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Gaw! I know I shoulden't be doing this but this story has been honting my mind for days. This story has nothing to do with any of my others. In this world the Loonatics are FBI agents. And yes I got the idea from a story on FF net, so if some of the story sounds similer it's probly becas it is.

I promice to keep bolth Country Gal and this story updated. Any ways hear it gos...

 

TOP FLIGHT: FBI. Chapter 1


 

Ace sighed happily as his eyes gazed out the window of the plain. He hadn't seen his beloved Acmetrapalic in years, but then again his pacific career choice did send him places. Ace was a FBI agent. Part of a branch knows to few as the TOP FLIGHT agency. It was non existent to the general population.


 

The TOP FLIGHT branch was in other words spies, secret agents, and all that other James Bonds stuff. Ace had been given a position in this branch at the age of 20. He had been one of the best agents in the FBI everyone knows about. Now he was 25 and for the last 5 years he had been posted all over the world. Today he was returning home.


 

Some thing came across his mind as he continued to gaze out his window.


 

'Before I left I was the the Top agent of my quadrant of Acmetrop ...But now...I wonder who it could be?...Ah never mind. It doesn't madder. I'm soon going to be top dog again. I don't care who he is or his story.'


 

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Tech found his head being shoved into the computer control panel in front of him. It wasn't that heard or that strong of a hold really, but Tech, being the at the desk computer man, wasn't that strong in the mussels.


 

All right there. Who are you and how did you get in hear.” The brown coyote barked


 

He couldn't see who held him down, but who ever it was leaned down to his ear.


 

If you say the magic word I let you free.” She said in a low soft voice.


 

At the sound of her voice Tech de-intensified and pushed up.


 

Aw come on Lexi let me go.” He asked.


 

She pushed him back down; with a laugh she said again, “The magic word Tech.”


 

Tech sighed, “MerrierCat.”


 

Lexi did a small squeal of dilite as she let her friend sit back up in his chair.


 

Dang it Lex! Do you have to sneak up on me like that? You get plenty of practices on the flied.” Tech looked over at her.


 

The mane room of the FLIGHT building was a little dark. It held the Brain Computer, which was controlled by Tech, a couch, a table, a big screen TV, chairs, and a few tools for making food. It was basically a lobby room where the top agent got to hang out and work when not on flied duty. Down the only hall was the doors of the top agents. There was five agents, but oddly six offices


 

Lexi wore a FBI suite jacket and pant with a belt. Her shirt was a white tank top. It was the same look for all other agents. She sat up on the control panel and looked at her best friend.


 

Awwww. Come on Tech it's more fun to play with you.” They both smiled and laughed at her comment. Tech took off the head set he had had in his ear at the time of her attack. “You know if this is broken I'm blaming you. Did you finish the assignment given?”


 

As #1 agent I got the job done. Hears the stolen goods.” Lexi set a small rectangular devise in font of the Coyote, “I hope it should suffice.”


 

Nice Lexi.” He pressed down a button, “Hay Rev get in hear. Now we have another job for you Lexi.”


 

Lexi got of the panel and said with snickering tone, “No way Tech. It's all ready 4 PM. I got to get home.”


 

A blue roadrunner zipped into the room, “Hay Tech you called? Hi Lexi.”


 

Ah, good. Rev tack this into the recovered merchandise room.” Tech handed the devise to the runner.”


 

See ya Rev.” Lexi waved as he zipped out.


 

Now Lexi. This job you mite not like, but Zadavia said you have to be the one to do it.” Tech said.


 

Why me?”


 

Well-” before Tech could answer a small crash was heard down the hall and what sounded like muffled swears.


 

Lexi and Tech went to investigate and found Danger Duck and Slam Tasmanian with a dropped box.


 

Whats going on?” Lexi said with anger in her tone. Lexi was not one knows for losing her temper, but when thoughs chains where broke you best look out!


 

Ah hi Lexi,” Duck said looking at the fallen items, “Where jest moving me across the hall.”


