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The loonatics discover a new planet that they thought it never existed.

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Chapter 1: Back to the headquarters.

Steve:( To Tech, whispering.) I can't believe i am going to say this but thanks for the goodbye kiss Tech.

Tech: you're welcome, Steve. Now let's not talk about it please?

Steve: Good idea.

Ace: So loonatics ready to head back after this awful mess?

Duck: How?

Lexi: The Crystal remember?

Duck: Oh yeah. That's right.

Lexi: But before we go we have to see our future now. ( kisses crystal.)
( The crystal screen showed Lexi listening to her music instead of on the streets.)

Lexi: that's better.
( Tech kisses the crystal and instead of the date, it showed him in his lab making newer inventions.)

Tech: That's good.
( Rev kisses the crystal and the screen appeared to be Rev making his usuall shakes and excersising.)

Rev: Way!!!!!!!!!!Better!!!!!Than-wearing-a-maid-outfit-i-must-say.
( Ace kisses the crystal and instaed of being dead it shows him alive and well.)

Ace: Much better.
( Slam kisses the crystal and instead of him being a slave, he was eating ten boxes of pizza.)

Slam: Ah.
( Rip kisses the crystal and instead of being laughed at, it rewond itself and being more popular.)

Rip: There we go.
( Duck kissed the crystal, and instead of being in a cage he was his normal self.)

Duck: That's me, yes! You're last Stevie.

Steve: Alright. ( Steve kissed the crystal and again instead on being in the date. He was at home but with somebody that the loonatics don't know. All of the sudden the screen broke down.)

Lexi: Who was that Steve?

Steve: I don't know. But it looked like a female. It could be you.

Lexi: Maybe.
( The loonatics touch the crystal and start to fade.)

Ace: Were home.

Steve: Yup. That guy, the masked villain creeped me out. I thought i would have to be his girlfriend for a minute. Eww!

Tech: That won't happen. He's gone now.

Rev: That-was-close-to-are-you-okay?

Steve; im fine Rev.

End Of Chapter 1.   

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Chapter 2: The important news

Ace: Yeah Steve that would be pretty creepy if it happened to me too.

Steve: looks like our headquarters is back to normal. No more bad guys.

Tech: They all must have disappeared when the masked villain went into space.

Steve: Yeah.

Ace: Let's go see if Tweetums is alright.
( The loonatics go to Tweetums' thrown to seee if he's okay.)

Tweetums: Hello loonatics.

Ace: Hello Tweetums we just came to see if you are okay from that encounter.

Tweetums: Yeah. The masked villain almost killed me where were you?

Steve: We were a little busy.

Tweetums: He told me if i hadn't tell him where you are then i would be dead.

Duck: You lead that freak here?

Tweetums: Well, yeah. But enough of tat. I have gweat news.

Steve: What?

Tweetums: An exciting and thrilling new mission to journey into space and discover a new planet.

Steve: A new planet?

Tweetums: Yeah. A planet tat belongs to a king.

Steve: Really? Does he have any princesses?

Tweetums: Probably.

Duck: im with Steve on this one.

Ace: Oh my gosh. When do we leave?

Tweetums: Right now if you like.

Ace: LEt's jet!

End Of Chapter 2.

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Chapter 3: Into space.

( The loonatics get ready to go on their space mission.)

Ace: Ready for your first mission into space Steve?

Steve: oh Yeah! Very exciting!

Ace: We should be leaving in the next 15 minutes or so. We just gotta wait for Tech with his space gizmo.

Tech: Yup. It is gonna be the best invention i even built.
( The other loonatics wait until the invention was done.)

Tech: May i present the surfur saucer 7000 all you got to do is go inside the machine and it'll fly plus it has refreshments and weapons and shields of all sorts.

Steve: It HUGE!

Tech: Yeah. You can even live in this thing if you wish.

Ace: Wow Tech.

Rev: Wow-Tech!-This-vehicle-is-amazing-can-we-ride-it-now-can-we?-Can-we?

