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Well he better put that plan into action fast! Before 'Freaky Frieda' crashes the party for everyone! And couldn't Tech just have responded to Freida's "You kept spurning me!" with a "Because i don't love you!", rather than "Because i love Mallorey!" which is bound to aggravate her more! 

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Good idea! I'll fix that right now.

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Ch. 15: The Party's Just Begun


Back at the Lab, the Loonatics and the temp allies were still stuck in the glue. Jamie had an idea on how to get out.


Jamie: Ace, use your laser vision. It will harden the glue, and we can crack our way out.


Ace: Good idea, Jamie.


Ace uses his laser vision. The glue begins to harden and crack. Everyone shokeand the glue crumbles. They were free.


Ace: Jamie, take Rev and Mallory, and find Tech. Duck, you, Zadavia, and Massivefind the satellite that controls the robots so you can destroy it. Me, Lexi, Sypher, and Slam will try and stop frieda and her Battle-bots.


Jamie: Okay. Be careful.


They split up again. Meanwhile, Frieda has already changed into Mallory, and hiding in the bleachers, typing "initiate" in her laptop. The robots in the Robo-Arena started coming to life and began to move. They were heading into the tunnels and arrived in the gym. The alumni were befuddled, wondering where the battle-bots came from. Then, Frieda showed herself in Mallory form. Everyone gasped thinking it was the real Mallory.


Frieda: Mastermind is back and ready to party!


Frieda programmed her laptop to self-type and it typed the word "attack"


Frieda: Eliminate my former-chums, My Robot Army!


The robots aimed their weapons at the people. The class ran screaming trying to get to the exits, but Frieda barricaded the outside with old beams and chains.


Frieda: What's your hurry? The Party's just started.


One robot fired its laser at Dr. Kelser, but he dodges each shot.


Dr. kelser: I don't know who that is, but that is not Mallory Mastermind. An explosive approach is not her style.


The alumni were dodging all the ammo all of the robots have. They even ducked behind the tables. Frieda was laughing as her huge head off. Slam blew the doors off with his tornado spin.


Ace: Nice going, Slam.


The four ran inside to stop the robots.


Frieda: The Losertics!


Ace fired his laser vision at the laser firing robots, causing them to explode. Sypher was getting the classmates out in a hurry.


Sypher: Everyone out now!


They ran out like he said. Lexi fired her brain blast at three bladebots.


Lexi: Loonatics: 2. Battle-bots: 0.


Slam was going against two mace-carrying robots. They charged at him, but Slam blew them back and smashed them. More deadly robots came out of the tunnels and surrounded the four. Meanwhile, Jamie, Mallory, and Rev were looking for tech.


Mallory: Tech!


Rev: Tech-old-buudy,-where-are-you?


Tech heard his friends calling for him.


Tech: Over here, Guys!


rev, Jamie, and Mallory ran to where he is. They saw him wrapped in the metal cocoon. Jamie formed an energy sword with her hands.


Jamie: Stand back, Guys!


Jamie cut Tech out of the cocoon.


Jamie: Come on! We got to stop Frieda before she turns the party into a disaster!


Jamie and Rev ran ahead. Mallory was about to run, but tech grabbed her arm


Mallory: What is it, Tech?


Tech: Mallory, I need you to go back to the lab make something that will stop Frieda from shapeshifting her way out. I'll take care of her myself.


Mallory: Tech, no. Frieda power makes her invincible now that she has our powers. You could get hurt..or worse.


Tech:Mallory, I can regenerate myself. But you can't, That is why I am asking you to stay out of harm's way. Do it for us.


Tech put his hand behind Mallory's head and kissed her for the longest time.


 



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I take it you love it, huh?

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Alright! Finally some action!!!!! The mama drama is now over!!!

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I prefer to forget that last sentence: Tech kissing Mastermind?! Ugh! Apart from that, the plot's okay.

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Chapter 16: Robo-Battle


Scene: The Roof of the Main Building


Zadavia, Massive, and Duck were on top of the roof of the Main Building. They see the Satellite being guarded by two ninja-star shooters.


Duck: Guess Freaky Frieda decided to take precaustions.


