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This story takes place before the telling of the prequel. I can write two fics at the same time, can't I? In this fic, the Loonatics take care of a feud when Jamie, Tech, and Rev invited them to their home at Warner Springs. They also learn what Tech's life was like growing up.


Prologue


Scene: Acmetropolis Prison-Board Room


It is the day of Mallory's parole. She is dressed up and stood in front of the council. The mayor looked over her records.


Mayor: Well, Mastermind, considering you were wrongfully convicted of conspiring to harm the staff at AcmeTech, and how you saved your peers at the reunion, tried to save Chimera at the bridge, and chose to serve your time despite any opportunity to escape, this board hereby grants you early parole.


Mallory: Thank you, Mayor. Now I can finally rejoin my friends.


Mallory waited out side the gates. A green hovercycle drove right up to her. It opened revealing Tech.


Tech: Hi, Sweetie. *kisses her*


Mallory: Hi, Tech. Jamie said you were gonna take me somewhere.


Tech: Yeah. We were going back to our hometown in Warner Springs. Jamie and I thought you deserve a vacation after what you been through over the past four months. In fact, all of the Loonatics do.


Mallory hopped into the hovercycle and grabbed onto to Tech from behind. Then they took off.


Scene: Acmetropolis Amtrack Station


The other Loonatics and Jamie's grandfather Jeff were waiting for Tech and Mallory with their bags. Tech's hovercycle arrived just in time.


Duck: it's about time you two lovebirds got here.


Mallory: Hi, Jamie.


Jamie: Hi Mallory. I'm glad you finally made parole. Wait 'til you see Warner Springs. It has a quaint country style you're gonna love.


(Flash to a dark cave)


A coyote who looks like Tech was reporting to someone sitting in an old wrecked recliner.


Coyote: Sullivan, Tech, and that blasted bird are returning home, Boss.


Figure: So our enemies are returning? Then we must prepare for their arrival. (Holds up a picture of Tech as a kid) Soon you will pay for your betrayal, Brother.


 



 



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I have to admit, StellaMagic, that, so far, this story has some great build-up. I'm definitely going to be looking forward to more of the story as soon as time and inspiration will allow you.



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Dun dun duuuuuuuuun! The suspense is creeping near! Good prologue!  Keep it up!

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Ch. 1: Friends Unite


scene: Inside the train


The Loonatics watch the scenery outside as the train moves past it.


Lexi: Wow. Everything seems more natural in this region.


Jamie: That's home for you.


Rev: Wait-til-you-guys-see-Warner-Springs. It-has-a-nice-forest,-tunnels-for-playing-in, and-a-neat-barn-for-parties.


Duck: So in other words, Warner Springs is one of those small hillbilly places with no civilization.


Jamie:


Duck:  Which makes it the perfect place for a vacation.


Zadavia: *contacting them on Ace's comlink* And you are going there at the right time. Molly Mafia has escaped from prison and she stole some very dangerous and illegal weapons with her. It is up to you to find out what she is up to Loonatics.


Ace: You can count on us, Zadavia.


Zadavia: I know I could, Ace. You just make sure she doesn't have anyone in her clutches. Zadavia out.


Mallory was admiring the view when she noticed Tech looking out of it.


Mallory: Tech, are you okay. I thought you would be excited about going home to see your family.


Tech: I am, Mallory. It's just that I had it tough living in Warner Springs. It's mostly farm and none of the farmers ever took a liking to me.


Mallory: Why?


Tech: You'll know when we get there.


Scene: Warner Springs Train Station


A cat wearing a light blue shirt and overalls is waiting at the train station with a bull wearing a denim jacket and jeans.


Cat: I hope Jamie, Rev and Tech get here soon. I want to meet the rest of the Loonatics.


Bull: Ci, Penny. I heard that they did a lot of great things at Acmetropolis, like take on an ugly shapeshifter.


Penny: I also got a call from Jamie that Tech is bringing along his new girlfriend. Nice to know about Tech finding a human besides Jamie who likes him. Huh, Lorenzo?


Lorenzo: Ci.


The train is suddenly pulling out. It made a slow but complete stop as it rides into the train station. Penny and Lorenzo were looking around when they saw Jamie, her grandpa, and the rest of the Loonatics coming out of the train.


Penny: hey, Jamie. Over here.


Rev: Hey, Penny! Lorenzo! Nice of you guys to meet us here.


Penny: Hey, we wouldn't miss hangin' with you. (sees Ace and the others) Are they the Loonatics.


