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Here's the prequel I promised you:


Chapter 1: The Story Begins


Scene: Loonatics Headquarters


A special day is going on at HQ. It is Jamie's birthday. The Loonatics, Speedster, her grandpa, and Mallory were there to celebrate it. Jamie had already blew out the candles.


Jamie: Thanks for throwing this party for me, Guys.


Ace: Well it is yer boithday, Jamie.


Rev: Not-only-that. It-was-on-the-night-of-your-birthday-that-the-three-of-us, you,-me-and-Tech,-became-friends.


Tech: I'll say.


Lexi: What were the three of you like when you were kids.


Rev: Well-it-is-preety-amazing-It-started...


Jeff: Uh, maybe I should tell it, Rev. It pretty much started while we were celebrating Jamie's eleventh birthday...*flashback*


Scene: Warner Springs-Sullivan Household (11 years ago)


Jeff:...Jamie had already blew out the candles. Rev's family were there since Harriet is a friend to my daughter, May.


May: Happy Birthday, Sweetie.


Jamie: Thanks, Mom.


Ralph: I can't believe our own Jamie has turned eleven. Two more years and she will be a teen.


Harriet: Hope your prepared for that event, May.


Three year old Rip gave Jamie a card. It is very glittery with balloons on it.


Rip: Here, Jamie. I made it myself.


Jamie: Aww. Thank you, Rip.


Eleven year old Rev approached Jamie nervously, and gave her his present.


Rev: I hope you like my present, Jamie. I picked it out myself.


Jamie opened the present. It's a silver butterfly barrette. Jamie is happy to have it, so she put it on.


Jamie: This is the barrette I wanted. (hugs Rev) Thanks, Rev.


Rev blushed after Jamie hugged him.


Jamie: Mom, is it okay if me and Rev go play out in the woods to play?


May: Alright, Honey, but you two be careful. We're supposed to get a thunderstorm later. If it starts to rain, go to the barn for shelter. Plus, don't stay out half the night like last time.


Jamie: Mom, that was once.


May: On a school night.


Harriet: Yeah. We had to explain to your teacher why you were snoring like chainsaws.


Ralph and Jeff were giggling to that remark.


Jamie: Come on, Rev.


Jamie and Rev ran outside and into the woods.


Scene: The Woods


Jamie and Rev were just walking into the woods, wondering what to do.


Jamie: Hey, Rev, wanna play in the underground gopher tunnels?


Rev: Yeah. We can pretend we're mining for gold.


Then some dark clouds came in. There was the sound of thunder. The clouds were coming in faster.


Jamie: Looks like my mom was right about the storm.


Rev: Let's run to the barn! It's not far from here!


They both ran as fast as they could. It is already pouring rain. The barn is just up ahead. The two friends ran faster to it. The barn was already open so they went inside. Jamie is dripping wet. Rev wrapped his jacket around her.


Rev: Here, Jamie. You can use my jacket to warm up.


Jamie: Thanks, Rev.


Lightning struck from outside, startling the two friends.


Rev: Looks like we may be in here awhile.


Jamie: Your right. I don't think this storm will lit up anytime soon. At least we'll have an excuse to going home late. Plus we can play in here. We can even use the dark to play shadow.


Rev: Yeah. I guess our cloud does have a silver lining.


Then they heard footsteps and the barn opening.


Jamie: Someone is coming in. It doesn't sound like my grandpa.


Rev: Nor my mom and dad.


 


 



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Hehe! I would love to see how a three year old Rip would look like!

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Oooh the suspense! The suspense! Nice work there. At first I didn't have a clue who was this "Jeff" but I think he's Jaimies father is he not?  Anyways, nice work!

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Actually, Jeff is the name of her grandfather.

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Ch. 2: A Friend in the Dark


The footsteps came into the barn. They were coming in closer as a dark figure came in. Rev and Jamie were shivering in fear, not knowing who it is. It is too dark to see who it is. What they didn't know is that the dark figure is a coyote their age.


Coyote: Is someone in here? Sorry if I trespassed. I just wanted to get out of the storm.


Rev: It's okay. We just got out of the rain. My name is Rev. The human girl with me is Jamie. She's my best friend. What's your name?


Coyote: Tech. What were you two doing before it rained.


Jamie: We were playing out in the woods like we usually do. How about you?


Tech: My brother tricked me and left me behind. I was lost in the woods for hours. My older brother always treats me like the runt of the pack because I can't fight.


