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This is the actuall story so get ready. Oh btw i am doing my own season.
Its a continuation.
Prologue

Ace: I wonder when Lexi and Steve are coming back.

Duck: Ah i think they are just wondering around somewhere.

Tech:Yes.....Yes.......Okay........Bye. That was Steve he said they are going to be late.

Duck: Why?

Tech: Traffic.

(One hour later.)

Ace: Aw. They should be back by now.
(The doorbell rings.)

Steve: Ello?

Ace: What happened to you?

End of Prologue.


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looks interesting. So what was Lexi and Steve doin', cuz i dout traffic was that bad.
Continu pleas.

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Steve and Lexi went on a date which was in my previous story: the year things go weird. So pretty much that's were i left off.

Chapter 1: The tickets.

Lexi: Steve almost got beaten up by smugglers on our way here from our date. Steve used his telekenis powers and killed them all by accident and then Steve fained, so i have been carrying him up the stairs.

Tech: But Steve called?

Lexi: That was only 2 minutes on the road before Steve got beaten up.
Duck: Im confused.confused

Lexi: You see the smugglers ran towards our vehicle and started beaing Steve up.

Duck: Oh! I see!

Ace: Steve! Steve! Steve!( Shaking him.) Wake up, buddy!

Steve: Huh? What? Where am i?

Duck: At HQ. You killed smugglers?

Steve: It was an accident! I didn't mean too! It was my powers!

Duck: Oh! So how did your powers do it?! Who was controlling them huh?!

Tech: Stop it you two! Now Duck, i'll do the talking. Steve? Was there a problem with your powers?

Steve: Well, it felt that my mind was being under controll by somebody else.

Tech: Come on. Me and Rev will fix that problem.

Rev: Come-on-Steve-lets-get-ya-better.( Tech and Rev grabbed the medical bed and took Steve away into Tech's lab.)

Lexi: ( Putting her hands on her chest.) I hope he's okay.

Slam: Hey look, we forgot the mail. i'll get it. (mumble.)

Ace: Okay Slam.

Slam: OMG! Look!

Duck: What?

Slam: 8 tickets to Acme Los angelas!

Ace: 8? Why 8? There's 7 of us here.

Duck: Hey, maybe Rip can come too.

Lexi: Good idea. ( Tech comes out with the results.)

Tech: Okay Steve will just have to rest a while in my brain machine. He will restore tomorrow.

Ace: That's good news.

Rev: What's-with-the tickets?

Lexi: Some person must have gave us tickets to Acme L.A.

Tech: That's sweet.

Lexi: Like Steve we should get a good night sleep.

Ace: Good plan.

Tech: How did the date go anyway?

Lexi: It was fun me and Steve kissed, danced and fell in love.

Ace: Sweet.( Talking to himself.) Hmm.

Rev: When's-the-flight?

Duck:( Searching for time and date.) Tomorrow at 4:07 pm.

Slam: That'll be fun.

Ace: Yeah. Good night Loonatics.
( The loonatics hit the sack and Tech has Steve in his room.)

Tech: Oh good Steve is still fine.

End Of Chapter 1.

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Chapter 2: Time to Pack. Or is it?

( The Loonatics started to wake up one at a time. Tech woke up last and he rose from his bed and see Steve gone.)

Tech:( Bursts out of his lab.) Steve's gone! Where is he?!

Steve: Uh.......Tech? Im right here.

Tech: Oh. Well. I'm an idiot.

Steve: Tech! No you're not! You are one of my best friends in the whole world, you're not a idiot, everybody makes mistakes sometimes.

Tech: But...but...(Stars crying.)

Steve: There...there...its okay. Uh. Ace? What's with the packing?

Ace: We are going on a vacation.

Steve: Well. Have fun( Tech stops crying and clears his throat and pretend he didn't do it.)

Ace: No all of us.

Steve: Really? Including me?

Lexi: Of course.

Steve: Yay!biggrin(Thinking to himself.) I haven't had one of those in ten years.

Duck: Hello, Steve? Arn't you packing?

Steve: Oh Yeah!( Rushes to his room and starts packing.)

Tweetums: Hello, Loonatics we have a- what are you doing?

Ace: Three words. Va-ca-tion.

Tweetums: Oh um.........tell you what, take care of this guy and i will let you go okay?

Ace: Okay>weirdface

Tweetums: Tweetums out.

Ace: Before we go. We have to take care of someone at a jewerly store.

Lexi: I hope it isn't just a normal theif.

Ace: Let's jet!
( The Loonatics leave to go balttle this guy.)

????: Put the m-m-money in the-the -the- b-b-b-b-case!

Ace: Im sorry you didn't get your allowance!

????: Its the L-L-Loonat-Looneys again!

Tech: Is it Pinkster i presume?

Pinkster: Dang!

Steve: He is pretty easy.

Pinkster: Well New guy huh?

Steve: The names Steve.

Pinkster: Well.....Steve..say goo-g-g-bye!( He fires a blast from his gun at Steve. But Steve's powerful Telekenis reflected it back.)

Pinkster: Ow!

Duck: Well....Pinkster...i guess you lost.

Pinkster: I-I-I-I'll get-i'll be back!( The police department took him away.)

Rev: That was easy.

Steve: That was easy.( Agreeing with Rev.)

Ace: Acme L.A here we come!
( I has been 3 hours and now they are rushing to their private plane.)

Girl: It the Loonatics! ( Startedcharging at them.)

Steve: Run!

Girl: Steve i love you!

