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*stares* OMG ITS TECH IN SPEEDOS!!!

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OMG where and don't forget the dacers


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me:*whispers* im saying that to wake miss sleepy over there up
and im planning it on the acexi army

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me:*whispers* i'll join you *voice gets louder* Mawhahahah-*stops suddely seeing her twitch.*I'll be quit now and by the way Riley i found ur Avatar on msndollz.com

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i saw mine will i was looking up konata izumi in my search box

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kool hows Japan and when do we *whispers* attack with the acexi army

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oh its fine its almost morning here *whispers* until some people sign the sign up list

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*whispers*who else needs to sign

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*whispers*siamese and leiarules

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*whispers*ok*in a louder voice*Siamese when will you update the supsions is killing me and Riley i mite be able to write my chappie ou the LU musical tomorrow kk

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thank you! and the supisons is eating me ALIVE!! and it hurts *cries* siamese chan
am i a bad child *does watery eyes* have i done something to make god hates me?

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I'mma lay down here and wait for the next chapter... 'kay?

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me:*lays on ground* ANOTHER CHAPTER ANOTHER CHAPTER!!!!!

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yea another chappie

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this was such a beautiful chappie Siamese ^_^
At last LEXI!!! 8D
I wantz moar!!!! X3



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Um...Hi guys. Sorry for such a long dely school jest kinda started for me and well it's my first real year in highe school and I'm on stoodent counsel so I guess I haven't had a lot of wrighting time, and my computer got a virise, but I'm telling you this chapter is, i hope, worth it.

Next chapter...


 

Longest chapter EVER!


They all walked in silent as the headed back to the house. They thought it best to ask questions and swap stories in a less open aria then the forest. Ace kelped glancing at Lexi as she held, the now a sleep, Angel in her arms. Angels arms where wrapped around Lexi's neck, as she gazed softly and happily at her daughter. Ace was surprised at how Lexi looked the same and yet so different now then when she was still one of them. She looked the same for the most part, but he could see a new gentle look in her eyes. The only word for it was Motherhood, and yet she had sadness in her eyes.

 

They walked up to the house and filed in.

You all will probably wont to catch up. Come on Pop-pa. We'll stand guard. It's possible some one may have seen us.” Rat-a said as she and Pop-pa went back out of the building. Closing the door behind them.

 

Lexi smiled slightly at all of them, “Well I guess we mite as well site down. This mite take some time.” They fallowed Lexi into a room that was most likely the living room. A few toys and miscellaneous items laid around the room.

Pardon the mess. I guess I haven't done a lot of cleaning.” Lexi said as she cleared off a few chairs. She then sat down on a long wooden trunk that was propped up against a wall. Lexi set Angel down next to her. The sleeping child simply curled up to her mother, and rested her head on her lap. Lexi covered Angel up with a blue blanket.


The Loonatics all sat down where they could. There was silents. Non of them knew where to begin. Ace, who had decided not to sit and was leaning against the wall next to Lexi, sighed and was the one to start.


In a low voice, calm and almost hurt sounding, he asked, “We all thought you had died Lex. Why didn't you ever come back?


Lexi looked at him, “You don't honestly think I didn't try, do you?


Ace looked down. Lexi sighted, “I guess I should fill you guys in on what all happened to me.” She thought a moment. Thinking of where to begin, “The day I was taken from you guys, the day you guys thought I died, my accident I guess, was the day this all started. The land slide wasn't a accident. It was a trap.”


What?” Tech asked.

I'm guessing you guys know about the Kutons now. Well, they had been watching us. They knew back then that they'd have to fight in order to take control of Fruten, and when they saw us use are powers hey wanted at least one of us to help them fight. So a trap was set. The set small bombs in the hill in order to simulate a land slid.

When I fell, it was also part of the trap. At first glans in looked like I had tripped on a vine, but it was actually a dives that had wrapped around my ankle. At the last minuet it teleported me out of the way. Making it look like I had died, and making it that you guys wouldn't come looking for me. I blacked out at this point. When I woke up I found my self on a ship. The people there told me they had saved me from another ship. At first I believed them, but after a short time I discovered they had been the ones to take me from my home. I manged to escape, but I got lost in one of Frutens many forest.

I was week now. I had walked for who knows how long with little nourishment. I had also become sick. The days jest started blending together. I ended up collapsing in a small clearing..... Pop-pa found me, and cared me to the closets person who had knowledge of medicine. Rat-a. She nursed me back to life.


