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Akira_Cat · Your local cat

Add on Story 5 (I think...)

Techy_Coyote · Beast

Here goes nothing...

Lexi: Guys! We have to get it down. It may get hurt!

Ace: Yea, but it's way up on the highest branch. We'll never get it down...

Tech: What about you Rev? You can fly.

Rev: Arn't-you-forgetting-BIRDS-NEED-TWO-WINGS-TO-FLY?! I-can't fly down with a kitty in my hand!

Everyone did not know what to do... Just then everyone stared at duck.

Everyone: evileye

Duck: Me?! Forget it! Just leave that pile of fluff there, the fire department will get it down.

The branch was breaking apart and Slam caught Duck by surprise and flung him up the tree.

Duck: Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!

He caught hold of the cat and quacked to the ground.

Duck: Next time you wanna blast me like a rug doll in a cannon, ASK ME FIRST!

Lexi: Ah cool it Duck. Aww, it's so cute!

Ace: Yea, let's bring it back to the tower.

Meanwhile, a dark figure with lots of cats around her stood on a rooftop and observed the Loonatics as they walked home.

???: My plan seem to be working out fine... The Dawn of Evil is rising soon!

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How was it? I was hoping you all will like it... No Criticises pls... Only bricks under the Qualification Board is allowed...

Lumosnight · Loonatic

'Look guys!' cried Lexi, 'A kitty is stuck in the tree!'

However, the cat's mews became louder and they saw that it wasn't any ordinary cat. In fact, this cat was too large to be a kitty. They approached closer and the mews sounded like words:

'Help me guysth!' yelled a familiar voice.

'It's Sylth Vester!' exclaimed Ace.

'What's that flea bag doing out of prison? And how did he get on this tree?' snapped Duck.

Suddenly, the branch beneath Sylth Vester broke from his weight and he fell down, his face kissing the pavement.

'Are you OK?' asked Lexi, rushing towards him. He may have been a criminal, but no one deserved suffer a fall like that.

'I guess the "cats landing on their feet" gig is really just myth,' drawled Duck.

Sylth got up shakily and croaked out, 'Blanc isth in danger! Tweetums hasth been kidnapped and our universthe is at stake!'

OK, continue the story.

Black Oracle · Black Hole Survivor

Okay, so which 2nd part do we go with Akira? Lumos or Techy's?

Lumosnight · Loonatic

Wow! We posted it at the same time!

Akira_Cat · Your local cat

Well, we could say that the story is continued by saying Sylph got stuck up the tree too. It does sort of make perfect sense when you think about it. So we continue from Lumosnight now.

Black Oracle · Black Hole Survivor

So Sylth and another cat were both stuck up the tree together? What about Techy's dark figure and Tweetums being reported as kidnapped? Those seem to be leading to two separate plotlines.

RevRunner · Frelengian

Everyone stared at Sylth...

Everyone: What??!!!

Sylth: Well, I wath on my way trying to capture Tweetumth, tho I could have him for lunchth, but when I went over to hith throne, he wath gone!

Duck: Phht. You expect us to believe that story? Why would you care about mustard stain, when the only thing you wanted to happen to him is for him to get captured. Heh, I bet this is all a trap and furball is playing us for squat.

Ace: Now hold on der, Duck; Sylth might be onto somethin' here?

Duck: What?! What do you mean furball is on to something? The only thing that he is on to is to trap us. Ace comeon, haven't you learned your lesson? He's just pretending to beg for mercy, so when we actually go to wherever Tweetums got captured, he will trap us.

Lexi: I actually agree with Duck on this one.
Ace: confused

What are you sayin' Lex?

Lexi: Think about it; Deuce gained your trust and stabbed you in the back, then Sylth teamed up with us and then he betrayed us...

Duck: Yeah, do you want to get egg on your face again?

(Ace thought for a moment)

Ace: doh

Huddle!

(The Loonatics gathered around)

Ace: Now look, we might as well help Sylth now.

Tech: I don't know Ace, it seems kind of risky.

Rev: Sure. Remember-the-two-times-you've-been-two-times-by-two-others-two-times?

Duck: I'll say, Rev and his ridiculous play on words finally make sense.

Rev:

Ace: Look guys. I know you don't like dis plan so far, but trust me; what do you say?

Lexi: Okay, fine. cry

Tech: I'm in, too. cry

(Slam grmbled in agreement)

Rev: I'm-in-too. cry

Ace:

Duck?

Duck: Uh, uh, no way. There is no way I'm going to help that flea scratcher! bleh

Everyone:

Duck?!!

Duck: Fine. But I won't like it. bleh

(Everyone got out of the huddle)

Ace: Alright, Sylth; we've decided to help.

Sylth: Exthellent, I won't let you down.

Akira_Cat · Your local cat

Black Oracle wrote:

So Sylth and another cat were both stuck up the tree together? What about Techy's dark figure and Tweetums being reported as kidnapped? Those seem to be leading to two separate plotlines.