Steve: Oh god.hmmbleh

Ace: There's our plane!

Steve: This reminds me of Beatlemania.

Tech: Yeah.

Lexi: look there's Rip!

Duck: How did he get here so fast?!

Rip: Hey guys!

Ace: Rip get in!
( Rip and the loonatics got in the plane and took off.)

Lexi: That was close.

Ace: Yeah.( All of the loonatics panting.)
( The plane took off and it took three hours to go there.)

Steve: Were here!
( The plane landed and they got out of the plane.)

Tech: Wow! a ride waiting for us?

End Of Chapter 2.

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Chapter 3: The odd car trip.

Steve: I guess so.

Driver: You must be the loonatics, i am pablo, your driver.

Lexi: Okay. Let's go guys.( The Loonatics get in the big car. The order in sitting positions are Lexi,Ace,Slam,Rip,Rev,Duck,Tech and Steve at the end.)

( The driver starts to start the car but Steve has his arm stuck on the outside.)

Tech: Hey wait! My friend is stuck.

Steve: Oh no!

Tech: He's deaf, he can't hear us!

Ace: Tech he's not deaf, he's fainted.

Rev: The-car-is-moving-by-itself!

Duck: This is gonna hurt for Steve.

Steve: Ahhhhhhhhhhhh!! HELP!!Hey wait i'll bet i can stop the car.
( Steve tries using his telekenis to stop the car.)

Voice on radio:(Evil laugh.) It telekenis proof!

Ace: Slam! Rev go help Steve in the car!
(Slam managed to punch the glass and threw Rev out as Rev managed to fly.)

Steve: I need help it didn't work!

Rev: Hang-on-Steve!( Slam climbed out and unstucked Steve as Rev flew him in.)

Ace: Gladly they are big car doors.

Lexi: You okay Steve?

Steve: Oooh! Ah! im fine Lexi.( Steve went and layed on Lexi's lap.)
(Ace has a concerned face.)

Duck: Hey What the-!
(All the loonatics are stuck together like glue.)

Tech: Oh no we're stuck!

Steve: I got an idea! Duck try shooting a water egg!

Duck: How about orange juice!

Steve: Good enough!
( Duck tries firing a orange juice egg and the glue melts.)

Tech: It worked!

Ace: Look that guy is awake!

Pablo: (Woke up.)Don't worry we will be there in 35 minutes.
( Time went by. And now its past 35 minutes and they have arrived at their hotel.)

Pablo: Here we are!

Steve: This is the hotel were staying in? It liiks deserted.

Pablo: but it still runs properly and its not abandoned. ( # seconds later the car leaves.)

Ace: Well, Lets go.

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Chapter 4: The Unusual Hotel.

Steve: I still don't understand why he just left.

Lexi: He nust have been in a hurry.
( Steve and Lexi hold hands on the way in.)

Ace: It still looks really,........ comfy?
( The Loonatics enter the hotel.)

Steve: Hey 8 rooms i'll go check it out.
( Steve runs and checks them out.)

Steve: Bedroom, Bedroom,Bedroom,Bedroom,Bedroom,Bedroom,Bedroom, Bathroom,Restraunt with nobody in it except us and a door that leads somewhere secretive!

Tech: Staircase?

Steve: Yeah!

Rip: This will do.

Ace: Wait a minute. How many bedrooms do you see, Steve?

Steve: Uh...............7!

Ace: That's not enough. There's only 8 of us.

Steve: One of us can share.

Ace: Let Lexi choose she is the only Female here so.....

Lexi:Hmmmmmm.

Tech: Who do you want to share a room with?

Lexi: With?

Tech: Yup.

Lexi: I'll share...with......Steve!

Steve: Okay lets unpack.

Lexi: Okay Buddy.
(They head to their to the room with the teal/pink.)

Steve: Oh. Look what colour this room is.

Lexi: Oh its Pink and Teal. Just.......

Steve: Huh?

Lexi: Oops. Nothing.

Steve: Ok? Anyways lets-
(Lexi runs and gives Steve a kiss on the lips.)

Steve: Well. That was....Wow!

Lexi: Lets meet the others they have probably unpacked.
( Those two went and met up with the others whom were done unpacking before they were because of Rev.)

Lexi: You guys are done already?

Ace: Yup. Rev, helpped us unpack.

Steve: That's nice.

Tech: Lets order Slam's favorite meal.

Slam:Hmm?

Tech: Pizza!

Slam: Pizza?! I Love Pizza!

Ace: We decided since we are on holiday, why not.
(Hours went by.)

Steve:(Walks and notices Pizza on the doorstep.)
Uh! Guys! The Pizzas here and the street is gone!

Ace: What? OMG!

Tech: All i see are houses.

Steve: Well, i don't.

Ace: Niether do i.

Rev: You-two-are-onto-something?

Steve: No. Of course not!

Ace: Not at all!

Steve: Wait never mind! I see them. Our eyes are playin tricks on us.

Ace: Oh Yeah!

Slam:PIZZA!!!!(Slam charges toward them.)

Duck: Oh no! Slam coodies!!!! He's going for it! Slam.(Grabs Pizza.) Don't even think about it. We all have to at least sit down,first.

Slam: Okay. Okay.

Ace: mmmm. Good pizza.
( The loonatics are stuffed with all the Pizza.)

Steve: What?! Dessert just appeared in my bedroom!

Ace: Okay this place is creeping us out.

Lexi: I agree with Steve of the dissapearing houses. I saw that we are surrounded by desertness.

