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This story i will do after The Unexpected. The Loonatics discover a magician on the loose. That is what i got so far.

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An evil magician? =3
That could be interesting!

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Yup. Its gonna be a good one.

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Well, I look forward to it beginning. ^ ^;

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That's good i'll do the first chapter when im done my other one.

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Alrighty! =3

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Here you go you asked for the first chapter? Here it is.

Chapter 1: Headin Back

( The jet lands by the loonatics HQ.)
Ace: Well, finally were home!

Duck:Yay! no more devils or freaky illutionists! YES!!

Lexi: i know. Im exhausted. ( Holding Steve's hand.) come on Steve let's get you suited up! ( Pulling Steve.)

Steve:Whoa!
( Lexi pulls Steve where Zadavia is.)

Zadavia: okay Steve. Tweetums knows that you joined the team. Now you will choose the colour of your choice and Tech will make you a uniform.

Steve: Okay. What are the selections?

Zadavia: We have....what are the colours Tech?

Tech: Anything he wants Zadavia.

Zadavia: Well Steve which one?
( The other loonatics are giving Steve options of colours at the same time.)

Steve: Okay! okay! I have chose the colour i want!

Duck: great what did you choose?

Steve: Teal.

Duck: WHAT? The confusing colour? When people look at your uniform they are gonna ask is it Blue or Green?

Steve: Then i tell them its a mixture.

Duck: Oh. Well then.

Ace: Good choice, Steve but confusing.

Tech: Okay Steve i will make your uniform now.

Steve: Okay, you do that.

Tech: What does it look like again?

Steve: i'll show you. ( Steve rushes to his room and grabbed something teal.)
Here use this to memorize the colour.

Tech: Thanks Steve. ( Goes to his lab.)

Ace: Good job. And welcome to the team.
( Steve gave Ace a smile.)

-Meanwhile-
( The scene changes to a theater type proformance thing.)
Announcer: Okay! Here he is the incredible Mysterio!

Mysterio: Okay! For my first trick im gonna make some one disappear!
I need a volunteer!

Person: This is gonna be exciting. ( Sarcastic.)

Mysterio: How about you sir! You are the lucky one today!

Person: Oh boy.

Mysterio: What is your name sir?

Person: My names Brian.

Mysterio: Okay Brian. All you have to do is go under my cape like im putting my arm over your shoulder.

Brian: Okay.

Mysterio: Now before your very eyes. I am going to make him disappear before your eyes.
( The crowd looked excited. Mysterio puts his hand over Brian who has vanished.)

Mysterio: And WHAM! He's gone!
( Everybody appreciates it and applauds.)

Announcer: We are going to be on a break but you can get his autograph during the intermission!

-Hours later-

( The show ended but where's Brian?)

Mysterio: ( To himself in his trailer) That was an excellent show. Now for you my friend Brian who is trapped in a cage. Lets see how you like it being a invisible person. ( He turns on his machine. The beam fires at Brian and he became nvisible. Good Bye! ( Evil laugh.) HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!

End Of Chapter 1.

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What i mean by this chapter is that Steve is getting his uniform on.
Chapter 2: Steve is rising.

( As Tech finishes the touches of Steve's uniform, he hands it to Steve.)

Tech: Here you are, Steve. Your teal uniform.

Duck; i still don't get why he chose that colour.

Steve: Duck.

Lexi: Anyways, put it on Steve.
(Steve putted on the first part of his uniform and teal computerized stuff starts spreading on him until his uniform covered Steve completely.)

Ace: Whoa. Steve you look good.

Steve: Let me see.( Goes to the mirrior.) Wow i do look good thanks.

Tweetums: Loonatics i have a mission for you.

Ace: What is it tweetums?

Tweetums: A magician named Mysterio is on the loose dissappearing everybody.

Rip: Vanishing everybody?

Tweetums: Not only that. He is turning people into animals.

Lexi: But how is he doing that?

Tweetums: Magic.

Steve: but there is no such thing.

Tweetums: Apparently were wrong.

Ace: Where is he, Tweetums?

Tweetums: He is spotted near the south of acmetropolis.

Ace: Were ready.

Tweetums: okay. Good luck. Oh and Mr. Duck. Steve looks good with that uniform on, so don't think its not.

Duck: Yes, Tweetums.

Tweetums: Tweetums out. ( His hologram dissappears.)

Ace: Let's jet!
( scene changes to the loonatics flying on their jetpacks.)