Tech: Yes Rev everybody in.

Rev: Yay!!
( All the loonatics head inside the vehicle and take off.)

Tweetums: Good luck, loonatics and make it back.

-Meanwhile somewhere in the universe-

( Meanwhile there is a blue planet with a teenage girl that looks like Steve but with a hoodie on and jeans was on the planet along with her sister, her brother and her father.)

Girl: But daddy i don't want to fall in love with him!

Dad: But sweety there is nobody else on the universe you have to choose between these gentlemen here.)

Girl: But there both not my type.

Dad: You have to marry one of those two you can't choose random people all the time.

Sister: Dad just let her choose.

brother: i know just let her choose whever she wants.

Dad: I wish i can do that but it is tradition.
( The dad, brother and the sister are humans.)

Dad: But Kylie you can't choose a random guy.

Kylie: Yes i can! I want a prince who is actually dreamy and sweet. Those two arn't.

Gentleman #1: Come on Kylie choose me!

Gentleman#2: No choose me!

kylie: Oh my gosh!

End Of Chapter 3.

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Chapter 4; The mission begins.

Dad: Just choose my dear!

Kylie: No!! Stop it!! Oh my Gosh!!
( Kylie goes inside her room and sat and cried.)

Brother: Look what you did Dad!

Dad: What?!

Sister: You should have just let her choose whoever she wants to be with. And when James( The brother) and i got married we get to choose whoever.

Dad: But Kylie is special and different.
( Katie( The sister.) looks at her dad.)

Katie: Does that mean you have to treat her differently just because we found her.

Dad: Well, yes.

Katie: Well you shouldtreat her like us.
( She leaves to talk to Kylie.)

- Meanwhile back to the main characters in our story-

Ace: how's it goin Rev?

Rev: All-good-Ace!

Tech: I wonder why they would just attack us?

Ace: I know.
( Steve takes his Ipod off.)

Duck: Hey Steve where is your Ipod?

Steve: Im bored so i put it away. Even listening to Every Face Tells a story over again repeatedly.

Duck: Let me guess, Bob dylan?

Steve: Nope. Try again.

Duck: uhhhhhhhh. Olivia Newton John?

Steve: Nope. One more guess.

Duck: Cliff Richard?

Steve: Ding Ding Ding!! The Duck won a prize?

Duck: Did i get it?

Steve: No.( Sarcastic.) Yes of course.

Rev: Ace-i-see-something!

Lexi: What?!

Ace: What is it Rev?

Rev: Something-round-and-black.

Ace: Tech get us out of here!

Tech: Ok! ( The loonatics have a sigh of reliefs.)

Steve: That was close.

-meanwhile-

Katie: Kylie can i come in?

Kylie: ok. Sure. ( Crying.)

Katie: What's wrong?

Kylie: i don't want to marry a human. I want to marry somebody my own type.

Katie: it'll happen.

Kylie: Let's hope.

Katie: I heard there are superheros down on Planet Blanc called the loonatics and they are all antros like you.

Kylie: Really?

Katie: Yeah.

Kylie: i doubt that hey are coming to this planet.

Katie: Never know.

End Of Chapter 4.

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Chapter 5; A little trouble.

Kylie: Wait! Is one of them you know like me?

Katie: The antro species or the one the looks like you like you are not the only one different?

Kylie: like the species.

katie: I heard that there is one coyote, 1 road runner, 2 bunnies, 1 tasmanian devil and 1 duck. but there is a new member im not sure what he or she is.

Kylie; well let's hope that he's a handsome and same as me.

Katie: Don't hope too much.

-meanwhile-

Ace: Well now we need to figure out where the planet is.

Tech: Uh Ace?

Ace: Yes Tech?

Tech: There are no planets out here.

Steve: Uh oh. We're lost, doomed and dead.

Lexi: Its okay Steve. It is really gonna be okay.

Steve; i sure hope so.

Duck: Yeah. I agree. Were DOOMED!! DOOMED!!

