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kari bunny


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Chapter 1:Run away.

"ACE DONAVAN BUNNY,GET YOUR ARSE DOWN HERE, RIGHT NOW!" roared
13 year old Ace bunny's father.Ace ran down the stairs,he was whereing a
black t-shirt and blue jean's,messy brown hair flopped on his forehead.

"Yes,father" replied Ace camly.The next thing Ace knew he was on the ground
and his cheek hert.

"What have I told you about eating everything" growled his father.His father
was a brown bunny,green eyes and red hair on his forhead,Mr Ryder Bunny.

"I'm s-sorry Father, " said Ace getting up"Maybe I should be more carefull"

"DARN SHTRIGHT" shouted Ryder.Ace sighed.

"Room,now!" said Ryder,Ace walked to his room.It wasn't much a bed and
a few poster's.Ace looked out the window, his street was terrible,it was run
down and the city refused to fix it.

'What if I leave this place?' though Ace to himself.Ace nodded and stood up
Climbing out his window and running towards the main part of town.

*Downtown Acnetropolise*

Ace walked down the street,he looked at everything.Ace smiled to himself a
better life.A new home.He looked at a help wanted sign in a clothes shop.Ace
walked in and the clerk smiled.

"What can i do for you,my boy?" asked the shopkeeper.He was a kind old
man,with graying hair,and king blue eyes,he was in a green polo shirt and
black slackes.

"I-I your sign, you need help" said Ace nervesly.

"Yes,I'am,do you want the job son?" asked The shopkeeper.Ace nodded.

"Okay,you can start tommorow.My name's George by the way" said George.

"I'm Ace,Ace bunny"

End of chapter one,so what did you think,please reviwe.




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lilypupu123


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Cool!

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Peace. Love. Hope.

I believe in Jesus Christ as my savior.

SAYING is one thing, ACTION is another

I'm your typical ACE  and Lexi shipper. Fear me!!!

( )_( ) ( )_( )
(='.'=) (='.'=)
(")_(")(")_(")~~It's so Cute!!!




kari bunny


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thanks

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-Yes I have been converted into a Duckie,GO DUCK AND HIS
GREATNESS xD!
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techarmybannerkl5.jpg
-When everylife meet's another life,Something shall be born-
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PurpleGirly


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Awesome Start!

I never thought of Ace being an abused child?!

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lilypupu123


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I imagined Duck or Lexi being the one....

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Peace. Love. Hope.

I believe in Jesus Christ as my savior.

SAYING is one thing, ACTION is another

I'm your typical ACE  and Lexi shipper. Fear me!!!

( )_( ) ( )_( )
(='.'=) (='.'=)
(")_(")(")_(")~~It's so Cute!!!




Siamese712


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I have a story idea where one of the Loonatics was an abused child, not saying who.

Nice begining.

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I Blamed It On The Dog

Ace: My heart is yours. Now and forever
Lexi: As my heart belongs to you. 

*LOVE*

Ace: I'm more of the flying by the seat of my pants guy
Lexi:There something I'd like to do to the seat of your pants
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lilypupu123


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I wrote a story about Lexi getting abused (wrote it on paper during health class) don't know where it went. :(

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Peace. Love. Hope.

I believe in Jesus Christ as my savior.

SAYING is one thing, ACTION is another

I'm your typical ACE  and Lexi shipper. Fear me!!!

( )_( ) ( )_( )
(='.'=) (='.'=)
(")_(")(")_(")~~It's so Cute!!!




kari bunny


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Thank you for the reviwes guys.

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"Is it just me or is she kinda cute when she's angery",-Hunter(spyro year of the dragon).
-Yes I have been converted into a Duckie,GO DUCK AND HIS
GREATNESS xD!
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techarmybannerkl5.jpg
-When everylife meet's another life,Something shall be born-
quoted by Cynthia The Shinno Elite 4 Champion.
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IceGirl2772


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Interesting beginning, Kari. Can't wait to read the rest.

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kari bunny


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Chapter 2: New school.

Ace awoke on Monday.He dressed in a blue and black tee-shirt,blue jeans and black sneakers and combed his brown hair a little.He lift with his bag on his sholder.The owner had managed to get him a place,run down but
okay non the less.He walked through the front doors and saw a Duck in an orange shirt,blue jeans with thick
messy black hair being thrown against a locker.There was a group of cheerleader giggling nearby at the Duck.
Ace ran over.

"HEY" shouted Ace.They stopped and looked at him.

"Why don't you pick on someone your own size." growled Ace.

"Like you?!" asked a tall human boy with green hair and blue eyes,wearing a football uniform.

"Yeah. You wanna go big shot." said Ace dropping his bag on the floor.He walked up to the boy holding the Duck
he dropped him.By now everyone was watching them. The human ' Eric' looked at him, he decided to leave.

Ace helped the Duck up and smiled.The cheerleaders gave him cat calls.Well Ace anyway.

"I'm Ace Bunny." said Ace.

"Im Danger Duck" replied Duck smiling. Ace grabbed his bag and they went to first period Math.

*Lunch*

Ace learned that his new friend Danger,wanted to be a Police Officer when he was older.Duck had also invited
him to his house after school to do homwork.Ace stared at a bunny in a cheerleading uniform.She was a tannish couler with blond hair over one eye.Ace walked up to her and a cheerleader friend Kelly.

"So girl i got my library card and im checkin you out!" said Ace casully.

"Wow,you must be an angel cause you've fallen from heaven" replied Lexi,before walking away.

End of this chapter,I little short but you got some acixe moments.

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"Is it just me or is she kinda cute when she's angery",-Hunter(spyro year of the dragon).
-Yes I have been converted into a Duckie,GO DUCK AND HIS
GREATNESS xD!
Major.png

techarmybannerkl5.jpg
-When everylife meet's another life,Something shall be born-
quoted by Cynthia The Shinno Elite 4 Champion.
SlamXPizza.jpg
Sapphire A. Star


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Interesting Kari, i never really imagined Duck and Ace in the same school....

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IceGirl2772


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Agreed, Saphire. I never imagined Duck, Ace and Lexi going to the same school.

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