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Flashback....

"Ha ha, you can't get me Kari!!!!" a young Duck yelled as he raced away from a 7 year old Kari.

"Just watch me!" She yelled as she gave chase to her best friend. The two kids ran farther away from their orfinage group and over to a grassy park. At the top of a small hill, Kari jumped and tackled Duck. The two laughed as they rolled down the hill and layed still in the lush green grass to catch their breath.

"That was fun!" Kari giggled.

"Lets play hide n seek!" Duck suggested.

"Alright. Not It!!!" Kari yelled before running off.

Duck laughed before closing his eyes and counting to ten. He reopened them and set off to find her. After 10 minutes of searching, he still hadn't found her. He set off up the hill to get a better view of his surroundings. At the top he still couldn't see her, or the orfinage group. Starting to panic, he ran down the side towards where they last were, calling her name feverishly
"Kari! KARI!!! Where are you?!?!"

please continue....

sorry i couldn't write earlier, too much schoolwork. smile

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Sory Kari for not continuon but I'v had writers blok latly any whays
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A small black malered at the Acmetroplis Orfinig is lay down on the bottom bunk of a bed. The top bed has bin stript of its sheets and coveres for the one who had bin sleeping in it had jest bin adoptid.

The duck stared up at the top bed for a few more moment be for rolling onto his left side.

"Hay Dane. You look sa-sa-d-sa- deprest." A young pig arthro sits on the bed next to the duck.

"Hellow Pink stuff...I guess I am a little sad." The duck sat up

"Why?"

The duck looked up at the emty bed "Kari was a doptid today. And I guess I'm jest mising her."

"Gosh Duck I'v never seen you like this." The pig puts his hand on the ducks sholder. Dane sighs.

"Dane! Dane dear can you come hear pleas." A femails voce comes from a nother room.

"Lo-looks like miss. Dimber wonts you Duck."

"Ya I know pinkster."The malered jumps off the bed and runs to a young woman in her early 30s.

"Yes Miss.Dimber."

"Dane you have a very spetial visiter!"

Miss.Dimber walks Duck into a small room where a tall and much older malered, with a very notesable scare ubove his left eye, is whating. The womane pushes Dane tords the man thin leves. The arthro stands up and lookes the boy over thin smiles.

"Hellow Dane." He said in a deep voce.

"Howed you know my name?" Dane questions.

"Young man I am your father."

"M-my father?" Dane repets

"Yes."
FLASHBACK ENDS...

"When he first told me he was my father i was very exited. I thout hed come back to adopt me but I....." Danger gave a very sad look "I was wrong. He told me that he could not afored to rase a chiled at the time, So he visited me one a year."

Duck pulled out a few pichers from the fille each one tacken the same time in diferent years.

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its ok anyway ill contiun...........

KARI yelled young duck searching when he heard a scream

kari said young dane as he spotted an older mallered holding kari by her shirt

oh no said the older duck and he dopped kari and ran

endflashback....


contiun...........

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end flash back...

and the next day kari was taken by her sister said dane and kari nodded

we havent see each other since said kari smiling

so you guys were best friends asked ace

i guess said kari half-laughing

really we were in till kari left said dane''then I saw pinkstuff and we became friends''

ya said kari''and that's sort of how we were orpans''

in till said dane

now said kari


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fine ill continu:

so you guys were just left alone asked lexi



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Duck: Alown? What do you mean alown?

Lexi: You and Pinkster.

Duck: Well after Kari was adoptid there was vey few kids left in the orfinige. So in a way Yes Pinkstuff and I where alown.

Ace: Ya, But Duck how do you know dat it was your father so long ago? And how do you know its him this time?

Duck: Well....

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i continu....

i like to keep in touch with my father said dane ashamed

so you're evil asked ace


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Duck: WHAT?! NO! Far From IT! Its jest....[duck trailed off]

Kari: I think what Ducks trying to say is if you grow up not knowing your parents, and you got the chans to meet them, or in Ducks case one of them, wouldin't you what to keep in tuch?

Ace: Okay...I guess I under stand dat part. But Duck you still haven't told us how you know it was youer father who had grabed Kari thos meny years back.

Duck: I didn't know it was him at the time, but a year after Kari left my father gave me a visit at the orfinig, and he gave me reguler chek ups. Even when I was odopted.

Lexi: Well I think we should proble get to the mission before the 4 start any real truble.

Max: Ya we should get going.

The Loonitics all headed to the aria where they keept the trasport viacles. Ace stoping Kari and Duck

Ace: I doin't beleve you two are emotionaly stable for dis mishion, and strongly addvis you satay hear.