Rev: Your brother sounds like a jerk.


Tech: Do any of you have older sibs?


Jamie: No. I'm an only child.


Rev: I have a younger bother, but he rarely gives me a hard time.


Tech: Lucky for you two. He and his friends treat me like their punching bag.


Rev: Where do you live?


Tech: I live near the canyons not far from here.


Jamie and Rev: THE CANYONS?!


Rev: That is where the Black Coyotes hang out!


Jamie: You must be pretty brave to live near those creeps.


Tech: I try to avoid them as much as possible. Where do you guys live?


Jamie: My mom, grandpa, and I live in a farmhouse. My mom owns a nice dress shop.


Rev: And my family owns a nice estate near the cliffs.


Tech: (To himself) That is where that family of Road Runners live.


Rev: Huh?


Tech: Nothing.


Lightning and thunder strike at the same time. Jamie held onto Rev, while Tech held onto the post.


Rev: Sorry, Tech. I didn't get a good look at you during the last lightning strike. Hey, maybe you can join us on our picnic tomorrow.


Tech: Picnic?


Jamie: Every year, on the day after Jamie's birthday, we have a picnic near the falls.


Tech: That would be great. I'm in.


Rev: Great. Meet us here at the barn tomorrow morning. Jamie and I will be right out with a picnic basket. You can bring some food along too.


Tech: Okay. I'll shout your names, so you'll know it's me.


The three look at the night sky. It became clear.


Jamie: Looks like the storm has passed.


Tech: So I'll see you guys tomorrow?


Rev: Yep.


Rev tried to get up, but he couldn't lift his foot.


Tech: You okay, Rev?


Rev: Yeah. My foot must have fell asleep.


Tech: You want any help.


Rev: No thanks. You go ahead, Tech.


Tech: Okay.


Tech walked outside first and headed home. Jamie and Rev walked outside and headed home in the opposite direction.



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Aaaw! That is so sweet! I can so imagine the scene actually come to life in my mind. Nice work! Keep it up!

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Sorry I took so long to get around to starting to read this, StellaMagic, but I have to say that this IS off to a good start so far. I'm definitely going to be looking forward to more of the story as soon as time and inspiration will allow.

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Thanks, Comickook. Here's Chapter three


Chapter 3: A big Surprise


The next day is a bright, nice, sunny day. Tech waited outside the barn with a clothe full of food. He hears something in the bushes.


Tech: Rev? Jamie? Is it you?


Rev: It's us, Tech.


Jamie and Rev arrived with a basket. They popped out of the bushes, revealing themselves to Tech, and seeing Tech for what he is...a coyote. They were shocked to see what the other looked like in the light. A few minutes later. They were walking up a big hill together.


Tech: Well it is a big surprise. I mean me being friends with a Road Runner without knowing it.


Rev: Well it's a surprise for me too. You seem different from other coyotes. You didn't eat us when you had the chance.


Tech: I don't eat anything that is already alive.


Jamie: So you're a vegetarian coyote?


Tech: Sort of. So what are your folks into?


Jamie: My mom designs her own clothes. She owns that small dress shop near the outsirts of town.


Rev: My dad's owns Runner Enterprises, the world's beggest gadget industry. What do your folks do?


Tech: My mom doesn't do much except take care of things at home. My dad is a scientist.


Jamie: And what about your brother?


Tech: Let's just say he hangs with an unusual crowd. How about you, Jamie? What does your dad do?


Jamie: I don't have a dad. He had to leave mom and me when I was a baby. But my grand pa is great. He serves as sheriff, and he looks out for me like a dad.


Tech: how do you know Rev?


Rev: Our moms have always been best friends. We grew up together.


Tech: I don't have too many friends. Not many people trust a coyote.


Rev: Well you have us now, Tech. Yeah. After our picnic, you can meet our other friends.


Tech: Really, Rev?


Rev: Yeah. Really.


Jamie: We're here, Guys.


There picnic spot is right below Warner Falls. Jamie laid the pinic blanket down. Rev and Tech got out the food and out them on the blanket. Everything was all set.


Jamie: Okay. Now let's dig in.


They were about to chow down on their sandwiches when they heard the sound of motorcycles heading their way.


Jamie: Motorcycles?


Suddenly, motorcycles appear out of nowhere. The bikers were coyotes who look older than Tech. They wore leather jackets. They're the Black Coyotes. They stopped after seeing the three together. The biggest Coyote approach them.


