what happens when me and my friend get sent into the lu world and 1 turns evil add on story....
chapter 1:in the lu meeting the loonatics im a worrier
shut up said kari,kari had blue eyes,her stright brown hair fell to her sholders,she had a blue tee on with gray lineings,she had camo pants on and balck sneakers, she was 12 years old...
no idiot said kristen.kristen had blond hair and green eyes,she had a green skirt on and a blue tee,she also had black shoes with some wight on them,she was also 12....
whaaaaaaaaa i screamed kari and kristen as they were pulled into a wormhole
in anetropisls...
kari hit the ground hard and fainted in an ally
hello said voice
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When Every life meet's another life, Something will be born-Qouted by the Shinno Champion Cynthia
Kristen took one look at her unconcious friend, and another look at the coyote and rabbit. "AAAHHH!!!" she screamed. "FERAL COYOTES AND RABBITS!!! RUUUNN!!!!!!" Kristen tried to run, but her feet were stuck to the ground. The coyote and rabbit looked at Kristen's feet, examining what made her stuck. "Tech, what's happening?" the pink rabbit asked. "It seems to me," the coyote, most likely Tech, started, "that this substance is an example of an adhesive made from polymers mixed in this solvent such as acetone, hexane, heptane or benzene to keep them fluid enough to be used. This makes it part of the class of drying adhesives so as the solvents evaporate, the strong and flexible....." "Yeah," the bunny interrupeted. "You lost me at 'adhesive.'" Sighing, the coyote pulled out a large looking weapon and aimed it at Kristen's feet.
Kristen's eyes widened with shock and fear. "W...wait! What are you doing?!" She managed to squeeze out. Either the coyote didn't hear her, or chose to ignore her, because he fired it anyways.
"..." Kristen opened her mouth to scream, but no sound came out. She turned her head away and gritted her teeth. The bluish lazer hit, but she didn't feel any pain. A cloud of steam came up and hid the coyote and rabbit out of her view for a few seconds.
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Tessa Wolf is my sub-conscience. And yet we are two separate people. I believe in Jesus Christ as my Savior.
Kristen slowly crwaled over to her uncontius comrad, while the Strang coyote and rabbit talked umunkst them selves.
"Kari...Kari pleas wack up," She wispered and promtly shook her friend, "Kari get up pleas." She heard the pader of foot steps come clous to whare she was siting thin hearing a femailes voce
"Is she all right?"
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in the end nothing maters so why be coshes in life? live like you whant to live but do not dwingle in sorow. You deside your mental status so why desid to be sad? desid to be happy. Even if you live a thousedn years life is still short. Even if you live a milon years life is still not worth it with out love.
[No offense, Kari Bunny, but I think it would be better if you wrote this story yourself.]
[Look, before you get mad/disappointed, let me explain.]
[This should not be an "Add-on" story; you thought it up, and you should be the one to continue it, not anyone else. If you want a certain part written your way, then try your best to complete it on your own. People might write a part that you do not like, or a part that makes no sense to you.]
[Besides, it is better to see something come from the original author, not an author who adds on the majority of the story.]
[Oh, and one more thing...]
[Could you please...please...use proper grammar, spelling, and punctuation?]
