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The loonatics vs Demons from hell
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(Morning 5:45 AM)


(It was a dark and stormy night at acmetropalis people where iver in there house sleeping
or out in nightclubs.Deep in a alay a bolt of lighting hit the wet floor
a big dark shadow aperd through the lighting bolt it stood up and did a masive rour the rour was so big it can be herd from miles away.)




(Morning 7:05 AM)


Ace: morning guys (while steping out of his room)

Duck: about time (while siting on the sofer)

Lexi: you shuoldent hath drunk that much ace (while drinking coffie)

Ace: yeah knocked me right out (while zardaver's holagram apered)

Zardaver: loonatics we got a proplem (Tech Rev and Slam ran in)

Tech: sorry we'r late guys (he said trying to cach his breth)

Slam: gherr sorry (he said with a smile)

rev: yeah-you-wonet-belve-what-happend-Tech-shomm(Tech put his hand over revs beak)

Tech: shut up bried brane (while relesing his grip and did a nervos laveh) it's a supise

Ace: ALL OF YOU SHUT UP (he shuoghtid) whats the proplem Zardaver

Zardaver: Thank you Ace alright there is a new bad guy in the streets called ''The shadow''



END OF PART ONE.


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PART TWO.

Zardaver: right now it is destroying the city (shoing a pictcer of the shadow)

Lexi: whoh where's that guys face

Ace: I don't like this eneawy let's jet

(It took 3 hours to get there then they sow it a big showdow creacher it grabed a car and
through it at the loonatics ace shoughtid ''move'' and the 6 jumped out of the way)

Ace: eh whats up dork

The shadow: YOU MOCK ME YOU WILL PAY (while lifting up his arms to atack)

Ace: cash or credit (while jumping out of the way)

Lexi: how about if I cash in (while shoting a brane blast it doged it)

Tech: amasing it is made out shadow but how dus it live (while analising it)

Rev: wow-it-is-strog-whops (he said while moveng out of the whay of a atack)

Duck: looks like our powers isnt working on it (while shooting an explosive egg at it) 

Slam:ghreg yeah (while tonatoing it)   

(all of a suden a sowd came out of its arm and ace moved in for atake with his own sowd out the shadow knocked it out of his hand and swung the sowd)



                                      END OF PART TWO

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I blamed it on the dog...

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first off Wellcom to LUO
This is seems like a good story so far...but you mite wount to chek some of your speling primaraly Zadovias name.
Still a good story

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Ace: My heart is yours. Now and forever

Lexi: As my heart belongs to you. 

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Ace: I'm more of the flying by the seat of my pants guy
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Sorry about my spelling Siamese I found a spelling check thing on my computer so anyway this is where I left you guy's hanging enjoy.   
 

                                             PART THREE     

Lexi:'' Ace look out'' (she shouted while running up to them but she was to late) 

(The shadow lifted up it's sword to attack Ace put his paw in front of himself to brace himself and the shadow chopped it off) 

Ace: screams in pain''my hand oh why you'' (while picking up his hand and putting it in his pocket) 

The shadow chuckled evilly: ''you should have kept your mouth shut rabbit'' 

Ace: ''That's bunny to you doc'' (Ace picked up his sword and shouted)
'' GARDEAN STRIKE SWORD ATTACK '' (The sword glowed blue as Ace jumped up to strike but the shadow disappeared) 

Tech: where did it go (as he looked around) 

Rev: don't-worry-guy's-I-got-it-on-my-GPS  

Ace: good work Rev lets jet (while leaning on a wall because he was feeling light headed)  

Lexi: oh no you don't (as she was looking at Ace's arm where his hand use to be) ''you got to get some help''

Tech: ''yeah you need some medical attention''(he stopped to think about it)
''how about me Lexi and you go back to HQ'' 

(Ace was about to aguerue but then colaptes to his knees braving heavily)

Ace: OK duck rev slam go follow that thing update me every half hour( then tech and lexi helped ace in to the hovercar and flew off to HQ) 

Duck: ok I'm leding this hunting spree let's find it (rev waved his hand on a hill for duck and slam to follow)

                                     END OF PART THREE

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Okay.......weirdface
 Ace geting hs hand chopped off is not a prity site, and its a tarable thing to happen. blankstare
your story is still interestingsmile but... 
Mite wount to wach out for Acers or they mite jest brik ya'. 

And I'm geting a Acexi vibe from you. Are you a Acexi shipper?confused

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Lexi: As my heart belongs to you. 

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Ace: I'm more of the flying by the seat of my pants guy
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Ok I'm restraining myself for now. Take deep breaths, take deep breaths.

