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ZOMG GUYS! My first fanfic! But I'm posting it here because there's shiny new art to go with it! ^^ Click the 'cover' to read... It's rated T, but read the author's noted before going further!

Don't laugh too hard at my pathetic attempt =P I'm not much of a writer and well I rushed while I was making this 'cover' :( I *might* decide to re-do it... but it most likely I'll just leave it as is =P


And now I present to you, "Unfinished Business"; This goes out to all the Ace/Lexi shippers



*dies because ff.net hates her*

-- Edited by kaejae at 11:11, 2006-11-12

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ZOMG! -faints-


Conscience: She means it in a good way! Honest!


Jessica: -wakes up- ACExLEXI!!! -falls down- Ow.



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aww... i had to delete it and repost it =(


... I'm still trying to get the hang of ff.net! *dies*



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*reads it* Well, I must say, it`s all a normal Ace/Lexi shipper would want. But, I`m not normal. It`s a good story (even if it was a little mature), but being that direct (in that manner) isn`t quite my style. I liked the humor, it fit the premise of the show, but it could`ve used a bit more action (and by that, I mean villain fighting, ya naughty). In my opinion, Lexi needs to reveal her feelings during a critical moment where she might not get another chance, and she knows it. But still, it`s pretty good, even if it does have some mature content. 4/5.

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Woah! That's heavy. I like the way you managed to get the romantic atmosphere in the parts with Ace and Lexi in.


And I love the story about Rev, the granny and the bowl of nuts! That made me laugh



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*reads it* Well, I must say, it`s all a normal Ace/Lexi shipper would want. But, I`m not normal. It`s a good story (even if it was a little mature), but being that direct (in that manner) isn`t quite my style. I liked the humor, it fit the premise of the show, but it could`ve used a bit more action (and by that, I mean villain fighting, ya naughty). In my opinion, Lexi needs to reveal her feelings during a critical moment where she might not get another chance, and she knows it. But still, it`s pretty good, even if it does have some mature content. 4/5.


But what is "normal"?

As for the villain fighting -- I, er... I'm crummy at writing those =P ~nyah!! And also, it's just a night to have fun, hence no villain... But hey-- maybe next time, if there is...

Thanks for teh input!



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Woah! That's heavy. I like the way you managed to get the romantic atmosphere in the parts with Ace and Lexi in.


And I love the story about Rev, the granny and the bowl of nuts! That made me laugh



Heavy? Is that a good thing?? ~nyah!

I'm glad the bowl of nuts story had ye laughin' !



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-starts playing "Tell Me"-

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-starts playing "Tell Me"-


Is that the 'Tell Me' by K-Ci & Jojo that you're talking about?


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Ya

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I LOVE that song ^__^

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"Unfinished business" The likable fic where two of the loonatics starts to go "lunatic" on each other!

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-films Ace and Lexi doing it- Damn! now this is something

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"Unfinished business" The likable fic where two of the loonatics starts to go "lunatic" on each other!


*snickers*


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-films Ace and Lexi doing it- Damn! now this is something


Er... Did you really need to do that? O_o


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kaejae wrote:




Oceanstalker wrote:




"Unfinished business" The likable fic where two of the loonatics starts to go "lunatic" on each other!


*snickers*


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-films Ace and Lexi doing it- Damn! now this is something


Er... Did you really need to do that? O_o





um -plays "How Do You Want It" This has K-ci and Jojo-



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that is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sweet!!!!can u post in fanart central?


FLASHBACK! if you dont know the website,its www.fanart central.net. sweet and totally hot!I wish i coud do that.



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kaejae wrote:




Crossfire wrote:




*reads it* Well, I must say, it`s all a normal Ace/Lexi shipper would want. But, I`m not normal. It`s a good story (even if it was a little mature), but being that direct (in that manner) isn`t quite my style. I liked the humor, it fit the premise of the show, but it could`ve used a bit more action (and by that, I mean villain fighting, ya naughty). In my opinion, Lexi needs to reveal her feelings during a critical moment where she might not get another chance, and she knows it. But still, it`s pretty good, even if it does have some mature content. 4/5.


But what is "normal"?

As for the villain fighting -- I, er... I'm crummy at writing those =P ~nyah!! And also, it's just a night to have fun, hence no villain... But hey-- maybe next time, if there is...

Thanks for teh input!


 


Next time? Whoa-hoh, there. We already have a chance of Lexi concieving.j/k


But seriously, go ahead if you wish. Wonder if Duck will ever pull the Videocam on them.


Duck (filming): Whoah-hoh boy, is this ever gonna be a hot topic on the boards...


(Ace and Lexi stop making out)


Ace/Lexi: What the...DUCK!


Duck: Enjoying "it" are we? HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!


Ace/Lexi: ARRRRGH!


(Ace`s eyes start glowing red, and Lexi`s ears crackle with pinkish energy)


Duck:... Eh-heh-heh-heh...You know, I was kidding about that part with the boards and all...


Ace/Lexi: Roast, Duck!


Duck:  EEEEEEYAAAAAAAH!



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Next time? Whoa-hoh, there. We already have a chance of Lexi concieving.j/k

But seriously, go ahead if you wish. Wonder if Duck will ever pull the Videocam on them.