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i continu.....

NO WAY shouted kari''im coming''

kari's right we have a right to be there said dane

no said ace''you could get hert''

think i care snapped kari''me and duck have been through alot more then you ace''

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Ace stood shocked at the girl's outburst but quickly regained himself.

"Look, You two may have been through alot more then me or the rest of us put together, but it'll still be dangerous. I don't think we should take the chance."

"So?" Duck snapped, "All of our missions have been dangerous, its part of the job! You can't stop us from helping just because some of our family members are a part of this!"

"Ace is right." Lexi muttered. Ace flashed her a quick grin of thanks which she returned with a quick nod. "It'll be hard for you and Kari to fight them, and you won't be entirely focused. It would be best for you guys to stay here."

The two just stared at their teammates in disbelief. 

Ace turned back to the others.
"Alright team, Let's Jet!" And with that, they left the tower leaving the mallard and bunny behind.

"Well," Duck sighed depressed "what should we do?"

Before Kari could answer, Cody walked in and looked around confused. "Where did everyone go?"

Kari looked at the little coyote before turning back to Duck. She grinned sheepishly at him.

Duck took the hint and groaned, facepalming himself.
"Dispicable." he muttered from between his fingers.

Kari laughed.

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i continu....

we fight said kari''dispit what they said''and she walked to her room got her sword and walked out

come on said kari as duck and cody walked behind her

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Cody: How are w-...you guys supost to fight. If Papa, Mama, or any of the others see you they will send you back emedietly.

Kari: not if we go incogneto[she gave a mistiaf smile]

Duck: Incog what?

Cody: In discise?

Kari: Yes Cody. Exatly

kari walked into her room and opened a mediam sized trunk.

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continu..

here said kari and she tossed duck a sir arron costume

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please continu,,,,,,,,,,,,........

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Kari : Cody are comein' as well?

Cody: You bet!

Kari: Very well thin give me your red bandana

Cody: What? Why?

Kari: Its a ded give away to your parents. Espeshaly your mom.

Cody: All right[he pilled the bandana off and handed it to kari. She emedietly puting it in the trunk]


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continu..

duck,kari and cody put on cloakes and headed to were they were

um with optimatis,dauch,shadow demon and duck all mighty...

hey leave them alone said kari,duck and cody walked to them

well well if it isnt kari the princess said shadow

oh crap said duck,cody and kari


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why isnt anone continuing

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I guessing no one realy knows what to wright

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Hello sister! Long time no see, Ay?” said a rabbit hovering in the air by some unknown means. It was Shadow Demon. She wasn't that dissimilar looking thin Kari. The only major differences was that she had a dark brown fur in contrast with Kari's whit fur, and Shadow Demon bared hazel eyes; Kari had brown. Shadow was wearing a black, leather, skin tight out fit with some kinda crest on the chest.

Kari cased away her cloak, fingering she didn't need it any more, and pulled out her sored while standing in a fighting position.

It hasn't been that long Amy!” Kari shouted up to the villein.

Cody did a quick look around. The loonatics weren't in good shape. On the ground, either unable to move from pain or from being knocked out, was Ace, Lexi, Rev, and Max. From the time Shadow Demon had brought attention to Kari, and the other cloaked figurers, the battling had stopped; all eyes where on the three intruders.

Along side with Duce, Optamotic, and  Shadow was a black mallard. His slick black feathers gleamed a little in the sun light, as he stood not to far from where the unconscious loonatics lay.  He had a scar on his left cheek, and whore navy blue clothing that bagged a little on his some what elderly body. His shirt bared the same crest as Shadows. 

Hurry Shadow! We must make hast if we wish to finish this in time.” his voice was strong and burly sounding.

Very well!” With a simple flick of her wrist a great gust of wind battered against the three.

The strength of the wind made Kari loose her grip on the sword as it went fling. Then sent Cody's cloak fling off. From not to far away you could hear the small screech of Siamese and Tech, as relised there son was there on the battle grounds as well. Last was Duck cloak that went flying.

Stop!” yelled the elderly duck. 
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great simease...

anyway I'll continu...

WHAT!growled amy

that's my son the duck is my son said shadow''he's my son''and
he fell to his nees.

ya that's right spat danger angerly

amy however gave kari a quick punch to the nose causing blood to
pour from it rapidly.Then kari,quickly got up and ran to her sword
grabbing it in her hand's,kari's bottom half of her face was covered
in blood as she stood,faceing amy.

mom,daddy said cody running to them and hugging them.

oh how sweet said dauch sarcasticly

kari caught amy off gaurd and slammed the side of her sword into
her face,leaving a bloody gash.Kari backed away and went to the
ship the loonatics and cody were in there and the flew to hq.