When I woke up the village I was in was attached by the Kutons. I fought them, and sent them away. Word of my abilities spreed all the way to the Queen. She asked me to become a protector of sorts. To help defend the kingdom. Now It wasn't long after I first woke up did I discover I was pregnant. I told that not only did I carry a child, but I was not from this planet. And that my main priority was to get off this planet and return home, but I would still lend what help I could.


If you haven't notice the technology on Fruten isn't all that great, so getting off this planet what harder then I thought. I gave birth to a daughter, and she became my first priority. I was a mother now, and I couldn't be wasting my time trying to get back to Acmetropalic. Despite how much I wonted to. As Angel got older, are queen took an interest in her and piked Angel to be the next queen.


The Kuton army became more ruthless. We knew it was only a mater of time till they came after the royal family, and that included Angel. In order to protect her I took her hear with Rat-a and Pop-pa. I learned of a resistance agent the Kutons they called them self the Rebel army, but they weren't what they seemed. They where a branch of the Kuton Army and told there leader where Angel and I where. And that's when they took her away from me. They said they had killed her. I didn't know what to do. They tormented me with lies of how they did it. Even now they still do it.”

The guys stared at Lexi. She had gone through so much the last few years. Right now they saw the pain it had given her. Her fur wasn't as vibrant as it use to be. A few small scars lined her arms. In her eyes you could tell her spirit had been recently broken.

Ace sat down next to her and looked her in the eyes, “Lexi, I'm sorry.

 

Ace wrapped his arms around her and held her close. He didn't know what he was apologizing for. He jest felt like it needed to be said. Lexi hugged him back, “Ace, I-”

Lexi!” They all jumped, Ace and Lexi parting and Angel waking up, as Pop-pa burst through the door. He was gasping for air, “Th-there coming!


What?” Lexi asked in a panic as she scooped Angel up in her arms and stood up.


I saw them. I think they mite have Rat-a.”


Quick you guys have to hide.” Lexi said turning towards Ace.


What? Lexi, what's goin' on?” Ace asked.


The Kutons. There coming.” Lexi handed Angel over to Ace, and pulled a rug to the side of the floor. At first the Loonatics didn't understand what she was doing. That is until she was able to pop up a floor board and open a trap door.


All of you get in. Get in and stay quiet.” Lexi ordered. They all started to go in.


Lexi whats-” Ace tried asking.


Theres no time to explain.” Lexi replied.


Mother?” Angel squeaked out. Confused and crying.


Angel,” Lexi gently placed her hands on Angels cheeks, “right now I need you to hide. Right now is not a time to fight. Okay?”


Okay, Mama.” Angel replied. Ace and Angel where pushed into the secret room with the others and Pop-pa. Lexi shut the door and placed back the carpet. The Loonatics where in darkness with what little light came from the small cracks of the floor boards.


Suddenly they heard the door burst open with a sudden force.


Whats goi-Ahh!” Was all they heard Lexi say before there was a sudden thud against the floor and a green glow.


Where is she!?” Came a booming voice.


Who?” They heard Lexi grunt and the sound of a kick.


Men! Search the house! And don't play dumb rabbit!” Came the voice again. Foot steps, crashes, and bangs where heard from around the house. Ace felt Anger flash through him at what he heard above him.


I...I don't know what your talking about!” Lexi wheezed. Winded by something.


Where is she!” The green glow was suddenly lifted from the floor.


Who!” there was a growl, and again there was a thud against the floor and the green light became brighter to the anthros beneath the floor. Angel recognized the green glow. It was a bracelet that could neutralize any of there powers. Scared, Angel clutched tighter to Ace who, in return, held the child closer.


That little brat of your was seen with 5 strangers! Now where are they!”


How could she be hear! Y-you...You took her away from me.”


SMACK!


Ahh!” Lexi's scream was loud and had every one of the Loonatics ready to burst out and attack.


Hum.... Maybe hitting you isn't the right strategy.” there was a snap of fingers.


Ohiy! You yellow belly horse rumps better let me go!” Rat-a's accent filled the air.


Now then rabbit. I'll ask once more, where are they.”


Lexi could now be heard crying, “Angel's gone, and I have no idea who els your talking about.


Another growl, “Do it!


