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Okay, here's the story you guys voted for. Good vs Evil - The Fun Way! And for the benefit of this fan fic, I'll make Slam speak English.

Chapter 1

The Loonatics and Zadavia are at the plaza of Paradise Island. They are standing next to a water fountain on the square as they look upon the hotel they'll be staying in for the vacation.

Rev: omg.gif Wow! I've never seen such a big hotel before! I bet the inside's bigger than the outside!

Ace turns to Zadavia.

Ace: smile Thanks for taking us on the vaction Zadavia.

Zadavia: aww Not a problem Ace. After all the work you've done for Acmetropolis, all of you deserve it.

Ace: smile Well we couldn't have done it without you Zadavia.

Tech: smile And as a treat, you can go and look around the plaza.

Lexi: smile Yeah. We can go shopping if you want to.

Zadavia: aww Oh alright. I don't suppose a break wouldn't hurt then. We'll see you later then.

Ace: smile Don't worry about a thing Zadavia. We'll get the rooms booked for ya.

Zadavia: smile See you then.

Lexi: aww See ya.

The girls walk off as the boys carry the luggage inside the hotel. The guys approach the reception desk as Ace taps on the bell thingy you have in hotels. The hotel manager comes out from his office and sees them.

Manager: mad.gif Yes. What do you want?

Ace: weirdface We booked some rooms in this hotel.

Manager: mad.gif Oh yes. By what name?

Ace: Zadavia. She's out at the moment but she'll be back in a little while.

Manager: furious Are you sure? You guys look like you're on a stag night or something.

Ace: weirdface We're not on a stag night. I just said Zadavia is out with another girl. So we're not on a stag night.

The manager checks inside a book and nods his head. He turns around and finds the keys to the rooms from the key rack.

Manager: furious Fine. But no funny business. Got it?

Ace: weirdface Thank you.

The male Loonatics carry their luggage up the stairs to find their rooms. As they disappear off around a corner to the right side of the hotel, Optimatus, Deuce, Ophinchus Sam, Pierre Le Pew, Otto the Odd, Mallory Mastermind, Massive, Weathervane and Sypher enter the hotel.

Mallory: mad.gif Well it wasn't my fault that you forgot your spare summer clothes with you!

Weathervane: furious I did bring my spare summer clothes! It's just Vomit Boy Pierre puked all over them!

Pierre: mad.gif Hey! I get travel sickness very easily you know!

Massive: furious Then why didn't you puke outside of the bus instead of puking all over her as well as me!?

Otto: furious Yeah! The bus we stole is gonna stink of what you ate for breakfast before we set off!

Sypher: fear.gif I really need a wee! Where's the toilet!?

Sam: mad.gif You guys were lucky sitting on the seats! You guys made me travel the whole way inside the boot!

Otto: mad.gif Yeah! Me too! Just because we're small, doesn't mean you can put us in the boot!

Deuce: furious Well we can't have more than 7 people on this vacation cos that would be illegal!

Mallory: mad.gif Plus there wasn't enough room in the bus for you guys to squeeze inside!

Weathervane: furious Now how am I supposed to get the vomit off my bikini!?

Sypher: crying.gif I really need to go now!

Optimatus: rage.gifENOUGH!!! furious Now the reason why we're here is so we can stop ourselves from going insane by just enjoying ourselves on this holiday.

Pierre: blankstare And to get away from ze police and ze prison.

Optimatus: mad.gif No Pierre! That is not one of the reasons why we escaped to here! Just forget the fact that you guys were busted out by me and then we were chased by the police while stealing a bus full of old people that we threw out so we'd have more room for us to drive 95 miles per hour down a 70 miles per hour motorway to then fly over a lorry carrying milk by driving across a ramp that was being used for building work to therefore lose the police and finally crash into the swimming pool at this resort which is now currently off limits to everyone who was or wanted to go swimming!

Pause.

Sam: weirdface Gee you're stressed.

Deuce: weirdface Maybe you should go and have a lie down.

Mallory: smile No! Even better! You could go to the health spa they have here. I hear that you could pay for a five day spa therapy treatment and then you just have to relax.

Optimatus: worry.gif Yeah. Relax. smile That's what I should do. I'll do it right now! weirdface But are you sure you guys will be fine without me?

Otto: hmm Trust me. We prefer to be without each other.

Optimatus: aww Okay then! See you later then! Gorgeous girls rubbing my back, here I come!

Optimatus goes off to find the spa while the other villains approach the reception desk where the manager sees them.

Manager: mad.gif Hey! You're not allowed more than seven people per sets of rooms!

Massive: mad.gif But we need some rooms!

Manager: furious Sorry! But unless you have a valid reason for getting the remaining rooms, I suggest you get out of here!

Weathervane: furious Fine! We'll find a good reason then! Come on everyone!

Deuce: mad.gif But we need a hotel room!

Weathervane: furious Lets go!

The villains exit from the hotel into the plaza.

Massive: furious Why'd you go and do that for!? Now we'll have to sleep outside!

Sypher: crying.gif And I'm still bursting! If I don't go soon, I'll explode!

Weathervane: evileye Don't worry everyone! When the manager said we need a good reason to have the remaining rooms, it gave me an idea.

Deuce: evileye And what idea was that?

Weathervane: evileye Well what can go into hotels for free?

Pierre: weirdface Babies?

Mallory: smile Oh I get you. So we need some babies to be able to get a room!

Massive: evileye One problem; where are we going to get the babies from?

Mallory: evileye They don't neccessarily have to be the age babies are.

