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i ve decided to do two fan fictions at the same time.

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Prologue:
One Day Ace, Lexi, Rev and Slam are playing a game of poker, while Tech and Duck are watching SNL.

Man on t.v: And now a tribute to SNL's cast member Jimmy Fallon.

Jimmy:Tonight there is a new specimine scientists haven't discovered yet but i............(looking up at the glowing light) OMG tina they've come for me, they've finally come.........

Tina: Who?

Jimmy: The Aliens. I'm going home.

Duck:(points to the t.v with the remote) Uh, Comedies, Not my type i must say.

Tech: Come on , Duck show you're sence of style.

Duck: The only style im getting from here is Slam coodies.

(Tech glared at Duck.)
(All of the sudden Steve popped on the screen.)

Steve: Duck, Tech, i Need your Help!

End of prologue.

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Chapter 1: Steve's emergancy.

Duck: What's the problem now, Stevo?

Steve: Ok, um, i have a giant creature in my basement and it stung me and it's spreading hurry up! warn everybody! Qui--

Tech: This is not good.

Duck: Come on ,Tech, let's tell, Ace.

Tech: Ace! Ace!

Ace: What is it Tech?

Tech: It's Steve.
(Everybody else gasps in the room.)

Duck: Yeah, and he'll be a goner if we don't save him!

Ace: Ok, come on, loonatics, Let's jet!(The loonatics leave their HQ and go save Steve.)

Duck: Uh, which way is Steve's house again?

Tech:(sighs)We should be there in approximently 6.7 seconds.

Rev: And-were-here!

Lexi: Whoa. Looks like Steve might wanna clean up his house.

Slam: Where's Steve?

Ace: Good question, Sl--(He paused and saw Zadavia appearing on the communicator.)

Zadavia: Ahh, there you are, Loonatics, where in the heck were you?

Ace: We knew about Steve.

Zadavia: Oh. Have you found him ,yet?

Ace: Were on it right now, zadavia, still looking.

Zadavia: I hope he's alright bring him back safely here and pack his belogings, Zadavia out.

Lexi: Steve! Steve! where are ya,buddy?!

Steve:(Says in a weak voice) Herrrrrre.

Tech:(gasp) OMG steve what happened to you?

Steve:(weak voice) I...I....I......have a weak vo....voi......voice.

Duck: You what?

Ace: I think he said he has a weak voice.

Rev: I-know-how-he-could-get-better.
(The loonatics pack Steve's things and took Steve safely back to HQ and followed Rev's lead.)
(Rev provided Steve a special medicine drink that destroys weak voices.)

Ace:So Steve let's try this again, what happened?

Steve: Well, you know i was listening to music and then this weird-looking creature appered in front of me, then i got scared and called you guys.(pointing at Tech and Duck.)You guys were sort of a little late.

Lexi: Sorry Steve.

Steve: It's Okay.

Tech:Your belongings are safely in Ace's room.

Steve: Thanks, you guys.

Duck:No problem, we don't want you to you know ,die!

Steve: Yes, i know.

Lexi: So what did this creature looked like?

Steve: It looked undead.

Ace: Undead ,huh. Let's go find any evidence at Steve's house tomorrow.

Duck: What about Stevie wonder here?

Ace: Spend the week here.

Steve: cool.

End of Chapter 1.

-- Edited by steve123 at 17:06, 2007-11-16

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Chapter 2:Steve's new game

Duck:Lovely we got Stevie wonders sleeping with us for a week.

Ace:Duck.

Duck:What?!

Ace: Ok,Steve, here is a room where you can sleep,hope you like it.

Steve:Like it! I Love it! It's perfect!

Duck: That's great.(fake laugh)weirdo.

(The Loonatics and Steve went to bed, The next morning Steve walked into the kitchen and and Tech appeared behind him.Steve was listening to his music while getting breakfast.)

Steve: "Well, i found Authority, Authority always win---" Whoa! Good gosh, Tech you've almost gave me a heart attack!

Tech: Shhhhh. you'll wake up ,Rev.

Steve: Sorry.

Tech: Were you singing?

Steve:No.. Why would i be singing?(Steve lied.)

Tech: You've got some voice there,Buddy.

Steve:Uh, Thanks. Do you guys make Eggs Benidict?

Tech: Eggs Benny? Yep we sure do Steve.

Steve: Excellent.
(Steve made Tech and himself and Rev some Eggs Benny,they hid the leftovers for Rev to protect from Slam.)

Duck: Better hide it guys, Slam is Hungry. 
(A few moments later Steve hid the food and Rev came in.)

Rev:Hey!- Wait-a-minute-who-made-us-breakfast?

Ace:Steve & Tech.

REv: Steve?

Steve: Oh, right here, we had to hide it from Slam we put some seasame seads in it too so,enjoy.

(Rev ate his Bennys as fast as he could.A hour after everybody is dressed Lexi was looking for Steve.)

Lexi: Steve! Steve! Steve! Has Anybody seen Steve?!

Duck: I know where he is.

Lexi: Duck, can you give this to him?(Lexi hands him a package.)

Duck: Steve!

Steve: What!!!

Duck: You are deff with those earphones on.Package.

Steve: Oh, uh....Thanks.
(Steve sat down and opened his package.)

Steve:Whoa! Hey, guys i got my order! Whoo hoo!
(Everybody started to gather around Steve.)

Ace: What'd you get, Steve?

Steve: A newwwwwwwww game: Heroes Of Might And Magic 5 and i've been waiting for it foor sooooooooo long! And finally!I'll go install it right away.

(Steve installed the game on his computer and there was a pop-up that said" Be carefull what you sayor it might be your last".

Steve: Ok, i don't know why that's there.

(Steve left the room for a quick second and all of the sudden all these random colours start to glow.)

Steve:OMG! That is creepy.

Tech: Hey,Steve what's so---Huh!

Duck: What is going in in there you better not be ignoring me with your deff ear phones again--huh! ( Duck stars screaming of the face that appears on the screen.)

Evil voice:(Laughing)

(Steve,Tech and Duck are Sceaming.)

End of Chapter 2.









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Chapter 3: An Unexpected new game.

Steve:What in the hell is that!

Duck:I,I,I don't know. I'm scared to death.

Tech:How did this appear?

Steve: I don't know, a pop-up appeared and said"Be carefull what you say or it'll be your last".

Duck: What does that mean?!

Steve: How am i supposed to know! It must be a virus or something!

Tech: I'll be right back!

Steve:Oh, great, Tech ditched us,lovely.

Duck: Darn him.

Steve: Looks like it's just you, me and this whatever you call it.
Duck! try shooting an energy egg Quickly it might work!

Duck: Ok, here we go!(Duck shot out 3 energy eggs at the thing.

Steve: Whoa!

Duck: I know, it didn't work.

Steve: Not that. I have super powers now and that virus thing it's gone.

Duck: You have powers?

Steve: Yeah, my clone must have told you before we even met.

Tech: Alright, guys i'm back! Huh? Where'd it go?
How in the heck did you get rid of it?

Duck: Don't look at me, it was Steve who saved us both.

Tech: Steve, how'd you do it?

Steve: My telekenis.

Ace: What happened i heard screaming.(Steve told the story to Ace and then it was time to investigate.)Whoa.

End of Chapter 3 short chapter.

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Chapter 4: The games information.

Ace: So this thing came out of nowhere just like that?

Steve: Yeah it did, me Tech, and Duck were screaming our heads off right?
( Tech and Duck nodd.)

Ace: Hmm. Duck, bring me the box.

Duck: I'm not going in there again.

Ace: Fine, Steve you do it.

Steve: Alright,BRB.
(Steve leaves the room.)

Zadavia: Hello loonatics.Is Steve safe?

Ace: Steve is in good hands Zadavia.

Duck: And he has powers!

Zadavia: What? I knew his clone was lying, but are you sure it's really Steve?

Ace: Were sure boss, we checked while he was sleeping and its him.

Zadavia: Hmm. Okay. Can i talk to him?

Lexi: Steve's just getting his game.

Rev: Oh-speaking-of-game.

Ace: Oh,right, Rev. His game is dangerous Zadavia.

Zadavia: What is the game called?

