Would anyone like to see snippits of my new screenplay "The Prince and The Planet" (silly name I know) basicly a contiuation of my first story "Defenders of the Planet" my first screen play it's basicly the tale of four teens (now six teens) Who are infused with animal DNA in order fight hostle aliens (if you're confused think Tokyo Mew Mew mixed with Ninja Turtles)
I thought someone might be interested because the Prince of my storie's title is a bird like alien that's more then a little influenced by Rev Runner (and many other of Rob Pualsen's characters)
I first came up with "Defenders of the Planet" like maybe a year before i ever saw Loonatics once I started liking the show (and fell for Rev) I felt the need to make a character to homage Rev
Anywho if you would like me to post snippits of my play tell me if it's ok
NUUUU!!!! WAAAAIIITTT!!!! *tries to activate teleportation device on Super Coyote Warrior Sword* Ah the heck with this!!! *activates banner mode on SCWS. The SCWS turns to a banner saying "NUUUUUU WAIIIIITT!!!!!"* I wanna seeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *whiney voice* Is it in a play form or story form or what? I wanna seeeeeeeeeee!!! *jumps up and down*
(The ship lands and out through the chest of the mechanical bird a door opens! A plank is lowered and three aliens walk out. The leader is a green male standing beside him a red female and behind them a slightly shorter blue male with a scroll in one hand and a pen in the other (Apparently he is a scribe) The green one speaks) ZANDER: Greetings Earthlings! I am Prince Zander of Planet Ava! This lady beside me is my sister Princess Gear. (The scribe clears his throat impatiently ) ZANDER (CONT’D): Oh yes and of course our faithful servant Revel. (The reporters can not withhold any longer and rush forward bombarding them with questions) REPORTERS: Have you ever come to Earth before? Did you get the radio signals we sent out there? Do you know anything about the Roswell incident? (Gear raises her hand for silence) GEAR: Before we answer any trivial questions we want to meet the Earthlings who liberated us from the Betta’s tyranny! MATOAKA: And we are here! We cut to the Manimals entering Matoaka is in human form but wearing a masquerade mask to conceal her identity ZANDER: Wow! I can’t believe it! You really are Ma... (She cuts him off) MATOAKA: You may call me Shape Shifter! ZANDER: Shape Shifter?! MATOAKA: We’re super heroes! We have something called secret identity! GEAR: Oh! Then do forgive us. (Zander approaches) ZANDER: Tropfor has told us so much about you! Your intelligence, your courage, your cleverness... (Before Matoaka can blink Zander kisses her hand! Zander quickly tastes her fingers with his frog-like tongue and smiles at what he can sense ) ZANDER (CONT’D): We will meet again my little warrior you can be sure of that!
If you have any questions please ask
-- Edited by Mistress of Fear at 22:41, 2007-05-16
I'm going to post one more snippit but unless i get some feed back i'm going to stop
MATOAKA I must have a word with Tropfor when he comes back about sending personal information into the intergalactic gossip! (A clawed finger taps her on the shoulder) MATOAKA (CONT’D) Huh? (Before she can turn around Matoaka finds herself in Zander’s embrace! He kisses her smack on lips and for a moment she lost in confused sensation. Then suddenly regaining her senses she furiously smacks his face.) MATOAKA (CONT’D) What the hell do you think you’re doing?! ZANDER (Just showing you how much I care my little fire-flower. Say you’ll marry me and you can have another!) MATOAKA That’s disgusting! I’m not going to marry you! ZANDER I don’t think you understand my dear. I’m a prince! I ALWAYS get what I want! MATOAKA Maybe on YOUR planet but here on Earth, we have something called a restraining order. (Zander is getting annoyed as this is not going how he wants it to at all.) ZANDER Say you’ll marry me. MATOAKA No leave me alone! ZANDER Say you’ll marry me. MATOAKA NO! (Zander is running low on ideas so he gives her another big kiss on the mouth.) MATOAKA (CONT’D) You Creep! I’ll kill you for that! ZANDER Catch me if you can! (Zander zooms off and Matoaka furious as Vegetarian in a slaughter house turns into a wolf and enters a mad chase that resembles an old Warner Brothers cartoon gone wrong. Finally the chase comes to a close as Matoaka seems able to sink her teeth into him she leaps and Zander flies up just to avoid her snapping jaws Matoaka bites instead Bill’s posterior. Bill is apparently on his hot date.) SAMANTHA Bill... There seems to be a wolf biting you... (Bill’s face is for a moment frozen in a contorted grimace of pain and bafflement)
-- Edited by Mistress of Fear at 14:17, 2007-05-27
Wow! It sounds great, only who is Matoka? Is she really a superhero? Is this in the LU world? And is Zander really that much of a jerk? Please put up more in chronological order! And are you seriously thinking abourt publishing this or is it just 4 fun?
) basicly a contiuation of my first story "Defenders of the Planet" my first screen play it's basicly the tale of four teens (now six teens) Who are infused with animal DNA in order fight hostle aliens (if you're confused think Tokyo Mew Mew mixed with Ninja Turtles)
