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Which One! [4 vote(s)]

A Tale of Two Brothers!
75.0%
Talking Pie!
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Out of This World

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Im almost done my latest story.so a story vote!

*A Tale of Two Brothers*Heres a trailer.

*Trailer*


*Scene 1:Mother Holding Friz and Dauch in her arms*


"Oh my little angels", she wispers to them.The Father Ahadi looks at Dauch with discust and walks out of the room.


"Soon you will be princes my little ones", says Leila there mother smiling!


*Scene 2:Friend's*Zadavia, and Friz meet*


"My name's Zadavia", said Zadavia,smiling.

"I'm Friz", says Friz''You wouldn't happen to be princess Zadavia would you?"


*Zadavia nods and Blushes*"yes" said Zadavia!


*Scene 3*: Chosen*


"I've made my desision", said Ahadi to king Edward.Friz,Optimatis,Dauch and Zadavia look ahead.After the muder of leila Friz and Dauch's mother,the king
wanted one of Ahadis sons to wed his daughter.And become the next King!


"Friz", demanded Ahadi.Dauch growled and looked At friz.He walks angerly out!


"And I got the shallow end of the dream pool", said Dauch before leaving.


Scene 4:Evil*there late teens*


"Don't turn you back on me Dauch", said Friz


"Oh no Friz myebe you shouldn't turn you're back on me", said Dauch


"IS THAT A CHALLENGE", roared Friz


"Oh I would never dream of challenging you", growled Dauch and he walked out with optimatis.


scene Flashes to tital.


LOONATICS UNLEASHED: A TALE OF TWO BROTHERS.

*Talking pie*

Ducks turned into a pie.OMG.now what do the loonatics do and with
a new villen on the run things are gonna get messy!



-- Edited by kari bunny at 02:25, 2008-03-18

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please vote and or comment vote!


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okay the net story is A Tale Of two brothers!

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