In case you didn't know, I'm a MAJOR Acer, and I dont really like the idea of his hand being chopped off. But I'm in a good mood and a non-bricker, so dont worry about bricks coming from me, not sure about the other Acers though. Its a good story but....Isn't this a bit gory to be in the PG parts of the forum?

I'm sorry corey but I just had to say that, please don't take it the wrong way. I'm a nice person, honest.

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omg ace's hand was choped ...

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1st  things 1st  for questin 1 yes I am a Acexi shipper number 2 don't worry I don't take evens aww and number 3 he will get a new paw back.

 
                          



                                         PART 4     


(back at the loonatics HQ)



Tech: ''I think I know how to get your paw back ace'' (while going towards the computer)  

Lexi and Ace: ''How''

Tech: ''easy if you clone the atoms on your arm it mite be able to grow back'' (while analyzing the test results on the computer) 

Ace: ''do you mean regeneracion'' (while looking at his arm and Tech gave a nod) ''is there any side effect's there Tech''  

Tech: ''hmm not that I know of'''

Lexi: ''so it's safe'' 

Tech: ''should be'' 

Ace: ''let's do it'' (he said with a weak smile) 

(Tech and Lexi helped Ace into the regeneracion chamber and Tech closed the door's and switched on the machine it took about one hour to finish the door's opened and smoke came out)

Lexi: ''Ace''

Ace: ''wow good work Tech'' (stepping out of the machine rubbing his new paw)

Tech: ''OK you guy's can say it I'm a genies'' 

Ace: ''OK now let's find mister think he's though''  

meanwhile

Duck: ''there it is'' (pointing at the shadow) 

(they followed it up hill where they saw millions of shadow creatures)

Rev: ''men-look-at-how-many-there-are''

Slam: ''uh oh''

Duck: ''let's make like a plane and jet'' (just then they turned around and retreated as the shadow's where chaseing them) 

                                  END OF PART FOUR 



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sorry i haven't updated in a while i had some bugs in the computer anyway back to the story.       

(Ace was driving the hover car with Lexi as co pilot and tech doing research on the computer) 

Tech:Ace the shadow is from hell and it turns out that they are big with duels with swords 

Ace:which means we can chalingin it for the world  

Lexi:how did you know it wantid the world

Ace:easy thats what all bad guys want

(They saw duck slam and rev running from at least billeons of the shadow creachers ace landid the hover car and walked up to the shadow) 

The shadow:well well well look who it is mister one paw 

Ace:I chaling you to a sword fight tomaro if i win you leth if you win you can get the world          

The shadow:(lathes) you think you can beat me well I aesept

(The shadows disiperd and ace let out a sigh and they all headid back to HQ ace notist lexi looked sad they were both aloune in the ****pit)

Ace:hay lexi are you alright 

Lexi:Ace what if you lose what if this time it kills you 

Ace:Lexi dont worry it wont get a chanch (then he saw a tear go down her cheak) 

Lexi:b-but i-it a-almost k-killed y-you t-today (she was crying she didn't whant ace to die soshe jumped into his arms) and I can't live with out you (then she relized what she said and blushed lucky for her that you cant see it thru her costume) 




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sorry I fogot about the part 5 part so anyway heres part 6 enjoy.  

                                          PART SIX   

(Ace relzed what lexi said and put the hover car on auto pilot and stood up with lexi still in his arms she looked down to the floor ace liftid her head with his paw)

Ace:you wont have to (then he kissed her then the door opened and tech walked in then they stoped kissing and sow tech) 

Tech:about time

(next day)

(Ace stood there pashontly then the shadow aperd out of thin air)

The shadow:let us start (as a shadow sword apeard out of knowere 

Ace:bring it on you butthole gardeon strik sword do your thing

(then they forght the shadow startid swinging it's sword rapitly ace did a backflip backwords and thrustid his sword in to the shadow)

Ace:I won (while trying to cach his brethe)

The shadow:nooo (dissiperd in to a wromhole)

(all the shadow creachers startid to dissiper but befor they did ace told them this) 

Ace:when you get to hell tell your boss he's next

(then they were gone like they wernt there in the first place)

THE END

sorry about the spelling but the spelling check thing is not wroking cry 
but i'm going to get it sortid.

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Well CJ, can I call you CJ, it was a nice story.
You could use a little more detail to mack your story beter though.

And HUZZA a nether Acexi fan wellcome to the clubbiggrin



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Ace: My heart is yours. Now and forever

Lexi: As my heart belongs to you. 

*LOVE*

Ace: I'm more of the flying by the seat of my pants guy
Lexi:There something I'd like to do to the seat of your pants
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