They all glare evily at Sam and Otto.

Sam: disbelief.gif Oh no! I am not going to dress up as a little brat!

Otto:disbelief.gif Me neither! Just because we're small, doesn't mean you can pick on us all the time!

Mallory: evileye We have no choice! Come on!

All the villains drag Sam and Otto across the pavement while the two scream their heads off. An hour later, the manager waits at his desk until he sees the villains back with two villains disguised as babies in a twin pram.

Weathervane: aww We're back! And we have children here too.

The manager looks down at the babies and gives a little scream. Sam is wearing a blue bonnet and a blue baby suit, while Otto wears the same, only his clothes are pink.

Manager: omfg.gif Gaaaaaaahh!!! weirdface I must say, that they're the most ugliest babies I've ever come across.

Sam: furious Why I oughtta-

Mallory stuffs a blue dummy in Sam's mouth.

Mallory: That's enough Henry.
 
She turns to the manager.

Mallory: aww Sorry about that. Teething problems.

Otto: giggle.gif Hee hee... Henry... hee hee...

Weathervane: And you Norman.

Otto: mad.gif Norman!?

Weathervane stuffs the pink dummy in Otto's mouth. The manager gives a grumpy look to a set of cheesy smiles from the villains. The manager turns around and gives the keys to them.

Manager: mad.gif Alright. You can go through. But no funny stuff going on, alright?

Weathervane: aww Don't worry. We'll do our best to keep our children under control.

They all quickly run upstairs with the luggage as they spin around the corner from upstairs on the right side of the hotel...

END OF CHAPTER 1. THAT WAS A VERY LONG CHAPTER. OH WELL. AT LEAST I HAD A FIT OF GIGGLES WHILE WRITING THIS. giggle.gifHEE HEE!


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giggle.gif Me has giggle fits too!!! Love their getaway description.
*stuffs dummy in Sam and Otto's mouths*
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ROFLs! Optimatus being massaged by lovely ladies, Pierre puking on Weathervane's bikini, Otto and Sam as baby Henry and Norman! OMG that's rich! Ha! Ha!

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Sam and Otto as babys.....Bawhahahahahahahahahaha!
Nice chapie Acat

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weirdface.gif I may have wrote longer chaptes for stories, but this is the funniest story I've ever read. *Takes picture of Sam & Otto* Unless you want this on the Internet, you do as I say.

Sam & Otto: Not on your life, scumbag.

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*falls over in hysterical fits of laughter again*

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Gahahahahahaha!!!!! That.....was.....freakin'.....hilarious!!!!! -rolls around on ground laughing-

awwAwwwww.....look at the little babys! Aren't they cute!?!?!
Otto:furiousBite me.


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Well there's still more chapters to go but I'll post them up later. wink

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Chapter 2

Tech and Rev are in one room whilst Ace, Duck and Slam are in another room, leaving the girl's room spare. Rev and Tech start unpacking their things in their room.

Rev: smile Oh Tech I'm so excited! This holiday is gonna rock! I know it will!

Tech: smile And hopefully, I'll be able to bask in the sound of tranquility.

Suddenly, some loud head banging music pumps through the wall. Both of the guys stare at the wall. Tech then angrily hits the wall with his fist against the wall. The volume of the music increases. Rev decides to go outside and knock on the neighbour's door. The door opens to reveal Sypher. Rev quickly runs away back to the room where Tech is.

Tech: weirdface Well?

Rev: fear.gif You'll never guess who's our hotel room neighbour!

Tech: weirdface What?

Rev: fear.gif Sypher! He's escaped! And all of the other vilains too!

Tech: hmm Let me do it.

Tech goes outside and knocks on the door. The door opens and this time reveals Mastermind. Tech quickly runs back to his and Rev's room. A few seconds later, they both zoom out of their room and races towards the room where Ace, Duck, Slam are. Meanwhile, the other guys are unpacking their stuff.

Duck: smile Ah. I think I might enjoy this vacation. And it would be pretty ironic that I'd be swimming in the hotel swimming pool instead of cleaning it.

Ace: hmm Hate to burst your bubble. But apparently, the swimming pool is currently off limits due to some crazy guys driving a bus into it.

Duck: hmm I wonder what idiots managed to do that.

Rev and Tech burst into the room and slammed the door behind them.

Rev: fear.gif Ace! We have trouble!

Tech: fear.gif Major trouble!

Ace: weirdface What's going on?

Rev: fear.gif The villains we fought! They're back!

Slam: weirdface What? You mean they managed to escape?

Duck: furious Well I think we should go and give them a piece of our mind! I can't believe they came here just to ruin our holiday!

Ace: mad.gif Wait Duck! We can't just barge in there! They're very dangerous criminals! We just have to ambush them together.

All the other guys agree as they all creep out of the room together. Immediately, they see the villains coming out too. Both sides charge at each other from sight and start fighting. Punches were thrown and powers were used as they fought each other. Just as they caused the destruction in the hotel, they heard someone shouting.

???: rage.gif OI! STOP THIS VIOLENCE RIGHT NOW!

Everyone freezes in different poses as the figure approached them. The voice belonged to the manager.

Manager: furious What the hell is going on!?

The villains and heroes start trying to explain everything to the manager at the same time.

Manager: rage.gif Enough! Right now, I'll put you on a warning. And if I should see reckless behaviour like this again from you guys, I'll make you sit in a seiza position at the reception desk for until dawn tomorrow! Do I make myself clear!?

Everyone nods their heads as the manager stomps off.