Massive: No problem. I'll just use my gravity powers.


Massive used his gravity powers but no effect.


Massive: Something's wrong. Why couldn't my powers work?


Zadavia: Frieda must have installed a gravity stablizer to counter your power.


Duck: Like I said, serious precaustions.


Massive: New plan. We need to get passed them.


Zadavia: We'll need a distraction.


They both look at Duck deviously.


Duck: Don't tell me. Me again.


Zadavia: Look on the bright side, Duck. You'll get back at Frieda for calling you scrawny.


Massive: Huh?


Zadavia: Don't ask.


Duck: you're right. It's payback time! (approaches robots) Hit the Duck and win a prize!


The robots shoot ninja-stars at Duck but he keeps quacking.Duck finally shoots his orbs at them, causing them to explode.


The three run toward the satellite, but some blade-bots stood in front of the satellite. Back at the gym, Rev, Tech, and Jamie ran in and saw Ace, Lexi, Slam, and Sypher surrounded by the Battle-bots.


Jamie: (running toward them) Anyone up for a game of Shock-A-Bot?!


Jamie turns into living electricityand starts shocking ten bots. All of them were exploding. Rev ran with his drill.


Rev: Stand-back! This-is-a-emergency-drill!


Rev spins around two robots while there was a driilling noise. All of the lug nuts and screws fell off the robots and they fell apart. Tech got out the ray gun he made earliar and started balsting a few bots. More battle-bots were going after Jamie. She turns into living electricity and goes inside one of the mace-bots. She starts whacking some robots. Then she came out of the mace-bot and gives it her famous attack: The Electric Uppercut. That bot exploded.


Jamie: Three watts and your out.


Most of the robots were in pieces but more keep coming. Meanwhile, Zadavia and Massive were running from the Blade-bots when Duck quacked in.


Duck: Hey, Blade Brains!


They looked toward Duck as he made a face at them. They moved toward him and try to slash him. Duck quacks out on time, and the robots end up slashing the satellite in half. The blade-bots instantly shut down.


Zadavia: Nice going, Duck.


Duck: Another heroic done by Danger Duck!


Massive: (to Zadavia) Now you've done it.


The robots at the gym had the rest of the gang surrounded. Frieda, still in Mallory form, was excitedto see the demise of the Loonatics, especially Tech. Suddenly the robots were shutting down.


Jamie: Duck and the others must have succeeded.


Frieda: No! You ruined my plans!


Dr. Kelser: Get over yourself...Frieda!


Frieda: (changes back) How did you know it was me, Dr. Kelser?


Dr. Kelser: That boastful laugh of yours gave it away. Besides, the Mallory I know would never hurt Jamie. They are like two peas of the same pod.


 


Frieda's secret is now discovered. We are getting close to the final battle, frieda's new alias, and the surprises I have mentioned earlier.



-- Edited by StellaMagic at 20:33, 2006-11-09

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Good as always Stellamagic . Keep it up!

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Ch 17: Final Battle


Tech: I don't get it, Frieda. You would risk hurting all of our classmates just to lash out at Mallory?


Frieda: And you for dumping me for her! And please. Now that my secret is out, call me Chimera, a powerful shapeshifter with a with a firey temper.


Tech: And just as mixed up!


Chimera turned into Duck and threw a fire orb at the Loonatics. Luckily, they ducked.


Jamie: You're going down, Chimera!


Chimera: Actually, you'll be going down, Sullivan.


Chimera takes a bazooka from the bleachers. She shoots giant staples at the Loonatics, Sypher, Jamie, and Dr. Kelser, causing them to get stuck against the wall or floor. Tech was the only one left standing.


Chimera: Amazing what you can do on your spare time. (To Tech) It's just you and me, Tech.


Tech: I'm gonna make you pay for ruining Mallory's life!


Chimera: (changes into Ace) Bring it on, Coyote!


Tech charges at Chimera. Chimera hops away from Tech. Both of them nearly stepped on Sypher, who is stuck on the floor.


Sypher: Hey! Watch where you're stepping, Dudes!