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Back in infirmary of loonatics HQ Rev jest started to open his eyes. It was the next day.

Wha? Where am I?” Rev whispered to him self as he took a few seconds to reallies where he was. Rev looked over to his left and saw Ace and Max both lying asleep in similar infirmary bed to the one he was in. Thin to his right he saw the figure of his girlfriend sleeping in a chair at his bed side. Rev smiled and gently shook her shoulder.

Kari.” He cooed softly.

Kari moved slightly before lifting her head up, and opening her eyes. She blinked a few times, rubbed her eyes to get the sleep out, and thin looked up at Rev. Her eyes widened as she said,

Rev! Your okay!” Kari leaped up from the chair on to the bed, rapped her arms around him tight and squeezed. Rev hugged her back.

Kari with drew a little and said, “That must of sounded kinda kiddish? Huh?” She blushed slightly.

No-I-don't-think-so.” Rev replied, still having his arms around her, “What-happened-to-your-nose?”

There was a small tan band on her nose.

Oh, accidentally broke it.” Kari replied now blushing for the second time. As she finished saying this the infirmary doors opened to revel Tech and Siamese.

Oh good. Your awake, Rev”Tech said, raising an eye brow at the site of Kari and Rev in the convert of each others arms. They separated. Kari got off the bed and walked over to Siamese.

Siamese, I wont to apologizes for bringing Cody into such danger yesterday.” Kari looked down felling a little ashamed of her self.

It okay Kari. I gave Cody, and Duck, a talkin' to and every things alright. I guess I should get used to some danger.”

What-happened-to-Cody?” Rev asked getting up from the bed.

Guess she didn't tell you?” Tech asked setting down some charts, “Kari and Duck, along with Cody, came to the battle even thou they weren't supposed to.”

Well where all glad they did.” Tommy said from the door way with Slam and Danger by his side.

Siamese shook her head, “That we are.”

“Oh ya! Keri and I saved you sorry suckers!” Duck gloated.

Tech rolled his eyes and walked over to the still sleeping Ace and Max. “I think its time to whack these two.” He said as he started to shack them.

They both wok up and looked around.

Wha-What happened?” Ace asked.

We got beet and you, Lexi, Max, and Rev all got knocked out.”tech informed them.

Max and Ace looked at the team-mates around them; both thinking the same thing.

Wheres Lexi?” Max voiced there thoughts. Tech sighed and all the loonatics, besides the three, looked at the ground.

You three better follow me.” Tech gestured Ace, Max, and Rev to follow him, “Probable you two as well. Duck. Kari.”

In another part of HQ we see Lexi uncoshes on a med bed with a rectangular glass dome covering her. There are tubs and wires connecting her throw the glass to several musheins.

Lexi!” Max said in panic as he pressed his hands onto the glass case.

Tech what happened her?!” Ace said doing the same as Max.

When we got you 4 back hear most her body systems started to crash. This glass case will help sustain her for now......I think I know what did it.” Tech said.

What, Tech, what?!” Max cried.

We'll, Shadow hit Lexi with that strange plasma. Remember? She said something about putting Lexi into eternal sleep, and how she pland it for the rest of us as well.”



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ill continu...great add on simease...

not if I can help it growled kari angerly''right duck''

right said duck''Its are problem not your's''

kari snapped ace''you nearly got cody killed yesterday''

IF DUCK,CODY AND I HADENT COME YOU WOULD ALL BE DEAD shouted kari

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Kari regretted that comment as Ace gave her a glare that could rekill a ghost.  The other Loonatics stared in shock at Kari yelling at there leader.

You lisen hear, and you lisen good. Kari Bunny.” Ace said sternly with a hint of anger, and pointed at her like a scorning parent teaching there kid a lessen “You do not know if dat is or isn't true! And even if it is true not under any circumstances do you tack a 7 year old boy, with no powers, on to da battle filed!”

Kari was speechless. After hearing what she had dun it, even to her, sounded like a stooped and horable idea.

Kari you need to learn to listen to my orders. Your still new so your punishment wouldn't be very harsh. But Duck.....I'm gonna see what Zadavia has in store for you.” Ace finished and left the room. Duck looked at the ground with a look of shock and fear.

But Ace-” Kari was about to chase after Ace and argue, but was stopped by Duck.

No Kari......Ace is right.” Duck said honestly.


Ace pressed a button and a holographic Zadavia appeared before him. 

