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In Acme We Trust (Chapter 4: Goose Chase)

Rye · Human

RE: Update: In Acme We Trust (Chapter 3)

doggirl2772 · Out of This World

Hey Rye! I've been waiting for an update to In Acme We Trust, and today you did! I just wanna say, great job on the story so far and I cant wait for the next chapter!

Rye · Human

doggirl2772 wrote:
Hey Rye! I've been waiting for an update to In Acme We Trust, and today you did! I just wanna say, great job on the story so far and I cant wait for the next chapter!

^ ^; Thank you's, luff. I'm glad you still remembered about the story. xP I'm such a procrastinator I was sure it would be forgotten by the time I actually updated. Anyways, I'll try to get Chapter Four up as soon as possible. Just gotta work around exams. =3

XtreamCrazy · BUT MY CHEESE WILL GET COLD. D8

It was very well written (duh, it joo), and the humour in it was great... the little scene with Duck, Lexi and Ace was great... and the idea of a widdle Tech makes my soul smile... Plus the Rev bombardment is perfect! Poor Revvie... ^_^

Top job once again... And... Is that... Teh Molly-Moll-Face fanfic I see? X3

Rye · Human

XtreamCrazy wrote:
It was very well written (duh, it joo), and the humour in it was great... the little scene with Duck, Lexi and Ace was great... and the idea of a widdle Tech makes my soul smile... Plus the Rev bombardment is perfect! Poor Revvie... ^_^

Top job once again... And... Is that... Teh Molly-Moll-Face fanfic I see? X3

Hehe. xD -luffs-
Yeah, I was planning to make that scene with them three longer but then I spaced out because of that prairie dog and totally lost the idea I had for it sooo I just moved on.
But considering that, if I recall correctly, that was the last I wrote of them overall pretty much... I can just do something with 'em in Chapter Four. Heehee. Afterall, they do still have to try'n find their way to the main room... >3 -plots-
Tech E. Pocket! xD You know... like Polly Pocket except... Tech. XP I was really debating whether to keep 'im small for a little longer buuuut then I decided to take the plot in a different direction. His troubles, and this goes for all the others too, are far from over though. Ahaha. Boy, I love torturing my favorite characters. -clings to Tech and Rev- X3

'Tis indeed. XD Oh darn it. I forgot to link the lovely inspiration. I shall fix that! At once.

-- Edited by Rye at 22:58, 2007-06-04

XtreamCrazy · BUT MY CHEESE WILL GET COLD. D8

Lol! I---

OMIGAH! my mp3 player just died... :( *puts it on the charge*

Anyways... I'm hlafway through the sketching process of the second page of the comic... ^_^ I'm having so much fun with it!! Two of my favourite scenes so far. ^_^

Forgive me if i don't colour them... I think they'd look better in B&W... ^^;

Anyways... I totally cannot wait to see what you have in store for teh Tech meister... Tech meister... where the heck did that come from???

Rye · Human

XtreamCrazy wrote:

Lol! I---

OMIGAH! my mp3 player just died... :( *puts it on the charge*

Anyways... I'm hlafway through the sketching process of the second page of the comic... ^_^ I'm having so much fun with it!! Two of my favourite scenes so far. ^_^

Forgive me if i don't colour them... I think they'd look better in B&W... ^^;

Anyways... I totally cannot wait to see what you have in store for teh Tech meister... Tech meister... where the heck did that come from???

Awesome. xD
Ah, no worries, dude. Black and white is always great. =3
I very rarely color in anything I draw. Sometimes B&W is just... better.

I'm gonna try to write Chapter Four real soon. ^__^; Hopefully before exams.
If it's not written in the next three weeks though, it's gonna have to wait till July. =/
Jeez, I just can't wait for exams... I'm so excited for 11th grade to /end/! I can't wait till Senior year. XD Last year of high school! Yes! Ahaha.

doggirl2772 · Out of This World

Rye wrote:
^ ^; Thank you's, luff. I'm glad you still remembered about the story. xP I'm such a procrastinator I was sure it would be forgotten by the time I actually updated. Anyways, I'll try to get Chapter Four up as soon as possible. Just gotta work around exams. =3

Your welcome! Besides, I don't forget good stories easily, so why would I forget this one?

bleh

. Exams. Hate 'em. Though mine probably aren't as bad as yours (I'm in the 8th grade).