Slam:Same.

Duck: Uh huh.

Rev: You're-right.

Tech: I think we believe youu now.

Rip: Yeah.

Ace: Im tired all of the sudden.

Tech:Yeah. Lets go to bed.

Steve: Yeah. ( The loonatics go to bed and fell asleep right away.)

End Of Chapter 4.





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Chapter 5: The Nightmare.

Steve: I feel so tired.yawn.gif

Ace: Same lets go to bed.( Sleepy.)

Tech: Uh Oh! Slam fainted.
( The other Loonatics look over at Slam and he has crashed on the couch.)

Rev: Uh....................We-better-go-to-bed-before-we-faint-too.

Rip: I agree with you bro.(Yawns.)
(The Loonatics go into their bedrooms and they go to sleep. Three hours later. Steve woke up and he had to go get a drink of water from the kitchen. Until he hears a strange noice.)

Steve:(Talking to himself.) What was that?
( Steve walked to were the noice was coming from and he started to get creeped out.)

Steve: Duck? Duck, this isn't funny, cut it out! Tech? Rip? Ace? Rev? Lexi? Slam? Anybody? Please answer im getting freaked out now. Stop it guys im coming after you! Guys?( Steve sees the door that leads downward or does it lead downward?)

Steve:Hmm. I wonder where this leads.( Steve opens the door and looks around blind.)

Steve: Oh man! I can't see a thing. Where's the dang light?( Steve feels the wall and feels a lightswitch and flicks it on.)

Steve: Whoa. Another hallway? ( Suddenly he spots a door and walks toward it which is on the other side.)
 
Steve: aw man! I hate hallways like this they creep me out.
( Steve walks furthur and furthur to the door and hears footsteps coming toward him. Steve steps back until he realizes who it is.)

Duck: Eyeeyeeye you talk to yourself so loud.

Steve: Duck? What are you doing here?

Duck: I was about to ask you the same thing. I am here because i heard you talking so loud that i was about to come to you and put a imaginary zipper and you shutting the heck up. What about you?

Steve: Im here because i was about to get a glass of water until i heard a noice coming from down here. And then you came.

DucK: I see. Strange hallway.

Steve: Yeah. Wanna go through this door and see what we can find?

Duck: Well, i don't know. uh.......

Steve: What's the matter are you scared?biggrin.gif

Duck: Me? Scared? Heck no! A famous action hero is not scared of an old door!

Steve: Thwn, why don't you go first and i will be right behind you, Okay?

Duck: Ok-ay.( Duck walks in the door and looks around.)fear.gif

Steve: Well? What do you see?

Duck: Some type of master bedroom.

Steve: Let me see. ( Steve walks in after Duck.) Whoa.omg.gif

Duck: I wonder who lived here?

Steve: Yeah. The door! It closed on us!

Duck: It won't budge!

Steve: Oh great!

Duck: What?
Steve: My stomache! Its turning purple! And a crack!jawdrop.gif
Duck: Alien!jawdrop.gif

Steve: Omg! My stomache has a baby alien! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!1
(A second later Steve woke up screaming.)

Steve: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! My stomache! Good, good. Phew!

Lexi: What's wrong?

Steve: i guess i had a terrible nightmare. Me and Duck! Alien in my stomache!

Lexi: Go back to sleep.

Steve: Okay, im alright.( Hours later its morning.)

Duck: Hey Steve can i talk to you for a minute.

Steve: Yeah.

Duck: I had a dream about you.

Steve: Same.

Duck: Really?

Steve: YEah.

Ace: Guys come on breakfast!smile.gif

End of Chapter 5.

How were those parts of the story,Siamese712?









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Good job so far, Steve! ^ ^;
Keep it up. =3

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Thanks Rye. The story will get better i promise.

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You're welcome. ^ ^;

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Chapter 6: The Next morning.

( The Loonatics sit down as Steve and Duck talk about their nightmare.)

Ace: You and Duck look pretty scared what's up?

Steve: We had the scariest nightmare last night.

Duck: it seemed like it actully happened.

Tech: That's weird. Tell us about it.

Steve: Well, in my dream i woke up and was about to get a glass of water until i heard a noice coming from the staircase over there. So i checked it out and Duck came and joined me. Then we walked down a few hallways and went into an old master bedroom that looked like it belonged to a king, then Duck became afraid of me and i looked down and saw that i had a alien in my stomache. After i woke up.
( The rest of the loonatics became shocked.)

Lexi: That's scary.

Ace: yeah. And it felt like it actully happened?
( Steve and Duck nodded.)

Ace: Tonight, we are going to check it out.

Lexi: Eyeball!

Steve; Where?!

lexi: In my drink.

Steve: I don't see anything.

lexi: What?

Steve: Where is it?

Lexi: Right there.

Steve: All i see is............Whoa! Where did it come from?

Tech: You see it?

Steve: Yeah.

Rip: Okay this place is really creeping me out.

Rev: I-agree.

Ace: Yeah. You got to admit this place is kinda suspicious.

Tech: Yeah. Tonight we will find out if this master bedroom exists.

Ace: better bring gadgets too Tech.

Tech: Yeah. Don't worry i brought parts so i can work on it.

End Of Chapter 6. Short Chapter.

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Yipes! That is one creepy place to stay!

Good going.

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Chapter 7: The first attempt.

( 7 hours later they were prepared for the attempted at the door downstairs.)


Ace: Okay here's the plan.Me,Lexi, Steve, Tech and Rev you come. Slam, Rip, Duck can stay and watch anything outside.