Steve: Sweet i got my own jetpack too?

Tech: Yeah. i spend the last 10 minutes building you a jetpack.

Steve: Sweet thanks Tech.

Tech: No problem.

Ace: Well lets land. (The loonatics landed at their destination and were looking for any suspicions.)

Lexi: Where is magic boy?

Duck: how does he produce the magic anyway?

Rev: I-don't-know.

Ace: Where's Rip?

Rev: He-went-home.

Ace: Oh yeah.

Rev: He-has-been-acting-strange-since-that-box-sort-of-pushed-him.

Tech: Yeah. i have noticed he's been acting very weird latley.

Steve: maybehe's sick or something?

Ace: Yeah. Probably.

????: AH! So your the imfamous loonatics?

Ace: Yeah and you are the imfamous Mysterio?

Mysterio: Yes, i am. More like the incredible Mysterio.

Steve: Why's that?

Mysterio: Cause i am a master performer.

Duck: We battled chumps like you before. Do you know anybody by the names Ringmaster and Otto the odd?

Mysterio: The two that turned children into galatics oddities?

Duck: Yes!

Mysterio: Yeah. He's my cousin.

End of Chapter 2.

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Chapter 3: He escaped.

Ace: What? Your the ringmasters cousin?

Mysterio: yup and otto the odd's too.

Lexi: but how?

Mysterio: our mom's knew eachother and now i will make you dissapear like the rest of the people ive faced.

Steve; And turned them into animals?

Mysterio: yup.

Slam: He is really insane.( Blabbering.)

Steve: I agree Slam.

Mysterio: im not insane. Im a master performer.

Steve: were you when it was the last time you checked?

Mysterio: why you! ( Steve thought he was gonna be attacked until mysterio dissappeared.) Ace: that's it?

Duck; i guess so.

person: Help! Someone Help!

Ace; Someone's in trouble!

Person: Help!

Duck: mam, where are you?!

person: Here!

Duck: Misty breeze!

Steve: Oh no. not her.
End Of Chapter 3.

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Chapter 4: A weird reunion.

Ace; What?

Steve; My old owner. If she sees me she'll kill me.

Lexi: you mean your old mom.

Steve: Oh yeah.

Duck: Im rescuing you Misty!( He quacks up to save her.)

Misty: Thank you. Oh look who i haven't seen in a while.

Steve: Hi Misty.( Bored.)

Misty: Where were you?

Steve: With my new friends and family.

Misty: im your mom. Now come here!

Steve: NO!!!Never!!! Go away!! I never want to see you again!!!

Misty: Okay then i won't take you. Then maybe someone else will.

Steve: what do you mean, somone else?

Ace: Listen here Misty noone is taking Steve.

Misty: And why not?

Ace: Because he belongs to us now. Zadavia went to the adoption agency this morning and changed Misty breeze - Zadavia's before she left.

Misty: But she is not Steve's mother?

Ace: I know. But what i mean is. That we own Steve. So you're too late.

Steve: HA! HA!

Misty: you loonatics stole my son!

Steve: Make that ex-son!

Misty: I am going to change it back!

Ace: You can't. Zadavia said that you can't change the name anymore. And theywill reconize you so you can't take Steve.

Steve: Take that, Misty!

Misty: What-ever. ( She leaves.)

Steve: Thank goodness.

Duck: I thought i liked her.

End Of Chapter 4.

 


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Chapter 5: Let's jet!

Ace; Forget about her guys. Let's get mysterio before he hurts or transforms anymore people.
( The loonatics nod their heads and take off to go chase Mysterio.)

Mysterio: no one is leaving this place as humans anymore! ( Evil laughs.)

Ace: You may wanna double check doc.

Mysterio: The loonatics! I have waited for a long time for this moment!

Ace: Well its finally here magic boy!

Mysterio: Oh by the way! When i turn people into animals? They are under my controll. Attack the infamous loonatics!

Ace: Attack!
( The loonatics' eyes turned to the colour as their uniforms.)

Lexi: Oh look a gorilla! Heads up Duck!!!!

Duck: Whoa! Thanks Lex!

Lexi: No......Problem!

Steve: Ace i have an idea how about i go after mysterio and you distract his guards and don't hurt the animals.

Ace: Good idea. Do it.

Steve: Hey Mysterio!

Mysterio: You!

Steve: Hey how about a battle!!