Tech tries to punch Chimera, but she karate kicks him. Tech fell to the floor, but he grabs Chimera by the ankle and throws her across the room. Chimera transforms into Duck and quacks out before she could hit the wall. She quacked in developing a fire ball.


Chimera: Fire in the hole!


She throws it at Tech, but he dodged it.


Jamie: Get her, Tech! Remember! She sabotage Mallory's machine and made her into a crook!


Dr. Kelser: I knew that brat had something to do with the accident!


Chimera changed into Lexi, and tried to brain-blast Tech, but he dodged every shot she made and finally hit her. Chimera changed into Rev and went after him at super speed.


Chimera: Special delivery, Coyote!


Chimera spun around Tech whlie she was hitting him. Tech was taking every blow, but he stopped her by tripping her. Chimera put on Rev's fire wings and grabbed Tech by the cape he was wearing. They were flying toward the ceiling fast.


Tech: (repeating what Duck said) Wear the cape and boots you won at our bet, Tech. They will make you look heroic.


Chimera swung Tech against the wall and then he fell to the floor.


Tech: Ow. (regenerates)


Chimera was about to torpedo at Tech from the air, but she was pulled back by Massive. He, Duck, and Zadavia came at just the right time.


Jamie: Duck, a little help here!


Duck: On it!


Duck threw an orb  at Jamie's right hand and freed it. Jamie pulled off all of her staples. Then she and Duck have begun freeing the others. Massive and Zadavia were tending to Chimera, who already changed back.


Zadavia: Is this all you have to show for, Frieda? Bitterness and revenge! You caused this mess and the wedge between Tech and Mallory all because you couldn't get what you want! You could have done something more positive with your talents like Tech did.


Chimera: I always get what I want! Right now, I want revenge for my humiliation!


She changes into Massive and used his gravity powers to smash the two of them against the wall. They fainted.


Duck: (running toward Chimera) I had enough of this, You Psychoshifter!


Chimera changes into Duck and dips her hands in two cups of water.


Chimera: I read all about your powers, Duck, including...Aqua Dense!


Chimera shoots high beams at Duck and smashes him against the wall. Duck was moaning in pain. Jamie and Slam were freeing Ace. All of the others were free. Rev was running after Chimera.


Rev: Lets-see-if-you-like-taking-a-few-hits!


Rev begins hitting Chimera the same way she hit Tech earlier. Then, she punches him in the face knocking him out cold.


Tech: Rev!


Tech angrily charges at Chimera. Both were now in hand-to-hand. Chimera changes into Ace again so she could fight better. She and Tech were struggling against each other. Jamie was ruuning to them with an energy lasso.


Jamie: Hold her tight, Tech!


Jamie was about to rope Chimera, but she turned itno Slam, grabbed the both of them, and slammed them against the bleachers.


Chimera: Any last words before I destroy you?!


Tech: There is. I was stalling for time. Mallory, now!


Mallory slapped a metal collar on Chimera's neck, changing her back to Frieda.


Chimera: What's going on? What is this thing on my neck.


Mallory: It's my neutra-collar. It cancels out any power from the meteor's radiation, even your shapeshifting.


Chimera: That's not fair, Casey!


Jamie: (lassoing Chimera) What's not fair is you pitting my two best friends against each other just to get what you want! (tying Chimera up) You crossed the line, You Ego-Maniac! And by the way, that last-name basis has worked my last nerve!


Jamie, Mallory, and Tech drag a tied-up Chimera outside so the police can come and get her.


 


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Gee, doesn`t that last part seem familiar...

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Yay! They defeated the witch! Good work Stella! All you have to do is make Tech and Mallory go "kissy wissy woo" ! :smooch!:

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Chapter 18: Happy Ending for All (except Frieda)


Scene: Outside the University


The Police have already arrived to take the villains away. They were already hauling Massive and Sypher onto the paddywagon.


Massive: Well, we were bound to go back.


Sypher: Yeah.


Two cops were cuffing Chimera (still wearing the collar). As she walked to the paddywagon with them, she sees her dad, who looked really disappointed.


Chimera: Daddy, you'll get me out of this, right? You would never lock up your little girl!


Max: You casued damage to my robots, the university, and to Mallory and Tech's relationship! A little jail time may do you some good.