Slam; got it.


Ace: Lets do it team. (The 5 loonatics head to the strange staircase.)


Steve: Lets see if its actully a staircase.( Steve opens the door and its a tiny staircase that leads to another door.)


Steve: Another door?


Lexi: Stev is this what you saw?


Steve: No. When i opened it. It was just a hallway.


Ace: Weird. Let's check it out.


Tech: i got my Tech-o-mania 2000 with me to make sure nothing happens to us.


Rev: It-was-actully-my-idea-to-bring-it-in-the-first-place.


Tech:Uh. You were the one? I was the one who build it remember.


Steve: Shhhh.

( Ace and them go dwn the stairs really slowly.)


Duck:(on radio.) Well, what do you see?


Ace: We see another door. We haven't found much yet.


Duck:( On radio.) Well, hurry up. Were starting to get nervous. well, i am.

( The radio quits.)


Steve: In my dream he was also a crybaby. Oh a action hero is never scared, he says. Typical.


Ace: I agree with you on that one Steve. He could be a bit of a whimp somethimes.


Lexi: But other times he could be nicer and stuff, right?


Steve: Exacly.

( They approach the door.)


Ace: That took time.


Tech: Weird.


Lexi: Here we go.

( Steve opens the door as Tech gets his gun ready.)


Steve: This is it! The hallway that was in me and Duck's dream!


Ace: Really?


Steve: Yes!


Tech; What are we waiting for lets check it out, but quietly.


Lexi: This is a very long hallway.


Steve; I know. Now lets open that door cause thats were we found the master bedroom. And i hope that alien in my stomache isn't real.


Ace: Yeah.

( Steve slowly opens the door.)


Steve: I see......nothing......wait.....run!!!!!!


Ace: Why?! What did you see?!


Steve:L-L-Look.

( The others turn and see and see a giant snake.)


Tech: S-S-S-Snake!

( The snake's long tongue wrapped around Rev and ate him.)


Rev:AAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!


Steve: Oh no! Rev!

( All of the sudden they wake up.)


Ace: Whoa, that was weird.


Tech: Huh?


Rev: Noooooooooooooooo! Im-still-alive. But-how?


Lexi; Yikes! Saw giant snake!


Steve: Me too! Hey look there's Duck! Duck.


Duck: There you are. Where were you?


Steve: We went downstairs.


Duck: What are you taking about? You have been up here the whole time.

( Steve and Lexi look at eachother in confusion.)


Lexi: But i remember going downstairs and all of the sudden were here in bed.


Steve: We definatley need to gather.


Duck: Huh?


Lexi: That's right. Let's go.


End Of Chapter 7. Whoa that was a strange chapter.



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Goodness, I was about to say, "You killed Rev!" XD
Good chapter. Keep up the great work! ^ ^;

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I will Rye thanks.

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Chapter 8: Let the illusions begin.

(The loonatics gather in the living room and they start discussing about what happened.)

Ace: What went on back there?

Steve: I do not know. All i remember is that we were walking until we saw th snake and then waking up later.

Tech: Same.
( Rev comes into the room.)

Rev:Sorry-im-late.
( Lexi dashes toward Rev and gives him a hug.)

Lexi: Oh Rev you're still alive!

Rev: Yeah-that's-good. Wow-it-scared-me-really-good.

Ace: Yeah. Good to see you alive though, Rev.

Rev: Its-good-to-even-be-alive.

Duck: After you were almost a snake's dinner.

Rip: I got an idea. Let's get the hell out of here.

Steve: Not yet, Rip. We still need to find out who/what is behind this.

Rip: Fine. But there is a problem right now.

Steve: What's that?

Rip: You're on fire.

Steve: Okay.

Ace: No, Steve you're really on fire!!

Steve: What? OMG!! Its burning!
( Steve looks around him until he sees the fire.)
Duck: Hold still.

Steve: How can i hold still when its burning ny butt off!! 

Ace: Steve just hold still!

Lexi: Wait! The fire is gone!

Duck: Where is it?

Steve: Uh....guys?! Still on fire here!

Tech: But we can't see it!

Steve: You can't see it!

Rip: We saw it for a minute and then its gone!

Ace: It must be invincible fire! Duck splash it anyway! Quick!

Tech: Hang on Steve!

Duck: Here goes nothing!
( Duck fires his Aqua dense powers all over Steve.)

Duck: Lucky i drank a bottle of water just before the meeting. Anyways did i get it?

Steve: You got it alright.( Steve is completly drenched all over from head to toe.)

Duck: oopsie?

Ace: Its okay Duck. But invisible fire?

Lexi: Doesn't make sense.

Steve: I know. Where did it come from?

Duck: I don't know.

Rip: It just appeared.

Tech: Very strange.

Rev: And-odd-too.

Steve: uh...........look at Ace! His face!

Ace: What about my face?

Steve: It looks like a skeleton!

Ace:AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!

Duck: First Me/Steve, Rev, Steve again and now Ace and my day is gonna get worse.

Tech: Okay Ace its gone now!

Ace:Okay. Now we really need to check it out a second time.

End Of Chapter 8. Whoa.

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Chapter 9: The New Plan



ce: Alright this time we should split into pairs so there should be groups of 4 with two people in it. 

Steve: I brought my hat that we can use to draw the names out of.

Ace: Great. Go get it.
( Steve leaves to go get his hat from his room.)

Ace: We should think of a plan once Steve gets back.