 

Why? Who gets the room across from mine?” Lexi asked. All eyes went to Tech.


 

Well...”



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TOP FLIGHT: FBI Chapter 2


 

Lexi waited at a red light as she sat in her black car. She sighed, A little frustrated on how the day was ending.


 

FLASHBACK


 

Well Lexi it looks like that sixth office thats never been used will be.” Tech said.


 

It looks like the boss lady is giving us a new member.” Duck said piking up his stuff and walking into an empty office.


 

I didn't hear of any of the other agents gaining in position. We get new reports on them all the time! Where did this guy come from?” Lexi said looking Tech strait in the eye.


 

Ya well. He 's an agent who worked hear a little before all of us came. Hes been getting moved around by the agency now for about 4 years, but now there returning him back to first station.”


 

I still don't see why he gets the room closes to mine! Duck worked hard for that office. Who's he to come and bump one of MY friends and team mates down?!” Lexi said.


 

Did I mention he's the ex-top agent of this quadrant, and there immediately resining him as second top agent.” Tech recoiled from Lexi.


 

Lexi grabbed Tech by the caller, “Are you saying hes going to be MY PARTNER!”


 

The others cringed as she got into the coyotes face. Tech feebly shook his head yes, “and one more thing. You have to be the one to pick him up at the airport right now.”


 

WHAT! Oh I'm going to see how this guy thinks he is!” She let go of Tech and walked to a near by elevator door.


 

Rev will give you his info, and you debriefing with Zadavia when you get back!” Tech hollered as the doors shut.


 

END Flashback


 

The light terned green and Lexi continued on. She had calmed down a lot sens when Tech told her the news. Part of that was the hour long drive to the airport and and hour back. Not to mention she still had debriefing.


 

I'm never going to get home.” Lexi said to her self as she pulled into the Airport parking lot. “Well Lexi let go see who this Ace Bunny is.”


 

Ace leaned against a wall, his stuff to his side, as he looked at his wrist watch. Who ever was piking him up was late. He looked around until he fell upon a female bunny.


 

'Well ain't she looker' He thought to himself, 'She's wearing a the basic dress code for the agency like I am. Jacket... pants... sunglasses... Is she wearing a tank top? I know that an agent can where any kinda under shirt they wish as long as it's white, but I never meat a girl agent wearing a top like that...Hum, she's got a beautiful shade of tan fur. not to mention that blond hair...nicely shaped body...All in all she looks like a fire cracker coming my way.'


 

Lexi approached him. “You Ace Bunny?”


 

He tilted his glasses down 'He's kinda cute. Nice blue eyes.' Lexi thought.


 

Ya I'm him.”


 

I'm Lexi Bunny. The agency sent me to pick you up.” Lexi held her hand out for a shack.


 

Nice ta meetcha der, Lexi.” He took her hand 'Shes got a strong grip!'.


 

Come on. Fallow me.” Lexi began to walk off. Ace grabbed his things and fallowed her to her car.



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Cool!!!!!!
Pretty please keep going!

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Wanna be right where you are
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Can't you see how right we are
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YAY!! keep it up!! XD

Me likie

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TOP FLIGHT: FBI Chapter3

 They pulled out the parking lot and went down the road. Ace kept staring at Lexi. Over time He had been able to pick up the ability to read people and get a good sense of them. The way she walked and dressed said she was the tough girl, the one you'd hate to get in a fight with. Yet her voice told him she was kind and sweet. If only he could get a glimpse of her eyes. Then he'd know all he needed to know. But she still had her sunglasses on and she only gave him swift glazes. Not enough to give him the details.

 “All right, your information file is in the glove department. It will tell you what you need to know,” Lexi instructed as Ace got the file, “the entry codes, your new team mates, and the floor you’re on.”

 “I remember which floor.” Ace said.

 Lexi snickered, “That’s doubtful. Most the rooms have been moved since you were in office.”

