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The Coming


Part one....



Tick....Tick....Tick....Tick


Ugh! Can't this blasted thing go any faster?” She slightly growled as she watched the second hand crawl across the face of her clock that rested in her hands. She took a deep breath, “Okay Lexi, jest breath. Who knows maybe it wont even happen. Maybe they wont come.” She sighed again, “...They will come. I know they will. I'm jest hoping they don't. Oh, but I can feel it coming! I can feel his mental link getting stronger. If it is going to happen during this gathering then I don't know what I'm going to do. ”


The tan bunny let herself fall back in self defeat. She was slightly comforted by the cocoon feeling she got as her hammock seemed to curve around her and as her head lowered into her soft pillow. She stared at her sealing. The only light in her room was brought in through the window by the setting sun. She looked out the window at the sky that had changed into many shades of pink, orange, red, yellow and even purple. How she loved watching the sun set and rise. But not today. Today she wished the sun had never risen from it's slumber. That way it could never set, and the gathering would never had to take place.


Now all she wonted to do was go to tomorrow and skip today. 'Where's Time Skip when you need him.' She thought glumly. She looked at the clock again. 9:30 it was only 9:30. Tick...Tick...Tick.


'Oh! That reached ticking!' Lexi glared at the clock. She was tempted to toss the time tracker across the room. She sat up and got ready to toss it, 'Lets see if time can really fly!'


Before she could through it into a thousand peaces against the wall, she heard a gentle knock come from her door. She set the inanimate object back in its place on her night stand as she slid out of the comfort of her hammock. She took a deep breath to eras any aggression she may have still had in her system. She never liked being angry. It wasn't her style, but she had been a little on edge lately. She pressed a button on the wall to open the metal door.


“Hay Lex.” She slightly smiled at the site of her long eared, smooth talking, street wise, leader. The rabbit in front of her was wearing 'casual' clothing in stead of the uniform of there team that changed each of the members fur or feathers to black and there assigned color. He was wearing a light blue work shirt, unbuttoned and short sleeved, over a white tank top. His denim jeans fit snugly on his frame and had a brown belt through it's loops.


She couldn't help but think that he was kinda cute looking with his gray and white fur exposed. She also found it kinda funny that there out fits some what matched. As she was wearing a baby blue polo shirt with a white collar and fitted denim jeans. The only color of clothing they didn't share was green. As her ears that lay behind her head where tied together with a green strip of cloth.


“Uh, whats up Ace?” She asked him.


“Hay isn't that my line?” She gave him a sarcastic 'haha' with her eyes. “Well...” He rolled his eyes to the side of there sockets and rubbed the back of his neck, “I was wondering if you'd join me in da mane room?”


He looked back at her, letting his had droop back down to his side, matching his ocean blue eyes to her leafy green ones.


She smiled, “I guess I could stretch my legs.” She hadn't left her room all day and felt she could do with some time away from watching the 'Ticking Menace' in her room. Ace walked her down the halls of there home till they reached the door that led to there mane room that was conveniently connected to the kitchen. He lend forward a tad and pressed the button that opened the door. They where meat with blackness.


“Hay why are the lights off?” Lexi asked as she walked a little into the dark room. Then in one quick turn of events the lights flicked on and she heard from several loud voices, “Surprise!”


The room had been decorated with streamers, balloons, and a large banner over the windows saying 'Happy Birthday Lexi!!!!'.


Lexi gasped in surprise at the site of her 5 dearest friends suddenly jumping out at her. There sudden show made her walk back slightly and trip over her own foot, but instead of her butt hitting the floor she felt Ace's arms rap around her. Caching her before she could fall.


“I'm taking a guess and saying your surprised, Eh?” He said with a sly mile as he looked down at her.


“I...” Lexi squeaked. She was stunned, but the feeling quickly became anger, “I told you guys not to throw me a party!”


She got to her feet and pushed Ace away, “I asked you guys for only two thing! One: Don't do any thing special for me, and Two: Leave me alone!”


“Oh, Come on Lexi.” Said the brown coyote a few steeps away waring a green tank top and black shorts.


“Tech-” She was about to yell at him directly when blur ran up to her before she could continue.


“It's not every day you turn twenty-one.” Said a blue road runner in a red hoodie and baggy blue jeans.


“Rev's right, and you do realize your old enough to drink now?” Asked a black mallard in a orange and white striped tee and orange shorts. The large Tasmanian devil next to him, in a purple tee and gym pants, mumbled an agreement.


“Look I don't care if I can drink. Err! If any of you knew any thing about today you'd know there's nothing to celebrate!” She quickly ran down the hall in the direction of her room. She wasn't sure who but one of them called her name. Asking for her to come back.



