles of liquid splashed everywhere as Jack fell to his knees.

"No! My Plasma Worm!" he screamed.

He then saw the six heroes running towards him. Jack then clenched his fists.

"I'll finish you off next time we meet! Just you wait!" Jack then turned the same colour as the worm was and melted into a puddle as he slithered away out of sight.

Ace and the others relaxed their bodies.

"Where did he go?" Duck asked as he looked around.

Ace then looked around to see Tech facing the side of him. Ace walked up to Tech.

"Look." Ace started. "We're really sorry we-"

"I don't join groups, period." Tech said.

The others had sad expressions on their faces. Especially Rev.

"But for you guys," He continued. "I'll make it an exception."

Before he knew it, he was glomped on by everyone.

"Yay!" Rev cheered. "We've found our final partner!"

"Now we've found everyone!" Slam exclaimed.

Ace gave a relieved smile as Tech struggled to get out of the hug from everyone.

END OF CHAPTER 22. 

-- Edited by Akira_Cat at 09:42, 2007-04-18

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They're all Techies! Mwahahahaha! But one little point: Ace didn't know about the his sword's powers until the "Secrets of the Guardian Strike Sword" ep! Still, good chappie! They're all one big happy crime-fighting family now! He! He!

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Ha! B_O beat me to saying it!!! They're all Techies!!!
I wonder who that Jack guy was? Was he supposed to be based off another Looney Tune?

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Um... No. He was just a random character I made up and just thought he would be good in the story. So I guess that answers your question. And hopefully I would be able to put up the last chapter of this story so I can get it over and done with.

And they're not Techies. They're just glad that Tech's finally joined the group.

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Oh we know Akira, but you gotta admit, anyone glomping Tech would appear to be Techies on first look right? He! He!

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Finally! It's here! Chapter 23! I would like to take the time here upon saying thank you to everyone who's been there for me. My family, friends and everyone here on LUO, Devianart and Fan Fiction.Net. I really appreciate you guys making me feel the way I feel today. Without this site, I'd probably be searching for my identity amongst the world today. And now without further a do, chapter 23!

Chapter 23

The six heroes entered into the head quarter's doors. Tech wandered around the room, overwhelmed at the sights he never seen before.

"Wow! This is amazing!" Tech exclaimed as he fiddled, stroked and pressed buttons and switches on the electrical appliances and gadgets. "And I have so many ideas on so many inventions I can invent here!"

A bleep was then heard in the meeting round which everyone heard.

"I think Zadavia wants us." Ace said as the others including Tech, followed him into the meeting room, where a holographic Zadavia stood at the centre of the table where six chairs surrounded it.

As everyone took their seats, Zadavia looked down on all of them and smiled.

"So everyone is here then?" she asked.

"Everyone?" Tech looked around. "Um, not being rude but may I know who you exactly are miss?"

Zadavia turned to the coyote.

"My name is Zadavia." she answered. " You must be the one who was looking for the answer to the mystery of the meteor landing."

Tech's eyes opened wide.

"Y- yes. I'm Tech." he replied back.

"But now everyone here is together, I will explain to you why you are here." the woman started as she held some images up on the hologram. "You all know that the day you fell into the coma, was the day the meteor landed. That meteor came from a wormhole in space that opened from another realm. The size of it and the speed it was going could have destroyed the whole planet, wiping away the living existance."

"But it didn't." Ace spoke up. "Why didn't it destroy the earth?"

"It was quite fortunate that I was there to stop a catostrophic event like that happening. I used my powers from a location in space so the meteor would not kill off all life. But I was unable to stop the radioactive effects from spreading across earth."

"The radiation that caused us to fall into that coma?" Tech asked.

"Correct." she continued. "The comatised state you was put under was my doing too."

"What!?" Duck screeched. "Why the hell did you do that when we could have been conscious after the meteor struck!?"

"It was because the development for your powers is a slow and painful process. If I kept you conscious, you would have been in all sorts of pain and I did not want to see you suffer. So the only way for the DNA to get used to the radiation was to put you to sleep until your powers have been fully developed into your body."

"Woah! Back up!" Lexi interupted. "Powers? Those powers came from the meteor crash?" 

"Indeed. If you are interested in what powers you weild then I shall tell you." Zadavia turned to Lexi.

"Lexi. You have the power to make the destruction of something in your imagination become reality. And those sounds that you could hear but no one else could? You also have sensitive, amplified hearing, enabling you to hear the most silent of sounds from miles away."

Zadavia then turned to Slam.