 “I remember da top agents floor being 8th floor.” Ace smiled.

 Lexi smiled as well, “Nope! Wrong! The Top agents are located on the 25th floor, RIGHT under the boss.”

 Ace looked back down at the papers, giving her quick glazes every so often 'She is a fire cracker' he thought. Ace came across the paper that had her picture clipped to it.

 “YOU are my new partner!?” Ace asked.

 Lexi suddenly slammed on the breaks hard at a red light, almost making Ace lose the papers in his hands.

 She took her glasses off, pointed them at Ace and gave him a stern look. “You listen here! You’re my new partner. NOT the other way around. The agency stuck me with you all right. I'm the number one agent and I was fine with having Duck as my partner.”

 She threw her sunglasses in the still opened glove cabinet and slammed it shut.

 “You're da number one agent!?!” He asked seeming surprised.

 “Yes. Now stop staring at me! It's creeping me out!” Lexi replied as they continued to drive.
 Ace closed the folder in hand and looked out the window.

 'YES! Got to see her eyes...quite beautiful green eyes that-ACE! What are you doin'? She's the one you’re going to have to compete with to be on top again. Just take in what you saw...okay. Her eyes told me what I already know. She likes to play the tough girl. But as suspected she has a kind heart. What else did I see... She has a child like quality. At the same time the fierceness of a mother...Then there was that-' Ace became confused, 'Sadness?... A great pain and suffering?... Maybe she won’t be as easy to read as I thought...'



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TOP FLIGHT: FBI Chapter 4

 Lexi walked out of her office after putting away her debriefing file. 

 “So how did it go?” Tech asked as she walked back into the lobby area where her team mates where getting to know the new guy. 

 “Same oh, same oh. It lasted a little long than I hoped, but what can you do?”

 “Cry bloody marry three times?” Tech joked. Lexi laughed at the simple joke.

 “Man it's becoming 11:30 already?” Lexi said as she looked at the clock on the wall. “I got to go.”

 “Aw, Lex, come get something to eat with us.” Tech said giving her puppy eye. She smiled at him. Lexi loved Tech in a brother and sister way. He was the big brother she never had. Not to mention he sometimes called her little sister. 

 “No Tech, I have to get home to Vivian.” Lexi said walking towards the door. Tech quickly grabbed her into a head lock, “What's the magic word Lexi?”

 “Uh...MerrierCat!” Lexi laughed. Tech let her go. “Bye guys!”

 “Bye, Lexi, see ya tomorrow.” Her 5 well known team mates said. With that she was gone.

 “Ne, what was that all about?” Ace asked.

 “Oh it's just this thing Lexi and I have.” Tech replied returning to his computer.

 “What dose MerrierCat mean?” 

 “I don't know. Somet'in' to do with the way they meet.” Duck answered.

 “Who's Vivian?”

 “That's Lexis little sister. She is so nice. I wish I had a sister like her, but I only have my brother Rip. Not that having a brother is a bad thing. And ya Vivian and Lexi are really close but then again Lexi's her guardian ever since the...” Rev stopped talking and all of them put on a grim face. 

 Ace's smile also diapered, “Since what?”

 “...Accident.” Slam mumbled

 “Yup, ever since the accident. At least that’s what she tells us. None of us knew her before the accident, but when she did tell us...Well let’s just say Lexi has had a big loss in her past.” Duck said.

 “What happened?”

 “Lexi wouldn't like us to tell you. That's her personal life. To learn her past she first needs to trust you and you need to earn her respect.” Tech said.

 “And that can be very hard to do.” Rev added. The others nodded in agreement.

 ^^^ 
Lexi opened the door as she entered her apartment. A few lights were on as she entered and closed the door. She took of her work jacket and placed it on a chair next to the door. From the living room you could see the kitchen/dining room. There was a hall on the left side of the room leading to the two bedrooms of the house. The other hallway leads to a bath room. That was it to the apartment. Small but worked. The house was a little messy and decorated with many different things. 