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O.O LOONATICS AND TEEN TITANS CROSSOVER!!!!!!!!!

*ahem* Anyways, that's sweet. And I'm guessing you have Lexi as Raven and Ace as Robin. At least Lexi didn't wreck their decorations like Raven did. =)

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Interesting story. ^ ^; You format your story similar to Siamese's stories, I noticed. The whole bold text thing... just an observation. -shrug- Anyways, hope to see more soon.

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It's crossovered with Teen Titans? Where? Maybe it'd help if I watched that show -_-

I don't know, I think blowing off your friends when they throw a birthday party is inexcusably rude under any circumstances. But that's just me and my little vendetta.

And yeah, your style of writing both in format and spelling is very similar to Si's. Maybe that just happens when two people are close. vOv


Intriguing start.

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The whole plot is from one of the Teen Titans episode.

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ruthchang93 wrote:

The whole plot is from one of the Teen Titans episode.




Yeah, that's pretty obvious for anyone who's watched Teen Titans. I loved the episodes the story is based on. The only thing I hated was the whole RobxRae revolution that resulted from the episodes. xP



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As Dragon_Wing said, the spelling and the sentence structure seems similar to Siamese's. Obviously improve on your spelling and grammar and you're there.

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OOH I'm intrigued!

Rye & Ruth are right it is like a Teen Titans crossover....BB&Rae! *cough* ok let me not bring my other obsessive fandom here. giggle.gif

I can't wait to find out why Lexi would possibly reject the guys' party throwing, I can only imagine...

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Soupapowah wrote:

BB&Rae! *cough* ok let me not bring my other obsessive fandom here. giggle.gif




No, no, bring it here! I'm a hardcore BBxRae fan, myself. -highfive- Hehe. xD



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This story is inspired by a teen titans episode; It's probably painfully easy to see. Of coarse I'll be changing a few things(Duh).

On the hole writing format and stuff well I was the one to get Si in to the habit of bolding the normal text, italic thoughts, and normal the dialog. And when it comes to are sentience structurer well your not the first to say that. That how we actually meet. See we had both taken this writing class and are instructor had taken notes of how close are writing type was, he actually thought one of us had done both the papers, so he parried us up.

Si most likely would of told you this but right now she at home with a nasty sun burn. She doesn't wont to move at all, so she probably won't be on at all today. She went to a water park yesterday.

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Ya!!!! YOU GOT IT UP !!!!*TEE HEE ALL CAPS ^_^*

And yes I've been sunBurned D': it hurts!!!!

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Ouch. Sun burns are nasty. DX

Anyway, AWESOMENESS TO THE EXTREME! 8D

I shall be stalking this story..... XD

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Nice I like it can't wait for u 2 contiune

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IDEA!! I shall go bug her in real life till she wrights the next chapter *Zips off*

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Siamese712 wrote:

IDEA!! I shall go bug her in real life till she wrights the next chapter *Zips off*



nice siamese u do that and i will join u

biggrin.gif *Sips off 2 help Siamese*



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I mean zips

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Part 2


“Lexi...Lexi will you pleas come back out?” Lexi leaned on her door as she listened to Ace pleading for her to come back. “Look we didn't mean to upset you. Jest come back out, okay?”


She lowered her head; tears started to form in her eyes. She shut them tightly, as tight as she could. She hated it when she cried. It made her feel weak and powerless. She needed to be strong: If not for herself, for them. But at that moment she jest felt like crying. Crying because something was going to happen. Some thing they couldn't stop or help with. Something that made her lock herself up from her friends on her very own birthday. “...Lexi?” She heard Ace try once more. Again she gave him no reply. Not a mumble, not a peep, no 'go away', or even the thing she wanted to say the most 'sorry'. She heard Ace let out a long, heavy, sigh and set something out side her door.


“Happy Birthday, Lex.” His foot steps patted away down the hall. Once sure he was gone, Lexi opened her door and looked in the direction he had gone. She rested her head on the door frame and sighed. Sadness engulfed her spirit. When she opened her eyes she found herself looking down at a small neatly wrapped package. She lifted it up. Holding it close to herself, she slowly walked back into her room. The metal door shutting and locking behind her.


She let herself slip back into her hammock. She stared at the ceiling for a moment before letting her eyes wonder to what she held in her hands. The gift was neatly wrapped in a bright golden yellow with a Blush pink ribbon that over lapped its self in the upper corner. She read the, unmistakably Ace's, hand writing that was on a tag being held down by the ribbon. It read: Happy Birthday Lexi, I give you all my best wishes, with Love, your good friend, Ace. She gently pulled away the ribbon and paper. Beneath was a black box. There where no special marking on it to decipher where it had come from. She lifted off the lid and gasped at what she found.


