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Black Oracle · Black Hole Survivor

RE: Suspects

XtreamCrazy · BUT MY CHEESE WILL GET COLD. D8

it wasn't mallory but she is a suspect...

it was her evil twin sister who wants to get revenge on her sister's behalf... Because Tech refused Mallory's advances... and the twin sister is very protective of Mallory... but then she falls madly in love with Tech herself and tries to coyote-nap him for herself... However, Mallory gets angry at her sister for trying to take her man, so there's a huge cat-fight... then Duck gets jealous because Tech is getting all the attention... then everyone goes out and has icecream whilst watching the sisters continually try to scratch eachother's eyes out...

>_>

I think I went a little overboard there with my assumption... ^^;

Akira_Cat · Your local cat

But it could happen

.

Black Oracle · Black Hole Survivor

XtreamCrazy wrote:

it wasn't mallory but she is a suspect...

it was her evil twin sister who wants to get revenge on her sister's behalf... Because Tech refused Mallory's advances... and the twin sister is very protective of Mallory... but then she falls madly in love with Tech herself and tries to coyote-nap him for herself... However, Mallory gets angry at her sister for trying to take her man, so there's a huge cat-fight... then Duck gets jealous because Tech is getting all the attention... then everyone goes out and has icecream whilst watching the sisters continually try to scratch eachother's eyes out...

>_>

I think I went a little overboard there with my assumption... ^^;

ROFL! Casey sisters fighting over Tech!

*Tech shakes his head.*

Tech: How do i get mixed up with these crazy women?

XtreamCrazy · BUT MY CHEESE WILL GET COLD. D8

Xtream: *pats Tech on the head* awe! it's okie! You won't haffta see them ever again!
Tech: huh???
Xtream: Because Black Oracle and I are planning to steal you! ^_^ Well, I was planning to steal you... Black Oracle will only find out about the plans after reading this post... I was originally going to keep you for myself, but I've been told that I'm a bit greedy with my characters, so I'll share... ^_^
Tech: *is incredibly disturbed and freaked out* um... ok... your little speach is distressing me...
Xtream: Don't worry!

After we coyote-nap you, you won't haffta care about anything! ^_^
Mallory sisters: COYOTE-NAP HIM??? CHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARGE!!!
Xtream: O_O *grabs Tech and runs* BARRY!!!

Black Oracle · Black Hole Survivor

XtreamCrazy wrote:

Xtream: *pats Tech on the head* awe! it's okie! You won't haffta see them ever again!
Tech: huh???
Xtream: Because Black Oracle and I are planning to steal you! ^_^ Well, I was planning to steal you... Black Oracle will only find out about the plans after reading this post... I was originally going to keep you for myself, but I've been told that I'm a bit greedy with my characters, so I'll share... ^_^
Tech: *is incredibly disturbed and freaked out* um... ok... your little speach is distressing me...
Xtream: Don't worry! After we coyote-nap you, you won't haffta care about anything! ^_^
Mallory sisters: COYOTE-NAP HIM??? CHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARGE!!!
Xtream: O_O *grabs Tech and runs* BARRY!!!

'Ang on Xtream! Wait up! Don't even think about trying to get away with Tech on your own! *Sees Casey sisters approaching fast.* Mind if i borrow your gluco gel gun Techie-poo? *Fires gluco gel rounds at Casey sisters.* Aha! Tech's technology once again saves the day! Or our skins at least...

-- Edited by Black Oracle at 19:09, 2007-02-24

XtreamCrazy · BUT MY CHEESE WILL GET COLD. D8

YES! We are saved!

*hands Tech to Oracle*

The way I see it, we share him on weekly intervals. You may have him the first week, then next Sunday I'll take him, then the Sunday after that, you take him... Except on your birthday you can have him all day to yourself, and visa versa with my birthday... I'll take him Christmas Eve and you can have him Christmas day... howzat? ^_^

Tech: I feel so... owned... T_T

ROFL! XD

Black Oracle · Black Hole Survivor

Me: Yeeesss, that arrangement suits me just fine! Tee hee hee!

Tech: Hey! Girls! I'm not a toy you know!