Ace: ( rolls eyes.) Oh my gosh not again. Okay Tech we'll just set up another portal okay?

Steve: Hey, that's a good idea.

( Later the loonatics have to find 3 pieces in space to find their way and make a portal.)

Tech: Ace, we should find the first item right about now. ( The ship extended a claw and grabbed a rock.)

Ace: There's the second Tech!

Steve: Hey you're right. ( A second claw extended and got a whole bunch of dust in a jar.)

Rev: I-see-the-third! 

Lexi: Good eyes Rev! ( The claw extended and grabbed a ring type thing.)

Tech: Alright now we need to mix them together.

End Of Chapter 5. 

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Chapter 6: The Way Back on Track.

Ace: Tech how are we gonna mix it up?

Tech:( Pondering.) Hey there is a astroid that we can mix it onto.
( The loonatics slowly land on the astoid that was big enough for a ship to land on it.)

Ace: Let's put on those space suits again.
( The loonatics put on the cosmic space suits and Tech again made an extra one for Steve.)

Steve: Thanks for the space suit Tech.

Tech: You're welcome. It is comfy isn't it?

Steve: Oh yeah.

Ace: Where are the items?
( Just then Rev and Slam comes with the ingredients to make a new portal.)

Rev; Right-here!

Duck: So what do we do with them?

Tech: Well, we mix them together.

Duck: But how, Tech?

Tech: Put them together and they will mix in their own.

Duck: okay.

Tech: On the count of three Rev drop the items and we'll run back into the ship in time to teleport towards the new planet. Every body get in the ship while me and Rev do this. ( The other 5 loonatics head in the ship and start the engine.)

( Tech held up three fingers, then two and then one as Rev putted all the ingredients on the ground in front of them. Rev grabbed Tech and flew him into the ship as the ship flew back as the portal was being created.)

Duck: Wow. Tech you did it.

Steve: Hey ya. Good job!

Tech: thank you.

Rev: ( Clears throat.)

Steve: oh and thank you Rev!

Rev: You're-welcome.
( The portal is created and they are ready to travel through it.)

Ace: Here we go loonatics. Hang on to something.

Duck: i can't believe that the items we found, were just found all over the place. That was pretty lucky.

Ace: Hey ya. Anyways hang on!!
( The loonatics travel through the portal as their location was different.)

- meanwhile-

Kylie: Yeah i wish a handsome guy fell from the sky.
( They hear a noice.)

Katie: I heard something.

Kylie: What was that?

End Of Chapter 6.

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Stupid title of a chapter.

Chapter 7: A wish came true.

( Kylie and katie looked out the window and see a ship.)

Katie: Let's check it out.

Kylie: ( nodds.)
( Kylie and Katie follow where the ship landed.)

Katie: Who's ship do you think it is?

Kylie: I don't know.
( Just then the doors of the ship open up to reveal a figure and that figure was Ace.)

Ace: Hello?

Katie: Hi.

Kylie: Who is it?

Ace: My name is Ace Bunny the leader of the loonatics.

Katie: Your Ace?! The loonatics leader?

Ace: Yes and who might you goirls be?

Katie: im Katie and this is my half-sister Kylie.

Ace; Nice to meet you. let me introduce you to the rest of the crew.

Kylie: Rest?

Ace: Yup. Here they are.
( Lexi comes out.)
Lexi: hi im Lexi Bunny.
( Duck comes out.)
Duck: Hello im Danger Duck. The handsome one. Hello girls? ( Repeats raising eyebrows.)

Katie: My god.

Duck: Eyeeyyyyeyyye.
( Tech comes out.)

Tech: Hi. Im Tech E Coyote. The genius.
( Rev comes out.)
Rev: Hi-nice-to-meet-you-im-Rev-Runner.
( Slam comes out.)
Slam: Hi. ( Mumbles.)

Ace: Sorry you can't understand Slam very well but he said My name is Slam tasmanian.
( Steve comes out.)

Ace; And finally.