The gold chain of the locket shined even in the poor light of her room. The rectangular locket was curved at the corners and had a symbol of sorts. She lifted it up in the palm of her hand to get a better look at the symbol. She recognized the Chinese character of love any where. She opened it to see a small photo of her and all the others. She smiled. The character was the right thing for how she felt about all of them. They where her friends and she loved them. All of them: Ace, Tech, Rev, Slam, and yes even Danger. They had become her family.


Her smile faded away. The fact that she loved them made her only feel guilty about exploding on them. They had only been trying to be nice. Lexi sighed, set the necklace on her dresser, and walked over to her window. The sun was almost gone now, as you could only see a few dwindling rays. It only took a few moments till her room was in darkness. She stared. Stared out the window waiting. Waiting for it to happen. She turned away from the window, and thats when she felt it.


She gasped as she collapsed down to her knees. A ring of fire sprung forth and trapped her to where she was. She fell onto her hands as pain filled her, like fire. Her eyes tight as she tried to stop her self from screaming. The last thing she wonted was for everyone to come barging into her room in a total panic to see her undergoing the ceremony of fire. This always happened to her before a gathering. Fire then felt like it was starting to burn into her skin as strange symbols and swirls started to carve there way out of no where on her skin and through her fur. It burnt the symbols through parts of her close. The symbols started at the base of her neck and crawled down to her shoulders and collar bone.


She would be lying if she was to say it didn't hurt. She still suppressed screams of agony, but couldn't stop small moans and wimpers from escaping. The symbols continued. They ran down her arms all the way to her hands, down her sides, abdomen, legs, feet, back. On her back a crescent moon laying on it's side where the pointed ends reached up toured her shoulders formed across most of her upper back. The same moon symbol scrolled across her fore head. The writing on her body now glowed a fire red. Lexi opened her eyes as the pain ebbed away. Her eyes glowed, not pink but, a reds. Dark reds that swirled together like lava. The flam circle went away, not leaving a mark to prove that it was ever there. Her eyes changed back to there green and normal colors.


She lifted her arms up as she sat up. She looked at the symbols that still glowed brightly on her body. She closed her eyes as tears started to run down her face. She held herself and whispered, “Tomorrow is going to be one heck of a day.”



-- Edited by Dark Secret at 17:52, 2008-08-04

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wow can't wait of the next chappie and f it doesn't come then i'll come bug u again

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Awsome Jug, love the hole fire seromony thing. It's cool.

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Now I'm curious about what's gonna happen. What were with those symbols and the fire? Only the author knows. Just is spelt J-U-S-T, never with an 'E' just to point out. Other than that, keep going.

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hmmmm i think i've seen this before on teen titans but i'm not sure......

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um, Alex it mentions in some previas coments that some of the plot is a crossovered with Teen Titans.

So ya. If i'm not mistaken it looks like it's based off 'Birthmark', 'the profisy'(SP?), and 'the end'

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Part 3...


Lexi stared out the window. The sun was now rising as she stood, in uniform, in the main room. As much as she wished she could enjoy the warmth and light coming in, she couldn't. Her mine swam with thoughts and worries. She was so trapped in thought that she didn't realize when another entered the room and stood next to her.

 

“It's a beautiful sun rise.” He said.


Lexi looked up to see the once brown, now green, coyote standing next to her, “Huh.”


He pointed out the window, “Sun rise. It's beautiful. I've always love it.”

 


Lexi smiled a small, half hearted, smile, “Ya, I do to.”

 

“It brings promise of a new day. New adventurers, friends to be made, new life, and so much more.”


Lexi looked up at him, who was grinning contently. He sounded so hopeful and calm.

 

“I guess I owe all of you an apologize.” Lexi sighed.

 

“I guess.” Tech shrugged, “But I'm sure you had your reasons. You always do, but may I ask why you didn't wish to celebrate your birthday? You said 'if we knew any thing about the day we'd know there's nothing to celebrate.”


Lexi turned her back to him, “It's all a little complected. That's all.”

 

“Good enough for me.”


Lexi looked back at him to see him grinning a big toothy grin, “Thanks for understanding Tech.”

 

“What are friends for? Come on lets get some breakfast.”


She fallowed him to the kitchen and the two of them started cooking as the others slowly got up as well. Non of them confronted Lexi about her birthday, though they all wanted to know what was up. As they neared the end of there meal Ace decided to put an ease to there curios minds.