 In the living room there was a couch, a comfortable chair, a small good sized TV and a coffee table. The table was covered in books, binders and random papers. On the couch was a 16-to-17-year-old girl asleep. It was rabbit like Lexi. She had the same tan fur and blond hair that was long in length. She was in a green tee, blue jeans, black runners, and a pair of glasses. 

 Lexi walked up to her sleeping sister. A history book sat under the cheek of the young girl. Lexi took the book and set it on the table with the other educational books. She then took the glasses off her and placed them in a near by glasses case. Then to finish off Lexi covered her up with a blanket that sat on the arm of the couch. 

 “Night, sweet pea.” Lexi whispered. Lexi got up and fixed her self a TV diner she was about to eat when she heard a knock at the door. Lexi sighed and answered the door.

 “What are you doing here?”


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WHO IS IT??? XD please keep it up! I really like this story biggrin.gif

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You'll know soon who it is! And thanks for reading.

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Wait a minute... This is familiar... OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS EXCACTLY LIKE MY STORY IN fanfiction.net but in an other publication or whatever!!!!!! HAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOT FAIR

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Help! I need answers!!!! Is it just a coincidence???? I don't really mind if you took it and changed it, but HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELP -sob- I feel betrayed. Please answer me when you can cry

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Whoa loonaticsF! Don't start sobing! I said I did get this idea from a story on FF.net.
Know this though I will not mimic the story plot line or at lest I don't plan to.

If the two story start souning identical THAT will be coincidence! Yes the begining hear is similer to yours but I do not mean to stell your origanal idea.

If you have resently posted something I didn't know I haven't been to FF.net for awile.

I'm sory if you fell riped off. I'll not mimic you again.

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Doesn't really matter Siamese712... I could say i feel honored! You really liked my story, didn't you? Please say you did... Ya know i've been having weird dreams lately with peaple who say to me that I'm a terrible writer... -Snif- Anyways... I updated yesterday... And i would love you to keep writing this... So, if you want my premission, you have it... And I don't feel riped off... And for one thing
I LOVE YOUR REMAKE...

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Heehee thanks. I do like your story. How you fined the right spots to swich POVs. I do that in away as well. I guess I'm jest more...descret would be the word I guess. I'm glad your not mad. I have this thing where I hate people being mad at me.
 
And your not a bad writer. aww

PS. don't use the 712 when refering to me. Jest call me Siamese like every one els does.smile

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Ok siamese... I'm just new in the whole writing/reviewing/replying or whatever...

PS: Me mad? That happens only if you take my Laptop away from me... You don't want to be around when that happens...furious

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HeeHee I hear that! I'll kick by olders brothers a** if he even thinks of tuching my labtop with out premitioon.

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Hell yeah!!!!!!!!!!!!! *Takes a whip and waves it* Come closer if you dare

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LoonaticsF wrote:

Hell yeah!!!!!!!!!!!!! *Takes a whip and waves it* Come closer if you dare



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Great Story Siamese!!! Keep going!!

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TOP FLIGHT: FBI Chapter 5

 “I t'ink you left dis back at the office.” Ace said lifting up her FBI badge, “The others said I should be da one to return it. Dey also said something about talking, ah I don't know.”

 Lexi took the badge, “They want us to talk so we can get to know each other and grow a stronger partnership like everyone else.”

You got it on the dot.” Ace smiled. Lexi kinda smiled back. They stood there in silence for a few seconds before Lexi gestured for him to come in.

Ace walked in as Lexi closed and locked the door. He was some what surprised at the living status she was in. The top agents were paid pretty big bucks, surely enough to get something better. As continued to look around he saw two things. One was that there where no pictures anywhere of family and friends except for two: a picture of Lexi and the guys at work, and a picture of a younger bunny with her own pack of friends. The second thing he saw was a girl fast asleep on the couch. She looked very much like Lexi.