The cops hauled her onto the paddy wagon with Massive and Sypher. Max walked up to Tech.


Max: Tech, I want to apologize to what my little girl did. Since her mom and I divorced, I have been spoiling her too much. She was use to getting attention.


Tech: I'm just glad Mallory is finally clear of the accident.


Mallory was walking into the paddywagon. She gave one last glance at Tech and smiled at him. Tech smiled back. Jamie was giving her grandfather, Chief Jeff Sullivan, the reprogrammer and Frieda's laptop as edvidence.


Jeff: Nice job, Kiddo. You've finally solved your private case.


Jamie: Thanks, Grandpa. What's gonna happen to Mallory?


Jeff: I talked to the judge. Because she helped save her classmates and was falsely arrested for a crime she didn't commit, she will be given parole in a few months.


Jamie: That's great.


Scene: Cookie's Subs


The next day, Jamie got a call from Zadavia inviting her to lunch at Cookie's. Jamie walked right in and saw Zadavia sitting at a table. She sat down with her.


Jamie: You wanted to see me, Zadavia?


Zadavia: I did. I invited you to dinner because I have a proposition for you.


Jamie: What kind of proposition?


Zadavia: This is something that Rev has suggested.


Jamie: Rev? Go on.


Zadavia: i was very proud of what you did at the reunion, Jamie. You've shown great loyalty and devotion for your friends and helped save AcmeTech from Chimera. I want to ask if you wish to join the Loonatics.


Jamie: Me a Loonatic?


Zadavia: I promise that you will still have your job at the Forensics Lab, and work more closely with Rev.


Jamie: (giggles) Well if Rev wants to join, I-I How can I argue? Okay, I'll join the Loonatics.


Zadavia: Also, I have one thing to ask. you assigned Chimera cell 17A. Isn't that Weathervane's cell?


Jamie: It is. Lets just say that when I looked into Weathervane's file, I found out she and Tech share a common enemy. (flash to prison)


Scene: Subterranean Prison-Weathervane and Chimera's cell


Chimera was getting zapped by Weathervane. She knew her as Paula Haze from high school...as one of her victims of bullying.


Weathervane: (yelling) Payback time, Frieda! *zaps her again* This is for all the lunch money you took from me! *zaps her again* this is for all the guys you stole from me! *zaps her again* And for all those times you would beat me up!


Chimera: This isn't over yet, Tech! I will get out and I will get even!


What she doesn't know is that Tech had the security camera in their room hooked up so an injured, bandaged, and bedridden Duck would have some real entertainment. (flash to Duck in his room)


Duck: Now this is funny! (laughs hysterically) Owy!


Back at the prison, Mallory was back in her cell. She was just reading when she saw the warden and Jamie coming in.


Warden: You have a visitor, Mastermind.


Mallory: (hugging Jamie) Hi Jamie.


Jamie: Hey, Mallory. (both sit on Mallory's bed)


Jamie: I heard you were joining the Loonatics. Hoping to work more closely with Rev?


Jamie: (blushing) Yeah. You know I still have a crush on him. I have since he and I were kids.


Mallory: Thanks, Jamie, for clearing me of the accident, for not giving up on me, for getting me and Tech back together, for everything.


Jamie: What are best friends for?


Suddnely, a red wind zoomed past the girls.


Jamie: Was that Rev?


Mallory felt something right underneath her pillow. She lifts it off and sees a black box.


Jamie: What is it?


Mallory opens it and sees the ring Tech was gonna propose to her with. There was also a note inside.


Mallory: (reading the note) This is for the true #1 brain in my heart. I'll wait for the day when you make parole and feel ready for our next adventure together. ~Luv, Tech


Tech and Rev were two floors up. Rev zooms Tech out when the girls turned and saw them. Mallory smiles and puts the ring on.


Jamie: You're the luckiest girl in the world, Mallory.


Mallory: You're right. I am lucky.


Flash to a picture of Mallory, Jamie, Rev, and Tech wearing summer clothes during a summer at a lake. This shows how their friendship and love still stands.


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He He! Weathervane knew Freida as well! Seems like nearly all the season 1 villains have had a pot shot at Freaky Frieda now! A somewhat overly mushy ending for me, but at least it's a happy one!