Steve: Hi. Im Steve Bateon.

Kylie: ( Whispering.) Oh my gosh my wish came true.

Katie: Oh. ( To loonatics.) Nice to meet you all my name is Katie and this is my half-sister Kylie.

Kylie: Hi.

Katie: She's a little shy.

Steve: oh my gosh. ( staring at Kylie.)

End Of Chapter 7

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Awesome story! Keep it up. ^__^;

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Alright! Here is the eighth chapter. =)

Chapter 8: The New Planet.

Katie: So what are you doing here?

Ace: Well actually we crashed and now we have no fuel.

Steve: Hey Tech how long does it take to refill?

Tech: Two weeks.

Steve: Two weeks?!

Tech: Yup. It took me two weeks to fill the thing, so.

Ace: You don't mind that we stay here for a while do ya?

Katie: Well of course!

Kylie: This way.

Steve: ( Whispering.) Hey Tech. I........

Tech: You like Kylie?

Steve: Oh yeah. She's pretty hot.

Tech: Yeah. Well i think she likes you.
( Kylie and Katie walk ahead of the loonatics.)

Kylie:( Whispering.) Katie. I like Steve.

Katie: You got your first crush. You like him?

Kylie: Yes. A million times Yes. He's cute.

Ace: So Katie.

Katie: Yeah?

Ace: We are trying to get to the new planet that just has been discovered.

Katie: ACe. You are on the new planet.

Duck: We can't be.

Tech: Actually. She's right. We are. We told the portal to take us to the new planet remember?

Duck: Oh yeah. Right.

-meanwhile-

????: Why didn't you chase them?

???2: I don't know sir!

????: Well plan another attack then.

???2: Where are tjey?

????: On the new planet of course.

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Chapter 9: Secrets Of love.

( The loonatics follow Kylie and Katie into a hall.)

Steve: Nice place.

Kylie: Thanks.

katie: We will have Lunch pretty soon so just wait here.

Ace: okay. ( the loonatics waited in the hall for a long while.)

Kylie: Come on guys.

Katie: So. ( As they sat down.) You guys have powers?

Ace; Yup. i have lazer vision, Optical Enhansment and i have this guardian Strike Sword, which i got when i got into the action hero business.

Kylie: Wow. That seriously is a cool sword.

Ace: Thanks.

Katie: What about you Lexi?

Lexi: I have Brain Blast, plant control and super hearing.

Kylie: Awsome!

Duck: i'll go next. The handsome one is going next. Okay i have Orb Randomizer, Aqua Dense and Quatnum Quack which is a teleportation device.

Katie: You are pretty dense. But pretty cool powers.

Duck: Hey!

Katie: Im just kidding.

Duck: Oh. Very funny.

Kylie: What about you Steve?

Steve: i have telekenesis, which i can control things with my mind. Night Vision, and Sphere Summoner.

Kylie: That's so hot.( Everybody looks at Kylie.) I-M-Mean that's so cool.

Steve: Thanks. They can come in handy.

Katie: What about you, Tech?

Tech: I have Regenerative powers just in case if i run into mishaps while making inventions.

Kylie: You're a inventor?

Tech: Yup. I can also have E.M.P.

Katie: What's that?

Steve: Electro Magnetic Pulse.

Katie: Oh. Really cool. What about Rev and Slam?

Rev: I-have-Super-Speed-And-a-G.P.S.

Kylie: You can summon a G.P.S?

Rev: I-guess-that's-what-you-can-call-it.

Kylie: Very cool.

Katie: Last but not least. Slam what are your powers?

Slam: (Mumbles) I can turn into a tornado so i call it the Tasmanian Tornado.

Katie: Whoa. I wish i can do that.
( As soon as they finish talking. Rev's communicator rings.)

Rev: Excuse-me.( Rev answers his communicator.) Hello?

Rip: Hey bro.

Rev; Hey-Rip-how-are-you-feeling?

Rip: A little bit better i guess. How's everybody?

