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Fuki Maboroshi(Dying Vision)
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Okay, this is probably my first try at a fan fiction, so, bear with me.
I'm gonna describe the characters, and, their height.
Fuki Maboroshi:Japanese for "Dying Vision"
This will contain blood, violence, language, and, suggestive themes.(Don't worry, the Loonatics don't say much.)
Characters:You already know the Loonatics, but, I've gotta introduce the new guys...

Kai
Age:13
Height:4' 9"
A young boy living a normal life, he has a really bad mood problem.
He curses quite often, and, he doesn't care what other people think of him.

Okay, Kai is supposed t be one of the main protagonists in the story.
The reason I call it "Fuki Maboroshi" ...well, you'll find out...
He has blue hair, wears an outfit that shows the stomach, and, he wears jeans.
You'll have to imagine how he looks, until I can make a sprite to describe him a bit better...
Anyway, yeah, he swears, but, after he meets Tech, he might stop...
I wonder how...

Isaac
Age:18
Height:5' 8"
One of Kai's friends, the mystery man.

Now, this guy, he's supposed to be the mystery man.
You'll see him a bit thoughout the story, wearing a black cloak.
He originally had blonde hair, a red shirt, brown pants, and, had his hair in a ponytail.

Nell
Age:13
Height:4' 7"
Nell, was a girl that Kai has known as a child, a beautiful girl even at such a young age.
She, has a special healing ability that regenerates damaged body parts, even the heart.
If someones heart is damaged, and noone is around, she will appear out of nowhere and heal his/her heart.

Nell is supposed to be the love interest,(or something...)and, healer.
She has blue hair like Kai, wears a black dress, and, a small pale green cape.

Hope this will be good!

                          Prolouge:The plans begin:chaos is starting!
                                             3 years ago...
"Today is the celebration..."Someone murmered after using a pen to mark an X on November 18.

"So today, they plan to give the kid the sword right?"

"Exactly..."It showed two cloaked men talking about the special day that was happening in Toki.

It was supposed to be a celebration of sorts for the next heir of the shikon family...Kai.

"He's only ten, and, he's able to have such a weapon..."One of the men sighed, and, shook his head.

"...Don't worry,"The other man started in a cold tone,"the boss will kill that kid easy...there's no way he can escape with that kind of power..."

A man opened the door, and walked up to them, and, gave them a paper.He bowed out of respect, and, left as fast as he had come.

"It's from the boss..."One of them said looking at the old fashioned writing,"It must say what we need to do...and, when to do it..."

"Well, go ahead, read it!"The other one begged."Gee, aren't you the patient one..."The other said sarcastically.

He opened the envelope, and took out the slip of paper...
He read it, and, gave it to the other one.

"He says we should wait and attack tonight...when everyone is worn out from the festivities."He explained.

The other scoffed."Heh...that's just like him...leaving the kill for later...I'd rather go ahead, and, do it now."

"Look Tae,"apparently Tae was the impatient one..."I know you don't like it, but, we need to wait.If we try to get the sword now, everyone in the village will attack.It's best to wait for them to be tired...just trust the boss..."

Tae looked at the other, thinking for minute.He wanted to go get the sword now, but, the other refused to disobey their master...what should he do...
"Fine, Ky,"he sat down in the chair,"I'll wait...whether I like it, or, not..."

Ky smiled, and, said,"...Good..."They started to make their preparations for their plan...to take the treasure of the Toki people...!

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Hope I did good enough with this...
I'll post the first chapter soon, just be patient...

-- Edited by Shibuyah at 21:05, 2007-11-13

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