 

“Neh, Lexi?”

 

“Ya?”

 

“About yesterday I-”

 

“I'm sorry.” Lexi cut him off and looked at all of them, “I'm sorry to all of you. I shouldn't of blown up on you. You guys where only being nice. It's jest... I don't know. It was my twenty-first birthday. Kinda a big mile stone in my life.”

 

“Neh, dat's okay Lex. We don't mind.” Ace looked at the others. “Right?”

 

“Like I said, I'm sure you had your reasons.”

 

“Ya-Lexi-We-don't-mind.”

 

“GergaYa.”


All eyes went to the orange clad Loonatic. Duck looked at them then sighed, “I guess I don't have a problem with it ether.”

 

“Thanks guys, but maybe I should make it up to you guys. How bout we go out today?”

 

All the loonatics muttered an agreement. It wasn't long till they where all out on the town. First they went to the movies. During a seen Lexi herd voices that sounded more like whispers surrounding her. She shrugged it off as part of the movie, but when they went to a small arcade named 'Game World' she herd the voices again. They where louder this time, and one could almost hear words trying to be formed.


Lexi politely excused herself and when into the rest room. She locked the door and stood over the sink.

 

“Oh, why are they trying to contact me so hard? They know the psychic link can be dangerous” She asked to no one. The whispers where still swirling around her. Getting louder, but still she couldn't fully hear what they where saying. She knew if she actually listened the muffled words would become clear, but she didn't wont to hear them.”Stop.” She commanded.


The words went dull and silents was all that reached her ears. The next place they went was the park to play Frisbee.

 

“Catch it Rev!” Ace called as the Frisbee sored through the air. The speedster was easily able to catch it.

 

“Heads-up-Tech!” Rev tossed it

 

“Got it!” Tech said as he grabbed it out of the air, “It's going your way Duck!”

 

“Hear Slam!” Duck passed it to the devil.


Slam caught it and passed it back to Ace, “Hay Lex, your turn!”

 

As the Frisbee came close to her words once again filled her head. This time they felt like they where bombarding her mind. Yelling at her. Lexi held her head as the yelling got worse. She clenched her eyes shut. She felt some one place there hands on her shoulders and slightly shake her. She couldn't hear or see them.


Suddenly, in sudden boom, all the yelling seemed to scream 'Karmoona!'. The sudden burst of psychic energy sent pain shooting through her. She let out a scream of pain before collapsing into blackness.



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wow. I can definitely see how some people can conclude a teen titans crossover (teen titans fan myself). And you have to post a new chapter soon.

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Nice Dark. Defently leaves us wanting more.

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Ooooh. Spooky. UPDATE!

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i like i like can't wait for the next chappie

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D8.....omfg.gif omg..w...WHAT HAPPENED! WHAT'S NEXT!!!! I NEED TO KNOW!!!

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Part 4...


Lexi felt her consciousness returning to her, but she didn't open her eyes. She knew a few things with out even opening her eyes. She knew she was in the med lab, that Tech had ran a bunch of test on her by Ace's command only to find nothing to explain the faint, that they had used the psychic link to the point that it became dangerous at the distance they where apart, that they would most likely be coming soon, that she had little time to explain things to the guys, and that the live she had come so accustomed to was about to be destroyed.


With her eye's still closed she could hear two voices coming into the med lab.


“So Tech, what's wrong wit' her?”


“I don't know chief. Non of the test or scans reported any thing out of the ordinary.” Told ya, “There was a little bit of abnormal brain activity, but for Lexi I consider that normal do to the fact that her powers come from the mind.”


“Well run da test again, Lexi isn't the type to jest collapse for no reason.”


Lexi sat up and opened her eyes a crack, “Uh...Don't bother Ace. He isn't going to find any thing.”


Tech and Ace looked up to see there team mate looking at them and conscious. The two ran over to her.


“Are you all right, Lexi?” Tech asked.


“How ya feelin', Lex?” Ace also asked.


“I'm fine guys. Really, I don't know why you guys worry so much.” Lexi gave them a reassuring smile, before letting a sensation of melancholy over take her.


Ace gave her quizzical/ worried look, “Are you sure Lex? You look worried or sad about somet'in'”


Lexi looked Ace in the eyes, “Ace theres something I need to tell you. All of you guys.”


After rounding up the rest of the Loonatics, they sat on the couch in the Loonatics mane room looking at Lexi expectantly. Lexi stared out the window for a moment, collecting her thoughts before letting out a large sigh.


“Guy's,” she started off, “there's something I need to tell you. Something non of you know about me. Something not even Zadavia knows.”