Rev: They-are-good.

Rip: That's good. Where are you?

Rev; We-are-on-a-new-planet.

Rip: Where's that?

Rev: Really-far. How's-ma-and-pup?

Rip: They miss you. And they are good. Also i had a bit of an experience last night.

Rev: What-kind?
( Just before Rip answers the signal turned off.)

Rev: No-Rip! Dang-no-signal!
( Rev comes to the table.)

Steve: Who was that?

Rev: Rip.

Ace: How is he?

Rev: Good. He-just-feels-weird.

Katie: Take a seat Rev. Oh! I forgot that four other people are joining us for supper.

Steve: Who?

katie: Our Dad, Our brother and two gentlemen name James and Alex.

Kylie: Prince James and prince Alex?

Katie: Sadly yeah.

Steve: Why whats wrong?

Kylie: Those two guys are the bachelors of me getting married.

Steve: oh.
( The dad, the brother and the two princes come in the kitchen.)
Dad: Hello.

Kylie and katie: Hi dad.

James: Why hello honey.

kylie: Eww!
( Steve thought of her when she said ew.)

Steve:( Thinking) She doesn't like these guys.

Dad: I see you guys met some new company. Who are they?

Katie: These are the loonatics, dad.

Dad: The infamous loonatics?

Ace: Yup. Nice to meet ya doc.

Katie: Lunch. Its here.

Ace: So how long did you move to this planet?

Dad: long time ago only a year.

Ace: Oh.

Katie: No to be rude, Ace but Oh isn't what you should've said.

Ace: Why?

katie: This planet is worth alot.

Ace: In cash?

Katie: Well, sort of. But it is like a diamond worth over a billion quazarinium.

Steve: Oh my gosh. ( Suprised.) i guess we must be on a wealthy planet.

Kylie: Yup pretty wealthy.

Dad: Oh let me introduce you to the prices who one of them might marry my daughter. Here is Prince James.

James: Hello!

Dad: And this is prince Alex.

Alex: Hey.
( As they are being introduced Steve sat there concerned. When lunch was over everybody was outside. Steve was listening to his ipod. As Tech, Kylie, Lexi, Rev and Ace are by the fountain and Slam and Duck were chilling inside.)

Ace: Hey, Kylie.

Kylie: Hi.

Lexi: Do you like Steve?

Kylie: A whole lot better than James and Alex.

Tech: Why won't you go talk to him.

Kylie: im too shy. He's so cute though.

Lexi: its okay he is really nice.

Kylie: Well here i go. ( Kylie walks over to Steve and taps him on the shoulder.)

Steve: Oh hey.( Takes Ipod off.)

Kylie: Hey. I saw you over there where Ace and them are.

Steve: Okay.

Kylie: Can we talk?

Steve: Sure.

Kylie: I don't like James and Alex.

Steve: oh phew.

kylie: You single?

Steve; i used to be with Lexi but i gave her to Ace.

Kylie: Oh okay. phew.

Steve: Yeah.

Kylie: I was wondering if you waren't doing anything.

Steve: No. You wanna go on a date?

Kylie: Yes Please!

Steve: okay what time?

Kylie: 8 tonight.

Steve: Alright, its a date.

Kylie: Cool.

Steve: We will go eat alone and go for a walk.

Kylie: Awesome, man! It'll be fun.

Steve: Okay.

Kylie; i am going to talk to my sister.

Steve; Okay. See ya. (puts ipod on.)

End Of Chapter 9.

Wow LOOOOOOOOOOOOONG Chapter. 


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Chapter 10: Suspicions.

( By the time it got dark outside, the loonatics are inside, just exploring.)

Kylie: I don't know if i told you guys but i have a date with Steve.

Lexi: congratulations, kylie! Good job i told you he was nice.

Kylie: Yeah. he's way better than James and Alex.

Ace: That's good kylie. Steve should be the one for you.

Kylie: i cannot tell my father about this.

Tech: How come?

Kylie: My dad is forcing me to marry either James or Alex but nobody else.