Tech: I think it was called Heroes of might and magic 5.

Zadavia: That game sounds familiar to me, where have i heard that game before?

Slam: Somthing wrong Zadavia?

Zadavia: Nothing. I'll think about it. Zadavia out.

Steve: Guys, I'm back!

Lexi: Why are you sweating? I love it when you sweat.

Steve: What?

Lexi: Nothing.

Ace: Excellent, Steve bring it here please, bud.
(Steve hands the game over to Ace.)

Ace: Hmm.

Duck: What is it, Ace?

Ace: I don't know. Tech we need some scanning.

Tech: Okay, me and Rev. Well see what's up.

Rev: Yes-me-and-Tech-finally-working-on-another-item-togethe----

Tech: I get it Rev.

Slam: I'll go and eat.(mumbles)

Duck: I'll go on Facebook.

Lexi: So Steve anyhting else about that game?

Steve: It was glowing over 10 different colours.

Ace: Weird, were you just installing it or playing the game?

Steve: Installing.

Ace: I'll go and see how Tech and Rev are doing.

Steve: So, Lexi, what's new?

Lexi: Nothing much. You?

Steve: Nothing much.
(Lexi blushed and hid her face.)

Steve: Lexi is something wrong?

Lexi: Nothing, i'll go listen to my music now.
(Lexi waves with her fingers.)

Steve:(Talking to himself.) Well, just me. Lexi? Blushing at me?
Does she have a crush on me? Did i see lexi bladding her eyelashes at me?
So many Questions.
(Steve went in to see Tech,Rev and Ace.)

Steve: HEy guys.

Rev:Hey-Steve.
Tech:Hey
Ace:Hi

Steve: Well, what's wrong?

Tech: were done, we know what the problem is!

Steve: What.

Tech: Get everybody else in the room Quickly

Steve: Why?

Tech: Just do it.
( Steve went to get Duck, Lexi and Slam.)

Rev: Oh-Shoot!

Tech: What is it Rev?

Rev: I-forgot-to-tell-you-that-my-brothers-coming.

Ace: Oh. When's he coming?

Rev:He-should-be-here-in-7.5-seconds.
(The doorbell rings.)

Rev: Or-right-now.(Goes to answer the door.)Hey Rip.

Rip: Hey,bro. Can i come in?

Rev: Of-course.
Have you met Steve?

Rip: Steve's here? Who's Steve?

Rev: The-guy-you-met-on-the-phone-3-months-ago.

Rip: Oh! him. Ahhh! Now i remember.

Steve: Oh. You must be Rip, right?

Rip: Yep and you're Steve?

Steve: Yep, nice to see you again.

Rip: You too. Rev? What's going on?

Rev: Were-on-a-investigation.

Rip: Oh.

Rev:Fixing-Steve's-game.

Rip: I see that now.

Everybody else: Hey Rip!

Rip: Hey guys.

Ace: Ok everybody's here Tech now what?

Tech: Now it says hold still.

Duck: What?

Computer voice:The loonatics access granted.
(The glowing lights start glowing right in their faces as if they got dust in their eyes. After the glowing stopped everybody was in pain.)

End of Chapter 4. 

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Chapter 5: The First transformation.

( Everybody was grunting on the floor.)

Ace: Everybody alright?

Lexi: Yep.

Duck: mmhmm.

Tech:Okay.
 
Rev: cool.

Rip: I'm fine.

Steve: Ok.

Slam: Good.

Ace: Good i am alright too.
( There was a moment of silence.)

Lexi: What in the hell happened?

Ace: I don't know. Hey,Steve. Were these the glwing lights you saw?

Steve: Uh huh.Yep.

Duck: Hey. what's that on Steve's neck?

Tech: Looks like some type of scar. Look up Steve.

Rip: Um tech. Steve isn't the only one who's got the scar.
( Everybody gasped in shock.)

Steve: Tech. Did you find any more info?

Tech: Yeah. I did.

Lexi: What is it?

Tech; well, the game is installed.

Rev: Uh.- No-it-isn't.

Tech: Yes. Look.
(Everybody looks at the game and it's already playing.)

Duck: That was a very unusuall installation.

Slam: I know.

Ace: Come on Loonatics let's hit the sack and maybe the scars will heal.
( The loonatics go to bed and they had a good sleep too. The next morning Steve woke up and the scar spreded a bit, and so did everybody elses.)

Steve: OMG! It Spredded!

Ace: Mine too!

Lexi: This is getting very weird.

Tech: Good morning. whoa! Your guys scar did not heal, it spreded!

Rev: We-know.

Slam: Weird.

Rip: I fell asleep on the couch.And OmG!

Rev: What is it. Rip?

Rip: L-L-L-Look at Steve.
( Steve got down to the floor right away like he was about to faint.)

Ace: Steve, are you alright?

Steve: No.( All painfully.)
( Steve felt like his bones were changing and they were. He was being transformed. Question is into what? He had a weird looking spider on his back and darkness was surronding him like crazy. He was beginning to grow wings like a Specture Dragon would have,his eyes were glowing teal, he was growing a tail too,a dragonish tail but it was black and undead, his hands became boney but he felt stronger,his face was getting pale too and then it stopped and everybody gasped at Steve's new appearance.)

Ace: Whoa, Steve, What happened to you?

Steve: Ahhhhh! I don't know, i look ugly!

Tech: Look in the mirror!

Steve: I look different.

Tech: We need more research.
( Tech went over to the computer and started to find something about the types of people you can be in the game.)

Tech: This should explain. Necropolis,Academy,Sylivan,Haven,Inferno,Dungeon,Stronghold and Fortress.
(A few minutes later Tech understood everything out of what happened to Steve and the rest of them.)

Tech: I understand it totally now. Transformations every 10 minutes.
Steve transformed into a Necropolis-type creature.

Ace: Does it say who's next to transform?

Tech: Yep. The next person is.....................(Pointed a Duck.)

Duck: Me?! Oh, No! ( Starts crying.)

Lexi: Then if he transforms.......

Ace: Then the rest of us will too it's like a chain reaction.

The End of Chapter 5. 


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Chapter 6: The Second transformation.

( Meanwhile.)
????:Everything is according to plan begin the 2nd transformation.( Evil laugh.)
(A mysterious dark figure with a general looking suit on bowwed before his master.)
(The loonatics are shocked that Duck is next. They get more worried of whoms next after Duck.)

Rev: Wh----Who's- a-a-a-after-Duck?

Tech: It doesn't say until this transformation is complete.
( The loonatics look at the clock.They decided to put an alarm on so they can tell that it's been 10 minutes.)

Ace: What time is it now Tech?

Tech: Well. since Steve's transformation was at 6:00 then Duck's is going to be at 6:10 and the time is..............6:09!

Duck: Good-bye everybody,goodbye old look, good bye money, good bye Handsome self.

Lexi: Duck!

Duck: What!(Lexi points at the clock and it says, 6:09:57....58.....59......6:10.)

Steve: Oh no he fainted.

Tech: Duck's obviously gonna get something different than Necropolis, that's what the game said, everybody has to get a different transformation.
(Everybody watched Duck transforming into something. Duck's hair turned into like a surfur like type hair/wavy and long, He started to scream like some more scars were scratching him and they were,Duck's feet started to become hoofs very slowly, his scar that was spredding turned into a tree and his eyes were glowing orange as this happens, then it stopped.)

Lexi: Duck, you actully don't look that bad you just grew hoofs, your hair grew,and your a different colour,your blue and a deer looking helmet on your head too.

Duck: Hey i look better like this.

Lexi: Duck.

Duck: Yeah,what.

Lexi: Nothing.

Rip:So Tech. Two questions who is next and what time?

Tech: Well, Rip. The next transformation is at 6:20
and the next person is......is...........me.

(Everybody gasped.)

The End of Chapter 6.





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Chapter 7:The third transformation

Ace: Tech. What time is it now?

Tech: Well it's.........OMG!

Lexi: What?

Tech: 6:18. We've been doing absoulutly nothing for the past eight minutes.

Rev:Well,-Tech-what-else-was-there-to-do? 

Tech: Change these two back before........Oh,no.(points at the clock.)