Coyote: Well what do we have here? A road runner and a human eating in our turf. I'm Dag T. Coyote and no bird or human eats within Black Coyote territory without my okay.


Jamie: Your turf?! This has been our spot to eat since we were three, Pal! Who are you to say no?


Dag: You got quite an attitude, Kid. (to Tech) Are you trying to cause trouble for me,... Bro?


Rev: BRO?!


Jamie: This guy is your brother, Tech?!


Tech looked at his friends nervously and nodded yes.


 



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Yeeeesh. I have a feeling this is going to get really ugly really quickly (which I mean in the good way; the exciting story way). Very definitely some great exchanges and the attitudes concerning Jamie and Rev's first meeting with Dag is QUITE understandable. Keep up the great work.

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Aaaw! Poor Tech. His brother is bad. Bad, bad, bad! But still, the power of friendship will still remain within the coyote, road runner and human!

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booo! bad brother! (throws things at tech's brother)

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Thanks, cheriestar. I was going for that feeling. What do you think of my prequel so far?

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it's good so far:)

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Disclaimer: I do not own the Loonatics (That goes double for past and future fics)


Ch. 4: Jamie's 1st Prank


Jamie and Rev couldn't believe that Tech's brother is leader of the Black Coyotes, a gang of Road-Runner hating coyotes.


Jamie: Well I can see why Tech was too embarassed to tell more about you. For a coyote, you are a black sheep.


One coyote, called Butch, laughed at this comment.


Butch: Cute, Kid. You got spunk. (puts arm around her) I like that in a girl.


Jamie slapped the guy away.


Tech: (to Dag) Just let them eat here, Bro. Once they are done, we'll leave.


Dag: I never make exceptions. Especially to Road Runners.


Jamie and Rev caught the other Black Coyotes eating their food.


Jamie: Hey, that's our lunch!


Dag grabbed Jamie by the shirt.


Dag: Don't test my patience, Blondie, or you and your bird boyfriend will be the main course to our lunch. Let's go, Boys!


They hoped onto their hovercycles. The way they revved flung mud onto Tech, Rev and Jamie. They left laughing.


Scene: Sullivan House-Kitchen


Jamie and Rev were just telling May and Jeff about what happened to them today.


Jeff: The Black Coyotes? You two were lucky you didn't end up as snacks. I don't mind tellin' you, Dag's rowboat is missing a few ores.


Jamie: Not only that. He mistreated a new friend of ours.


May: New friend. WHo is he?


Jamie: Would you believe he's Dag's brother Tech? But he's not as bad as Dag, mom. Didn't even want to eat Rev. He says he doesn't eat anything that's alive.


May: Well if you two trust him, so do we.


Jamie: Still somebody has to show those Black Coyotes they shouldn't have messed with us.


Rev: How are we gonna do that?


Jamie: I think I know how. Remember those stories my uncle Leghorn would tell about a very proud ancestor?


Rev: Good idea, Jamie. And I'll make sure you have a very nice funeral with a fancy buffet, some nice music, and the traditional pounding on the casket saying 'WHY?! WHY?!! OH WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:: All the usual.


Scene: Dark Coyote Cave


The Dark Coyotes were showing down on meat as usual.


Butch: We certainly taught that Runner and his human girl a thing or two. Huh, Dag?


A bigger coyote named Rock spoke up.


Rock: Not to mention that geek of a brother of yers.


Dag: Still, there's something about that human that is making me feel uneasy.


While the coyotes talked, Jamie was watching them. She had a walkie-talkie with her.


Jamie (on walkie-talkie) Okay, Rev, is the trap all set?


Rev is in the forest with snag traps.


Rev: (on walkie-talkie) All set, Jamie.


Jamie: I'm goin' in.


Jamie ran into the cave and kicked each of them.


Dag: Ow! What the-


Jamie: Neh-neh! You can't get me!


Dag: SULLIVAN!!!!!!!!!


The Black Coyotes ran after Jamie on foot.


Jamie ran down the hill and into the hill. She ran past the traps.


Jamie: Here they come!


The Black Coyotes were so angry they didn't notice the traps. They got snagged. Now they are on bungees going up-and-down like yo-yos. Jamie and Rev were laughing


Dag: You'll pay for this, Sullivan!





