Does this have a second chapter?
Anyway, enough technical stuffs....
BWAH!!!!!!!
You got Lexi's last words done very well. Good work!

OMG! Lexi's DEAD?!!

Eddie and Lil'D: Really?
Me: You two ain't involved in this! *kicks them*

Wow, that one almost made me cry. Good and sad story, Siamese.

Very emotional and atmospheric, not to mention sad. Well done.

NNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *runs around*

Holy crapiola! This sooooo reminds me of one of my fanfiction that I will be putting up pretty soon! GAH! THIS MAKES ME WANT TO PUT IT UP EVEN MORE! But I can't! I have to wait until I've finished a different one! *bangs head against wall*

*stares at computer screen waiting for next chapter*

its a little confusing siamese...

Oooh! I bet that...thing...is a mixture f both an android and a hologram!!!

...

did that make sense?

hum, iterseting invetion siamese. Whats it called.
Oh when will the next chapter be up? Pleas be ssoooooooonnnn!!

Lexirules: Yes she is dead it is a sad truth in this story

B-Cat: you'll hear the name in a up coming chapter

A-Cat: Curious ay? well hope you'll like this chapter

Ruth: You'll see soon a nuff.
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Chapter 3

 

Rev shot his head up, and sat up strait on the couch. He gave a inhale gasp. Non of the guys around him seemed to notes they all jest blankly looked at the TV. Rev closed his eyes and rubbed his head, trying to get rid of the memories that seemed to haunt him. He kept getting flashbacks from Though last few days of her life. Rev jest wished they would go away, every time he had one he felt like crying.

 

Rev looked up and saw Ace walk into the room, he didn't say any thing. Ace stood there by the end of the couch. Tech nodded to Ace, Ace nodded back in a greeting. Thats how the Loonatics seemed to communicate now a days, nods, grunt,and body jesters. Rev didn't like it much, but he didn't complain. Rev, like the others, jest didn't have or know what to say any more. Rev turned his gaze back onto the TV screen.

 

The credits of the show they where watching rolled up, and a commercial appeared. The 5 Loonatics, trapped with in there own minds of sorrow, gazed as the news came on.

 

“Hello Acmetropalis, this is Jenna Spark.” The a female voice came from the speaker, “And Jon Pale with your morning news,” A male voice said, “on to days agenda we have a shooting on the south side, a break in medical knowledge, and a new born baby with one interesting fetcher. Jenna how bout you start us off today' 'With pleasher Jon, but I'm afraid todays first story isn't that cheerful. Precisely one month ago Acmetropalisis Lexi Bunny, second in command of the supper hero team the Loonatcs, died in battle. With a planet in morning.....”

 

Ace grabbed the remote and changed the chanal only to find more news with the same story playing. Ace tossed the remote down. Hitting Duck in the lap making him jump a little. Ace walked out of the room, Rev could see the small blue puddles forming in the corner of Aces eyes soon to turn into tears.

 

Duck flipped around the chanals, not really knowing what he was looking for. In the end he jest shut it off. Rev stod up and walked to the door.

 

“Where you going Rev?” Tech asked in a dull depressed voice.

 

“I-I don't know, for a walk I guess.” Rev said slowly tacking his red jacket of a rack and putting it on.

 

“I think I'll join you.” Tech said getting off the couch, and getting his jacket as well.

 

The two walked down the streets, they weren't sure how long they where walking. The seasons where changing to the colder months, but Rev and Tech didn't the cold air nipping at there faces and exposed hands.

 

The two stopped in front of the enterns to a park. They didn't know what pulled them hear, maybe there subconsciouses that where still yearning for Lexi.

 

“Lexi Loved going to this park.” Rev stated reading the name of the park. Bumble Bee Park: defecated to the heroes of Acmetropalis.

 

“Ya, she sure did.” Tech returned.

 

Jest before they entered the park Tech put his had in his pocket, to feel a small robotic ball inside. He pulled it out and looked at it. It was one of inventions. He sighed at the site of it.

