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Harukuro


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I've been having MAJOR writers block with my other fan-fic.(sorry guys) But after a while I've been thinking of other stories. Short stories that are just there to be silly and other ideas. So this is were I'll post them. They may not be as good as Akira Cat's but I'll try. I'll put up my first story later.


Here we go! "Manhood"


ACHOO!!!!


It was another day for the Loonatics and everyone was enjoying themselves. Well almost everyone.


Ace: Ugh I don't know what it is but I can't stop sneezing!


Lexi: I hope you're not catching a cold.


Lexi walked over and put her hand on Ace's forehead.


Lexi: Hmm not hot at all. What does the thermometer say Tech?


Tech:Normal;by rabbit standards of course.


Slam: Then wadda probwem?


Rev: Oh-I-hope-you're-not-getting-to-stressed-out-by-all-of-our-antics.


Duck:Oh yes leader time for moi!


Everyone looks at Duck angerly


Duck:What!? I was just planning ahead!


Ace: Maybe a bit of excerise should do me some good. I have been slacking off.


Everyone else: SLACKING OFF!!!???


Ace: Yeah I know. I should know better.


Duck: That's NOT what we MEAN!


Teh: You only didn't train yesterday! It's okay to skip a day.


Rev:Yeah-we-do-it-all-the-time!


Slam:


Ace:Thanks for you're help guys. I'll still train a bit so I can feel better.


Ace walked out the main room and into the training arena.


Duck: Man Ace can be one messed rabbit!


Lexi: He just thinks things differently.


After a bit of training Ace went to the men's changing room for a towel. After rubbing his face he noticed something!


Ace:WHOA!!


To be continued...


Hope you guys like it so far. The title will explain itself soon


 



-- Edited by Harukuro at 18:26, 2006-10-28

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What?! What happened! This is grate sp far!

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*GASP!*


Ace: *stares at huge booger on the towel* That came outta my nose?!


I like this a lot so far! I hope to read the rest soon!



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Darn you, you non-finisher! You cliff hanger!

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kaejae wrote:


*GASP!*


Ace: *stares at huge booger on the towel* That came outta my nose?!


I like this a lot so far! I hope to read the rest soon!



Haha no it's not that. I'll post the rest soon Glad you guys like it!

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Darn! You just had to cut the chapter off at the most crucial point when potentially important info was about to be revealed! Darn cliffhangers! Darn them!

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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! Not a cliffhanger! Anything but a cliffhanger! Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh !!!

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If it weren't for cliffhangers then stories would be VERY boring.


Here's part 2


OOOHHHHHH YEEEAAAAAHH!!!!!


The Loonatics looked around in confusion.


Duck: Oh no did Tech get into the booze again and have one of his little episodes


Tech: I THOUGHT we both agreed NEVER TO BRING THAT UP AGAIN!!!


Rev: Well I didn't get into the Halloween stash


Slam: No look at me.


Lexi: And since Zadavia's not here that leaves-


YEAH OHHH!


Ace jumped into the room and started doing a dance very much like one Bugs would do. He grabed Lexi's hand and spun her around.


Ace: I'm a man!


Everyone: WHAT THE ****!


Ace realized he was making a scene so he stopped and tried to explain.


Ace: Well you know I've been sneezing right? Well I think I know why I was sneezing.


Lexi: But what does that have to do with "being a man"?


Ace:*points to his face* Cheak it out!


The team looked at Ace's face. He had begun to grow whiskers on his face!


Tech: Ohhh so it's like building you're first invention.


Rev: Or making 18 miles per hour.


Slam: Lift da biiigggg rockie.


Duck: Or chicks gettin boobs


Lexi: PERVERT!!!!!!!!!


Lexi fired a huge brain blast at Duck. Duck was sent flying so fast the he actualy went through the wall!


Guys: Note to self NEVER piss off Lexi!


Lexi: Congrates Ace you're now in manhood now what are you gonna do?


Ace: Watch an R rated movie!


Tech: You're not 18 yet.


Ace: Damnit!


Lexi: But you will next week!


Ace: Horray! Let's Monty Python movies!


All: Yeah!


Meanwhile


Duck: Hello....anybody? I'm in extreme pain here? I may have quaked myself to a tree but it still hurts!


THE END!


Hope you guys liked and Happy Halloween!


P.S: Duck quaked in mid-air and landed a few centimeters above a tree so he shouldn't be hurt that bad. (he's just a bit of a wimp)


 



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That was funny! Tech having had bad boozing experiences, everyone wanting to watch Monty Python and Ace growing whiskers! LOL! I personally always believed the Loonatics to be in their early to mid 20s, but it's funny seeing them going thru' adolescent experiences.

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I love that chapter, and can't wait for the next one!!!


It would be very intresting to seeing Tech's boozing experience!



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I knew that something like this would happen but that was funny! I like this line:


Duck: Hello....anybody? I'm in extreme pain here? I may have quaked myself to a tree but it still hurts!


Funny!  Keep it up!



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I'm glad you guys liked it! I don't think anyone wants to know about Tech's booze incident at the Chrismas party.(but if I know what)


To me the Loonatics are 18-20ish. Kind of like the Straw-hat pirates in One Piece.


Next will be future versions of some of my other favorite cartoon characters.



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Ooo, future version of other cartoon characters! That sounds interesting!


*Wonders about what Tech's Xmas party booze incident...*



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Harukuro wrote:


I'm glad you guys liked it! I don't think anyone wants to know about Tech's booze incident at the Chrismas party.(but if I know what)



 Oh but we do!  Mwa ha ha ha ha ha!!!

