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Loonatics Campfire Story: Dark Quest

Mistress of Fear · Martian

Here is the update! Finally Rev get's some lines!

[DerbyFanatic: Happy B-Day WDC!]   Both Flame and Amanessa gave a bit of a scowl that made Tech feel very stupid.

"Sorry about Tech. How can we help you?" Lexi asked.

Both Flame and Amanessa smiled and then looked to the sky.

"We need you to try and track down the star by any means necessary, if you would feel better, we will aid you. But there will be times that we can't be with you in physique, so we would use either Hollograms, like how Zadavia contacted you, or by using the fine art of Telepathics.

The Loonatics gang just looked at each other, then back at the two Equines...

[winter_rose]   "Telepathics?" Slam asked, " Like reading eachothers minds or something?"

Amanessa nodded. "Yes, indeed we can't help you some part of the way, but we can assit you in different forms."

Flame snorted, "We'd best get on with it!"

Tech and Lexi were close behind the two horses. The rest looked puzzled at them from a distance away when Amanessa called, "You probably want to come before something else does..."

That's when they scampered up to catch up.

[Twiga]   Rev Runner, was zipping ahead as usaul (his power was super speed after all) and Lexi looked curiously at Tech

"What?" Asked Tech

"Normally your not such a naysayer..." Lexi began but Tech cut her off

"I don' t know the law of pysics of this universe." He sighed

[DerbyFanatic: Happy B-Day WDC!]   Flame and Amanessa lead the way down a path that made The Loonatics jaws drop as the senery was as if they where in a cross between earth and The Twilight Zone.

Lexi looked ahead and yelled out to Flame,

"Has this world always looked weird?"

Flame snickered

"Not exactly".

[winter_rose]   "What do you mean?" Lexi questioned, " 'Not exactly', this place is just too wierd!"

Flame snorted and reared in front of Lexi and the rest of the Loonatics to show that he wasn't pleased.

Amanessa stepped in. She scowled Flame for his impatienance, and just when Tech was going to speak for him and the Loonatics, Amanessa disappeared...

[Twiga]   In Amanessa's place was a sly-looking cat wearing a wizard's robe

"Sekmet!" gasped Flame

"Who?" Duck said puzzled as usaul

"So you summon heroes from another universe to undo my masters curse?" the feline hissed

"Hey-Kitty-if you're master-is the-one-who-cursed-this place then we'll..." Rev didn't get to finnish his sentence for the Cat clawed the roadrunner's cheek

"That was you first warning!" Sekmet snarled

"Where's Amanessa?" Ace Bunny growled fireing up his laser vistion

"At the Mountain of Doom! If you want her, come and get her!" and with that she dissapered in a puff of smoke

"You bet we will" Rev shoted holding his stinging cheek

-- Edited by Mistress of Fear at 18:44, 2007-09-17

Mistress of Fear · Martian

Here's an update!

[DerbyFanatic: Happy B-Day WDC!]   The Lonnatics continued on, bound to find Amanessa.

[winter_rose]   Flame kept quiet most of the way to the Mountain of Doom, where the trickster of Sekmet kept Amanessa captive.

On the way there, Lexi and Trch kept themselves busy by talking between eachother. Rev and Slam, plus the rest of the Loonatics kept close to Flame.

Lexi and Tech were talking about school back in their universe when Tech brought up a new subject..

"Do you think Flame has feelings for Amanessa?"

"I don't know...maybe.." Lexi replied.

[Twiga]   "Sekmet!" Boomed a loud voice

"Yes master!" Said the cat

Her master was a man with the head of a goat

"Summon the Loonatic's ennemy Sypher!"

[DerbyFanatic: Happy B-Day WDC!]   "S....S...ss.s.s..ss...Sypher?" said Sekmet.

"Is there en echo in here? YES! GET SYPHER! Do It! Or You'll pay with your remaining humanity you pathetic excuse for a woman." Said her master

Sekmet quickly ran off...summoning her servents to find Sypher

[winter_rose]   The Loonatics made camp in the Forbidden Forest, only a few hours down the high slope of the Mountain of Doom. Flame had still said nothing, and Lexi and Tech became close...not too close.