Mysterio: Gladly!
( Steve and Mysterio battle with their powers.)

Steve: Hey where did you get those moves, your grandma? My baby brother hits harder than you!

( Mysterio is so mad he took a staff and clinged Steve to the floor with his device to turn people into animals.)

Steve: Your...probably...forgeting..that we are already...animals!

Mysterio: Ah you're right! i won't turn you loonatics into animals i'll turn you guys into mixed up creatures.

Steve; free the people first!

Mysterio: No!
( Steve pushes Mysterio off him and kicked over him.)

Steve: Ace!
( Ace finishes his battle and looks at Steve.)

Steve: Let's get these people back into their forms!

Ace: You are full of good ideas today! Loonatics go to the machine if you can! Especiaslly you Tech!

Tech: Ok Ace! ( Tech runs toward the machine and starts to fidget with it.)

Mysterio: my machine!

Tech; Got it! ( the machine turned on and rays start flashing from it and made everybody, even the invisible people to normal.)

Duck: Everybody get out! Quickly!

Steve: Rush at him!

Ace: Steve don't!
( Steve couldn't hear Ace as Steve ran over Mysterio who hit Steve with his staff and Steve is unconsious.)

Tech; Steve! No!

Ace: No its time to rush at him!

Lexi; i will wake Steve up! Steve! Steve!!

( Steve cracked his eyes open.)

Lexi: oh thank gosh.

Steve: Im fine let's go join!

Lexi: Ok.

( All the loonatics rush at him until Mysterio dissappeared.)

Ace: Great he got away!

Duck: at least the machine is destroyed too.

End Of Chapter 5.

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Chapter 6: The interuption.

Steve: i know that was a relief.

Tech: And we save the people.

Lexi: Wait. The fun is not over yet.

Duck; What are you talking about?

Lexi; How many times do i have to tell you i have super hearing.

Duck: Oh....yeah....right.

Steve: What is it that you hear Lex?

Lexi: Um........Thunder.

Duck; guys look outside.

Rev: Oh-my-goodness-look-at-the-weather!

Ace: We are never gonna catch Mysterio in this weather.

Tech: i know. He must be controlling the weather.

Ace: Lets go. ( Steve sees Ace all sad.)

Steve: Ace, come here. ( Ace walked toward Steve.) What's wrong buddy you look very sad.

Ace: Well its just i love Lexi.

Steve: Do you love her deeply Ace?
( Ace nodds.)

Steve: Its okay with me but is it okay with lexi. She is our friend she'll understand.

Ace: Thanks Steve.

Steve: no problem. Lexi? can i talk to you?

Lexi: Sure.

Steve; I don't think we are working out.

Lexi: Are you breaking up with me?

Steve: i have to. Look at Ace.

Lexi: Oh, yeah poor guy. Okay that's fine.

Steve: Wow that's it?

Lexi: What?

Steve: You are not going to get mad at me?

Lexi: No Steve you are a nice guy. Im not going to be mad at you unless if its Duck in the situation then yeah.

Steve: Thanks Lex.

Lexi: No problemo.

Steve: Ace!( Ace walks to Steve and Lexi leaves.) Its done you can be Lexi's boyfriend.

Ace: Yes! Yes!

Steve: Ask her out buddy.

Ace: ok. Right now?

Lexi: yes i'd love to Ace.

Ace: Awsome. I love ya both.

Steve: You don't mean...

Ace: No Lexi as a goirlfriend and you as a friend.

Steve: Yeah. Okay. Phew.

Duck: hate to break the love group but let's catch Mysterio.

End Of Chapter 6.

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Chapter 7: The storm machine.

( The loonatics go and search for mysterio.)

Ace: ugh! Where is he?

Steve: i don't know, Rev!

Rev: Nothin-OOh! Wait!-i-see-him!

Steve: Oh yeah there he is too!

Lexi: Get ready for the terrible weather!
( The loonatics go into a very windy scene.)

Tech: remember battling Weathervane?

Ace: yeah. i do. Maybe we might run into her.

Duck: That's a possiblity but she's in jail.

Steve: Who? Im sorry but i still haven't met these villains yet.

Ace: Oh. Right you need to actully meet them. And we will ask Zadavia to use her satelite camera to record a video so you can watch it.

Steve: Ok!

Tech: There he is! Get him!

Mysterio: The loonatics!! you finally showed up!

Ace: Yeah. We are not giving up!