Lexi tuned to face them, “I'm...ya see...,” She sighed again as the others looked at her in utter confusion, “When I was born I was-”


Before Lexi could continue she suddenly felt her legs go weak and cosed her to collapse to her knees and her body suddenly felt strained as she clenched her eyes shut.


“Lexi!” all they guys immediately ran to her side, but stopped in there tracks when they suddenly saw symbols seeming to burn there way through Lexi's uniform. They watched in amazement, enchanted, as the same strange and ancient symbols from the night before burned through her uniform. Covering her body. It could not be seen how ever through the thicker parts of her armor on her legs and arms, but they where scrolled on her body underneath it non the less.


Lexi opened her eyes, gasping for breath, to reveal that they had become a plethora of multiple reds that formed into what looked like lava. Slowly the red faded, leaving her normal green eyes behind. Her eyes then rolled back and she collapsed from body exhaustion. Ace immediately placed Lexi on her back and held her up in his arms. She opened her eye's weakly at him.


“I'm sorry.” She said as Ace pushed a lock of her hair out of her face and did a quick glance at the mark that glowed on her fore head. Tears started to role down her cheeks, “I wonted to tell you guys. Enplane it all before they came. But they're coming. They're coming for me. I'm sorry.”


“Lex what's goin' on? Who are dey?” Ace asked in panic.


“You'll know soon enough.” Lexi looked over at the window. The Loonatics gazes fallowing. A sudden portal of light, not bright enough to blind, appeared in front of the giant window. And when they looked into it they could see the silhouettes of three figures.



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Awesome

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WHOA!

Massive cliffhanger there. Defiantly left me and the Loonatics wanting more. *Avoids another brick*

WOULD IT KILL YOU TO STOP THROWING BRICKS AT ME, ACE!?

Ace: You hurt Lexi. You deserve it.

Me: It was an accident. How many times do I have to apologise? Anyways, PLEASE UPDATE!

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Maybe this will explain......
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Part 5...

Lexi found her strength returning as the figures seemed to come closer. She pushed Ace away, and stood up tall. The Red symbols looked as if they couldn't get any brighter.

The first one finally came into full view. He was tall and his hair was long. Very long going past his slender shoulders. His hair had the color of bleached blond hair, but it looked natural. His eyes where pail green. He looked almost human except the pointed ears that stuck out of the hair. He wore robes one would see a prestige or Page from a fantasy book ware. They where white with a purple around the neck and a black broach at the middle of the neck peace. He looked like a high elf with his hand gently placed on the inside of the other hands sleeve.

The second figure that emerged from the portal to the left of the elf was female. She was a anthro. Tiger markings bared there way on her whit fur. At best guess she was a whit bangle tiger. Her attire was that of armer. Similar to what Xena wheres. Her eye's where a deep shade of purple. She looked tough; most likely was.

The final one was another male. He took his place at the right of the elf looking one. He to looked Similar to a human, but was visually not. No ears where visually present; in there places where spikes. His skin was a bright fire red. The spikes where a blood red, and the long hair that stopped short from the shoulders what black along with his eyes. Despite his eye's being totally black one could still see where the color and pupils of his eye's would of been. His wardrobe wasn't as grand as the other two. As it consisted of hand stitched leather, both the shirt and pants. Attached to his crossed arms where dark leather gauntlets. His boots went up to his knees and looked like they could of come from the 16th century.

There eye's simultaneously surveyed the Loonatics that stood before them, and stopped as there eye's fell apron Lexi, who's symbols had now gone away.

Karmoona.” The elfling said with a sound of relief in his voice as he, and the other two, walked over to her and knelled before her.

Lexi looked at him with a stern but some how gentle look, “
Kalender, it is good to see you my old friend. But I have to request. Why have you all come hear?”

Lexi's voice stressed the question.

We where worried for you sisteren.” The tiger replied, “When you did not answer us through the link we kelped trying. Then we sensed that you had fallen weak. We had to come.”

All of you, abstain your selfs from this position, and stand as my equals.” Lexi said. As commanded the three stood. Doing so reveled there different heights. The one Lexi had referred to as Kalender towered over the others. He must have been close to Zadavia's hight. The tiger that had called Lexi sisteren was much shorter then the others and ranked near Duck's stancher. The final one, who had nothing yet, was equal to Lexi.

Ace had enough of this. He wonted to know what was going on. “
Lexi?”He said placing his hand on Lexi's shoulder. Suddenly the one that had been silent forcefully shoved Ace into the wall. He had Ace pined to the wall with his his hand on Ace's shoulder. Painfully I mite add.

