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Akira_Cat


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Page 2 is up! Enjoy aww.gif

 
But before you think about reading this, I've got some points I want to say to you.

 
* This comic is read in traditional manga style so you'll have to read from right to left rather than your normal western left to right. It's confusing at first but you will get it eventually.

 
* You may see some of those Japanese symbols like the ones on panel three and five in the comic. Those symbolise sound effects. You have your symbol, then the pin-yin for it (what it says in Japanese) and in brackets the English translation of the sound effect. The bigger the symbol, the louder and dramatic the sound seems.

 
Please tell me what you think of the preview comics or pages so far and if you can tell me how to improve on it. There is a shiny bit in one corner that I should have got rid of but the scanner's busted and I had to use a digital camera instead.

 
But for now, enjoy aww.gif



-- Edited by Akira_Cat on Friday 19th of June 2009 05:43:23 AM

-- Edited by Akira_Cat on Friday 26th of June 2009 01:50:14 AM

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It was a little confusing at first, with the having to read from right to left, but otherwise good. I can't wait to see more! 83

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Ha! Danni has to get used to the classic manga style of reading from right to left. XD

This is very good! Continue please! =3

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Poor Danni. Not akin to our manga ways. *shakes head*

That looked great! 8D

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Hey, nice start, and I love the drawing!

I wonder what will happen?!

I can't wait for more!

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Japanese LU art =D havent seen one in a while hope to see more of the comic i will admit i dont get the reading right to left thing in japanese comics but i finally understood x3 nice work

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So it this based of the song 'Ring around the roseies' ?

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Siamese712 wrote:

So it this based of the song 'Ring around the roseies' ?


Nope. Although it may get a mention. I just watched an anime "Higurashi no naku koro ni" and I thought of some one posting a comment saying I don't write death fics on here. So I thought it will be fun and do that kind of thing in comic form.

Page 2 will hopefully be up so bear with me.

 



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HCoyote wrote:

Japanese LU art =D havent seen one in a while hope to see more of the comic i will admit i dont get the reading right to left thing in japanese comics but i finally understood x3 nice work


Yeah, you'll get it eventually. Thanks for commenting aww.gif

 



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no problem ;3

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Wow!! I didn't know that there was a difference between Western and Traditional Manga *feels noobish* D8

Good job! 8D

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Hmm, interesting - Suspence!

I can't wait for the next one, Akira!  biggrin

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AWESOME!

wait...who died?

Who died?!?

Akira, WHO DIED!?!?!?!?!?!?!

*hyperventilates and passes out*

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ktgirlawesome wrote:

AWESOME!

wait...who died?

Who died?!?

Akira, WHO DIED!?!?!?!?!?!?!

*hyperventilates and passes out*


She can't tell you. It'll spoil the comic.

Your gonna have to wait.

-- Edited by I_See_Your_True_Colours on Tuesday 30th of June 2009 08:30:04 PM

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ktgirlawesome wrote:

AWESOME!

wait...who died?

Who died?!?

Akira, WHO DIED!?!?!?!?!?!?!

*hyperventilates and passes out*


That is something I cannot tell you as Colours have said. Only I know who will die so I'm going to leave you in the dark for now.

 



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