Duck (filming): Whoah-hoh boy, is this ever gonna be a hot topic on the boards...(Ace and Lexi stop making out)Ace/Lexi: What the...DUCK!
Duck: Enjoying "it" are we? HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
Ace/Lexi: ARRRRGH! (Ace`s eyes start glowing red, and Lexi`s ears crackle with pinkish energy)
Duck:... Eh-heh-heh-heh...You know, I was kidding about that part with the boards and all...
Ace/Lexi: Roast, Duck!
Duck:  EEEEEEYAAAAAAAH!




Silly, I meant the next time I write a fanfic it'll have the villan fighting/action stuff! Heh heh! But whole conceiving thing gave me a really funny idea... whether or not I'll carry through depends on my lazy butt

And oh gawd... you made my day and it's only 7 in the morning! That's hilarious!! I could see the team having a field day with that!


Duck: *runs in* TECH! I GOT THE TAPE! I GOT THE TAPE!
Tech: *puts the footage onto the computer for internet postage later*
Ace: You can't be serious...
Tech: Oh can't I cheif??
Lexi: Not fair.... SO not fair...
Duck: Life ain't sistah!
Lexi: *zaps Duck in the butt*


 


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that is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sweet!!!!can u post in fanart central?


FLASHBACK! if you dont know the website,its www.fanart central.net. sweet and totally hot!I wish i coud do that.



Heh, thanks! Uhm, I do know the site... I'm just too lazy to maintain my account there =P




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Tech helping Duck to post videos of Ace and Lexi on the net?! What's his reason for that? LOL!

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Revenge! REVENGE!!!

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Tech helping Duck to post videos of Ace and Lexi on the net?! What's his reason for that? LOL!



Not a clue my dear, but Martiangirl might be onto something ;)

Hee hee! I wonder what they could have done to make Tech side with Duck?


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sOME SEX **** I BET

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Revenge! REVENGE!!!


'Nuff said.

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Martiangirl wrote:


Revenge! REVENGE!!!


'Nuff said.





Yes! But revenge for what??


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They know what they did (glare)

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They know what they did (glare)



Maybe it was Jacovie who did it!


Jacovie: No, I didn't take the cookie from the cookie jar! -points to Ace and Lexi- They did it!
Ace and Lexi: Did not!
Jessica: Who stole the cookie from the cookie jar?
Jacovie: He did! -points to spot on wall-
Jessica: But...you just said it was Ace and Lexi!
Jacovie: Uh...I...didn't...have...cookie... -runs away with the cookie jar-
Ace: Nuuuu! Teh cookies! GUARDIAN STRIKE SWORD! -brings Jacovie back-
Jessica: WE VILL HAVE OUR REVENGE! -does what Pierre Le Pew did and spits or something-



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Martiangirl wrote:


They know what they did (glare)



Maybe it was Jacovie who did it!


Jacovie: No, I didn't take the cookie from the cookie jar! -points to Ace and Lexi- They did it!
Ace and Lexi: Did not!
Jessica: Who stole the cookie from the cookie jar?
Jacovie: He did! -points to spot on wall-
Jessica: But...you just said it was Ace and Lexi!
Jacovie: Uh...I...didn't...have...cookie... -runs away with the cookie jar-
Ace: Nuuuu! Teh cookies! GUARDIAN STRIKE SWORD! -brings Jacovie back-
Jessica: WE VILL HAVE OUR REVENGE! -does what Pierre Le Pew did and spits or something-




-steals cookies-

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how do you put storys on ff.net

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how do you put storys on ff.net

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READ THIS WB Ilovebiggrin



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loonaticforever wrote:

the_oddity wrote:



Martiangirl wrote:


They know what they did (glare)



Maybe it was Jacovie who did it!


Jacovie: No, I didn't take the cookie from the cookie jar! -points to Ace and Lexi- They did it!
Ace and Lexi: Did not!
Jessica: Who stole the cookie from the cookie jar?
Jacovie: He did! -points to spot on wall-
Jessica: But...you just said it was Ace and Lexi!
Jacovie: Uh...I...didn't...have...cookie... -runs away with the cookie jar-
Ace: Nuuuu! Teh cookies! GUARDIAN STRIKE SWORD! -brings Jacovie back-
Jessica: WE VILL HAVE OUR REVENGE! -does what Pierre Le Pew did and spits or something-




-steals cookies-

Are they chocolate chip cookies? If they are, I WANT ONE!



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kaejae wrote:

ZOMG GUYS! My first fanfic! But I'm posting it here because there's shiny new art to go with it! ^^ Click the 'cover' to read... It's rated T, but read the author's noted before going further!

Don't laugh too hard at my pathetic attempt =P I'm not much of a writer and well I rushed while I was making this 'cover' :( I *might* decide to re-do it... but it most likely I'll just leave it as is =P


And now I present to you, "Unfinished Business"; This goes out to all the Ace/Lexi shippers wink.gif



*dies because ff.net hates her*

-- Edited by kaejae at 11:11, 2006-11-12

THAT WAS HOT! Wait a minute. Hot is an understatement. IT'S SMOKING HOT! You're an amazing writer and artist. G2G before I get yelled at by my parents for being on my laptop for over an hour.



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^^; Whoa. That's so old XD

Thanks!

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