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Thursday afternoon over here!

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Tis Thursday morning here

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Thursday EVENING. 8D

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GREETINGS FROM THE NEAR FUTURE!!!!

2 hours to Friday!!!!

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SPAM!!!!

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GREETINGS FROM FRIDAY MORNING, 8D

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Tis Friday morning here too, Xtream!

But then again...you wrote that when it was Thurday evening (For me, here in Britain)

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So... we getting an update soon?

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THIS WEEKEND.

I PROMISE.

:3

AND I WILL KEEP IT THIS TIME.

I PROMISE.

:3

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Whenever you're ready. I never update. I can't judge. XD

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*shoves her 'Heroes of Might and Madness' out of sight and whistes*

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*angry glare at Emily* >8|

..............*idley types away at her own fanfics* >_____>

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Aww man, does this mean I have to update my story too?

*Types away...*

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Ha! Look at all your guys and your fanfic responsibilities. XD

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OI! YOU! START WRITING THAT FIC YOU TOLD ME ABOUT OR I SHALL BE VERY CROSS!! *points to Lori dramatically*

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*browsing through various fanfiction while eating cheese*

SPAM!!!! ...... again XD

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LOL!

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Dani, I am displeased with the fact that you did not post another chapter. Please hurry or I will be forced to work on Dusk's story D:
Dusk: OOOOOH, the horror! -_-'

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Yes, Danielle. You appeared to have lied to us. I am disappointed in you.

And, Emily! I didn't TELL you about it... I SHOWED you it... XD

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DDD8..But I......;_______________;

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No excuses!

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But I DO have a good excuse.

Our internet has hated me all week.

Plus, I was gone all Wednsday, Thursday, and most of Friday as well as Saturday and Sunday.

AND YOU GUYS KNOW WHAT HAPPENED TO ME FRIDAY.

Basically I was a nervous train wreck on the verge of explosion that day.

Then I went for a 30K bike ride with my freinds from church on Saturday :3

Then Sunday I was at church and out with my horse, trying to break her fear of the pool...which did NOT turn out very well.

Then I was FREAKIN DROWNED BY HOMEWORK ON MONDAY D8

But I'm ALMOST DONE.

On top of all of this, this chapter is the longest yet I believe. :3

I'M WORKING ON IT RIGHT NOW. 8D

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T__________________________________T

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It was beautiful. ;__;

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Danielle, we don't want excuses, we want results. On top of that, it's Wednesday. Where is our chapter?

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COMING

TONIGHT

I HAVE FIVE OR SO PARAGRAPHS TO FINISH

AND I'M DOING THEM RIGHT NOW.

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Happy?

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Yus. 83

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Good :3

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HURRY THOOOOOUUUUGH!! D8

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Kay, so it isn't as long as I had planned. But it's better than nothing, right?

Also,
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Chapter 3: "Bed Time Story"
 
Later that day, after a good long rest, the gang headed back to the hospital with Cale, Vanessa, AJ, and Quinton, of course. Little Cale was extremely excited to see her little sister for the first time.
 
"Hola, Cassidy! We're back!" Quick called out as she came into the hospital room carrying Quinton, followed by Seth, who had Cale on his shoulders, along with Ace, Lexi, Duck, Slam, Mairi, and the twins. Cassidy was sitting up, holding her newborn in her arms. Tech and Rev were sitting in chairs beside the bed.
 
Cassidy looked up and smiled. "Hey guys."
 
"Heard you were feelin better, so we decided to come pester you for a while." Seth explained before plopping Cale down on the bed.
 
"Mommy!!!" Cale squealed as she crawled across the bed to hug Cassidy. "Can I hold baby sis?" She asked, holding out her arms.
 
"Sure, Rosebud.." Cassidy replied as she helped Cale hold the baby properly. She showed her older daughter how to use her arm to support her baby sister's neck and head.
 
Cale's smile grew as big as it could and she held the little coyote as close as possible. Cassidy hugged her. "You finally have your baby sister..."
 
"What's we gonna call her?" Cale asked.
 
"Yeah! Spit it out! What's the name?" The gang turned around to see Icy standing at the door. She blinked, staring back at them. "What? I crashed for a nap. I've basically been up since one this morning." She shrugged.
 
Cassidy and Tech gazed at each other for a few moments. Then Cassidy broke the silence. "Felicia."
 
"Eliza." Tech continued.
 
"Coyote." The said together.
 
"Felicity!!!" Cale squealed, recognizing the name she so desperately wanted to name her baby sister.  
 
Mazz let out a near-deafening squeal. "THAT IS THE CUTEST. NAME. EVER!" She then held out her hands. "Let me hold her." She ordered.
 
Cale giggled and held Felicity out to her aunt, who immediately scooped her up into her arms and began cooing over the coyote pup.

