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steve123 · Frelengian

Girls?

Rye · Angela is always right!

Hehe. Opposite sex, h'm? That could certainly prove interesting. xD

steve123 · Frelengian

Yup. The loonatics find a jelly-type sample that turns them into the opposite sex. I don't know, im still wrriting it first.

steve123 · Frelengian

Here is the prologue.

prologue

Zadavia: Farewell, loonatics, it has been a nice visit. I'm afraid this is the last time im going to see you, farewell.

Ace: See ya, Zadavia. ( Zadavia and Optimatus left the loonatics HQ on planet Blanc.)

Optimatus: Are you sure about leaving them?

Zadavia: I don't know. Im gonna miss them.

Optimatus: Im sorry sister but we have to do this.

Zadavia: And Steve?

Optimatus: You treated him like a part of the family, he'll be fine too.

Zadavia: I hope so. ( The scene switches to the loonatics.)

Steve: Looks like we are never gonna see her again.

Tech: What are you talking about?

Steve: I overheard them talking while i came out of the restroom. They said that they are never coming back.

Ace: Okay. Let's go visit Tweetums for a bit. ( The loonatics go visit Tweetums.)

Tweetums: Thanks for the company.

-meanwhile-

????1:Okay, there not looking, do it!

????2: Roger. ( The mystery people disable the loonatics communication on their ship.) ( Laughter.)

End Of Prologue.

Rye · Angela is always right!

Why's Zadavia leaving? D:

steve123 · Frelengian

Well...the end of my other fan fiction will tell you, Rye.( The minute its gone.)

kari bunny · Out of This World

great start steve

steve123 · Frelengian

Thanks Kari.

Chapter 1: The Communications.

Ace: come on, team, lets hit the sack.

Steve; Huh? ( Steve pauses as he heard a noice.)

Tech; Coming Steve?

Steve; Oh..yeah.

????1: phew! That was close that one loonatic almost saw us.

????: i agree.
( The next morning the loonatics got up right away and go to Tweetums cause there was a emergancy.)

Ace: What's the emergancy, tweetums?

Tweetums: Well, one of my guardsspotted two guys outside of planet Blanc.

Duck: And?

Tweetums:Oh and i am glad you asked mr. Duck. And they must have done something wrong with your ship.

lexi: That's odd no one has ever touched our ship.

Tweetums:Apparently these people do.

Ace; Ah. i get ya. Lets jet!

Tweetums: You might run into those guys again.
( the loonatics are out side.)

Tech: Hmm, there seems to be nothing wrong with the ship. oh Wait!
Our communications are damaged.

Duck; With no communications we can't talk to the canary bird.

Ace: I can't believe what im goning to say but Duck's actully right.

end of Chapter 1.

-- Edited by steve123 at 21:11, 2008-04-23

Rye · Angela is always right!

steve123 wrote:

Well...the end of my other fan fiction will tell you, Rye.( The minute its gone.)

Ah, my bad. -hasn't been keeping up with fan fiction lately- X3

steve123 · Frelengian

Ah. its okay Rye.

Chapter 2: The Chase.

( Steve flips out his Ipod and starts listening to it.)

Steve:( Singing.) give a time in my life, i had to be free from all of the lives that used to be me and the only way out is the only way in and its you.

Ace: Steve.( Arms crossed.)

Steve: Aw man.( Turns off his music and puts his Ipod away.) That was Cliff Richard. it was a good song.

Ace: Nice song. But still no Ipod during on an investigation, okay?

Steve: okay.

Duck: Steve and his beloved Ipod.

Steve; Shh. Duck.

Tech: Anyways i think we should probably......

Steve: There they are! ( Everybody runs into the ship and they start to chase them.)

Ace: Steve! Can you blast them?

Steve; I'll try! ( Steve goes through the hatch and jumps on a floating board that Tech is floating.)

Steve; Thanks Tech i'll take it from here. ( Tech gives him a thumbs up.)

Tech: No Problem.
( Steve's telekenesis started to affect the ship.)

????1: Whoa! Hang On!! They got us!!

Ace: Duck join Steve!

Duck: Roger. Steve!( Waves.)

Steve: What?!

Duck: Im gonna teleport both of us on the enemy ship!

Steve: okay! ( Duck hangs onto Steve and they both quack onto the enemy ship.)

Duck: Suprise!

????1: Oh No!!! They've got on!!! Get them!! ( The two assassins charge at Steve and Duck. Steve's opponent was pretty easy for him. Steve pushed him out th window using his Telekenesis. Duck's opponent was a little tricky.)