Ace: Oh.Crap.(Tech faints. Then the others hear serious pains from Tech before them. The Green tornado blew around him as he started to transform.
Tech's left eye became a glass foggy,glowing eye. Tech had glowing blue and green scratches. He grew on scar on his forehead. A turban appeared on Tech's head. Half of his face turned into metal and he had a swirling cloud ontop of him.)

Tech: I.......I feel stronger.
(Everyone gasps at Tech's new look.)

Duck: Tech. Look in the mirror.

Tech: WHOA!

Ace: It's Okay Tech.

Duck: Yeah at least your not worst as Steve.

Steve: Hey, not funny.

Duck: course it is.

Steve: No.

Duck: Yes

Steve: NO!

Duck: YES!

Steve: NO!!!!!

Duck:YES!!!!

Tech: SHUT UP!!!!
(They stopped immediatly.)

Ace: Both of you arn't going to change back if you continue arguing.

Steve: Yeah. Ace is right.

Duck: I know.

Rip: When and who Tech?

Tech: Pardon?

Rip: Who's next and what time?

Tech: The next transformation is at 6:30 and the next person is.........................Ace.

Ace: Me? Oh, No.

Steve: Oh No is right.
(Meanwhile.)

????: Alright 3 done and 5 to go.(Evil laugh.)

The End of Chapter 7.

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Chapter 8: The  break.

Tech: Huh? I don't get it its 6:30 he should be transforming.

Steve: The screen says"Break time".

Rip: Break time?

Ace: Pheww. Look there's a message.

Message:Dear Loonatics you're lucky you have a break because the scars on your back will be even more painful. And you will turn against eachother if you didn't have this half an hour break. Sincerly---.

Lexi: Huh? No name?

Duck: Wow lucky!

Ace: I know.

Steve: Rip do u have facebook?

Rip: Yep. I'll add u.

Steve: Sure same.
(Steve and Rip go add eachother on Facebook.As Lexi watched Steve with her baddering eyes as he walked away and led out a breathe out.)

Lexi: Isn't he the most dreamy person you ever met?

Tech: Are you going to ask him out after this big mess?

Lexi: Me ask him out? Ok.I mean after we all change back.

Ace: We?

Lexi: We'd all be transformed by then.

Ace: Oh.( Ace looked jealous but also glad for those 2/stevexlexi.)Tech what does it say now?

Tech: U will still be transforming at 7:00 this time.

Ace:im ready.
(meanwhile in a place far far far away back to the villain.)

????:Excellent bgin the fourth and five transformation now!)

????2: Uh.......sire its not time yet its at 7 remember?

????: O hyeah,Damn.
( Meanwhile back to the loonatics.)

Steve: Alright all done.

Rip: Yep i have lots of friends now.

Tech: Attention guys there is going to be.....MORE THAN ONE TRANSFORMATION!!!

Slam: Hmmm.

Rev: Lets call Zadavia, we'd better hide Steve Tech and Duck.

Ace: Great idea Re---(The monitor came on and showed Zadavia.)

Zadavia: Hello Loonatics.

Ace: Zadavia we were about to call you.

Zadavia: Thats funny.I know where i seen that game now!
I once saw it on Freling! Wait a minute where's Tech,Steve and Duck?

Ace: Zadavia i sent them out to get us food were hungry.

Zadavia: Oh Rip's here i see, hey Rip.

Rip: Hey.

Zadavia: Let me tell you a story Optimatus and I saw that game in display and a cloaked looking crook stole it and dissappered.

Lexi: Wierd

Tech:Lexi.( Whispers and points at the clock.)

(She looked scared.)

Zadavia: I should leave you guys alone, zadavia out.

Lexi: That was close. You were almost transformed in front of Zadavia.

Tech: Here we go.

Ace: Bring it on!

End of Chapter 8.


 

-- Edited by steve123 at 19:45, 2007-11-16

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Chapter 9:The fourth and fifth transformation.

Steve:5......4......3......2....1.....7:00.
(Ace fainted right in front of their faces. A bright light surrounded him.His eyes were glowing yellow. They saw Ace grew like wierd looking angel wings and a halo slowly grew ontop of his head. His uniform started turning into a robe or cloak.)

Lexi: That was a quick transformation.

Ace: Well. How do i look?

Tech: Um. You actully don't look that bad.

Ace:(looking in the mirrior.)Hey you're right.

Steve: Yep. Were always right.

Duck: Uh. What are you doing?

Steve: Pardon?

Duck:WHAT ARE YOU DOING!!!

Steve: Listening to music. Why? There's not need to shout.

Duck: Well because you had your deafphones on. What song?

Steve: Dude looks like a lady by Aerosmith.

Duck: You like Aerosmith?

Steve: Uh yeah.

Duck: Me 2!!

Steve: Sweet.

Ace: Wow. Instead of fighting you discide on favourite music.

Duck: I think i just found a new friend.

Lexi: Uh same with the rest of us.

Duck: Yeah. You're right.

Steve: Thats sweet.

Tech: Am i interupting?
(everybody looks.)

Rev: Who's-next?

Tech: Uh You.

Rev:Really?Here-we-go.
(Rev fainted before them and red flames burst infront of him. Everybody thought he was unfire, but he wasn't. He started growing horns everywhere on his body. He grew teeth that look like Tech's. He had heavy armour on. HE was on fire just a bit but it didn't hurt him.)

Rev: So how do i look?

Tech: Uh Rev your voice its slow again and you look hidious as Steve.

Steve: Whoa. You do look hidious as me.

Ace: Rev's unfire put the fire out!
(Duck tries to use his aqua dence put Rev interupted him.)
Rev: Wait!
(Duck stops.)

Rev: They don't hurt me.

Ace: Wierd.

Lexi: Steve........uh....

Steve: What is it?

Lexi: I.........uh.....can't do it.(runs out of room.)

Steve: Whats with her?

Ace: Steve.(Put his hand on his shoulder.) Buddy, Lexi really likes you.

Steve: Of course everybody likes me im so nice.

Ace: No. I mean she LIKES you.

Steve: You mean Lexi thinks im cute?

Tech: Without a doubt.

Steve: sweet.

End of Chapter 9.

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Chapter 10: Investigating Steve's house.

Tech:oh. another letter.It says: Here is another break, enjoy.


Ace:That's weird.


Rev: let's go investigate at Steve's house to see what's going on.


Ace: Good idea Rev.


Rip: What about Lexi?


Ace: Tech can go talk to her.


Tech: Alright chief.


Ace: But there is one problem.


Steve: whats that?


Ace: We can't go out like this.


Steve:mmmmhmm right. Hey! How about the peple who are not infected can go investigate and the people who are stay here.


Ace: Good idea Steve. That would be Lex,Slam and Rip that can go investigate.


Duck: That means that the rest of us stay here until they get back.


Ace: Yep.Tech go talk to Lexi and see what's up.

(Tech walks slowly to Lexi's bedroom door and knocks softly.)


Tech: Lexi? Can i come in? It Tech.


Lexi: Come in.


Tech: what's wrong? We are all worried.


Lexi: Oh. It's just hard to talk to Steve especially when i think he's cute.


Tech: Lexi, did you know Steve likes you too?


Lexi: He does?


Tech: Yep, he doesn't want to leave you out thats for sure.


Lexi: Really?


Tech: Yep. You should have seen his face when you left,he looked kinda sad.


Lexi: Really?


Tech:yep.


Lexi: Prove it Tech.

( Tech gets out a recorder and plays it. It shows Lexi leaving in slow motion and Steve having a sad expression on his face.)


Lexi: Its true, he does love me.


Tech: There you go. Told ya i wasn't lying.


Lexi: Im gonna ask him out after this giant mess.


Tech: Come on Ace wants you, Slam and Rip to go investigate Steve's house.


Lexi: What about the rest of you?


Tech: We have to stay because of our new appearence.


Lexi: Oh.


Tech: I got Lexi Ace.

(While Tech and Ace are talking Lexi turns and smiles at Steve and he smiles back.)

Ace: Good job Tech, go ahead guys.

(Lexi, Slam and Rip go and investigate Steve's house.)


Ace:Tech can i talk to you for a minute? So What did Lexi have to say?


Tech: She is just shy around Steve.


Ace: Anything else?