Ace: Hi, I'm Ace. The pink rabbit is Lexi. The big guy's Slam. And the annoying guy with the big bill is Duck.


Duck: That's Danger Duck to you.


Tech comes out of the train with Mallory.


Penny: Hey, Tech. Long time no see. (sees Mallory) Is this your new girlfriend?


Tech: She is. Mallory, these two are Penny and Lorenzo. We were friends since we were kids.


Jamie: So, Penny, how's Mom?


Penny: She's doing okay. She's working at her dress shop, so she sent me and Lorenzo to get you.


 



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Aaw! That is so sweet! I love ze spanish accent! I just love speaking that way. Si!

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Terrific job on this further build-up chapter, StellaMagic. I'm definitely going to be looking forward to more of this story as it comes.

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Ch. 2: Family

Scene: May's Boutique

In a dress shop called May's Boutique, a middle-aged woman who looks like Jamie only with hazel eyes is putting the finishing touches on a red dress. Jamie and the other Loonatics, except Tech and Rev, were just outside the store.

Jamie: You four are gonna love my mom. She's real nice when she's not strict. (goes inside the store) Hi, mom.

Woman: Jamie! *hugs her* It's good to see you!

Jeff: (coming in) Hi, May.

May: Dad, how are you?

Jeff: We're doing okay.

May: Where are Tech and Rev?

Jamie: Yeah. They went to see their families. Tech wanted Mallory to meet his parents.

Jeff: And Rev has to help his pa with the unveiling of their new gadget factory in two days.

The Loonatics come into the store

Jamie: I want you to meet the rest of the Loonatics: Ace, Lexi, Slam, and Duck.

Ace: Hi.

May: Hello. Jamie has told me so much about you. I just need a little help. There are some fabrics in back. If you can bring them over, I'd appreciate it.

Lexi: Sure, Ms. Sullivan.

Scene: Coyote Household in the Canyons

Tech and Mallory were heading to a small house in the canyons outside of town.

Mallory: Is this where your parents live? 

Tech: yep. This is where they live?

Mallory: (looking around) How come you live so far from town, and why are there no neighbors?

Tech: My dad's work can get a little dangerous. He prefers his work out here so noone could get hurt.

Mallory: I hope your folks like me.

Tech: Don't worry, Mallory. I'm sure they will.

Tech opened the door and they went in the house. Inside waiting at the door are two older coyotes: one is black wearing a lab coat. The other is a girl wearing a pink dress and white apron, and she looks like Tech. They are Tech's mom and dad.

Tech: Mom! Dad!

His Parents: Hi, Son!

They hug Tech.

Tech's dad: It is great to see you, Son. We heard how you've been using your inventions to help save the world.

Tech's mom: We are so proud of you!

Tech: Thanks. I have someone for you to meet. (Mallory comes in) Mom. Dad. This is Mallory. my fiancee.

Tech's dad: Welcome to our family. I am Art T. Coyote. This is my wife, Tamika Coyote.

Tech: Where's Leslie?

Art: She's up in her room, seeing what to wear to the Runner Enterprise factory opening.

A girl coyote in a pink sleeveless dress came down. It's Leslie, Tech's little sister.

Leslie: Hey, Daddy, what do you think of this dress?

Art: It looks nice, Sweetie. Your brother and his fiancee is here.

Leslie: Hey, Big bro.

Tech: hey, Leslie.

Leslie: So is this your new girlfriend? She's seems like your type.

Mallory: Thanks.

Leslie: You can put your things in my room. You're gonna stay with us.



-- Edited by StellaMagic at 20:50, 2007-01-21

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Hey there. StellaMagic. Pretty good job on getting this next chapter of your story up. Terrific work on the meet and greets. I'm definitely going to be looking forward to more of this story as it comes.



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Hee hee hee! Art Y Coyote! Ha ha!  Nice work there Stella!

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Well at least Tech's folks seem more accomodating than the Runners in "Family Business"! He! He! Not bad so far Stella, 'cept i still am not too keen on the idea of Tech and Mastermind as a couple, but to each their own.

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Sorry it took so long, Guys. This semester I put myself on a schedule cuz I'm on academic probation. I have been busy trying to get work done.

Chapeter 3: Big Surprises

Scene: Outside new Runner Enterprises Factory.

Rev zoomed to the factory his dad and crew already built. He's sees his dad throwing out two familiar faces: Molly Mafia and the Stomper.

