Ah zhe conflicting nature of love! So who does Lexi really love now i wonder? Nice exploration of Rev and Duck's feelings of love here zadavias spirit. And writting from Duck's point of view is interesting. Tech was so smooth here too! I love it when he knows things about people!

-- Edited by Black Oracle at 11:50, 2007-04-03

Akira_Cat wrote:

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Why do you say it's random? This is really good! I love it how you did it in the first person so we got more detail than we bargained for. And the lyrics to the song, what song is it? If you wrote it yourself, than I take my hat off to you.

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NUUUUU!!!!!! I didn't write this song. If I was that talented......
The song is "When the Wrong One Loves You Right" by Celine Dion. If you want to hear it, try this link. Sorry if you don't like Sparrabeth, but I can't find any other good vids. Enjoy!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yZcglNYnCZo

This is quite poignant, especially the last few lines.

I really like the first person narrative style you used here. It took a while for me to realize Duck was telling the story, but getting inside his head and seeing from his perspective added a lot once it registered. I sincerely hope you continue this.

Excellent song, too, BTW. ^^

-- Edited by Skifox at 02:23, 2007-04-04

THIS GIVES ME AN IDEA!

Bugs Bunny doll: Don't you have a truckload of ideas already waiting on the line? And you just thought of three more these last two three hours!

Oh. Yes. I should work on those too.

-- Edited by the_oddity at 10:31, 2007-04-05

LOL! That was so funny!

And joos is Flexa? Hehe! I read your fic on ff.net! ^_^ YAY ROMANCE! XD

please write more

How did that remote pick up only Techies i wonder? Hmm, peculiar. That first Techie to glomp Tech was me! AHAHAHAHAHAHA!!

Black Oracle wrote:

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How did that remote pick up only Techies i wonder? Hmm, peculiar. That first Techie to glomp Tech was me! AHAHAHAHAHAHA!!

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*roffles* I was just going to say that! XD

XD I bet Akira's in that bunch!