True to Icy's and Tech's predictions, Cassidy made a pretty quick rebound from her ordeal. Ready to go home the next day. Well, in her own opinion she was. According to the doctors she was still too weak to leave. Cassidy pouted for the whole time she was there. Which ended up being a whole week.

About half-way through that week, Tech received an unusual call on his cell phone.

"Daddy?"

"Cale? What's the matter?"

"Can I talk to Mommy please?"

Tech glanced over at Cassidy, who was asleep with Felicity. "Sorry, Princess, but Mommy's asleep. What do you need?"

Cassidy rubbed her eyes. "No, mommy is awake and wants to talk to her oldest daughter."

"But Cass you should be resting, especially if you want-"

"Tech."

"But-"

"Give me the phone."

"Cass-"

"Now."

Tech sighed and handed her the cell phone, smiling a bit. Cassidy held it up to her mouth. "Rosebud? What's the matter honey?"

"Nothin' Mommy!" Cale answered cheerfully. "I just wanna ask you somethin', kay?"

"Okay, Rosebud. What is it?"

"Is it okay if Eric comes to see Felicity? He already asked his daddy and he says that it's okay and he'd really like to see her coz he's never really seen a baby up close and I've been telling him all about Felicity!"

Cassidy giggled. "Of course he can, Rosebud. As long as Aunty Icy's okay with bringing him here."

"Yay!! Aunty Mairi already said it was okay, too!!! I'll be there soon Mommy!!"

"Okay, I'll be waiting. Bye Rosebud!"

"Bye Mommy!"

When Cassidy closed the phone, Tech gave her a curious look. "What did she want to ask?"

"She wanted to know if it was okay that Eric visit."

Tech frowned automatically. "Eric..... Cass, you know-"

Cassidy held up her hand. "I know, I know. You don't trust him."

"Then why did you say yes?"

"Because I do trust him. He's a sweet and innocent little boy. The only reason why you don't is because you are an overprotective father!"

Tech just smirked. They had had this discussion/fight several times and it became shorter and shorter each time.

About ten or so minutes later, Mazz came into the room, holding Cale's hand while Cale held Eric's. "Mommy!! We're here!"

Cassidy smiled before sitting up a bit. "Hi Eric. How are you?"

Eric smiled nervously. "Hi Mrs. Coyote."

"Come on, Eric. Sit up here so you can see her!" Cale said while climbing on to the hospital bed and sitting down at Cassidy's side. Eric nervously followed, sitting in front of Cale. He stared at Felicity, whom Cale was holding at that moment, for several silent moments.

"Do you want to hold her?" Cassidy asked him.

Eric blinked, then nodded. "I never held a baby before."

"I'll show you!!" Cale piped up. She then held Felicity out to Eric and showed him the proper way to hold her baby sister. Eric sat there with Felicity in his arms, staring unblinkingly for several more minutes.

At this point, Felicity was awake, and studying the new face she was being introduced to. She reached out with her hand and grabbe Eric's nose. Eric, surprised by the infant's action and the feeling of fur on his nose, sneezed. Felicity stared at her hand for several minutes trying to figure out what the gooey stuff on her hand was, then panicked, not liking it. "AHAHAHAH!" She squealed, obviously upset.

Cassidy tried to reach for the box of kleenexes that were on the table beside her, but before she could, Mazz already had a disinfectant wipe out and was cleaning Felicity's hand. Cassidy smiled. 

So, the week wore on and Cass was still not allowed out of the hospital for two reasons. One, she was running a slight fever. Two, she was not eating normally.

Eventually Tech was able to get the doctors to realize that Cassidy was running a fever because of her fire powers. They keep her body temperature slightly higher than normal. But she wasn't eating because the food they were giving her at the hospital made her sick. Thankfully, Rev was able to sneak her in some special strawberry quick pick me up shakes. The others also brought chocolates and stuff, and sometimes even pizza.

"If it weren't for you guys, I'd die of starvation here." Cassidy said one day after biting into her first peice of pizza since being in the hospital.
 
Finally Cassidy and Felicity were both released from the hospital. Just in time to go to bed. 
 
Cassidy and Tech kept Felicity in their room, knowing that the pup would be up every couple of hours. They definitately didn't want Cale awake as well. 
 
Just a little past nine that night, Ozzie snuck into Cale's room. He liked to check on her for Tech and Cass, knowing they had enough to worry about being up with Felicty.

The ferret quietly climbed up the sheets on Cale's bed, being careful to not wake the young girl. The past few days had been long and exciting and the little girl must be exhausted. Once he had made it to the top, he paused, studying Cale's face. The room was very dark, and Ozzie could only make out the outline of the young coyote's face. Ozzie yawned before curling himself into a ball, with his tail tucked around his fuzzy body. Just before he could fall asleep, a small voice piped up. 
 