Rye · Human

doggirl2772 wrote:
Your welcome! Besides, I don't forget good stories easily, so why would I forget this one?

. Exams. Hate 'em. Though mine probably aren't as bad as yours (I'm in the 8th grade).

^ ^; Aww. Thanks. -snugs-

Ah, 8th grade... I wouldn't be able to tell you if those exams are bad or not. I dropped out of eighth grade halfway through the school year. -sweatdrop- My gym teacher was an evil dictator and I despised my English teacher (I was failing his class)... o__o; Wow. I'd make a horrible role model. xP

doggirl2772 · Out of This World

I hate the eighth grade. Probably cause we get so much stress and pressure put on us. And my class gets double the work load since we are the only singleton class in the entire school (meaning we got about 8 or 9 different teachers and classrooms and sets of homework)! My class pretty much gave up halfway through because of the stress. We've been dubed the worst class in the whole school. And no wonder, we've made 3 teachers cry numerous times and we don't get many substatutes that come around twice, if you know what I mean.

I'm pretty much the only student that doesn't plan ways on making the lifes of our teachers' living nightmares! I don't like how much work we get but I'm not gunna sink that low!

-- Edited by doggirl2772 at 00:28, 2007-06-05

XtreamCrazy · BUT MY CHEESE WILL GET COLD. D8

eh, schooling down here is pretty cruisy. we don't get graded, we get standards.

No wonder we're the stupidest state in Australia. XD

Rye · Human

doggirl2772 wrote:

I'm pretty much the only student that doesn't plan ways on making the lifes of our teachers' living nightmares! I don't like how much work we get but I'm not gunna sink that low!

Same. xD I'm the good, quiet kid who reads a book while my other classmates provoke every single one of my teachers. When we get substitutes they're always like, "You didn't... talk. Um, thank you." xP And then when I get out of school I'm so hyper and loud they'd never guess I was the same person. I just don't like to waste my breath at school. x3

Rye · Human

XtreamCrazy wrote:

eh, schooling down here is pretty cruisy. we don't get graded, we get standards.

No wonder we're the stupidest state in Australia. XD

"Standards"...? Never heard of it. Enlighten me? xD

Black Oracle · Black Hole Survivor

Yipee! You updated finally Rye! And wonderfully written as with your previous chapters! This story is really told best in written form as everything takes place in the dark and our perceptions of surroundings are limited to the other senses and mental maps of the Loonatics. This is a really innovative piece of writing where you take the reader on alternative methods of exploration! And i love your use of free indirect thought for Rev and Tech! It gives us a flavour of their characteristic ways of thinking.

I am quite curious as to what happens next so do get on with that 4th chapter!

XtreamCrazy · BUT MY CHEESE WILL GET COLD. D8

Update: In Acme We Trust (Chapter 3: Get A Clue)

Rye · Human

Black Oracle wrote:

I am quite curious as to what happens next so do get on with that 4th chapter!

You flatter me, love. =3 -snug-
I'm glad you're enjoying the story. ^ ^;
Sorry I take so long with the chapters. =P
I try to write with the voice of each character in mind so I avoid OOC.
Chapter Four will be up ASAP.
Hopefully I can start on it this weekend so it can get done before exam time. (:

Rye · Human

XtreamCrazy wrote:

standards follow as this;

Standard 1, lower, middle then upper, Standard 2 lower, middle then upper, Standard 3 lower, middle then upper, Standard 4 lower, middle, then upper, Standard 5 lower, middle then upper.

It's a long line of 'em, and teachers will put at dot where they think you're at. High school students are suposed to be between standard 3 upper to standard 5 middle... and at the end of each semester, you get the dot and have to work out how you can get a higher standard next time...

You need an overall standard 5 lower or above to get into college though...