Ralph: Forget-it,-Molly! I-don't need-your-business. Your-type-involves-bullying-and-extortion!

Molly: You're gonna regret this, Runner. Once the Black Coyotes and the Phoenix Runners get through with you, you are gonna be begging for my protection.

Stomper: Yeah!

Stomper and Molly walk away angry.

Rev: (run upto his dad) Hey, Pop!

Ralph: (hugs Rev) Hi,-Son! Good-to-see-you. I'm-so-glad-to-make-it-to-my-factory-opening-tomorrow. How-are-the-other-Loonatics-doing?

Rev: Great-Pop. What-were-Molly-and-the-Stomper-doing-here?

Ralph: They-were-here-demanding-protection-money-now-that-I-put-up-the-new-factory. No-way-am-I-going-to-give-in. This-factory-will-provide-jobs-for-all-the-people-at-Warner-Springs.

Rip comes out of the factory.

Rip: Hey, Bro.

Rev: Hi,-Rip. How's-the-first-edition-Robo-Amigo-doing?

Rip: Still soaring in value.

Rev: Molly-didn't-hurt-you,-did-she, Dad?

Ralph: No,-Son. Luckily,-I-installed-security-drones.

Rev: Great,-Pop. Jamie,-her-grandpa,-and-the-other-Loonatics-will-be-at-the-ceremony-as-well.

Rip: Good. Pop could use the extra security.

Ralph: My-sentiments-exactly,-Rip. Plus,-we-get-to-meet-your-coyote-friend's-girlfriend.

Meanwhile, back at May's Boutique, the Loonatics were helping May at the shop. Jamie is busy sweeping. The door opens, showing a delivery boy with a big package.

Delivery Boy: Package for Jamie Sullivan.

Jamie: I'm Jamie.

Delivery Boy: (showing his postboard) Sign here.

Jamie takes his pen and signs the paper. Then the delivery boy leaves.

Ace: Who's the package from?

Jamie: Probably Pierre. If I know him, it's flowers to win me over.

Jamie went back to sweeping. She accidently hits the huge box with her broom. It let out a familiar 'ouch'

???: L'Ouch!

Jamie, wanting to make a bluff, grabbed a glue gun and pointed it at the box.

Jamie: All right! Come out of there if you know what's good for you!

The box popped open, revealing Speedster, her pets Charlie and Snowy, Pierre, Massive and Sypher.

Pierre:  WE'RE OUT!!!!! JUST DON'T SHOOT!!!!!!

Jamie: What are you guys doing here?!

Speedster: We-heard-you-were-on-vacation. We-thought-you-could-use-a-little-down-time-too.

Ace: Forgive me for asking this but why hide in a crate?

Massive: It was Pierre's idea.

Sypher: Frenchie wanted to surprise his "favorite" girl.

Pierre: Oui. I wanted to meet ze mother of my dear madam.

May: Are you two dating? I thought you like Rev.

Jamie: I do. Pierre is just a stalker. (to Pierre) Shouldn't you be at your cafe.

Pierre: And have you face Molly and Stomper alone?

They were still talking when they heard someone coming in. It's a pack of biker-like coyotes. One of them steps up, and he looks like Tech only bigger.

Coyote: Welcome home, Sullivan.





Note to Black Oracle: I hope you watched Kim Possible because it gave me hope. If an unlikely couple like Kim and Ron can happen, there will still be a chance this season or the next that Mallory and Tech will get together.


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StellaMagic wrote:

Pierre:  WE'RE OUT!!!!! JUST DON'T SHOOT!!!!!!

Jamie: What are you guys doing here?!

Speedster: We-heard-you-were-on-vacation. We-thought-you-could-use-a-little-down-time-too.

Ace: Forgive me for asking this but why hide in a crate?

Massive: It was Pierre's idea.

Sypher: Frenchie wanted to surprise his "favorite" girl.


Ha ha! I loved that bit! Made me giggle! Keep up the good work!



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Ch. 4: Black Coyote Intro.

The Leader coyote looks a lot like Tech, only wearing a biker get up. The tall one next to him is black and he is wearing black pants and a leather jacket. The bigger one is very muscular and wearing a black shirt. The little teenage coyote is wearing a leather jacket and a bandana.

Leader: Hello, Sullivan. Long time no see.

Jamie: Hello, Dag.

Massive: You know these guys?

Jamie: They're the black coyotes, a gang of biker coyotes who go around terrorizing Warner Springs. (to Dag) So you finally made parole. Huh, Dag? What do you want?