Tech: Just that i told her that Steve likes her too and she had a big smile on her face.


Ace: That's good at least its not just another guy who took Lexi or i will be mad.


Tech: Don't worry thats not gonna happen.


Ace: I hope you're right.


Tech: yep.


Ace: Alright were back.

(Meanwhile.)


Lexi: Can't see anything.


Slam: Same.


Rip: Hey look i found something!


Slam: What is it?


Lexi: It looks like some-type of ring.


Rip: Steve is gonna freak when he sees that his house is burned down.


Lexi:(thinking to herself.)Speaking of Steve.(She starts thinking of Steve and Herself being together.)


Rip: Lexi?


Lexi: Oh sorry, yeah?


Rip: I said. Steve is gonna freak when he sees that his house is burned down.

Lexi: I know. Let's go back to HQ.(The three of them exit Steve's old house and fly back to HQ.)

Ace: They should be back by now.

Steve: Here they are.

Ace: Find anything?

Lexi: 2 things. 1. The monster has disappeared and burned down Steve's home.

Steve: Oh No where am i going to live?

Tech: Its okay Steve well think of something.

Lexi: And 2. We found this ring.( Hands it to Ace.)

Ace: very wierd shape too i wonder what it means?

Tech: No time to talk guys here comes another transformation signal. It shows that Slam is next and is transforming at 7:50.

Slam: Oh,great.

End of chapter 10.



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Chapter 11: The Sixth transformation.

Ace: What was that question you said Steve?

Steve:I said."Where am i going to live now?"

Lexi: That is going to be a problem.

Tech: Slam! Its time for your transformation!Its 7:50!

(Slam fainted right in front of them as they watch Slam transform.Slam's eyes were glowing purple. His uniform sort of changed into a barbarian looking type outfit. He was starting to look like a monster. His teeth grew a bit larger. His fur turned light grey like a cloudy sky.)

Ace:Whoa!

Duck: Slam, no effence but your more scarier than Steve and Rev.Yep number 1 most scariest.

Slam: I Don't look that freaky do i?(Everybody else nodds.)

Slam: Whoa! I do look scary.

Rip: Well its just you and me Lexi.

Lexi: Yep, Rip who is next?

Tech: The last transformation is at 8:30, and the next transformation is at 8:20.

Rev: What time is it now?

Tech: Its 8:19!!!!!!!!

Rip: Who's next Tech?

Tech: You.

Rip: Lovely.

Tech: But the good news is that we have an extended time so you are going to transform at 8:40 instead.

Rip: That's good to hear.

Ace: Guys i think i hear Zadavia calling, Oh she is going to freak out to see us.

Zadavia: Hello loonatics. Loonatics?

Lexi: Yes boss?

Zadavia: Wherre are the guys?

Lexi: Just playing around.

Ace: Ok. Lex! tell her about the truth.(Whispered.)

Lexi: Zadavia the guys are right here.

Zadavia: Whoa!!!! Whoa!!!!! Whoa!!!!!! What happened to you guys?

Ace: Steve's game did this to us.

Zadavia:Okay but how'd you become this?

Steve: Transformations, like watch Rip.

End of Chapter 11

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Chapter 12: The seventh transformation.

Zadavia:OMG!! Rip fainted!

Steve: Its part of the transformation.
(Rips eyes turned blue and they were glowing. He started growing spikes on his shoulders. His har became misshaped. He started to grew teeth like Tech's cainane teeth. He was wearing a freaky dark cloak on. His tail grew to be a black dragon's tail. His right eye has a scar covered in blood just not in the eye but around it.

Zadavia: It this what happened to you guys?

Rev: Yep.

Zadavia: Have you done any investigation?

Lexi: We did.

Ace: They said that the monster that was in Steve's house dissappeared and burned down his house.

Zadavia: Really?

Steve: Yeah. I hae nowhere to go now.( All sad.)

Zadavia: Oh, dear poor you.

Steve: Uh huh.

Zadavia: Did you loose anything?

Steve: Like belongings?

Zadavia: Yes.

Steve:Well i lost my portable DVD player and some of my DVD's that i never even watch.

Tech: Not to alarm anybody but the last transformation is going to be soon.

Steve: Lexi.

Lexi: I wonder what i will be transforming into?

Zadavia: Who knows. But for now i want you to either find who's responsable for these transformations and where he or she is and you guys found a ring? 

Ace: Yep.

Zadavia: Ill do some reasearch, zadavia out.

Lexi: Here we go.

End of Chapter 12.

Ace: Yep.

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Chapter 13: The Last transformation

Lexi: Here we go.
( Lexi fainted before them. She started looking like the pepe lepew again.)

Ace: whoa!

Rev: That look, looks familiar.

Tech: its the same look when we battled ringmaster and otto the odd for the first time remember the DNA scrambler?

Lexi: Oh yeah. Dis' look is not me.

Ace: So are the transformations done Tech?

Tech: Yep, No more transformations.

Rip: Yeah thank god.

Tech: Steve which is necropolis, Duck which is Sylivan, Me which im Academy,Slam is Stronghold,LExi is fortress,Rip is Dungeon, Rev is Inferno and Ace is Haven.

Lexi: Whoa.

Ace: Alright loonatics we need a plan, what does the game say now?

Tech: It says congratulations you have all been transformed one by one now its time to play.

Steve: I guess were playing the game now.

Rip: mmmhmmm.

Tech: Now it says hang on and hold hands?

Steve: DO WHAT IT SAYS QUICKLY!
(The loonatics get sucked right into the game like if it was a portal and now they are confused.)

Ace: Everybody okay?

Duck: Owch! I need a bandage after this.

Tech: Steve you know this game better thatn we do where are we?

Steve: In the game.

Ace: Really?

Steve:(nodds.)

Ace: Lets find out whos behind the curtain.

????: Give me the ring loonatics!

Steve: hey who are you speak up!

????: I can't tell until we are face to face(On speaker.)

????2: Reconize me loonatics?(Right in front of them.)

Duck: Is that?

LExi: I think it is.

Steve: What? Who?

Ace: Deuce.

Deuce: I see that you haven't changed since we met last time Ace!

Ace: And you still got that ugly face!

Deuce: Who's the new guy?

Steve: The new guy's name is Steve, Deuce.

Deuce: Ah Steve as you can see me and the rest of your pals are nemesis.

Steve: I can tell you've got that smelly breathe.

Deuce: Im beginning to not like you already.

Steve: Same here pal.

Deuce: Its time for you to split up Loonapests!

To be continued.

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Chapter 14: The split-up.

Deuce:HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!
(Deuce fires a weird looking portal thing and separates them all away.)

Everybody:NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!

Ace:Where are we?

Steve: Looks like 8 different types of portals that are colours and symbols around them.

Slam: Help! the purple one s sucking me up!(mumble.)
(The portal sucked slam up and he was gone.)

Lexi: Guys im next!
(The pink portal sucked up Lexi and she was gone and steve was sad.)

Rip:Uh! Oh!
(Rip gets sucked in by the Blue portal and hes gone.)

Duck:Huh?Uh oh! Oh no!

Ace: Duck!

Tech: Man the portal suck us up like crazy.

Rev: Oh Man!

Steve:And then they were three.

Tech:You mean two, Ace got sucked up.

Steve:No one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Tech: The coyote stands alone. Oh crap!!!!!

(All of the loonatics have been separated by the portals and are on 8 different lands.)

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This chapter is all about Slam.

Chapter 15: Slam's adventure.

Slam: Whoa! Where am i? Strange this looks like a stronghold type town.

Man: Hello stranger. Welcome to Stronghold. Come on im getting you fixed up.

Slam: Who are you?

Man: My name is arthur. What's yours?

Slam: Im Slam Tasman------Slam.

Arthur: Slam? That's a cool name.

Slam: Where are you taking me?

Arthur: Im taking you to become a warrior against all the other teams.

Slam:(To himself.) My friends!

Arthur: What?

Slam: Nothing.

Arthur: These are the army you will be taking pretty soon.

Slam: Army?

Arthur: You won't be battling like that wouldn't we. You go to the kitchen and help yourself something to eat.

Slam: Ok?

Deuce:(Talking on radio.) How is everything?