-- Edited by StellaMagic at 19:39, 2007-02-22

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 Aaaw. Just like the old cartoons.  The good guys always outsmarts the bad guys no matter how hard they try.


Dag: Oh yeah! Well when we get out of here, we'll squash those two like the little twerps they are!


Me: Yeah. Says the leader of a bad ass gang who walked right into an eleven year old's trap.


Dag: Well that still doesn't change my mind about them being weak and dumb.


Jaimie and Rev: Yoo-hoo! We got a nice big net to put you in so we'll serve you as pie.


Dag: Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!


Dag sprints into the distance.


Me: Well. Says the the leader of a bad ass gang who walked right into an eleven year old's trap and is now traumatised by it. Nice work you two.


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Chapter 5: Meeting the Phoenix Runners


Scene: Sullivan House-Living Room


Jamie and Rev were just telling her grandpa about what they did to teach the Black Coyotes a lesson.


Jeff: I guess you two showed them on what the little guy can be capable of. But be careful next time. Dag will be even more careful.


Jamie: okay, Grandpa.


Jeff: But I wouldn't tell your mom, Jamie. She'll be mad as a hornet with insomnia.


Jamie: You're right. I'll be grounded 'til my senior year at college.


Rev noticed that Jamie is not wearing her barette.


Rev: Jamie, where's your barette?


Jamie: oh no! It must have fallen off back at the woods!


Rev: Don't worry. We can look for it tomorrow.


Scene: The Woods


Jamie's barette is on the ground in the woods. It is picked up by a brown hand. Tech found the barette.


Tech: Hey, this is Jamie's barette.


Scene: Outside the General Store


Jamie and Rev were talking to their friends from school. One is a black and white kitten named Penny. The other is a spanish talking bull named Lorenzo.


Penny: Don't worry, Jamie. We can go out into the woods and help you find your barette.


Lorenzo: Yeah. Maybe we can meet Tech in the process.


Penny: Plus, I want to pull a prank on Dag like you guys did.


Then, they heard loud yelling coming from across the street. Tech was across and he is surrounded by three angry Road-Runners and a little buzzard. One is as big as Dag; the other is shorter and looks like Rev with slightly huge muscles; the third is a girl Road-runner dressed in goth apparel. The buzzard looks like the one from Looney Tunes, but dressed in a biker look.


Big Road Runner: What you doin' here?!


Girl: Tryin to come outta your cave again, Canine Face?!


Tech: Easy, guys. (shows barette) Someone I know lost this barette. I'll be out of your way as soon as I give it back.


Second Runner: You lying Mutt! You didn't find it! You stole it!


Big Runner: Besides, who'd want to wear it after yoour fleas got all over it?


Jamie: Hey, it's Tech.


Jamie and the rest of her crew ran to him. They got passed the gang of Runners.


Jamie: Hey Tech. I have friends for you to meet.


Tech: Can they wait while I'm alive?


Girl Runner: Come on, Hawk! Let's thrash the mutt and get it over with.


Hawk: Scram, Squirts! We got some serious coyote control to do!


They push the four out of the way.


Jamie: Wait! You want to hurt him! But this coyote is our friend.


The buzzard picks up Jamie.


Buzzard: You might wanna run, Kid. You don't want to get involved. Nope. Nope. Nope. Nope. Nope.


Rev (gets in front of Tech): Tech didn't even do anything!


Hawk: I said get away from him!


Rev NO!


The Runners didn't like hearing the word no.


Second Runner: You mean yer takin this dog's side!


Penny: We are not taking anyone's side.


Lorenzo: What makes you think fighting will solve your problems?


Hawk: We didn't have any problems 'til you four came along. Forget the coyote for now, Guys. Lets torture these squirts.


Tech: You leave them alone!


Suddenly, Jamie's grandfater appeared as the four birds surrounded the kids.


Jeff: What is goin on?


Jamie: Grandpa!


Hawk: Grandpa!? Sheriff Sullivan, what a surprise!


Jeff: Are you causing trouble again, Hawk?


All four of them were saying no nervously.


jeff: You better not be, or it is juvey hall for all four of you.


Hawk: Rave! Falcon! Buzzy! I think we should go now.


They walked away in humiliation. Jeff turned over to Tech.


Jeff: You okay?


Tech: yeah. You're Jamie's grandpa?


Jeff: Yep.


Tech: You're not afraid of me?


Jeff: You've been around my granddaughter. You seem harmless.


Jamie: Grandpa, who were those birds?