Hello Ace. I am glad that you have finally contacted me. I hope Every thing went all right yesterday.”

Not...Not exactly Zadavia,” Ace tied to hide the tear rolling down his cheek, “We have a loonatic down...”



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what happeneed asked zadavia

lexi is badley injered said ace,as duck and kari and the other
loonatics were behind him...

kari dragged cody into danger said ace angerly and zadvia looked
at kari.

duck agreed and fallowed said ace

duck..im afraid im gonna kick you off the team said zadavia and the
team gasped...

no muttered duck sadly

um zadavia(pause)don't kick duck off the team,it was my fault,i
should be the one kicked off the team said kari

as you wish kari said zadavia''it was good to have you on the team''

thanks zadavia said kari she gave ace a glare and walked to her room,
got her things and left,she just left...

continu...

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Around 8 at night Ace calls Zadavia.

Zadavia pleas reconsider! I didn't want Kari or Duck to be kicked off da team. There both great fighters and I know dey'll do what ever it takes to mack things right.”The yellow rabbit pleaded to his boss.

“Ace I understand your concern but they put the life of civilian child into jepertory, and didn't fallow orders.”

“All of us have disobey orders at one time or another!Listen Zadavia I don't care about that part. At first I didn't know how to punish them about bringing Cody onto da battle filed, but now I think putting dem on a weeks suspension or something like dat could work. Jest pleas Zadavia let her come back.”

“Ace are you sure you can handle her? She is a very strong willed person.”

“Yes, I am sure.”

“Are you willing to give her what you believe to be a proper punishment?”

yes

“Thin very well you and the team may bring her back tomorrow.”

Thank you Zadavia.”

Zadavia out.”

Ace let out a sigh of relief. As he was about to leave he notes they where getting an incoming call.

Ace pressed a button and answered, “Hello?”

Hello, Ace.”

Diane?”

Thats me.”

Why ya callin'?” Ace was a tad more relaxed as he listened to her voice.

Well we kinda had a date, or did that slip throw that big space between your ears?” She replied with sarcasim.

Ace mentally kicked himself, “I'm so sorry Dane I completely forgot about are date. So much has happened hear I..I'm sorry.”

It all right Ace. I understand that you wont all ways be able to be there....So what happened? I saw you on the new. You guys got some new enemy's.”

Well ya. Where battling agents 2 of are old enemy's and 2 new one that are apparently related to some of are team members.”

Wow. Sounds difficult.”

You have no idea. We also have a injured member.”

Who?”

Lexi got hit by a strange plasma and now all her vital body systems are crashing.” Ace replied in a dull some what depressed voice.

Oh....I-I'm sorry, Ace. I know you care about her allot.....will she be okay?

I don't know.” you could hear the shaky town indicating he mite start to cry.

If you want I can come over.”

No I......You know I think that would be okay.”



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the next day...

ace,tech and duck walked down the streets to the hotel that kari worked at...

hello is kari here said ace

yes she is said the inn keeper ''KARI''

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PLEASE CONTINUE!!!
THE SUSPENSE!!!! ITS KILLING ME!!!!!!
Okay a little exagerative there. Please finish the fic I LOVE IT

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Kari walked through a door wearing a uniform that indicated she worked there. The uniform had a bright long sleeved red shirt with a caller, a black tie and matching black pants. It bagged on her some what. Kari had a depressed look about her.


When she looked up she was surprised to see the three Loonatics in front of her.

Her surprise quickly melted into a anger yet hurt look.


Send them away Markus.” She said to the one who called her out.


Kari wait!” Duck said as he quaked in front of her blocking her path, “You have to listen for a sec.”


Kari raised her hand up as if she was about to hit him, but was stopped by someone grabbing it. Ace stood there her wrist in his hand.

Let me go.” Kari thrust her hand out of his.


Kari pleas jest listen. I talked with Zadavia...No I pleaded to Zadavia to let you back on the team. Okay I didn't want any one to be kicked, off all right. Kari we're asking you to come back. You and Duck will still haft to face punishment, but not one so harsh. Maybe paper work. Jest come back. Pleas.” Ace looked at her.


She looked at Ace with angry eyes, “NO!” She terned around and started to walk off.


What about Rev?!” Tech said.


She stopped and looked down at the ground her back still facing them. She put her hand up to her hart. That did it, that made her think twice.


Hes miserable Kari.” Tech said slowly. Kari some what clenched her shirt. “Kari, Rev has never been so sad. Not as long as I've known him....And thats a prity long time....and what about Lexi....You know Shadow. You may be the only one who can find out what she did to Lexi, and help us bring her back. First thou you need to be on the team.”