Tech: Now, the last time we were there is the snake.

Duck: How are we gonna pass it anyway?

Ace: Good question, Duck maybe Steve might know.
( The other loonatics waited for 10 minutes.)

Duck: Wow! It shouldn't take this long to get a hat. Steve?! It has been over 2 minutes.

Steve:( yelling from his room.) I'll be right there! Very impatient!
( The scene switches to Steve's room.)

Steve: They should be realizing that i need help.( Looks up at this devil in front of him.)

Devil: Give me your soul!

Steve: Never!!!!!!!!!!!!( In slow motion Steve starts to have a mind battle over the devil.)

( The others hear a bang.)

Ace: Lets go see what he's up to eh?
(The others agreed and went into Steve/Lexi's room.)

Rip: Steve? May i ask? What is that?

Steve: A............Devil.

Rev: Devil?

Duck: Yeah. There creatures from hell but that's not important right now Rev.

Rev: I-know-that-but-im-saying-we-should-help-him-now-or-he's-gonna-die!

Ace: Great idea Rev!
( They step towards Steve's battle until they were pushed.)

Ace: What the-

Tech: Forcefield!

Duck: I guess were watching.

Ace: Yup!( They watched as Steve battles with his mind.)

Steve:( to himself.) Come on............i..can...do it.....( Steve screams and the telekenis pushed the devil away.)

Devil: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

Tech: He's done! Yes!

(Steve is panting over and over untl he faints backwards in slow motion.)

Ace: Uh Oh!

Lexi: Steve!

( They all ran toward him and carried him into the meeting room.)
( They waited and waited all day. Until Steve woke up.)

Duck: Hey! Sleeping Beauty!

Ace: Steve!

Tech: You okay?

Steve: Im fine.

Rip: Lets help him up.
( Rip and Tech go and help Steve up.)

Steve: Thanks Guys. I can take it from here.

Rip: You sure?

Steve: Yup.

Ace: What was a devil doing here?

Steve: I don't know. It seemed like it never happened.

Tech: Really?

Steve: Uh huh.

Tech: okay we really need to go downstairs.

Ace: Yes. Right now.

Steve: I managed to get the hat though.
( Holds hat in air.)

Ace: Good. Write down all of our names and we will pick who goes with who.
( Steve quickly writes everybody's name and put them in the hat.)

Steve: Ready.( Steve picks the first name.) Me. With.( Draws name.) Tech.

Tech: Cool.

Steve: The next two are................REv and............Ace. Third.........Slam and.........Lexi.

Duck: So that means me and Rip?

Steve: Exacly.

Lexi: Alright, lets go downstairs.
( The loonatics are getting ready to go downstairs.)

ACe: Downstairs, i also saw 4 doorways. Tech/Steve you go 2nd. Me and Rev will go in third, Lexi and Slam stay up here in case if anything happens up here. And that means Duck and Rip go first.

Rip: Okay.

Duck: Here we go.

End Of Chapter 9.

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Chapter 10: The Second Attempt.

( Duck and Rip start heading downstairs.)

Duck: Okay. Lets see what we can find.

Rip: Yeah. Why did we have to go first?

Duck: I don't know.

Rip: Don't worry Steve and Tech will join us in a minute.

Duck: Lets hope so. And the others too.

Rip: Oh yeah.

(Scene switches to Steve and Tech.)

Ace: Alright you guys are up next.

Steve: Lets go.

Tech: Okay.
( They head downstairs and are going to find Duck and Rip.)

Steve: Its dark.

Tech: Yeah. I know.

Steve: Wonder what is in that room.

Tech: Which one?

Steve: The master bedroom that Duck and I saw in my dream.

Tech: Oh yeah. I am wondering the same thing.

(Scene switches to Rip and Duck.)

Rip: Okay. This is creepy.

Duck: Yeah. Hey what's that?

Rip:( picks it up.) Looks like some type of gem.

Duck: Lets you know uh...keep it just in case.

Rip: Okay. But i...will hang onto it.

Duck: Aw! Dang.

Rip: Someone's coming.

(Scene switch to Steve and Tech.)

Steve: I see two people.

Tech: Yeah. I'll bet its Duck and Rip.

Steve: Hello?

Rip: Oh Hey.

Duck: We thought you were something else.

Steve: Now why would you think we were something else Duck?

Duck: I don't know. Why do you ask?

Steve: I don't know.

Rip: Ace should be coming.

Tech: Yeah. Lets wait.

Steve: Good plan.

( They started waiting.)

Ace: Alright, Rev its our turn.

Rev: Okay-chief.

( Ace and Rev start going downstairs slowly.)

Tech: Is that them?

Steve: i don't know. Rev?!

Rev: Steve?! That-you?

Steve: Its me along with Tech, Duck and Rip as well.

Ace: Okay were coming towards you!( Ace and Rev started to catch up.)

Tech: Hey. Do we need to wait for Lexi and Slam? or do we go without them?

Ace: We pretty much go without them for a bit and then they will join us. Sorry i never gave you the whole plan.

Steve: That's Okay.

Ace: Alright lets go.
( They start walking down the first hallway.)

Steve: Wow. It was never this long before.

Tech: It must have gone longer.

Steve: Yeah.

Duck: Hey. Four doors like you said.

Ace: i nust have a very good memory.

Tech: yeah. I guess you do, chief. 

Ace: Alright that one and the end leads to that other hallway with the master bedroom. What's behind door #1?
( Ace opens the door and sees a box in the middle of the room.)