Dag: We Just came to discuss business with your mom.

Jamie: Mom?

May: Don't worry, Honey. I just need to talk to him.

Dag and May went into the next room. The tall black coyote is busy flirting with Jamie, which is making Pierre very concerned.

Black Coyote: So Jamie, have you set the bird free yet?

Jamie: Rev? No. I would never give up on him. You know that, Butch.

Butch: (puts his arm around Jamie) I don't see why you would hang out with Losers like Tech and that blasted bird when you can hang with a real winner *giggles*

Charlie and Snowy growled at him. Butch growled back and they ran behind Massive scared. The little coyote approached them and pet them.

Little Coyote: It's okay. He's all bark and no bite.

May came out.

May: Sorry but I am not gonna pay.

Dag: You should reconsider. I heard Molly and the Phoenix Runners are in town. You need our protection.

May: WHy would I need your protection when the Loonatics are here to help?

Dag: Maybe my boys and I should give you a demonstration on what could happen to your shop. Butch! Quit flirtin' with the enemy and pick up that vase.

Butch let go of Jamie and grabbed the vase next to him.

Dag: (To the muscle coyote) Rock, grab that table.

Rock: Righteo, Dag.

He grabs the table. Dag grabs a chair. The little coyote spoke up.

Little Coyote: Dag, we can't demolish this shop. There won't be anything left to protect.

Dag: Quit goin' goodie on me, Ian, and grab that cash register.

Ian took the cash register. They were about to throw them when Ace and Lexi stepped in.

Ace: I don't think so!

Lexi: You leave May and her shop!

Massive: Yeah. You want this shop, your're gonna have to get by us first!

Duck: Them! Not me!

Sypher: Yeah. Them!

Pierre: Oui. We're not involved.

Slam, Charlie, and Snowy growled. Speedster has his fists up ready to fight.

Dag: Are all of you gonna stop us?

Jamie: (looking at the door) Well. He might! (Points at the door)

The Black Coyotes looked at the door and gasped at seeing Jamie's grandpa, Jeff at the door.

Dag: Jeff, long time no see. We were just saying hello to your family.

Jeff: Get out of my daughter's store, Dag.

Dag: *growls* Rest assured, May. Once the Phoenix Runners and Molly Mafia get threw with you, you are gonna wish you had my help.

The Black Coyotes walked out. Butch stayed a few seconds longer and made a flirty face at Jamie.

Jamie:

Butch walked out.

Pierre: Who was that coyote?

Jamie: Butch is Dag's right-hand coyote. He had a crush on me since I was eleven. Luckily, I'm not the biker type.

Pierre wiped the sweat off of his forehead in relief.

-- Edited by StellaMagic at 16:36, 2007-02-13

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Before the end of this chapter...

Massive tries to steal the till.

Ace: Massive...

Massive: Aaaaaww...

Puts the till back.
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Sorry. Couldn't help myself putting in that extra iddy bit above. Nice story so far Stella .

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Chapter 5: Another Biker Problem

Back at the Coyote Household, Mallory is having dinner with Tech and his family.

Art: So, Mallory, when do you and Tech plan on getting married?

Tamika: Yeah. When do you make an honest coyote out of our son?

Tech: Well, Mom, (puts arm around Mallory) we were thinking of a nice wedding in the Spring.

Mallory: Say what?

Tech: *giggles* Just kidding. (to his mom) We are still working on a date.

Then, there was a knock on the door.

Art: Wait here.

Tech: Dad?

Art went to the door and opened it. Outside were a gang of biker like roadrunners. One (the leader) looked a lot like Rip when he was possessed by the Bio-Tech Parasite, only without the parasite. Another is a huge muscular black roadrunner that is the same size as Rock. The third is a girl with a gothlike, punk exterior. The fourth is not a roadrunner at all. He's a buzzard wearing a helmet. He looks like Beaky.

Lead Runner: Hello, Coyote.

Art: For the last time, Hawk, I am not paying protection.

Big Runner: Too bad. Because not only Molly is in town, but the Black Coyotes are back, including one particular one.

Girl Runner: That's right, Falcon.

Art: I can handle Dag on my own.

Buzzard: We understand you still have a problem with him. Yep. Yep. Yep. Yep. Yep.

Hawk: No we don't, Buzzy.

Girl Runner: So I think it is best you pay. You are already outcasts to this town.

Hawk: Right, Rave.

Art: My family and I can handle our own problems. Good day!

Art closes the door.

Hawk: Looks like we're gonna do this the hard way.