Sypher: cry Now what? We've got no way of resolving our revenge without trying to kill each other!

Duck: furious Well without using violence, you're hopeless!

Everyone starts arguing again until Ace has had enough.

Ace: rage.gif Hold it! cry There must be a way of seeing who wins out of the good and bad guys.

Rev: idea I know! How about we play a game!

Otto: furious Games are for babies!

Massive: evileye You got any better suggestions?

Duck: mad.gif Well we can't play a game with you villains! You'll only go and cheat!

Sam: furious In your dreams!

Weathervane: rage.gif Quiet! evileye I just thought of a game that we could play!

Tech: weirdface What sort of game?

Weathervane: evileye Well it's something that I used to play with some of my friends when we were at school when we're on a field trip. We get into teams of two people armed with 4 pillows per group. (Two pillows per person.) Then we select a target to go somewhere in the building while the teams scatter to different locations inside the building. Then when the time starts, everyone has to find the target and kiss them. The first team to do so wins!

Pierre: biggrin I zink zat's a wonderful idea!

Duck: furious Only because it involves kissing!

Rev: aww I think that will be cool!

Deuce: evileye The team to kiss the target first has to have the other side to be servants for them for the rest of the vacation.

Slam: weirdface So if the team of good guys win, all of the villains has to be slaves for us.

Mallory: smile And if a villain team wins, you have to be slaves for us.

Ace: evileye Okay then. You're on!

Weathervane: biggrin Great! The game starts at lights out. So pick your team mates and prepare for tonight!

END OF CHAPTER 2. 

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rofl.gif This is going to be awesome!
But why pillows? confuse.gif
And I love that Rev saw Sypher and Tech saw Mastermind. lmao.gif
Can't wait 'til chapter 3!

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Oh Gawd.....this is gunna get preeeeeeeetty interesting.

Nice chapter Akira!smile

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Chapter 3

Weathervane: biggrin Hello! And welcome to the Kiss Someone Passionately Contest! The game where kissing the target is the aim! First, lets meet the teams that are taking part!

First up is Team 1! The kung fu bunny and a bird with the need for speed, Ace Bunny and Rev Runner! With Ace's offensive attacks and Rev's quickness, will they over take the other teams and kiss the target first? 

Rev: biggrin Oh boy! This is gonna be fun! Huh Ace?

Ace: hmm Just calm down Rev.

Weathervane: Team 2 consists of a big mouth and big muscles, Danger Duck and Slam Tasmanian! Will they be able to be strong enough to wipe out the competition and get the prize?

Duck: rage.gif I do not have a big mouth!

Slam: hmm I think you just proved her point.

Weathervane: Team 3 has two intentions! Revenge and winning this contest! Give it up for Deuce and Ophinchus Sam! Since they had some experience working together, will they be the ones to win the contest?

Sam: evileye We are so gonna beat all of you!

Deuce: furious And Ace will lick in between my toes!

Weathervane: Team 4 is the little big team! It's Massive and Sypher! With Massive's brute strength and Sypher's... weirdface uh... talent, will they thrash their opponents and get to kiss the target?

Sypher: evileye I think I'm gonna like this game.

Massive: evileye Me too.

Weathervane: And last but not least, the odd couple of the tournement with as much charm as a skunk with the scent of fish, Pierre Le Pew and Otto the Odd! Can they 'charm' their way into victory over the other teams?

Pierre: biggrin Ven it comes to love, I shall always prevail!

Otto: mad.gif I had no choice but to play this dumb game! And how did I get Skunk Boy for a partner?

Weathervane: biggrin Okay! Here are the rules! A random person will be picked as the target for our teams to kiss. Our teams have picked their starting places out of the hat so they're spread out, cos when they meet another team, they have to fight each other only using the pillows. Powers or personal weapons are not allowed to be used against each other.

Duck: furious What!? That isn't fair!

Sypher: furious How are we meant to win now when we can't kill each other!?

Weathervane: If you use powers/weapons against each other or use them to find the target, the whole team will be disqualified.

Deuce: furious This sucks!

Weathervane: The game is over when the first team kisses the target, giving them victory. But there is also a catch! The hotel manager will be wandering around the hotel to see if anyone messes about. If he catches you, you are immediately out and your team mates aren't allowed to help you!

Rev: cry That's harsh.

Massive: blankstare Even by a villain's standard.

Weathervane: biggrin And all of the action will be captured and commentated by Tech.E.Coyote and Mallory Mastermind!

Mastermind: mad.gif As long as dog brain behaves, I'll co-operate.

Tech: furious Coyote! I'm a coyote!

Weathervane: biggrin And now to choose our target! Earlier on, Tech and Mallory went out to snap photos of the potential targets and scanned them inside the computer. The photos are now being randomly shuffled at the moment. But when I press this button, the shuffling stops and that will reveal our target!

Ace: cry So for all we know, we could be kissing a man!?

Duck: hmm It's not like Pierre cares.

Weathervane: biggrin And now, the target will be revealed now!

Weathervane slams her hand on the button and the shuffling stops on a photo. Everyone gasps in suprise.

Everyone: omfg.gif Lexi Bunny!?

Ace: mad.gif You can't do that! She can't be a target!

Pierre: biggrin Yes! xd.gif Now I get ze chance to place my lips onto ze flower!

Deuce: biggrin Yes! evileye This will be the perfect way of revenge on the darn rabbit!

Duck: biggrin Yes! I get to show everyone it's not just Ace who can get all the honour and glory!

Ace: mad.gif Duck! We're not having Lexi as a target!