Oh my. XD

Yeah........ I may continue the adventures of the SIUTCPTADAT, but for now you have to put up with.. FLUFF OMGOMGOMG!!! Ruuuuun!!!
*ahem* Anyways, I decided to write a Texi, since I've had this idea for a while. So whoopdedoo, yeah. This story's called "Parasite." Italics are thought.
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It was one of those situations where you ask yourself, How the hell did this even start?
Danger Duck awoke from peaceful sleeps as he heard shouting noises coming from the Loonatics' new communication room on Blanc. "Not now mommy, five more minutes," Duck moaned as the shouting got louder. A loud punching sound finally woke the mallard who got up immediately, afraid that the others were perhaps fighting against intruders.
Still wearing his orange pajamas, Duck stumbled out of his room and met Slam Tasmanian outside. The devil was also still wearing his pajamas, except they were purple. Obviously, Slam had also been awakened by the shouting, and his expression was one of confusion.
"Bjnfkay?" Slam inquired, scratching his massive brown head.
"Don't know," Duck said with a yawn.
"What's wong, Mistuh Duck?" another small voice called out. Duck groaned as the Royal Tweetums joined the others, already dressed in his royal robes. He carried his royal scepter in his hand, his jeweled crown high on his head. He looked slightly worried as he jumped up to sit on Duck's shoulders. "I hewd shouting and fighting. I cewtainly hope that no one is invading my pawace!!!"
"Hey, don't get your yellow canary feathers all in a ruff!" Duck said. "I'm sure it's nothing," he added, although he was a bit uncertain.
"Nothin' to worry about," a new voice said. The three turned to see Ace Bunny in his yellow pajamas join them. "I think our 'intruders' are actually ones we're quite familiar with."
The team ran to the communication room where they found Rev Runner and Tech E. Coyote together. Unlike the others, they were still in their black uniforms with their red and green markings respectively. Also unlike the others, the two were taking it out on each other like there was no tomorrow. Rev was slamming Tech's head into the floor repeatedly, obviously causing the coyote a lot of pain. Although Tech was used to being a victim of physical pain, he winced every time his head hit the ground.
For a while, the four watched in shock as Rev continued to hold the coyote by the ears and pushing him into the hard tiles. Tech gasped as he tried to pull away from the roadrunner's grasp, but failed. Instead, he managed to lift one of his legs to deliver a firm kick into the other's stomach. Rev let go, the wind knocked out of him, leaving Tech another chance to punch him into the wall. The roadrunner quickly recovered and ran at the coyote while Tech drew back his fist for another punch. Rev's foot flew into the air and made contact with Tech's snout, just as Tech's fist came into contact with Rev's feet. The simultaneous impact threw the friends in completely opposite directions, sprawling them on the floor.
The others quickly took this opportunity to jump on them. Slam got a firm grip on Rev, pinning his wings behind his back. Ace and Duck each took a hold of one of Tech's arms as they pulled him away from the fast-talking bird. Tweetums stood between them, ready to thwack the two with his royal scepter if they managed to break free from Slam, Ace, and Duck. The concerned teammates were only mere distractions to the coyote and roadrunner, however, as they struggled to break free from the others' grasp.
"What's goin' on 'ere?!?" Ace hollered, trying to get through to the two quarreling anthros. He was ignored as they continued to lunge at each other unsuccessfully.
It was almost like a game now between the coyote and roadrunner; who could shout out the best insults at the other since they couldn't be punching at each other. The others watched as the two friends bickered with each other. Normally, they would have been amused by another show from their "Comedy Duo;" these somewhat violent fights happened every once and a while between the two. Once they'd gotten into a fist-fight over who would be in charge of monitoring communications in their old headquarters. But the friend's fighting had grown a lot worse in the past few weeks, and this was taking it too far.
"You're-freakin'-dead-man!!! As-soon-as-I-get-my-hands-on-you...!!!"
"Oh YOU should talk!!! Your neck looks PERFECT for me to squeeze my hands around!!!"
"Idiot!!!!"
"Slow poke!!!"
"Half-wit!!!"
"Loud mouth!!!"
"Dog!!!"
The other Loonatics nearly dropped their jaws, surprised and shocked at how far the roadrunner was taking this fight. Calling the canine "dog" was pretty much the equivalent of slapping him in he face. Tech stared at Rev, eyes wide, but then went almost completely wild. He snapped his jaws angrily, breaking free of Ace and Duck's grasp. Lunging at the roadrunner, Tech extended his paws out to grasp Rev's neck. Fortunately, Ace was able to get to the enraged coyote before any harm could come to the bird. Grabbing Tech similarly to the way that Slam had Rev, he tried to get through to him.