????2: Come here, Duck!!

Duck:No. How about you come here!!( Duck kicks him in the stomache and Steve pushes him out the hatch.)

Steve: Nice!

Duck: Thanks.

Steve: No problem.

????1: you will never win!!

Steve: oh yes we will.

????1: But how its just the two of you. ( Steve opens the big door and the other loonatics join them.)

Steve: You were saying?

End Of Chapter 2.

steve123 · Frelengian

Chapter 3: Out of controll.

????1: but....but....I thought there was only 4 of you loonatics.

Ace: Too bad, i guess that there is 7 of us.

????1: Love to stay and chat but i got to leave!( laugh.) ( He dissappears out of nowhere.)

Ace: Why would he do that?

Steve: Yeah, why would he battle us and then kill himself.

Tech: Can i interupted? That were out of controll because there is no driver!

Ace: Tech. Stop thing! ( Tech runs to the controlls and starts fidgeting with the controlls.)

Tech: Steve, i need your help!

Steve: Sure thing! What do you need?

Tech: hold the engines upward!

Steve: What?

Tech: Just do it! ( Steve thought and he touched the wall and the whole thing just went off.)

( Tech found the landing gear button and pushed it.)

Tech: Now Steve, let go! ( Steve let go and he found 6 parachutes.)

Steve; hurry jump! ( Steve and Tech jumped, then Ace, Duck, Slam, Rev and Lexi followed. The ship blew up.)

Duck: Where's our ship?

Ace: Its still on automatic pilot.

Rev: There-it-is! ( The ship landed gently.)

End Of Chapter 3.

steve123 · Frelengian

This is gonna be a very short chapter.

Chapter 4: The Clue.

Steve: hey, i wonder who those guys were?

Ace: No clue.

Steve: Wait a minute clue. There are clues to this mission.

Lexi: What clues?

Steve: The clues that the mystery people left. I mean look.
Here is a clue!

Duck: black jelly?

Tech: Nope. It looks like some type of chemical.

Steve: No. Its probably part of a experiment or it could be a chemical, you're right.

Tech: I know.

Ace: Let's take it to the lab.

Steve: Or should i say '' Tech's room''.

( In Tech's room, Steve, Duck, Tech and Ace take a look at the specimon.)

Steve: It looks dangerous.

Tech: yeah.

Ace: Whoa! look out! ( The chemical jumped on Ace.)
Ugh! get it off, me!

Duck: hold on, Ace! ( Duck fires a energy egg and it flew off Ace.)

Ace: Ow. It bit me!

Steve: you okay?

Ace: I think i need to rest. ( The three other loonatics stare at Ace as he left.)

End Of Chapter 4.

steve123 · Frelengian

Chapter 5: Ace's problem.

Lexi: Hey guys, where's Ace?

Tech: He's just......

Steve: Resting. ( Trying to capture the chemical thingy.) Head's up!

Lexi: Whoa, it moves! ( Steve helds it in a position where it cannot move. Steve put it in a container.)

Duck: Lexi. That thing attacked Ace and made him sick.

Lexi: OMG! Really?

Tech: yup.

-Meanwhile in Ace's room-

Ace: Okay. My stomache feels weird. My chest fells kinda weird too. ( Ace hears a knock.) Come in. ( The door opens and its Steve.) hey Steve.

Steve: Hey. Are you sure your okay?

Ace: positive.

Steve: honestly? You know you can tell me anything.

Ace: Okay. my chest hurts.

Steve: Let's see it. ( Steve takes a look at Ace's chest.) Hmm. Your chest is very, very red, like fire.

Ace: That's unusuall.

Steve: i know.

Ace: Excuse me, Steve? But i have to go to the bathroom.

Steve: Sure.
( Ace goes into the bathroom and when he took of his pants, he screamed.)

Ace: Ahhhh!

Steve: What's wrong?

Ace: My um.....is gone.

Steve: but how?

Tech: What's going on here?

Steve: look! ( pointing at Ace.)

Tech: omg. Where is your you know what?

Ace: i don't know.

Steve: Where's lex? Lex!?

Lexi: Yeah. OMG!!

Steve: you know what happened to his...you know?

Lexi:Well, let's take a look, Yup. Just as i thought.

Steve: What?

Lexi: He's got a woman's you know instead of his you know whats.

Ace: Okay. unless this is a dream.

Duck: Uh Ace? in case you haven't noticed we are all standing in front of you.

Ace: Just shh. Duck.

