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here's another one of my idea's oh yeah it's gonna be good the hole thing is writing in ace's pov and i fixed my spelling check so enjoy.


part one ace is dead or is he.

we were fighting massive we were in a nuclear toxic wast dump yeah i know still dumping toxic wast but not the toxic wast you know this stuff was more powerful i mean it can power up las vegas for one billion years '' eh what's up doc '' i said while running up for a round house kick but he easily knocked me flying duck used his explosive egg blasts but took no effect he lathed then i got a idea ''tech if me Lexi and duck combined powers would it knock him out'' he thought for a moment and said '' possible '' and i took his word for it '' Lexi duck hit him with everything you got '' i shouted Lexi and duck got by my sides duck on my left and Lexi on my right ''one'' i said ''two'' said duck getting eager ''three'' Lexi shouted and with that we fired together it massive and he collapsed unconscious ''great-work-guys'' rev said massive some how used his power and with that i was as heavy as an elephant i tried to move but lost my balance and fell in to the toxic wast ''ace'' every one shouted Lexi tried to grab me but missed then i blacked out as soon as i hit the purple glowing thick liquid.  



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OK now shall i here comes part two enjoy.

part two the reunion 

i woke up on the cold hard steel i felt different i felt stronger faster more powerful i got up to mu feet i felt a little dizzy but it past by like a flick of a switch so i headed back to HQ. two hours later i got there i had no idea were my bike was so i walked i went inside and used my key card on the door but it didn't work ''weird'' i thought ''why wont it let me in oh well still got key number two'' i pulled out my garden strike sword and slipped it through the card reader and the door whooshed open ''open sesame'' i commented with a smile i walked in to the liven room it was dark empty and silent so i knew no one was home i sat down on a Cher and closed my eyes for a moment but i didn't realize i just fell asleep i was in a cold dark place i didn't remember anything not even my name  then someone or something said ''you are the abomination you must die'' the voice sounded deep dark and had a cold cruelty about it then a big dark figure came out of nowhere i could not see its face it pulled out a long Devin axe it to was dark i felt some energy radiating from it it looked like a medieval sort of thing so i looked around for a weapon but i had no luck it rushed in for attack  
i closed my eyes waiting for death then i woke up half a inch from death i caught my breath it was like i was running for six hours strait i got up and headed to the fridge i felt like i haven't eaten in four months i picked up the left over pizza and put it on the table and startid to eat. one hour later the door whoshed open and i knew they were back ''grat work guys'' i herd lexi say but she sondid depreced they walked in to the living room were i was ''hay guys'' i said but they looked like they seen a ghost ''eh you guy ok or did a ghost fly by'' i said sacastly ''ace but your your dead'' said a wide eyed duck lexi fatid tech looked pale slam was wiping his eyes and rev fatid as well as lexi ''dead how could i be dead'' i said while picking up lexi and laing her down on the couch ''we saw you fall in to the toxi waste no one could servive from that'' said a pale tech. 

part three coming soon   

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Go on!! What happens Nexst?!!!!

Ace is dead?!!?!?!!

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here's what you been waiting for.

part three impossible

i couldn't help it i just lathed at what everyone told me like me dead well yeah i just like taking a stroll from my grave '' me dead '' i lathed '' men you guys crack me up '' tech looked at me seriously and i stopped and he said '' that toxic waste should have malted you but your alive impossible '' after that Lexi and rev woke up '' finally awake sleeping beauty '' i teased Lexi and what she did surprised me she jumped on me knocking me off my char and kissed me on the lips i opened my eyes in shock and i started blushing then she got off me blushing '' wow where did that come from '' i said and duck started to say '' Lexi and ace siting on a tree k.i.s.s.i.n.g. '' then Lexi used her brain blast on his butt and said '' i missed you ace '' then i look at the other team mates slam and rev was lathing at duck who was still Rubin the place Lexi hit him tech was analyzing my blood and Lexi was siting next to me and i said '' how long was i gone and Lexi looked at her feet while she said '' six moths '' six moths i thought wow that's a long time then my head started to hurt not a headache but it felt like someone was in there using a hammer to get out i felt my nose run i opened my eyes as i wiped it with my paw i looked at it it was rad i recognised the liquid strait away it was blood just then my head felt like the atom bomb '' are you OK '' i herd Lexi ask then i blacked out and as i fell to the hard ground i herd everyone shout       ''ace ''   