Me: I don't care what you are, you're mine for now! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

Techy_Coyote · Beast

Uh... isn't this suppose to be a fanfic and not a fanpick. Anyways I already device a plot to get Tech.

Lonewolf: Not with the plans again...

First, one of u will have to slowly divert the team away (including boss lady).
Next, the other initiate lock-down except the exit leading towards a dark alley.
Be sure to remove any tracer devices from Tech (But not his clothes, got it?!)
Afterwards, both of you will "borrow" one of Tech's vehicle and speed of to a hideout.
From there, set up any means of defence against Techie fans EXCLUDING me.

And just start distributing time slot for each other but just include me on every Weekends and Birthday applies too. And for Christmas, we could all hang out with Tech.

Lonewolf: Wat about me?!

Just buzz other conciousless pple. Seesh!

XtreamCrazy · BUT MY CHEESE WILL GET COLD. D8

alright! it's a plan! Right! let's get into it!!!

Tech: Um... let's not. *drops a huge forcefeild around himself* haha! fangirl proof! XD

Techy_Coyote · Beast

But you are forgetting something Tech, Im a fanboy!! LOL so I can enter no probs. But just in case, *Takes sleep syrum* Just to make sure you dont have anymore escape.

Anyway, I made Force Field Destroyer 10.56 specially designed for Xtream and Black Oracle. With Tech's cool pics I secretly took from his room... HAHAX I'm so diabolical

XtreamCrazy · BUT MY CHEESE WILL GET COLD. D8

*stares at Techy Coyote, then at Tech* PSYCHE!!! XD You're our's Tech!!!
Tech: *gulps*

Hey! This is my 100th post! XD *dances*

-- Edited by XtreamCrazy at 12:47, 2007-02-27

Black Oracle · Black Hole Survivor

Tech's ours! MWAHAHAHAHAHA! And congrats on your 100th post Xtream! All those hours of swooning in text over Tech paid off! He! He!

the_oddity · O HAI THAR

_> -enters Tech's bubble- AHA!

Tech: O_O But how?! You're a fangirl!

Ah, but not your fangirl!

-pushes him out to Black Oracle and Xtream-

XtreamCrazy · BUT MY CHEESE WILL GET COLD. D8

AHA! That is tricky Oddity! I never would have thought of it! XD *glomps Tech*

Black Oracle · Black Hole Survivor

Wheeeee! Chappie 4! Tech goes rogue! Enjoy.

Chapter 4

Later that evening, Tech stepped out of an inconspicuous, dull-coloured car near to the Acme Bio-Chemical labs. He was wearing a long dark brown coat and a hat over his long ears to conceal him from immediate visual recognition. He pulled the tall collars of his sweeping coat up to his face as he made his way to the target building. He had a persistent feeling of guilt for what he was about to do there, but it had to be done.

At Loonatics’ HQs, the Loonatics were all standing around impatiently in the central command room. Rev was sitting bored at the control panels when the monitor screen in front of him suddenly started flashing red. A map image displayed a moving red dot.

“Ace!” Rev quickly alerted, “Someone’s-heading-toward-the-Bio-Chemical-labs-and-it’s-not-the-police!”

“I see it Rev,” Ace responded as quickly, “get on line with the police commissioner and tell him. We’ll rendezvous with his patrol there.”

The Loonatics put on their jetpacks and flew out of HQs.

Back at the labs, Tech had snuck to the building’s shadowed side. He placed an electronic lock-opening device next to a window, and waited for the sound of the electronic window lock’s opening click. Then easily pulling the window open, he slipped inside the compound silently. As he made his way to the first corridor, he scanned the ceiling for CCTV cameras. Two of them.

“A localized EMP shot should take them out.” Tech expertly assessed.

His hands glowed green as he generated globules of electromagnetic energy. Then he shot the energy balls at the cameras, effectively cutting off their electrical power. Soon Tech had navigated his way to the fifth floor of the compound, taking out several CCTV cameras along the way. As he emerged from an elevator lift, he placed a pair of metal-framed, bright-lensed goggles over his eyes and began surveying the corridor.

“These ultra-violet light emitting goggles should pick up footprints.”