Duck; im just saying.

Ace: How would you feel if your you know whats were gone, huh?

Duck; Oh. I would feel the same.

Steve: ACe, maybe you should listen to music to get your mind off it ad go to sleep.)

Ace: Good idea.

End Of Chapter 5.

steve123 · Frelengian

Chapter 6: He's a girl.

( The next morning Ace woke up and went into the kitchen/family room.)

Ace: Good morning.

Steve: OMG!

Ace: What?

Steve: Your......your....shorter than me!

Ace: Your right.

Steve: That's not all. You look pretty too.

Ace: What are you talking about?

Steve: And your chest.

Ace: What about it?

Steve: Uh. You have changed.

Ace: I have to see this for myself. ( Ace walks to a mirror.) Omg! Its me! I'm hot!

Duck: Nice.

Ace: hey watch where your lookin.

Lexi: What happened? Huh! Omg! Ace, your a female!

Steve: Lexi go find him a change of clothes.

Ace: Aw, man! I don't wanna be a girl!

Lexi: Sorry, Ace.

Ace: Well here we go. ( Lexi put Ace in her room and started to change him.)

Steve: We should stay away from that thing for a while.
( Lexi walked into the room.)

Steve: Where's Ace?

Lexi: Right here.
( Steve, Duck, Tech, Rev and Slam's jaws dropped.)
( Ace is wearing a yellow tank top and jeans.)

Duck: Ha! Omg! You are....pretty.

Steve: I agree.

Ace: i guess i got to get used to this body until we find a cure.

End Of Chapter 6.

Siamese712 · I blamed it on the dog...

XD

Love it!

steve123 · Frelengian

Thank you.

Chapter 7: The second victum.

( It has been a week and a half and still no cure.)

Rev: Oh-Ace-we-tried. ( The doorbell rings.)
( goes to answer it.) Rip? Hi-welcome!

Rip: Thanks? Whoa! What happened to Ace?

Ace: Im a female now.

Rip: How. You look so......hot!

Ace: Aw. Thanks.

Rip: He is starting to act like one too.

Ace: i have to, unless there is a cure.

Rip: I see. ( While they are talking, the sample/ black jelly has escaped.)

Steve: Hey Rip.

Rip: Hey, Steve!

Steve: Suprised of what happened?

Rip: Yup.

Tech: Guys the sample escaped!!!

Rev: That's-not-good.

Lexi: It must be loose somewhere in the HQ.

Tech: I just did some research that if it touches something soft or fabric, it will spread!

Ace: That's never good.

Tech: Keep your eyes open.

Slam:( mumbling.) Found it! It is in Steve's room!

Steve: Aw no! Im next!

Rev: We-will-catch-it-don't-worry.

Rip: Let's hope so. Because its not used to me yet.

Tech: Rip's right.

Steve: I'll be back. ( Steve goes into his room and grabs his extra pillow which was on the floor.) it must have spreaded in my room. So im going to sleep here.

Tech: I'll do the same.

Ace: And when you become a girl? You will have feelings for guys instead.)

Duck: Thanks for the info, Acena.

Ace: your welcome? ( Ace has a illusion of Steve having his shirt off.)

Steve: Are you okay?

Ace:Im F-fine.

Tech: Ace is probably going through some-type of illusions to picture guys with shirts off.

Rip: What did this to him, anyway?

Lexi: The thing that we are talking about the ''sample''.

Rip: Okay.

( Hours later it was bedtime and the scene changes to Steve and Tech getting ready for bed.)

Tech: Night Steve.

Steve: Night Steve. ( It is twleve-twenty-two and Tech tries to go to the bathroom but Steve is laying on top of him.)

Tech: Steve? Steve?

Steve: Hmm?

Tech: Why are you laying on me?

Steve: I don't know.

Tech: OMG!

Steve: What? What are you screaming at?

Tech: Three words Youre-a-girl.

Steve: What? Let me see. ( Steve runs to a mirror.) You're right, i look....pretty.

Tech: Not so loud.

Steve: Sorry. But, i got woman's you-know! ( Not very loud.)

Tech: da.

Steve: I.....I....youre so handsome.

Tech: Ehhh! That's we.... You are so pretty in men's room. But let's put you in woman's. Lex!

Lexi: What? tech its late.

Tech: I know, but its important. Look at Steve. ( Steve stood in front of Lexi.)

Lexi: OMG!! Steve!! come here.

Tech: Im going to bed.

Lexi: okay. (Lexi put Steve in a teal and white tank top on and jeans.)

