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XtreamCrazy · BUT MY CHEESE WILL GET COLD. D8

In Acme We Trust (2nd Chapter!)

Rye · Anthros

XtreamCrazy wrote:

I've guessed who the mysterious guests are!

"yeah-yeah! Sure-sure! RIOT!!!" XD I love those guys! *heart*

Um... I'm kinda embarrassed by this... But I got kinda scared... You described the darkness so well that it sent chills up my spine... it felt like *I* was in the dark... and it scared me... *looks at floor* The thought of being locked up in pitch blackness and with something roaming about that could potentially harm me... it was so freaky!

Excellent job on the story! If Tech get's hurt... it will please me and sadden me (please me 'coz I like the pained drama of my favourite character getting hurt and all those around him worrying... sadden me 'coz... well... POOR TECH! XD )

I only say this to my favourite writers, 'coz it comes from the heart;

NEVER STOP WRITING!!! X3

Kudos for you! I wasn't sure anybody would know who I was talking about. xD
Hehe. Don't be embarrassed. That's awesome if you can get into my writing that much. You make my day. -love-
-laughs evilly- No, no, don't worry. I understand. I feel the same way about Rev. Whenever I read a story where something bad is happening to him, I'm like, "YEY! -favorite character's angst = my happiness- ...Er, I mean, poor Rev?"
But don't worry. I won't be /too/ evil to Tech. ;3 Keyword here: too.
So long as I have awesomeful reviewers/readers such as yourself, I wouldn't dream of it! =D
-starts plotting for third chapter- Muahaha. I'm so into writing this story. It's funny... I've never felt like that with any other story.
I've been obsessed and inspired before... but LU takes it to a whole new level. I love it. x3
-dances- Let's see... what torture can I inflict on the lufflies next? -walks off to create blueprints-

XtreamCrazy · BUT MY CHEESE WILL GET COLD. D8

Not 'too' much? *gets disappointed*

Rye · Anthros

XtreamCrazy wrote:

Not 'too' much? *gets disappointed*

Hehe. Well, you know, I don't wanna /kill/ the guy.
I don't wanna give away too much information either.
You'll see, you'll see... >D

Black Oracle · Black Hole Survivor

Another brilliantly written chapter once again Rye! I gain so much pleasure reading your perfect narratives! This written account of the Loonatics being plunged into darkness is more vivid and atmospheric than even the Black Velvet ep from S1! I was really experiencing the Loonatics' loss of vision, difficulty in finding their way around and nervousness while reading this 2nd chapter! Plus you perfectly portrayed each of the Loonatics' responses to their current dilemna. Top marks for believability and character portrayal! But what's gonna happen to our beloved Tech?! I also get mixed responses to my fave characters being hurt, i like it from a character development and attention point of view, but i feel his pain and fear too! And I hate cliffhangers! Aaaaghhhh! 3rd chapter! 3rd chapter!

Rye · Anthros

Black Oracle wrote:

Another brilliantly written chapter once again Rye! I gain so much pleasure reading your perfect narratives! This written account of the Loonatics being plunged into darkness is more vivid and atmospheric than even the Black Velvet ep from S1! I was really experiencing the Loonatics' loss of vision, difficulty in finding their way around and nervousness while reading this 2nd chapter! Plus you perfectly portrayed each of the Loonatics' responses to their current dilemna. Top marks for believability and character portrayal! But what's gonna happen to our beloved Tech?! I also get mixed responses to my fave characters being hurt, i like it from a character development and attention point of view, but i feel his pain and fear too! And I hate cliffhangers! Aaaaghhhh! 3rd chapter! 3rd chapter!

-squee- xD
I would hug you now.
-sends you virtual hug-
You also make my day.
My day has been made twice.
That's awesome.
I'm glad you're enjoying my story thus far.
I had to tweak a few things right before I published it so the plot would flow properly, so I'm happy that things came out right.
As for what is to become of Tech... only next weekend will tell. Hehe.
I will begin the third chapter just as soon as I can.
All you wonderful people make me excited to start the next chapter.
I'll probably plan it out tomorrow morning/afternoon and start on it in the evening. =)

Black Oracle · Black Hole Survivor

Ah! Virtual hug...restricting...my movement! Let go now! Please?

And yes! Do hurry with that next chapter! I'm very much looking forward to it!

