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(This is a little Fan-Fiction I came up with in my head while I was creating my character. ^_^ Enjoy.)

Chapter 1: A New
Mission

It was a normal day in Acmetropolis. Also, it was the Loonatics' day off from fighting villains. Although, that was about to change...

"Yo, Tech! Pass me a can!" Ace called out from the couch, watching a Basherball game.

"You got it, chief!" Tech said, opening the fridge and tossing a can of Diet Coke behind his back.

Ace caught it, cracking it open. "Thanks, pal." Ace said.

Everyone else was going about their daily lives around the round-table room. Suddenly, the TV turned off, Zadavia making her appearance onto the screen.

"Loonatics, something terrible is brewing deep beneath Acmetropolis." Zadavia commented.

"Aww, man... But, it's our day off!" Ace replied, pouting.

"My sincere apologizes, but this is very important." Zadavia answered back.

"What's up, Zadavia?" Tech asked, the gang gathering around the round-table.

"Word has gotten out that a very powerful street gang has moblized and constructed an underground weapons plant for their own use. This gang could get more powerful by the minute and it's only getting worse." Zadavia explained.

"So, this gang has somehow gotten their hands on some serious firepower." Tech clarified.

 “Indeed, Tech. This gang can make enough weapons to wipe the floor with any police force known to man.” Zadavia added.

 “Sounds pretty bad… Does anybody know about this besides us?” Ace asked.

 “Hmm… I think the President of the United States has sent a secret agent that has been specially assigned to try and wipe them out for good,” Zadavia replied.

 “One agent? What’s he gonna do? Arrest them all?” Everyone laughed at Ace’s comment.

 “However, this agent is no laughing matter. This Coyote is top-of-the-line and is a state-of-the-art trooper.” Zadavia reminded them.

 “Coyote? You mean, like Tech?” Lexi asked.

 “Yes. This particular Coyote has been ordered to go underground by the president himself.” Zadavia answered. “Although, he may not be able to handle it by himself. The president has contacted me and only me about this. He wants you to find his agent and help him by any means necessary.” She added.

 “Alright, sounds good. Where do we meet up?” Ace asked.

 “That, I cannot say. However, I can give you coordinates to this secret plant. He should be investigating the plant already. Hurry, Loonatics. Zadaiva out.” She said, disappearing from their site.

 “Coyote…” Tech said to himself.

 “Alright, gang! Let’s jet!” Ace said, everyone making their way out of HQ and headed their way towards the underground weapons plant.


-- Edited by TechxAce at 03:25, 2007-07-19

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This is pretty interesting. I'm going to keep an eye out for the next chapter of this story.

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(Hello! ^_^ Here's the next part.)

Chapter 2: Enter Shaddix

As the Loonatics made their way over to the underground weapons plant, this agent was just entering the base. His gun and shield in each hand, he decided to go silent and took cover someplace dark and deep. He opened his communicator and spoke to his advisor.

"Joyce, this is Shaddix. I've reached the entrance," Shaddix said, slightly whispering into the communicator.

"Roger that, Shaddix. I've got you on the monitor. I see you. There are a few guards in the area, so this should be fairly easy." Joyce responded.

"Copy. I'm moving in," Shaddix replied, moving out into the open and finding some more cover.

The Loonatics were still a distance away from the base, so it would take some time for them to arrive and assist Shaddix.

Shaddix pressed a button on his shield, causing it to dissolve into particles and store itself in Shaddix's holster. He slipped out his gun and clipped a silencer on it. Slowly making his way to a service elevator, he shot a couple of the guards in order to not be noticed.

"Looks like this elevator's the only way up..." Shaddix said to himself as he pressed the button to call it.

A guard came around the corner and had spotted Shaddix.

"Hey, you!" The thug yelled as he aimed his gun towards him.

Using his incredible reflexes, it took Shaddix a split second to turn around to the thug and shoot him before the thug even had a chance to react. The elevator came. He stepped in and went up to a basement floor. Still on their way to the base, Zadavia contacted them. She appeared on a holo-screen.

"Loonatics, I have just recieved word that the agent has made his way to the entrance safely," Zadavia announced.

"Copy that, Zadavia." Ace said, looking at the screen.

"Also, I have recieved a full profile that contains all of the information of this agent." She added, bringing a different screen up and openeing a file with Shaddix's picture and everything.

"His name is Shaddix," Zadavia said.

"Shaddix? What kind of name is that?" Duck commented.

"A very rare and well-respected name, Duck..." She answered.

"Ok..." Duck said, quickly stopping his usual back-talk.

"We'll take a look at the info. Thanks, Zadavia." Ace said.

"Zadavia, out." She dissappeared from the holo-screen, leaving the profile up for them to look at.

"I don't know about you guys, but this guy looks like the real deal..." Ace commented.

"I know! Just look at that thick armor and that shield," Lexi added.

"Impressive..." Tech said respectfuly, nodding in agreement.

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Shaddix ?
The name sounds pretty unusual yet casual and perfect for unique fictional characters.