( The next morning verybody wakes up in shock.)

Rip: Guys, i crashed on the couch! OMG!! Steve!!

Tech; Steve, you are incredibly beauttiful!

Steve: Aw! thanks. ( Gives Tech a hug.) ( Tech blushes.)

Ace; Whoa! Steve, got the new look now. Let's call you Stephanie.

Steve: i'll be back! ( Steve closes the door and looks at himself.) hey i look really pretty as a girl! ( 5 minutes Steve comes out.)

Lexi: what's wrong, Tech?

Tech: I love Steve. ( Lexi's face becomes a shocking type face.) Don't tell anybody else.)

Lexi: ooh i wont.

End Of Chapter 7.

steve123 · Frelengian

Chapter 8: The Third Victum.

( Tech is in his room until he hears somebody.)

Steve: You okay?

Tech: No. I...I...just....

Steve: Tech. How did you feel when i was on top of you, i mean honestly?

Tech: Uh. Well, f-f-for one thing, when you were a guy, i would have been a lot grossed out. But when you are a girl, which you are right now.....and.....and...

Steve: uh huh? And?

Tech: I.....uh......I......felt.....kinda confortable when you were on top of me.

Steve: You liked it?

Tech: Uh. Yeah.

Steve: That's so......

Tech: So?

Steve: So...sweet, Tech. how long do you figure i would be a girl for?

Tech: Well, i don't know. But you and Ace are both gonna be girls for at least 9 months and the most 1 year and 9 months.

Steve: Oh okay.

Tech: You will be used to being a girl by then. And when you turnback we will still have to teach you both to be guys again.

Steve: I'll be right back.

Tech: How come?

Steve: you'll see. i got an idea.

Tech: What?

Steve: I should put the cameras i bought in every room so we can keep an eye on the next victum.

Tech: That's a smart plan. You should do that.
( Steve left the door until Ace or Acena came into the door.)

Ace: i think you are too late for that.

Tech: What are you talking about?

Ace: Tech, Steve. I think i gt something you should see.
( Steve and Tech follow Ace to the room.)

Ace: This is gonna be a bit of a shock. Rip are you there?

Steve: Rip?

Rip: Guys is that you?

Tech: yes Rip its me and Steve.

Rip: I....uh...just got turned into a female.

Steve: Oh no! Let's see. ( Rip comes out of the shadows and his appearance is Long, purpley stripped hair style.)

Tech: Oh my goodness! have you checked yourself in the mirror lately?

Rip: No? But i'll check. ( Rip checks the mirror.) Hey, hang on i look good!

Tech: ya.

Steve: you do seriously.

Rip: Thanks Tech and ''Steve''.

End Of chapter 8.

What do you think is gonna happen Rye?

steve123 · Frelengian

Well find out after this chapter.

Chapter 9: The Fourth Victum.

Tech; Anways, steve lets put the cameras all over the HQ.

Steve: okay. ( Steve and Tech went to hook up cameras. While Ace and Rip are still in the room.)

Ace; So, Rip, how does it feel being a female?

Rip: Weird, i feel shorter and a pair of melons are on my chest.

Ace: Me and Steve know how you feel.

Rip: Yeah. how long does being a female last?

Ace: Ask Tech he'll know. But to my guess probably a year or two.

Rip: I don't want to be a female for.....wait a minute if i get used to it. I don't have to worry!

Ace: yeah, and by tomorrow we are gonna have teenage girl voices too.

Rip: That's gonna be scary.

( The scene changes to again Tech and Steve.)

Tech: Steve? Can you pass me the screwdriver 3000 please?

Steve: Sure thing. ( Steve kept looking at Tech and then giggling.)

Tech: What's so funny?

Steve: im not laughing.

Tech: It sounds like you are.

Steve: Anyways lets comtinue putting these together. i'll be back.
( Tech looks at Steve as ''he'' walks away.)

Tech: ''He's pretty''.( Talking to himself.)

( Steve came back half and hour later.)

Steve: All done Tech.

Tech: Good job Steve.

Steve: Thanks. You're doing a good job too.

Tech: Thanks, Steve. Now we can keep an eye out for whoever the next victum is.

Steve: Well, the next target could be anybody. Lexi? Duck? Rev? or even you?

Rip; Guys another victum! ( They both ran and skidded across the floor into the room where the victum is.)

Tech: Who is it?

Rip: I don't know i can't see.

Steve: there's someone Slam! No answer. Lexi! no answer again.
Duck! Still no answer. Than it must be Rev. Rev!!