 

th-thank you Anonymous 
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Chapter 4

“It is an android, but like I said it has fetchers of a hologram.” Tech replied to Aces confusion, “See guys it's solid madder, but when danger, such as Ace lasers, is detected it gos from solid madder into into holographic wave lengths, throw undetected vibrations”

 

“Thats prity cool Tech.” Lexi complemented.

 

“I know. And when it scans one form it can change back into it at any given moment. So Lexi your form is now stored in its memory bank.” Tech snapped his fingers and the android Lexi terned back into the ball shape and flow back to Techs hand.

 

Tech pressed several buttons and let the ball fly from his hand again. This time it scanned Ace, Rev, and Tech.

 

“Okay, Holodroid show them what you can do.” Tech said to his invention.

 

The Holodroid went over to Ace and took his form. It leaned on Ace.

 

“Ne, Whats up Doc?” It said to a surprised looking Ace.

 

It morphed again, this time it to Rev. It Zoomed over to Rev, and started circling him.

 

“This-is-totally-sweet-sweet-sweet!-Holodroid-such-as-my-self-are-totally-amazing-stupendous-cool-fantastic!” It talked as fast, possibly faster, thin Rev.

 

Finally it zoomed over to Tech and took his form, walked around a little, and went back into it's original ball form.

 

“So what do you guys think of the Holodroid?” Tech asked his three teammates.

 

“Its awesome Tech, it defenetly give us an upper hand in attack.”Lexi said first.

 

“Lex is right. Think of it 6 of des little babes pretend to be us. The enemy attacks the holodroid with little effect, and thin we jump them when der confused. You've out don your self Tech.” Ace praised.

 

“Its-so-so-so-SWEET-Tech.-So-handy-and-smart-and-can-they-fight?-For-thin-there-even-more-of-an-advantage.” Rev jumbled out.

 

“Yes, Rev they can fight. Its part of its primary programing. Although the Holodroid won't be much of a use until I get more made.”

 

Jest thin the sound of Zadavia calling went off.

 

Yes. And it's getting really interesting. I can't wait for the next chapter.

thanks guys.

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Chapter 5

 

Tech put the Holodroid ball back into his jacket pocket. He speed up a bit in order to catch up to Rev, who had already started to walk around the park. It was now about midday, the sun was out, and the sky was a clear blue. A slit breeze was in the air. It filled Techs nostrils with the smell of trees, leafs, and the season of fall.

 

Still in silents the two best buds walked on. Tech looked around at his surrounding. Usually he would smile at the things he saw, but now every thing reminded him of Lexi.

 

Tech glanced at Rev. Rev was looking down at the pathmeant, with a half dead look. Tech, tired of the piercing silence, decided to start a conversation.

 

“So...uh...nice weather, huh?” Tech tried.

 

“I guess so.” Rev replied still staring at the ground.

 

“Oh come on Rev, jest look at the sky.” Tech said trying to reach his friend.

 

Rev sighed thin terned his glance up to the clouds. Rev stopped walking an stood ther looking up at the sky. Tech to stopped and looked up.

 

“Hay Tech? That cloud right there” Rev pointed up to the sky, “What douse it look like to you?”

 

“A rabbit.” Tech replied.

 

“And-and that one?” Rev pointed to another one.

 

“It looks kinda like a duck.”

 

“Ya,-and-that ones like-a-coyote,-and a- Rood runner-and -another-rabbit- and-a-Tasmanian.” Rev put his hand down and smiled up at the clouds.

 

Tech smiled to, but not at the clouds. Rev jest spoke as fast as he use to. The wind piked up a little and the cloud that looked like the second bunny diapered. Rev lowered his head down, so that he wasn't looking at the clouds any more.

 

Tech notesed a small tear fall from Revs beck, and heard a slit sniffling sound. Rev was crying.

 

“Rev whats wrong?” Tech asked.

 

“Lexi's really gone!?”

 

Tech looked down, and put a hand on Revs shoulder for comfort.

 

“I-I'm sorry Tech....I don't mean to cry.” Rev said.

 

“It's okay to cry Rev......Come on let head back to headquarters.”