Shaddix sounds pretty cool and thank goodness he's a guy!
I thought for sure he would be a girl.

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Haha! Nah, it's a boy. And I agree that it is, indeed, a unique name. I'll post some more tonight or tomorrow.)

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Really cool! This is definately one fic that I'll keep an eye on!biggrin

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doggirl2772 wrote:

Really cool! This is definately one fic that I'll keep an eye on!biggrin



Thanks! I'll be doing the best I can. ^_^



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I think I like the name Shaddix. Keep up the good work.

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(Hello again! ^_^ #3! it might be a bit short, it might not.)

Chapter 3: Run-In

Shaddix had just made his way into the first part of the huge base. He continued on. Unfortunatly for the Loonatics, they arrived a little late to meet up with Shaddix.

"Does Shaddix even know we're coming?" Tech asked Ace.

"Maybe," Ace simply said, parking their bikes along the walls of the outer base.

Shaddix made his way through a few hallways, swiftly and silently taking out any thug that came his way. Although, Shaddix was in for a big surprise...

As the Loonatics made their way to the service elevator, they noticed some of the handy work that Shaddix left behind.

"It doesn't look like much, but I say that he made his way through he silently." Tech muttered.

"Wow-this-guy-is-top-notch-I-wish-we-were-that-good-we-would-be-kicking-butt-right-now-MAN-this-guy-is-" Rev was cut off.

"Rev!" The whole gang said in unison. Rev shut his trap.

"Kinda makes ya a bit jealous, eh Tech?" Ace joked.

"Oh, knock it off..." Tech crossed his arms as the rest of the team laughed.

They all entered the service elevator and went up, also noticing some more of Shaddix's handy work along the way down the hallways.

Slam grumbled. "Bad guys fall down," He muttered.

"Got that right," Lexi added.

"Let's just hope we meet up with this guy soon," Ace said.

Shaddix had finally entered a giant and dark room. All of the lights were off and everything seemed to be very quiet. He didn't have a good feeling about this.

"Something isn't right here..." He whispered.

Suddenly, the lights turned on, Shaddix being greeted with massive amounts of gunmen all pointing their guns at Shaddix. Pistols, machine guns, you name it. Shaddix now knew that this wasn't going to be easy. There was only one thing to do.

"Caught..." He muttered.

He dropped his pistol and slowly raised his hands high into the air.

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Chapter 4: Search and Rescue

As two thugs with guns walked up to Shaddix, one of them knocked him out with a baseball bat. He was brought to a holding cell just a little bit beyond the giant room.

"Alright, gang. We should be-" Ace was suddenly interrupted by a few thugs just donw the hall.

"Hey! It's the Loonatics! Get 'em!" One thug yelled as they opened fire on them.

"Aww, no you don't." Tech's eyes glowed green as he snatched the guns right from their hands.

Ace grinned, jumping at them and kicking them both in the face.

"That's 2 down, and probably a zillion ta go..." Ace muttered.

"Are we really going to be taking out ALL of the thugs?" Lexi asked.

"Only if we have to," Ace replied.

They soon entered the giant room Shaddix was just in, they were also being surrounded by thugs.

"Hey, you!" A thug yelled, the rest of the thugs moving their gaze onto the Loonatics.

"Uh-oh..." Ace muttered.

"Alright, you good for nothin' guards. You wanna piece of this?" Duck yelled, two fireballs in hand.

"Attack!" Ace yelled, everyone jumping off in different directions and fighting.

Little did the Loonatics know that they were in for a big surprise. While they were fighting the huge amounts of thugs in the what-looks-to-be a hanger, a giant thug wearing armor stepped into the room. This thug was very muscular and big, looking almost invincible. He somehow managed to step behind Ace without him noticing.

"Ace! Look-out!" Tech yelled.

"Huh?" Ace turned around behind him, being greeted by a huge thug.

The thug grabbed Ace by his neck, lifting him up into the air. With Ace being choked, the boss swung his fist at Ace, practically knocking him out cold. Tech was completely stunned, not knowing what to do. Nobody else did either. The thug flung him across the hanger, smashing into one of the Tanks that were stationed in the hanger. The thug let out a growl and exited. Once the rest of the Loonatics were finished fighting, they quickly ran over to Ace.

"ACE!" They yelled in unison.

Tech was surprised that he didn't have all of his teeth knocked out. However, he was bleeding a lot.

"Is he ok, Tech?" Lexi asked, concerned.

"He's fine, he's just knocked out cold," Tech replied.

"What're we gonna do? We can't just leave him here until he wakes up!" Duck commented.

"Slam will have to carry him. The rest of us will have to cover Slam whenever we're attacked," Tech said.

"Oh-this-is-just-great-first-this-big-lug-comes-in-punches-out-Ace-and-now-he-won't-wake-up-oh-this-is-the-worst-thing-EVER!" Rev went on.

"I know. We're in a pickle, but we'll just have to make due with the power we have." Tech said.

"C'mon. Let's find that agent already so we can get this over with," Duck commented, the rest of the team following. Ace was out cold on Slam's shoulder.

