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Heres the first chapter of 'whats going to happen?' Revs been injured during a mission and is trying to hide it. But soon the newest member of the team starts to notace whats happening, but not before something horible happens to rev.
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The rain pounded down on the streets of acmetropolis(sp?). A young man stood, the rain pelting down on his red cape. Only 7 loonatics stood in his way.

"Get out of da way if you know whats good for you" the young man growled.

"man you really need to get a new line." the newest loonatic exclaimed loudly. She turned her feathered head toward the other roadrunner on the team. They both smiled, and looked at Ace. He nodded his head and the both rush forward with a burst of speed.

Rev ran about in circles around the man and Macey stood on the outside of the ring that rev was forming. She was forming some kind of a bomb in her hands. Once Rev had gotten the man to dizzy to move he yelled out. "NOW MACEY".

And with that Macey through the bomb at the ring.

The bomb activated as soon as it touch the ring. Rev had no time to get out. He saw black spots dance before his eyes. Before he passes out on the floor.
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i know its short but im kinda being kickied off...soo yeah dont blame me!
Macey:DONT HURT HER!*hugs her....throws rocks at the oncoming mob.*

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rev:it means we have to spin it the other way around....*makes spinning motions with his hand*

i luv u all!
rev:shouldn't you be packing?
me:ummm*smiles sheepishly*



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Very interesting! Please continue!

PS. Thanks for the review on Walk Down Memory Lane! *snugs*

PPS: Welcome to LUO! *snugs again*

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thanxs next chappy is going to be up soon

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rev:it means we have to spin it the other way around....*makes spinning motions with his hand*

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rev:shouldn't you be packing?
me:ummm*smiles sheepishly*



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does anyone know how to add another chappy...cause i dont...... plz tell me....macey is going crazy


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rev:it means we have to spin it the other way around....*makes spinning motions with his hand*

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me:ummm*smiles sheepishly*



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heres chapter 2........
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The rest of the team stood still, waiting to see the results the two roadrunners had made. All of them waited for the smoke to clean. When it did they saw 2 roadrunners standing still and the large however young man standing frozen to the ground.

"way to go you two!" Lexi yelled in congradulation. The oher 5 ran up to congradulate them on their sucessful capture of the villian.

Lexi gave Rev a hug, and he could barley hold back a cry of pain. When the ther walked away, Rev looked down at him self. His abdoman was covered in blood. He was having trouble breathing, so he must have a few broken ribs.

He winced as he dragged himself after the others. When they reached headquarters, Rev locked himself in his room and peeled of his outfit. A large and deep gash had sread itself across his abdoman.

Rev winced as he applied some oinment to it and then changed into fresh and clean clothes.

Rev limped into the hallway, drawing a deep breath before making his recular entrance to the living room.

He speed in rushing up to everyone and exclaiming excitedly"can-you=believe-that-we-actually-got-that-guy-i-mean-just-me-and-macey-for-the-youngest-and-the-newest-the-two-of-us-did-quite-good-i-mean-if-we-did-acmetropolis-would-be...."

Tech clamped his paw around the speedly roadrunners beak to shut him up. A thing that Tech had been acustomed to doing. Since usually Tech was the only one near enough to touch the speedy bird.

"Rev shut up" Duck called from the couch as he watched a movie. Rev made a noise that sounded like 'stupid duck' but the noise was only loud enough for Tech to hear.

Once Tech withdrew his paw from revs beak the lage brd rubbed his beak, considering it was still sore from the battle he and Macey had just fought.

"Well" Ace yawned. "Im gunna go get some shut eye." He told them before heading for his room. "night" He yelled from his door before they hear his door zip shut.

The rest of them filed out leaving just Macey and Rev alone in the living room.

"well night Macey" Rev said before turning to go.

"rev wait" Macey called. Rev spun back around only to have Maceys lips crash into his. The kiss wasn't agresive, it was...nice. Rev melted and Macey put her arms around his neck, deepening the kiss.

Rev pulled away, panting for breath. "What was that?" He asked her once he snapped out of his trance. "A goodnight kiss" Macey told him, winking. She then walked away, leaving Rev alone in the living room, his feathered hands touching his lips ever so lgithly.