Weathervane: evileye Sorry Ace. Once the target is chosen, you can't change it.

Ace: furious Well I'm not gonna let Skunk boy and Deuce get to her first! Come on Rev! To the east wing of the hotel! First floor!

The teams exit the room to go and find their starting places.

Weathervane: biggrin Well lets see from the cameras we planted all over the hotel how the teams are feeling!

Camera 1: Ace and Rev are walking down the hallway.

Rev: cry Ace. I know it's just a thought I had and all but do you like Lexi?

Ace: mad.gif It's not that I don't like her! cry It's just that we can't just treat her like some object. Plus she doesn't know about this!

Rev: smile Well once we found her, we can explain everything. Right?

Ace: worry.gif I suppose so.

Camera 4: Duck and Slam are walking down the hallway in the west wing.

Slam: weirdface Duck. Did you really mean it when you wanted to kiss her, just so you can prove to people that you are worthy as well as Ace?

Duck: nod.gif Of course I did Slam. Ace isn't the only one who can have everything you know. I mean he probably gets more gratitude from other people than we do put together.

Slam: weirdface But we are worthy in everyone's eyes no matter what. Even if they don't say thank you afterwards, they still appreciate the fact that someone came to help them.

Duck: hmm And nobody congradulated you after a wrestling match. How does that make you feel?

Slam looks down as they carried on up the hallway.

Camera 2: Deuce and Sam are walking on the top floor on the west wing.

Deuce: aww Oh yes. I can see it now. I kiss Lexi. Ace breaks down. Then he'll be licking in between my toes and-

Sam: aww And I'll be able to laugh at that rabbit and get him to serve me smoothies.

Deuce & Sam: aww Aah...

Camera 5: Massive and Sypher are waiting in the lobby.

Massive: So Sypher. What's your reason for trying to win this?

Sypher: You know, I don't have a clue. Maybe to steal the girl rabbit's powers by kissing her. And your reason Massive?

Massive: hmm Just something to do I suppose. And the fact I want the good guys to get what they deserved a long time ago.

Sypher: smile Good call.

Massive: aww Thanks.

Camera 3: Pierre and Otto are walking down the top floor on the east wing.

Otto: mad.gif This is so stupid. I can't believe I'm doing this with you Pierre.

Pierre: biggrin Well it will be worth ze effort after we kiss Lexi.

Otto: mad.gif It still sucks though.

Pierre: aww Aaw! Just have some fun! Ze sooner you start to have fun, ze sooner ve'll vin!

Otto: furious I still think this just a ploy for you to kiss Lexi.

Pierre: biggrin Oui!

Commentators box (Villain's hotel room): Tech and Malllory are tending to the camera angles while Weathervane waits for the count down.

Weathervane: evileye How long until lights out?

Tech: blankstare Just 30 seconds to go.

Mastermind: weirdface So tell me Weathervane, how come you can sound good as a sports commentator as well as a weather girl?

Weathervane: aww Oh I just took presenting lessons as well as studying the weather. You need good presentation skills to present the weather too. And back to the contest in hand, here comes the countdown! 10-9-8-7-6-5-4-3-2-1! Let the contest begin!

END OF CHAPTER 3.

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OMGs! So the war between good and evil comes down to a kissing game! *Breaks out into hysterics.* I'm lovin' these team-ups! But poor Lexi doesn't have a clue! Soon there'll be men left right and centre grabbing her for a smooch! MWAHAHAHA!! Hilarious Akira!

-- Edited by Black Oracle at 12:16, 2007-06-17

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Hehe. Nice job thus far. ^ ^;
Just one question, concerning the first chapter... what exactly /is/ a "stag night"? xP

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Prity good so far ther Acat. They all seem to be in carecter prity well.
I wounder who will be the one to get the smooch and how will she react.

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Black Oracle - Well the team ups I made were actually sorted out by splitting them into the good guys and the bad guys. Then I number each character by numbers and then I just rolled some dice and whatever numbers there are, I pair up with the characters. I'm actually happy with the teams I put them in. And Lexi will have to hide if she doesn't want a kiss from Pierre Le Pew! bleh

Rye - A stag night is when the "husband to be" goes out with some of his male friends to a party arranged by his friends on the night before the wedding.

Siamese712 - Thanks. I really wanted to display some tension between Mastermind and Weathervane based on the episode "Acmegeddon". But I didn't get to display that in that particular chapter. Hopefully some tension will come along in later chapters.

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-starts breaking down in laughter- This is gunna be good!

Luv the teams. Somehow I thought Ace and Rev would be on the same team. Its good pairings. But why is Tech an announcer and not in the game?

Poor Lex. I bet she's gunna have a HUGE reaction to this idea.

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To answer Doggirl's question before we start, since there are five male members in the Loonatics, would you want to see Tech paired up with a villain? Plus I don't think he'd do it. He's not the type to. Now that that question's been answered, on with the game!

Chapter 4

Weathervane: It's been 10 minutes into the competition and nothing's going on yet. There's no sign of the target or the manager yet.

Tech: mad.gif The target has a name you know. Her name's Lexi.

Weathervane: hmm Whatever. Lets see what's going on in camera number 2!

Camera 2: Deuce and Sam are still strolling down the corridor.

Sam: furious Oh this is getting silly! It's been 10 minutes and we haven't even seen anyone yet! This is getting boring!

Deuce: mad.gif Right! Here's what we do! We open every hotel room door and we see if the target's in there, right?

Sam: evileye Lets do this! And to think, Pierre could have though up this sort of thing.