Grandpa: The Phoenix Runners. They are a hate gang of coyote-hating Road-runners. Hawk is their leader.


Tech: he's sounds like my brother.


 


 



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This is sort of similar to the Westside story. The Jets vs The Sharks. The Coyotes vs The Roadrunners. Those kids must be really brave to stand up for themselves and their friends. Nice work there. Keep it up.



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Ch. 6: Tech's First Day in School


Scene: Outside Chuck Jones Elemantary


It's the first day of school. Jamie and Rev were just talking with Penny and Lorenzo.


Jamie: Can you believe the way the Phoenix Runners were mistreating Tech yesterday?


Lorenzo: Of course we can. You know Hawk, Jamie. They hate Coyotes.


Penny: Still, Tech didn't even do anything.


Rev: I just hope the other kids here will treat him better.


Jamie: Yeah. You know how much some of the farms around here are around coyotes.


Then they see a green hovercar come up. Tech comes out of the car with his blue book bag. His dad, a black coyote wearing a lab coat, is dropping him off.


Mr. Coyote: Have a good first day, Son.


Tech: I'll try, Dad.


The hovercar drove off. Tech walked up to his friends.


Tech: hey guys. I want to thank you again for helping me yesterday.


Rev: It's no problem Tech.


Rev: Was that your dad dropping you off?


Tech: Yeah.


The bell rang. All of the kids went inside the school.


Scene: Locker hallways


Rev and Jamie were getting their books out of their lockers. Tech's locker is beside Rev's.


Rev: (to Tech) Tech, afterschool today, you wanna hang out at the arcade?


Tech: Sure, Rev.


Jamie: Wish I could, but I have to help my mom afterschool.


Rev: Okay, Jamie.


Scene: Study Hall


Hours went by. Jamie, Rev, Tech, Penny, and Lorenzo were doing homework. Then three boys came to their table.


Boy 1: A coyote?! What is it doin' here?


Boy 2: And off it's leash too.


Boy 3: Hey, Jamie, the school has a no-dog policy.


Rev angrily stood up.


Rev: Then how come you three are here?


Tech looked distraught from their comments.


Scene: In the cafeteria


Tech and the others were just having lunch together. Those three boys pass by. They dunk Tech's head right into his food. They laughed until the principal walked up to them. Jamie is next to him, indicating she told.


Principal: I want to see you boys in my office.


He took the three boys. Jamie looked at Tech with real concern. Afterschool, Tech was walking away sadly. Rev ran upto him.


Rev: Sorry about the bad day you had, Tech. Not all of the kids act like that.


Tech: It's okay. I should be use to it.


Rev: Cheer up. We can still hang out at the arcade together.


Tech: (Cheering up quick) Race ya!


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I wonder what Rev and Rip would be like at a different age.

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Aaw! After the bullying, Tech and Rev has a race.  That's so sweet!

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Ch. 7: An Angry Phoenix vs. A Dark Wolf


Scene: Arcade


Tech and Rev went into the arcade. Every kid in Warner Springs were playing their favorite games.


Rev: So what do you play first?


Tech: (points to a VR Racer game) Lets play that game.


Rev: Cool! VR Racer is my favorite!


Tech: Mine too.


They went into the game and put on VR helmets. They found themselves in separate racecars. Rev was in a red car while Tech is in a green one.


Rev: All set to play, Tech?


Tech: All set, Rev!


Announcer: Racers, on your marks! Get Set! GO!


Tech and Rev were off. They were driving past the other racecars very fast. Both keep steering left and right to try and pass each other.


Rev: How're you doin', Tech.


Tech: Great! Ready to eat my dust?!


Rev: Yeah right!


They both went real fast. They were about to reach the finish line when everything went blank. Tech and Rev took off their VR helmets to see what's wrong.


Rev: Hey! WHo stopped our game.


Both of them saw that their VR helmets have been disconnected from the game. They turned their backs and are horrified to see Hawk and the rest of the Phoenix Runners.


Hawk: What are you doin' playin' with the canine, Rev?!


Rev: Tech is free to come here, too, Hawk!


Hawk: No coyote ever trespasses onto Phoenix terrirtory!


Dag and his goons came in.


Dag: Want a bet? This is now Dark Coyote territory, Birdie! (To Tech) What are you doing hangin' with Bird-Boy, You Little Pest!


Tech wanted to say something but Hawk interrupted.


