ZOMG GUYS! My first fanfic! But I'm posting it here because there's shiny new art to go with it! ^^ Click the 'cover' to read... It's rated T, but read the author's noted before going further!
Don't laugh too hard at my pathetic attempt =P I'm not much of a writer and well I rushed while I was making this 'cover' :( I *might* decide to re-do it... but it most likely I'll just leave it as is =P
And now I present to you, "Unfinished Business"; This goes out to all the Ace/Lexi shippers
*reads it* Well, I must say, it`s all a normal Ace/Lexi shipper would want. But, I`m not normal. It`s a good story (even if it was a little mature), but being that direct (in that manner) isn`t quite my style. I liked the humor, it fit the premise of the show, but it could`ve used a bit more action (and by that, I mean villain fighting, ya naughty). In my opinion, Lexi needs to reveal her feelings during a critical moment where she might not get another chance, and she knows it. But still, it`s pretty good, even if it does have some mature content. 4/5.
*reads it* Well, I must say, it`s all a normal Ace/Lexi shipper would want. But, I`m not normal. It`s a good story (even if it was a little mature), but being that direct (in that manner) isn`t quite my style. I liked the humor, it fit the premise of the show, but it could`ve used a bit more action (and by that, I mean villain fighting, ya naughty). In my opinion, Lexi needs to reveal her feelings during a critical moment where she might not get another chance, and she knows it. But still, it`s pretty good, even if it does have some mature content. 4/5. But what is "normal"?
As for the villain fighting -- I, er... I'm crummy at writing those =P ~nyah!! And also, it's just a night to have fun, hence no villain... But hey-- maybe next time, if there is...
Thanks for teh input!
Akira_Cat wrote:
Woah! That's heavy. I like the way you managed to get the romantic atmosphere in the parts with Ace and Lexi in.
And I love the story about Rev, the granny and the bowl of nuts! That made me laugh !
*reads it* Well, I must say, it`s all a normal Ace/Lexi shipper would want. But, I`m not normal. It`s a good story (even if it was a little mature), but being that direct (in that manner) isn`t quite my style. I liked the humor, it fit the premise of the show, but it could`ve used a bit more action (and by that, I mean villain fighting, ya naughty). In my opinion, Lexi needs to reveal her feelings during a critical moment where she might not get another chance, and she knows it. But still, it`s pretty good, even if it does have some mature content. 4/5. But what is "normal"?
As for the villain fighting -- I, er... I'm crummy at writing those =P ~nyah!! And also, it's just a night to have fun, hence no villain... But hey-- maybe next time, if there is...
Thanks for teh input!
Next time? Whoa-hoh, there. We already have a chance of Lexi concieving.j/k
But seriously, go ahead if you wish. Wonder if Duck will ever pull the Videocam on them.
Duck (filming): Whoah-hoh boy, is this ever gonna be a hot topic on the boards...
(Ace and Lexi stop making out)
Ace/Lexi: What the...DUCK!
Duck: Enjoying "it" are we? HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
Ace/Lexi: ARRRRGH!
(Ace`s eyes start glowing red, and Lexi`s ears crackle with pinkish energy)
Duck:... Eh-heh-heh-heh...You know, I was kidding about that part with the boards and all...
Crossfire wrote: Next time? Whoa-hoh, there. We already have a chance of Lexi concieving.j/k
But seriously, go ahead if you wish. Wonder if Duck will ever pull the Videocam on them.
Duck (filming): Whoah-hoh boy, is this ever gonna be a hot topic on the boards...(Ace and Lexi stop making out)Ace/Lexi: What the...DUCK! Duck: Enjoying "it" are we? HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Ace/Lexi: ARRRRGH! (Ace`s eyes start glowing red, and Lexi`s ears crackle with pinkish energy) Duck:... Eh-heh-heh-heh...You know, I was kidding about that part with the boards and all... Ace/Lexi: Roast, Duck! Duck: EEEEEEYAAAAAAAH!