They start opening the doors but find no-one in there.

Sam: angered.gif Aaw come on! Where is everyone at this time of night!?

Deuce: hmm Disco. It's disco Tuesday tonight. It's very popular apparently.

Sam: furious Aaw! This is stupid! I'm not playing anymore!

Deuce looks around until he see a lock of yellow hair turn the corner. 

Deuce: evileye sing.gif Sam. I think we might end the game early.

Sam: weirdface You found the target?

Deuce: biggrin Yes! She went that way! Come on!

They both run towards the figure with blonde hair. They both glomp on her and kiss her on both sides of her cheeks.

Sam: w00t.gif Yes! We've won!

Deuce: fear.gif Um... no. We didn't.

Woman: rage.gif Get off me!

Both of the guys climb off the woman as she stands up.

Deuce: Sorry about that. We thought you were someone else.

Woman: angered.gif I'll give you someone else!

The woman puts her fists together as she clicks them as she  approaches Sam and Deuce.

Deuce and Sam: buggered.gif AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH!!!
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Commentator's box.

Weathervane: So Team 3 has followed the wrong person! Which means there's everything to play for for all of the teams! While Deuce and Sam are getting pounded by an anonymous woman, I think we might have a rumble in the corridor in camera 6!

Camera 6: Ace and Rev are walking down the stairs from the east wing.

Ace: worry.gif I'm actually starting to wonder if we are going to be able find her in time.

Rev: smile Aaw don't worry Ace. I'm sure we'll be the first to get to Lexi.

Ace: cry It's just it's nerve racking not knowing what the other teams are up to until you see them.

They both look down the stairs at the same time and see Pierre and Otto approaching the stairs.

Ace: evileye Alright! Now we get to attack them! CHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARGE!!!

Rev: fear.gif Wait Ace! We got to discuss tactics! Ace!

But Ace ignores Rev as he charges towards the villains with Rev following him from behind. The villains quickly spin around as a giant pillow fight begins!

Commentators box

Weathervane: biggrin And just look at those pillows fly, as teams 1 and 5 fight against each other!

Mastermind: weirdface Hang on. Ace does martial arts. Should that be allowed?

Tech: Well technically, martial arts isn't considered a power. And the rules clearly state in this handbook of "Kissing Someone Passionately Competition" that no powers or other weapons other than pillows are allowed to be utilised. Which means martial arts are acceptable.

Mallory: furious Hang on! Where did you get that from!?

Weathervane: aww I wrote it.

Mallory: furious Since when did you write this!?

Weathervane: aww Well since this game is getting more interesting, I was thinking of making it a national sport for the Olympics.

Mallory: angered.gif You can't have that as a sport! That's just silly!

Weathervane: mad.gif It isn't silly!

Tech: blankstare Um, girls. Can we get on with this? And the manager is coming towards the battle area!

Weathervane: evileye If the teams don't get of here soon, we might find both teams doing the seiza position until morning!

Camera 6: The teams are still fighting.

Pierre: evileye Give it up rabbit! You know very well that her lips belong to me!

Ace: angered.gif Forget it! There's no way you're kissing Lexi!

Rev: omfg.gif Ace! Retreat!

Ace looks around to find a figure approach the scene.

Ace: Lets get out of here Rev!

Ace and Rev runaway up the stairs (and stampeding on Otto in the process), leaving Pierre standing there grinning to himself.

Pierre: biggrin Cowards! Zere nothing but yellow belly vimps!

Pierre turns around to see the figure getting nearer. He gives a quiet squeek in fear as he sprints up the stairs (running over Otto again). Otto picks himself up and rubs his head.

Otto: furious Pierre you idiot! You've forgotten your team mate! Traitor!

He then feels a hand on his shoulder that freezes him in position. Otto slowly turns his head around to see the face of the manager.

Manager: furious Right! That's it! Seiza position for you!

The manager drags Otto down to the lobby.

Otto: crying.gif NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! CURSE YOU PIERRE YOU TRAITOR! crying.gif AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH!!!

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Danielle: Reading
Cassidy: Reading what?
Danielle: "Good vs Evil"
Cassidy: furious WHAT?! AKIRA WROTE ANOTHER STORY AND YOU DIDN'T EVEN BOTHER TO TELL ME?!!!
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Chapter 5

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Weathervane: And we have our first casualty! Otto the Odd has been caught by the manager! Which means Pierre is on his own! How will Pierre cope on his own? Meanwhile, lets see what's happening in camera 7!

Camera 7: Sypher is walking down the hallway on his own.

Sypher: biggrin And so I said to the guard at the prison; "If there's mustard on your shoe, then there's something wrong with that"! Ha ha ha! What do you think of that then Massive? confused Massive?

Sypher turns around to look behind him. Massive can't be seen anywhere.

Sypher: fear.gif Oh no! I'm alone! What if Massive's been caught while I've been talikng all this time!? I'll have less chance to win! Then I'd lose to them again!

Sypher bumps into someone behind him. He turns around to see the figure's arms reach out to him.

Sypher: buggered.gif Oh nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!

Camera 3: Massive is walking down the hallway by himself. He then hears a creak around the corner. Massive tiptoes to the corner. He waits until he jumps around the corner, ready to attack. He sees the person cower before him.

???: crying.gif Please! Spare me! If you're going to hurt me, hurt me gently! I bruise very easily!

Massive halts his attack.

Massive: weirdface Pierre? Where did Otto go?