The elevator door quickly slid open as Lexi Bunny ran into the room. She, too, looked as if she'd just woken up. Her blonde hair was in slight disarray and she was wearing her pink pajamas. Her eyes were wide with surprise, but her mouth and eyebrows made it evident that she was more angry than shocked. The tone of her voice made even the feral coyote turn to look at the bunny She ran up to Ace and Tech, confused and angry at the outbursts.
"TECH!!!" Lexi shouted, practically into the coyote's long ears. "WHAT'S GOTTEN INTO YOU?!? YOU'RE ACTING CRAZY!!!"
Tech stared at her for a bit, more surprised now then anything. Lexi wasn't known for yelling, or even losing her temper. He tried to calm down a little, taking deep breaths as Ace loosened his grip on him.
"It's alright, Lex," the leader smiled, wrapping one arm around her shoulder. "It seems like our little friend here's been having some...'temper' problems."
He didn't get a chance to continue. Tech turned around to face the rabbit, his eyes boring holes into Ace. Taking everybody by surprise, the coyote abandoned trying to calm down and lunged himself at his leader's neck instead. Both of them fell to the ground as Tech wrapped his paws around Ace's neck.
"Hey!!! What's the big idea?!?" Duck yelled as he leapt to pull Tech off of Ace, but was immediately stopped as Tech let out a menacing snarl.
"Tech...." Ace gasped, the coyote's grip slightly tightening around his neck. "Let....go of........"
His pleas were ignored as Tech only snarled in response, his sharp fangs right in his face.
"What did you say?!?" he snarled, growling angrily.
"What?" Ace asked weakly in confusion.
"What. Did. You. Say To...?" Tech asked quietly, the anger still not leaving his voice.
"I.....didn't......say....." Ace gasped, trying to find some way to breathe.
"TECH!!!" Lexi screamed, all the usual cheerfulness in her voice gone. She ran to Ace's side and matched Tech's glare with her own. Normally, she would have been afraid of Tech in this state, "GET OFF OF ACE NOW!!!!!!!!!!"
Even in the midst of No one had ever seen the female rabbit so infuriated, not even Duck. Tech stared at her for a bit, his olive eyes still burning with anger, before releasing Ace's neck. Lexi kneeled down to help him up. The gray rabbit stood up slowly, still dazed over what had just happened.
"What the hell is wrong with you?!?" Lexi hissed at Tech, her emerald eyes flashing. Tech could only stare at the others as the same question floated through everyone's mind, including his own.
"I believe an explanation is required, Tech," a voice said as the lights left the room. Zadavia suddenly appeared using her holographic powers . Her long blonde hair flew around her head as her green eyes turned white. Although they had no colors, her eyes were cold and angry, and they were staring right at the coyote.
Everyone was surprised to see the Frelagnian queen show up on the hologram system. Since she and her brother returned to their home planet of Freleng, they hadn't expected to hear from her for a while.
"Lexi? Ace?" She paused before continuing, her voice as cold as her stare. "Tech? Is everything......alright?"
A silence filled the room as the team looked at Tech expectantly, waiting for an explanation for his sudden rash behavior.
"Thewe was a swight pwobwem, Zadavia," Tweetums spoke. "Mistuh Coyote..."
Rev spoke up, eager to help defend his friend. That was Rev for you. Try to kill him twice and he'll still defend you when you need him. "Zadavia," he wrestled himself away from Slam in order to speak to their former boss. "I'm-really-sorry-you-had-to-use-the-hologram-system-to-talk-to-us-this-late. Tech-and-I-were-talking-about-something-and-I-said-something-to-make-him-mad. Then-the-others-got-here-and-they-tried-to-stop-us-from-fighting-but-it-ended-up-getting-worse-since-I-started-yelling-at-Tech-again-so-this-is-really-all-my-fault. There-isn't-really-any-reason-for-you-to-get-mad-at-Tech-or-any-of-the-others-for-that-matter..."
"That may be, Rev," Zadavia said, interrupting him, a tone of anger coming to her voice that she usually saved for Duck. "But that still does not compensate for the fact that..."
"I know, Zadavia," Tech spoke for the first time in a while, trying to regain some of his lost dignity. "It was my fault. Some of the others said some things that shouldn't have bothered me, and I..."
"What the hell did Ace say?!?" Lexi asked loudly, still upset about the damage Tech had done to Ace. "He said you had 'temper issues!' What the hell is wrong with that?!?"
"Lexi," Zadavia said warningly, taking a worried glimpse at Tech.
Tech, however was motionless.
"I know," he said quietly. "I'm sorry. I really don't have an excuse for this, and I shouldn't. There really is no excuse, and Zadavia's right. No matter what anyone else said, it doesn't compensate for what I did." He turned to Zadavia. "I'm sorry."
Zadavia looked at Tech for a moment, her face expressionless. No one could tell if she was angry, saddened, or confused.
Tech looked at the floor nervously. Now that Zadavia was gone, he could feel everyone's attention focusing on him. "I'm....I'm going to get some work done..." he stuttered, knowing that the others were still staring at him. "I'm......I'm sorry for.......what happened."
He knew it wasn't nearly enough to apologize, but for now it was all he could do. He left quickly to avoid the terrified and angry looks of his friends.