 

“Okay.” Rev sniveled out.

 

When the two got back only one was in the mane room. Duck was blankly staring out the window.

 

 

 

Ya they do B-cat, and yes so sad

Oh Gawd I didn't mean to mack you cry doggirl, but I understand.
I've almost cried jest wrightin' it.

Any who, for thoughs who are still reading hear is a sneek peek for the next chapter.

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“Whats the porblamo Zadavia?” Ace asked as he took his seat with the others at the meeting table.

“Well Ace” the holographic Zadavia addressed them, “a supposable mad man is running loose in the 5th quadrant of the city”

“Mad man! That sound more like a job for the insane asylum, not us superheros.” Duck sarcastically commented.

“Duck, I don't think Zadavias finished.” Lexi said to him.

“Indeed I am not.” Zadavia said.

“Smart moth.” Duck said under his breath, Lexi shooting him a annoyed look.
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Well any questions or remarks?

(A little got cut off there at the end) 

“Hay Ace! If your dun drooling over her will you come over heir, unless you want me to tack leadership!” Ace and Lexi gave Duck killing looks as they ran over, back to the battle filed.

(End Of Chapter 6)

-- Edited by Siamese712 at 14:44, 2007-09-30

Wow, Been a wile sens my last up date with this so hears a little teser on the next chapter...

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With a sad frown plaesed upon his face, Duck quietly sighed and left the room. He aimlessly wondered around the hall ways of Loonatics HQ. The HQ, thought of as a mighty Mount Olympus where 6 heavenly gods once rolled and protected the people of Acmetropalic, had fallen from its heavenly pedestal to the quiet, live less, laugh less, void of a ghost town it was now. Duck didn't enjoy the sadness that lurked around him every day now from the heavenly fall, so in the speck of hope duck went to the trainer to find some kinda relief from the horror of this joyless void.
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Okay so this chapter is a bit short but it shows a deep and sad side of Danger Duck

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Chapter 7

Duck blinked a couple of times as he continued to stare out the window. He heard Rev and Tech return from there walk, although he gave them no acknowledgment. Maybe it was the fact that it was the one month anniversary sens the accident, but Duck jest kept spacing out and going back to thous final few days of her life.

With a sad frown placed upon his face, Duck quietly sighed and left the room. He aimlessly wondered around the hall ways of Loonatics HQ. The HQ, thought of as a  mighty Mount Olympus where 6  heavenly gods once rolled and protected the people of Acmetropalic, had fallen from its heavenly pedestal to the quiet, live less, laugh less, void of a ghost town it was now. Duck didn't enjoy the sadness that lurked around him every day now from that heavenly fall, so in the speck of hope duck went to the trainer to find some kinda relief from the horror of this joyless void.

Duck gave a simple command and the dark room of the trainer changed into a old fashioned gym. He rapped two peaces of cream colored cloth a round his hands as he approached a brown punching bag.  Duck fearsly started to strike the false bag of sand; blowing strong attacks agents the leather textured serves.

As he continued to throw fatal blows to the inanimate object crystal blue puddles formed there way around the edges of his blue eyes. With every punch came a memories of where he would taunt her, make fun of her, tees her, or be a flat out jerk to her. It was either from the rush of memories or from the tears blurring his vision, Ducks punches became more week and reckless until he collapsed to his knees in mournful fall.

Duck sat there in fearsome sobs as he wished for so many things. How he wished he hadn't been suck a jerk to her, how he wished he had spent more time talking with her, listening to her, helping her, getting to know her, but most of all how he wished Lexi still lived.

Shibuyah: Thank you for comenting. Ya I should work on my spelling. Yes poor Lexi, but you never know when a twist mite apper
*shifty eyes*

A-Cat: Thank you as well.

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Chapter 8

“All right Loonatics lets kick it into high gear!” Ace said as he and Lexi returned to the front of the group.

Slam grumbled some thing before starting up a taz-tornado and charging turds  the Terrible Tank.

“No! Slam Wait!” Ace yelled to the Tasmanian, but Slam was unable to hear Aces holler.