Pierre: crying.gif Oh Massive! It vas terrible! We were abushed by zat mangy rabbit and zat bird brain! Then zey fled ze battle field because the manager vas coming! I did my best to help my partner but he vas taken by ze manager! And now I'm on my own!

Massive: weirdface And I care how?

Pierre: weirdface Vell, vere did your partner go? I sought he'd be vith you.

Massive: hmm I don't know. Probably saw a moth and followed it and got himself lost. He may have been caught by the manager.
Pierre: idea Hey! Vy don't we be partners?! Join forces togezer until ze game is over! Vat do you say? You could do vith a partner.

Massive: hmm ... Alright. It'll be easier I suppose.

They hit their fists together.

Pierre: biggrin You've made a vise decision.

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Weathervane: biggrin And the singletons of teams 4 and 5 have joined forces!

Tech: confused Is that allowed? Single people from different teams joining forces together?

Weathervane: aww According to the rule book, it's allowed.

Mastermind: mad.gif I still can't believe you made a rule book about this!

Weathervane: smile Lets see what's up at camera 6 since the big battle!

Camera 6: Duck and Slam are walking down the stairs.

Duck: cry Man. This boring. We haven't come across anyone yet and we ahven't found Lexi. I'm starting to think this whole thing's a sham just so the villains can get away.

Slam: cry When do we get to eat? I'm starving.

Duck: hmm We eat as soon as we've found Lexi.

Duck and Slam see Deuce and Sam groaning on the ground.

Sam: dead.gif That is gonna hurt until Wednesday.

Deuce: dead.gif I don't think I can feel my back. Oooww...

Duck gives a devilish grin to Slam.

Duck: evileye Shall we?

Slam: weirdface Attack them? evileye Bring 'em on!

Duck and Slam charge towards Deuce and Sam as the two injured guys are hit rapidly by the pillows of Duck and Slam.

Deuce & Sam: crying.gif AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH!!!

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Camera 7: Ace and Rev are walking down the hallway.

Ace: cry This is getting serious now. We haven't found Lexi yet. And the other teams might have found her first. Rev, I need you to use your GPS to find her.

Rev: cry But that's cheating Ace. We'll get disqualified.

Ace: mad.gif Rev! Lexi needs us! She doesn't know that she's a target for a horrific attack against the other villains and it is our duty to protect each other as well as other people! And you're willing to risk her life just to follow some rules?

Rev: cry I don't want Lexi to get hurt. But I don't want us to get disqualified too.

Ace: mad.gif Rev. The ones who normally win contests are those who are the strongest and the fastest people in the world. Why should it just be those people who win when we could win by cunning, who have a stragety worth using.

Rev: cry I'm still not using my GPS.

Ace: mad.gif Aaw come on Rev! It's the only way to get back at those villains!weirdface Wait a minute. Get back... idea Rev! I think I know where she might be!

Rev: confused Where?

Ace: Follow me! I didn't know why I thought of this before!

The guys sprint up the corridor until they reached a room with the door open.

Ace: jawdrop.gif Nooooooooooooooooo!!! It can't be!?

Rev: omfg.gif Someone's broke into Lexi's room!

Ace: angered.gif Lets get 'em!

They both enter her room and find two figures in there. Rev turns the light switch on to find Massive and Pierre.

Ace: mad.gif You again Pierre!? Don't you ever learn!? You'll never get to her first!

Rev: weirdface What happened to Sypher and Otto? You guys weren't with each other before.

Pierre: evileye Zat's because ve've both lost our partners to ze manager. So me and Massive decided to join forces.

Massive: evileye And now we intend to crush you!

Ace: mad.gif You're both cowards! You can't even fight without having someone else by your side! And like I said before, there's no way you're gonna kiss Lexi!

Ace and Rev charge at Massive and Pierre as everyone in the room hits each other with their pillows.

Commentator's box:

Weathervane: biggrin And Team 1 battles it out with Pierre from Team 5 once more with Massive added into the mix! Can this contest get any closer!?

Tech and Mallory are still keeping an eye on the screens from the CCTV cameras while fiddling with the controls on the control panel. Mallory gives a sigh.

Mallory: cry You know, watching everyone else having fun out there makes me want to join them.

Tech: weirdface But not to kiss Lexi obviously.

Mallory: worry.gif No. cry.gif But now I want to bash that Duck on the head with a pillow and smack Pierre right where it hurts too.

Tech: weirdface But if you did go out there, who would you have paired up with?

Mallory: worry.gif I know I'd sound stupid for saying this, but... I want to be your partner Tech.

Tech: weirdface Me? But you and I are against each other. Wouldn't we fight like mad?

Mallory: cry We may have our little arguements. But in the end, we both had something in common. We were rejected by society.

Tech: worry.gif That's true.

Mallory: cry Yet, you decided to fight for truth and justice. Why did you do that when so many people treated you like you didn't know better? Surely you could have gone to the dark side. You'd make a very powerful villain. You are clever and all.

Tech paused at the statement and then turned to her.

Tech: worry.gif Because... I wanted to help people and the society improve the way we live. Since you went away, I wanted to find ways of making sure people wouldn't just turn bad like you did because of me.

Mallory: weirdface You wanted to improve the society because you felt it was your fault that I became bad?

Tech draws his face closer to Mallory's face.

Tech: I wanted to help others so the same thing wouldn't happen to you. And I'm sorry you turned out this way.

Mallory draws her face closer to Tech's.

Mallory: Oh Tech...

They both lock their lips together as they passionately kiss. Suddenly, the door flies open to reveal a man at the door.

Man: furious OI! What do you think you're doing!?