Arthur: Very good master Deuce the Tasmanian is falling for it.

Deuce: Good.

Slam: Im back.

Arthur: Good stare into that mirrior for a while and tell me what you see.

Slam: Nothing but enemies.

Arthur: Now do you have any friends?

Slam: I have...........no friends....just victums.

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This chapter is all about Lexi. This is at the same time when something happened to Slam.

Chapter 16: Lexi's adventure.

Lexi: where am i? Guys!

Man:Oh hello.

Lexi:Hi?

Man:My name is John. What's your name?

Lexi:Lexi.

John: Thats a sweet name. Come with me i'll give you a mess'age.

Lexi:Uh ok.

John: How does that feel?

Lexi: Great.

John: There is one question i want to ask you.

Lexi:What.

John:Are you......................single?

Lexi:Um..........John im sorry i have fallen in love with someone else.

John: oh ok then.

Lexi: John there is over a million girls out there somewhere.

John: Not many.

Lexi:Where am i?

John: you are in a town called Fortress you have an army waiting for you.

Man:John!

John:Hey, Phillip!

Phillip:Who is this lovely lady?

John:This is Lexi.

Phillip: Oh yeah come with me and i will show you your army.

Lexi:Ok?

Phillip:Here we are.

Lexi: Hey i thought you said were going to the army.

Phillip: I just have to make a stop.( Lexi and Phillip go the hut.)

Phillip: Tell me Lexi do you have a boyfriend?

John: Going to in the next, i don't know ,hour.

Phillip: What's his name?

Lexi: His name is Steve. He so sweet, kind, handsome and dreamy.

Phillip: Oh ok sweet.

Lexi: Im going to ask him out as soon as this mess is out of the way.

Phillip: Ok. Close your eyes.

Lexi: Why?

Phillip: Just do it.( Lexi closes her eyes.) What do you see in your mind?

Lexi: I see me and Steve being successful on the date.

Phillip: Ok now what?

Lexi: now i see........omg a dark spirit!(Lexi covers her head like if she has a headache.)

Phillip: So now are you going on that date?

Lexi: No.

Phillip: That's good.(Evil laugh.)

End of Chapter 16.

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This Chapter is all about Tech.

Chapter 17: Tech's adventure.

(Meanwhile while Lexi and Slam are being tooken care of. Tech falls and finds himself in the sky.)

Tech: Whoa! Im gonna fall!

Man: No you're not calm down sir,calm down!

Tech: How can i calm down when im in the sky!(The man helped Tech up.)

Man: Looks like your gonna half to get use to it sir.

Tech: My name is not sir, its Tech.

Man: Oh sorry Tech my name is Kouta.

Tech: Nice t meet you.

Kouta: Come on let me show you around. You see you are in a town called Academy.

Tech: Academy? Oh!

Kouta: What?

Tech: Nothing.

Kouta: There's your army.

Tech: Army?

Kouta:Yeah your not going to battle haven and the others.

Tech:(To himself.) Those are the other guys teams.

Kouta: I want to show you something.

Tech:ok.

Kouta: See would you perfer this or this in your war?

Tech: Right.

Kouta: Ok.

Tech: I should go and find my friends.

Kouta: You're not going anywhere coyote!

Tech:What are you doing?

Kouta: I got you trapped.

Tech: Why?

Kouta: Because i want you to think of your greatest inventions.

Tech:ok.(Thinking to himself.) I don't trust him. Owch!

Kouta: Who are your friends now?

Tech: You.

Kouta: Yes i am your only friend.(Laugh.)

End of Chapter 17.

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This chapter is all about Duck.

Chapter 18: Duck's adventure.

Duck:Huh? I really got to stop watching nature shows!

Man:Why hello sir!

Duck: Who are you and why should i care?

Man: You should care. My name is Paul and i am going to help you on your journey.

Duck: What journey?

Paul: What's your name?

Duck: Duck.

Paul: Good name. Come with me i can heal the scar.

Duck: Ok.

Paul: Here is your army you will be battling later.

Duck: Army? Was i some how expected here?

Paul: We were expecting someone not like you but you fit the puzzle so.

Duck: Ok? Wierdo.

Paul: What?

Duck: Nothing where am i?

Paul: You are in the town of Nature.

Duck: Oh.

Paul: This way. ( Paul trapps Duck in a room and poisons him.)

Paul: I can't let you get away back to you friends so im keeping you for a while.

Duck: I..............must.......fight it..................I have no friends what are you talking about?

Paul: Oh nothing just friends of yours who now become your enimies.(Laugh.)

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This Chapter is all about Rip.

Chapter 19:Rip's adventure.

(Rip kept falling and falling and falling until he is underground.)

Rip: Whoa! Where am i?

Man: You are in the city of Dungeon the only underground area of all time.

Rip:And who are you?

Man: My name is Ron.

Rip: Im Rip.

Ron: Oh, come with me im going to show you around.( Ron has brown light hair and a cloak on just like Rip.)

Rip: Who are those guys?

Ron: Your army you'll be battling with pretty quick.

Rip: Army?

Ron: Yeah. You are going into war in a few minutes.

Rip: Okay?(Rip is absoulutley confused.)

Ron: Here lets look at our blood arena.

Rip: Blood arena?

Ron: Yeah. People kill eachother and eat their body parts like crazy.

Rip: Uh..........can we look at something else i just ate and i feel sick.

Ron: Oh fine will look at the armour instead.

Rip: Ok thanks.

Ron: Here we are.

Rip: Whoa. This is so cool!( Ron grinns an evil grin while hes not looking.)

Ron: Hey Rip.

Rip: Yah?

Ron: which one do you want the money is on me.

Rip: Really? Sweet!

Ron: He's perfect, Boss.(Talking on radio.)

????: Excellent, begin the spell quickly!

Ron: Master not so loud he might hear you.

Rip: Im done.

Ron: Oh! good.(Ron pays for the armour.)

Rip: How do i look?

Ron: You look swell in it, looks good.

Rip: Thanks.

Ron:(Smiles.)

Rip: Hey what time is my war?

Ron: Right now!

Rip: Hey whats................going.....on?

Ron: Ready?

Rip: Always im ready to kick some ass.

Ron: Excellent.

End of Chapter 19.

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This Chapter is all about Rev.

Chapter 20: Rev's adventure.

Rev: Whoa! This looks not right!

Man: Yeah you're right.

Rev: Whoa! You scared me to death.

Man: Oh im sorry.

Rev: Who are you anyway?

Man: My name is Tethebus but people call me Seth.

Rev: Ok Seth My name is Rev.

Seth: I like that name, it means fire and speed right?

Rev: Uh...i guess.

Seth: come on Rev i'll take you around on a tour.

Rev: Oh. Ok. I like tours.

Seth: Here is your army.

Rev: My army?

Seth: Yeah. You  are leading the team.

Rev: What? Is there a war?

Seth: I guess you can say that.

Rev: Oh.

Seth: come on I have to let you try this fruit.

Rev: Why does everybody look like hell people?

Seth: Oh. I dont know maybe that we are in the city of Inferno.

Rev: Oh. Its coming together now.

Seth: That's good. Here try it.

Rev: Whoa. Its spicy but its still good.

Seth: That's good i can eat these for hours.

Rev: But i can't.

Seth: Ok then.

Rev: Whoa. I feel weird.

Seth: Why don't you rest on the spike rock.

Rev: OWCH!!!!!!!!THAT"S HOT!!!!!!!

Seth: Now your ready to battle?

Rev: Ready to do lots of killing.

Seth: Good.

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This Chapter is all about Steve.

Chapter 21: Steve's Adventure.

(Steve let out a scream wen he saw where he was.)

Man: What's the problem dude?

Steve: Where am i? Where am i?

Man: A town called Necropolis why?

Steve: No wonder this looks familiar.

Man: Yeah....well my names Specture.

Steve: Im Steve.

Specture: Nice to meet you. Follow me i'll show you around.

Steve: Okie Dokie.

Specture: Do you know what this is?

Steve: An undead army?
(Specture charges at Steve like he was nothing and grabs him by the collar.)

Specture: Listen don't say that word you just said or else the spirits will curse you.

Steve: Me no say word again.