part four coming soon that is if my stupid computer worked  

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Corey james a most interesting story you got pleas continue it, for it is hared to balefe that Ace is dead or a gost

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sorry for being away for so long my computer broke so i have to use a laptop from now on so lets carry on PS ace is not a ghost nore is he alive just stuck between. 

part 4. 

I woke up feeling like hell. I looked to the left to see Lexi fast asleep on a char next to me. i rubbed my temples trying to remember what the hell happened. 
''Ace your awake'' i looked to my left to see Lexi awake. She looked at me with concern. '' how long have i been out '' i asked sitting up in the dark room.
'' A week '' she answered back. '' is that char uncomfortable '' i asked rubbing the back of my head. '' a little '' she answered back hoping not to worry me.
i cleared my throat uneasily. I could not believe i was going to ask her this 
'' umm well you...you can share with me if you want''  i said with my face glowing like a stop light. '' umm sure '' she said as she got up i moved over so she had some room. she got in and we fell asleep together


The next morning tech came in and sore me and Lexi asleep in each other's
arms. he cleared his throat loudly and said '' i hope I'm not interrupting anything'' we woke up startled and i said '' it isn't what it looks like''. 
tech smiled and said '' that's what they all say. by the way i analyzed your D.N.A and it seems to be changing which is impossible'' tech through the results to ace. '' seems like your full of surprises '' tech said. me and Lexi looked at the
results together and realized he was right '' whats it going to do to me '' i asked growing more scared by the minute. that's when techs smile turned in to a frown '' you are going to change in to a uncontrollable monster with one thing on its mind destruction''.

chapter 5 comming soon

-- Edited by corey james at 11:56, 2008-01-01

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Hehe Acexi moment...

Uhoh! Tech best find away to save Ace!!!

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Ace: My heart is yours. Now and forever

Lexi: As my heart belongs to you. 

*LOVE*

Ace: I'm more of the flying by the seat of my pants guy
Lexi:There something I'd like to do to the seat of your pants
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OK people part 5 here it is enjoy.

part 5.

I could not believe that i was going to turn into something deadly. We were sitting around the table in the conference room. That is when i first heard it.
it said ''they will all die '' i looked around to see where it was coming from.
i heard it chuckled in a dark cruel voice and said '' you cant see me I'm inside you ''. OK now i was getting scared. The overs sore me looking like i seen a ghost. '' ace are you OK '' Lexi asked. she touched my paw and i jumped. '' ace your all sweaty '' she added lookin at me in concern. '' yeah-ace-you-seem-jumpy-this-morning'' rev said. i couldn't let them worry so i said '' umm i fine I'm just not felling well...i guess I'll go to my room ''. i hated lien. so i got up and went in to my room. I started to hold my head. 

A few hours later i felt myself changing. it felt like someone hitting my bones
with a hammer. i heard my bones crack. then i sore myself through the mirror. 
My eyes changed from blue to red with black pupils. i let a scream of pain out as i felt a shock wave of pain in me. then i heard someone knocking the door 
'' ace whats happening in there i heard you scream '' Lexi asked knocking the door again. i had to think of something '' uh nothing I'm OK '' i said in a dark voice. '' ace whats wrong with your voice '' Lexi asked. i started to panic then i said '' uh bad throat (coth...coth) I'll be OK '' i then lost controle and blacked out. 

end of part 5.

part 6 comming soon.



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corey james, I don't mean to be a nag, but PLEASE use acual puncuation.

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