The Terrible Tank raised his hand up again as another blue wave shot forth. Forcing Slam back casing his tornado to suck up all the Loonatics and send them all flying backward in to the hover bikes. 

“HaHa... If this is the best you got thin Acmetropalic is in trouble. I'll be seeing you all later.” Bellowed The Terrible Tank as he disappeared, seemingly, into thin air.

The Loonatics sat up aching all over from there landing.

“okay....That-could-have-gone-better.” Rev commented from his spot on the ground. Rev pushed Duck, who had landed on him, off.

“Well it seems that are mad man has baled on us for now.” Tech said as he got up.

With a heave sigh Ace stood up, “All right, lets get back to HQ den. Not much we can do hear now.”

“Thanks Slam.” Duck aggressively whispered to the Tasmanian devil.

They arrived back at HQ rather late and all decided to hit the sack sens nothing more could be done that day. The next day the Loonatics all thought and searched for where the Tank mite appear next.

Slam however only had half his mind on that. He was preoccupied with guilt from letting the Tank get away. Lexi sensed his unhappiness and sat next to him at the meeting table.

“Whats wrong Slam?” Lexi asked in a soothing voice.

“Nothin'” Slam grumbled.

Lexi set her hand on his shoulder, “Hay now, don't give me that.” She carried a caring sound in her words, “I can sens something wrong. Now you know you can tell me.”

“Agri I gvetak dehanstoexapenow tank to mhe stllout ere.” Slam grumbled, telling Lexi what was on his mind.

“Slam, it wasn't your fault. You weren't able hear Ace. You didn't mean for Tank to get away, and you would of stopped him if you could.”

“Ya?”

“Ya!”

“T'anks.”

“No problem Slam.” As Lexi finished a alarm calling all Loonatics sounded. Lexi and Slam went to the hanger where the others where waiting.

“Whats happening?” Lexi asked as she fallowed the others into one of the teams jets.

“We jest got another sightin' of the Tank.” Ace answered as he buckled in, “All right Loonatics lets jet!”

They sored off to Acme Park for round two with The Terrible Tank. The Loonatics landed the jet and exited.

“So where is Mr. Mad man?” Duck asked.

“Right hear.” The loonatics terned around to see Terrible Tank standing in a near by tree.

MUST HAVE MORE!!!!!!!!

Chapter 9

Slam rubbed his head as he walked down the hallways of  HQ. His thoughts kept trailing off and engulfing him within her last moments of life. Slam was tugged away from his unpleasant memories as he heard small sobs coming from the trainer. He quietly peeked his head in and saw Duck in a mournful pile on the floor.

Slam decided not to disturb him, as comforting people was not his strong point. He started walking down the hallway again until a loud grumble came forth from his stomach. Slam put his hand over his gargling stomach. It had been some time sens the last time he ate. Now that he thought about it last time he ate was the day before last.

Sighing Slam headed for the kitchen to find something to shush his crying belie. He entered the room to see Rev siting at the table with his head and neck lied down flat on the dining table, and a glazed look in his eyes. Slam walked over to the refrigerator and grabbed a whit container from one of its many shelfs.

He sat down at the table with the container of left overs and reluctantly started eating. Rev gave him a almost cross eyed glans before going back to staring at his own daydreams. Slam let out a small, solitary, tear.

He hated how every one acted, hated how no one talked, hated how the place seemed so dark and sad, hated how every thing was losing meaning, and he was even starting to hate his own existents. He knew he shouldn't be thinking this way, but as hared as he tried he couldn't stop.

Slam looked up when Ace entered the kitchen. Ace looked worn, with small bags growing under his eyes.  Ace grabbed a drink from the frig as Slam continued to chew his food slowly. The three boys looked up as the doors hissed open to revel there boss, Zadavia.

Ever sens Lexis death Zadavia made frequent visits to her beloved Loonatics. Zadavia approached Ace.

“Hello, Ace.” Zadavia sadly greeted.

“Hi.” Ace said not really looking up at his boss and friend.

Slam quietly listened to there conversation. 

“How are things?” Zadavia asked.