Specture: Good. Anyways Yes its your army.

Steve: Excuse me? My army?

Specture: Yes you'll be battling against 7 other kings. they also got newcomers too like you.

Steve: You've seen my friends?

Specture: No, What are yu talking about. Here let me take you to the necromancer tower where you can learn spells.( Specture shows Steve the place.)

Steve: This is totally wicked!

Specture: You know what's even more wicked the drink that will blow your mind.
(Specture gives him a drink. Steve drinks it and they leave the building.)

Steve: I feel like im gonn-( Steve barfs.)

Specture: Sick. Come on i'll get you better.( He takes Steve in his creepy looking green, glowing church building.)

Steve: Ow!

Specture: Now should i find your friends?

Steve: What friends?

Specture: Nothing your friends that will be dead.( Evil laugh.)

End of Chapter 21.


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And this Chapter is all about....you guest it...Ace.

Chapter 22: Ace's Adventure.

Ace: Huh? I fell up instead of down.

Man: Whoa. You appeared out of nowhere eh?

Ace: Yeah, i did.

Man: My names Eric, what's yours?

Ace: People call me Ace.

Eric: Welcome to the town Haven.

Ace: Wow.

Eric: Yeah. I know cool city, come eith me Ace and see what the world of Haven is all about.

Ace: Eh. Why not.

Eric: Here is the army you'll be training with.

Ace: training?

Eric: Yeah. You don't want to go out in the war like this now will you.

Ace: War?

Eric: I'll tell you later.

Ace: Uh......Okay.

Eric: Here have some water.

Ace: Uh.................(Talking to himself.) I don't think i trust this guy. I mean are you sure?

Eric: You must be exhusted here.( Ace took a glass of water.) How do you feel?

Ace: Stronger.

Eric: Good.

Deuce: The loonatics are ready for their suprise war.

????: excellent get them trained as much as you can.

Deuce: yes master.

End of Chapter 22.

Please reply. How are you enjoying it so far?

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There is alot of switching scenes in this chapter.
Chapter 23: The First Battle.

(Meanwhile while everybody was getting enffected at the same time the bead guys were ready to put them in their battle.)

Eric: Everything is alright here.

Specture: Same on my end.

Seth: Same.

Ron: Everything's ok in my area.

Arthur: Yep.


Paul: same i got the Duck cornered.


Kouta: The coyote has fallen in the trap.

Phillip: The bunny is confused.

????: Excellent. Where's John?

John: Sorry im late.

????: Phillip. You should fire him from the job.

Phillip: Maybe later.

????: Let the unknown battle begin. Send them to battle in the dessert and send John i might give him another chance.
(The scene switches to the loonatics.)

(Ace leads his army until he sees his other opponents.)

Steve:Must Kill The dog.

Ace: Die you stupid Duck!

Duck: Who are you calling Stupid, Stupid!

Lexi: You shall all die!

Tech: Bang to all of you, i see all of you dead by now!
(The 8 armies charge at eachother and start fighting, while the loonatics are busy battling eachother.)
(Rev v.s Ace,Tech v.s Steve, Duck v.s Lexi and Slam v.s Rip.)

Ace: Ha! All your moves are pathetic.


Rev: No. Yours are pathetic angel boy!

Ace: Who are you calling Angel boy, devil man!

Rev: Why You!

Ace: Haven will rule!

Tech: Oh mr creepy?

Steve: Yes floating freak!

Tech: I can fly.

Steve: So can i.

Rip: You big stupid tough guy, bring it on!

Slam: Not so fast, beetle!

Rip: No not so fast for you!( Rip kicks Slam.)

Lexi: Over here nature boy!

Duck: I don't think so Slimegirl freak!
( Just then as they continued to battle John notices this and finds a weird looking spell book.)

John: I bet i can break the spell, if i can try.

Ace: Once your done, im gonna kill the creepy guy with the specture dragon wings!

Rev: Go ahead and kill him he means nothing and neither do you!

Tech: Can't catch me!

Steve: I got you surrounded.( Steve surrounds him with 10 other spectures.)

Steve: Hmm. Which one? Nope try again. Missed me!

John: Im gonna turn everything back the way its supposed to be.
(By then there was blood everywhere and dead bodies too.)

To be continued.

end of Chapter 23.

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Chapter 24: The spell breaks.

(There was nothing left but some other soldiers and the loonatics.)

Ace:( Announcing.) Haven will rule! Just wait until i get rid of the 7 of you!

John: Hmm. Which spell is it? Oh no.
(John searches through the book as fast as he could before any of the loonatics would be dead.)

Ace: I got you now bird!( Rev is cornered and Ace is about to strike his sword right across Rev.)

John: Here's one.( The Red and Yellow bolt hit Rev and Ace so hard that it hurt them. Ace and Rev are down on the ground covering their heads.)

Ace: Rev?

Rev: Ace?

Ace: OMG! I thought.

Rev: Same.

Ace: Is that Lexi and Duck?

Rev: There battling eachother.

Ace: There not the only one.

Rev: Not Rip and Slam.

Ace: Wait a minute were missing two people.

Rev: Ace! I found them.

Ace: Its Steve and Tech!

Rev: Hey you stop!

John: don't hurt me!

Rev: Why would we?

John: I turned you guys back to normal.

Ace: Back to normal?

John: You guys were brainwashed.

Ace: Well can you save the rest of us?

John: Ill try.

Tech: Ha! Your spectures have no chance against me!

Steve: Damn!

Tech: Ha! You're out numbered mr. Halloween.

Rip: Time to die mr. tough guy!

Ace: John now!( A blue and a purple zap out like a bolt of lightning and zapped Rip and Slam. They are covering thier heads.)

Ace: Rev. go fetch them!
( Rev got Rip and Slam.)

Slam: Rev, Rip, Ace!

Rip: Omg! guys!

Ace: We can chitty chat later right now we got to stop, Lexi, Steve, Duck and Tech.

Rev: John try again!
( A orange and pink lightning bolt popped out and hit Duck and Lexi.)

Ace: Rev.( Rev brings Duck and lexi back.)

Duck: OMG!

Ace: Not now Duck.

Lexi: Look.

Rip: Is that Steve and Tech?

Duck: OMG it is!

Rev: John!( The last set of lightning bolts are headed straight for Tech and Steve.)

Tech: Time to die!( The lightning bolts hit them and they fall down unconsious.)

Rip: Rev! Quickly!( Rev catches Steve and Tech safely.)
( Tech managed to wake up.)

Tech: Whoa. What happened?

Ace: We'll explain later.

Rip: What about Steve?

Ace: Steve! Wake up!

Steve: What's all the yelling?
( Steve sat up and all of the sudden a poison dart hit Steve.)

Tech: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
( Ace sees an assassin.)

Ace: Slam! Get him.
( Slam threw a pebble and literally killed the assassin.) 

Lexi: No Steve. I love you please don't go!

John: Wait i an stop this from happening.( John puts his finger on Steve and saves him from death.)

Steve: Whoa.

Ace: Yay! Steve's back!

????: You know Deuce was sure right about you guys! Time to die loonatics!

My name is..................................Fredrick!

Lexi: Omg! John where are you going?

John: I don't know! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! ( John dissapears.)

Frederick: He was useless anyway.

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Chapter 25: The Last Battle.

Lexi: What have you done with him!!!

Fredrick: I have sent to a more quieter place.

Steve: Why You!!!!!!

Fredrick: Ya well. Maybe my assistants can take care of you Loonatics!
(Phillip, Kouta, Paul, Seth, Specture, Arthur, Eric and Ron run up to their newcomers and stole some gem.)

Steve: What's happening to them?
( Phillip, Paul, Kouta, Specture, Seth, Ron, Eric and Arthur turn into weird looking creatures that look like the Loonatics castles.)

Duck: (Sarcastic) This is gonna be fun.

Rev: Rip, the book!

Rip: Ok!

Rev: Go hide!
( Rip hid himself in a shelter thing while the rest of them are battling them.)

Deuce: No hard feelings Loonatics!

Ace: Shut up Deuce!

Eric: Hey Ace! Time to Die!

Ace: No Time for you to die.( Ace lured him by a death portal that Ace turned on and Eric dies.)