The roadrunners and buzzard runaway.

Mallory: Who were those birds?

Tech: The Phoenix Runners. They're a gang of Road Runners with animosity to coyotes. Last time we saw them, they were serving time in juvey hall. (to his dad) What was that about protection money, Dad?

Art: Nothing to be concerned about.

Mallory: What was that about you being outcasts?

Leslie: Nothing.

Tamika: (Coming out with a basket) I packed a nice lunch for your picnic with Mallory tomorrow, Tech. I'll put it in the freezer.

Mallory: Picnic?

Tech: I thought we can have a nice picnic. I know a nice spot by the falls.

Mallory: Sounds great, Tech.



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Interesting.... but I'm also not quite keen on the idea of Tech and Mallory as a couple. But, what I will admit is that I do believe that they have "history" between them ;)

Poor Jamie! Having that smelly Pierre stalking her! XD You'd think with his stench, you'd be able to smell him a mile away!

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Good grief! So many dangerous gangs hanging around Rev and Tech's old homes! Sounds like a pretty unsafe place to live in! I smell a clash of the Black Coyotes, Pheonix Runners and Molly Mafia comin' on! Hopefully Tech and Rev's families will survive all this intact, physically and mentally!

Tech and Mastermind acting all cuddly tho', that still don't appeal to me, but i'll bear with it when reading this.

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Thanks, guys.

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you know what this story needs? Tech's mom telling mallory some of Tech's baby stories, and baby pictures!

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cartoonhottie200 wrote:

you know what this story needs? Tech's mom telling mallory some of Tech's baby stories, and baby pictures!


Yay for embarassing stories and nekkid baby pics! XD



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kaejae wrote:

cartoonhottie200 wrote:

you know what this story needs? Tech's mom telling mallory some of Tech's baby stories, and baby pictures!


Yay for embarassing stories and nekkid baby pics! XD



Anyone noticing how alot of fans are often most interested in seeing Tech as a baby in particular? Must indicate something about Tech's cuteness!

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As a baby yes. So then what happened!? O_O



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THOUGHT BUBBLE!

Tech's mom: And this picture of Tech was taken on his first birthday.

Lexi: Aaaaawww! He looks so cute with nothing on but his diaper and his cowboy hat.

Duck: :rolf: Ha ha ha! That looks so funny!

Rev: Aaaw! Don't be mean Duck! He looks cute!

Tech: MOM! It's embarrassing!

Tech's mom: Yeah. And his favourite word used to be 'doddle' which is bottle in his baby language.

Ace: Hee hee! How cute!

Slam: Hee hee!

Tech: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!

END THOUGHT BUBBLE!

Personally, I bet all the Loonatics would be cute as babies.




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Yes they would Akira! Indeed they would! *Imagines baby Loonatics in a thought bubble. Grabs baby Loonatics from thought bubble and huggles them tightly.*

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THOUGHT BUBBLE!

Tech's mom: And this picture of Tech was taken on his first birthday.

Lexi: Aaaaawww! He looks so cute with nothing on but his diaper and his cowboy hat.

Duck: :rolf: Ha ha ha! That looks so funny!

Rev: Aaaw! Don't be mean Duck! He looks cute!

Tech: MOM! It's embarrassing!

Tech's mom: Yeah. And his favourite word used to be 'doddle' which is bottle in his baby language.

Ace: Hee hee! How cute!

Slam: Hee hee!

Tech: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!


Tech's mom: oh this is Mr. Wuggie, Tech's favorite toy, tech would never let me wash him, I would have to wait till he was asleep to put it in the washing Machine
Lexi: Awww how sweet!
Rev: bahahaha!
Duck: awww widdle Techie wuves his Mr. Wuggies
Tech: *blushing* shut up!
Ace: aww we upsetted the wittle puppy
Slam: hee hee
Tech's mom: he would get so cranky if he didn't have his nap the way he liked it. I would have to tuck him in, made sure he had Mr. Wuggie, turn on his nightlight then give him a kiss on the cheek
Tech: MOM! THAT WAS A SECRET!
others: *laughing*



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I'll think about it, but those are great ideas for a surprise ending.

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Ch. 6: Tech's Family Secret

Scene: Warner Falls

The next day, Tech and Mallory are having their picnic at Warner Falls. Mallory is eating balognea on rye while Tech is having a ham and cheese sandwich.

Mallory: Your mother made us a great lunch, Tech. I'm glad your family took such a liking to me.