Mysterio: Guess you didn't know that i had more than one machine, eh?!

Ace: guess we do now! What does that one do?!

Mysterio: it controlls the weather.

Steve: i see.

Mysterio: That reminds me. Now you see! ( The fog starts covering of where the loonatics are.) Now you don't!

Steve: Great! He covered us in the fog!

Duck: Can't see! Which way?!

Ace: Wait can anybody hear me?!

Everybody: yeah!

Ace: Lexi?!

Lexi: ya!

Ace: Slam?!

Slam: Yup!

Ace: Rev?!

Rev: Check!

Ace: Tech?!

Tech: yup!

Ace: Steve?! Steve?!

Steve: Here!

Ace: Okay, Steve can you see with your night vision?!

Steve: My night vision! Oh! Right!( Steve's eyes turn light teal.)

Ace: how about you Rev?!

Rev: Yup! ( rev's eyes turn Red and he sees where everybody is standing.)

Steve: Me and Rev are gonna come towards you!

Ace; Okay don't move loonatics!
( Steve and Rev found everybody one by one and lead them out of the fog.)

Duck; yay! I can see again!

Ace; hurry! The machine!( The loonatics go to the machine and destroy it. And the bad weather goes away.)

mysterio: Darn you loonatics! Now my turn to do with something of yours!
( In a swipe second he kidnapped Steve.)

Steve: Help!

Ace: Steve! hang on!( Steve and Mysterio dissappear.) Like what i said before Loonatics, you take one you take us all!

End of Chapter 7.

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Chapter 8: The Trap.

Tech: No! Steve!

Duck: Oh no! First Tech, then Lexi, then me, then Rip and now Steve, who's next?

Ace: Don't know Duck but i have no clue how he just disappears like that.

Tech: I think i can search it up back in my lab.

Ace: Alright loonatics lets go back to HQ.

Duck: And leave Steve?

Ace: We will be fast as we can Duck.

Tech: yeah we are all worried about Steve too Duck.

Lexi: By the way i have never seen you care this much of Steve before do you like him?

Duck: Which one are you talking about? The homosexual or as a friend.

Lexi: both.

Duck: Yes i like him as a friend and......

Ace: You like Steve?!

Duck: Well....No!! Why would i be a weirdo and like Steve?

Lexi: i don't think he is a weirdo either Duck he would never be a himosexual he said.

Duck: Well neither do i. So.
( The loonatics go back to HQ.)

Ace: okay Tech what are you going to do?

Tech: I am going to build a disappearing machine and a tracker to know where he will disappear too.

Lexi: Nice!

Ace: have it ready.

-Scene switches to Steve-

Steve: Hey what is the big idea? Kidnapping me?

Mysterio: Well i kidnapped you so the loonatics would come find you and land in a trap which is the maze you will be staying in for a while.

Steve: A maze? What No!
( Mysterio pulls a switch and Steve falls into the maze.)

Steve: ( Screaming.) Oh great. How am i going to get out of here.

-back to the HQ-

Ace: Got it ready Tech?

Tech: All set.

Ace: All right loonatics, lets jet!

( The loonatics leave the HQ to set a place for the Vanish 500.)

ACe: What is it Tech?

Tech: It is called the Vanish 500. It will vanish anybody and teleport wherever you wish.

Ace: Sweet! And the other?

Tech: A tracker to where tMysterio is gonna strike next.

Ace: Nice! I got an idea! 5 of us will get Steve and get him out and the one person stays here and guards the machine.

Duck: So. Who's staying?

Ace: Slam do you mind staying?

Slam: Nope.

Ace: Good that means the rest of us go and get Steve out.

Tech: And Slam no distractions that means no pizza.

Slam: No pizza?!

Tech: mmhmm. And protect the machine.

Slam: Check!

Ace: Alright get in loonatics! Slam turn on the switch!! NOW!!!
( Slam flicks the switch and the 5 other loonatics vanished.)

Slam: Phew!

( The other 5 loonatics appear in a base type place.)

Ace: Hey! Where are you Mysterio?!

Mysterio: Ah! loonatics i see that you have found my base. I would like you to introduce you to my maze which has been behind the walls you are right now.
The game is if you find Steve, you will come to my controll room where i am right now but there are dangers in the maze too. Good bye loonatics! HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!( The intercom turns off.)

Ace: Okay lets find Steve.

End Of Chapter 8.

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Chapter 9: The Maze.