Hawk: What give you a right to take over my turf, Dag?!


Dag: Me and my boys! (To his men) Rock! Butch! Show them what we mean!


Rock and Butch approached the Phoenix Runners. All of the kids ran out to get away from the fight. Tech and Rev were hiding underneath the VR game. The two gangs were about to fight when Penny came in


Penny: I wouldn't start a fight if I were you.


Dag: And how are you gonna stop us, Kitty Litter?


Penny pulls out a whistle from her bag.


Penny: Sheriff Sullivan said if I have trouble with the Phoenix Runners or the Dark Coyotes, I can blow this whistle. When I do, There are gonna be police cars right outside. If you don't clear out by the time I count to three, I'll blow.


Hawk: Don't listen to her. She's bluffing.


Penny: Am I? You are already introuble for other crimes, Hawk? If Sheriff Sullivan catches you hurting anyone, you'll do ten to twenty. One,...two...


The two gangs ran out of the arcade.


Penny: Yes! They bought it.


Tech: You were bluffing?


Penny: This is just a whistle I bought at the 10 cents store next door.



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 Nice one Penny! Those guys always get tricked or runaway.  Hee hee! What a bunch of dimwits.


Dag: You're gonna wish you never said that!


Hawk: Yeah! You're gonna wish you were never born!


Me: Eep!


Runs to Twilightgirl.


Me: Twilightgirl! Those guys are nasty to me!


Twilightgirl: You shouldn't have been nasty to them first.


Me: And they said they were gonna beat Tech up.


Twilightgirl: THEY SAID WHAT!?


Twilightgirl gets a giant sledge hammer out.


Twilightgirl: RIGHT! COME HERE!!!


All the violence is censored as Twilightgirl beats up Dag and Hawk.


Twilightgirl: I'LL KILL YOU!!!


Dag and Hawk: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!


Me: Sometimes it's too easy.



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LOL! I'm not as bad as that Akira but I would give them a smack for trying to hurt Tech and co.


BTW, Great Story!



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Thanks Guys. I thought I could also do it as a dedication to Coretta King and what her famous husband worked hard for to achieve.

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(nods) Thanks for explaining, StellaMagic. And, thanks for doing such a terrific job on the characterizations, humor and action in this story thus far.

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Ch. 8: Rev meets Tech's Family

Scene: Outside the canyons

That night, Rev is walking Tech back to his home in the canyons.

Tech: It was nice of Penny to stick up for us.

Rev: yeah. She's like another Jamie.

Tech: Thanks for walking me home, Rev.

Rev: No problem. Besides, I don't want you to walk home alone with the Phoenix Runners and your bro around.

They kept walking until they reached a small farmhouse.

Scene: Inside the house

Tech opened the door and they went inside the house. A small, 3-year-old girl coyote runs upto Tech and hugs him.

Girl Coyote: Techie!

Tech: Hey, Leslie. Where are mom and dad?

Leslie: Daddy is in his lab downstairs, and Mommy is making dinner.

Rev: Is she your little sister?

Tech: Yep. This is Leslie.

Scene: Lab in the Basement

Tech and Rev went downstairs to see his dad. He is working on what appears to be skates with rockets on them

Tech: Hey, Dad.

Tech's dad: Hi, Son. Did you have a good day?

Tech: Not really.

Tech's dad: (looks at Rev) You have a new friend.

Tech: Dad, this is Rev.

Tech's Dad: Hi. I'm Dr. Art T. Coyote. Tech has told me about you and Jamie.

Rev: hi. What are you working on?

Art: I am working on fire-powered rocket skates. These skates will revolutionize the delivery industry.

Rev: Neat! Can I try them?

Art: Sure. I do need a test subject. I just need to work on a few bugs. Most of the inventions are done by Tech.

Rev: Really? You mean Tech is an inventor too?

Art: He is also a genius. *points to bear* You see that bear. It comes with Artificial Intellegence. Tech made Snuggy for Leslie's first birthday.

Snuggy: hi, Rev. I'm gonna go play with Leslie. (walks up the stairs)

Rev: WOW! Cool! Maybe you and I can work on an invention sometime.

Tech: Maybe.

Scene: The Kitchen

Everyone gathered at the kitchen table. Tech's mom, Tamika, gave Rev a plate with all kinds of seeds.

Tamika: here you go, Rev. I collected both fruit and vegetable seeds for you.