Just when a bit of spark of happiness hit camp with Slam's humorous jokes, a distant sound of wild horses struck.

Flame was the first to react. He reared and fled to the darkness of the undergrowth, bringing back with him a herd of four other horses. One bay, one gray, one black, and one spotted like the starry night back home.

Flame snorted. "Meet the Midnights," he boomed, " the herd of the Twilight Relam."

Ace was lost in his thoughts...One, two, three, four...Flame and Amanessa. Six horses, six of us...

The bay horse stepped out and spoke. "I am Ellgor, and this is Eveloyn, Harpori, and Gradewy."

The Loonatics took note that Ellgor was the great bay stallion, Eveloyn was the gray mare, Harpori was the middle-sized black gelding, and last but not least the tiny spotted, white and brown filly was Gradewy.

Ace stood. "Strange is it? There are six of you and six of us.."

"You haven't noticed this is destiny?" A great voice boomed behind them...

[Twiga]   "Who said that?" asked Duck

"I am the night itself I am in the air and trees and earth."

"Good Night!" Rev exclaimed

"Darn Strait." Aswered the voice

"Loonatics beware Sypher is comeing and he will try to steal your powers so do not let him touch you."

the voice faded

[DerbyFanatic: Happy B-Day WDC!]   The Loonatics where still in a daze, when Flame quickly grabbed their attention by hitting his hoof on the ground rather loudly.

"Ow!" Lexi said, "What was that for?"

Flame couldn't help but chuckle a bit...

"I need to tell you something else..." Flame motioned swinging his eyes from left to right

Tech sort of guffed but Lexi hushed him quickly

"Sorry about him Flame, please continue," Lexi motioned to continue...

[winter_rose]   Flame, Ellgor, Eveloyn, Harpoi, and Gradewy stood before the Loonatics, and one by one they shared an ancient story that was said to be their destiny.

"Six horses, six of you," Flame began.

"Two leaders," Eevelyon snapped, " and one mishap."

"One younger," Ellgor snorted.

Harpoi nickered, " One wizard."

And Gradewy finsihed with a chiller, "And one doomed to kill the rest."

[Twiga]   "I beg your pardon?" Tech said befuddled

That moment Sypher tumbled into veiw but he had changed, no longer was he a villanous youg man with spikey red and gold hair now he was...

"Jumpin Jehosefat! Sypher's a goat!" Duck exclaimed

"Help ME!" Sypher wailed "I was pulled through some hole and now I have a goat head!"

"That's sort of the law of this universe." snickered Harpori "Now humans only animals."

"What about them?" Sypher pointed at the loonatics

"In case you haven't noticed we're animals" Ace said tugging on his long rabbit ear for empthsis

"Look's like we'll take you down easy." Lexi said fireng up her brain blast

Mistress of Fear · Martian

Why dose no one want to comment on this

story? Anyway here is some more.

[winter_rose]   Sypher, puzzled, back up and hit a dark tree. The six steeds surrounded them, and the Loonatics slowly tied him up to the tree.

They galloped away, with one there to stay.

Lexi was left behind, to await her doom of killing the rest, and awaiting her destiny with Amanessa, pounded at the tip of the Mountain of Doom..

[Twiga]   "I don't understand" Lexi sobbed into her hands

"Why dose this stupid destiny say I have to kill the rest?!"

"Maybe we can make a deal" Sypher called out to her

[DerbyFanatic: Happy B-Day WDC!]   Lexi spun around and glared at Sypher,

"why would I make a deal with you?"

Sypher just sighed...

"I know this world, better then those fools..."

[winter_rose]   Lexi strengthened her gaze, and locked it with Sypher's.

"They are not such fools as you think! They are all family, no matter what will happen! I will never kill them, never! Even so if destiny is heaved onto my shoulders like weights!"

Strong girl, Sypher thought...I wonder...

[Twiga]   "I was only going to suggest..." Sypher said trying to seem helpful "That you could give me your powers so you coulden't kill them"

Lexi knew what he was up to

"Shame on you if you fool me once" She said with moral supirority "Shame on me if you fool me twice."