He saw them clearly through the lenses. Two intersecting trails of footprints, similar to his own in shape, led to and from the room that had once held the M-14 chemical. He then noticed that the leaving trail had ended abruptly on a certain spot. He looked up to the ceiling right above the spot and saw a small air vent opening. He increased the magnification of his lenses.

“Hmm, too small for someone of my size to fit through.” Tech observed.

He then noticed a strange thick, viscous liquid dripping from the rim of the air vent opening. It had a dark, deep red, almost black, coloration.

Tech looked down to the floor again and spotted a small puddle of the strange liquid. He removed his goggles then knelt down and, with a syringe, carefully extracted a sample of the dark liquid, then placed the sample in an air-tight glass vile. He pocketed it. Then he decided to head to the video surveillance room. Once there, he sifted through racks of camera footage discs. He selected one labelled with the previous night’s date and evening times, pocketing that too.

Tech made his way down to ground level again as soon as he was done. He was heading to the window he had entered through when he noticed approaching lights from outside through the windows in dismay. A whole team of police were stationing themselves around the building, blocking off its exits. Suddenly, the front doors ahead of Tech burst open as a compact group of armed police barged in, and right behind them were Ace and the other Loonatics. The police fanned out in a semi-circle around Tech, taking aim at him with their weapons.

“What a surprise, the criminal always returns to the scene of the crime!” Duck sarcastically jested at Tech with his hands on his hips.

“Tech E. Coyote, you’re under arrest! Put your hands up where we can see them!” ordered the police group leader.

“This is as far as you go Tech!” Ace sternly stated. “Now do as he says!”

Tech paused for a moment, then removed the hat that had been covering his ears from his head.

“If you insist.” Tech responded in an unusually casual tone.

Tech swept his glowing green magnetic hands upwards and as he did so, all the police guns were seized and pulled from their grasps. A few of the policemen fell forward as a result, and Tech threw their guns out of their immediate reach behind him.

“Loonatics! Stop him!” Ace quickly ordered, pointing at Tech.

“Upgrader activate!” Tech instructed.

“What’s he…?” Lexi began.

But she cut herself off as Tech was suddenly enveloped by layers of dark blue, mechanical armour. A streamlined helmet with razor-sharp ear pieces slid over his snout. The Upgrader Battle-Suit 8200 covered him from head to toe. The other Loonatics gasped as a tall, fully-armoured, robotic coyote imposingly looked upon them with illuminated green optics.

Rye · Anthros

You're really throwing me into a zigzag with my thoughts of whether Tech is a good guy or a bad guy. xD I can't make up my mind. One chapter I think he's good and then the next I think he's bad... the SUSPENSE! Update soon. ;3

-- Edited by Rye at 18:18, 2007-03-02

Black Oracle · Black Hole Survivor

He! He! Good Tech, bad Tech, or just a coyote on the run? You decide! AHAHAHAHAHAHAA! I loves playing with your minds!

Techy_Coyote · Beast

I pick... Good coyote who is being framed. However, a little evil still adds more respect to Tech... God, my head hurts from all the immense chasing...

Black Oracle · Black Hole Survivor

Yes, Tech's a hunted coyote! And not by the fangirls for once! Tee hee!

kaejae · LUO's Next Top Poser

Oh snap. Darn you Tech and your inventions! *shakes a fist*

Black Oracle · Black Hole Survivor

Ha! Ha! Ha! Tech can do anything with his inventions! Sorry i have to continue to torment you kaejae with more Tech coolness to come!

kaejae · LUO's Next Top Poser

Ah well, I'll keep reading in hope of an Ace kickin' but part in there XD

But in all seriousness, I quite like this fic.... as the rest of yer fics as well! It's like I can see an actual eppy of it playing on the tele!

Black Oracle · Black Hole Survivor

Well stay tuned for the next part, coz Ace and Lexi do manage to get a good whack at Tech then!

And i think i'd die if i ever saw something like this or any of my other stories as an actual ep! Ahhh....*Dreams away.* I'm glad you like this fic, even tho' it is Tech-focused. *Huggles kaejae.* You like my work! You really like it! I can die happy now!

Akira_Cat · Your local cat

What happens next!? What happens next!?

TELL ME!!!

