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TechCadet


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Ok,well I've had this idea about a story that I've been wanting to write for a few days and Im just wondering what everyone else thought of it...and since my other two stories were a bit of a flop I guess this will give me all the time I need on this one,but first I just want to know what everyone else thought of it.Basically:
A bit less then a century into the future,some of the Loonatics have passed on and are remembered throughout Acmetropolis(And after another series of events,the galaxy.But thats not what this story is about).However,the Loonatics did manage to have children before their passing and these 'prodigies' have been taken into official care by not just their families but another governing body(Other then Acmetropolis).It is decided(After they are attacked) that they and their families must be temporarily moved to another planet while Acmetropolis is investigated.

Most of the families and children make it off with their escorts,but one is ambushed while docking at a nearby station.And so the story would go,but first I just want to know if anyone would read it...

So yeah,any comments,query's,question's,death threats? confused

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It sound interesting.
I mite read it.

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Seems like it would be an ineteresting story, i'd most deffinately read it ^_^

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H'm, sounds promising. You should go for it. ^ ^;

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So basically, the Loonatic's families with their prodigies go to another planet away from normal people while Acmetropolis would be investigating to see the culprit and the reason behind the attacks? Would they get experimented on? Will some have better control over their powers than others?

I know you're not gonna say the answers but this does have the potential to be a great story.

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