Rev: What?!

Tech: You okay?

Rev: im-fine!

Steve: come on out!
( Rev came out of the and the others are shocked.)

Rev: Im-a-female-too.

Steve: Rip? Rev? You two need to change into woman's clothing. Lexi?!

Lexi: yeah!

Steve: get these two changed.

Lexi: Okay come on guys.
( The others apart from the room and waited.)

Lexi: here they are! ( Rev comes out with a red top with quarter-length jeans. And Rip came out with a blue shirt and jeans.)

Ace: Lex? Do you have any clothes for Slam? Tech? or Duck?

Lexi: For Duck and Tech. but not for Slam im afraid.

Steve: Lucky Slam. He's smart. he's wearing a protective suit.

Slam: yeah!

Ace: too bad there was only one left too.

Steve: I know.

End Of Chapter 9.

steve123 · Frelengian

Never mind after this chapter for sure! make sure you answer. Anybody can answer.
Chapter 10: The Fifth Victum.

( The loonatics waited patiently for the next victum.)

Tech: Anything Steve?

Steve: nothing Tech.

Tech: uh, Steve? While im here, why won't i tell you something.

Steve: okay. Sure. you know you can tell me anything? Im your friend not your enemy.

Tech: Okay. Uh, i know this may sound kinda weird but uh.....I....I think that honestly you look hot as a girl.

Steve: Thanks Tech.

Tech: No, really you are very pretty honestly.

Steve: Thanks again.

Tech: But i also wanna say that.........I....I....I love you.

Steve; Aw Tech. That's sweet but im a guy who just got turned into a girl. I will be turning back maybe in the next week or month, never know. Sorry Tech...However, if there is no cure and if i am stuck as a female for the rest of my life? Then i would have to sa i love you too. But if i am a guy again then we still have to stay as best friends and then we will find girlfreinds of our own, how does that sound?

Tech: That's sounds good.

Steve: Oh! The next victum!

Tech: Who is it?!

Steve: it looks like Duck! Come on!

Duck: Help! Im!---( Steve and Tech watched as Duck turned into a female. Duck's chest popped to be two you knows. His hair got longer and longer and turned red. And his uniform fell off and his body looks like a hot and attractive twenty-year-old's body.)

Tech: Whoa!

Steve: That was some change.

Duck: Aw man! Im a female! But im pretty right?
( Steve and Tech looked at eachother in a weird look.)

Lexi: What's the matter? I saw the hole transformation through the monitor and i brought clothes.
( Duck putted on an orange top and jeans.)

Ace: oh great now its between tech and Lexi.

End Of chapter 10.

Well? Any ideas what might happen?

steve123 · Frelengian

Actually anytime you can take a whip and tell what will happen next.

Chapter 11: The confusing Letter.

Steve: Oh look guys a letter. ( Steve reads.)
''The sample you probably know has escaped but you should get a machine that can switch genders.''

Lexi: Nobody?

Steve: Yeah.

Tech: this is very weird.

Lexi: Arg!!! Something's happening to me! I.....I........( Lexi stood up amd her clothes have ripped appart.)

Rip: Lexi, your......

Ace: A male.

Lexi: How do i look?

Rev: Hot! I-mean-nice.
( Lexi goes to the mirror.)

Lexi: Hey i look good.

Duck: i wonder what that freaky letter was all about?

Slam: Good question.

Duck: Slam you and your protective suit.

Slam: What?

Ace: Alright team, i guess its just.....Tech left now. Hey Steve is there anything else that letter says?

Steve: Let me check. ( Steve reads.) Bla, bla,bla. A-ha! It says.'' That you can switch the machine on and it will knock you out for several hours'' and that's it!

Tech: I wonder when the machine comes?

Ace: What does it all mean?

Steve: Im guessing that we get changed back and can't get enfected again.

Lexi: Okay! Cool! Dude! I mean Yes!

Duck: It went from a freaky to confusing letter.

End Of Chapter 11.

Strange. What is with this go to a mirror thing they got going on, eh?

steve123 · Frelengian

Chapter 12: The Switch

( The loonatics go and head outside to see if this machine is at their door.)

Lexi: Alright dudes! I mean yay! I think its here!

Ace: Thank goodness. Let's bring it in.
( The other loonatics bring the machine inside the HQ.)

Tech: Wow! Amazing this machine is perfectly build!

Duck: Hey guys, Tech became obsessed with this machine!

Tech: Well, at least i don't have know-whats on my chest.