( The five loonatics start heading through the first part of the maze.)

Ace: Already it looks pretty easy.

Tech: So far.

Ace: What do you mean?

Tech: He said there will be challanges too.

Ace: Oh so there will be challanges in this.

Mysterio on intercom: yes. Oh and one more thing you have precisley 20 minutes to get Steve an appear where i am. Are you listening Steve?

Steve: Whatever! come on guys find me.

Mysterio: you can't hear him, i afraid and he can't hear you. ( Turns off.)

Tech: dang!

Lexi: i wonder when we will pass the.....Traps!!!!( Lexi is trapped by the coil and couldn't get out.) HELP!!!

Ace: hang on Lexi!( Ace fires a lazer beam and frees Lexi.)

Rev: Hey! - How- many-traps-are-there?

Mysterio on intercom: Well there is eight traps! HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!( Turns off)

Steve: Eight traps oh great.( Talking to himself.)

Tech: we just passed one 7 to go.

Ace: Let's keep going. ( The loonatics continue their way until they found a gate but they were stuck in one place.)

Duck: great. There must be super glue on the grass or something.

Ace: Hmm. Tech?

Tech: On it chief. ( Tech grabs a bunch of water balloons that stabilize glue. He splashes it on the glue and they were free.)

Lexi: There was the second trap. 6 to go.

Ace: We need a key.

Tech: Look a riddle. It say the key is where you are standing. What?

Ace: That does not make any sense.

Lexi: oh! its below us we are standing on it!9 The loonatics remove their feet until they see the shape of the key.)

Tech: That's not a shape of a key. That looks like a shape of.....

Duck: me. ( Duck lays on it.) i wonder if........( The gate opens.)

Ace: Wow. We should use you more often.

Duck: Hey!( The loonatics go through the gate until Duck falls through a hole.)
Whoa!

Ace: Duck!!

Duck: AHHHHHHHHHH!!!!( falls.) Where am i? Hey stairs!( He goes up the stairs and is trapped.) Wait! I will quack out! ( Duck quacks out.) That was a lame trap.

Tech: Duck!

Duck: guys? whoa i moved on the other side of the gate.

Ace: Let's keep moving.
( They look to the side as there was a message being printed. it said 10 minutes.)

Ace: 10 minutes. We got to hurry!( The loonatics passed through the other 4 traps( which were pretty lame.) and they had 1 minute left.)

Steve: Guys?

Lexi: Steve!! I hear him come on!! He's this way!!( the loonatics go furthur and furthur to the sound of Steve until they found him.)

Steve: Lexi?!

Lexi: Steve!!!( Huggs him.) I thought you would be a goner!! Somebody else quite misses you too. ( points at Duck.)

Steve: you serious?

Ace: Yep. He ''likes'' you.

Steve: Duck im not gay.

Duck; Well thanks for telling me.

Mysterio: But the fun is not over yet!!

End Of Chapter 9. Second last chapter coming next.

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Chapter 10: The final machine.

Steve: What do you mean?
( before he could say anymore they were teleported to the lab where he was.)

Mysterio: i see you found your way through the maze. And you won. you may have Steve back. now the question is. Are you gonna get out?

Ace: brilliant.

Steve: oh man!

Mysterio: Aw i know. But their is one more thing i would like to show you! behold my last machine!!

Duck: What exacly is it?

Mysterio: The first one was the magic machine. The second one was the weather machine and this one is the disappearing machine, which can make people disappear and escape. This thing with it sends people through a wormhole.

Ace: ah! okay.

Mysterio: I know its a good machine and you are gonna be my examples.

Tech: How about no!

mysterio: how about yes!

Ace: you know doc? You are never gonna get away with this you creep!

Duck: by the way pretty lame traps back there in the maze.

Mysterio: i don't think you are gonna think this one is lame.
( Mysterio presses a button on his belt and the loonatics are stuck in a electric cage except Steve.)

Ace: Steve get him!

Steve: okay!

Mysterio: dang i missed you!!

Steve: I guess you did. Now its time for me to destroy your last machine.

Tech: come on Steve shut down his machine!!

Steve: Sure thing!

Mysterio: I don't think so! ( He blocks Steve before he can reach the machine.)

Rev: Come-on-Steve!

Lexi: Go Steve!

Steve: Okay mr. vanish try and catch me!

Mysterio: Alright!

Ace: no Steve its a trap!

Steve: i know!

Ace: How does he know?