Kari terned and faced them.


“What do you say Kari?” Ace held out his hand....

 

 



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no shouted kari and she stalked off,but turned for a second''I don't
care about him anymore''and she walked off,leaving the loonatics
in shock...

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As Kari walked out of site from the three Loonatics she could fell her self quickening in speed as her simple walk became a fast run. She felt the tears escaping her eyes as she ran. She lied. She know she lied. Oh how she cared for Rev. Perhaps she even loved him, but she couldn't be on a team that would send her away so easily.

When Kari finished running she found her self at one of the hotels exit doors that led to the small ally at the side of the building. She went through and sat on the steps out side. Pleasing her hands over her face she allowed her self to cry. 

Kari looked up when she heard voices from not to far away.

What are we goin' to tell Rev, Tech?”

I don't know Ace. I've never seen him act this way...I don't think hes ever been in love before now.”

I guess we have to tell him the truth.”

Ya you're right Duck. Come on. Lets get back to headquarters. Tech needs to check on how Lexi's doing

Kari pulled her legs up to her chest and rested her head on them as she went into thought. 

****

Some where far off. In an old abandoned hose we see two dark figurers talking to one a another.

We must hurry Shadow. The other Loonatics must be taken out before his arrival.”Said an elderly duck stepping out from the shadows.

I know....Tell me 'Bracken' why did you never mention you had a son to any one of us at the guiled?” Said a female bunny with a bandig across her face.

Because he douse not matter. I will tear through him if I must, jest like any other target. And how bout you and your sister.”

I did not know she still lived, but I promise you. When the time comes I will defeat her!....What about are two idiots? That Duse and Opto guy.

When we have defeated the Loonatics they to will suffer the same fate.” The duck terned and left. 

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at hq.

ace,duck and tech walked through the doors,everyone looked up,and saw
that kari was not with him.

were's kari asked max

she's doen't care for rev anymore said ace sadly''she wont help us''

but why asked zadavia''there has to be a reason''

with kari...

kari's ear's perked up and she looked over and saw a person,he was as
tall as zadavia,had aqua coulered eyes,and his black hair was a stuck up
at the back he was in frelinging armor,this was friz freling(he's a good guy).
he knew zadavia from before and stuff..

what is wrong asked friz

go away snapped kari and walked to a dark werehouse building...

at the werehouse building...

amy and shadow stood waiting for kari,kari walked in..

well I'm glad my sister keepes promises said amy''oh
and kari don't forget what''l happen to lexi if you tell''and
kari nodded(amy had put cells in lexi's body,and could
kill her if she wanted(lexi I mean)..

continu...please.

kari is a double agent...sort of.and friz freling is to be
paired with zadavia(he was optimatis general)..

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Kari stared at the ground, “Do you promise if I help you you'll leave Lexi, Rev and all my other friends alone?” 

Of cores deer sister,” Shadow gave 'Bracken' a small evil smile, “But...If they get in are way I can't guarantee they'll be totale safe.” 

Kari let hear head fall in shame, “
I was afraid at that."
 ***
 
Rev let his head fall onto the counter in front of him. Ace, Tech, and Siamese surrounded him as he sat on a stool. Ace and Tech had jest finished telling him about Kari.
 
Are you sure you'll be okay der Rev?” Ace asked. 

You know where hear if you want to talk.” Siamese tried comforting him by gently setting her hand on his shoulder. 

I'm fine guys...I'm jest....going to my room.” Rev stated as he got up and pushed past his team mates. His head hanging low.
 
The three looked at each other with concern for there red friend.
 
Rev plopped down on his bed, staring up at the ceiling. He flet a pain, like his heart had been shadered. He let his gaze fall upon the night stand next to his bed. There where several framed photos there; Him and Tech, a group photo of the 'original' Loonatics, one with the new group, and the last one he piked up.
 
Rev let his finger trace around one of the figures. In the photo showed Rev giving a piggy back rid to Kari. It was one of many photos that where taken the night of the meter-shower. Rev never knew he could miss some one so much.  Rev was shaken back to reality as one of the HQ's alarms went off.


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with friz.

friz walked to the door of the lu hq and knocked,duck opened the door saw him
and screamed bloody murder.

what the said the loonatics and zadavia rushing to the door,zadavia froze when
she saw him...

with kari.

sister asked kari and amy looked at her.

do you remember when we grew up with that fawn family in avalar,and elora
said kari

of course spat amy and she walked away...

I wish I could go back to avalar said kari

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