Duck: You're lucky you're not a female.

Tech: mmmhmm.

Steve: Oh you guys.

Tech and Duck: What?

Steve: You two sound like you're in love.

Duck: Now, hust wait a minute.

Steve: What? Its true.

Duck: ( Whispering.) You think tech's hot too?

Steve: Sort of.

Duck; Sort of?

Steve: I mean alot.

Duck: He's all yours. Because there is no way that i am gonna date him because......uh?

Steve: Because the machine can also say that how long were gonna be females besides switching.

Duck: A-ha! I see now.
( Tech turns on the machine.)

Ace: Alright lets see if this works. ( Ace sets the machine.)

Lexi: alright, who's first?

Duck: i'll go. Im afraid of no machine.
( Duck walks in and the machine shocks Duck.)

Ace: Duck! Wake up! ( Ace shakes Duck over a million times.)

Duck: huh?

Tech: It worked!

Steve: You're normal Duck! Whoohoo!

Duck: im normal?

Steve: Yes!

Duck: yay!

Ace: Next.

Rip: Me! Me!

Ace: Go ahead, Rip.

Rev: Are-you-sure?

Rip: Postitvly.

Rev: Okay. ( Rip hops into the machine.)

Ace: Lets hope it works for him.

Duck: guys? I may need clothes.

Lexi: Got get some dude im not your dad.

Duck: Whatever. ( Rip get zapped and is now a guy again.)

Rip: Im back!

Ace: We got some bad news though. Its out of power.

Duck: Oh well.

Steve: Uh Duck. Not ''Oh well''. Like for good, type out of power.

Rev: You-mean? We-can't-chnge-back?

Tech: Exacly.

Steve: Shoot! You know what?

ACe: What?

Steve: Let's get whoever' s behind this.

Ace: You know what? i agree.

End Of Chapter 12.

steve123 · Frelengian

Short Chapter alert!

Chapter 13: Being Prepared.

( The loonatics are getting ready for their trip to take down whoever made them different.)

Ace: Ready?

Steve: Oh, yeah.

Rev: All-ready.

Tech: Check.

Duck: double Check.

Rip: Triple check.

Slam: Check a mondo.

Lexi: Ready!

Ace: good the plan is 4 stay and 4 go. Slam, Rip, Duck and Lexi you stay. And the rest come with me which is Rev, Tech, Steve and I.

Steve: roger. ( Looks at Tech.) ( Steve looks away.)

Tech: ( looks at Steve.) But wait, were trapped!

Duck: oh great!

Ace: how are we gonna get out?

Evil voice: HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! Hello Loonatics! Im so sorry that i never sayed anything but i want it to be a suprise!

ACe: Who are you?

????: People call me the ''masked villain''. And i see you met a few of my associates before.

ACe: They belonged to you?

????: Why yes and now you will be trapped in your own HQ. By the way Steve you look hot! ( Evil laugh.)

End Of Chapter 13.

steve123 · Frelengian

Chapter 14: Trapped!!

Ace: You're never gonna get away with this you creep!

Masked villain: i believe i just did! ( He leaves with a evil laugh.)

Steve: There is gotta be a way to get out of here!

Rev: yeah,- i-know-were-trapped-in-our-own-headquarters.

Tech: i know. Wait at least we didn't put cameras in this room.

Steve: yeah. That's a relief.

Lexi: Wait, i forgot we have a exit that leaves into Steve's room.

Steve: Oh yeah. but let's hope that there isn't anything guarded in there.
( The loonatics go through the secret tunnel and they all enter Steve's room as fast as they could. Steve makes sure there is nothing guarded.) Alright the coast is clear. ( He tells the others.) ( They jump down from the ceiling and land on the floor.)

Ace: Alright, here we go team. Let's find out how tough this guy really is.

lexi; Good idea.

Duck: When i was a girl, i never knew my hair was red.

Steve: uh huh.

Duck: Don't ''uh huh'' me.

Tech; And two second comedy by Duck.

Duck: ha ha ha( Sarcastic.) Techie thinks he's funny.

Tech: mmhmm.

Ace: Okay is everybody here? Good. We don't want people left behind or we would be in a lot of trouble.

Steve: This reminds me of the beand on the run album.

Duck: who's it by? paul Mccartney and wings?

Steve; That's exacly who its by! How did you know?

Duck; I looked at the album in your room.

Steve; oh i was about to say. Whoa! finally Duck knows some of my music.

Ace: Sorry, may i interupted? We are sort of catching a villain. Surely you see that now?

