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New home, Odd powers, and the Future?
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ok for everone to know this is my first fanfic ever! i've been wanting to do one since i joined the forum and reading all of yours made me feel like i could do the same as you. now, first i have to do my character profiles and here they are!

Name: Cara(carolyn)Rabbit
Age: 20(was really 13)
Species: Rabbit
Apperance: Technocolored eyed,peach fur, brown-dark hair, curvy on the bottom. Wears a yellow tubetop with an orange tank under it, white jeans, and brown shoes.
Uniform: Like the other loonatics, it's black with a cerulean blue triangle on it, and her fur is also cerulean blue when with the uniform on.
About her:She was one day on a fieldtrip in a science museum and fooled around with a invention somewhat like a time machine. She hit a button that teleported her to 2772, also this effected her age from being 13 to 20! She also knew another rabbit named Kevin who was always determined to marry her, even when they were in kindergarden. Now that she is in the future, there's no way to get back to the past and the only family she has is the loonatics.(
P.S. She likes one of the guys on the team!)
Powers: she can manipulate the environment all around her.

Name:Kevin Bunny
Age:21(was really 13)
Species:Rabbit
Appearance: Hazel eyes, grey fur, muscular, wears the clothing a prince would wear.
About him: When Carolyn was teleported he ran into the time machine to rescue his love. He ended up on a different and was 8 years older than before. The leaders of the planet, the king and queen, thought he was somewhat part of a proficey on their planet and took him in and took care of him like he was their own child. He searches galaxies to find carolyn and marry her once and for all and live happily ever after.
Power: He can hypnotize you or control your body.




Please wish me luck on my fanfic!


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  It's a sunny day in Belford,NJ and Mr.Smits class is going to the science museum for a fieldtrip.

Mr.Smits: Ok class, before we start, I'm going to pick partners for the trip. Maryjane Quince & Micheal Kennedy, Alice Avery & Jill Hill, etc.

Carolyn:(whispers) come on! we came here to learn and have fun didn't we?doh

Mr.Smits: and lastly........ Carolyn Rabbit & Kevin Bunny!

When carolyn heard this she turned around and looked in the way back of the bus to see the cutest, smartest, hottest, and athletic rabbit of the entire class... kevin bunny.The girls in her class would say things like "you make a great couple", "your so lucky",and "you shold go out with him". Carolyn remebered him from kindergarden and when he he first met her, he was shot by cupid's arrow. Ever since, he's been flirting with her, writing her love notes, and in the bathroom he wrote "CR+KB", and ohter ways to get her to fall for him. she turned back around with a shocked and disgust look on her face. why? because she hated his guts.

carolyn: Mr.Smits, can i be apart of another group?confused

Mr.Smits: sorry, no can do. Ok class gather around, were going to be here the entire, you can explore, but , you have to stay with your partner ok?

Class: Ok!!!!aww

Everyone went runnign in their seperate ways and when carolyn was about go her seperate way she felt someone grab her arm. she turned around to see( you guessed it)kevin.

Kevin: Where u goin' sweetheart?evileye

carolyn: Anywhere but with out you!doh

Kevin: i know somewhere we can go and your coming with me!evileye

Kevin dragged her to the top floor to see the section called"world of tomorrow". this was good because kevin wanted some alone time with her.

Carolyn: your joking, right?blankstare

kevin: nope, theres no one up here so why don't we fool around with the inventions?evileye

carolyn:blankstare.......biggrinOK!!!!

they ran down the hall of the inventions ans stopped in front of one called"time machine".

carolyn: this one first! this one first!clap.gif

kevin: ok!aww

They jumped over the fence, kevin went to press the buttons and carolyn was admiring the machine. the she got an idea.devilish.gif

carolyn: watch me! i'm gonna go to the future!w00t.gif

kevin laughed atthis when she ran, hit a random button, and an back to get into a dumb pose.

carolyn; here i go!w00t.gif

All the sudden, ther were different color lights, a lazer shot at her and she just... disappeared?sprint.gif

Kevin:jawdrop.gif CAROLYN!!!!!!!!