Black Oracle · Black Hole Survivor

Eeek! Scary Akira! He He! Sorry Akira, you're gonna have to wait for the next installment like everyone else! Please don't kill me!

XtreamCrazy · BUT MY CHEESE WILL GET COLD. D8

*giggles at the thought of Tech in a hat and coat with an upturned collar*

Why? Because I can.

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/50093254/?qo=1&q=by%3Axtreamcrazy+in%3Ascraps&qh=sort%3Atime

And there will be more the further the story goes... Howzat for motivation...

*swoons and melts at the sexi rebelliousness*

YOU MAKE TECH SO HECK-DAMN HAWT!!! NEVER STOP WRITING!! NEVER!!!!! *hearts*

And d'you know what I found today - looking through some of my old pictures??? I found the picture I drew whilst reading your 'Tech-turns-into-a-were-coyote-story' of a were-Tech! XD

-- Edited by XtreamCrazy at 23:56, 2007-03-03

kaejae · LUO's Next Top Poser

Black Oracle wrote:

Well stay tuned for the next part, coz Ace and Lexi do manage to get a good whack at Tech then!

And i think i'd die if i ever saw something like this or any of my other stories as an actual ep! Ahhh....*Dreams away.* I'm glad you like this fic, even tho' it is Tech-focused. *Huggles kaejae.* You like my work! You really like it! I can die happy now!

OH HAPPY DAY!! *dances*

Black Oracle · Black Hole Survivor

XtreamCrazy wrote:

*giggles at the thought of Tech in a hat and coat with an upturned collar*

Why? Because I can.

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/50093254/?qo=1&q=by%3Axtreamcrazy+in%3Ascraps&qh=sort%3Atime

And there will be more the further the story goes... Howzat for motivation...

*swoons and melts at the sexi rebelliousness*

YOU MAKE TECH SO HECK-DAMN HAWT!!! NEVER STOP WRITING!! NEVER!!!!! *hearts*

And d'you know what I found today - looking through some of my old pictures??? I found the picture I drew whilst reading your 'Tech-turns-into-a-were-coyote-story' of a were-Tech! XD

-- Edited by XtreamCrazy at 23:56, 2007-03-03

Eeeeee! Tech in long coats is hot! And his hat, well i didn't actually have a fixed idea of what it looked like exactly, i just needed to put one on him to help conceal him somewhat from possible bypassers. So that hat you put on him in your piccy will do. And holding that syringe makes him look just that little bit more suspicious! Thanks for doing that pic! Me likes it very much!

And you did a were-Tech pic too? Can i see? *Drools* Y'know, matn90 has done a were-Tech story as well on FF.net now.

And yeeeesssss, Tech will always be so 'heck-damn hawt' as you put it! Tee hee!

XtreamCrazy · BUT MY CHEESE WILL GET COLD. D8

It's reeeeeally bad! XD Before I got the hang of drawin Tech... *rofl* But I'll put it up anyways... ^_^

The Heck-Damn Hawtness! X3

~*~EDIT~*~

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/50119520/

there ya go... I risked public humiliation just for joo... ^_^

-- Edited by XtreamCrazy at 09:59, 2007-03-04

Black Oracle · Black Hole Survivor

*Drools* Savage Tech! RAOW! He! He! That's not a bad sketch at all actually. Nothing to be embarrased about really. It's Tech in all his raw, feral hotness! *Drools again.*

kaejae · LUO's Next Top Poser

O_O I thought I had fangirl issues *roffles*

Black Oracle · Black Hole Survivor

We all have fangirl issues! LOL!

Akira_Cat · Your local cat

XtreamCrazy wrote:

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/50093254/?qo=1&q=by%3Axtreamcrazy+in%3Ascraps&qh=sort%3Atime

Tech looks like inspector gadget in the long coat and hat with that remote control. Not that I mind or anything cos he looks cool in it.

THOUGHT BUBBLE!

The police are currently chasing Tech in his long coat and hat.

Police: Stop! In the name of the law!

Tech fwips out a remote control.

Tech: Go go gadget helicopter!

He presses the button and a mini-helicopter opens and Tech jumps in it making his quick get away from the police.

END THOUGHT BUBBLE.