 “Hey! Quit lookin' at my sister!” Lexi whispered loudly as she walked past him and sat back down in the kitchen.

Ek! Sorry!” Ace replied as he followed her. 'Gosh! She's protective of her sister.'

Would you like to sit down?” Lexi said. Her voice changed completely, sounding more gentle and friendly.

 Ace looked at her some surprise as he sat down at the table. It wobbled slightly. 'That was quite the mood change... I didn't even expect it. Which is also a surprise...Why can't I seem to read her? It's killing me...Uhg! Why does she live in such a mess?'

Lexi looked up at him as she started to eat her meal. He keeps glancing around. Lexi looked up at him

 “I know what your think.” she said softly.

'That’s doubtful. If I can't read you, there’s no way you can read me.'

You’re wondering why the top agent lives in such a mess. Wondering why do I live in such a small train wreck of an area.”

 He didn't show it, but was amazed that she was able to so perfectly pin him.

You want to know why?” Lexi looked at him in the eye. Ace found himself staring into her eyes as if hypnotized, “Over half of my pay goes into my sister’s education. A good portion of what’s left keeps my sister in extra activities. What little of what’s left goes to the rent, food, and normal living expenses.” Lexi looked away from him and got up.

 “Do you want something to drink?” Lexi asked as she opened the fridge.

Um...Do you have any Coke Cola?” Ace asked.

Lexi turned back to him with a can of Coke in each hand and a smile on her face. “It's the only thing we have. My sister and I where raised on the stuff. It's our favorite.

Ace smiled back, “No kiddin’?”

Lexi handed him one and sat back down, “Not kiddin’.”

It's my favorite soda to.”

That’s pretty cool.”

Ya...I guess that is kinda cool.” 'Ace, stop this. Don't get too close...You know what happened last time you befriended the one you were competing against! You let your emotions get in the way!'

At that moment they heard some movement in the living room as Vivian sat up and yawned.

Hey, Viv. Did we wake you?” Lexi said as she walked over to her sister. Lexi seemed to completely change as she approached her sister. Her walk, voice, movement, every thing became more mother-like and loving. 

Huh...When did you get home Lexi?” Vivian asked still have a sleep.

I don't know, maybe around ten minuets ago.” Lexi sat next to her.

Why are you so late?” Vivian asked as she looked up at Ace who was just watching them, “And who's he?”

Him? Uh...He’s just a new guy. I'm a little late because I had to run an errand for work.” Lexi gave a glance at Ace. “Ace, maybe you should leave. I'll see you at work tomorrow.”

See ya Lexi.”Ace said and left.



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love it! love it love it!!!!!!!
Fab work Siamese! Keep it up!

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Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh me likey! Great going!

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AWWW please keep it up!!! I'm looking foward on reading the rest

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TOP FLIGHT: FBI Chapter 6

Ace leaned on the back of the couch in the lobby. Besides Tech, he was the only one at work. As he held a cup of coffee in his hand, he went deeper and deeper into his thought.

 'It baffles me! How could she read me, but I was unable to read her?' This thought had kept him up late last night, 'She's such a mystery to me!...And what was up with me getting lost in her eyes?... such beautiful eye...Gah! Is something wrong with me?...And she's top agent! How did that happen? A girl! A female rabbit has more command then me!.... And she switches personality so suddenly. Well I'm pretty sure she doesn't like me......Accident?...I wonder what this accident is of hers? All the guys here know of it and all agreed that it take a lot to pry it out of her.... Well I do have my way of getting people to tell me their secrets... Maybe this secret I can use to regain my rank...Aw, who am I kiddin'? I'll regain my rank in no time. No girl has ever been able to stay above me...Well, there was that 'big boss' a few years ago but that's a different story.'

 His thought where interrupted as he heard Lexi give a bright hello to Tech.

 “Morning, Tech. How are you this fine day?” She said sweetly. Ace looked at her only at a side glance. He wasn't sure if Lexi was indeed being sweet or if this was just some thing she was doing for fun.