"Mr. Magic Ferret?"
 
Darn it. She had been awake the whole time. "Yeah, Cale?" Ozzie replied.
 
"I can't sleep."
 
"Have you tried counting sheep?"

Cale nodded.
 
"How about just closing your eyes and thinking about sleeping?"
 
Cale nodded again. "It doesn't work."
 
"Hhhhmmm.." Ozzie sat there for a moment, thinking, then said. "Do you want me to read you a story?"
 
Cale's face brightened up, even though Ozzie could barely see it. "Please Mr. Magic Ferret?"
 
Ozzie smiled. "Sure, honey." He clambered up to Cale's pillow and plopped himself down. "Let's see..... Once upon a time, there was a girl... Her name was Kayleigh. Kayleigh and her freinds lived in a big house."
 
"A tower?!" Cale asked.
 
Ozzie laughed. "Yeah, a tower. One day, something very good happened."
 
"What?!" Cale gasped, eager to know.
 
"Kayleigh had a baby. The baby's name was Zoey. Just a few weeks after she was born, something bad happened..."
 
"Oh no!" Cale gasped again, only this time with a sad face. "What happened?!"
 
Ozzie lifted his head to face the wall and he paused and began to think about exactly what happened that day....
 
(Flashback..)
 
"DUCK! WHERE IS IT?!!!"
 
"What did I do now?"
 
"You stole my music blaster! I know it!!" Quick marched up to Duck.
 
"I didn't steal nothin of yours!" The mallard snapped back at her.
 
"Well then, where is it?" The mouse crossed her arms and glared at Duck.
 
"How would I know?" Duck replied.
 
Tech, who had just walked into the room from his lab, interrupted. "Quick. It's in Cale's room. You left it there last night while you were playing with her."
 
Quick's eyes went wide. "Oh. Okay...Gracias Tech." She muttered as she ran off to find her missing property. Upon entering her little neice's room, she found Cassidy sitting in a chair, holding three-week-old Cale in her arms. "Hola Cass. I just came in here looking for-" She paused when the coyote held up her music player. "Hehe, thanks!" She was about to run out of the room when she noticed little Cale looking at her with her big, lime green eyes. The mouse bent closer to her niece and smiled sweetly. "Heya nina! You little cutie!"

Cassidy smiled. "Look, Quick... She's starting to grow hair.." She stroke her infant's head, showing the few strands of fire-red hair pushing through her sandy brown fur.
 
"Your hair and Tech's eyes. Encantadora!"
 
"Thanks Quick." Cassidy stood up slowly, trying not to wake the sleeping girl as she set her down in her crib. She stayed beside it for a few moments, gazing down softly at her baby. "You know what, Quick?...Tech and I never thought we could have kids...."

"Really?" Quick asked, surprised. "But why?"
 
"I'm from Sari. I may look a lot like you guys, aside from the obvious, but inside... my genetics are a lot different..... There was a big possibilty it just... wouldn't work.." The coyote's voice was solemn, but her face said otherwise. She was beaming.
 
Quick smiled. "Aren't you glad it did?!" She said as she hugged her freind.
 
"Well, honey, they were attacked..."
 
"Attacked?! By who?!"
 
CRASH! BANG! SNAP!!!
 
The girls spun around in surprise. "Dios mio!!" Quick gasped. "What the heck was that?!"
 
"Let's go find out." Cassidy suggested as the pair ran out of the room and into the main room of HQ, only to see the scene of the roof being torn away, and dozens and dozens of strange, cloaked men jump into the room through the hole they were making.
 
Well, they looked strange to Icy, Seth, Quick, Mairi, Ozzie, and Dusk.
 
But not to Cassidy, Tech, Duck, Ace, Lexi, Rev, ad Slam.
 
Cassidy's eyes narrowed and a loud growl escaped from her throat. "The Starzians..."
 
(END OF THE FREAKIN' CHAPTER)
 
Kayleigh and Zoey are actually prototype names that I had considered for Cassidy and Cale. :3

KAY! I HAZ FIXED IT! \8D/



-- Edited by CassidyCoyote on Thursday 28th of May 2009 01:22:49 AM

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8DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

I LOVE HOW MAIRI DEMANDS TO HOLD THE BABY! XD

I also love that the upcoming fighting scene was coordinated by me. 83

I think this is a good place to end it, though, in all honesty. The intensity of the next chapter would be too much for the end of this one. And it's a nice little cliffhanger. ^__^

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...

WAIT A MINUTE.

I FREAKIN' FORGOT SOMETHING.

LIKE, AN ENTIRE SCENE.

THAT WAS SUPPOSED TO BE CUTE

AND FUNNY.