Rev: Thanks, Mrs. Coyote. Boy, you gusy have been very nice. I'm surprised that you don't mind me being a roadrunner.

Art: Hey. Not all of us coyotes are scavengers.

Rev: Don't take this the wrong way, but why does Dag hate Roadrunners so much?

Tech: Mostly peer pressure.

Art: Yeah. Dag has heard a lot of nasty things about Roadrunners from other coyote. He thinks the way he acts is the way of the coyote. It may be "a" way but it is not "the" way. In fact, it's that way that caused most people in Warner Springs to think we're predators.

Rev: Sorry. Jamie and her family are tolerant, except when Jamie sees a bully.

Art: Well good for her. Before you two met Tech, he had a hard time trying to make friends.

Rev: Hey, we never thought Tech is bad. (To Tech) Want to come over to my house tomorrow, Tech? I got plenty of video games. Plus, we can try and invent something.

Tech: Sure.We can go afterschool.

Rev was leaving the house.

Rev: Thanks for dinner, Mrs. Coyote. I got to get home now.

Rev leaves for home.

 



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Cute as always.  Show us the next chapter soon!

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Ch. 9: Tech and Leslie come over

Scene: Clifftop View Apartments

It was after school the next day. Rev and Tech were walking to his hime along with Leslie.

Rev: Good thing you brought along your sister. Rip could use someone his own age to play with.

Tech: Yeah well. I promised my parents I would babysit her while they went out shopping. My brother is out somewhere with his gang.

Rev, Tech, and Leslie went inside an elevator and went straight up to a house on top of the clifflike apartment. They made it up to the top. Tech is astounded to see the Runner household as a modern day palace.

Rev: I forgot to mention. My family is incredibly rich. My dad is the president and founder of Runner Enterprises.

Tech: That's the biggest gadget industry in the world.

Rev: Yeah. I never told anyone 'cuz I want real friends.

Rip comes downstairs to see tech and Rev.

Rip: hey big brother. Is this your coyote friend?

Rev: yeah, Rip. This is Tech. He brought along his sister Leslie to play with you.

Leslie: Hi, Rip.

Rev: You two can out and play, but stay close to the house.

Tech: We don't want you two falling off the edge.

Rip and Leslie: Okay.

Rip and Leslie went outside to play. Tech took his dad's rocket skates out of his book bag.

Tech: I brought along my dad's skates. I thought we can help him out.

Rev: I have plenty of tools for inventing stuff in my room. I help my dad with his inventions.

Tech: Great.

Tech and Rev went into Rev's room to work on the rocket skates. Rip and Leslie were rolling a ball around. The ball strayed from them to a nearby bush. Leslie went over to get it. She was about to pick up the ball when a birds foot that looks like the Runners' feet stood on top of the ball. leslie looks up and sees Hawk and the rest of the Phoenix Runners.

Leslie: Oh hi. Can we have our ball?

Hawk: Your ball? Who said it's your ball?

Leslie: Actually, it belongs to Rip.

rave: Sure, kid. We'll give it back.

Rave took the ball and threw it at Leslie so hard, she began to cry. Rip saw the whole thing and walked up to them.

Rip: Leave her alone! She didn't do anything to you!

Hawk: What are you gonna do about it...(pushes Rip) Squirt?

Rip: REV! Rev!

Leslie: TECHIE!

Rev and Tech look outside his window.

Rev: What's going on?

They see the Phoenix Runners picking on Rip and Leslie.

Tech: We gotta save them!

Rev: We cane use you dad's skates.

The Phoenix Runners were about to hurt Rip and Leslie when they suddenly disappeared. Rev zoomed in and saved the two in the nick of time. Then Tech activated the security system by pushing a red button. Alrams went off like crazy.

Falcon: We gotta get out of here before Sheriff Sullivan gets here. The Phoenix Runners flew off on their hovercycles.

Tech turned off the alarms.

Rev: Are you two okay?

Leslie: Yeah. Thanks to you two.

Rip: Yeah. You made a great team.



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This is soooooo cute! Cute cute cute! Nice way that Tech has gotten more confident around other people now! Cute!

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This is really cute. I like it. =D
It's a very interesting possibility of how they met and stuff.
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So... thumbs up!

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Welcome to the fan-base Rye!  Hope you enjoy all the mayhem here.

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Akira_Cat wrote:
Welcome to the fan-base Rye!  Hope you enjoy all the mayhem here.