 “Morning, Lexi. What's with the sweet talk? Did Viv get the lead role in the school musical again?” Tech asked looking away from his computer screens.

 Lexi sighed and leaned next to Tech, “I felt like being sarcastic this morning, but Vivian did get in the musical again. She'll give you all the invite in a couple of weeks.”

 “I'm sure all the guys will be thrilled. Will she be giving us the invitation personally? It's been some time since we saw her last.”

 “Ya. She's been missing you guys. I'll have to get a visitor’s pass for her.” Lexi smiled at Tech as he turned back to his computer. Lexi looked up at Ace then back down. She walked up to him and leaned on the couch next to him, “Hey Ace.”

 “Morning, Lexi.” Ace said staring at his coffee.

 “Hey, I'd like to apologize about snapping at you last night.” Lexi looked up at him as he looked at her. She had an apologetic look in her eyes, “My sister's all I have and I get annoyed when guys look at her. I know it shouldn't but... long ago I promised to protect her. So I...I'm sorry. I shouldn't have gone off on you.

 Ace looked down, “It's okay Lexi. If I had a sibling I'm sure I wouldn't be to different.”

 “Does that mean you’re an only?” Lexi asked.

 “Ya. My mother and father had trouble conserving, so dey were lucky to have me.”

 There was silence. They locked eyes for a few moments before breaking away with a sense of awkwardness.

 “So ah... Has Zadavia given us our first assignment together yet?” Lexi asked wanting to change the current topic.

 “Uh no. Not yet...Did you? Did you say Zadavia?” Ace asked in return.

 “She's our big boss. Why, was she your old boss?”

 “Yep. I wonder what she'll say when she sees me again.”

 “She might.” Lexi said sounding happy and 'sweet' again, “Zadavia is relatively nice...Or at lest as long as I've known her. What do you remember of her?”

 “She was nice.” Ace looked up at her. She was looking down.

 Lexi smiled, “Well that's,” She locked eyes with him again and they both felt a strange sensation run through them, “tha-that's good.”

 They both slightly jumped when they heard the door shut and the remainder of there team enter. Lexi quickly went over and greeted them as Ace stood there wondering what had just taken place.

 “Hey guys! I just got an instant message from Zadavia. She wants to see us all.” Tech informed the group. They all filed into the elevator and started to go up. Ace wondered what Zadavia would do when she saw him again.



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Gah!! I loooove this story!!!!!
Fantastic work siamese!

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more!! more!! more!! XD i wanna know what Zadavia says about Ace!

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Yay! I finally fot the chance to review you! I still love it!! *hugs computer*

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TOP FLIGHT: FBI Chapter 7

As the elevader stopped at the top floor, Ace fleet a prickle of nerviness flow into him. The doors opened and the 6 anthros entered a surprisingly small, and dark, room. All that was in it was a round table with 7 chairs. Lexi, Tech, Slam, Rev, and Duck all took a seat with out hesitation. When they sat down they seemed to sit in a pacific order. Two seats remained empty. One was between Lexi and Duck the other sat at the 'head' of the table.

Ace decided to take the seat next to Lexi. They sat there for a few moments.

What are we doin'?” Ace whispered the question to Lexi. She answered him with a simple “Shhh.”

At that moment the dark walls around them formed into glass windows over looking the city.

Hello agents.” A female voice said as Zadavia entered the room.

Hello Zadavia.” They answered together as Zadavia took her set.

There is a new mission that acwiers all of your attention.” Zadavia began, “There seems there was a leek in security and a few government secrets have been stolen. We have been able to narrow down the culprit to two suspects.” Zadavia passed folders to all of them, “ As you can see are first suspect is a man named Derick Finch. He's living in a small apartment in the 5th quadrant of the city. This aria is a family friendly regain, So for this asiment you'll have to be discreet.”

When do we leave Zadavia?” Lexi asked.