I forgot to mention that i thought Duck's comments to Ace while they were breaking out of their locked room in the dark was funny too! Tee hee! And what was that 'puppet' thing Lexi found in Ace's room?

Cheri · Anthros

Just read it, and loved it! You keep everyone so in-character, it's really amazing. One of the best LU-no no no, one of THE best fan-fics I've read EVER! *throws confetti*

Rye · Anthros

Black Oracle: Oh dear. o: Can't have that now can we? -lets go- xD
No worries. I shall. I already know exactly what to do for it...
The idea came to me randomly about halfway through the second chapter.
I do believe in the earlier part of the chapter I mentioned that Tech and Rev were s'posed to go the lab... well, when Tech is struck by a thought later on in the chapter and tells Rev to stay behind, that was really 'cause I had a sudden idea which required Tech to go alone to the lab. Hehe. The result of that idea will be the basis of the next chapter and possibly longer... I have to decide just how long I want to torture Tech. -evil laugh-
Ah yes, the puppet. His identity will be revealed at the very end of the story. But if you'd like a little background information on where he popped up from, just go back to the first page of this topic and you should see a picture from "the oddity." Our conversation around that picture should give you some clue. ;3

Cheri: It's official. My day has been made... AGAIN. =DD Thank yooooou! -hug- I'm honored to have acheived such a status in your opinion. ^ ^; If I could express my happiness more thoroughly (without choking anyone with hugs) I would not hesitate to do so. However, my heartfelt gratitude will have to do. [=

Cheri · Anthros

Hehehe, I only wish I had your talent for writing, then I could get so many ideas out of my head.

Rye · Anthros

Cheri wrote:

Hehehe, I only wish I had your talent for writing, then I could get so many ideas out of my head.

Well, I'm no Shakespeare here. xD
Just a 17-year-old girl who's obsessed with English.
I only seriously started focusing on writing when I was 11.
Mark Twain and Charles Dickens inspired me. =)
And even though writing comes naturally to me, I still feel that to a certain extent the words have a mind of their own.
I start out with one outcome in my head and by the time I'm done, it's nothing like I'd planned.
I'm pretty much just lucky to have had two awesome English teachers in my high school years thus far who have really pushed me to keep writing.
And then of course there's people such as yourself who give me the inspiration and motivation I need to help me along. People who I would be nowhere without. :D

kaejae · LUO's Next Top Poser

RIOT!!

I think ah know who it is!

Rye · Anthros

kaejae wrote:

RIOT!! I think ah know who it is!

Probably do. xD

Black Oracle · Black Hole Survivor

Rye wrote:

Black Oracle: Oh dear. o: Can't have that now can we? -lets go- xD
No worries. I shall. I already know exactly what to do for it...
The idea came to me randomly about halfway through the second chapter.
I do believe in the earlier part of the chapter I mentioned that Tech and Rev were s'posed to go the lab... well, when Tech is struck by a thought later on in the chapter and tells Rev to stay behind, that was really 'cause I had a sudden idea which required Tech to go alone to the lab. Hehe. The result of that idea will be the basis of the next chapter and possibly longer... I have to decide just how long I want to torture Tech. -evil laugh-
Ah yes, the puppet. His identity will be revealed at the very end of the story. But if you'd like a little background information on where he popped up from, just go back to the first page of this topic and you should see a picture from "the oddity." Our conversation around that picture should give you some clue. ;3

Cheri: It's official. My day has been made... AGAIN. =DD Thank yooooou! -hug- I'm honored to have acheived such a status in your opinion. ^ ^; If I could express my happiness more thoroughly (without choking anyone with hugs) I would not hesitate to do so. However, my heartfelt gratitude will have to do. [=

Now that's good story planning you did with Tech there. I just hope Tech is still left in one piece after you're through with him! He! He! *Bites fingernails nervously.*

Rye · Anthros

Black Oracle wrote:

Now that's good story planning you did with Tech there. I just hope Tech is still left in one piece after you're through with him! He! He! *Bites fingernails nervously.*

He should be. I hope. You know, unless the unexpected takes over.
I s'pose you'll just have to wait and find out what happens. ;3
I'm gonna try and start writing the third chapter tonight.
Got nothing better to do really. So we shall see. :]

Rye · Anthros

Just a note: since the link to the second chapter is working now, I'm gonna erase it here. You'll just have to click on the link to read it. =3

And now I shall go attempt to start on the third chapter.

-- Edited by Rye at 10:38, 2007-03-11