Eric: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Lexi: 7 to go, Hurry!

Steve: Okay Specture wake up and shine!!!!!!!( Steve manuplates a shiney looking beam right threw Specture's heart.)

Specture: Dang! Steve i will get you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!( He melts.)

Duck: Alright only 6 to go.

Rev: Okay Seth this is payback for the fainting!

Seth: Oh wanna try the drink again?!

Rev: Im not stupid!
( Steve and Rev kick him and Steve blows him up with his telekenis.)

Steve: Nice work Rev.

Rev: Nice assist Steve. 5 more to go!

Lexi: Now lets go kick some ron butt!

Ron: Excuse me? Nobody makes fun of me! ever!( Steve and ACe creep up and used acombo on him and he dies.)

Steve: Whoa. 4 to go!

Tech: Almost done!

Slam: Ya!

Tech: Alright kouta lets see how you like it being in the sky!

Kouta: Huh?
( Tech zapps him with his teleportal invention that he forgot to menchin.)

Kouta: You stupid dog!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
( Kouta appears at a big gigantic cliff with a lava pool beneathe it and he fallls and dies.)

Slam: Ok. 3 to go!

Steve: Yay!

Lexi: Alright Phillip time for a little revenge on you!

Phillip: Oh look. Lexi is gonna try to attack me.

Lexi: Yep and its gonna hurt!( Phillip gets blasted into the death portal and dissappears.)

Steve: Nice job Lexi!

Lexi:Thanks Steve!

Tech: And then they were 2.

Rev: Alright Paul!
( Instead of Rev finishing him off Rip touches the spell book and a giant lightnig comes out and is headed for Paul. Paul is Dissaporated.)

Ace: Yes! One more Loonatics!

Fredrick: Come on Arthur you are my only hope!

Arthur: Don't worry sir i am powerful than those other fools.

Steve: Oh crap!

Ace: Whoa he's a bit huge!

Steve: A bit?

Ace: Ok. A lot!

Arthur: Your powers cannot defeat me, Loonatics!

Rev: What do we do now?

Tech: I don't know!

Rev: Think!

Tech: Rip!

Rip: What?

Tech: Search for a spe--( He gets hit.)

Rip: A what?

Tech: A spell!!!!!

Rip: Okay!( Rip searches through the book and finds a spell that he can't figure out to say.)

Rip: Aw. I can't read this.( Or so he thought he strokes the page with the spell on it and started glowing a suddenly a bubble came out.)

Steve: Put all of your powers in the bubble!
( Everybody puts their powers in one by one.)

Slam: Oh Arthur! Heads up!

Steve: Now!( The bubble is launched and it hit Arthur across the chest and he is gone. Steve and Lexi give him a final kick before he dissapears.)

Ace: You guys did really well together.( Lexi and Steve blush.)

Fredrick: Deuce escape quickly!( Deuce runs away.)

fredrick: Give.........me.........the book.

End of Chapter 25.



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Chapter 26: Face to face.

Rip: Uh he wants the book.

Steve: Oh no, he is transforming into something really,REALLY powerful.

Ace:Crap!

Fredrick: Oh loonatics time to die!

Lexi: Actully we ant it to be the other way!

fredrick: Run Deuce!

Deuce: It's too bad i can't see the show Loonatics but its been a real pleasure.

Ace: Attack!
( The loonatics fight as hard as they could.)

Tech: Chief he's sending demons!

Ace: They are gonna be a little tough to beat.

Lexi: Oh yeah but we'll try anyway.

Steve: Rev! Behind you!

Rev: Thanks Steve i could have been dead!

Steve: Yeah i know so glad i saved your life!

Tech: Steve!
( Steve looks to see Fredrick in front of him.)

Fredrick: Your first new loonatic! I have been always wanna battle you!

Steve: Yeah and our battle will be over really quick too!( Steve tries to explode his brain but he has the same powers as Steve so they are having a thought fight.)

Fredrick: your powers are more powerful than i thought!

Steve: Yeah but yours are a little weaker than mine and there is no way your getting that spell book!

Fredrick: Oh really?( One of his demons kidnapps Rip.)

Rip: Hey let---HELP!!!

Steve: Rip! were coming!

Fredrick: Uh uh uh. I don't think so newbie!

Lexi: Steve!

Ace: Steve!

Slam: Steve!

Tech: Steve!

Duck: Uh Steve!

Rev: Steve!

Rip: Steve hurry!

Fredrick: So Steve what is it going to be, Your friends or..............The book!

Steve:( Talking to himself) come on what should i do?

Fredrick: Times running Steve!

Steve: I just want everything to Shut up! ( The pulse from Steve's brain made everything in slow motion except Steve.)

Steve: Well let's see here. Free Ace,........Rip.........Duck.....Tech............Lexi.............Rev..........and Slam. Maybe do a little something.( Kisses Lexi on the cheek.) Perfect she will notice that definatley. Now the bad guys.( Steve runs to see Deuce running away in slow motion. Steve blocked the exit with a giant stone. ) (Steve chuckles.)

Steve: Okay now Mr. Fredrick.( Steve punches him in the head.)
( All of the sudden everything goes back to its normal speed.)

Ace: Whoa What happened?

Fredrick:OWCH!!!

Steve: Rush him!( The loonatics finish him off by leading him to the portal.)

Fredrick: NOOOOOO! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! ( He's done.)

Lexi: Why is my face wet?

Steve: Gee i don't know.

Ace: What happened?

Steve: I may did Stopped Deuce, Punched Fredrick in the head and freed you guys.

Tech: I know but how?

Steve: Must have been angry.

Duck: Wow.

Steve: It wasted alot of power though.

Deuce: Dang the door! YOU! ( Pointing at Steve.)

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Chapter 27: Deuce's odd escape.

Ace: Hey Deuce you know this doesn't concern Steve!

Steve: Yeah what did i do?( Steve lies.)

Deuce: Stop lying! You some how put everything in slow motion.

Steve: And?

Deuce: How did you do it?!( Runs and pull Steve by the shirt.)

Steve: I don't know it just happened!

Deuce: I Want a straight answer!

Ace: Leave him alone Deuce!

Deuce: Shut up Ace! Now tell me Steve!

Steve: No.

Deuce:What?

Steve: Are you deaf stupid i said NO!!!!!!( Steve started blowing wind and specture hands started coming out of Steve and pushed Deuce away.)

Deuce: Why you!

Ace: Looks like we are going to defeat you......

????: No we will too.

Rev: Zadavia?

Tech: How'd you get here?

Zadavia: Oh i found the entrance but the bad news is we will be here for another 15 minutes.

Steve: We?

Zadavia: I brought some company.

Lexi: Is it?

Zadavia: Yep. Optimatus, Massive, and Weathervane.

Massive: Ready to kick some butt!

Optimatus: Your forgeting one thing sister that we only have 12 minutes here.

Zadavia: Oh yeah!

Weathervane: Well where is he?

Steve: Right here!

Deuce: Oh no! No worries i got the book!

Steve: But how?

Rip: I don't know i felt something craw up my arm and the book was gone!

Steve: Oh no that's not good he's got every single spell there is.

Deuce: That's right! First lets put on some groove!

Steve: I reconize it!

Lexi: What!

Steve: It is the Golfinger theme but in instrumental.

Ace: Huh?

Steve: 007?

Ace: Oh!

Steve: Lets turn up the heat!( Deuce summons fire elementals.)

Slam: Oh no.

Duck: Wait a minute this looks easy!

Steve: Oh yeah Duck's near water!

Duck: Take this! ( Duck summons his aqua dense.)
(He shot right at the fire elemental and it turned into ashes.)

Massive: The book!

Deuce: Nice try Gravity person!( Deuce summons a giant mirrior and massive's power reflected and hit him back.)

Massive: Dang!

Zadavia: That book! I know it! It was at my base but i forgot to read it!
But it isn't a spell book.

Steve: it must have transfromed into a spell book once it got sucked into the game!

Deuce: Alright no more fun and games Loonatics its time to be gone!
( Evil laugh.)

To be continued.

End of Chapter 27.

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Chapter 28: Times up/The escape.

(Deuce laughs as hard as he could while he is holding this powerful staff.)