Steve: Looks like a box.

Ace: Lets keep this just in case it might have powers or something.

Rip: Tell Ace what we found.

Duck: Aw but i don't want him to have it.

Rip: im just gonna show him.

Duck: Fine.
( Rip takes the gem out of his left pocket.)

Rip: Hey Ace look what me and Duck found.

Ace: Is that a gem?

Rip: Yeah.

Ace: Where did you get that?

Rip: Just on the floor by the staircase.

Ace: okay. We will keep that also. What's behind door #2?
( They open the door and see a closet full of junk.)

Duck: We open the door and what do we get? junk.

Steve: It might not be junk Duck.

Ace: Steve's right ,Duck. We don't know exacly what it is.

Duck: Yeah. Sure.

Ace: Look a bigger flashlight we need this.( He turns on the switch and a giantic beam comes out of it.)
(Ace turns it of quickly.)

Duck: Better not open it again.

Ace: Nope. Okay and what is behind door #3?
( He opens it and there is a room full of pictures of people.)

Duck: Not intresting.

Ace: Yeah. Let's move on.

Steve: Nothing but pictures.
( They continue on and open the door to the other hallway.)

Tech: There it is the door with the bedroom in it.

Steve: Yup. Let's see what's guarding it this time.

Lexi on comlink: Guys were comin down, no dangers up here. Where are you?

Ace: We are in the second hallway.

lexi on comlink: Be right there in a flash.

Ace: Lets wait before we go in.

( Scene switches to Slam and Lexi.)

Lexi; Alright lets go. ( They close the door behind them.)

Lexi: Slam, i don't see a faster way there.

Slam: Hmm. Hang on to me.( mumbles.)
( Slam flashes with Lexi and catch up to the others.)

Rev: Look!

( Slam lets her down.)

Lexi: Wow Slam thanks for the quick ride.

Slam: Ur Welcome.

Ace: Hey guys. Everybody's here.

Lexi: What are we waiting for lets go through the door.

End of Chapter 10.

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Chapter 11: Another World?

Ace: Ready, team? On the count of three. 1........2........3! ( Slam busted the door down.)

Steve: It looks like there is no snake, devil or alien stomache.

Tech: Wait. I hear something. ( Tech and the others walk into the bedroom.)

Steve: It sounds like a heartbeat. Listen. ( They hear a heart pump over and over.)

Duck: I wonder what happens if we stabb it.

Ace: Then its probably gonna be a little worse.

Duck: Oh yeah. But its just an opinion.

Tech: Well, who knows where the heart is, because its not in here.
( The doors slam shut.)

Ace: Oh No! We can't get out!

Steve: Just like me and Duck's dream.

Duck: Hey, Steve no alien stomache.

Steve: Oh! Good!
( The room starts to shake.)

Lexi: I see a giant tree, it looks like its about to grab us.
( The tree grabs a hold of all 8 of the loonatics.)

Ace: What happens now?

Steve: A portal inside a tree?

Duck: No way.

Rev: We're-gonna-die!

Rip: I guess this is it.( The branch ate all 8 of them up.)

All: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
( They wake up from the ground.)

Ace: Huh? Where are we?

Steve: I don't know.

Duck: Well. Its not home, i must say.

Tech: I agree.

End Of Chapter 11.

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Chapter 12: What the Heck?

Steve: We must be in another world.

Ace: How do you know for sure?

Steve: Well, in my opinion it doesn't look like its normal, i mean look at it.

Tech: Yeah. It looks pretty weird.

Duck: You know what's weird? We are on a field with no trees or anything. We must have fallen outside.

Rip: Oh Yeah. What about the tree einstien.

Duck: Oh. Right.

Steve: Have you ever seen the grass turn different colours by itself?

Duck: Oh yeah. Were not home all right.

Lexi: Hey, could we be inside a tree?

Rev: I-don't-know.

Steve: Hey, look there's somebody. Hey! Hey You!

Lexi: Could you tell us where we are?

????: You are in a strange world.( Creepy voice.)

Steve: And?  How did we get here?

????: I saw you guys fall into a tree and woke up in a field.

Tech: Hey, how do you know we got swallowed by a tree?

????: Because i got swallowed too.

Lexi: Uh huh.

????: You guys shouldn't be here. It can get pretty dangerous.

Steve: Dangerous? It looks harmless.

????: Not until you see.......THIS!( The man reveals himself to be a werewolf.)

Steve: Did you see what i just saw?

Tech: But i don't get it he sounded and looked like a man when we first came to him.

Duck: We are in a strange world.

Rev: S-S-S-Save-the-talking-for-later-and-Run!
( The loonatics try to run but they are stuck.)

Steve: I can't move!

Ace: Niether than the rest of us!

Rip: Great. We are going to be dead twice!
( They flinched until they sunk t the ground.)

Tech: What?

Steve: Okay. That part i didn't get. We were about to be dinner until we just sunk into the ground.

Rev:So-now-were-stuck-in-the-ground-in-an-unknown-world.

Tech: ( Closes beak.) Okay. Rev, we get the point.

Steve: Lets findout where these tunnels lead.

End Of Chapter 12.

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Chapter 13: Through the tunnels.

( The loonatics travel through the tunnels.)

Steve: Do you see anything up ahead Rev?

Rev: (using his G.P.S) Nope. Oh-wait! I-see-a light.
( Rev and Steve run ahead.)

Tech: Wait! Guys its a trap!
(Before Tech could yell louder Rev and Steve were gone.)

Lexi: Where did they go?