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there you go theres chapter 2. Have fun, i would add more but i kinda have to go pack before my mum throws a spazz

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rev:it means we have to spin it the other way around....*makes spinning motions with his hand*

i luv u all!
rev:shouldn't you be packing?
me:ummm*smiles sheepishly*



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Aww! sweetness! But, what about the gash on Rev? What happened to it?
EEEKKKK!! THE SUSPENCE!!!!

Cassidy: In case you haven't noticed, she can be a bit of a nutcase....

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Lucky: Why can't you Toons just enter a room normaly?!
Bonkers: Us Toons don't do normaly things! That's what makes us sooo adorable! X3
Lucky: Yeah, like a trainwreck. -__________-

Cassidy and Dusk: Freaky siamese twins seperated at birth.... ~ Andrea
 
Many thanks to HCoyote for the awesome avatar! I love it! <3

Danni- Official supporter of Tessidy, Sethidy, Cassless, Duri, Seck, Ricy, Dapphire, Calric, and Cassaghu 83
And Maley D. Because it's wrong. \8D/



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oh i notaced....no offense. but u r kinda crazy......cassidy run...hey dont worry im crazy to....rev and macey will tell u!

rev:SHE IS!!!!!

macey:GOD HELP US!

me:hey im not that bad am i?

rev+macey:YES U R!

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rev:it means we have to spin it the other way around....*makes spinning motions with his hand*

i luv u all!
rev:shouldn't you be packing?
me:ummm*smiles sheepishly*



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None taken! I know I'm crazy, and I'm proud of it! Heck, my whole family's nuts! XD



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Lucky: Why can't you Toons just enter a room normaly?!
Bonkers: Us Toons don't do normaly things! That's what makes us sooo adorable! X3
Lucky: Yeah, like a trainwreck. -__________-

Cassidy and Dusk: Freaky siamese twins seperated at birth.... ~ Andrea
 
Many thanks to HCoyote for the awesome avatar! I love it! <3

Danni- Official supporter of Tessidy, Sethidy, Cassless, Duri, Seck, Ricy, Dapphire, Calric, and Cassaghu 83
And Maley D. Because it's wrong. \8D/

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Nice story! I look forward to seeing more. And welcome to LUO, on a side note. I'm Rye. =3

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Nice story! And yes, what DID happen to Rev's gash?! You need to UUPDATE!!!!!!!

Tessa: Well, you see, my maker here is almost at the same crazy level as Cassidy's maker. Heck, maybe even crazier. There's still another one of the crazy makers, I'm sure you'll meet her soon enough.

RIIIIIGHT. And the Hot-headed OC's are designed to be even crazier than their makers.

Cassidy and Tessa: *hands and eyes glows with their respective colors, blue and silver*

EEEP! I'll shut up!*duct-tapes mouth and runs for dear life*

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more to come soon!

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rev:it means we have to spin it the other way around....*makes spinning motions with his hand*

i luv u all!
rev:shouldn't you be packing?
me:ummm*smiles sheepishly*



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okies peoples who care ....but im terribly sorry that i haven't added in a while, i just remembered that i have an account, and i just found this again, and mah pass....so besides that my skool life ish horrible, and im on writers block so i can't add for a bit,. plz dont kill meh, cause im packing too, and i have homework, and i have about 20 other storys to do, and chores, and i still have to finish my dads christmas gift *cries* crying.gif 

macey:......wow u can rant O__________O
me: *trties to get breathing again*
macey: *looks in my mess i dare to call a room, that i have to clean and sort the clothes in*....good luck o_O
me: *glares* ur sooo kind, *drags her in*
macey: NOOOOOOO*struggles to get out*
rev: o_O, okies then she will add as soon as she can, unless she abbandons it and makes a beter version, im sorry but shes ubberly busy now....soo...yeah...wait...macey, dont touch that *runs for cover*
*house blows up*
macey: *stands there with some stuff in her hands * O_O opps
me: *covered in soot, glares*
rev:* dies laughing*

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slam:rbgwut?
rev:it means we have to spin it the other way around....*makes spinning motions with his hand*

i luv u all!
rev:shouldn't you be packing?
me:ummm*smiles sheepishly*

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