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sorry it took so long everyone!

chapter 1:kid power!

yawn said ace as he walked in the halls of acme elementery,he had
a school uniform on,which was a white tee button up shirt,a red
tie,black shorts,and black shoes.

ace walked to ms.kitty's classroom,ms.kitty opened the door and
saw him,she was in a silver tee shirt and gray slacks,blue sneakers
were on her feet.

ace sat down at a table with 5 other anthros,a rabbit,a duck,
road runner,a coyote and a tasmaining(sp?)devil.

hi greeted lexi,lexi was in a blue button up tee,a black long skirt,and
back shoes.''im lexi''

the others were in boys uniforms.

thats duck said lexi pointing to a duck with messy hair.

im tech said the coyote,he had black rimmed glasses on his
face and seemed to be working on an invention.

thats rev said lexi and rev nodded.

and thats slam said tech,slam was devouring(sp?)50 cookies.

oh my names ace and Im 8 years old said ace proudly

so are we said lexi''well techs 10 and slams 13''

wow said ace smiling.

*the speaker turns on*

*Attension(sp?)everyone the cafe has been raided and no its
not slam STAY IN YOU CLASSES*

wow a robber said ace

a food robber said duck shyly.

well then lets stop him said ace and they all put there
paws in together.

KID POWER shouted everyone(total scooby doo moment here)

end of chapter 1

REVIWE REVIWEbiggrin


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why isn't anyone reviweing?.

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Cool I like it, please do the next chapter. and am i right in thinking Ace is new or am i just mad?
And Yay mini Ace is sweet!!!

-- Edited by magicmeercat at 15:53, 2007-11-18

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ya ace is the new kid..so heres chapter 2.

chapter 2:the villen

at recess...

now what do we do asked tech smartly.

we need a plan stated ace smiling and lexi kissed him on
the cheek,ace blushed and duck looked angery.

now-who-is-the-villen-asked rev jumping up and down.

er tech asked ace

hm well I think it's bandet a raccon transfer student from russia said
tech with a hint of happiness.

ok team lets jet said ace and they walked off

hm lets jet I like that thought ace fallowed closely by
duck.

hey ace asked duck shyly and ace looked at him

ya said ace

do you think I would be a great leader asked duck.

sure duck said ace''a great one''and duck smiled.

hey look its ducky yucky said a boy and all the kids laughed
cept for ace,lexi,slam,tech and rev.(duck would not be laughing).

leave him alone said ace and the kids went back to playing.

thanks muttered duck.

well well well said a voice(it hade a high russen accent),they
looked and saw a 14 year old raccon,he was in the boys uniform
and had thick shiny black hair.

hey you're the one that stole the food said tech

ojjjookjhjh said slam(the monster).

catch me if you can wimps laughed bandet and he ran off.

hey get back hear said ace and lexi and they ran after him with
the rest of kid power.

end of chapter...

please reviwe.


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He He love it. Yay Ace sticking up for Duck. And poor Duck!!! I love this story I am so into it!!!

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I'll stick up the next chapter later.

-- Edited by kari bunny at 16:19, 2007-11-18

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chapter 3:save the day!

ace and the other's chased after him,well hurrying then cornered him.

hey you stop stealing said ace angerly

ya said lexi and tech''or else''

or else what asked bandet putting his hand in his back pocket.

well make ya said ace and duck nodded

aw ain't that sweet said bandet smirking duck charged at him.

*bandet stabs duck in the side with a knife*

duck fell to the ground helpless,ace and the others were around him,luckly
a teacher saw,called 911 and took bandet away for the crimes he commited.

duck duck said ace*duck closed his eyes as the paramedics came*.

*Later*

duck came out with a bandege on his side.

duck shouted everyone and they hugged,they then went to town square.

the mayor was waiting for them and put a medel around each of them.

to are heros kid power said the mayor and everyone clapped and cheered.

ace what does it take to be leader of this whole thing asked a reporter.

courage,a heart and stick together said ace smiling,duck looked mad.

you're great ace said everyone but duck who was sulking and walked away
no one noticed not even his team mates,duck walked into the darkness not
to be seen for 9 more years,when they all meet again.

one day I'll show you ace,I'LL SHOW ALL OF YOU said duck grinning''i''ll be
leader if we ever meet again,be sure of it long ears''duck looked back and
kept walking.

9 years later.

danger duck is sitting on his bed recalling the memory.

why is it always you ace w-why can't it be me said duck crying''we were
bestest friends''

END

ok that was short but its done.please reviwebiggrin

-- Edited by kari bunny at 22:43, 2007-11-19

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Ahhhh. I love the story and I feel so sorry for Duck!!! Give Duck some attension People!!!!
And im an Ace fan. Well done Kari Bunny i think its a great story. Loved it!!!

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awwww... kari, this story is so sweet. ('specially mini ace and a mini acexi moment)


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for some reason i feel sorry for duck but still good storybiggrin

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