Tech: Me too, Mallory. They love you because you are nothing like Frieda.

Both giggled. They were about to eat some more when Mallory heard something.

Mallory: Do you hear something?

Tech: No. What do you hear?

There was a loud revving sound of hovercycles, and they are getting closer.

Mallory: That. It sounds like really loud hovercycles.

Tech: :panic: Okay! Picnics over!

Tech began packing the food into the basket hurrily

Mallory: Tech, what's wrong? Is it the Phoenix Runners?

Tech: Worse: the Black Coyotes. They are like the Phoenix Runners, only they hate anything not a coyote. We're on their turf.

Tech got all the food into the basket. They were about to run when the Black Coyotes appeared out of nowhere and circled around Tech and Mallory. They stopped after circling three times. Dag gets off his bike and approaches them.

Dag: Nice to see you again, Techie.

Tech: Not you again, Dag.

Dag: Awwwwwwww! You're not happy to see me? I'm hurt.

Butch is eating the rest of their picnic.

Mallory: Hey! That's our lunch!

Ian: Butch! Stop! That's not your basket!

Butch: Shut up, Ian.

Rock: (grabs Mallory) Look, Dag. Techie has a new girlfriend. She has a swollen head...literally.

Dag: Still, she's a cute one. (To Mallory) How 'bout dumpin' Techie and come ridin' with me, Sugar?

Mallory swiped her hand against Rock.

Mallory: Sorry, but Tech is the only coyote among you who is my intellectual equal.

Rock: Whoa! Did she just call us dumb?

Dag: I like them with attitude. (tries to kiss Mallory)

Tech: Leave her alone, Dag!

Then, their bikes suddenly lifted from the ground. Massive, Jamie, and Lorenzo were there. Massive used his powers after seeing the way Dag is treating Tech and Mallory.

Massive: A good thing Jamie and Lorenzo were giving me a tour.

Lorenzo: Ci.

Jamie: Leave, Dag, or I'll have Massive crush your bikes.

Massive put the Coyotes down.

Dag: Come on, Boys. We got better things to do.

Dag gives a flirty look to Mallory, causing her to feel sick.

The Black Coyotes hover off.

Mallory: That was a bad experience. (to Tech) Tech, how do you know their leader.

Tech: :sigh: Dag is my brother.

Massive: YOUR WHAT!?

Jamie: Even a coyote family has a black sheep, Massive.

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What do you guys think of it so far?

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Very good Stella! Lots of suspense, and love Lorenzo's "Ci". Tres cute! And Mallory will never be your girlfriend Dag! Never!

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Shock horror shock! Dag is Tech's brother! These Black Coyotes seem to like flirting with all the women they come across don't they?

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StellaMagic wrote:

The next day, Tech and Mallory are having their picnic at Warner Falls. Mallory is eating balognea on rye while Tech is having a ham and cheese sandwich.



Le gasp. Mallory is eating her bologna on me. O=
Hehe. Sorry... that just needed to get out. x3

P.S. Nice job!



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Something about your le gasp sounds familiar, but it might be my imagination.

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Ch. 7: Tech's Secrets

Tech: yep. Dag is my brother. Back when we were kids, he and the other Black Coyotes use to pick on the three of us. The last time we saw him and the Phoenix Runners, they were put into Juvey Hall for harboring illegal weapons for their upcoming gang war. My father and Dag haven't spoken ever since.

Duck: For a nice simple place, Warner Springs sure has a lot of bikers.

Ace: Not helpin', Duck.

Rev: Luckily,-we-always-have-Jamie-to-defend-us,-considering-she-eats-bullies-for-breakfast,-lunch,-dinner. Plus, we-always-have-the-secret-irrigation-tunnels-to-make-quick-escapes.

Mallory: What tunnels?

Tech: There use to be an irrigation system that runs all over the fields in Warner Springs. It was no longer in use when there was no more water underneath. Jamie would pretty much use them to pull pranks on Dag. (show flashes as Tech tells them) Like that time she snagged all four of them and made them look like yo-yos; and the time she lure them into her mouse trap field; and when she left a bad taste in their mouths after paint-coating their tongues.

Massive: Someone hear has a cruel sense of humor.

Jamie: Yeah. Hey, Mallory, why don't we show you all of Warner Springs? You can even meet our teacher, Patty.

Scene: Large barn

Jamie, Tech, Rev and Mallory were walking past the barn.

Jamie: Her house should be over around the barn. I just I hope we get there before we bump into ...