It's all very... stupid. c(X

That's... really weird. O___o;
I can't even figure out how that would work. xD
Different countries, different educational systems... goodness, I can't keep up with it all.
In the U.S. it was one thing, in Canada it's another... and now I find out it just gets weirder. =P

-- Edited by Rye at 20:37, 2007-06-05

Black Oracle · Black Hole Survivor

Rye wrote:

You flatter me, love. =3 -snug-
I'm glad you're enjoying the story. ^ ^;
Sorry I take so long with the chapters. =P
I try to write with the voice of each character in mind so I avoid OOC.
Chapter Four will be up ASAP.
Hopefully I can start on it this weekend so it can get done before exam time. (:

Well if you have an exam coming up, then it'd probrably be best that you prepare for that first before your LU fanfics. Exams unfortunately are more important than writing fanfics. Get round to that next chapter whenever you can, but remember exams come 1st on the priorities list.

And it doesn't matter if you take a while to write your chapters, it just means that your writing quality will be better!

XtreamCrazy · BUT MY CHEESE WILL GET COLD. D8

*nods in agreement of what B_O just said*

I guess I should do homework then... *looks at the pile*

...

Nah! *goes to draw something*

Rye · Human

Ah, exams /should/ be first priority... but, well, they're not. -cough-
'Sides, it's only Biology and Socials exams this term/semester... whatever. x3
Bio should be pretty easy so long as I study a bit.
Socials I just plain loathe, so the faster that's over with the better... pro'lly won't study for it.
Yeah, so basically... fan fiction takes priority over school as soon as the last bell rings. oO;
And anyways, I'm thinking that I might get started on the fourth chapter this weekend.
I don't feel good so I might not go to school tomorrow and for sure I'm not going on Friday.
And my dad's not here so that leaves Saturday night and Sunday open for writing...
Hopefully I can shake this cold before the weekend though... otherwise I surely won't be writing.
H'm. I need to watch some LU. Then maybe I'll get inspiration.
I can't wait till August for the second season to be released on DVD. Definitely preordering again.

I'm rambling. - -; So I'm going to go eat... I'm starving.

XtreamCrazy · BUT MY CHEESE WILL GET COLD. D8

*looks around*

lol. rambling.

Heh, we don't have exams down here... I'm so in love with the crappy Tazzie schooling. X3

Black Oracle · Black Hole Survivor

You don't have exams Xtream? Some people just get all the luck!

And are you not feeling well again Rye? More chicken soup for you!

Rye · Human

No exams? *___*; I knew North America sucked. I'm moving. xD
There's a guy in my class from Australia... he must've been crazy to move. oO;

Nope. - -; And I just got rid of a cold last week too... but that only lasted for about two days and now I'm sick again. But at least I get to miss school. X3

Better go help my mom. She needs help smoking out a prairie dog again. -sigh-
And then I shall write. Because I just got the strangest idea for a Slam centric oneshot. XD

XtreamCrazy · BUT MY CHEESE WILL GET COLD. D8

In Acme We Trust (Chapter 3: Get A Clue)

Rye · Human

Only more reason to despise the Canadian education system. xD
The more I live here, I swear... the less I want to be Canadian. oO;

XtreamCrazy · BUT MY CHEESE WILL GET COLD. D8

Come be Australian with meeeeeeeeeeeeeeee. ^_^

Rye · Human

XD First lemme work on getting to that side of the world.
Hawaii is the farthest I've been off this continent.
Once I move to Ireland then I shall be able to visit Australia.
I must convince myself that everything in Australia can't kill me.
-fears dying- xP And then I shall join you!
And I shall protect you from the wallabys. Hehe. ;3

XtreamCrazy · BUT MY CHEESE WILL GET COLD. D8

YEAH! Promise me you'll come to Tazzie! Pweeeeeease? *puppeh eyes*

Um... actually... Australia has some of the most deadly animals... wait; pretend you didn't read that... ^^;

Rye · Human

I've always wanted to go. xD I just need money first. That or to convince my parents that they /really/ really want to go to Australia for some reason. -thinks- H'm. Perhaps as a grad thing next year... that could work. My parents owe me big time for all the crap we've been through this school year and last. >3 'Sides, my dad wants me and my brother to "see the world." =3

-covers up text- I didn't read that. XD

Rye · Human

In Acme We Trust (Chapter 4: Goose Chase)

doggirl2772 · Out of This World

Great chapter Rye! I luv how you kept them all in character, especially Duck and his ego. Now they're all together and ready to kick some butt!!!