Lexi: Oh. That's gotta suck.

Rev: I-know-but-Steve-can-be-the-one.

Kylie: Let's hope.

Katie: What's all the commotion about?

Kylie: katie, i have a date with Steve.

Katie: Congratulations. What time?

Kylie: He is going to come get me at 8.

Duck: That's in 15 minutes. What are you guys doing?

Kylie: Eat somewhere privatly and take a walk.

Katie: that's awesome. You two are gonna be a great coulpe in the future.

-meanwhile-

????: Alright, we just need to collect the three ingredients to make a portal, that's the problem,no worry if we can't find the three ingredients i will send a computeractive missile to destroy all living creatures on there and the planet will be mine! ( Evil laugh.)

????2: We found the first item sir.

????: Well done. We will plan the first attack as soon as we are done.

-Meanwhile-
( Steve walks alone in the halls as he is on his way to get Kylie. He sees Alex pass by him as he stares into Steve's eyes like he's suspicious or something.)

Alex: Hey Steve.

Steve: Hey Alex, right?

Alex: Yup. Im so excited to marry Kylie someday.

Steve: oh yeah that should be fun.

Alex: Where are you headed?

Steve: To see my friends, i just needed some fresh air.

Alex: Oh im.....uh taking a breather as well, see ya.

Steve: Bye. ( Thinking.) Hmmm.
( Steve watches Alex as he runs and hides. Steve decides to follow him.)

Alex: Yes. Yes everything is according to plan. Wait i hear something.

Steve: ( Whispering.) Oh shoot! ( Steve flies up in the air.)

????: What was that?

Alex: i don't know but the coast is clear.

????: Listen, i want you to find the chest tomorrow night okay? And you can have Kylie.

Alex: okay, boss.

Steve: Oh no, i got to tell the others.( Steve flies to the others.)

Ace: There he is!

Tech: Hey Steve!

Steve: Guys, you won't believe what i just heard.

Rev: What?

Steve: Its a trick.

Lexi: What is?

Steve: Alex and James might be working against us.

Duck: i don't believe you your a liar.

Ace: no, Steve is right, Duck. I saw James but something under his bed on the way to the little rabbits room.

Lexi: So Steve what or who are they after?

Steve: Kylie. Speaking of kylie where did she go?

Lexi; Looking for you.

Steve: Oh shoot our date! ( Steve ran until he saw Kylie sitting on the fountain.)

Steve: Ready?

Kylie: oh Steve you're here. Of course.
( Steve and Kylie walked to get some supper and came back to the fountain.)

Steve: Good place to eat.

Kylie: Good place to hide too. This is the place i always go to, people don't know im here.

Steve: That's handy.

Kylie: Yeah. ( Steve and Kylie finished their dinner. Until Kylie was cold.)

Steve: Are you cold? Here. ( Steve raps Kylie with his hoodie.)

Kylie: Thanks.

Steve: You're welcome. Let's go for a walk.
( Kylie nodds. They both start to walk the halls.)

Kylie: My mom died in a car crash.

Steve: My gosh, im so sorry. ( Steve hugs her.) I had something worse than you. Both of my parents died when i was 6 in a plane crash and i got adopted by this witch named Misty Breeze and she treated me horribly.

Kylie: My gosh. That's horrible. Im really sorry about your parents.

Steve: Until the loonatics adopted me again so im fine.

Kylie: That's good. ( Kylie's face draws closer to Steve's as they kiss passionatley in the middle of the hallway. While kissing Kylie was crying cause she felt bad for Steve.)

( Steve and kylie let go their kiss.)

Steve: Wow. That was some kiss.

Kylie: oh yeah.

End Of Chapter 10.

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Chapter 11: The Space Battle.

( Steve and Kylie kiss the second time but for a really longer time. The kiss ended.)

Kylie: Wow. Steve i didn't know you were such a great kisser.

Steve: I didn't know either. ( Kylie laughs. They both snuggle and walk at the same time.)