The sound of electricity and Rat-a's screams was all that was heard as a flashing light was seen.


STOP IT! PLEAS! STOP! I DON'T KNOW! STOP!” Lexi screamed.


The light died and the screaming stopped.

 

Sir we found nothing.” Said a softer voice.


Your lucky this time rabbit! Men move out!” There was one last smack then silents, except some heavy breathing. Slam lifted up the trap door and they exited the secret room. They looked over to see Lexi holding a injured Rat-a on the floor.


Lexi?” Ace asked. Lexi turned her head towards them. Tears fell from her eyes and there was a large bruise on her cheek as it was also bleeding.


Help her. Pleas.” Lexi said weekly. They ran over to them. Tech and Rev starting to attend to Rat-a.


 


 



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“Lexi, your bleeding.” Ace said as he kneeld down beside her. Setting Angel in front of her. Lexi held Angel close. Angel curled up next to her mother, tears also coming from the younger bunny. Ace was handed a small medical pack from Rev and opened it up. He took out a cotton ball with some peroxide on it.


 

Gently Ace placed his hand under her chin so that he could get to her cheek better. He wiped the small ball across the scratch. After that he put a bandage on it.


 

“Dun.” Ace smiled.


 

Lexi slightly rubbed her cheek then looked over at Rat-a, “Will she be okay?”


 

Tech looked over at them,“I think so. She jest needs a good rest.”


 

“Lexi, why didn't you fight back? You know brain blast dem?” Ace asked.


Because I couldn't.” Lexi lifted her wrist to show the glowing band on her hand, “This band neutralizes my powers as long as I'm wearing it.


 

Ace pulled in off her wrist and looked at it. The glowing stopped. “Hum, back in Acmetropalic some one attacked HQ trying to get Angel and they put one of these on her.”


 

“I believe it could work on all of us.” Lexi replied....


Lexi stood in the door frame, watching over her little Angel. It was late now, and every one was asleep. Well, almost every one.


 

“Lexi?” Lexi slightly jumped.


 

“Ace? Why are you still up?”


 

“I could ask you da same t'ing you know.”


 

“I guess I'm jest being a worried mother.”


 

Ace looked past her into the room where Angel sleped. “A hammock? Now where is dat familiar?”


 

Lexi giggled and smiled at him. Her eyes sparkled. Ace smiled happily. “I have to say Lexi. You have one good kid. Well behaved to”


 

“Ya.” Lexi shrugged and looked down, “Well, it wasn't easy.”


 

“Oh ya?”


Think on that one. Not only did I have a baby I had a super powered baby who could move things with her mind. And I also had to do it alone.”


 

“Alone? What about Angels father?”


 

Lexi looked away from him, “Angels father? He...It's...It's complected.”


 

Ace watched her as she became nerves. She walked away from him and looked out a near by window. “Ace?”


 

“Hum?”


 

“Can I tell you something., and you promise not to... I don't know. Get all wired about it?” She looked at him.


Ace was confused. He walked over to her and gently placed his hand on her shoulder, “Of coarse Lex. We may have been separated for almost 10 years, but we're still us, and you can always tell me anything.”


 

They grinned at each other. “So... What's it about? The thing you wonted to tell me?”


 

“Well, it's not exactly a thing.”


 

“Then what is it... Who is it.”


 

Lexi shrugged his hand off her shoulder, “It's kinda about me. And kinda about you, but It mostly about Angel. And her father.”


 

He stared at her in confusion.


 

“Ace, do...do you remember the night before the... accident? Do you remember what we did?”


 

Ace stared at her, a little flustered and embarrassed for who knows what reason, “Well ya, but what dose that have to do with any thing?”


 

“Are you really that dens!” She snapped. He looked at her, surprised. She sighed and took a deep breath. Did it have to be this hard? “Ace w-what I'm trying to tell you is.... You...Your....Your her father.”


 

“What.”


“She's your daughter.”

 

 



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i knew it i knew it Ace was the father and great chappies too

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Thanks. Alex

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*deep breath*

SSSSSSSSSSQQQQQQQQQQQQQQUUUUUUUUUUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!

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IKNEWITIKNEWITIKNEWIT!!!

*passes out*

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OMG I knew it!

Ace is the Father!!!biggrin.gif
I have this MASSIVE grin on my face right now, but I think i'm gonna cry now too!aww.gif

It's such a tear jerker!!!