Deuce: I'll take that!( Deuce turns the staff into a rope and kidnapped Ace's sword.)

Ace: Oh! My sword!

Zadavia: Oh no its worser now that he's got the sword.

Deuce: Oh thanks Ace you shouldn't have!

Ace: Give it back Deuce!

Deuce: How about...........NO!!!

Ace:Guys we have got to get my sword back, quick!

Duck: But Ace he's SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO tough.

Ace: Duck. I think we can do it.

Steve: Yeah. We gotta somehow find a weakness on him, you know a-come-from-around-him-at-the-same-time.

Rev: You mean the A,C,F,A,H,A,T,S,T!

Tech: (Closes Rev's beak.)Yeah Rev we get the point. Wow you're still annoying a bit even when your fast annoying voice is gone but its not bad when you talk normaly.

Lexi: I agree with Steve we should do a sneak attack and gang up on him.

Zadavia: Uh were fading.

Optimatus:(While attacking deuce.) We only have 5 minutes to get the book!

Weathervane: Oh no! My time is up!

Massive: No!!!!!!!!!!!Weathervane!
( Weathervane dissappears and their watches have different times.)

Massive: Just us three now.

Zadavia: Yep. Loonatcs perform now!

Steve: Go!
( The Loonatics go and try their attack.)

Massive: My time is up!( Massive dissapears and is back in the real world.)

Optimatus: just us left Zadavia.

deuce: Ha! You loonatics can't go back!

Ace: Why?!

Deuce: You need to know your code.

Ace: What?

Deuce: I say no more.

Zadavia: Brother got the book?

Optimatus: Almost................Got it! I got it!

Deuce: dang you!

Zadavia: Times up!

Optimatus: Ok Loonatics farewell you have to go back on your own...................( Both Zadavia and Optimatus fade away.)

Deuce: No the book!! Damn it!

Ace: Now guys!

Rev: Ace i got your sword!

Ace: Thanks Rev!

Lexi: Hey a wormhole look out!

Deuce: Oh no its here! I'll get you later Loonatics! You'll see!!( Deuce disappears into the wormhole.)

Ace: Yay! we did it Loonatics!

Lexi: Hi 5 Steve!

Steve: Yeah.( Both blush.)

Rip: Uh.......were not done yet!

Slam:B-B-B-B-B----

Duck: What are you saying Slam?

Tech: I think he means BOMB!

Steve: RUN!!!!!!
( The loonatics exit the scene and blew up that area and sand went everywhere.)

Tech: Everybody Okay? Anybody alive?

Steve: Everybody's alive Tech.

Tech: Good.

Ace: What does Deuce mean by code?

Steve: Maybe we gotta search for a door or a portal and a keyboard.

Tech: Steve's right.

Ace: Let's go.

End of Chapter 28.

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Chapter 29: Back to Earth.

Ace: Okay it has been 5 minutes and still we need to come up with a strategy.

Steve: Well let's see if we can find any clues of getting the hell out of here.

Lexi: I agree.
( The Loonatics go far into the mountains as far as they could.)

Tech: Listen.

Steve: I reconize it!

Rev: What is it?

Steve: Goldeneye by Tina Turner.

Ace:Whoa its kinda creepy.

Duck: I know its giving me the creeps already.

Slam: Whoaa. Goosebumps.

Rip: Where is the music coming from anyway?

Steve: I Don't know. Hey wait a minute!( Steve runs.)

Ace: Steve where are you going?

Steve: The music is the clue to getting us out of here!

Tech: Good thinking.

Steve: Thanks.

Duck: whoa we have to cross this bridge i see.

Steve: Yep.

Duck: It looks dangerous.

Steve: Maybe we gotta sing to put this bridge together.

Duck: What?!

Ace: Sing?

Rip: Question is what song?

Steve: Try this one.( Clears throat.)"oooooooooooooohooooooooooweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeooooooooooooooooooooooooooooweuhmumba wayooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooohooooooooooooooooooooweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeoooooooooooooooooooooooooweunnnumbaway.
In the jungle the mighty jungle the lion sleeps tonight. In the jungle the mighty jungle the lion sleeps tonight".( Pretty soon everybody smiles and starts singing.)

Everybody:OOOOOOOoooooooooooooooohoooooooooooooooWeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooweumumbaway.OOOOOOOOOOOOOooooooooooo
oooooweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeooooooooooooooooooooooooweumumbaway".

Steve: Hush my Darling! Don't fear my darling! The Lion Sleeps Tonight! Hush my Darling! Don't Fear my darling! The Lion sleeps Tonight!


Duck: I see a lion he's falling asleep!


Evrybody: OoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooWeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooweumumbaway!

Ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooweumumbaway!

Ace: The bridge is together we can cross!


Lexi: Good job Steve.


Steve: Thanks.( He blushes.)


Lexi: What's wrong?


Steve: Nothing.


Ace: Let's cross.

( The Loonatics cross the bridge.)


Steve: Shhhhhhhhhhhhh. You'll wake the lion.


Rev: Let's pass him before he wakes up.


Lexi: What type of lion is that?


Steve: Its one of those off of Aladdin the ones that have swords.


Lexi: Oh.


Duck: Hey look!


Steve: Shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!( Covers Duck's mouth.) The lion has got sensitive hearing.


Duck: Oh sorry.

Ace: Hey look the keyboard.


Rev: Excellent.


Tech: What's the code?


Steve: Hmmmm. Well- Hey a riddle! Its not a code its a riddle.


Rev: Read it.


Tech: What three colours were the lion? And name the land you're in? And What's the song that is playing?


Steve: Ok i know 2/3. The first question is the lions colours were Green, yellow and Blue.


Tech: Correct. The green light is flashing.


Steve: The second. The song is.................................................Goldeneye by Tina Turner.


Tech: Right again.


Steve: Hmmmmmmm. Wait i know! Zobidorph i think.


Tech: Right again. How'd you know?


Steve: Zadavia told me that day i met you guys and when she was talking of what happened to me she also told me about the name of this island.


Tech: Why?


Steve: To keep me prepared i guess.


Ace: Its open!


Duck: Yes Finally we can go home!


Rev: The lions awake!


Steve: Oh crap. Go!( The Loonatics go into the portal that led them back home.)


Rev: Were home finally!


Duck: And..........


Ace: Were normal again!


Rev: My-voice - its - back!


End of chapter 29.





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Last Chapter.

Epologue/Chapter 30: The Date.

Steve: Im so glad were normal.

Lexi: Me too.( Hugs Steve.)
( They both blush.)

Zadavia: Ah. Loonatics you're back!

Steve: And normal too.

Zadavia: Yep. Where's you're game?

Steve: Right here.

Zadavia: Send it to me.
( Steve sends the game to Zadavia.)

Zadavia: Here we go.( Zadavia sees the evil face go off of the game as she puts it in the scanner that gets red of those type monsters.)

Zadavia: You're game is now safe to play.

Steve: Thanks Zadavia.

Ace: Bye bye fredrick thats all i have to say.

Tech: Lexi.( Nodds his head toward Steve.)

Lexi: Oh Tech im too shy.

Ace: Go Lex.

Lexi: Um Steve?

Steve: Yeah?

Lexi: Are you doing anything later?

Steve: Nope im free as a bird.

Lexi: good because i was wondering if we can um......

Steve: are you asking me out on a date?

Lexi: Yep.

Steve: Sure.
( The other Loonatics watch Steve and Lexi leave.)

Ace: Have fun guys.
( The scene changes to the restraunt.)

Steve: So.

Lexi: Yeah.

Steve: Do you wanna dance?

Lexi: Okay.
( Steve and Lexi hold hands as they danced to a Cliff richard song Do you wanna dance?)

Steve: That was great.

Lexi: The next song.

Steve: The bee gees how deep is your love.

Lexi: Oh Steve?

Steve: Yea-( Lexi kisses him on the lips as they danced passionatly.)

Lexi: I was saving that.

Steve: Wow like i was about to do the same thing.

Lexi: Wicked.

Steve: Yeah.
( Steve and Lexi continued to dance and have fun.)
                                   THE END
End of Chapter 30 / Epilogue.

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nobody's answering?cry

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Hello? What did you think guys?

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