Duck: I don't know.

Ace: They went this way.
( They walk towards where the light used to be.)

Tech: That's weird.

Ace: i don't understand i saw them ran this way.

Duck: Great now there is 6 of us now.
( Lexi feels really concerned.)
( Duck walks toward Lexi.)

Duck: You miss Steve already huh?

Lexi: Yeah. I miss him so much Duck.

Ace: Don't worry Lexi we will find Steve and Rev both.
( The loonatics go through a different tunnel.)

Rip: Where do you suppose this one leads?

Ace: Who knows Rip. Who knows. But we have to find the way first.

Rip: Hey! There is a light!

Ace: You're right, let's go, loonatics!
( The loonatics ran at their top speed to catch to the light and they jump into it.)

Lexi: Are we out of the tunnels?

Ace: i don't know, Tech?

Tech: Uh, guys we are out of the tunnels, but look.

Duck: Wow! It looks like we are in like a arcade place.

Rip: This place looks pretty big. I don't think we are going to find Steve and Rev in this place.

Lexi: Hey is that Rev coming toward us?

Ace: Rev!!!
( Ace called but no answer from Rev.)

Ace: Rev?

Tech: Ace. Something is not right. Rev never ignores people.

Rev: Oh i love my puppy!(Repeat.)
( The loonatics are stunned when they saw Rev with his eyes closed and singing. They watched as Rev passed them.)

Ace: Did you see that?

Duck: In fact that Rev was singing something weird?

Tech: Yes. He had his eyes closed too.

Ace: We ran into Rev. Now lets see if we can run into Steve.
( The loonatics continue their way.)

Lexi: Steve!!!!
( The loonatics see Steve running towards them with his arms out like a airplane and again his eyes are closed.)

Steve: HAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAH! IM GOING DOWN CAPTAIN!!!! THE TUNNELS THIS WAY!!!!QUICK!!!HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHA!

Duck: That was really weird.

Ace: Strange i nevere knew Steve was into army stuff. Anyways we might run into them again soon i think. But we need to find out what happened to them.

End Of Chapter 13.
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Chapter 14: The Voice and the kidnapping.
(Ace and the other loonatics (disincluding Steve and Rev) are searching for any suspitions.)

Ace: We can't find any clues.

Lexi: Yeah. I wonder what caused Steve and Rev to act like that?

Ace:Who knows, Lexi. Who knows.

Duck: Well the only thing we know is that Steve and Rev are acting like monkeys, they are never like that.

Tech: Yeah. I recommend that they didn't cause them to act like that. But.......somebody might be controlling them on purpose.

Ace: Oh. Yeah. You're right Tech. We have to search for more clues.

????: I think you are too late!
( They all look to where the sound came from but they fall into a hole.)

Ace: Uhhhhhhhhhhhhh. Ooh what? Where are we?

Lexi: I don't know. Huh! Oh my gosh, Ace look!
( Ace looks where Lexi was talking about and looked shocked.)

????: Hello Loonatics!!!!

Tech: Speak up! Who are you?! And What have you done to Steve and Rev?!

????: Well, for starters you are in a world designed by me.

Duck: You made the children's carival?

????: Are you sure about Children's carnival?( He points up and the hole carnival becomes a haunted ghost town.)

Ace: Ah! i see you a magician.

????: Actully im a Warlock! You filthy rabbit!

Ace: Why you!

????: Second of all. Your friends are gonna be my slaves for the time being, soon you will join them.

Ace: Yeah. I don't think that's gonna happen, doc.

????: oh it is gonna happen, just you wait. Would you like to see your friends? Come on guys.
( Steve and Rev showed up all happy.)

Ace: What'd you do?!

????: oh they are now under my controll.

Lexi: Ace, how are we gonna stop him?

????: You can't! Unless your coyote friend can help.

Tech: i don't think so!

????: unless you will become one like your friends.

Tech: Aw man. i don't know what to do! Shoot!

End Of Chapter 14.

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Chapter 15: The Only Way Out.

Rip: Let us out you creep!

????:hmmm. How bout NO!

Ace: (whispering.) Lex. I have an idea. Fire in three at him.
( Ace nodded his head to give Tech a sign and Tech nodded back.)

Duck: Oh!

Ace: One...Two...Three! NOW!!!

????: What?( Ace fired his lazer blast and freed Tech who has his glugo gell 9000 and blasts it at him.)
( Ace freed the rest of the loonatics.)

????: Very impressive Coyote! But now its your turn! ( The warlock transforms into the werewolf they saww earlier.)

Duck: All along you were that werewolf the whole time?

????: Oh yeah. Now you have never heard my name so hear it its! My name is Henry the people eater!

Duck: What type of name is that?( laughing.)

Henry: You are about to find out! Because im having Duck fo supper!( Before Duck could quack he got eaten.)

Ace: Oh No! Duck!

Tech: Ace i got an idea!( He stars building a machine.)

Rip: Help! Im next!

Ace: Wait! its not real!

Tech: What do you mean?

Ace: This werewolf isn't real and neither is Steve and Rev and the carnival!

Tech: AH! But we are real!

Ace: True. But this is a dream! We have to some how wake up!

Henry: Ah you have figured it out! Darn it! NO! What's happening!

Ace: Pretend he's not real, quick! ( The loonatics thought Henry dying.)

Henry: NOOOOOOO! Im weak! im...........(He explodes into a portal.)
( Duck pops out.)

Duck: I feel weird.

Ace: Duck. Think of Steve and Rev normal and real with us!