This is an amazing piece of writing, Please Continue!!!!!

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Thats right! The truth is out!
Ace is Angels father, but how is it possible?
Angel is, 8 Lexi and Ace where together 10 years ago.

You'll have to wait the next chapter to learn how it's possible.

(gotta say I like to leave room for debate)


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Maybe it has something to do with Lexi being on Kruten! Maybe there was something in the atmosphere that caused some sort of reaction so Angel was born later! Like how in my world, on Sari, the atmosphere is what gives the Sarians their powers!

Cassidy:... That... that actually made some sort of sense! *is amazed*

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But wait Siamese,

Didn't Angel mention somewhere in the story that she was almost 9 but was the height of a 7 year old or something, and Like Ace said when he was talking to Duck, "You have to leave about a year for pregancy" So if Angel is almost nine, and Lexi has been 'gone' for 10 years, that makes sense, of Ace being the Father!!!idea.gif

I love the way you've put all thse clues, Flashbacks and details into the story, It makes it more fun to read!!!biggrin

But theoretically, isn't it possible that with all of the violence, running for her life etc, couldn't Lexi have had a miscarridge????weirdface.gif

These are the questions in life that haunt me!!!

Anyways, Great story!

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LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!! (jigs)

My question is. What all has happened to Lexi?  Her story dosen't tell us a hole lot.

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Thank you all, and um Cassidy did you mean Fruten cus' you said Kruten?

And PG, you are very observant, that's very good, and you right i put a lot of hints and clues that both support and conderdick the idea of Ace being Angels father. That's all I'll say.


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Lexi looked down a moment then back up at him. Tears starting to form in her eyes. Casing them to sparkle in the moon light, “ She is yours Ace. I'm only sorry you had to find out after all this time.”

Ace watched as tears rolled down her face. Ace placed his hand on her cheek and wiped the tears away with his thumb, “It wasn't your fault Lex.” He smiled, “I know you would of told me if you could of.”

Lexi hugged him and he returned the embrace. They looked each others eyes, the moon light from the near by window shined perfectly to add a twinkle in there eyes. They leaned towards each other. There eyes starting to shut as they got closer.
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Fruten! That's what I meant! I couldn't remember how to spell it. XD

EEP!! They're gonna be interrupted, I know it!!

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OMG i can't wait for the next chappie

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At last we know who the father is!!!! 8D
please keep it up!!!!

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Hay this is a old drawing I did for this:

http://siamese712.deviantart.com/art/Reunited-97193792

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Ace sunk down into a near by chair. So many thoughts running through his head. Lexi looked at him. Slight fear in her eyes. They stayed there for a few moments. Not talking. Not really moving.


 

 

Ace took a deep breath then looked up at her, “Lexi I.... How is it possible?”


 

 

What do you mean Ace?” She took a step towards him.


 

 

Ace suddenly stood up casing her to step back. Then in a quiet yell, “What I mean, Lex, is you've been gone for almost 10 years! Angel is 8. It doesn't add up!... And what about Pop-pa. I mean the name...”


 

 

Lexi took a deep breath, walked over to him, and gently placing her hands at the base of his neck she said, looking him the eyes, “First off, I know the name Pop-pa sounds a lot like papa, but hear it's a nick name that means man of music. Pop-pa is constantly playing music. Second, The key word in that sentence, Ace, is almost. I've only been gone for a full 9 years. Yes, Angel is 8, but her next birthday is next month.” Lexi looked down a moment then back up at him. Tears starting to form in her eyes. Casing them to sparkle in the moon light, “ She is yours Ace. I'm only sorry you had to find out after all this time.


 

 

Ace watched as tears rolled down her face. Ace placed his hand on her cheek and wiped the tears away with his thumb, “It wasn't your fault Lex.” He smiled, “I know you would of told me if you could of.


Lexi hugged him and he returned the embrace. They looked each others eyes, the moon light from the near by window shined perfectly to add a twinkle in there eyes. They leaned towards each other. There eyes starting to shut as they got closer.


Only inches before there lips would touch they separated at the sound of music playing from some where out side. They looked at each other and smiled while blushing. They gave small nerves chuckles as they both knew what they where jest about to do.


 

 

That's probably Pop-pa...He kinda likes playing under the moon. Some wired quirk he has.” Lexi explained.