Please don't kill me!

the_oddity · O HAI THAR

-points at Tech and laughs and is bricked-

Black Oracle · Black Hole Survivor

Akira_Cat wrote:
Tech looks like inspector gadget in the long coat and hat with that remote control. Not that I mind or anything cos he looks cool in it.

THOUGHT BUBBLE!

The police are currently chasing Tech in his long coat and hat.

Police: Stop! In the name of the law!

Tech fwips out a remote control.

Tech: Go go gadget helicopter!

He presses the button and a mini-helicopter opens and Tech jumps in it making his quick get away from the police.

END THOUGHT BUBBLE.

Please don't kill me!

Actually he was holding a syringe in that pic, not a remote control. But that Inspector Gadget parody is funny!

Tech: Go go Upgrader suit 8200! *Tech is encompassed by cool shiny armour.*

Me: *Collapses in a drooling mess.*

XtreamCrazy · BUT MY CHEESE WILL GET COLD. D8

Rofl! Go go Upgrader suit 8200! XD

Yes, our fangirliness gives us issues... lol *drools*

If you like Tech-feral-hawtness, you'll like the picture that I'm colouring atm... the sketch is in my scrap section on DA, but it's gonna look heaps better coloured! ^_^

Glad you like the were-coyote pic... even if I hate it...! lol

Black Oracle · Black Hole Survivor

Is this it? http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/50093528/?qo=1&q=by%3Axtreamcrazy+in%3Ascraps&qh=sort%3Atime

Hot Dang! Tech's so...vicious-looking there! Grrrrrr! What's he wearing tho'? Can't wait to see the coloured version!

I browsed through some of your other gallery pics too. I like your Swat Kats pics! I love Swat Kats as well ('specially Razor! *Sighs*)! And that pic of the Loonatics as humans is a real eye-opener! Is that Slam on the left with a beard? That beard looks pretty good. And Duck's still a shortie! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA! I can tell the one on the far right is Rev, being thin and lanky and all. Lexi's still got nice hair, and Tech and Ace too! *Sighs* Ahhhhh....Attractive styled hair! Tee hee! I wonder what Tech's theory would have been?

Black Oracle · Black Hole Survivor

Heeeerrreee's chappie 5!

Chapter 5

“Whoah!-Didn’t-see-that-comin’!” Rev choked.

“Loonatics take him down!” Ace rallied.

The others dispersed as Ace stood his ground and fired his laser vision directly at Tech’s chest, but it bounced right off a transparent force-field that surrounded Tech and back in Ace’s direction. Ace let out a gasp and rolled out of the way just in time to avoid being hit by his own lasers.

“Auto laser-refractive electro-shield.” Tech explained as he advanced toward Ace.

He stopped when his internal movement sensors picked up Rev’s speeding form heading toward him from behind. Tech spun around and slammed a fist into Rev’s oncoming face, sending the road runner sliding backwards across the floor. Slam whirled across to Tech in his tornado mode. A small gun emerged from Tech’s armoured right shoulder and fired a spin-neutralizing ray at the spinning Tasmanian devil. Rapidly Slam found himself slowing down until his body had stopped spinning completely.

“Ruugh??” Slam said confused.

A stun blast from Tech caught Slam off guard, and he fell down unconscious. Duck conjured up two power orbs and threw them at Tech. The coyote swiped them away with a repeller-energy-shielded arm. Then from Tech’s armoured arm emerged another device. He fired a disorientating vertigo beam at Duck, causing the mallard to fall to his knees clutching his unsteady head. His vision was blurring and a nauseous sickness overcame him.

“Ugggh! I think I’m going to be sick….” Duck blurted.

“Ace! Together! Attack pattern 13!” Lexi called.

Ace and Lexi flipped toward Tech. Tech brought his armoured arms up in front of himself for protection as their slicing, air-borne legs came down in continuous crashes against his armour plating. Their kick strikes were surprisingly strong and well-aimed. Tech could feel the reverberations from them from within his battle-suit. He struggled to block both their rapid strikes as they continued to alternately hit him at different times. Finally, Tech managed to grab one of Ace’s ankles in mid-air and flung him aside into a wall. Lexi began to charge up a brain blast between her long ears. Tech immediately aimed an arm at her with another weapon emerging from it. He fired a high-frequency sonic blast at Lexi. The pink bunny let out a scream of pain as she clutched her overwhelmed sensitive ears. Tech then tossed a few smoke bombs across the floor. Instantly, a wall of heavy grey smoke rose and Tech’s armoured form disappeared behind it. Coughs from the policemen and the Loonatics resulted. Seconds later, the smoke began to clear. Ace, having gotten to his feet, looked around for Tech.