Steve: Sorry Ace.

Ace: its alright but don't do it again.

Steve: Roger.

Duck: yup. Roger.

Ace: You two Duck. Shhh.

Lexi; ( Whispering.) There he is.

Masked villain: alright men. The HQ is ours! That objective is now done. Now with the loonatics out of the way. I can rule the universe with this crystal i have.

Ace: That's some crystal. ( Whispering.)

Tech: i wonder what it means.

Steve: i reconize it from somewhere. ( Whiapering.)

Masked villain: Now the next objective is to finally destroy planet Blanc and Acmetropolis! ( Evil laugh.)

End Of Chapter 14.

steve123 · Frelengian

Chapter 15: The Crystal.

masked villain: Like i said men. Acmetropolis and Planet Blanc will be destroyed.

Assassin: but what about the loonatics?

masked villain: They will be out of the way soon.

Masked person:.......sir i hear somebody.

masked villain: What? The loonatics? Get them!

Ace: Run!

Steve; i know a place to hide!

Tech: Where?

Steve: Follow me! ( The loonatics follow Steve's lead as Steve leads them to Ace's room.)

ACe: My room? why my room?

Steve: You'll see!

masked person: Come back here loonatics! Come back and fight!

Ace: How aout no doc!

Masked person: And why not? ( Ace waves at them and he disappears along with the other loonatics.)

masked villain: Find out where they are! We don't want them to ruin my plans!
( The loonatics appered in teh simulator room.)

Ace: Wow, Steve i'd never knew that would woik.

Duck; I know, that workd great.

Tech; yeah. Steve you very smart with the teleportation device.

Steve: Thank you. Now we need to get teh crystal he has.

Lexi: how are we gonna do that?

Rev; Hey-what-if.

Steve; Oh no! im not gonna pretend to flirt with the soldiers.

Tech: Come on Steve, you are the prettiest one here.

Steve: Thanks Tech.

Ace: Come on, Steve. The soldiers like you the most and the whole galaxy is counting on us. ( Steve thought for a moment.)

Steve: Are the guys coming?

Rip; Yes, there are 5 men coming to find us.

Steve: in this room? ( Rip nodds.) i'll be right back. ( steve goes into a noticable spot.)

Masked person: You!

Steve: Hi. ( Steve starts flirting with them.)

Ace: Great, now we can sneak past them and fetch Steve and grab the crystal. ( Whispering.) ( The loonatics swift by the soldiers and Steve.)

Steve: So. Do you come here often? ( Before they could say anything Duck quacks n.)

Duck; Sorry dudes she's with me.

masked person: Awww!

Steve; ( girly voice.) Sorry boys i guess i lied. ( Steve and Duck vanish.)

ACe: ( on comlink.) Were in the room, with the crystal. Where are you?
( Before he continues. Steve and Duck appear in front of them.)

Duck: in front of you.

Steve: Were here.

Rev: Hey-Steve-said-that-he's-seen-the-crystal-before.

Steve: Well, i saw it when i first met you guys.

Tech: Do you know how it works?

Steve: Well, i heard it from a person on the street that said that it can teleport to an unknown place owned by a person named Erick Anderson.

Lexi: Who is Erick Anderson?

Steve: i don't know.

Rip: What else does it do?

Steve: Tells the future. You have to grab onto it to teleport and you have to kiss it to know your future.

Duck: kiss it?

Steve: yeah.

Masked villain: There you are! You tricked us!

Steve: i know. But i believe we are on our way. Touch it! ( all the loonatics touch the crystal.)

Masked Villain: No! Don't let them get away!

End Of Chapter 15.

steve123 · Frelengian

Second last chapter!

Chapter 16: The escape to Erick's building.

Steve: hurry! ( The loonatics started to fade.)

Masked villain: NOOOOO! They got away! But don't be alarmed because we know exacly where they are heading.
( The loonatics appear inside a building.)

Ace: Where are we?

Steve: Look! ( Pointing at the name of the building.)

Tech: Hey Steve you were right about teh name, Erick anderson.

Steve: Hey, yeah.

lexi: Let's hope this building has what were looking for.

Ace: Yeah. The machine that turns us normal. Because we can't turn around, not with the masked villain around at our HQ.

Rev: Yeah. What-if-he-has-a-machine-that-can-make-us-girls-forever.

Rip: He's got a good point.

Duck: Well, i don't have to worry because im normal.

Steve; yes but you're going to help us right?

Duck: uh.......

