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Frelengian

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I need a villain in my story.
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Just throw in names for the villain i have decided to make him/her like a person in the arcade chapter in my story.

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Okay. But you're gonna have to give us some details of what they are like if their male or female, if they had powers what would they be and also their appearance. Then we could get ideas from there.



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Well if the character was a male then he would just be like a lord or something like the leader of the world. As for female, leader of the world and a person from Steve's past. The characters have to be like people when they play too much video games. The male's appearance is like the Ringmaster but different colours and take away the ugly shoulder parts he has. The Female's appearance is like the black velvet but not dark. The powers would be to turn on every switch by a command and mind controll.

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steve123 wrote:

Well if the character was a male then he would just be like a lord or something like the leader of the world. As for female, leader of the world and a person from Steve's past. The characters have to be like people when they play too much video games. The male's appearance is like the Ringmaster but different colours and take away the ugly shoulder parts he has. The Female's appearance is like the black velvet but not dark. The powers would be to turn on every switch by a command and mind controll.



From what description you gave me, 'the characters have to be like people when they play too much video games' meaning that they could either have a determination when they will not stop until they defeat someone like when people won't stop until they beat a game boss. Another meaning could be that they talk about nothing but the thing that they do too much. Like when other people talk about something, the person always refers to the thing they do too much (that would lead to boring people too much because of the constant mentioning of that obsession).

The powers you gave would most likely belong to a female villain (the mentioning of the appearance like Black Velvet could resemble her seductiveness. After all, Ace complimented her figure and beauty in the episode "The Cloak of Black Velvet").

A female name for the character could be Lisha Subpoena. (Lisha meaning 'full of mystery' and the word Subpoena meaning 'order' (hence the switch by command and mind control)). Or just Subpoena.  



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Yes. That's a good villainess. And yes it is like they are battling the boss until they beat the level. That's pretty much what i mean. Good job.

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never mind thanks anyway. But it would work for my future stories.

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Frelengian

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never mind thanks anyway. But it would work for my future stories.

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never mind thanks anyway. But it would work for my future stories.

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call her zira(the female villen)

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Frelengian

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ok. I will in one of my newer stories.

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Im using your villain, Kari. Don't worry Akira i'll put your villain in the finale.

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