You dare touch the leader of the chosen saviors!?!” He growled. He bared his teeth in order to reveal the fangs that where in his mouth. The Loonatics immediately jumped to action in order to protect there leader.

No stop!” Lexi yelled at them raising her hand. The Loonatics felt a small sudden gust of wind strike them and cased them all to stop where they stood. Manly from confusion: Wind? Lexi walked up to the one who had Ace against the wall. She placed her hands on his shoulders and whispered in his ear, “Carruth. Restrain your self. This is Ace. He is my friend, and he will not hurt you or I. In return you shall not hurt him. Yes?

'Carruth' gave a glance at Lexi then a glare at Ace before letting him go with a growl. Anger could still be seen in him. Lexi placed her hand on his shoulder/the base of his neck and placed her four head on his.

It is okay Carruth. Breath in...Breath out.” As she said this he breathed in deeply and exhaled. She let him go, “I see you haven't changed my brotheren.

Lexi what's going on?! Who are day, why are dey hear, and why do they call you Karmoona?!” Ace asked loudly. Lexi looked at Ace then the rest of the Loonatics. There facial excretions where all of confusion and wonder. She then looked at the once who had entered through the portal.

Lexi sighed, “
As I had said before they came there is some thing I need to tell all of you. I had wished to go in depth with you about it, but seeing as they are hear now i have little time. Maybe it is best that you guys know little about the matter. They have come for me. As Carruth has said, I am there leader.”

What?” Duck asked.

Lexi who are they?” Tech added.

They are my two botheren's Carruth and Kalender. And my sisteren Calenta. As I am there sisteren. By birth my name is not only Lexi, but as well as Karmoona. The same is for them. You see I, like them, am not born to this planet. Heck, I'm not born to this dimension. And to day I must leave with them. And there is a heavy possibility I will never be coming back.”Lexi explained.

Ace's eyes opened to the size of dinner plates, “
What! L-lexi what you mean you're leaving.”

Why?” Rev asked.

Lexi looked at them and said bluntly, “
I am a chosen one.”

Chosen one?” Tech inquired.

Lexi gave a small nod to the other Chosen one's, and took a place in line with them. In unison, they let there heads fall foreword as they did symbols formed on all of them. Lexi's the same fiery one's as before. Kalender's symbols where a bright white, and where on Lexi there was a sideways moon for him it was a swirl. Calenta was blue with what would be described as a tear/ water drop. And Carruth was a shad of brown with a circle.

They lifted there heads up and opened there eye's. Lexi's was once again fire, Kalender's was shades of white and looked like wind, Calenta's where blue's that looked like water, and Carruth's where light brown's looking like mud.

We,” There voice's said combined, “are the chosen ones. Born from the blood of are enemy, gifted with the powers of the mind and elements. Branded with the words of are fate and destiny. We are the Chosen Ones. We live as one, we feel as one, we die as one.

There eyes changed back and a portal opened behind them.

I wish I could tell you more, but I can't.” Lexi said to them and then turned towards the portal, “Good by my friends.”

The 'Chosen ones' walked through the portal and where soon gone. Along with the loonatics dear friend Lexi.

No.” Ace whispered, “No
!”

He ran towards the still open portal, with the other remaining Loonatics, and soon found his world whizzing away.
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wow i can't wait for the next chappie it sounds so exicting

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Noooooooooooooooooooooo!

Please continue!biggrin

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SO COOL! I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE REST! Sorry. Caps lock. Hehe.

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Please continue,
BTW, good job...

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Part 6...

 

The portal opened up in the sky above the small training grounds that where surrounded by nature. From the portal came forth Lexi, Carruth, Kalender, and Calenta. They gracefully landed on the ground as if they where floating.

 

Welcome home, Karmoona.” Calenta said softly.

 

It is good to be home, but where is Dojo?” Lexi replied.

 

He should be around h-” Carruth didn't finish as they all turned around to see the Loonatics falling out of portal, and, ungracefully, crashed into a pile on the ground below.

 

The Loonatics all slowly stood up, rubbing the parts that they fell on wrong. Lexi's face was one of shock till it melted into a angry glare. She walked up to Ace.

 

He looked at her with a week smile “Lexi I-

 

She gave him a sudden slap to the back of his head, “What is wrong with you!”

 

Ace and the other looked at her with the same faces you see on children who just got into trouble, “Lexi I I. I thought-

 

You idiots!You weren't suppose to fallow me through the damn portal!” Lexi yelled at them before placing her hand on her head, “For the love of all Regalian what am I going to do?

 

What do you mean Lex. Back there the way you where talking it made it sound like you where in some kind of trouble. I though...”Ace trailed off.