Who knows, maybe it gives him inspiration. After all he is a music man.” Ace smiled. Lexi lightly giggled again. Lexi turned her head when she heard a small movement, like some one rolling over in there sleep.


 

 

Lexi smiled and grabbed Ace's hand, “Come on.


Ace fallowed Lexi into Angel's room. He looked at the sleeping child in the hammock. A large pillow rested behind her head and a brown blanket covered her body as she slept on her side. She still had on her black sweater and white cap. Ace looked at her. At his daughter. How he enjoyed that thought. The thought of a daughter.


Ace gently pushed Angels hair out of her face only to have it fall back. He then took the old cap of her head, careful enough not to wake her. He looked at the cap a moment.


 

 

You gave her da cap so she would have somet'ing of mine. Didn't you?”


 

 

Ya.” Lexi replied as she some what rested her head on his shoulder, “She's a lot like you, you know.


 

 

Ace looked at Lexi with curiosity, “What d'ya mean?”


 

 

Well, for one, she has blue eyes like you. Not as deep a color, but blue non the less. She's able to come up with witty some what smart-alic comments.” Ace thought a moment, it was true. She had made quite a few in the short time he knew her, “She has your power of lazier vision and some times you can even hear her talk in the same accent as you.”


Ace slightly chuckled for his own reasons. They stood there for a few moments, watching there daughter.


 

 

Ace.”


 

 

Ya?”


 

 

Angel knows that the cap belonged to her father, but she doesn't know your her father.” Ace looked at her, and Lexi looked down in sham, “I never told her your name. I never really told her anything about you or the guys. It was jest to painful to. And, beside you and me, only two others know your her father.”


 

 

Who?”


 

 

Rat-a for one, and then Queen Kiara. Now that you know I feel like every one els should know the truth.”


“Eh, da news will probably br a bit of a shock for most of da guys, and den deres Angel herself. Maybe we should wait for the right time, ay?”


“That sounds good to me.”

 



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i like it can't wait for the next chappie

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Awwwwwwww, That chapter was cute!!!

Please upload another one soon!!!!

It's great so far!biggrin.gif

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GASPS!!!!! 0.0 I WAS RIGHT!!!! WOOHOO!!!! *does cartwheels* OMG, YAIS!!!!! HA HA!!!!

THAT IS AMAZING! I DON'T BELIEVE IT! WOOOO!! *DOES HAPPY DANCE* XD 8D XD 8D!!!!!

hehe, sorry bout the caps lock. But I'm just so psyced (sp?)!!! EEEEEE!!! I knew it!!! *stops* Wait, how is that... aw, who cares? He IZ teh FATHER!!!! 8D *snugs everyone in happynes*

I'm way too hyper. XD

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Thank you all. I'll try and get the next chapter written.

And DogGirl what where you going to say? You said 'Wait, how is that... aw, who cares?' What did you wont to know?

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THANK YOU A MILLION TIMES! I LUV IT! PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!

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EEEEEEEEEEKKKKKKKKK!!!!!!!!!! 8D

8D 8D

8D 8D

*is extreamly happy now*

UPDATEREALLYSOON'KAY?PLZANDTHANXMUCHLY!!! *glomps you*

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This is really impressive ^^ Please continue

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doggirl2772 wrote:

GASPS!!!!! 0.0 I WAS RIGHT!!!! WOOHOO!!!! *does cartwheels* OMG, YAIS!!!!! HA HA!!!!

THAT IS AMAZING! I DON'T BELIEVE IT! WOOOO!! *DOES HAPPY DANCE* XD 8D XD 8D!!!!!

hehe, sorry bout the caps lock. But I'm just so psyced (sp?)!!! EEEEEE!!! I knew it!!! *stops* Wait, how is that... aw, who cares? He IZ teh FATHER!!!! 8D *snugs everyone in happynes*

I'm way too hyper. XD



I think we figured that out, DG. Can I call you DG?



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Now for what you have all been waiting for....THE NEXT CHAPTER!!

“In this war you are one of four things. You are one: A member of the Kuton Army who's main purpose is to exile anyone who poses a threat and force people to follow your rule through the use of technology. Two: A member of the Rebels who are a branch of the Kuton Army; the only difference is they don't use technology in order to make them selfs look like Freedom Fighters and take out threats to the Kuton Army. This brings me to three: Freedom Fighters, people who are trying to restore order to how it was before the Kutons took over. Lastly is Four: You are some one who dose nothing either because you don't care of you are not brave enough to fight.”

