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Martian

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I like writing poetry sometimes, and I'd like to share this one with you. I wanna know how you guys interpret the meaning of it, though it is pretty obvious...

I Will Not Disappear.

You see me
Like you see a shadow
There but unimportant
Easily ignorable
Because I am so common
Always there
But sometimes not noticed

You hear me
Like you hear the wind
I’m quiet and in the background
Because I don’t need
Your acknowledgment
Always there
But sometimes not noticed

You think of me
Like you think of your breathing
You don’t
Because I’m none
Of your concern
Always there
But sometimes not noticed

Even though
You do not notice me
I’m there
I have my own
Ambitions and goals
And I don’t need your attention
To accomplish them

But I will not disappear
For someday
You will notice me
I will be more
Than a shadow
Or the wind
Or a breath

I will be
A blinding ray of light
A hurricane
An asthma attack
I will be there
And you will not
Be able to ignore me

But until then
I am happy
With being in the background
But I will not disappear

-- Edited by Jetsir at 20:53, 2008-08-22

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Wow.That was good ^^ I'm pretty sure it's death, correct?

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SoulessAce wrote:

Wow.That was good ^^ I'm pretty sure it's death, correct?




 Umm...I guess I could see how that would work, like death is always there, and you only know it when you die or are close to dying, but what I wrote this for was totally different.

The way the poem can be explained is with one sentence...

"Someday, I'll be famous, but for now, I'm fine with being ignored."

I've always been told that it's not how you start, it's how you finish. So I put that into this poem. Because I'm not known by a large mass of people right now, and even in school, I'm rarely recognized. But someday, I aspire to be a famous voice actress, with a bunch of loving fans. If I can achieve that goal, then I'm fine with my status right now.

That's the message I tried to put into it. So yeah, it's not all that deep, but it's true.



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Well, here's another one...I'll think this'll be my poem thread.

My dear backpack,
how mean could you be?
You swallow all of my things
and don't give them back to me!
Like the project last month,
and the term paper last year,
and every single little trinket,
that I hold so dear!

Your zippers never zip,
and you're always such a mess!
How could something made to be helpful
cause me so much stress!?

I don't know what to do with you!
How mean could you be?
Maybe I'll get a new backpack,
one not quite as mean as thee.

-- Edited by Jetsir at 18:03, 2008-08-20

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xD That poem was funny. That's exactly why I only bring a binder to school!

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Yup, another one....

Why You Can’t Be Mine


How can I tell you
How I feel inside?
When every time I see you
I want to run and hide?

My stomach’s in a twist,
Chills go down my spine.
I like you so much,
But I know you can’t be mine.

Do you know why, my crush?
Why I’m so certain?
It’s because you’re older than me,
And that is why I’m hurting.

I’m Sophomore to your Senior,
Lowly Cadet to your Officer.
You’re technically my boss,
So my heart to you I cannot offer.

You’ll never find this out.
My secrets are well hidden.
And I just can’t wait, I can’t wait until
My feelings for you are ridden.

So, for now, I am your friend
Until you go away.
Until you go away from my heart,
I will eagerly await that day.

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Aww... I loved it!

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Teehee ^^ thanks

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