 

I'm in trouble now! Who knows what Dojo's going to do when he sees you guys.” Lexi rubbed her head as she started to fell a headache coming on, “I'd sens you all back to Acmetropalic if I could right hear and now, but I don't have that power!

 

Dojo?-Who's-Dojo?” Rev asked.

 

Karmoona!” Lexi tensed up as a new voice trailed the air.

 

She spun around to gaze at a elderly dark skinned man in a white clothing. His bald head glowed from the sun and his white mustache growing over his wrinkled mouth. The wrinkles on his brow pulled tight with anger.

 

Lexi, Calenta, Kalender, and Carruth all turned towards him a bowed in respect, and simultaneously said, “Master Dojo.

 

The man walked past the first three and walked strait to Lexi, “stand child and explain.

 

Lexi stood up strait, “Master Dojo, these are the Loonatics of Acmetrouplice, Earth. I warned them not to fallow, but they disregarded my words and fallowed us after we had gone through the dimensional portal”

 

Is this the truth?” Dojo asked as he walked up to the Loonatics, “Did you ignore my pules warnings not to come to this world?

 

She didn't say not to come directly, more of an implication, but made it obvious that we weren't to fallow. But I ran through after her and the guys fallowed me.” Ace stated.

 

Dojo sighed, “Earthlings are so trouble some, but as the portal to your dimension will not open up again in months time, there is no chose but to keep you 5 hear. Karmoona!”

 

Lexi walked up to him, timidly, “y-yes Dojo?”

 

Sens they came from your dimension you are in charge of them. Sustain them from making trouble, and if they are to create problems you will be the one to carry out any assigned punishments. Understood?

 

Yes, Dojo... Perhaps introductions and explanations are reacquired?

 

very well Karmoona. If they are to stay it is best they know why, so that they do not question are mission.”

 

Dojo, this is Ace Bunny, Tech Coyote, Danger Duck, Rev Runner, and Slam Tasmanian. Of the super hero team, Loonatics, of Acmetropalic, Earth, dimension Contants.” Lexi turned the the guys, “Guys, this is Master Dojo, guardian of the Chosen Ones of the training grounds, Regalian, dimension ToTunk.”

 

Nice to meet you?” Duck said flatly.

 

Indeed.” Dojo replied equally flat. He turned to the Chosen ones, “Show them.

 

The four nodded and walked up to the Loonatics. Lexi placed her index finger on Aces four head. Clenta did the same to Tech, Kalender the same to Rev, and Carruth the same to Slam and Duck. They closed there eyes and Lexi muttered something in a deferent tung.

 

As she did so, the symbols once again covered there bodies and they looked up with there eyes the same strange colors, “Rewind the suns and moons. Let them see what has come and past, and hear the recited fate.”

 

The ground under them glowed white as all the surroundings dissolved and the ground felt like it was crumpling into blackness.

 



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this was a great chappie Dark secret can't wait for the next one

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Wow, interesting!

That's so cool, I can't wait for more!

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2 thumbs up from us. Just one question:

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Master Dojo sounds like those Fear Me non-scary guys.

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Part 7...


In a time long forgotten, where the history has also been forgotten or erased from recored, the lands where in forced ruled. Ruled by escaped demons, demons of a place named Tomorus.


It echoed in there minds. The Loonatics saw nothing, felt nothing, only heard a voice, very similar to Dojo's.


Amongst these demons there was one more powerful then them all. Loken, he had three others that could be claimed to be his primary henchdemons. Demus, Jarklon, Malkiorus.


Suddenly one could see, like a vision or dream, characters. Four of them. Three stood side by side. The three where men made of controlled fire, with hours and horned smiles. The fourth one sat on a thrown of bones. It was Loken with no second thought. Loken was visually different, by far. His skin was red, his forearms looked to be covered by scaled armor, till one realizes their connected to him. His chest was bare but his privet part was covered in leather. His feet where three towed claws. His eye where yellow-red, dry, lizard like. Where his ears should have been there where gigantic horns. Where his nose would or been there was a smaller horn. His teeth where like wolf teeth. His hair black and ran down to his hip.

 

One could hear screams all around the three, and evil laughter.


There was nothing, but pain and destruction by there command. But, there was a group of monks, from the Secret Order, who came together. They knew if they came together they could banish all escaped demons. But they couldn't send them back to Tomorus. If they escaped it once they had the power to do it again.


The seen changed to monks in an old underground building. They argued with each other as they searched through books. Till one, a young blond boy, came running in with a think book in his hands. It was written in a unknown dialect. The boy pushed in and throw the book down to a page. He pointed and spook to the others who discussed and nodded.


