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Okay, i am officaly scraping away all my ocs and starting anew. For the role plays i'm in, dont worry Liander, angel, Kit, Katlin and Traintracks will still be there. But my offical ocs are going to be diffrent. Here is one i had made up just today

Name: Emili
AGe: 16
Race/species: fairy
Hair: short and spiky brown
Eyes: green
style: shorts and t-shirts and runners
Icon: a kitten named Fuzzball
Family:  (sisters-oldest to youngest), May, Blue Bell, Flower, Dew, Rain, Sushine.
Powers: she protects animals and can speak to them. Also she has wings so she can fly (duh)
Personality: sweet, kind and hyper
History: (NOT FINISHED YET) Emili (pronounced Emil-eye) is the oddball of the seven fariy sisters. She loves to get dirty and hopes that she can become frineds with other people. Her sister have been raised very fairy-like by thier parents and only talk with each other. But Emili is a special case as her mother lost her when she was born. Emili was raised by, (drumroll) Ducks real mother! (*gasp*) For the first five years of her life. Then her mother found her and took her home but the 'damage' was already done. Emili is a strange fairy and was tutored by Tech for a while. When she see Tech is hurt by some villan, Emili saves him and shows what she really is. Her sisters are angry and leave town in a huff. But Emili doenst care at all.
Flaws: Emili is hyper so she talks alot. Shes annoying and is scared of the dark.

Okay, what do you think? Her sisters arent main ocs so i'm not putting them up. should i pair her up with anyone? (i'm thinking Rev) And should i add more flaws or something?

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She sounds like the beginning of great OC.

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Thanks! 8D but i have no clue as what to keep adding. Shes a great person but i need more lfaws me thinks. And should i have rev as her crush?
Heres another oc, prototype though
Name: ??
Age: 20
Race/Species: ???
Personality: rude, sarcastic, mean but soft on the inside.
Hair: ???
Eyes:???
Style: ripped jeans and leather jacket
Icon: knife
Family: ??? (grandmother)
powers: none, just a good knife fighter
History: she was raised by her grandma because her mom didnt want her.
Help? Her rcae in my mind is tyyed between coyote or human.


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hey thats cool, I made a fairy OC a while ago too, but now mines kinda a dead idea (sorry got off topic) anyways, I love her design, she sounds awesome.

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Thanks! my other oc is a coyote and her names Scout also. Just so you know

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I think you need to stop trying to create OC's before you hurt yourself.

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F you.
Heres another one
Name: Jamie Elizabeth Accent.
Age: 15
species/race: red fox
Hair: black
eyes: blue
fur: red brown.
Style: baggy t-shirt, jeans and her tuoqee.
Icon: her skateboard or her touqee.
Family: Jim (brother), Jenny (mother, Jacob (father)
Powers/skills: shes a gutairist and a skateboarder.
Personality: goffy and nice, this girl is a great friend.
History: Jamie has had a great life. She has a awsome relationship with her bother and dad. Her mother often works alot so she doesnt always see her.
Jamie meets the Loonatics at a skateboard show they are watching. She meets rip first and dislikes him beacuse of his emo Personality but then develops a crush on him. She later kisses him.

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