Thank you! =)
Hehe. I'm enjoying it thus far.
I only wish I had more time to enjoy it.
However, at the moment I'm on vacation in Maui so I have a busy schedule. xx;
And I should probably be going to bed now because I'm becoming some sort of owl. x3

P.S. I haven't actually reviewed any of your fan fictions yet, but I have read them all. They're good! You have very interesting ideas for stories. ^ ^; Well... ta! (For now, anyhow.)



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I do try.

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Ch. 10: The Great Tunnel Discovery

That very night, at Jamie's house, her uncle Leghorn came over for a visit. Jamie had already told him about the prank he pulled on Dag and the Black Coyotes. Leghorn was lecturing her.

Leghorn: Well I say well I am shocked to your behavior, Youngin'. You see, Jamie, canine teasing has been I say been an art in our family for generations, but how you did it was amateur, beginner that is. When you prank a canine, you gotta jazz it a bit. I mean give the prank more style. You got to tease them a bit more.

Jamie: I know, but I also have to make quick escapes too.

Leghorn: Don't worry. Leghorns have been known for their different styles of pranks I I say I know you will find your niche, talent that is.

May: (coming in) Time for bed, Sweetie.

Jamie went upstairs for bed.

Scene: the woods

The next morning, Jamie, Rev, Lorenzo, Penny and tech were just exploring in the woods. Jamie was just climbing a hill when she tripped into a hole.

Rev: Jamie, are you okay?

Jamie: I'm fine. I just fell into a big hole. You should come and see this.

The others climbed into the hole and gasped when they saw tunnels. There were tunnels that go in every direction.

Penny: Whoa! What is this place?

Tech: Must be the old irrigation tunnels. They were used to help grow crops, but when the water dried out, they were empty.

Jamie: Let's explore and see where they lead.

Jamie and her friends wandered all over the tunnels. They found an opening that leads to the school. Then, they found one that leads to Jamie's house. There was another tunnel that leads to the general store. They were exploring the last tunnel. Tech peered at the opening and found an old mine shaft. He started to have a worried look in his eye.

Tech: I think we should leave this tunnel alone.

Jamie: Why, Tech?

Rev: Yeah. What's wrong?

Tech: This tunnel leads to the old mines. That's where my brother and his friends hang out.

Jamie gave a devious look.

Jamie: I think I have found my niche.




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This gets cuter everytime. And I love how you portrayed Leghorn to his original character. "Now I say well I am shocked by your behaviour youngin'."  Hee hee. He just makes me giggle.

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Just out of curiosity, who are Leslie and Penny?

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Leslie is Tech's baby sister, and Penny is the descendant of Penelope, that cat Pepe Le Pew is always chasing after.

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Thank you.

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Ch. 11: Plot Against the Coyotes

Jamie and the others just finished painting different colored arrows in the tunnels. The green leads to the school; the red leads to Rev's home; the light blue leads to Jamie's house; the violet and orange lead to Penny and Lorenzo's homes; and black arrows with the "no" signs on them lead to the mines.

Jamie: Now we can tell where each of these tunnels lead.

Penny: Best of all, we have a shortcut to school and an escape from Black Coyotes.

Tech: I got to get back home.

Jamie: Okay, Tech. Bye.

Tech got out of the tunnels and went home.

Scene: Jamie's House

That very night, Jamie and Rev were taking the long way home. Jamie wanted to use the scenic route because it wasn't a school night and she wanted Rev to walk with her :wub:

Jamie: The full moon is real nice tonight. Isn't it, Rev?

Rev: Yeah it is, Jamie. I'm glad you asked me to walk you home.

Jamie and rev looked at each other for a minute. They were about to kiss when they heard those three boys who gave Tech a hard time. They went over to them.

Jamie: What are you and your friends upto now, Rico?

Rico: We are just talking about how the Phoenix Runners are gonna eliminate the coyotes in the canyons. They planted shock bombs in the canyons.

Rev: Shock bombs?

Rico: Yeah. They are like land mines, only they deliver a serious voltage when they are stepped on. Someone named Molly sold them. They are gonna put them at the caves where all the other coyotes live.

Jamie: Oh no. Tech will be in danger. We gotta tell my grandpa and Tech.

Rev and Jamie ran back to her house in a hurry.

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Yikes! Tech's in danger! Hurry Jamie and Rev! Hurry! Those nasty Pheonix Runners!

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Nice Story Stella! Keep it up!smile



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