Three human boys about Jamie's age show up in front of them. One has a black mullet and wears overalls. Another kid is wearing a cowboy hat, blue shirt, and the other wears a red shirt and Denim jacket.

Jamie:...Rico. >:(

Rico: Look. It's dog boy and his friends. I can't believe you still hang together after what dag tried to do to your mom.

Jamie: Tech is not involved in that.

Mallory: Who do you think you are talking about Tech that way?

Rico: I am Rico. These are my boys. Dakota and Marshall. We know you. Your that genius convict Mastermind.

Mallory: Mallory Mastermind to you.

Rico: Perfect for a no good coyote to date a convict.

Rev: That's ex-convict. Mallory has gone straight.

Rico: Please. Anyone who dates a coyote is no good.

Jamie: :sneer: Says the high school drop out who is now a farm hand.

Rico: Cheap shot.

Tech: Rico, my family and I are not like Dag.

Rico: Yeah right. You coyotes were no good then, and you are no good now.

Jamie: (as they walk away) Come on, guys. >:( We don't have to put up with this.

Rico: Keep away from our livestock!

Mallory looked at a distraught Tech. She now realizes why Tech's family lives so far from town. The farmers of Warner Springs are prejudicial against coyotes.

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Oh Tech!

Glomps on Tech.

Tech: What the!?

Me: It's so sad to see you feel so miserable! I want you to be happy!

Tech: Aren't you meant to be a Rev fan? Go hug him.

Me: Not until you're happy again!

Tech: This would take a while.

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Nothing wrong with Rico helping out on a farm i think. But poor Tech, why must his old neighbours be so prejudiced against coyotes? They're all jealous of his genius i say! He! He!

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Warner Springs is mostly farm. Those farmers hate coyotes because they think they'd hurt their livestock. Does anyone live in a farmlike area? You don't have to tell me. I just like to see in anyone understands what I am talking about.

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Oh i know farmers have to protect their livestock, but the difference between Tech and most wild coyotes: he's intelligent and talks! Surely the farmers could acknowledge that? Or maybe in the year 2772, there are human and anthro conflict issues in some areas. Who knows.

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I use to live on a farm out in Nevada about 2 years ago. Farmers dont hate the coyotes unless they see one on their land. A while back a farmer had a coyote problem.
I was the best shot so I was tasked with coyote "disposal".

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D: 'Disposal'?

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Well he wanted a corpse but I used a Tranq round and had the poor thing relocated instead. The coyote didnt kill any livestock, and it wouldnt be right anyway.

And to the writer: Great story! Keep it up!

Oh yeah and...Tech = awsome sauce is a fact! (Pardon my slang.)

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Please tell me you never killed a coyote.

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Of course not! I have great level of respect for nature; especially of coyotes, wolves, dogs, and the sort even though I'm more of a indoor person.

I shot them with a knockout agent and relocated the pack of them.(8 total, 6 pups)

And write more soon, please. Good stuff.

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StellaMagic wrote:

Warner Springs is mostly farm. Those farmers hate coyotes because they think they'd hurt their livestock. Does anyone live in a farmlike area? You don't have to tell me. I just like to see in anyone understands what I am talking about.


I live on 160 acres. We get coyotes occasionally. But we don't shoot them. We just shoot the hundreds of Prairie Dogs running rampant in the pastures.
When I was younger I lived on 20 acres near Yosemite National Park (California)... my tabby kitten Tiger was taken by coyotes along with a couple other cats and chickens. Worse though was my puppy Jenny who was really headstrong and decided to face off against a Mountain Lion... and lost. And then there was a litter of kittens we lost to a rattlesnake.
Still, we never shot any of those animals. I mean, hey, that's how the food chain works... much as it sucks to wake up and find a pet missing.

On a brighter note, good job on the latest chapter. =)



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poor thing... I'm sorry.

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Ch. 8: Patty and Katie Chicken

Scene: Patty Chicken's Home

The four friends made it all that way to Patty Chicken's Home. Patty was their favorite teacher from high school, and a chicken. She lives there with her six-year-old daughter, Katie. They were just tending to their flower garden when they saw Tech, Rev, and Jamie with Mallory.


Patty: Jamie? Rev? Tech? Is that you?


Jamie: Hi, Patty. We're here for a visit.


Katie: (approaches Jamie and Rev) Jamie. Rebbie. Hi, Rebbie.

Jamie: Hey, Katie. You've gotten taller last we saw you. (picks her up)

Katie: Everyone said you're a superhero.

