hmm an un-used character.... *thinking*...how about... Black Velvet
(she seems pretty evil)  ok I'll be her then.

(ZOMG! THEY BOTH FALL IN LOVE WITH HER & BETRAY FOR HER LOVE! 8DDDD)

(Are they working together from the start? 83)

(RIIIIIGHT >> I'll post later...I'm on my iPod xD)

*meanwhile in Acmetropolis....*

*Rev's voice heard from outside the tower*

Rev: DUCK!!! YOU BROKE MY IPOD?????!!!!!!!!!!

(I know, it's a bit confusing, isn't it? Well, we're starting off by writing in script form, similar to how a play works. Then, we'll write it out after. ^^)

SOMEWHERE OUT THERE...

INT. MARTIAN SPACE CRAFT

We PAN DOWN over the scene of an exceedingly large space craft undergoing construction. MARTIAN CLONES can be seen working on the massive shuttle.

At the bottom of the screen, ZOOM IN slowly to MELVIN THE MARTIAN. He is standing before the construction site holding up a blueprint page bigger than his own body.

Switch to first person, MELVIN's perspective. The blueprint is seen rising and falling as he observes both the page and the real life copy.

MELVIN
Oh, goody! My space craft is nearly completed! And it is exactly as I had wanted it to look!

Remain in MELVIN'S P.O.V. A voice is heard from behind:

Yeah, it's looking pretty good so far. But it's gonna need a whole lot of power to work.

Switch to THIRD-PERSON perspective. A figure, which was hiding in the shadows of the space craft, emerges, smirking. CLOSE UP to the person's face.

DEUCE
And I know just where to get some.


THEME SONG



(I hope that wasn't TOO vague... ^^;;;)




-- Edited by SoulessAce on Tuesday 17th of March 2009 06:41:07 PM

SoulessAce wrote:

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(I hope that wasn't TOO vague... ^^;;;)




-- Edited by SoulessAce on Tuesday 17th of March 2009 06:41:07 PM

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No, acctually it was a really good opening... it's not really that, its really the question "Have we started yet?" I honestly cannot tell. and a bit of "where are we going with this?"


Also sorry if I'm being being a pain with this...

 

(Pardon my double-post...)

Yes, we have started, though that was just before the theme song. I'm not sure where this is going for you guys...Brigid and I had a discussion before it started, so we know our basic plot... The rest is up to you guys... :P

Then again, I do have to think up Ace's -____-;;;)

Why is Duck getting yelled at a lot?! XD

Um... is this forum dead? xD

THEN SPAM I SHALL! >8D

...

CHEESE! *runs*

-- Edited by SoulessAce on Saturday 21st of March 2009 02:11:04 PM

lovegreenanred wrote:

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Okay, its dead. This was not one of my better ideas to keep the forum up. TT__TT

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 Maybe it can come alive again...

I just think the problem is no really has a clue how to continue starting it.

 I could help revive it if anyones up for it?



  

ok, I can try...

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*While everyone is making random threats toward Duck, Black Velvet was attempting to steal technology that could enable her to create a dark unbreakable force field around Acmetropolis, traping it's citizens in a dark, powerless city.*

Black Velvet: *sending out her shadow boys to clear her way* This time Acmetropolis will pay. I have something for those Loonatics...that they'll die for.

*she approaches the safe where the technology that she needs is kept...*

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If anyone else wants to continue this thread, heres your chance....