If they can catch them that is.......

Rye · Human

DG: Thank you's, luff. ^ ^; I'm glad you enjoyed. I was a slight bit rushed in writing it so I'm glad it came out decently. Hopefully I can find inspiration soon so I can write Chapter 5. =3 I have oh so many plans for them. -rubs hands together- xD

XtreamCrazy · BUT MY CHEESE WILL GET COLD. D8

Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!! I love Duck! You always portray him perfectly! Lemme repeat that; P. E. R. F. E. C. T. L. Y.

The suspense! Nuuuuuuuuuuuu! I wanna know what happens neeeeeext! Although I've already guessed 'who' the baddies are... I wanna know what they want. X3

*grins madly* Ah, yes, emotional blackmail will surely get you to Australia! Make your parents feel bad for something... Lol! It always works for my Dad. ^_^

Tazzie isn't so bad... 'Cept we have teh devils. =3 They eat aaaaaaaaanything. X)

Rye · Human

Xtream: xD He's kind of hard to write for sometimes. His lisp is difficult to mimic in my head. I have trouble pronouncing some "S" sounds in my thoughts. xP But I'll admit... I have fun giving his ego a work out (even if I don't like that aspect of him that much). And if a Duckie approves of his portrayal... then I'm not worried in the least about how I'm doing with him. -love-

Ehehe. ;3 I'm pretty sure most people have guessed by now. But they have noooo idea where I'm going with them. -rubs hands together evilly- xD For instance... have you thought about /how/ they got there? And if they're the original LT... then what are they doing in the year 2772? H'mmmm? >D Oh, it's fun to be the writer sometimes. I get to take revenge on all those authors who always leave cliffhangers. =3 -dances- All questions will be answered in time.

Mind you, this story is only leading up to the sequel which I plan to make slightly more intense and... oh, you'll see. IAWT and the sequel to come lock in together. I'm dropping little things here and there that will be important for the sequel's plot. It's like one big puzzle. I love it. And the best thing is... I actually know /exactly/ where I'm going with this story. xP Every chapter has something that could turn out to be important later on in the plot. Some things have probably already been forgotten... like what Rev was looking for and who's behind the shadow. The mice? Maaaaybe, maaaaybe not. All in time!

Hehe.

Well, luff, Australia and I are gonna be gettin' a little closer anyways... 'caaaause... I'm moving to Ireland! Officially. o_o; This summer. And I'm freaked out. Just a little. xP I entered a state of shock when I was informed of such last night. Those Irish better have their luck about them, 'cause they'll need it when I start driving on the wrong side of the road. xD

-- Edited by Rye at 23:56, 2007-06-12

XtreamCrazy · BUT MY CHEESE WILL GET COLD. D8

YAY FOR POTATOES!!

Lol! Glad you're going where you want! Might I ask why you're moving there?

Oh! how joo tease, Rye! How joo teeeeeeeease! X3

Rye · Human

Seriously. xD Gonna be eating lots of them.
Fine with me. I adore mashed potatoes (with lots and loooots of ketchup!).

Me too. ^ ^; My dad says we're gonna go visit in July and then we're moving in mid/late-August.

No problem. My dad is a "Computer Technician/Programmer/something-or-other" sooo he's starting up this computer security business that he's been trying to do since... I was born. He's got a lot of people interested in it... people in very high places, and they want him to move to Dublin because Microsoft just moved to Ireland and apparently it'll be the best place to really get his business going. He told me last night that his business has been invited to Ireland by the "Minister of Technology"... I don't know if that's exactly the right title. I know it was the Minister of... something concerning technology or business. xP Anyways, my family is s'posed to travel to Boston next month to talk with an immigration expert and then we're gonna buy plane tickets to Ireland and start "house hunting". I told my dad I'm all for it under one condition... the /day/ we move there, we're going to the animal shelter and I'm getting a dog. xD

I'll probably be writing this story into 2008 with all the stuff I'm going to have to work around these coming months. You won't know the very ending of the entire plot till pro'lly around Christmas or somethin'. -pokes- >3 Thank God I have a laptop though so I guess if I felt up to it I could do some writing while I travel. -_^;