Duck: who knows.

Mysterio: Okay Steve time to draw the line! Who are you gonna save Planet blanc? Or you teamates? ( A vortex starts forming in the cell where the other loonatics are.) When i let go of the switch on my right? You're friends will be gone. Or the switch on my left? you're planet will be destroyed!!

Steve: Oh great! Um.........

Mysterio: Choose! Steve! Choose!!

End Of Chapter 10.

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Final Chapter!! Yahoo!!

Epilogue/Chapter 11: The Final Thought.

Ace: Steve don't choose us! Save the universe!
( Steve was thinking fast.)

Steve: ( thinking to himself) Oh no! Im in a big decision. What should i do?
Save the universe? Or my friends? I know i'll save both!

Steve: I finally made my decision! I am gonna do..........BOTH!!!!( Steve uses his Telekenisis to lift the switches from Mysterio's hands.)

Mysterio: What are you doing?! My Switches!!

Steve: Ace fire at the machine!!! Quickly!!

Ace: You got it Steve!!( Ace fires a lazerblast and now the rest of the loonatics are free and saved and so is the universe. Steve lets go of the switches.)

Mysterio: You little!!

Steve; i got a really good place for you! Tech! Duck! hold him! Ace grab teh wormhole device! ( Ace ran and grabbed the device that sends people through a wormhole.)

Mysterio: No! Not that! No! You can't do this to me!

Steve: See ya, magicboy!

Mysterio: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!
( Mysterio flashes through the wormhole as he screams.)

Steve: Good redence.

Ace: now what about us?

Steve: Slam! Someone talk to Slam!

Duck; Why?

Tech: Because he can bring us back!
( The scene switches to Slam sleeping until his comlink comes on.)

Ace: ( on comlink.) Slam? Are you there?

Slam: Yeah. You got rid of Mysterio?

Ace: yup. He has been flushed. Can you send us back where you are?

Tech: ( On comlink.) The Red Switch Slam.
( The scene switches to the 6 other loonatics.)
 
Tech; Alright it should work.

Steve; Actually it is working! ( The 6 started fading away from that dreadful place.)
( The loonatics popped up where Slam was. They were back on Blanc.)

Steve; Were back!

Ace: feels good to be home!

Duck: yeah. Let's go see the canary.
( The loonatics go see Tweetums at his thrown.)

Tweetums: Good job for catching Mysterio Loonatics.

Zadavia: yeah. good job loonatics.

Ace: Thanks Zadavia.

Zadavia: You're indeed welcome.

Duck; So is Steve gonna get knighted?

Steve; Duck. That was a stupid question. I don't think Tweetums is gonna knight........

Tweetums: Yeah.

Steve: What?

Duck; Told ya.

Tweetums: Come here Steve. ( Steve walked toward Tweetums and bowed.)
From the power vested in me. I prounce you knight of Blanc. just like Sir Duck.
Now your name can be Sir Steve if you want?

Steve: I'll think about it.

Lexi: Steve?

Steve: Yes Lexi?

Lexi: It was a good idea to give me to Ace. You are a great friend.

Ace: yes Thank you Steve! ( Ace huggs Steve.) Thanks so much.

Steve: You're...welcome.

Duck: Ha! I told you Steve is gay!

Steve: Am not! Ace needed a bestfriend hug.

Duck: Oh. Almost!

Optimatus: congratulations Steve.

Steve: Thanks Optimatus.

-Hours later-

( Zadavia and optimatus are talking in the living room.)

Optimatus: The reason i brought you here sister is that i want to talk to you.

Zadavia: What is it?

( Steve and Duck pass by and they started listening to their conversation.)

Steve: What are they talking about?

Duck; I don't know. Let's find out.

Steve: Ya.

Zadavia: Well?

Optimatus: Its that we have to leave.

Zadavia: Can't we visit?

Optimatus: i wish but its a good bye forever.

Zadavia: What? 

Optimatus: Deuce might be coming back and we just can't leave  Freling anymore.

Zadavia: I guess you're right. I'll tell them tomorrow. 

Optimatus: We leave tomrrow.

Duck: ( whispering.) They're leaving?

Steve: i guess so. let's go.

( The next morning the loonatics knew that Zadavia was leaving for good.)

Steve: Well, widh you two the best.

The End. There you go Rye. There is the answer to your question when you said why is Zadavia leaving?

 



-- Edited by steve123 at 19:34, 2008-05-04

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