Silly, I meant the next time I write a fanfic it'll have the villan fighting/action stuff! Heh heh! But whole conceiving thing gave me a really funny idea... whether or not I'll carry through depends on my lazy butt
And oh gawd... you made my day and it's only 7 in the morning! That's hilarious!! I could see the team having a field day with that!
Duck: *runs in* TECH! I GOT THE TAPE! I GOT THE TAPE! Tech: *puts the footage onto the computer for internet postage later* Ace: You can't be serious... Tech: Oh can't I cheif?? Lexi: Not fair.... SO not fair... Duck: Life ain't sistah! Lexi: *zaps Duck in the butt*
LexiHex2772 wrote:
that is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sweet!!!!can u post in fanart central?
FLASHBACK! if you dont know the website,its www.fanart central.net. sweet and totally hot!I wish i coud do that.
Heh, thanks! Uhm, I do know the site... I'm just too lazy to maintain my account there =P
Martiangirl wrote: They know what they did (glare)
Maybe it was Jacovie who did it!
Jacovie: No, I didn't take the cookie from the cookie jar! -points to Ace and Lexi- They did it! Ace and Lexi: Did not! Jessica: Who stole the cookie from the cookie jar? Jacovie: He did! -points to spot on wall- Jessica: But...you just said it was Ace and Lexi! Jacovie: Uh...I...didn't...have...cookie... -runs away with the cookie jar- Ace: Nuuuu! Teh cookies! GUARDIAN STRIKE SWORD! -brings Jacovie back- Jessica: WE VILL HAVE OUR REVENGE! -does what Pierre Le Pew did and spits or something-
Martiangirl wrote: They know what they did (glare)
Maybe it was Jacovie who did it!
Jacovie: No, I didn't take the cookie from the cookie jar! -points to Ace and Lexi- They did it! Ace and Lexi: Did not! Jessica: Who stole the cookie from the cookie jar? Jacovie: He did! -points to spot on wall- Jessica: But...you just said it was Ace and Lexi! Jacovie: Uh...I...didn't...have...cookie... -runs away with the cookie jar- Ace: Nuuuu! Teh cookies! GUARDIAN STRIKE SWORD! -brings Jacovie back- Jessica: WE VILL HAVE OUR REVENGE! -does what Pierre Le Pew did and spits or something-
Martiangirl wrote: They know what they did (glare)
Maybe it was Jacovie who did it!
Jacovie: No, I didn't take the cookie from the cookie jar! -points to Ace and Lexi- They did it! Ace and Lexi: Did not! Jessica: Who stole the cookie from the cookie jar? Jacovie: He did! -points to spot on wall- Jessica: But...you just said it was Ace and Lexi! Jacovie: Uh...I...didn't...have...cookie... -runs away with the cookie jar- Ace: Nuuuu! Teh cookies! GUARDIAN STRIKE SWORD! -brings Jacovie back- Jessica: WE VILL HAVE OUR REVENGE! -does what Pierre Le Pew did and spits or something-
-steals cookies-
Are they chocolate chip cookies? If they are, I WANT ONE!
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ZOMG GUYS! My first fanfic! But I'm posting it here because there's shiny new art to go with it! ^^ Click the 'cover' to read... It's rated T, but read the author's noted before going further!
Don't laugh too hard at my pathetic attempt =P I'm not much of a writer and well I rushed while I was making this 'cover' :( I *might* decide to re-do it... but it most likely I'll just leave it as is =P
And now I present to you, "Unfinished Business"; This goes out to all the Ace/Lexi shippers
*dies because ff.net hates her*
-- Edited by kaejae at 11:11, 2006-11-12
THAT WAS HOT! Wait a minute. Hot is an understatement. IT'S SMOKING HOT! You're an amazing writer and artist. G2G before I get yelled at by my parents for being on my laptop for over an hour.
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