( After their date Steve and Kylie had to split up. Steve went to a meeting with the other loonatics, and Kylie went to talk to her father.)

Kylie: Dad! Dad! I know who to marry!

Dad: Who sweetie? Is it James?

Kylie: Nope.

Dad: Is it Alex?

Kylie: Nope.

Dad: Then who is it?

Kylie: One of the loonatics, Steve.

Dad: The teal loonatic?

Kylie: Yeah.

Dad: Kylie, that is obsurd, you can't marry a superhero!

Kylie: But i like him Dad. Or in fact i love him very much!

Dad: Well, still you can't marry him you will ruin the tradition!!

Kylie: That is so not fair!!( Kylie leaves outside.)

Alex: Hey Kylie.

Kylie: What do you want?

Alex: I was just wondering who are you marrying?

Kylie: Steve. ( She leaves Alex alone.)

Alex: Steve? That fool? Fine. Its time for war. ( Contacting the boss.)
Your majesty sorry to disturb you but are you done? 

Prince Julian: Yup we will be there in 10.

Alex: And Kylie chose somebody else over me or James.

Julian: What? Who?

Alex: One of the loonatics, Steve.

Julian: Okay. You and James kidnapp either kylie or Steve.

Alex: okay.

Julian: But don't fail or you and James will be killed.

Alex: Understood.

Julian: Good boy.
( The scene changes to Steve and the other loonatics.)

Steve: Hey guys.

Ace: Hey Steve, how was your date?

Steve: it was fantastic, we kissed!

Lexi: Good for you buddy!

Steve: Thanks.

Tech: We are talking about who is behind this.

Steve: Okay.

Duck: But all the villains we menchened arn't connecting with what's going on.

Steve: Oh.

Ace: i know. Remember Blofeld?

Tech: Oh yeah!

Ace: He had a scorpion symbol and so did the ship that was chasing us.

Rev: but-that-could-only-mean-one-thing.

Ace: James and Alex are definatley against us.
( Just then Katie and Kylie eneter the room.)

Katie: We couldn't help overhearing but did you say that James and Alex are against us?

Ace: Yup. ( Steve and Kylie cuddle.)

Steve: What's wrong?

Kylie: My dad gave me a hard time.

Steve: Everything will be okay.

Katie: There is more info that you would want inthe future as well.

Duck: What about?

Katie: The legends of this planet.

Ace; Who?

Katie: The legends were a bunch of gang members plus they had a different type of powers and they were all elements. Air, Water,Fire,Earth and also a fifth elemental too but i forgot what its called.
( As soon as she was about to continue there was a noice.)

Ace: What was that?
( The lights turn off.)

Duck: Who turned off the lights!
( The lights came on.)

Kylie: Uh guys where did Steve go?

Ace: Oh no! Steve!!

Tech: No!!

-Meanwhile-

Steve: Okay this is the second time i am kidnapped now i feel like a person in distress. Alex? I should have known you two are behind this.

Alex: Ah Steve you found out good. I was about to tell you anyway but that works better. My boss will be with you in a moment. You have something im after Steve.

Steve: What?

Alex: You mean who.

Steve: You are after Kylie?

Alex: Ah yeah! There you go you figured it out!

Steve: uh she doesn't want to marry you apparently.

Alex: Nope she doesn't like me. I was the one who turned off the lights in the room and kidnapped you instead of Kylie.

Steve: Why?

Alex: Well. Since im not gonna let you decide on who to save. I decided to kidnapp you and make it better so she can choose and try to save you.

Steve: You little creep!!!

James: Shut up!

Steve: No i won't!!!!( Stev tried to use his Telekenesis to attack Alex and James but it bounces off and backfires Steve.)

Steve: OWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!

Julian: Ah! You must be Steve!! I am prince Julian!!Who wants to take Dave's place.

Steve: Who's dave?

Julian: Kylie's dad. And you get to watch a battle between the scorpion team and you guys in this battleground right here, right now! Bring the rest of the gang out! ( The guards came back from kidnapping the loonatics as it shows everybody knocked out.)

