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A thousand miles

 (Before meteor)Rev was running home from the fair to tell his friends that there was a bad robbery at the fair. When he saw a meteor coming his way when he saw it he tried to run be didn’t get far so when it hit he fell and when he woke up he saw that he was in a hq or something he saw a pretty roadrunner over his head talking to some girl bunny he guessed her name was lexi because the roadrunner kept calling her that. when they look down at him he smiled because he was being nice. the roadrunner held out her hand to help him up when he was up she said her name was Vanessa Carlton and the bunny name was lexi bunny she asked for his name and he said his name and she said you are a roadrunner with super powers and he was shocked and said what .she said I have them to her powers are gravity and invisibly she said his was a gps unit  and speed he said can I try it out she said sure .and when another lady walked in she said her name was Zadavia.

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chapter 2

everyday rev and Vanessa would go do what ever they wanted to do but lexi could see right thought rev and her little plan so she went to go see her other team mates ace,duck,tech,and slam. ace was her guy bestfriend and the leader,duck is the guy who whants all the fame ,tech is the super genies ,slam is the big guy who loves food. 5 mins later they were going to leave the house to give them time by them self,ace and lexi were going on a date, duck and slam where fishing,tech was at a high school get together.so they thought tech was at the ice cream shop waiting for his team mates 1 min later they came.back at hq rev and Vanessa were so bord that they had a fight over what to do, they have settled on a movie the hunting hour; dont think about .when the movie was about over rev looked down at vanessa only to see her sleeping right next's to him .he thought she was so cute sleeping he could not hold it longer so he kissed her on her forehead. 5 mins later he feel a sleep.



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Danger Duck: [video phone rings and Danger Duck answers it] Hello. Make it snappy gramps we're off to save the city!
Dr. Fidel Chroniker: My name is Dr. Fidel Chroniker and my grandson is totally out of control.
Danger Duck: And this is our problem how? We're superheroes, send junior to bed without his video games and let us do our job.


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Um not to sound mean or anything but,put this story in paragraphs,
check you're spelling,and things like that,I can't really understand what
is happening in the story.

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thanks

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Danger Duck: [video phone rings and Danger Duck answers it] Hello. Make it snappy gramps we're off to save the city!
Dr. Fidel Chroniker: My name is Dr. Fidel Chroniker and my grandson is totally out of control.
Danger Duck: And this is our problem how? We're superheroes, send junior to bed without his video games and let us do our job.


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                                                         chapter  3
rev and vanessa were sleeping when the loonatics got back,

ace:let's not whake them up they look cuteaww

lexi: yea they look cutesmile

tech:lets go we dont what to wake them do we.

duck:yea i need my sleep and a hero need's its rest.yawn

lexi:who?confused


ace and duck: me i need some sleepyawnyawn

duck: i was talking about me furious

slam: goodnight smile

the other loonatics (tech,ace,duck and lexi):goodnight slamaww

lexi and ace:goodnight guysyawnyawn

tech and duck:goodnight awwaww

tech:goodnight duckyawn

duck:goodnight techaww

duck:goodnight me yawn



-- Edited by athousandmiles at 23:34, 2007-11-01

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Danger Duck: [video phone rings and Danger Duck answers it] Hello. Make it snappy gramps we're off to save the city!
Dr. Fidel Chroniker: My name is Dr. Fidel Chroniker and my grandson is totally out of control.
Danger Duck: And this is our problem how? We're superheroes, send junior to bed without his video games and let us do our job.


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i love the 2nd and 3rd chapter
tech:goodnight duck

duck:goodnight tech

duck:goodnight me

that was so funny

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Danger Duck: [video phone rings and Danger Duck answers it] Hello. Make it snappy gramps we're off to save the city!
Dr. Fidel Chroniker: My name is Dr. Fidel Chroniker and my grandson is totally out of control.
Danger Duck: And this is our problem how? We're superheroes, send junior to bed without his video games and let us do our job.
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