Duck: Oh.
( Just then Rev and Steve dropped onto the floor and screaming.)

Lexi: Get out of my boyfriend's brain you thingy!
( Just then a weird thing came out of Steve and Rev and dissappears.)

Steve: Ow. My head.

Duck: I would have done all this by myself!

Steve: Ow! Our head's hurt, Duck!

Duck: I'd like you better as a freak.
( The other loonatics stare at Duck in confused looks.)

Lexi: Steve!

Steve: Lexi!( They start to embrace.)

Duck: Oh boy!

Ace: May i interupted that we have time to get out of here!

Tech: Quick through the portal!

Rip: Steve what are you doing?

Steve: grabbing this thing. This item.
( Tech joins and they both grab Steve towards the portal.)

Steve: Jump!
( The loonatics dissapeared and they found themselves back in the master bed room.)

Lexi: look! ( They see the spirit of Henry and a heart.)

( Steve thought for a moment.)

Steve: I got it! ( Steve stabbs the heart and the hole basement blows up.)

Ace: Everybody okay?

Duck: Yeah in fact Steve almost killed us.

Steve: But luckly for the sword i had, made us alive.

End Of Chapter 15. Last and Final chapter next.

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Epilogue/Chapter 16: Steve's story.

Ace: let's get out of here.

lexi: good idea.

Duck: im with you.( The loonatics start heading upstairs.)

Tech: Steve where did that sword you had go?

Steve: When i stabbed it, it was stuck on the heart and then it dissappeared.

Tech: Oh.

Rev: Hey look light!
( The loonatics go upstairs and outside where tweetums was until the door closes.)

????: You're not going anywhere loozertics!! You haven't stayed for a whole week, you can't go back now!!HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!

Duck: oh great. Who might you be?

????: My name's Bellatrix the illusionist.

Ace: Well you won't mind letting us out huh?

Bellatrix: Uh...how, bout NO!!

Duck: Wait a minute you set this whole thing up?

bellatrix: Yup. the whole thing.

Steve: What do you mean? The carival?

Bellatrix: Yup.

Ace: The Werewolf?

Bellatrix: Yup.

Lexi: the strange dreams?

Bellatrix: oh yeah.

Steve: My powers?

Bellatrix: Yup. I controlled you to kill those smugglers.

Rev: The Devil in Steve's bedroom?

Bellatrix: And Yup. That was me. Now you won't be getting away now!!
( Steve thought for a moment until he sees a box that they saw in one of the rooms.)


Steve: Rip! Do you still have that gem?


Rip: Yeah. You want it?


Steve: Please. thanks. Rev speed to the box and grab it. Rip you put it in.

( Rev obeys Steve's command and so does Rip.)


Bellatrix: What the gem? No NOT THE GEM!!


Steve: Now Rip!

( Rip closes the case with the gem inside and vanishes Bellatrix and the box.)


Ace: Rip!


Lexi: Oh no!

( Rip was found on the ground with his eyes glowing light blue.)


Rip: Whoa i feel weird. Wow the gem did a lot of damage to the hotel.


Tech: Yup.

( Just then a jet lands with Tweetums in it. And to their suprise, Zadavia.)


Ace: Hey look!


Duck: Yes finally!( The loonatics board the jet.)


Ace: Hello Zadavia.


Zadavia: Hello Ace. Hello Loonatics.


Lexi: What are you doing here?


Zadavia: Tweetums saw what you guys were going through at the hotel.


Steve: Yeah. Pretty weird. Echausting but weird.

( The plane took off.)


Duck: Good redince to weirdworld.

( All the loonatics look at Steve.)


Lexi: What's wrong steve?


Steve: i still have nowhere to live.


Lexi: Why not you're parents?
( Steve gave a concerned and sad look.)

Steve : okay i'll tell you.

Lexi: Tell me what?

Steve: Everybody listen up! You are probably wondering why i can't go anywhere? Well here it is. My parents...died in a plane crash when i was 6.
( The loonatics gasp.)

(Steve is narrarating the flashback.)
Steve: My parents were coming back from england until there was a storm and they crashed.

Dad: Okay we will be back soon.
 
Steve: Okay dad.

-Hours later-

Babysitter: Steve, your parents died.

Steve: NOOOOO! You're lying! STOP!!

End of flashback.

Steve; That was a sad day. After i joined in the orphanage cause there is nobody i knew. So at of 8 i met Duck. At the age of 10, i was adopted.

Duck: By who?

Steve: Misty Breeze.

Duck: What? Was she good?

Steve: She was the opposite of good.........evil.
( Steve started feeling tears come down his face.)

Steve: She never fed me properly. So i had to sneak food anytime she went to bed. At the age of 15 i moved out into my appartment. It was small but i got used to it. plus i wrote music for living for money. Until the meteor hit earth i got powers which was Telekenisis, night vision and Sphere summoner. And now you guys are the only friends i ever met in my life.

Tech: oh my god Steve, i feel sorry for your parents. And your life.

Ace: Hey why don't you move in with us?


Steve: Really?


Zadavia: Not only that. I saw you brilliant skills and your powers. How would you like to join the loonatics.

Steve: Me a loonatic? Sure!

Zadavia: Okay you can get a uniform when you get back.

Steve: Cool that makes me feel better a lot.
( Lexi kisses Steve passionatley.)

Lexi: Don't worry Steve we are not just your friends we are your family.

The End.

Wow that was a good story. Did you guys like it? Plz respond this time.



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