Alex: Once they wake up you are gonna enjoy this!

Julian: The space battle will begin. ( The battlefield looked like they are battling on a astroid.)

( The loonatics wake up.)

Julian: Hello loonatics!

Ace: Where's Steve?

Julian: Here.

Steve: Help!!!

Kylie: Huh!

Alex: once Steve is out of the way Kylie, your mine!

Kylie: i don't think so.
( Julian shoots a beam at Tech's arm.)

Tech: OWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!! MY ARM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
( Tech's arm is bleeding like heck.)

Ace: Tech!!

Tech: im fine chief.

Julian: Let the battle begin!!!!!
( The soldiers charged at the loonatics.)

Julian: Now its a fair team.

Duck: You took Steve and you got Tech out? You are a bad man!! 

Julian: i attend to be!
( The 5 loonatics killed all of the soldiers.)

Lexi: Ace, what ever happens. ( Lexi kisses Ace passionatley.) I will never forget you.

Ace: Thanks Lex.

Steve: Oh Kylie thank goodness.

Kylie: There you go Steve.

Julian: You ruined my plans!! James you have failed!!

James: What?! ( A bullet went right through James and he dissappears.)

Julian: Addios! We will meet again!

Tech shot one of his gadgets and sended them far away.)

Julian: What?! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!

( The battle has ended and the loonatics and Kylie's family are at a meeting.)

Dave: So Kylie is this what you really want? To go with thm and be with Steve?

Kylie: Yes! Thank you daddy! ( hugs her dad.)

Dave: Take care of my daughter.

Steve: Yes sir! ( The loonatics leave back to their HQ. The enter the building to see Tech's mom standing in front of them.)

Tech: Mom?

Ace: Mrs, Coyote?

Tech's mom: Hi Tech. I got news.

Tech: What is it?

Tech's mom: You and Steve are actually brothers.

End Of Chapter 11.

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Eplilogue/Chapter 12:  A Final Shocking Moment.

Tech's mom: Thank goodness you're alright sons!

Tech: okay. Me and Steve cannot be brothers we are not even related.

Tech's mom: Don't be too sure.

Steve: but Mrs. Coyote. He's a coyote and i am a bat-thingy whatever our species are.

Tech's mom: But i have proof and i will tell you a story. ( She sits Steve and Tech down.) Steve, when your mom and my husband got together and you know. He had enjected sometype of thing that created you. When Tech was only two.

Tech: but i don't remember him being born.

Tech's mom: Well its because you weren't there, Tech.

Steve: Wow, me and Tech brothers.

Tech: i know, that's weird.

Ace: Oh brother!!

Duck: You two are brothers?!
( Steve and Tech stared at Duck with mad expressions.)

Kylie: Wow. That is cool.

Steve: Yeah. You know what else is cool? ( Steve kisses Kylie on the lips passionaltey.)

Ace: I'll join you. ( Ace kisses Lexi on the lips passionatley.)

Duck: Oh come on lovebirds! Aw man!! I wish i had one!!

Tech: Pretty sight though.

Duck: Yeah.

Tech: Bye mom thanks.

Tech's mom: bye boys.
( She leaves the h.Q.)

( Lexi taps Ace on the shoulder. Lexi turns around to see Ace zoomed on her with his lips attached with hers.)

Lexi: Wow Ace!

Ace: You liked it didn't you?

Lexi: Oh yeah.

( Steve broke the kiss.)

kylie: I was enjoying that.

Steve: oh i made something for you. ( Steve shows a necklace that says" I Love You" on it.)

Kylie: OMG!! Thanks!!

Steve: i wuv you Kylie.

Kylie: Awwwwww!!!!!!!!

ACe: Ah! Happy endings.

Duck; Yeah.

End Of Epilogue/Chapter 12.

Hope you guys liked it.

-- Edited by steve123 at 19:16, 2008-08-19

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