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Sorry guys no Chirmas party fic. If I did write it it'd be in the "Naughty Fics" section (obviously) But I'm going to put up that fic from earlier I told you about. I'm sorry to say Zadavia fans but she won't have a lot of screen time (even thought she doesn't have enough in the show already) So much promise as a character so hard to write about


I'll be back after some homework!



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Sorry guys no Chirmas party fic. If I did write it it'd be in the "Naughty Fics" section (obviously) But I'm going to put up that fic from earlier I told you about. I'm sorry to say Zadavia fans but she won't have a lot of screen time (even thought she doesn't have enough in the show already) So much promise as a character so hard to write about


I'll be back after some homework!



 Aaaawww! I don't care whether it's on the naughty forum, I bet it would be funny to read .

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That might take a while since I don't even HAVE access to that forum yet. I guess I'll ask Cali-Bunny later. Sorry that I didn't quite keep my promise guys I had a hard day yesterday plus I'm going to Toronto later. I'll try to give you guys an intro later though.


Okay here are some things you guys need to know about this story. There will be a tour of a place(you'll find out later) If you guys aren't interested PLEASE tell me first. Next their are going to be a lot of new characters. I'll create a little bio for them when they show up like so.


Name: Ace Bunny


Species: Bunny rabbit


Descendant of: Bugs Bunny and maybe even Lola Bunny


Facts: Leader of the "Loonatics". Extremly great at martial arts. Grew up in Acme Brooklyn. Fav food is carrot cake.


Hope you guys will be okay with this.



-- Edited by Harukuro at 07:08, 2006-11-05

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Harukuro wrote:

Sorry guys no Chirmas party fic. If I did write it it'd be in the "Naughty Fics" section (obviously) But I'm going to put up that fic from earlier I told you about. I'm sorry to say Zadavia fans but she won't have a lot of screen time (even thought she doesn't have enough in the show already) So much promise as a character so hard to write about

I'll be back after some homework!



Christmas party? Booze? I have a feeling I'd be laughing my butt off about this one



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Ok here goes nothing. I've been having a lot of thoughts about characters I'd like to put in my fic sometime. If you want a certain character to be a part of this story in spirit or otherwise just ask. The same thing with art based on these new characters.(I can't draw to save the universe) Anyway sit back and enjoy.


Loonatics in the Toons!


Zadavia was sitting in the main room of the Loonatics HQ reading up on the news. Then the boys came into the room.


Zadavia: Hello Loonatics. MY. Don't you all just look handsome.


The boys were all wereing a different style of tux.


Ace: Thanks Zadavia. Aparently this kinnda suit was popular way back when.


Duck: Who cares! It doesn't change the fact that it's ichie!


Slam: Me likey suit.


Rev: I-do-too!Which-is-kinda-werid-since-I-thought-I'd-get-all-twichy-and-stuff.


Tech: I made sure it would compatable with you're speedy ADHD Rev. Well looks like the try-outs over.


Zadavia: Try out?


Ace: Oh where we're heading we'd get the suits messed up faster then you could say "Taxi"


Duck: Don't remind me. I still remeber the smack from 'the date'


The guys began to snicker.


Duck: Oh put a sock in it!


Lexi came into the room wearing her casual clothes.


Zadavia: Already know what you're wearing?


Lexi: Yeah I'm not very picky. Besides I want to see the look on Ace's face when he see's me.


The boys came in with their casual clothes on.


Rev: Sorry-that-ya-can't-come-Zadavia. I-think-ya-would-have-had-fun-at-our-highschool-comeback.


Zadavia: That's all right some other time I guess.


Tech: We'll be back!


Lexi: Don't get too loonly.


Slam: Bye-Bye lady.


Duck: I'll keep ya company!


Lexi: After the reply you gave to her e-mail you've gotta go.


Duck: W-w-w-w-WHAT E-MAIL


The guys grabed Duck and dragged him towards the taxi.


Duck: NOOOOOOOO!


Ace: To Toon Town!


To be continued.


Sorry I didn't actualy show any new characters yet but I will next chapter. Hope you liked it!



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What email? Aww, now I wanna know!


And now I wanna be in the fic as well. -is bricked by her conscience personified-


YAY, FANFIC!



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And where pre tell are our heros off to? Hmmmm?

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And where pre tell are our heros off to? Hmmmm?


Toon Town! If you've seen 'Who Framed Rodger Rabbit' you'd know.


And oddity. I was reffering to Toon characters but I'll see what I can do.



-- Edited by Harukuro at 06:25, 2006-11-10

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Harukuro wrote:


kaejae wrote:

And where pre tell are our heros off to? Hmmmm?


Toon Town! If you've seen 'Who Framed Rodger Rabbit' you'd know.


And oddity. I was reffering to Toon characters but I'll see what I can do.



-- Edited by Harukuro at 06:25, 2006-11-10



Ohhhh! E-gad! It's been so long since I've seen it!


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Yeah! Those were the good ol' days!

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Sorry for the loooong time without updates. I'll try to post another chapter sooner then later.

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OMG!That was like lol!My brother read it and he laughed alot too.I wish you could make another fanfic.My brother likes funny stories and shows.He's 7 years old,turning 8 years old on the 19th and the 19th is my Christmas Concert.Some of my friends are playing bells including me.I'm bell G4.It's a little bit heavy though.Wish me luck that my hand doesn't fall off!

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Hey guys Lazy McSlowfiction is back!! If anyones interested in this story then tell me. I could start it up again with your ideas, thoughts etc. Thanks!!



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"Lazy McSlowfiction"? Hey, perfect name for me! XD

No, seriously. I have about...er... -counts- Kenni, Alyssa, kari_bunny, and I need to find a lime fic for Olivia...

As well as my own fanfictions (over ten) and my novel.

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