Kenny McCormick wrote:

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[These are all pretty good. I like them.]

[And how did your uncle block your inspiration?]

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 its relate do him coming from his city by surprise, autoinviting himself to sleep in my room and do a bunch of retard jokes like poking my sides  A LOT and sum with lamme jokes, thus no privacy and cant even relax with him around.. -_-

[I see...]

[But you're a good artist; I'd like to see more of your potential.]

You certainly have your own style of art i feel. A few more attempts and your LU art can definitely be unique!

I love the first one! These are really good.

Siamese712 wrote:

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Ya the first one in realy good...but Um...Wheres his tail?

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congrats, you found one of my worst errors, the Tail was inked, but once I started coloring, when added the "shadows", I ruined one layer, removing the tail >_<

and thus there it was.. no tail x_X

 

Not bad. Your fan-character looks pretty cool too. Keep up the good work.

I gave you tips? When? o.O I'm terrible at giving tips. =P

But if you want feedback...if you want to make Rev look more on model, you should try by starting to make the neck thiner and longer, because the neck is what determines a character's entire body. If it's too thick, the char will automatically look larger, 'cause your mind will try to proportionate the body to the neck (you'd think it references the head, but that's so not true! Which is why it's easy to end up with drawings where the character's head is either too big or too small). Rev's head is well sized in your sketch, he's just too large. But then, that might just be your style, I don't see it as an error that needs to be improved, unless you actually want to emulate the show's look.

And your pics are GOOOD! I loved that first pic of Rev and Tech's head is downright adorable in that second sketch!
I didn't know you had a fancharacter! What is he? A dragon? Perhaps your avatar/fursona turned into a Loonatic?

I'm doing something like that as well XD I don't have a fanchar, but I sketched my fursona with the suit. She doesn't have powers though, and she's not a Loonatic, she just commissioned a suit, becuz the tight black shiny clothing iz secksy :3. Lulz.

I hope you'll keep providing us MOAR hawtness! :3


-- Edited by Ayelet_Ripley at 08:43, 2007-05-29

Ayelet_Ripley wrote:

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I gave you tips? When? o.O I'm terrible at giving tips. =P

But if you want feedback...if you want to make Rev look more on model, you should try by starting to make the neck thiner and longer, because the neck is what determines a character's entire body. If it's too thick, the char will automatically look larger, 'cause your mind will try to proportionate the body to the neck (you'd think it references the head, but that's so not true! Which is why it's easy to end up with drawings where the character's head is either too big or too small). Rev's head is well sized in your sketch, he's just too large. But then, that might just be your style, I don't see it as an error that needs to be improved, unless you actually want to emulate the show's look.

And your pics are GOOOD! I loved that first pic of Rev and Tech's head is downright adorable in that second sketch!
I didn't know you had a fancharacter! What is he? A dragon? Perhaps your avatar/fursona turned into a Loonatic?

I'm doing something like that as well XD I don't have a fanchar, but I sketched my fursona with the suit. She doesn't have powers though, and she's not a Loonatic, she just commissioned a suit, becuz the tight black shiny clothing iz secksy :3. Lulz.

I hope you'll keep providing us MOAR hawtness! :3


-- Edited by Ayelet_Ripley at 08:43, 2007-05-29

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Ayelet: now thats tips!!! :D
I agree on the neck, will work on that, and as for my character..
yeah its my furry (dragon) turned loonatic :D
and lol, dont make me start about my atraction to tight suits *whistles innocently* 9_9

KaeJae:
and yeah you did kaejae XD

 

Mimicking a show's style is difficult at first, especially if it's dramatically different from your own style. You did a really good job for a first try.

and another picture I just finished, tried markers on this one :>



Tried an "eye trace" from the  episode "the comet cometh" episode on the two sketches on the left, and the right one I tried by myself, as you see Im slowly improving :>



-- Edited by Cesarin at 12:24, 2007-06-01

-- Edited by Cesarin at 12:27, 2007-06-01

*melts*

I think you're quickly improving!

axelfar wrote:

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Slowly improving? Don't you mean improving at the speed of light?

*looks at Rev*

*Melts*

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 well..*coughs* Its still "slow" for me, I have the tendency of getting angry, then desesperate, then sad, and then I drop my proyect when Im unnable to get the wanted results :P  

[You didn't use the "Circle and Cross" Method?  Wow.]

[Seeing someone sketch it out without a guideline...That's stunning.  To be honest, I wish that I had the same ability as you.  I can't sketch like that; I have to use the "Circle and Cross" Method to sketch out something decent.]

[You get fifteen cookies for the improvement.]

[I see...]

[Well, that's still very good.  I can see that you're improving nicely.  Keep it up.]

Me: Badum! Badum!  Badum! Love-hot-Rev-piccy!

I faint.

-gasps at awsome pics-

And this is the reason why my sis is still a Revvie. HE'S SOOOO CUTE!!!! No not just cute, HAWT!!!!-hearts majorly-

And your improving real fast! I wish I could draw him this good.

me: -pouts- Fine.
me: -- You get Rev, while I get Ace! -glomps Ace-
Ace: -sighs- Will you please let go of me.
me: NEVER!!!
Ace: ......crud.
-other loonatics snicker at Rev and Ace's misfortune-

and.... your welcome!

-- Edited by doggirl2772 at 02:14, 2007-06-02

*rejoices* ACE FTW!

Hmm... I think I would've made the neck just a wee bit shorter...

Other than that, 'tis awesome :D

That expression made me laugh. Love the smile! *LOL*
And the others are right, you're improving at crazy speed!

Skifox wrote:

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I'd hardly call your progress slow! That lastest batch of Revs is head and shoulders above the first one you posted.

Ace looks good, too! He looks like he's eavesdropping on someone who's complementing him. But... where's his hand?

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couldnt draw the hands, paper limit x_X
and I wanted a happy Ace look, similar to the Rev's first post :>
I dont know why but Ace 's easier to draw for me D:

 

XtreamCrazy wrote:

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Wow! After comparing your first pics with these recent ones, I'd say; HOW COME IT TOOK ME YEARS TO IMPROVE MY ART AND WHEN IT ONLY TAKES YOU A SHORT WHILE??? LOL! X3

Seriously, those Rev pictures are gorgeous! And that Ace pic makes me rejoice! lol.

Can we expect a Tech picture anytime soon? *puppeh dawg eyes*

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 I Might try next I supose, but im gonna do a trade with KaeJae and she wanted sexy Ace, thus practicing Ace :>

-- Edited by Cesarin at 12:30, 2007-06-02

kaejae wrote:

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Ah the paper limits... *shakes fist at the limits*

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besides, these aresuposed to be marker sketches.. thus its in a small sketchbook I use for pracitcing poses before I do the real thing in the paper I use for comissions :o

might show it to skifox when we're at AC :>

 

doggirl2772 wrote:

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Hurray for Ace!!!! YAY!!!!!

Luving the newest edition to your pics. How can I not?

Man, your way better then me. I can only draw Ace, Lexi and sometimes Duck (the bunnies are easy). I cant really draw Rev or Tech. It turns out really wrong.

So kudos for your new Ace pic! YAY!!!

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Tech will be my next victim after Ace ;)

 

Mmm, Ace looks all comfy on that couch! As Zadavia might say, "Very impressive indeed!". You do Ace's eyes very distinctively somehow Cesarin. They're nice, big and rounded; we can see right into every inch of them, good for conveying emotions. Can't wait to see how you do Tech now!

Great job Cesarin.  And don't worry, I'm sure Kaejae will love the way you draw Ace.

Just make sure she doesn't convert you to an Acer ^-^