Shortly Lexi. For now theres another madder at hand. As you all know you have gained a new member.” Zadavia stood and jestered at Ace, “You'll have to give him an evaluation...That is all, dismised.”

They all got up and headed for the elevator door.

'Is Zadavia really going to jest let me walk?' Ace thought.

Wait,” ace froze as the others looked at there boss, “ I'd like to speak with you Ace before you leave.”

'Awwwww knew it!'

Ace stood there with his back to Zadavia as the others filled into the elevator.

Ace.” Zadavia began; still he did not move, “It is good to see you again, but I must tell you I hope you have been able to learn to control your emotions wile you have been gone...After all the agentse would much enjoy if what happened to Charlie didn't happen to your new partner.”

Ace turned around with ice eyes, “Zadavia! What happened to Charlie was an accident and I will never become close with another partner! Not as long as I stand!”

Ace I'm not saying you shouldn't befriend Lexi. All I'm saying is don't let your feelings overwhelm you. We'd rather keep Lexi on the team rather than do the same to her as we had to Charlie.”

I under stand Zadavia. Besides Lexi doesn't seem to really like me. And it seem dat she wouldn't let any one close to her no madda what. Except for dat Tech guy.”

Don't be so fast to juge her Ace... You and her are more alike then you think.”

Ace looked at Zadavia with unbelieving eyes, “And hows dat?”

Zadavia smiled, “For one: You and her have suffered greatly in your past lives. Two: You make your selfs seem more cold hearted then you are. The final thing is you both have isolated your selfs from any one who trys to get close. You may have different reasons but it's still the same out come...Go Ace. You are dismissed.”

Ace walked to the elevator and headed back to the Top Flight main room. Zadavia's words swirled around his head.

'Simply more pieces to the puzzle that is this Lexi'



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Wow... KEEP UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUP I NEED MORE!
This fanfic is affecting me like chocolate... I love chocolate!

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girl keep it up!!! XD I reaaaaally like this fanfic

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I have a TOP FLIGHT pic!! 

http://siamese712.deviantart.com/art/TOP-FLIGHT-FBI-79444660

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I have contest for thoughs reading this story!

If you wont , draw/creat a cover for the storry and I'll tell the winner who Charlie is/was to Ace and what Lexis Accident was(if you wont to know that is)

You can also jest enter for fun!

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you already know I want to enter X3
I just have to know the time I have for doing it

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Okay I'll close it on the 15th of this month

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TOP FLIGHT: FBI chapter 8

 Ace and Duck stood on a blue mat in the gym of the Flight building. Ace was wearing loose jeans, no shirt, and he had some white cloth rapped around his hands. Duck was the same except he had shorts on. Ace looked around the room. Tech, Rev, and Slam were sitting on some benches not too far off. Ace was surprised that they were the only ones there since the building contained many agents.

 “All right, Ace.” Duck said tightening the bands on his hands, “The first part of the evaluation is to see your strength. We decided you'll face off against me.”

 Ace gave Duck a nod and they both got into a fighting stance. A door opened and they all looked up.

 “Hold on Duck, I want to be the one who evaluates him.” Lexi was standing in the door frame. She was in a woman’s fitness out-fit made up of a blue tight shirt, that showed her stomach, blue shorts, and her hands where all so raped up in a white cloth. Ace found him self staring.

 'Wow, she looks good! I know the shirt she usually wares complements her body but dis! Just ,wow!' Lexi started to walk towards them, and Ace took a deep breath while noticing something, 'Ace! Get a grip...is that a scar? It is! She has a scar going up her stomach... It's hardly notable, but it's there. I can see where her fur has grown over it.'

 “All right, Duck,” Lexi said as she now stood next to them, “hit the bench.”

 Duck smiled and raced over to where the others sat. (Tech and Slam on the bench. Rev sitting on the floor) He sat next to Rev.

 “You really going to just let her take over, Duck?” Tech asked.

 “Hey, it's not every day we get to watch Lex beat up some guy. Now is it?”