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After escaping the communication room, the genius was a wreck. He couldn't believe he could be such an idiot; something he rarely admitted even to himself. His uniform was most likely a mess too, thanks to Rev. He took the stairs to escape to one of the only places in the headquarters where he could completely get away; his lab. It wasn't as familiar as the old one that they'd left on Acmetropolis, but it had the qualifications for a lab. The right equipment, space, and tools he needed to invent and make everything the team needed were right there for him.
When he reached the lab, he collapsed in a nearby chair. Finally, he was out of the room. Ever since Rev had "started" the fight, he knew it was going to be an uncomfortable situation to get out of.

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"Ooh!!! What's-that-Tech? Can-I-see-it? Can-I-touch-it? What-does-it-do?" Rev asked, zooming around the occupied canine as he tried to get him to stop snooping at something he was holding in his paws.
"For the last time, Rev!!!" Tech told him, getting more and more annoyed. "It's nothing!!!"
"Sure-looks-like-something!!!" Rev said, zooming around him. "Hey-wait-a-minute..." he slowed as he realized what the coyote was fixing.
"It's Lexi's music player," Tech growled, angry that Rev had interfered. She'd broken it a few days ago and was devastated. The roadrunner's eyes widened in realization.
"Oh-right," he said softly. "Why-aren't-you-fixing-this-in-the-lab?" Rev inquired.
"I...I want to give this to Lexi as soon as possible." Tech stuttered. "I know she really wants this back and I..." he stopped as Rev snickered. "SHUT UP!!!" the canine shouted, angry at Rev's reaction.
"It-doesn't-matter-how-soon-you-give-it-to-her-Tech." he said playfully. "After-all-everyone-knows-she-doesn't-feel-for-you-the-way-you..."
"Would you just SHUT UP?!?" Tech shouted. He instantly regretted it. Rev
"Oh, don't look at me that way!!!" Tech snarled harshly. Rev suddenly gave him a sad look. Normally, Rev depressed would have made anyone, even Duck, melt, but Tech was in no mood. "Maybe if you didn't flap that big beak of your so often I wouldn't have to tell you off so often!!!" Rev looked shocked, then lost it. If there was one thing he hated, it was being made to shut up. In a instant, the boiling mad roadrunner lunged at Tech.

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And then, of course, they had to wake the others and draw their attention to their argument. And then he'd almost gone completely feral on Ace, one of his best friends.
Why'd I have to be so stupid? Normally he could stand being made fun of. When you live with Duck, you almost have to be immune to those kinds of things. And he knew he could have a short temper, especially with Rev and the "d" word. He just couldn't stand being made fun of in front of...her.
Oh god, did I just think that?
He didn't want to think that. He wanted to get that driven out of his head every time he thought it, which was actually quite often.
Ever since their little "adventure" with Deuce, things have definitely changed since their old days back on Acmetropolis. They couldn't leave the headquarters without using space suits. Zadavia no longer checks in on them every once in a while, and they had the power to go anywhere in the universe they wanted.
The battle with Deuce and his robot army changed them too. They themselves had a sort of robot army with Tweetums' servant bots. Optimatus joined them in that battle too, giving them a new ally.
And of course, Ace's final encounter with Deuce. How he used almost all his strength to drive Deuce off of Blanc, and Ace had collapsed as soon as he, Lexi, Duck found him.
He couldn't drive out what happened that day; Lexi's voice calling out Ace's name, the passion in which she ran to hug him with, the disarray of her blonde hair, the tears running from her beautiful jade green eyes....
Oh god, did I just... never mind.
The lab seemed to suddenly get darker as he thought this over. The shadows seemed to get bigger, and the small lights were becoming dimmer. Was the light really fading from the room, or was it because Tech felt his eyelids begin to close? As much as he want to stay up and work on another invention like he had told the others, he admitted that it was getting late. Reluctantly, he sat, folded his arms on the table, and closed his eyes. Why bother going to his bedroom? No doubt he would wake up early in the morning, itching to work on something. And it would only add to the troubles he had if he met the others on the way out of the lab. Tech yawned and began to drift off as the confusing thoughts rushed through his head. Especially when Lexi's face rushed through and popped up more often than the others. Her enraged expression when he harmed Ace...
He wasn't ready to think about her now.

As sleep claimed the genius, three figures stood in the shadows of the lab watching him. One had on a long cloak and wore a sort of device for the eyes. Another was a rather short bodied-person wearing some form of armor. The man in the center of the other two was smiling menacingly, as if he had a knowledge of something that no one else did. He wore a green robe and had long hair that fell to his shoulders. For a few minutes, the three waited until they were positive that Tech had fallen completely asleep.
Still in the dark, the man surveyed the sleeping anthro. The darkness seemed to almost expel from him and the two figures beside him. The shadows danced around them, merely showing off the frames of their bodies.
"Tech E. Coyote," he said softly, almost in a whisper. "We finally meet. What an honor it is for me to finally meet one of the 'Guardians of the Universe.'" The man stopped, chuckling to himself softly. "However," he continued, addressing the sleeping coyote again, "I'm afraid that this meeting won't be as much of a pleasure for you as it will be for me."
Turning to the short figure, the man spoke one word. "Now."
"With pleasure," the short figure cackled, steeping out of the shadows. Once in the light, the figure could be seen holding a menacing looking weapon. "Sweet dreams," the figure cackled and aimed the weapon at the unconscious coyote.
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Yeah. "What the hell" must be my favorite phrase of the week or something.