Mumbles of men talking.


It took time, but the youngest monk of there order found a place where they could send Loken and his demons. It was an isolated, cold and cruel, dimension. Told to be impossible to ever get out of. So the Order came fourth to Loken, Demus, Jarklon, and Malkiorus. They cast a powerful spell that sent all the demons of the world to the chosen dimension.


The monks stood before Loken's thrown where the four demons where to attack. A older monk lifted up a staff with a blue orb on it. They chanted together and a portal emitted it's self from behind the demons. Casting them all the demons of the wold through it.


But before it could close all could hear Loken yell out in a demonic voice, “We will be back, just wait!”


Of coarse the Order never took any care for Loken's final threat. Till one of there own for told a Prophecy.


A mans scream filled a walled garden attached to a temple. Monks and priestesses run into a room where a man lay shaking vigorously. One man placed him on his back.


Brother Jonathan! Brother Jonathan! What's happened!?”


Loken! I've had a vision Brother Michel! About Loken! He, He will return! But we musen't fear! Four, four Chosen one's will be born. They-they will be born from the blood of there enemy, gifted with the powers of the mind and elements. Branded with the words of there fate and destiny. They will be connected to each other. They will be born at the training grounds in the lands of Regalion in the dimension ToTunk. There they will fight Loken and his demons. In one epic battle. If they win, the demons will be sent back. If they lose are wolds are doomed.”


The Order sent monks to the training grounds. To await the arrival of the chosen ones. Generations after generations past, but still they waited. As History some times gos. History became legends, Legends became Myths, Myths became forgotten. Except for the few who believed, who remembered, who waited. There came a day where four travelers came by the training ground. They came from different dimensions and worlds. The most important thing, however, was that these travelers where four women who cried life inside them.


Four women on horse back travailed across mountainous. One was an Elf. Majestic in many ways. Her hair was dark. Her skin fair. Her eyes pail green. One was a Tigeress. A tad short, but strong willed. One was of a different species unknown to Earthlings. She was human like, but had Blue skin, horns instead of ears, long black hair, and eye that where purely green. The last one was rabbit anthro. She was younger then the others. Much younger. Her eyes where light blue, her fur white and tan. She had long blond hair that grew down to her hips.


They came to a settlement where non other then Dojo greeted them and gave them shelter.


There was more to the prophecy then what Brother Jonathan had first spurted out. The Chosen ones would be born on the same night, at the same time. Three would cry out for there first time simultaneously. But one, to mark there leader ship over the others, would cry out before them all.


We see the four women sitting in a room. Going through the final stages of labor. Dojo and a few other monks are there helping each of them. A crying infant in herd as Dojo holds up the daughter of the Rabbit anthro. Only a moment after three more cry as there life is began.


The children are cleaned off. Give cloth dippers and set next to each other on a table. Dojo looks at them all. Four children born on the same night, at the training grounds, and one cried out before them all. Could they be? Dojo cannot be sure. Till the marking started to show them selfs on each of the children's bodies.


He picks up the one with red markings. “You all have been waited for, for a long time, Karmoona.”


The four children where taken into the care of Master Dojo of the Training Grounds. The Children where taught to fight, master there telepathic skills, and power over the elements.


Four small children, 5 of age at the most, take in there hands staffs and weapons and practices hitting dummies.


Suddenly there 9 and run an obstacle course. It's dangerous, one wrong move and one could be dead. They help each other. They move each other and objects around them with only thought. At the end of the course they land on a small clearing and summon staffs.


All eyes are on the young female in the middle. He long golden hair tied back. Splitting in to places to allow her ears to stand. She is the one who landed in the middle. She id the object of attack. So they begin.


There age changes again. They are 12. They practice the elements. Each of them commencing moves useing Wind, Water, Fire, and Earth.


They trained well and continued to grow strong, but as there are groups who wish the Chosen Ones destroyed. It was decided that they would be separated in order to protect them. Each would be sent to the dimension there mother had come from. Days after there twelfth anniversary of life they where made to say good bye and acquire new names.


Overus Morchrin would be sent to live with the elfs of Highlender


Jadias of lock shire would join the Clans of Lock Shire


Drang Morius would be one of the barbarians of the Other Lands


Lexi Bunny would be simulated into the life styles of Earth.


They would see each other every three years for a gathering till the day came to fight there final fight.


The four children huddle together with there heads touching and arms around each other. They wear clothing of there new worlds. Each scared and unwanting to leave there Brotherins and Sisterins.


Portals open behind each of them as they separate and leave....




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Out of This World

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Hmmm, intresting and well worth the wait!

I can't wait for more!

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