 Rev snickered at that comment, and pulled out a box of popcorn. Tech shrugged and took some of the popcorn like everyone else.

 “You ready for this, Ace?” Lexi asked the gray rabbit.

 “Sorry. But I don't like fighting ladies.”

 Lexi looked at him, annoyed, before raising a eyebrow saying, “And who ever said you were fighting a lady?” without warning Lexi sent a kick heading for Ace's head.

 Ace, from reflex, caught her foot before it could hit him. He looked up at her, surprised she was so willing to kick him. His gaze was met by Lexi's determined smile.

 Ace's shock melted into the same determined smile, “All right den.” ‘Dis will be too easy'
 Ace sent a few round house kicks and a couple of punches her way. Lexi easily reflected them and returned a few attacks of her own. She managed to get him into a head lock and whispered, “
You're holding back!” Ace reversed it so that he now held her, “So are you!” Lexi flipped him over her back. He kicked at her legs she jumped; he got back up.

 They started to circle one another, eyes as cold as ice. The guys on the benched had now grown more interested in the change of events. Now the two held nothing back. She would attack he would doge. He would attack she would reflect, both barely getting a real hit on each other. They where equally matched!

 Ace finally managed to get an attack through as she fell to the floor. With a great deal of her strength Lexi kicked Ace and sent him to the floor as well. They lay on the floor for moment, breathing heavily. They sat up; rubbing a few sore spots on their bodies, and stared at each other.

 Ace had confusion and a hint of anger flow into him. As he looked at Lexi he couldn't tell if she was annoyed, frustrated, or down right angered.

 Rev walked up to Ace, “Come-on-Ace.-We-need-to-give-you-the-rest-of-the-evaluation.” Rev helped Ace up and they started to walk away.

 Ace looked back at Lexi as he walked. Tech had walked up to her and said something Ace couldn't hear, and held out his hand. Lexi batted it away and got up. She said something to Tech and walked off.



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Niiiiiiiiiiiice!
There is a little favoure i'd like to ask you... You know, my fanfic, 'trouble in Paris'... I was wondering if you could draw something for this... If you want... I'm terrible at drawing, so pleeeeeeeeeeeease? Anything you want for exchange!

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LoonaticsF wrote:

Niiiiiiiiiiiice! There is a little favoure i'd like to ask you... You know, my fanfic, 'trouble in Paris'... I was wondering if you could draw something for this... If you want... I'm terrible at drawing, so pleeeeeeeeeeeease? Anything you want for exchange!


Heehee! You'll never guess what LoonaticsF yester day i was a little bord and I was randomly drawing things and acualy did something from your storybiggrin I jest haven't  goten around to scaning and posting it yet! XD

 



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This is a great fanfic! I'm excited to read more! ^^

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I have my entry pic already done :) Top flight :FBI

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Looks awsom!!

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Great chapter!

As for the contest, I'll try but I've seemed to have lost my touch when it comes to drawing the 'Tics, which ticks me off. But, I'll try!

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cool! you'd be the 2nd to enter!

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Ooooh! So interesting! Please continue! popcorn.gif

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I wish upon a star
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I've changed the due date for the contest to the 22nd

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SNEEK PEEK!!
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her eye's like fire, “Tech I,” He let his body slump a little as his eyes went big and round. Lexi looked at him, the fire in her eyes depleting, “Tech that's not fair. You know I find your puppy dog eye totally cute.”

Ace watched in surprise of how she was reacting to something so childish. He wondered who would win. Tech started a low wine and was able to produce a few crocodile tears. Lexi stomped her foot, let him go, and said, “Fine! You win, but your not aloud to do that AT ALL for the rest of the week. You got me!”
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Nice storry

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Thaks guys for all your coments

And B-cat is that you! Man I haven't seen you around in forever! How is it going?

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Puppy dog pout? Here we go again...
Nah, just kidding... You better update soon missy!

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MORE! i love this story great jobbiggrinbiggrin

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