Ace shrugged, “I guess things are all right...Considering.”

“I see,” Zadavia placed her hand on Aces shoulder, “Ace I'm afraid you, and the others, will have to go back to active duty. Its been a month sens the accident and we are lucky that there has been no attacks. You and the team will have one more week before you have to go back to work.”

“I understand Zadavia even with Le....her being gone...where still  heroes and still have a duty to the city.”

“Ace,” He looked up at her, “Try and get some sleep. You look very tiered.”

“Ya, I know. It jest dat every time I try to sleep I dream of that...” Ace trailed off with a mornfull look.

Slam looked up at his tired leader. Slam, like the other, knew that ever sens Lexi died Ace got nightmares. All ways bring him back to the day he watched her die in his arms. At least that what moment Slam suspected Ace kept reliving. When the nightmares first happened Aces cries could be heard from any where with in the tower.

Now only Slam could hear them, after all Slams room was right next to Aces.  Zadavia gave her good-byes and left.  Ace left the room as well. Leaving Slam to his food and Rev to his pointless staring. 

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For any one whos still reading this thing The next chapter will revel how Lexi died and the Loonatics reaction.

Stargirl: Thank you, but every one knows you cant come back from the died (unles your ona sopeXP) but ya....Well maybe in a nother story. ;)

Wow. Considering the spelling mistakes are in the last chapter, you sure are making me full of sadness with this fic. Keep up the good work though.

Lexis eyes where wide, her lower lip was trembling unable to speech, as she looked down wards. From a few inches above her hip bone, going though the belie button, up to jest below her  rib cage was the Sword of Sundra. The tip of the blade was sticking out of her back  with crimson colored liquid falling from it.

Ace could see the red falling from her body. 'No' He thought 'this can't be happening'. Try as he mite Ace could not relies his eyes from the site in front of him.

A whisper of a gasp was released from her body as it was jerked forward a little at the removal of th sword. She cast her gaze at the welder. She saw no pity, no shock, no accident in his face. What she saw was pleased eyes and a vice sneer.

Lexi fell to her knees then limply fell onto her side, unable to catch her self. Ace could see her body barely shack. He closed his eyes for the first time. He felt the heat of anger flow through out his blood as tears of sadness and hatred fell from his shut eyes. As he opened his blurred eyes he leaped to his feet, grabbed his sword and lunged his body at Teri.

With a loud anguished cry, Ace hit the Sword of Sundra out of Teri's hand, casing it to land with the tip in the ground, and sent a knock out blow to the base of Teri's neck. Teri fell down the steps and into the grass.

Ace then dropped his sword and rushed to the left side of his fallen team mate. He, as gently as he could, set her on her back. Lexi let out a grunt of pain as he did so. She was conscious and breathing deeply. Ace looked her over only to notes a pool of blood around her body.

“Lexi,” Aces voice shook as he held her left hand, “Lexi no. dis.”

Ace couldn't finish. The other gathered round as well. Tech knelled on the ground at Lexis right side, Slam gently lifted her head up in his hands slightly, Rev and Duck unsure of any way they could help sat at her feet.

“Theres so much blood.” Rev said scared at the site in front of him.

Ace quickly took off the armer part of his right arm, tossed it aside, and griped the cloth on his arm. With one strong tug on the cloth he tore the arm off.

“T-tech tell me what to do!” Ace pleaded. Tears now stained his face as more continued to droop. He wasn't the only one crying.

“Tack the cloth and apply presser to the wound!”

“AHWW!”Lexi screeched painfully. She griped Aces bare arm with pain.

“Tech that only hurts her!”

“Yes it will hurt but we don't stop the...”Tech couldn't finish but Ace got the idea.

Again Lexi let out a honorable scream. Ace could hear the sirens in the distant back ground. They wouldn't make it.

Siamese! Now I'm crying! You really got her last words sounding right though! Great work.

stargirl: Ya as I said I was crying to and I made the thing!
A-cat: No Teri di not die becos unlike Teri Ace is no murderer.

I'll try to get the next chapter up soon.