“He’s gone!” Ace observed aloud.

The other four Loonatics slowly and groggily picked themselves up. There was a sudden bright flash of light coming from outside through the front doors. Ace ran out to see what it was. When he surveyed the outside premises, he saw some of the team of policemen stationed outside apparently recovering from a shock of some sort. They were rubbing their eyes in discomfort.

“He had flash bombs!” one of the policemen informed Ace. “We didn’t manage to see where he went.”

At that point, the other Loonatics finally caught up with Ace outside. Ace then quickly turned to Rev.

“Rev?”

“I’m-on-it!”

Rev looked away as he channelled into his GPS.

“Agh!!”

Rev gripped his head suddenly in pain.

Ace and the others gathered around him in concern.

“Rev! What's wrong?!” Lexi asked.

“Uhh!-Can’t-get-a-lock-onto-Tech’s-mind-without-experiencing-discomfort!-He’s-gotta-be-using-a-neural-feedback-agitator!-Preventing-me-from-focusing-onto-his-brain-patterns!-Probably-was-inbuilt-into-his-battle-suit.”

Ace’s face took on grim tones at this.

“He thought of everything.” Ace muttered with clenched fists.

Back at his underground hide-out, Tech took heavy clunky steps toward his work area. The Upgrader suit was running low on power. He took out the vile with the liquid sample and the CCTV footage disc, laying them down on a table. The battle-suit opened up from the back, allowing its user to step out of it.

“Battery life didn’t last as long as I had hoped.” Tech mumbled to himself. “Gonna have to work on that, but for now, all I can do is recharge it.”

Tech attached some power cables into slots in the battle-suit, recharging it.

“Now to properly analyze what I’ve found.”

Tech picked up the CCTV footage disc and loaded it into the computer. As he waited for the video footage to start playing, he massaged his tired eyes with two fingertips. He fast-forwarded the video footage until he spotted his impersonator’s entry into the bio-chemical labs. Then he paused the video and enlarged an image of his look-alike.

“Hmm, looks like me alright. A disguising holographic imager maybe?”

Tech played the video in slow-motion and studied the movements of his impersonator intently. His sharp eyes suddenly noticed what looked like an odd flickering of movement in the fake-Tech’s left hand. He rewound the video to watch the odd hand flickering movement again. He then paused the image of the flickering hand and zoomed in on it. What he saw mildly confused him.

“It looks almost like…his hand was ‘re-sizing’ for a moment.”

Tech then noticed a drop of dark liquid dripping off one of his impersonator’s fingers in the magnified image too.

“That explains the source of the strange dark liquid I found at the labs,” Tech deduced, “but what was it exactly?”

Tech relocated himself to a table full of chemical apparatus. He extracted a sample of the strange dark red liquid with a syringe and transferred a few drops of it onto a glass slide for his microscope. He studied the magnified image of the liquid.

“This is…living tissue!” Tech realised aloud. “It’s from some living creature, or person!”

-- Edited by Black Oracle at 17:30, 2007-03-06

kaejae · LUO's Next Top Poser

Dang it... you make me wanna draw a picture too....

O_O T^T muuust... focus on school work for next two weeks.....

Then I'll draw to my little heart's conent! :D

Rye · Anthros

-stares-
He's evil! Ah, he has to be EVIL.
He punched Rev... >>;
Rev is too wonderful to be punched.
And yet, Tech can't be evil...
And yet he can be...
And to conclude, I'm still confused as to where I stand on his good/bad status.
o___o;
I'm gonna go work on my story now to soothe my scrambled thoughts. xD

StellaMagic · Martian

So whoever this fake Tech is is either a shapeshifter or a clone.