Jamie: Yeah we are. We are preventing bad people from doing bad things.

Tech is still looking down from what Rico said. Patty and Katie noticed him.

Patty: What's wrong with Tech?

Rev: Rico-is-what's-wrong.

Patty: Oh. Not him.

Katie whispers something in her mom's ear.

Patty: That would be great, Katie.

Katie ran upto Tech.

Katie: (grabbing his tail) Techie. Techie. Hi, Techie. :giggles:

Katie begins swinging from Tech's tail.

Tech: Katie...no *giggles* Katie, stop. *giggles*

They began playing with each other.

Jamie: Have you met Mallory? She's Tech's new girlfriend.

Patty: Oh yeah. I heard about you. You're the supervillainess that went straight.

Mallory: I'm glad your daughter is cheering Tech up. Do most of the farmers around here treat Tech and his family the same way as Rico?

Patty: Unfortunately yes. Warner Springs is mostly farm. All of the farmers here are very protective of their livestock. They think that coyotes would hurt them because of how their primitive ancestors would eat any small animals.

Mallory: You've got to be kidding. The closest thing Tech ate involving livestock is prime rib.

Patty: Try telling them that. Has Jamie told you about her misadventures yet?

Mallory: Tech told me about how she gave Dag and the Black Coyotes a hard time.

Patty: She is also coming up with crazy ideas for games, like log-rolling races, hill surfing, and getting flung from a tree to reach the lake. Jamie's ideas may get her hurt or in trouble, but she brings something that this sleepy little town needs: more excitement. With Jamie and her friends around, Warner Springs is anything but dull.

Mallory: Well she certainly brought more excitement in my life.



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Well at least Tech has some friends in Warner Springs! Not everyone there's out to get him!

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Patty Chicken...
I don't know, kind of makes me want to sing the Patty Cake song. xD
Nice job on the chapter. =)
That was cute with the little girl swinging on Tech's tail. Hehe.

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Hee hee! Log rolling races, hill surfing and getting flung from a tree and into the lake.  They should be olympic sports!

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Ch. 9: The Bad Guys and the Good guys

Scene: Old Warner Mines

That night, Molly is having a meeting with the Black Coyotes and the Phoenix Runners. All three sides have joined together to take out the three business they demand pay from.

Molly: Well it seems that none of the little businesses are going to cooperate with us.

Dag: What's worse is that the Loonatics came along. What if they catch on to our plans?
Hawk: That is not gonna happen. We just need to figure out how to outsmart the Loonatics. Remember, the extortion scheme is also revenge for our imprisonment. We would have been in prison longer if Molly Mafia hadn't bribed our parole officers.

Rave: I don't see why we can't use our new meteor powers to attack now.

Hawk: because, Sweetheart, we have the elemant of surprise. We will use our powers when it is time to take on the Loonatics.

Molly: Yeah. Hard to believe that shockwave traveled far enough to give you mugs powers.

Butch: Just remeber the deal you and I made, Molly.

Molly: Right. We take down the speedy squacker and you get Jamie.

Ian and Buzzy were over hearing their conversation. They were both feeling uneasy about it.

Ian: I don't like the way this scheme is goin', Buzzy.

Buzzy: Neither do I. Nope. Nope. Nope. Nope. Nope.

Scne: Cave in the Canyons

Jamie, Tech and Rev were taking Mallory, Sypher, Pierre, Slam and Ace to a cave in the canyons.

Jamie: That cave should be right near here, Guys. It should take us to Coyote City.

Rev: It is where most of the other coyotes hang out. It is pretty much their own civilization.

They found the cave and went right through it. It was totally dark.

Pierre: I don't know, Jamie: It is already dark out. Then some lights came on.

Jamie: Almost there guys. Just watch your... STEP!!

The gang falls down a minor cliff. They fell on top of some clothes lines. Then, they fell into a street. They were lifting themselves back up when they saw an upcoming car. They ran out of the street.

Jamie: 'Can never get use to that.

Rev: Let's just find Spike bfore Dag finds us.

Scene: Brewery

They went inside an old brewery and saw some coyotes who are just as tough as Dag and the rest of the Black Coyotes are. They turned and saw Jamie and Tech with Rev. One of them, an old coyote with an eye patch, stood up.

Old Coyote: Well look what we have her boys.

Massive, Sypher, Mallory, Pierre, Salm, and Ace Looked scared.

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What!? Ace is scared!? So now he has another fear! Excellent chapter there Stella keep it up !

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