"Only a suggestion" Sypher sighed

Meanwhile Sekmet watched everything from her crytalball

"Sypher is no use to us perhaps now that all the male loonatics are away from the only girl..."

Sekmet then turned into a beautiful princess

"Perhaps my human form will melt their hearts to jellly" She purred

[DerbyFanatic: Happy B-Day WDC!]   Meanwhile, Flame, the other 6 Equines and The Loonatics where on their way to the mount that had been explained in their message with Sekmet.

[winter_rose]   Sekmet, now a beautiful princess from the Loonatics Rennasuance age, wandered into the shadows to hear upon Spyher and Lexi's conversation, and to make sure her destiny is fulfilled once and for all.

"Shame on you!" Sekmet cried, she shook a finger at Sypher. "Do not wander away from home for the third time!"

Lexi didn't reconize Sekmet in her human form.

"Sekmet? Is that you?" the tied goat said.

"Shame on you to fool me for a third time!" Sekmet boomed.

Princess has a point... Lexi thought.

[Twiga]   Meanwhile Rev Runner who had been worried about Lexi decided to zip back breifly just to see how she was doing (Rev being younger the more naive did not take the whole destiny thing seriosly)

He had zoomed down the mountain and stopped when he saw Sekmet's blond hair and silvery skin

"Sweet meep-meep!" Rev said under his breath "Who is that breathtaking chick?"

No one was aware of the Roadrunner's presnce untill...

[DerbyFanatic: Happy B-Day WDC!]   (

Oh twiga, that last sentence is pricelses!)

Sekmet picked up his presence. Sekmet, even though she was in human form, still gave herself the super sensitive feline eardrums.

Rev quickly notice he was caught, but instead of acting angry, Sekmet actually acted in a sence of surprise and welcome.

Mistress of Fear · Martian

Here we go! In this episode Rev is in peril!

[winter_rose] "Hello dear, how are you today?" Sekmet politly asked the Roadrunner.

Rev was mezmorized. "Nothing, just checking on Lexi."

"Lexi, well she isn't here right now."

"What do you mean? She was here, right?"

"Let's just say she went up the mountain," Sekmet said, half-gigging.

"By herself? She could be killed!" And the Roadrunner sipped away from the scene.

"Not before I catch you first, Roadrunner," Sekmet whispered...

[Twiga] Lexi saw what Sekmet had done and Rev was heading back up the mountain and the princess was following

"I have to save Rev and the others." Lexi whispered to herself Just then a little mouse crept toward her, placed a silvery pebble at her feet and whispered "For you Lexi." and ran off

Lexi picked up the pebble and felt a strange and wonderful warmth
"Could this be a piece of the star?" The female bunny wondered

Meanwhile Rev was searching for Lexi when his foot got cuaght in a crevice and he coulden't pull it out!

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[DerbyFanatic: Happy B-Day WDC!]   "Come on! Budge!" He yelled, but it was stuck solid...

[winter_rose]   "It's part of a wishing star!" Lexi exclaimed. She squeezed the silvery pebble in her palms, and slowly, like a walking turtle, did the stone become dust. Fairy dust?

Sprinkling the dust around her, as it was though gravity cancelled, it looked as if the half-falling, half-frozen fairy dust of a wishing star had made an auroa around Lexi.

She whispered, "I wish I could save Rev and the others." Every so gently, like the brush of a raven's paintbrush, and as rough as the fang of a dragon, Lexi giggled, and when she stepped through the frozen/falling fairy dust, did it disappear.

[Twiga]   Lexi' black and pink super suit dissapeared.

Now she had a bright pink dress!

Also she and all the other loonatics had been teleported into the Master's castle! Next to Amanessa's dungeon cell!

"I knew you would come!" The mare wept with joy!

[DerbyFanatic: Happy B-Day WDC!]   The Loonatics looked at eachother and then at Lexi...

"What happened?" They all said at once..

[winter_rose]   Lexi looked longingly through a labyrinth of words and formed a sentance to explain things to the other five Loonatics.