He ran to the machine, pushed the same button she did, and jumped in front of it.

kevin: hang on carolyn! I'm coming!redface.gif

The different colors came back and so did the lazer. it shot him and he too did mysteriously vanished.............Now the real story beginsdevilish.gif

to be continued.....

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Chapter 1

  It's another day in Acmetropolis, a day like any other. Let's look into Loonatics HQ to see whats happening. The loonatics are having breakfast.

Duck: Blegh! Lexi you burnt my eggs!furious

Lexi: well sorry! Ok!furious

Duck: it's gonna take a lot mor tha-

He couldn't finish because lexi turned away and put her hand in front of his face.

Duck: Oh!oh no you didn't! you did not just give me the hand! well, it's on now girlfriend!mad.gif

Duck took some eggs and threw them right at lexi's face, then lexi took her toast and threw it at him! After that this led to a foodfight between them! Meanwhile, the others just watched.

Rev: Should-we-stop-them?confused

Ace: Hey, i'm just enjoying the show.bored.gif

Duck and lexi are still fighting, then zadavia calls.

Zadavia: Loonatics, we have a major crisis on our hands.
Ace: whats up zadavia?confused

Zadavia: it seems the pierre le pew has yet kidnapped another woman. this is a picture of her.

The picture appears and comes u of a very, very, attractive female bunny. The guys were wide-eyed and had drool coming from their mouths, but lexi on the other hand had a jealous look on her face.

Slam: ghtqaplefzng hubba hubba!imslow.gif

Rev: sweet-meep-meep!biggrin.gif

Tech:whistlesshocked.gif

Duck: humina,humina,humina,etc.omfg.gif

Ace:(purrs), what a woman.evileye

Lexi: shes not that hot ok?!?rage.gif

Ace: yeah you're right........SHE IS SEXY!!!!devilish.gifbiggrin.gif

Lexi: WHAT DID U JUST SAY!!!!?rage.gif

Zadavia: There is no file of her existing,but, you must save her before pierre does anything. good luck loonatics, zadavia out.

Ace: all right gang, time to rescue the damsel in distress!

                                              (Yellow triangle)

The loonatics have their jetpacks and fly to a brokendown factory. They land, run inside, hide behind some crates, and as they look behind the crates they see the female rabbit tied to a pole and pierre is talking to her.

Pierre: since you fell from the sky and landed in my arms, i guess gods has finally answered my prays, do you not agree?aww

Girl bunny: NO I DO NOT AGREE AT ALL!?!rage.gif

Pierre: don't deny it madmousille, for tonight we will make love and nothing will stop us from doing it!horns.gif

Girl bunny:blankstare........what the french toast?

The loonatics jump out from their hiding spots.

Ace:eh, i don't think so, cause your going to be in your little prison cell tonight.

Pierre: The loonatics! Don't try to steal my little rose, she's mine!

Duck: well, she's going to be ours when were through with u!

Pierre charged at them and used his staff as a weapon. He tried to hit ace, but missed,  and ace took otu the guardian strike sword and fought back. Lexi jumped in the air and brain blasted him in the back. Duck used his "eggs of fiery" and shot him in the stomache, but missed and hit lexi who went flying into the wall.

Duck: uh oh....Sorry!

Tech got hit by the egg and turned to ash,then he regenerated himself and levitated a crate and threw it at pierre,but he too missed and the crate went flying and hit the ceiling. Ace took one last blow at pierre and was then finally beaten. Ace went over and handcufted him.

Ace: Oh yeah, your gonna be in for a long time.

During the entire fight, slam and rev were trying to get the girl bunny untied from the pole, the tried chainsaws, axes, lawnmowers, and even using their own teeth, and finally they just pulled the knot and she was free( what a waste of gardening tool). But then, the factory was about to collapse and a rock hit the bunny on the head and she was uncautious, slam picked her up and threw her over his sholder and he and rev ran out with the others safely before the building was on the ground.

Ace: whew, that was a close call.aww

Lexi: i'll say, at least we got them out.(points to pierre who is being taken to prison and then the bunny on slam's sholder.)

Rev:speaking-of-that-who-is-she-cause-shes-gorgeous-and-hot-and-did-she-really-fall-from-the-sky-like-pierre-said?confused

Tech: well, lets take her back to HQ and find out.




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