"You have strength that is hundreds, even a thousand times more powerful than you had before Slam. And you also have the ability to turn yourself into a tornado as well as creating some."

She then faced Rev.

"You can run faster than the speed of sound and you have a Global Positioning System implanted into your mind. That could come in use Rev."

She then looked at Tech.

"Tech. You are able to control the element of metal. And you also have self molecular regeneration and can heal yourself from physical damage that has been inflicted on you."

Tech looked on his right arm.

"That's probably how that cut I got disappeared." he murmured.

"And what do I have then?" Duck interrupted impatiently.

"Since you're so keen Duck," Zadavia said. "You can conjure up orbs that contain substances that could bring harm to your enemies or just give them a refreshment. And you can use quantum teleportation for short distances."

"Quantum what?" Duck sounded confused. "I know! I'll call it Quantum Quacking! Much better if you ask me."

Zadavia rolled her eyes as she finally turned to Ace.

"Your eyes are able to produce an infra red laser blast that can cut through a metal wall. Your eyes can also be used so you can see more than what anyone else can see. And your martial arts that you've already learnt could prove useful to you."

Ace nodded his head. But Duck noticed the sword on Ace's belt.

"Hey, what's this?" Duck asked as he pulled the sword from Ace's belt.

"No!" Ace cried. "Give it back!"

Duck teleported far away from him so he could have a closer inspection.

"So where did you get it from then? You didn't have it before you even came to this building." Duck interrogated.

"That is a weapon that only the leader can use." Zadavia frowned at Duck.

"What!? Leader!?" Duck sqealed.

"I have been looking at each of your performances during your missions. And I have found that Ace would be more suited to that particular role." Zadavia explained.

"Me?" Ace pointed to his chest in confusion.

"I believe that during time, you will lead your team into a battle that you will win and create salvation for people, or lose and the universe could be destroyed. Only you can face that destiny Ace." She said.

Ace looked at the rest of his team mate's faces, staring back at him. Duck then gave a deep sigh and threw the sword back to Ace.

"Here. I wasn't planning on using it anyway." Duck grumbled.

"And one more thing," Zadavia spoke up. "I think it would be appropriate if you had a team name. I can keep calling upon you and not know what the group name is."

"How about the Duck Heroes?" Duck grinned.

"Well not all of us are ducks here." Lexi frowned.

"Aaw! Come on!" Duck whined. "It's a good name. Only an abosolute loon would think that Duck heroes isn't a good name!"

"Hmmm... the Loonatics." Ace stroked his chin. "I like it. The Loonatics. Just like our ancestors."

"Like the Looney Tunes? I think that's a good name." Lexi nodded her.

"I like it too!" Rev piped up cheerfully. "It has a nice ring to it!"

"All those in favour of the Loonatics, raise your hand." Tech smiled.

Everyone raised their hands, with a reluctant Duck slowly raising his hand last.

"Fine. But only because I couldn't win this round." he snorted.

"So, the Loonatics it is." Zadavia agreed. "And I will give you a brief on your first mission. There is a bank robbery going on at the Acmetropolis bank. You must catch the two men causing the crime. Good luck. Zadavia out."

And the hologram disappeared, leaving the Loonatics to stand from their seats.

"Okay. You heard the boss." Ace gave a determined smile. 

The others smiled back. 

"Lets jet!" Ace ordered.

THE END. YAY! THE END! I THOUGHT I'D NEVER FINISH THIS FAN FIC. AS I SAID, I'D LIKE TO THANK EVERYONE FOR BEING THERE FOR ME ONCE AGAIN! I REALLY APPRECIATE YOU GUYS BEING HERE. THANK YOU! party.gif

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And so Ace becomes leader, the team is named and the glorious era of the Loonatics begins! Silly Duck, stealing Ace's sword like that. He! He! Nice origin story Akira! Looking forward to your next fic project!

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OMG! OMG! OMG!!!!!!!!

AMAZING-STUPENTOUS-TREMENDOUS-

Ace: In other words, absolute astounding job on the story Akira!

me: What he said!biggrin 

I LUV THIS FANFIC!!! But i was soooooo sad to see it end. But i loved the way it ended so i'm happy too.

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I'm happy the way this story turned out too. I felt some bits in there was a little rushed but it doesn't matter. I can envision these things as though they were an actual episode. That's my trademark secret. That's why I'm planning on becoming a playwright when I get all my A-Level and university degrees.

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A playwright? Cool! I hope i can write a publishable book one day myself!

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