Wowsas! Tech and Rev were really at it there! Who are those mysterious men then? And what are they gonna do to Tech?! Interesting post S2 fic here z_s! Get up the next part soon!

-- Edited by Black Oracle at 16:07, 2007-06-01

Thanks for the comments! I had a feeling j00s would like a Texi, KJ. Almost makes it worth the write.
Anyways, chappie 2 is kinda long, so here's the link.
Parasite 2
And to take a break from that, I have comic relief.

Chapter 3

Tech's lab. Duck and Slam are sneaking in to marvel at the SIUTCPTADAT.

Slam: Geojmdf?

Duck: C'mon, Slam! Don't you wish to be glomped by fangirls and idolized every waking moment of your life?

Slam:

Duck: Oh come on! You'll love it! Watch. pushes button on SIUTCPTADAT. The familiar wormhole begins to open

Slam: fangirls begin to come

Duck: YEEEEEEEEES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!

Slam: Oh, bugger.

Ace picks this moment to come in
Ace: DUCK!!!!!!! WHAT'D'YA THINK YAZ DOIN'?!?!?!?!?!?

Suddenly, Duckies, Slammers and even Acers fall from the sky. And the glomping begins.

Slam: :GHSIEMFHIFHPHFSFJSPFURNI!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ace: AAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

both are buried by fangirls
Meanwhile, Duck is dealing with his fangirls

Duckies: MUST........LOVE........DUCK!!!!!

Duck: HEY!! WAIT A SEC!!!!

Duckies: *patiently listen*

Duck: Now, you all want to worship me, right?

Duckies: Of course!!!

Duck: Then I have some demands.......

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Meanwhile, Lexi's helping Rev get makeup off from fangirl kisses. Tech is with them.

Lexi: I knew the sale on makeup-removal kits would come in handy.

Rev:

Tech: Sorry about that, by the way. It was just too big of an opprotunity to pass up.

Rev: Well-that's-ok-I-guess-I'll-always-have-the-chance-to-get-back-at-you-later.

Tech: Hehe...hehe..... You're kidding, right?

Rev: Maaaybe.

Tech: Well, um, good thing I locked that invention in my lab. At least now everything's back to normal.

Lexi: You can say that again...... hey, what the...

They spot Ace and Slam gagged with socks and carried off by their fangirls

Tech/Rev/Lexi:

Following suit is Duck wearing a huge crown being carried in a huge throne. All the Duckies are supporting the chair and walking around with it on their backs. They stop for a rest.

Duck: HEY!!! MOVE IT PPL!!! This chair isn't gunna move itself, y'know!

Duckies: Yes, sir Duck!!! *resume carrying*

Tech/Rev/Lexi:

The End.
And can you believe I never got a title for it. Oh well.

-- Edited by zadavias_spirit at 19:56, 2007-06-09

I was one of the Acers. Muahahahahaha.....

Regarding the story:
-BV and Mastermind back? Oh noes!!!!
-Tech going to the 'dark side', AHHHHHHHH NOOOOO!!!!!
-And Tech in that outfit from Music Villian, -melts-.

As you can probably tell, I LUVED THE 2ND CHAPTER!!!!!! Great story you got there!!!

Yep, link works now. Thanks. This chapter certainly brought up an interesting turn in events for Tech! Now he's abandoning the Loonatics? That seems quite a drastic move, but i'm interested to see what he'll do next on his own, coz Tech's just hot when he goes lonewolf-style!

Well first of all, your writing definitely does NOT suck. You put just the right amount of emotional tension in your stories to make it very effective emotionally without being over the top. And naturally I loved it when Rev tried to defend Tech's honor in the 2nd story. In fact, you inspire me to write. Kudos! :D

Tee hee hee! Ace and Slam are gagged with socks.  That just rocks my socks. And Duck's resourcefulness does come in use with the fangirls. And to tell you the truth, since I'm a Devam, I was one of the fan-girls to glomp Slam and Duck.