*scurries off to fix story*

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Wow, a cliff-hanger!

I like how you've told it as a bedtime story, rather than a flash back!

Good job, I can't wait for more!

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You can thank Xtream for that.

She gave me the idea. :3

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Ahhh, I see!

I shall thank her...though some how I think she'll have no idea what I'm thanking her for, but oh well!

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Dudeeeeeeeee... you just blew my mind... MA MIND...

That was good! Though I did note a few spelling/ grammar issues. Still! It was funny to see you use the whole Eric sneezes thing. XD

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:D *explodes with happiness* BTW, how come Dusk is there in the PAST but not with them when Felicia is born?

(WHEN DOES SETH HOLD THE BABY? :D)

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SETH NEEDS TO HOLD THE BABY!

And mairi is teh epic chilcarer. 83

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*scribbles in notebook* Have Seth hold Felic....

As for the Dusk thing... I don't know. XD I'm horrible when I have too many characters to think about. XD

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8DD

I love how the flashback begins with Quick yelling at Duck XD That's classic.
Awwww little Felicity 83 that really IS a cute name X3.

I also liked when Ozzie cuddled up to Cale, but she was awake the whole time XD

FINALLY the chapter has come...........now I can't wait for the big fight scene >8D

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THE BIG FIGHT SCENE WHICH EMILY CHOREOGRAPHED! EXCEPT SHE PROLLY SPELT IT WRONG! \8D/

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AWESOME!!!!

I loved the way the flashback/story started with Quick and Duck arguing XD

*bangs table* FIGHT SCENE!! NAOW!!!

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Hehe, Ice, Quick, Seth, Dusk, and Ozzie are about to get history lesson :3

Coz Cass basically has to spill everything about the Starzians and Andrew.

Because in my world, they come in right after Andrew's death.

LOTS OF SECRETS TO COME! 8D

Here's a little bit. :3

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Just as Cassidy was about to follow the others, Tech grabbed her arm and pulled her back.

"Tech, I know what you're gonna say-"

Tech gently placed his finger against her lips. "No you don't. I know that you're mad at Mazz."

"Yes I am. She practically led the Starzians to Cale! She should have stayed out of this! Because of her, they have Cale!"

"No Cass..... no.... Because of Mazz, Cale has someone to protect her. You know that."

Cassidy stared at the ground. "Tech... I..."

"I know.." He said, pulling her into a hug. "I'm scared for them too.."
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Seth glanced at Duck. He had been unusually quiet during their trip. Duck caught his glance and frowned. "Yes? Do you need something?"

Seth shrugged. "No..........." He paused. "You're just........ quiet...... I've never seen you keep that bill of yours still for more than two minutes..."

Duck huffed and crossed his arm. "Harhar! Very funny, Mr. Alchemy."

Seth was silent for a moment, thinking. Then he gave Duck and soft punch in the arm. "Hey, don't worry. Mazz will be fine."

"Who said I was worried?"

"You did." Seth replied simply, trying to not let the mallard's sharp answers get to him. "I'd feel the same way if Quick were captured."
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I don't think the second part will be in this chapter... but we'll see... :3

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OH-HO! MAIRI IN THE SPOTLIGHT!

Bet you kids didn't see THAT one coming. ;D

Also. Duck's love for Mairi is well hidden. 83

But Seth sees right into his soooouuuul.

ALSO! Silly Cassidy. Even if Mairi DID lead the baddies to Cale, now Cale has someone to sing to her. ^__^

And that's all that matters.

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XtreamCrazy wrote:

OH-HO! MAIRI IN THE SPOTLIGHT!

Bet you kids didn't see THAT one coming. ;D

Also. Duck's love for Mairi is well hidden. 83

But Seth sees right into his soooouuuul.

ALSO! Silly Cassidy. Even if Mairi DID lead the baddies to Cale, now Cale has someone to sing to her. ^__^

And that's all that matters.




 LOL

The sneak peak intrigues me, I can't wait for the next update, Cassidy!
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Dane! This is good! And I couldn't beleive how well you got Ozzie's personality down! You hit the nail right on the head! D8

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Just wait till you see the cover I drew for this. 8D

Tis awesomeness 83

Also, there will be a delay for the next chapter. I have only this week and next week left of school before summer, so I'm focusing on school so I can get it done so I don't have to go for the second week of summer school. As soon as that is out of the way, I will continue writing for the story. The only writing I'm doing besides for school is for the roleplays, to keep my interest focused on it

Sorry for anything that may result from this. But it's easier if I do it this way. Coz if I try to write now, it'll end up being crappy coz I won't be focused. 83

Thanks for reading! *HUGZFOREVERYONE*

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*tries to build a time machine* XD

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*waits eagerly* :3

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