Steve: Right?

Duck: Yeah.

Steve: Good, you better.

Duck; Okay, okay. Definatley.

Ace: Good job.

Steve: Thank you. Now let's-Hey, look what it says on this holographic map.

Tech: What?

Steve: That there is a room with crystals in that room.

Rip: What does it say?

Steve: it says that we have to take the elevator to the third floor.

Ace: Third floor?

Steve: Yup.

Ace: Let's go because i am tired of wearing two know-whats on my chest.

Steve; Me too. ( The loonatics go up to the third floor and they are searching for the room with the crystals.)

Rip: Hey, there it is! ( The loonatics enter the room and look around and saw a giant screen with a shape of a crystal . But the question is, where's the crystal?)

Tech: Hey look an empty spot with a crystal shape thingy too. And obviusly the word ''thingy'' comes from Duck.

Duck; Ah! yes.

Ace; Got the crystal?

Steve; yup.

????: give me the crystal!

Steve: Who is it? Show yourself!

????: Its me the masked villain. A.K.A Erick Anderson.

End Of Chapter 16.

steve123 · Frelengian

Last Chapter!

Chapter 17: Normal Again.

Steve: Erick Anderson? You're Erick anderson.

Masked Villain: Yes. But i preffered to be called ''Masked Villain''.

Ace: uh huh. Nice place.

Masked Villain: Thanks. Hey, this is what would happen in the future if you stopped me but not changed back. ( The Masked villain grabs the Crystal from Rip and puts it in the slot and kisses the crystal.)
Behold! 6 days from now. Here is what will happen to you in the next 6 days.
( The screen lit up and showed Ace's dead body.)

Ace: I die?

Masked Villain: Yes. A certain person will kill you. But htere's more. ( The screen shows Lexi on the street.)

Lexi: I'm on the street?

Masked villain: Yeah. You couldn't help with Ace's death so you go homeless. ( The screen changes to Duck in a cage.)

Duck: Why am i in a cage?

Masked Villain: Your fame slowly drifted away. ( Then the screen shows Slam working as a slave.)

Slam: huh?

Masked Villain: Oh, Slam. You will turn out to be my slve in jail. ( Slam gives him a mad face.)

( Then it shows Rev on the screen being forced to clean.)

Rev: What-is-going-on?

Masked Villain: Oh. By the way. You're also gonna be my massuse and you are doing it slowly.
( The next video shows Rip humiliated in fromt of his school by his hair.)

Rip: What?

Masked villain: Yes, i know what you're thinking. Let's just say you'll be the unlucky person in your whole school! Now this next one you will find interesting. ( It shows Tech and Steve on a date.)

Steve: huh?!

Tech: what?!

Masked: Yup. Once Ace died you asked Steve out to give you company until you two become couples.

Tech: Then we better not let all that happen!

masked Villain: Fine! Get rid of them! ( The soldiers got closer and closer.) ( Ace karate kicked the first guy and flung him across the room.)

Steve: The crystal!

Masked villain: Noooo! 9 They both dive for it. Steve got the crystal.)

Steve: Ah Ha!

Tech: Steve!

Steve: What? ( Steve turned around and saw Tech. Tech pulled Steve and kissed him.) What was that?

Tech: To say goodbye to Stephanie. And say hello to my best friend Steve.

Steve: Thanks Tech. Stephanie says goodbye. ( Steve puts the crystal in the slot.)

Tech: Come on Come on. ( As Tech crossed his fingers. Four light bolts struck Steve, Ace, Rev and Lexi.)

Masked Villain: NOOOOOOOOO! I didn't know this would happen! ( The four loonatics fainted and woke up again.)

Steve: im back! Im a guy! Whoo hoo!

Ace: So am i!

Rev; Me-too!

Lexi: And i am me again Yes!

Ace; As for you Mr. Anderson. Steve now!
( Steve made the crystal touch the masked Villain as he vanishes.)

Masked Villain: NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!

Steve: phew!

Ace: Where did you sent him?

Stve: Where Deuce and optimatus used to be.

Ace: Oh. ( Steve walks toward Tech.)

Tech: Hey good job!

Steve: Thanks for what you did to me back there.

Tech: You're welcome.

Duck; What happened!

Tech: Nothing.

Ace: We did it! I wonder how Mr. Ugly is doing.

Slam: Yeah.
( The scene changes to the masked Villain.)

Masked villain: i'll get you! Loonatics! I'll be back!!

????: Stop yelling.

The End. Wow weird ending. What did you think?