Tech and Mallory freeze in their positions as Weathervane's face drains at the sight of the man.

Weathervane: omg.gif Oh no! Game over!

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Tech draws his face closer to Mallory's face.

Tech: I wanted to help others so the same thing wouldn't happen to you. And I'm sorry you turned out this way.

Mallory draws her face closer to Tech's.

Mallory: Oh Tech...

They both lock their lips together as they passionately kiss.


To quote Duck,

"Wow. I did not see that coming. Did you?"
But fluff is nice. aww.gif
Still trying to think if it will turn Acexi or Rexi... confuse.gif
MUST USE SCWS FOR BRAINPOWER!!!!!!
Other than he fluffs, 'tis very funny. Don't let this be the end of the game!!!
And fluffs is fluffy aww.gif

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Danielle: *shakes head in disgust* I told her she wouldn't want to read this chapter..... But, anyway, great chapter! Can't wait for the next!

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Akira, you've made every Tech & Mallory shipper extremely happy. Also, I await the end of what will happen. I'm hanging over a cliff because of that.

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*runs onto the scene, panting*
OMFG!!! THEORY!!!!!!
Flexa: Oh boy, this oughtta be good.
Me: QUIET, YOU!! rage.gif Anyways.... WHAT IF.....

  • Mallory and Lexi somehow got mixed up in the contest
  • Tech kissing Mallory passionately making sense of what Weathervane said as "The Game's Over," giving it 2 meanings (the manager/Tech kissing)
  • making Tech the winner. w00t.gif


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oh I bet it was Optimatus who came in!
And Ace seems very very VERY conserned on being the first ones to kiss Lex *Acexi*

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Wows. Unexpected moment there between Tech and Mallory. xD
Now who could their guest be? The manager...? Dun dun dun. xP

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GASP! Tech and Mastermind...kissing...*faints in shock* Aside from that, the pillow action is hotting up hilariously! LOL! At least Lexi is now safe from the kisses of Otto and Sypher! Tee hee! And who's just burst into the commentators' box i wonder?

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Zadavia's Spirit: nod.gif Yes. To tell you the truth, I didn't see that coming either. My imagination just did it for me while I was listening to my MP3 player. And no, Mallory has not been chosen as a target so sorry, Tech can't win.

Siamese712: shrug.gif Could be. You never know. We haven't heard from him for a while. And Ace does seem very concerned for her, like in the episode "It came from outer space".

Rye: evileye I only know the answer to that one my friend.

Black Oracle: fear.gif Don't faint! No! And yes, the pillow fights are getting very intense! But Pierre and Deuce are still on the loose and they sure want to plant their kiss on her to make Ace break down. evileye And you'll just have to wait and see who the mysterious intruder is that burst into the room.

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Akira, you just made this TechxMallory shipper VERY happy.

Pegasusmon: Oh goody....

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And now here is chapter 7!

Chapter 7

Camera 5: Otto and Sypher are kneeling in the seiza position.

Sypher: crying.gif Ooooooow!!! This is so painful! Ooooooooooww!!!

Otto: mad.gif You think you got it bad!? My legs are small! I can hardly keep my balance for more than 10 seconds! I can't believe that rotten Pierre just left me to suffer this!

Sypher: cry Well he is a villain. That's what they do. They double cross other people so they can get away with everything.

Otto: mad.gif You just shut up!

They suddenly see Sam and Deuce fall off the first floor balcony and land on the ground. Then they see Duck and Slam jump off the balcony after them as they are about to land on the ground to hit the fallen villains with the pillows.

Duck & Slam: doh YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRHHHHHHH!!!

Just as the pillow fight gets interesting, the balcony walls are broken away by Pierre, Ace, Massive and Rev as they fall on top of the four who appeared before them.

Ace: angered.gif You are not gonna kiss Lexi!

Pierre: furious Yes I vill!

All the teams are now fighting valiantly with their pillows as tons of feathers start to fly around the lobby. Just as they were about to go into an almighty climax, they hear a shout from someone.

???: rage.gif OI! STOP IT RIGHT NOW!

Everyone freezes in their positions as all the feathers flutter back down to the ground. They see it's the manager holding Tech, Mallory and Weathervane by their ears.

Manager: rage.gif SEIZA POSITIONS! NOW!

A few minutes later, Lexi and Zadavia arrive from outside into the lobby.

Lexi: aww That Disco Tuesday was a blast!

Zadavia: aww You've said it!

They then stop to see all the villains and male Loonatics in the seiza positions. The girls then see the pile of feathers in the middle of the lobby floor.

Lexi: weirdface Guys. What happened here?

Duck: jawdrop.gif What!? You've been outside all this time while we've been trying to look for you!?

Lexi: weirdface Look for me?

Pierre: worry.gif Alas my sweet. I did not get my prize of a kiss from you.

Lexi: confused Kiss?

Manager: furious Sorry ladies. Do you know these people?

Zadavia: weirdface Yes. We're friends and enemies of them.

Manager: furious These people has been causing menace and destruction around my hotel!

Weathervane: furious No we weren't! We were playing the "Kiss Someone Passionately Contest"! ashamed Oops!

Lexi: omfg.gif What!? You guys were playing a game with the villains!? furious How could you!?

Rev: worry.gif Well you see, we saw the villains here. We thought they escaped, so we tried fighting them again.

Slam: worry.gif But we weren't allowed to use our powers to fight cos the manager told us so.

Duck: worry.gif So Weathervane came up with the game where we picked a target to try and kiss and...

Tech: worry.gif The computer picked you as the target.

