StellaMagic wrote:

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Nice story. I can't wait to read the rest.

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Thank you. Glad you enjoyed.
I will update within the week if inspiration permits. =3

kaejae wrote:

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You actually put in the "TRIANGLE" part

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xD I couldn't help myself! The Triangle is a very important part of LU. =P

XtreamCrazy wrote:

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*shakes violently before exploding*

THAT WAS SO AWESOME!!!!!!!!!

TRIANGLE!!! (but what colour?)

*dies*

*dies*

*dies*

' “Doomed,” he said simply.'

COMMERCIALS!!!

*dies yet again*

I love you.

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H'm. You're right... I didn't mention what color the triangles were... -thinks- oO; Perhaps I should fix that. x3

And don't die. 'Cause then you can't read the next chapter. xD -pokes- Which will have more commercials and more triangles. Hehe.

Now... I shall go to school. But I will definitely have to think about the next chapter so I can start writing it tonight. -runs off- =D

Nice one Rye. Can't wait for the next chappie!

Perfectly narrated Rye! You're one of a very few fanfiction writers i've come across who seem to have a natural talent and flair in expressing actions, events, and other concepts in your writing! You have no idea how wonderful it is reading your high-quality descriptions and story narration! You capture every little behavioural detail of the Loonatics splendidly! I can really perceive each of the Loonatics' characters through your writing! You do each of them justice through your great descriptions! Keep up the beautiful writing!

And in regards to the plot, who or what could this shadow be? I am curious!

XtreamCrazy-- Next chapter will most assuredly be up soon! In my Socials class today I was brainstorming for ideas for Chapter Two and I've come up with some good stuff that inspires me. In fact, as soon as I'm done replying to these reviews, I'm gonna start writing the chapter so it'll be up by the weekend at the very latest. =D

Akira Cat-- Thank you's! ^ ^;

the oddity-- Hehe. -hugs triangles- Huzzah! The triangle is a hit. xP

Black Oracle-- Your review makes my day, you have no idea. It also gives me a tremendous amount of willpower and inspiration to go start on the next chapter on the double. xD THANK YOU! As for the plot... -shifty eyes- ...I can say nothing. ;3

RevRunner-- You're not s'posed to know what's going on just yet. Everything will come together at the end, don't you worry. But I can tell you one thing and that is this: NO. Not a slash story. -shakes head- I will always portray Tech and Rev as having a sort of "brotherly" relationship but I assure you that I do not support their involvement in slash within this story or any of my stories to come. No fear. =3 You know, since I'm on the subject I may as well point out that there really isn't going to be any romance stuff in this particular story. At least, nothing outright. Some things could be taken (or perhaps even intended on occasion) to hint at a certain pairing, but I don't see any relationships budding in this story. -shrug- =)

-- Edited by Rye at 20:26, 2007-03-05

XtreamCrazy wrote:

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I agree entirely with what B_O said! ^_^

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-glomps- Aww. Thank you! =333

P.S. I'm working on the second chapter as I speak. I just reached the second page, actually. -goes back to writing-

Black Oracle wrote:

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I'm glad i could give you some motivation Rye! I just know your next piece will be a joy to read!

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I'm glad you could too. Motivation always helps. Otherwise I tend to procrastinate... x3 Anyways, I'm off to keep writing. =)

the_oddity wrote:

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No one motivates me...I guess that's why I procrastinate so much. XD

Keep writing!

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-hands you a cup of motivation- Good for the soul. xD

'Kay! -goes back to writing- ;3

Oh dear. It's still alive, is it? -pokes the something- o:

And now I will sit here and think because I've come to a roadblock of where to go next for this particular chapter in my dear little fiction. -thinks- Hum.

A teddy bear hand puppet is gonna inspire me? o__o;

Then again... wow, go figure, I actually think it just gave me an idea. xD

H'm. -starts to plot- Yeah... it just might work... [:

the_oddity wrote:

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See, Friday? You really are a creative drive! :D

Friday: ^_^

But no one can guess why I named him King Friday the XIV(14th).