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Ooooh great story! I was on the edge of my seat!!!

Ace: Why is it that my pain in a story makes you happier?
Me: I dunno, maybe cause we hardly get to see a vulnerable you?

Anyways, this is great! I cant wait for your next chapter!! 

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(Finally! Here's Chapter 5!)

Chapter 5: Making the Entry

Shaddix had been stripped of all of his armor, leaving just his tanktop and his shorts. He soon woke up from his bang to the head, his eyes heavy.

"Ugh... Damn..." Shaddix stood up, his ears faltering.

Shaddix leaned against the cold wall, shivering.

"I guess I should've seen this coming," Shaddix muttered, sighing.

The Loonatics came to a fork in the hallway, one leading left and one leading right. They stopped while Lexi thought for a moment.

"Alright, guys. Here's how it's gonna work. Me and Rev will go right. Duck, Tech and Slam, go left."

They all nodded to each other and split up.

"Man... I feel so weak..." Shaddix muttered, sitting down and letting himself lean against the wall.

Shaddix got up and limped his way over to the front of the cell, noticing that his armor was on the other side of the hallway.

"Hey, that's my armor!" Shaddix said.

A thug stepped in front of Shaddix's eye-sight.

"That's right, boy. And it ain't- Ugh!" A punch was thrown by Lexi, knocking out the thug.

Shaddix backed away a little from the surprise punch. Lexi turned to Shaddix and stared at him for a second.

"...Shaddix?" Lexi asked.

Shaddix nodded.

"Can you get me out?" Shaddix asked.

"Sure, hold on." Lexi charged her lasers and shot at the bars, zapping them off of their hinges.

"Thanks," Shaddix smiled and went over to retrieve his armor.

Lexi noticed all of the gear he was putting on.

"You really fancy blue and black, don't you?" Lexi asked.

"Heh, it's top notch," Shaddix replied, grabbing his shield.

Lexi held out her hand.

"Lexi Bunny. Nice to meet you," Lexi said.

"Shaddix," He said, shaking her hand.

Rev held out his hand also.

"Rev-Runner-Sir!" Rev smiled cheerfully. "It's-an-honor-to-meet-the-president's-right-hand-man!" Rev added.

"It's an honor to meet you as well," Shaddix smiled, shaking his hand as well.

"Alright. Let's go back and find the others," Lexi said.

They all nodded and headed back in the direction they came.

-- Edited by TechxAce at 01:15, 2007-07-25

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[I normally do not review the fanfiction of other fans on message boards, (Although this is my first message board in years...), I really like how this is turning out.]

[...Wow, he cussed.  You do not have to change it, but...cussing is weird to me.]

[This reminds me of the fanfiction that I was supposed to be on working with someone else...but I think that they forgot about the idea...However, I am working on a fanfic with one of my online friends on Loonatics Unleashed, seeing as the other original writer is no longer writing their part of the story.]

[I am looking forward to reading another chapter.  Keep up the excellent work!]

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Thanks a million! ^^

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(Well, seeing that my friend had fallen asleep, I guess i'll write another. #6!)

Chapter 6: The Meeting

Lexi, Rev and Shaddix had finally managed to catch up with the rest of the gang. Ace was finally waking up as well. As Ace woke up, the whole group was huddled around Ace, including Shaddix.

"Aww, man... What happened...?" Ace rubbed his head, groaning.

"Hmm, let's see. You got your can kicked by tall and muscular," Duck commented.

"Give him some breathing room, guys." Shaddix urged everyone to step back a little.

"You alright, Ace?" Tech asked.

"Yeah, bud. I'm alright," Ace gave him a thumbs up, grinning as blood dripped from his mouth.

Tech did the same, grinning also. Ace looked over at Shaddix, smiling.

"So, you're the man's right hand man?" Ace joked, holding out his hand for a shake.

"You could say that," Shaddix said, chuckling and shaking his hand.

"Ace Bunny. And this is Lexi, Duck, Rev, Tech and Slam!" Ace introduced him to the team.

"It's an honor," Shaddix said, smiling.

Duck quickly went up to Shaddix, shaking his hand.

"Wow, might I say it is a PLEASURE to meet the man that works for the man! Tell me somethin'. HOW do you do it?! You are like, awesome!" Duck commented.

Shaddix just chuckled and looked at him.

"Many years of practice," Shaddix simply said.

"Alright, Duck. Movin' along!" Lexi said, grabbing Duck and heading down the hallway to the left.

Shaddix followed besides Ace, which was, of course, in the front of the pack. Tech looked at Shaddix in confusion and... maybe a hint of jealousy? Nah... It couldn't be jealousy... Was it?

-- Edited by TechxAce at 01:00, 2007-07-25

-- Edited by TechxAce at 01:16, 2007-07-25

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[Wow...a hint of jealousy?]

[...Poor Tech.  Will jealousy consume our favourite coyote Loonatic?  Only time (And encouragement) will tell.]

[I am really looking forward to reading more chapters.  However, you just need to make them longer.]

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Yeah, i'm trying to come up with some new ideas. I'll try harder next time.

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