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Thanks Black Oracle. I appreciate the compliment. What did you guys think of Jamie?

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Well Jamie certainly must have been a very good friend of Mallory's to persist so long into investigating Mallory's earlier accident case. Wish i could see what she looks like.

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I'll see about posting fanart as soon as I can.

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LOL! Weathervane and Frieda enemies from school!? That's great!

And that part were Frieda finally gets caught... I could almost picture her saying: "I could have gotten away with it too, if it weren't for you meddling kids!"

And even though it's a MalloryxTech, I did, overall, like the story! *tosses ya a cookie*

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Thanks, kaejae. Nice art. Do you think you can do a tech/Mallory art.

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Thanks, kaejae. Nice art. Do you think you can do a tech/Mallory art.


Hmmmm... is this mushy Tech/Mallory art?


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It can be a scene from my story. Besides, imagine the challenge. I'm an artist too. I know how some prefer a challenge.

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What did you have in mind?

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The part either where Mallory and Tech danced together or where they kissed near the end.

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I'll do the dancing bit, 'cause I can handle that  ;)



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Yeah, the delusional  is gone! What neat action/pitch of romance fic!!

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Aaaaawwww !  Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh!!! I don't know if it's a happy ending cos Frieda's defeated or a sad ending cos Tech's and Mallory's love would be unrequainted. Waaaaaahhhhhhh!!!

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They are back together. Mallory just has to finish her time.

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Aaaaawwww !  Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh!!! I don't know if it's a happy ending cos Frieda's defeated or a sad ending cos Tech's and Mallory's love would be unrequainted. Waaaaaahhhhhhh!!!


I gotta say i share the same sentiments there Akira, since i'm definitely not a supporter of the Tech/Mallorey pairing, but that's another topic.

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What do you guys think of Jamie's crush on Rev? I am already working on a sequel to this story. Chimera escapes and Tech wants revenge for all the misery she put Mallory through.

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Do it! Do it! Do it! I wanna see !

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StellaMagic wrote:


What do you guys think of Jamie's crush on Rev? I am already working on a sequel to this story. Chimera escapes and Tech wants revenge for all the misery she put Mallory through.


I thought they all would have been satisfied with Frieda's conviction and arrest! Were you thinking of having Tech do something drastic?

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Good story StellaMagic!ummmmmm...how many chapters are there?



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18.



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Here's my first one, Omi. It is made up of 18 chapters.

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I liked it. It was enjoyable.

Will you be writing more stories?


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I am. In fact, "Wrath of the Beast" is the sequel. In it, the Loonatics have to stop Chimera after she escaped from jail. Meanwhile, Tech lets his anger over how Chimera was responsible for Mallory's criminal record take control when he goes off to have his revenge. What was it about my story that you liked?

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I enjoyed the ending. The forces of good shall prevail!

...Propose?


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Yeah, Omi. Tech did propose to Mallory. So what did you think of Chimera and Jamie?

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Jamie sounded like a good ally...

Chimera sounded like a worthy opponent as well.


-- Edited by Omi at 17:38, 2006-12-03

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Thanks Omi. I hope you enjoy "Wrath of the Beast" just as much. Maybe you can provide words of wisdom of how Tech should best battle Chimera without a sense of vengeance.

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Excellent job, I like the story. The plot went very well and the ending was wraped up very nicely. Keep up the good work. :D

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Thanks. What's your fave part of my fanscript?

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When Jamies showed her powers for the first time.

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Thanks. What did you think of Tech and Mallory's relationship back in the day and the truth behind the accident?



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I thought it made sense, it was well-thought out. I didn't see any plot holes in it and built up the character of both Tech and Mallory.

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Thanks. What did you think of Chimera?

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Nicely done, reminds me of this one characters from Ben 10... what's his name.... Keven something. Anyways, keep up the good work.

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Good show! However, I did not much care for the pairing, or the lack of suprise "bad guy" wise.

It was a great story none-the-less and a good read; keep it up!

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that was FANTASTIC stella that was great. MAybe you can make a story with us in it, jsut an opinion.

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