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Indeed he is. xD My inspiration is flowing nicely once again. And since I have no school on Friday, maybe I really can get this chapter out by Friday night or so. =3

Yeah, that's a given. =) Kudos to anyone who actually could. x3

the_oddity wrote:

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hint hint - Mister Rogers!

Friday: :)

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Oh yeah... the dead guy. He is dead, isn't he? oO;
I never much paid attention to him when I was little, so your hint rings no bells. x3

the_oddity wrote:

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Aw, man. King Friday the Fourteenth is sad.

Friday: :( -head droops-

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He shouldn't be sad. o:
He just earned a special spot in the fic. xD
Hopefully you'll be able to spot the reference to him.
Where I am now in the chapter I'm not sure if his honorable mention will be fully noted until later on in the story or at the end of the chapter. ;3

the_oddity wrote:

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King Friday the XIV is pleased.

Friday: :)

XD Anyways...no one gets the reference in his name. Poor Mister Rogers.

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He should be pleased. xD
'Cause I just decided that he's the perfect way to end my story, I just realized.
That may not be for awhile yet... but I already have the end scene with him playing out in my mind and it is beautiful!
-rubs hands together evilly- Ah yes, perfect.
But for that ending to come, there must first be a story, and for there to be a story there must be a second chapter...
Thankfully, I'm halfway done with the second chapter now. =3
At this rate, I'm thinking it could be up on Thursday night even.

the_oddity wrote:

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Are you going to kill Friday or something? O.o

Friday: D: -shakes head-

XD Rubbing hands evilly isn't very encouraging.

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No, no. Nothing like that. =P
I can't tell you. Otherwise the ending wouldn't be special.
You'll just have to wait and find out... >3

King Friday the 14th. What an adorable name! I made some sock puppets yesterday for my performance studies exam in June. Polly and Lucy they're called cos they're the characters of the play I'm studying called "The three penny opera" by Bertolt Brecht. Basically, I'm gonna have to play three characters including the sock puppets in my piece cos I'm on my own. Aaaaaahhhhh!!!

Lucy: What are ya crying for? Ya on ya own so yars is going to be the best out of them all!

Polly: Don't worry Akira. You'll do just fine.

Lucy: Oh what do ya know about tha art of theatre!? Yar just a sock puppet.

Polly: WAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!!! Why are you so mean to me!?

Just thought I'd update you guys a little on what's going on with the second chapter.
Something came up today that could possibly affect my inspiration/motivation...

You see, this guy from my church committed suicide last night and it's been bothering me all day. I've been in a really good mood for the past two weeks but this whole thing has kind of put a damper on everything.

Anyways, I'm gonna try to move on with life as normal and reinspire myself. If I can kind of steer around this sudden and unexpected roadblock, the second chapter will still be up on Friday as planned.

Oh, and another thing... I have to write a Napoleon essay tonight for Socials that's due tomorrow. It sucks. oo; I better start on it so I have a chance to write some of the second chapter tonight too. I'm halfway done!

Guess who finally finished writing the second chapter...? -raises hand- xD

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3425445/2/

Leave your thoughts, luffs. ;3

EDIT: Ah, I figured out the problem. Wrong link. Sorry, guys. All better now. I fixed the link and it should work now if you'd rather read it at FF.net. =)

-- Edited by Rye at 15:18, 2007-03-09

-leaves thoughts on table-

thoughts: BROKEN LINK ALERT! BROKEN LINK ALERT!!!!!!!!!
thought2: How am I going to write that essay?
thugh9: She said goodbye too many times befoooooore!

Cliffhangers! I'm allergic to cliffhangers! I wanna find out what happens next!

Akira_Cat wrote:

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Cliffhangers! I'm allergic to cliffhangers! I wanna find out what happens next!

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xD So am I. But that's the great thing about writing... I know exactly what's gonna happen next so there's no cliffies for moi! -dances- Hehe.
Alas, no worries. Third chapter /should/ be up by next weekend. I don't know, it depends. I have plenty of ideas to write but considering that the LU DVD comes out on Tuesday... I might get a little distracted. ;3

Gasp! Magic triangles!

...I'm still hungry.

-steals triangle and eats it- Cookie!