Well that dark figure might have something to do with Tweetum's mysterious disappearance. But anyways:

The Loonatics are on Sylph's ship in spaceship. Sylph is driving.

Ace: So what do ya know about Tweetum's vanishing act den?

Duck: evileye

Apart from the fact that Tweetums is resting in the cat's stomach.

Sylph: Well when I came to the throne room, I found this.

He delved his hand into his pocket and pulled out a pyramid shaped amulet and gave it to Ace.

Ace: weirdface

So what is it?

Sylph: No clue.

Suddenly, they felt something crash into the side of the ship.

Continue...

Black Oracle · Black Hole Survivor

Lexi and Slam stood up from their seats to look out the ship window. Their eyes widened in surprise. Another space cruiser, its shape that of a 'T' with the flat end as the back, charged at their ship with blazing guns.

"Agahburibluu attack!" Slam shouted.

"We're under attack!" Lexi repeated more clearly.

"Launching targeting automated weapons!" Tech informed.

Sylth's 'cat claw bombs' took off from the sides of the ship and began returning fire on the attackers. But the attacking ship swiftly shot down the cat claw bombs.

"They took out my cat claw bombs like they were just children's toys!" Sylth cried in disbelief.

"That's-it!-We're-all-out-of-defences!" Rev announced in panic.

Sylth's ship was rocked a second time as the attacking ship rammed into it again. The Loonatics were violently thrown off their seats.

"See, this is why every vehicle needs seatbelts!" Duck moaned from his flattened position on the floor underneath Slam's crushing weight.

A red indicator on the controls flashed as an alarm went off. Tech pulled himself up from the floor to scan the computer monitor.

"They're breaking through our hull! We're being boarded!" he informed urgently.

Suddenly, all the Loonatics turned their heads to the door of their control room as the sounds of several bodies ramming it filled their ears, and dents were made in its now flimsy-looking metal sheet.

"No..." Ace murmured.

-- Edited by Black Oracle at 19:19, 2007-05-16

Akira_Cat · Your local cat

The alarm sounded louder than usual. Suddenly there was a feeling that the ship was going to crash as the ship rocked from side to side.

"I can't control the ship! We're gonna crash!" Sylph shouted as the inside of the ship was rumbling loudly.

The falling ship was hurtling towards a sandy brown planet. Everyone screamed as the ship made an immediate impact on the desert sands...

CONTINUE.

Kenny McCormick · Anthros

([Are we allowed to have blood in this add-on story? Because I have a really good idea...])

Akira_Cat · Your local cat

Probably not. A bit too gory for this part of the forum. But any injuries like broken arms, sprains, small or big cuts will do.

Kenny McCormick · Anthros

([I meant a small amount of blood, but I guess other injuries will do...Oh, and I am in school, so I apologize if it seems rushed.])

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Ace opened his eyes. Glancing around, he saw that most of the other Loonatics were unconscious; the only ones awake were Slam and himself. Sylph seemed to be missing, but Ace seemed to be in deep thought about something else. Who had attacked us? And why?

A low moan shook him out of his thoughts.

"...Ugh...Where are we...?"

Turning around, he saw Danger Duck sitting up and rubbing the back of his head.

"I dunno, Duck."

"Ow, my head..."

Both Danger and Ace turned around to see Lexi getting up.

"Are you ok, Lexi?"

The pink bunny put a hand to her head.

"I think so..."

Ace looked around, noting that Slam was gone.

"Hey, where are Slam, Tech, and Rev?"

"Right here, Chief."

Ace, Danger, and Lexi glanced over their shoulders to see Tech standing there in the doorway.

"Glad to see you're ok, Tech. But, eh...where's Slam and Rev?"

Tech shrugged.

"I have no idea, but we have to find them."

With that, they started to walk through the badly damaged ship. Suddenly, they heard a loud cry of agony. The Loonatics jumped slightly, but looked at each other.

"That sounded like Rev..."

Ace motioned for the others to follow him.

"C'mon, the cry came from this direction!"

They sped off. It wasn't long before they spotted him.

"Rev? Rev! Are you..."

Ace stopped, causing the other Loonatics to stop behind him as well; the roadrunner was pinned under a large piece of scrap metal. Slam suddenly ran up from behind them and halted before the fallen Loonatic, easily lifting the large piece scrap metal above his head. He threw it across the ship as the others knelt beside Rev.

"Rev, are you all right?!"

Rev struggled to get to his feet.

"I...I'm-fine,-but...I-can't-feel-my-legs..."

ruthchang93 · Martian

All the other Loonatics stared at him in disbelief.

"You WHAT?!"

Rev begin sobbing, "I...can't...feel...my...legs..." He said more slowly than any of the Loonatics ever heard him say. Tech knelt down by Rev's legs and examined them carefully. He sighed and was about to say something, but another loud cry broke him off. Only this time, the cry sounded more of anger than of pain.

Continue.

-- Edited by ruthchang93 at 04:01, 2007-07-27