 

“What Lexi speaks is true. If you loves wish to help all of us you will need to locate the Freedom Fighters.” Rat-a agreed.

 

“With out mistaking them for Rebels.” Pop-pa added.

 

The Loonatics, Lexi, Pop-pa, Rat-a, and Angel where all gathered in the living room. Discussing the matter of jest how they where to help restore order to the Fruten Kingdom.

 

“I'm guessing that finding them is harder then it sounds.” Duck said bluntly.

 

“Your right Duck. The Rebels can be very tricky and very convincing. Very little even know that the Rebel Army is part of the Kuton Army.” Lexi replied.

 

Angel, who sat between Lexi and Ace, started thinking.

 

“I doubt we can jest start askin' around about dese Freedom Fighter.” Ace commented.

 

“That wouldn't be wise. You never know who may and may not be a member of the Rebel or Kuton Army undercover.” Pop-pa said.

 

“Maybe we don't have to find dem.” Angel said.

 

They all looked at her “What do you mean Angel?” Tech asked.

 

“What I mean is, Mother is right! We are all one of four things. A great deal of the people are doing nothing because they are to afraid or don't care. What we need to do is given them a reason to care; give dem da courage to fight! And we need to do it openly. Loudly. To show that we are not afraid! Dat we are brave enough not to hide! Are bravery may be strong enough to lead the Freedom Fighters out of hiding, and with them out of hiding we gain the support of thoughs who do nothing. At dat point are numbers will be so vast that the Kutons will have to put up a good fight. And on da plus side we have us.”

 

“You know Angel,” Tech started, “that plan could actually work.”

 

“What do you mean Tech?” Ace asked.

 

“Think-about-it-Ace.-In-the-history-of-Earth-you-can-see-so-many-culchers-that-have-done-up-risings-amongst-leaders,-people-with-greater-power-or-Technology-and-other-things-amongst-the-same-lines” Rev cut in.

 

“It's amazing. A child as young as you Angel able to come up with a in genus plan as that! You are indeed an amazing child.” Rat-a praised.

 

“Gerbla Ya!” Slam agreed.

 

As the others also gave words of adulation Ace and Lexi gave each other a swift glans. The same look in there eyes and they grinned. Pride, in there child.

 

Ace looked down at his daughter, “Den we shall do it. We'll go to town and announce are presents.” He looked at every one els, “Yes?”

 

He held his hand out.

 

“Yes, We'll gather an army of are own.” Lexi placed her hand on his.

 

“And take on the Kuton Army.” Duck also placed his in.

 

“Gerbla!” Slam grumbled.

 

“Take on the probably the biggest battle we Loonatics have ever seen.” Tech joined in.

 

“As-the-six-Loonatics.” Rev added.

 

Rat-a and Pop-pa looked at each other before adding there hands to the pile and Rat-a saying, “With some friends.”

 

“Together.” Angel simply said.



-- Edited by Siamese712 at 00:13, 2008-09-21

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WWWWWWWWWEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!! *runs around room in excitement*

*runs into a wall* DX

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Awesome!!! Possibly one of the best fics i have read.
Keep updating.
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Wow, another exciting Chapter Siamese, please continue

Great Job, As always!biggrin.gif

BTW, How many chapters do you estimate,are left of the story?weirdface.gif

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You know Cassidy maybe we should put a helmet on you. One you can wear all the time.

Anonymous/Sapphire, thank you. But I'm sure it's not the best.

And PG, thank you, and I truthfully have no idea.

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i luved it Siamese712 i can't wait for the next chappie

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Good idea!

Cassidy: Here... *slaps Danielle's horse-riding helmet on Danielle's head* You wear it a lot anyway..

Me: 8D

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Alex: thanks and you don't have to say Siamese712. Jest Siamese.

Cassidy: XD

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I practically live on this site Siamese. (I can call you that right?)
And really how many more chapters do you think will complete it? 
Just so you know, i'm "jig person". smile
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Truthfully Jig, i really have no idea how many chapters are left.

And jest to say if you 'practically live on this site' why don't you join this site?

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Siamese, its official. After reading your advice. I finally became a member.
You might be bored of hearing this but your stories' awesome.
I honestly thought it was going to end at the scene where they found Lexi. Which thinking back is kinda dumb of me.

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