Black Oracle · Black Hole Survivor

Ooops! Sorry Rye, didn't mean to scramble your delicate little thoughts! He! He! Sorry i had to have Tech punch Rev, but i needed to show the combat 'upgrades' of his new battle suit! I am sorry, please don't hate me! At least Rev is still in one piece! Tech was never out to kill his team mates really, he just needed to get away from them so he could proceed! He tried to use non-lethal weapons if you hadn't noticed!

And darn! I want a kaejae piccy! Oh well, i can't be too greedy now can i?

Stella, you shalll see, in time.

Thanks for the comments guys!

-- Edited by Black Oracle at 19:39, 2007-03-06

Rye · Anthros

Black Oracle wrote:

Ooops! Sorry Rye, didn't mean to scramble your delicate little thoughts! He! He! Sorry i had to have Tech punch Rev, but i needed to show the combat 'upgrades' of his new battle suit! I am sorry, please don't hate me! At leas Rev is still in one piece! Tech was never out to kill his team mates really, he just needed to get away from them so he could proceed! He tried to use non-lethal weapons if you hadn't noticed!

Ah yes, I know. And I'm sure it will all come together in time. x3
Though I can't say I have any idea whatsoever as to what's running through your head with this plot.
It's very suspenseful. And I'm sure you won't fail to surprise me at the end with an outcome that never bothered to cross my mind. [=
And now I will go search for the outcome for the second chapter of my story because it seems to have run off on me. x)

Black Oracle · Black Hole Survivor

Quickly, hunt that outcome for your 2nd chapter down! Don't let it get awaaayyy! LOL!

Well, i hope the ending to this story earns some approval, though i think the next chapter i'll post up will contain the main investigative answers to this crime, but as the story progresses toward the end, other unexpected 'answers' and 'personal' issues arise for Tech.

XtreamCrazy · BUT MY CHEESE WILL GET COLD. D8

*drools at the coyote hotness*

I'd draw the suit... but I can't really get a visual on what it looks like... :(

And do you know what I ABSOLUTELY LOVE about your work B_O? NO SPELLING MISTAKES!!! *dances* That and your stories often center around Tech... ^_^

You all make me wanna write a fanfiction! X3

Akira_Cat · Your local cat

I totally visulised the whole scene in my mind! It's so cool! And thus the plot thickens at the clue Tech found. Who's living tissues that?

We have got to know what happened!

Black Oracle · Black Hole Survivor

Akira_Cat wrote:

I totally visulised the whole scene in my mind! It's so cool! And thus the plot thickens at the clue Tech found. Who's living tissues that? We have got to know what happened!

You shall know more in time my friend! He! He! I love to tease! And i like to try and visualise my stories in my mind's eye too.

XtreamCrazy wrote:

*drools at the coyote hotness*

I'd draw the suit... but I can't really get a visual on what it looks like... :(

And do you know what I ABSOLUTELY LOVE about your work B_O? NO SPELLING MISTAKES!!! *dances* That and your stories often center around Tech... ^_^

You all make me wanna write a fanfiction! X3

Yes, i'm a perfectionist when it comes to spelling! I often recheck my lines as i type to make sure i haven't spelt anything wrong. It's a habit, coz i can't stand to make obvious mistakes like that.

And i am very happy that my story pleases you so my fellow Techie! I hope the rest of what i've written will continue you to appease you!

Yes, you could try writing fanfiction too!

You can try drawing the Upgrader battle suit! That'd be so awesome! I didn't give too much descriptive detail on it coz even i wasn't exactly sure of its design myself either. But you could fill in the visual blank for me! All i imagined was that it was a dark metallic blue colour, increased Tech's size and build (with broader shoulders and chest area), had thick armour plating and plenty of in-built weapons.

XtreamCrazy · BUT MY CHEESE WILL GET COLD. D8

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*goes off and starts drawing something*

XtreamCrazy · BUT MY CHEESE WILL GET COLD. D8

Yeah, when i get stuck on something, I really do it... But it looks a bit dodgy... and I was going to colour it, but Allysha dropped cake (yummy cake, I might add) onto it, so I lost interest... >.<

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/50392385/

Hope it lives up to your standards B_O! The inking was fun! *hearts*

ignore his tail... and his legs... they suck...