"This little silvery purple and black mouse dropped a pebble at my feet! I picked it up and noticed it was part of a wishing stone. Then, I somehow out of nowhere made it into some fairy dust, stepped through and now I'm here!" Lexi exclaimed.

Ace, Rev, and Tech exchanged glances. Then Tech spoke, "We always knew you were crazy, but now--" he couldn't finish what he was going to say, for Amanessa interuptted her.

"The destiny is an imposter! 'Doomed to kill the rest', how foolish! It's the girl of purity and immortality that always gets the wishing stone. She whomever, gets one wish, and everything else mends together naturally."

"But what about Sypher?" Rev asked.

"He won't be with us anymore...for I am him..."

Turning on their heels, Sekmet, in her princess form, changed into another human form, half-human, half-dragon...

[Twiga]   Suddenly the rest of the Loonatic's suits dissapered and in their place were medeivl tunics and trousers

Rev's was red, Slam's was purple, Ace's yellow, Tech's green, Duck's orange

Sekmet luaghed "OH I'm SO scared!" She mocked

But if you want to end this curse you must fight my master first!

And just as she said that her master appeared in the form of a great dragon/goat!

[DerbyFanatic: Happy B-Day WDC!]   The Loonatics gang pretty much stood their speechless, untill Sekmet's master began to speak.

[Twiga]   The great animal howled and said.

"Kill me and you will fufill your destiny."

Mistress of Fear · Martian

[DerbyFanatic: Happy B-Day WDC!]
"All the Loonatics will defeat your sorry tail", one of the younger Equines spoke out.

"Oh great, way to go peabrain," Rev said in his head.

"WE WILL DEFEAT YOU AND BE VICTORIOUS!" Lexi yelled and actually laughed at the same time.

This brought a smile over Flame and Amanessa smile.

[winter_rose]   {i]I must be doing something right against stupid destinies.. Lexi thought.

"Foolish bunny!" Sekmet's master boomed. He clicked a talon and slowly Lexi faded...

Rev called out to her but it was too late. Lexi was gone..not totally..perhaps..

[Twiga]   Ace, took his sword and stabbed the beast's leg!

Tech used his magnetic powers to pull an axe from the wall and he cut an ear off!

[DerbyFanatic: Happy B-Day WDC!]   As the guys quickly began to destroy the Anthro Goliath, the girls quickly used their abilities to try and free Amanessa.

[Twiga]   Tech, slashed with his battle axe and cut the beast's belly open suddenly the sun and the moon spilled out

"O Joy!" Cryed Flame "The spell is broken! At last we have light again!"

Ace and Rev still enraged about the 'death' of Lexi tore open the cheast and thousands of stars poured out

Lexi also spilled out! She was unconsious and lay fast asleep in the light

[DerbyFanatic: Happy B-Day WDC!]   "Lexi!" everyone yelled?

[Twiga]   Lexi woke up a little dazed,

"Lexi! You're alive!" Said Ace

"I guess I am." Lexi said with a smile

"Look over there!" Duck said

The sun was taking it's place in the sky and as it did the countryside turned green and soft insted of the hard and twisted form it had been

"We knew you would save us" Amanessa said "You are truly the greatest heores in the multiverse!"

"Thank you." Lexi said as she and the rest of the Loonatic's bowed

"You can go home now." Flame nickered "I will take you there myself. Follow me!"

They followed Flame into the very heart of the sun! There was a flash of light then nothing

When the Loonatics came to they were back in HQ

"Was it all a dream?" Ace asked

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[DerbyFanatic: Happy B-Day WDC!] Thats when they heard their monitor flicker and a faded video came to the screen...

"Why, its them! Flame and Amanessa!" they all yelled at once.

"It wasn't a dream!"

They heard the two start to speak...

[Twiga] "We will be forever grateful to you." Said Flame

"Come to our realm anytime." Nickered Amanessa

"The door is always open jusy look to the sky!" They both said at once

A rainbow appeared over Acmetropilis all the Loonatics looked and smiled

"We will go back there won't we?" Lexi asked Ace

"Of coarse we will" Ace said "One day, someday soon."

"But for Today," Said Tech "There so much to be done here."