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What happans next? [10 vote(s)]

A. The robots self-destruct: Killing the wraglers in the process
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B.The Aves and Urchins work together to bring down the robots
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C. The Aves end up captured by the Slave Masters
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I'll abridge my story like this, basicly Some friendly aliens called Aves discover planet Earth which they long beilved to be only a fairy tale.

But they quickly discover Earth is now a dystopia, ruled by a coorperation called Ultratech (I know stole it from killer instinct)

In this brave new world the homeless children are captured yearly by wranglers who take them to laboritories to turn them into half animal slaves!

The Aves witness a group of street children being carted of to the labs and decide to rescue them. The last panel leaves the heroic aliens facing the robot police.


So what happans next?



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Martian

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7 veiws and only 2 votes?furious this is pathetic!

Come on people I'm asking for advice!

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PurpleGirly


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I voted!

But, I'm confused.  Is this gonna be an LU story???

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It's not LU per se, but the entire species of Aves look very much like road runners and can be considered spiritual descendants of Rev

-- Edited by Mistress of Fear at 13:20, 2009-02-06

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PurpleGirly


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Ahhh, I see  *Stroke beard*

I'm guessing that's where the 'Ave' part comes form (Avian)

Intresting, where will you be posting it?

(Oh and for the record, I DO NOT have a beard, or any form of facial hair whatsoever!)  Just clearing that up ;)

 

-- Edited by PurpleGirly at 08:31, 2009-02-01

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Seriously I need more votes

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I voted C. Then the Aves can destroy the robots from inside their own strong hold. 83

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Thanks for the votessmile

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.................. Ummmmm........ C?

*has no clue what is going on*

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