Ace: cry We were only following the rules of the hotel. And we did try to protect you and all but-

Manager: furious But they've broken nearly every rule in this hotel. So this is their punishment. Now if you like to go to your rooms ladies while-

Before he could finish his sentence, he trips over a piece of fencing from the broken balcony and falls on top of Lexi. His lips accidently touch her lips as he falls on top of her. Everyone gasps of shock as he stands himself up again.

Manager: fear.gif I am so sorry miss! I didn't mean to! I just tripped and I fell! And I didn't realise that I would fall on top of you! I'm so sorry! crying.gif Please forgive me!

Weathervane reads her recently written rule book and puts it down with a face of distraught.

Weathervane: cry Um... I really don't want to alarm you guys but... the manager wins.

Everyone: jawdrop.gif WHAT!?

Weathervane: reading.gif According to the rules, anyone who was involved within the game, including the ones who could take people out of the game for example, a teacher or the one in charge of the facility, can win by kissing the target.

Deuce: mad.gif What sort of rule is that!? Why the hell did you write it in there!?

Weathervane: cry It's the rules. It hasn't been changed since it first began. So the manager... has won.

Manager: weirdface I won something without realising it?

Then Optimatus enters the building wearing a hideous pink and blue hawaiin shirt, brown shorts and socks while wearing sandals. He is also wearing a straw hat while carrying a straw donkey too. Everyone just stares at him. Then Lexi turns to the manager.

Lexi: smile I have an idea. If you let me and Zadavia go on any of the hotel attractions for free, we'll forget about the accident.

Manager: biggrin Oh thank you! Yes! It's a deal!

They both shake hands.

Manager: evileye And now to spend my prize. I have got the perfect thing for you for trashing my hotel...

Everyone in the seiza position glances at each other in fear...

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*falls over in hysterical laughter* Losing control....... can't breathe......... going.....to....faint....... *collapses on floor*

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Rye: You'll find out soon enough devilish.gif .

Cassidy Coyote: weirdface I think I made the story too funny. aww Oh well.

Black Oracle: giggle.gif Yes it was. The only reason she's taking it well is because now she and Zadavia have free reign of all the facilities in the hotel.

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Last chapter! Chapter 8!

Chapter 8

Lexi, Optimatus, Zadavia and the manager are sitting on the sun lounges under the hot burning sun. Optimatus is still wearing his hideous Hawaiin shirt with the shorts and sandals, Lexi is wearing a pink bikini, Zadavia in a purple swimming costume, and the manager in a white shirt with brown shorts on.

Optimatus: biggrin Now this is living.

Zadavia: aww You said it bro.

Lexi: aww At least now we can go anywhere without paying.

Manager: aww And I am able to find away to clear up my hotel quickly. How's the work going on there?

Meanwhile, Duck, Ace, Deuce and Pierre are cleaning the swimming pool where the parts of the van are still submerged in the water.

Duck: furious Great! Now I'm having flashbacks to my pool boy days! This is so humiliating!

Pierre: cry You zink you got it bad? I got dirt under my nails! crying.gif Oh the tragedy!

Deuce: mad.gif You're worrying about your nails!? You lady man!

Ace: mad.gif Oh shut up! You're giving me a headache with you quacking away, you and your french accent and... you have a lisp!

Deuce: mad.gif No I do not!

Manager: aww And the others should clear up all the feather's and the broken balcony fence in a few hours time.

Optimatus: biggrin Which gives us more time to soak up the sun!

The four sun bathers slump down on the sun beds as everyone else who's cleaning inside the hotel and outside the swimming grumbles under their breath.

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Hehehe....Love the ening Acat 
realy good and funnyaww

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*Sees the everyone but the sunbathers working* giggle.gif You are cruel, Akira

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if u do then weren't u supposed to write that other story called "With a scent of rose"? If u remember plz write it!


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:D LAWZ :D

Gawd that was funny! Hahahahahahahahahaha!!!!!

You got a way with humor Akira! HUMOR FTW!!!!! lols!

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Preidiotgirl: Welcome to the LUO fan base. And I did write with a scent of rose. It's in the naughty fan fic section. If you can get into there, you can read it. nod.gif It is very good. devilish.gif Heh heh.

Siamese: aww Thank you.

Hasani: aww I know I am. Cruelty to characters is the only way to enhance the laughter factor.

Doggirl2772: biggrin Yes Doggirl san. I has teh way with da ancient art of humor and comedy. But something has been bothering me. What does "FTW" mean? Does it mean "For The Win" may I just ask?

And thankies to everyone who's been reading this fan fic. Should you feel that certain characters are being ill treated by moi in this fic, dial the number for the NCPLUC: The National Charity of Prevention to Loonatics Unleashed Characters. Please don't sue me!

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Akira_Cat wrote:

Please don't sue me!

Pegasusmon: tears.gif But I like sueing people.....

Me: He's going through one of his 'sad' phases. Don't worry, he'll be the annoying horse we all know and /don't/ love by tomorrow.

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Nah, I wont sue ya. I had too much fun laughing at their torture!biggrin

and I think FTW does mean 'for the win'. I'm not completely sure but thats what I meant when i said it.smile

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Arika_cat i dont know where to go to read it and wat if i cant get into it?confused

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how am i suppose 2 read it when the administrator must grant me access before i can read the fanfic. whos the administrator?confused

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Well best person to talk to is Cali-Bunny. If you E-mail her, I think she'll be more than happy to grant you access.

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i havent got an answer from cali-bunny yet. how can she grant en access?confused

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