Hello there Earth Master! Welcome to LUO! Is this a fic up on FF.net by any chance?

Nice job. Could use a little more length.

Hi Earthmaster! And welcome to the LUO site! Like the fan fic so far.

cool avatar earthmaster

If you want people to know that it's an add-on story, you can always say that, you know, in a post or the topic name. XD Easily remedied.

i want to add on too........
menwile

why do we have to do this asked kari,kari was a pure wight rabbit,she had blue eyes,blond hair was over one eye.she had a black tee on and camo pants,a blue vest was over her shirt and she had green sneakers on..

because we must conqure planets said erica(ya know bat lady)

um....great said kari,kari was a sorceress in training...

continu..........

i gonna continu....

more and more bats came in as mechmaster defended them all

menwile.....

erica had her eyes fixed on the loonatics hq wile kari was practicing with her sword

kari said erica''have i told you the story of daruan duck ''

no said kari walking beside her

daruan duck is the chosen one said erica''the chosen one of glamoria''

kari smirked and said''well well i not shocked''

he is also the one to save the world said erica

now thats a shocker replide kari sarcasticly and erica smirked

well i hered your brother became a loonatics his name was ace right said erica

course said kari and she looked sympalthticly kari knew she was under control

please continu...........

Or so Earth Master thought...

As MechMaster started plummeting to the ground, he started hearing words in his head.

I know I can overcome the darkness.
I will not let Earth fall into the hands of the enemy.

I...
WILL...

"NOT!" MechMaster yelled as he regained consciousness, slamming his fist into the HQ to anchor himself, 100 meters from the point of becoming street pizza. "Whew, that was close!" he exclaimed. He then proceeded to climb back up the Loonatics Tower to Ace's bedroom (by slamming his fists into the wall), unknowing of the fact that the mechanical bats had taken control of the tower defenses...

Continue! (p.s. I was not trying to make you look weak or stupid, Earth Master)

ill continu....

you're plan failed said kari,as they stood on a building

myebe not yet said erica and she saw the loonatics comeing,as they landed kari looked away

kari said ace surprised and kari looked at him

oh hey ace said kari and they hugged as the other's stared in confusion

lexi in a venmas voice:who is she ace

uh well said ace and looked at kari and saw kari smirking

havent told them yet brother said kari

nope said ace''kari's my younger sister said ace'and this is um''

erica said kari''she's da one with macanicle bats''

what said ace

let me

disscuss things with you guys said erica

of course said ace and they all went to hq

in hq

so you were here to take over acnetropolise said zadavia

yes but i wont said erica

oh really how can we trust you said danger duck

speak for youre self prince dauran said kari

w..what said danger as everyone gasped and lexi burst out laughing

it's true said kari''hes the rightfull prince of glamoria

i always new i was a prince inside said danger duck

continu

ill continu...

ya well shut up said lexi

not so nice now are we said kari sarcasticly

anyway said erica''i guess ill be going''

continu....

"Tech, Rev," said erica, "i would like to show you some of my inventions." And she walked off, rev and tech trailing nervously behind her.
Suddenly, someone walked through the door. It was a young, muscular, handsome coyote wearing only a pair of boxers.
"Sup, name's Jarred," said the coyote, "the boss told me about you."
Lexi stared at him, as if she had eaten a slice of dreamcake. Ace frowned.
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Meanwhile, in Erica's invention room, Tech and Rev were running around the area with amazement.
"deathrays, disintegrators, cloaking devices?!" yelled tech, "i bow to your greatness!"
"you haven't seen anything yet," Erica answered as dhe lead the two into a colossal room.
There, all lined up in neat rows, were custom made gundams.
"THE GREATNESS!!!" tech hollered and latched onto Erica's leg, "I LUV YOU!"
"uh huh..."
Rev glared at tech so homicidally, that I swore lasers could almost shoot out of his eyes.
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Gundam #1:

Meanwhile...

MechMaster had just finished off the last of the mechanical bats, even though he had only a smidgen of health left in him after the tower defense grid whaled on him. "I'd better find out what the heck is going on here," he said to himself as he activated a MedPak. He then saw the Loonatics conversing with two people whom he had never seen before. "Hmm....maybe THEY'RE the ones responsible," he commented as he approached them.

"Okay, stay calm...let's try to resolve this in a diplomatic manner."

(plz pay no attention to Kari's last post) 
     While kari was conversing with slam, ace, lexi, and duck, Erica was desperatetly trying to pry the clinging tech off of her. Rev just kept glaring at Tech as if he was desperately trying to make the coyote evaporate into a smelly gas.
Suddenly, he could be silent no longer.
     "Get-your-flthy-hands-off-of-her-or-I'll-pound-you-into-green-coyote-mist!" Rev screamed so loudly that the whole building shook violently.
     "What was that?" asked Ace, interruping the current conversation.
     "Rev," Kari whispered as a large smile came across her face.
     Meanwhile, mech master silently listened in on the conversation, plotting his enterance. He finally decided to jump in through the window and tackle the mysterious bunny who called herself Kari. He took a flying leap and landed awkwardly on kari. She immediately jumped up and unsheathed her long, terrifying sword. With Mech master's laser sword lost, he had to use his old ninja sword. They kept on slashing and blocking when finally Mech Master grazed Kari's shoulder. He was about to strike the finishing blow when-
     "STOP!!" Yelled Erica and jumped in with a sword of her own.
     The fight didn't last long when Mech master, with full strength, charged at Erica. In a flurry of slashes and weaving between blades, Mech Master was laying on the ground, Erica's foot on his throat. She slowly lifted her foot and smiled sweetly.
     "I mean you or Acmetropolis no harm," she said in a singsong voice meant to quell Mech master's fury of being beaten, "I wish to welcome you to my warship whish is docked here at the Loonatics' tower."
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Continue!!

P.S. I mean no offense to you, Mech Master, in the "fury of being beaten" part

-- Edited by Earth Master at 19:50, 2007-05-16

-- Edited by Earth Master at 20:29, 2007-05-20

While Erica was giving Mech Master a short tour of the ship, the loonatics were discussing matters.
"What do you think of er, team?" Ace asked.
"I-seem-to like-her-I-mean-she's-nice-and-pretty-and-generous-oh-and-did-I-already-mention-pretty?" Blurted Rev and the loonatics stared at him questioningly.
Tech broke the awkward scilence, "well, I think she can be trusted."
The others, including Jarred who was still in his boxers, nodded in agreement. Rev shifted uncomfortably as the coyote handed him a small letter addressed to him from Erica. He tightly held it in his hand until he had the chance to go to a secluded area to read it.
The black bat walked through the doorway holding the latest in video game technology--the Graphic Sphere 3000.
She smiled, "I tinkered with it, so I hope you like the new hologram setup."
Duck and Slam rushed over to the controls and immediately started playing when it was hooked up. Erica immediately approached the others.
"Make yourself at home," she said, "we have pizza, coffee, and enough bedrooms to house 300 people. Help yourself."
Rev took this distracion to slip away into a crevice in the nearest hallway. He slowly opened the letter. It was in small, neat handwriting and he blushed when he read it aloud...
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Cliffhanger!
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Ok, no more posting untill (sorry!) because I have more written down on this little paper here. I do have room for comments, though.
Gosh, I'm tired. I spent hours retyping it after I accidentally refreshed the page numerous times, so I cut it down to about 1/8 of what was supposed to be written.